Story Section ~ ChitChat Thread 3.O

[Gaandu No 1]

Aur friends kase ho aap log

 

[Asif khan]

aur aate nhi ajkl

Bus ajkl bhut busy chal raha ho

 

[Rjpreet]

ਜੇ ਮਨ ਪੜੇ ਜਾਣ ਤਾਂ ਸਭ ਫੜੇ ਜਾਣ

 

[abhishek123409@]

Bhaiyon koi pbsex bhai ka contact hai kya unki story bich mai hi chod di hai hai to unse contact kr ke story dubara suru kra di jye

 

[Xabhi]

Karma story ke keval 3 part hai kya ?

Ha uske sirf 3 part hai
Yadi abhi bhi na mila ho to Siraj Patel bhai ke PDF section me jaye vhi pr milegi story aapko

 

[Xabhi]

Yaar 1 story thi jis ka start aysay tha k hero subah uthta hy apni behan k sath masti karny lagta hy par bhen k gussa hony pe wo dar k jinlok bhag jata hy apny mama k pass wahan pe wo apni mami k sath sex karta hy aur uska mama kisi dosry lok k visit pe chala jata hy phir peechy say wo jinlok ki dekh bhal karta hy aur apni mami say sex bhi karta hy uski mami ki 2 betiyan bhi hoti hy. Kisi ko is story ka thread pta ho to btae please. Mughy iska thread nahi mill raha bohat dhonda hy. Ye request hy 1 please.

Family Love forever karke ek story thi unke writer se puchho mujhe lagta hai unhone hi 3 story likhi thi jo ek dusre se crossover karti hai Unhi ka vo thread tha Bhai

 

[Xabhi]

parichay...
suruwat mein, aap ko samil karna chahiye kuch buniyade tathyo ke baare mein kahani ko leke, sirshak sahit, lekhak /lekhika aur unki kahani shaili,
saarnksh..
sanshep pe kahani ko charcha..... kahani, charictra, mudde, mod pehlu.... mukhya ghatanao ya samashyao.. patro ka Anubhav... aur ant mein samapti ko leke kuch charcha...

byaktigat pratibinb....

charcha..... Kahani ko leke pasand ya na pasand, koi pehlu ya mod ya kirdaaro dwara kiye gaye karya ya Karam.... kin kin vichay ko leke samarthan hai aur kin kin vichay vishesh ko virobhavash... Tulna karna ki agar lekhak aise mod pe ye muddo ko pe zyada dhyaan dena chahiye tha to zyada behatar hota etc.
ya phir udhaharan ke liye is kahani ko lekhak ki Anya kahani ko bhi ullekhit karna... kya mat bhed hain lekhan shaili ko leke etc.
kahani ke liye apne khude byaktigat Anubhav ya majuda ghatanao pe ek byaktigat ray rakhna.....


critical anylise or criticism...

lekhak ke udasya? Kya lekhak apne udasya mein safal rahe ya nahi?
kya hai kahani ki setting?kahani ke liye upayukt hai ye lekhan shaili?

Kirdaar aur kahani ki build-up? kya sathik roop mein hua? kya kirdaar sathik roop sathik mod aur pehlu pe bhumika nibhaye? Jo kiya kya wo vishasniya tarika hai...?

kahani mein kya sathik roop mein romance, thrill, suspense, drama create kar paaye ghatanao ki ummid ke mutabik? ?

vishay kya hai? ya kendriya vichar hai ki nahi kahani mein?
kahani mein ek" coda" hai, ya ek sabak? kya sikh milti hai? Kya anuman hai kahani ko leke?

kahani mein koi aprat‍yashit mod, ? Kya jarurat thi? agar haan.. to kyun? agar nahi.... to kyun nahi? Kaaran darshaya jaaye?

lekhak ya lekhika upayog karte hai kisi sahityik upakarono, upma, rupak... kya wo kisi se inspired hai?

niskarsh....
mulyakan karni hai sampurn kahani ko, phir Salah.... ya iski jarurat nahi? Kya lekhak ne jo likha wo har taraf se perfect tha....? kyun aur kaise? is par aankalan...
Kya dikha aapko lekhak ke jariye... kya mahsoos ya ehsaas hua? kya lekhak ki kahani dusro ke sifarish par nirbhar hai? ya kahani khud mein itne kabile tarif ki pathak khud dusro ko bole padhne ke liye?
kya yeh sarthak hai padhne ke liye..? naye pathakon ke liye apne vichar dijiye ispe?

Btw The king, Xabhi aur ju ne hi kaha tha in muddon gaur karne ke liye kahani sameeksha karte waqt

Naina Ji Hamne kab kaha aapse ham to khud hi Aapke revo dekh kr Bahut kuchh sikh rhe hai or Bahut kuchh Sikhna baki hai...

 

[Xabhi]

Siraj Patel bhai ke PDF section me

Adventure of Karma chapter 3 kha hai

 

[MrRon]

8th Semester aur Atamkahani ka pdf milega ky?

 

[Xabhi]

8th Semester aur Atamkahani ka pdf milega ky?

Sayad yha mil jaye Aapko

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