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Gulzar sahab ke bhi nakshatra kharaab karoge,,,,Gulzar Sahab ki bagal mein dukaan lagwana padega.
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Sirf mahsoos hi hua hai ya uske bare me kuch socha bhi hai,,,,mujhe bhi kuch-kuch aisa hi mehsoos hua.
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Mahol ke hisaab se typing mein thodi tabdeeli karni padi thi..
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parichay...
suruwat mein, aap ko samil karna chahiye kuch buniyade tathyo ke baare mein kahani ko leke, sirshak sahit, lekhak /lekhika aur unki kahani shaili,
saarnksh..
sanshep pe kahani ko charcha..... kahani, charictra, mudde, mod pehlu.... mukhya ghatanao ya samashyao.. patro ka Anubhav... aur ant mein samapti ko leke kuch charcha...
byaktigat pratibinb....
charcha..... Kahani ko leke pasand ya na pasand, koi pehlu ya mod ya kirdaaro dwara kiye gaye karya ya Karam.... kin kin vichay ko leke samarthan hai aur kin kin vichay vishesh ko virobhavash... Tulna karna ki agar lekhak aise mod pe ye muddo ko pe zyada dhyaan dena chahiye tha to zyada behatar hota etc.
ya phir udhaharan ke liye is kahani ko lekhak ki Anya kahani ko bhi ullekhit karna... kya mat bhed hain lekhan shaili ko leke etc.
kahani ke liye apne khude byaktigat Anubhav ya majuda ghatanao pe ek byaktigat ray rakhna.....
critical anylise or criticism...
lekhak ke udasya? Kya lekhak apne udasya mein safal rahe ya nahi?
kya hai kahani ki setting?kahani ke liye upayukt hai ye lekhan shaili?
Kirdaar aur kahani ki build-up? kya sathik roop mein hua? kya kirdaar sathik roop sathik mod aur pehlu pe bhumika nibhaye? Jo kiya kya wo vishasniya tarika hai...?
kahani mein kya sathik roop mein romance, thrill, suspense, drama create kar paaye ghatanao ki ummid ke mutabik? ?
vishay kya hai? ya kendriya vichar hai ki nahi kahani mein?
kahani mein ek" coda" hai, ya ek sabak? kya sikh milti hai? Kya anuman hai kahani ko leke?
kahani mein koi apratyashit mod, ? Kya jarurat thi? agar haan.. to kyun? agar nahi.... to kyun nahi? Kaaran darshaya jaaye?
lekhak ya lekhika upayog karte hai kisi sahityik upakarono, upma, rupak... kya wo kisi se inspired hai?
niskarsh....
mulyakan karni hai sampurn kahani ko, phir Salah.... ya iski jarurat nahi? Kya lekhak ne jo likha wo har taraf se perfect tha....? kyun aur kaise? is par aankalan...
Kya dikha aapko lekhak ke jariye... kya mahsoos ya ehsaas hua? kya lekhak ki kahani dusro ke sifarish par nirbhar hai? ya kahani khud mein itne kabile tarif ki pathak khud dusro ko bole padhne ke liye?
kya yeh sarthak hai padhne ke liye..? naye pathakon ke liye apne vichar dijiye ispe?
Btw The king, Xabhi aur ju ne hi kaha tha in muddon gaur karne ke liye kahani sameeksha karte waqt
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