Story section ~ Chit Chat Thread 6.0

[Samar_Singh]

वैसे जब ओरिजनल राइटर ने बगीचे में भी सेक्स हुआ वाला रायता फैलाया था, तब मैंने उसे सजेस्ट किया था कि इस सीन में ऐसा दिखाई दे, लेकिन असली सेक्स संध्या का न होकर किसी और का हो, बस अभय को ये दिखे।

पर वो खुद ही कन्फ्यूज हो गया बाद में

Ye jo Sandhya aue raman ke sex ka rayta faila rakha hai shuru se....use confusion vale plot se asani se sameta jaa sakta tha...
Asli me raman aur Sandhya me kuch hota hi naa...

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

story ka naam hi bakwas hai ALBELA

Aai..Aai...BELA rakhte to jyada sahi rehta

Next time aapse poch ke story ka name rakhoga bhai

 

[Damha]

लॉजिक भी होता है इनसेस्ट में

Point! List se naam kaat diya

 

[Samar_Singh]

होना ऐसा ही कुछ चाहिए, जैसे ऑलमोस्ट मार ही दे, तब कोई उसे असली बात बताएं टाइप।

Iss type ki revenge based story me incest ka plot dalna mushkil hota hai lekin harr writer yahi sabse pehle karne ki sochta hai....

Ab incest me dala hai to sex bhi dikhana padega...jabki revenge me bina sex ke hi tagda plot banta hai....

 

[Raj_sharma]

Logic kanha hai

Wo aise hi bolra, khud padho ek do update

 

[Riky007]

Damha

Plot is

Abhay's father was murdered by some unknown persons, they have huge property, which is in name of her mother Sandhya, who is beautyful and short tempered, other relatives create confusion among mother and child, and she frequently beat him. One night he saw his mother in intimate situation with his uncle and he flew away from home, next day a boy's distorted body was found in jungle and everyone thinks Abhay got killed, after few years a boy comes to village who resembles abhay.

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Aslam Chacha Hariya Kaka ye saare inhi rules ke kaaran bacche hue hai
warna itni stories mein inhone daaku chor maali bhikari ka kaam kar liya hai ki ab kahi bhi inka naam dikhta hai to mann lete hai daaku wagera hoga

 

[chandra14]

agar kisi ke paas biwi ki doosroon se chudai ki kahani ka stock hai to please share karo

 

[Samar_Singh]

Damha

Plot is

Abhay's father was murdered by some unknown persons, they have huge property, which is in name of her mother Sandhya, who is beautyful and short tempered, other relatives create confusion among mother and child, and she frequently beat him. One night he saw his mother in intimate situation with his uncle and he flew away from home, next day a boy's distorted body was found in jungle and everyone thinks Abhay got killed, after few years a boy comes to village who resembles abhay.

Maine bhi to yahi bola aasan bhasha me...me vo hudai karte dekh leta hai aue ghar se bhag jata hai

 

[Riky007]

Iss type ki revenge based story me incest ka plot dalna mushkil hota hai lekin harr writer yahi sabse pehle karne ki sochta hai....

Ab incest me dala hai to sex bhi dikhana padega...jabki revenge me bina sex ke hi tagda plot banta hai....

अमन और लोलिता और मालती के बीच दिखा दो, हो गया इंसेस्ट