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Zas23

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UPDATE- 16

Abtak apne padha

Papa- to thik hai bacho ko v aane do fir unsai v Puch lunga

Lata - ha waise v sare bachiyo ka halat subham ke Jane ke baad ajab sa ho Gaya hai ....sab ki Jan to yeah hai

Komal- ha didi sahi kaha jisdin sai yeah Gaya hai jaise ISS Ghar ki khusiya v chali Gaye ho ...na koi hasta hai na koi khelt hai ...

Ambika- ha didi...sare jaise murjha Gaye ho
..or maaji v kitna bimar padh Gaye

Mai- ab Mai aagaya hu na sb thik Kar dunga

Fir sab lunch karte hai aise hi baate karte karte ..

Ab aage

Jab hum sabka lunch ho Gaya tab Mai mummy sai

Mai- mummy Dadi ka Khana de do Mai khila deta hu

Lata-( dhukhe hote hue) maji Khana khati kaha hai wo to sirf liquid

Mai- mummy ap Khana do to sahi Baki mujhpar chor do

Ambika- Didi subham ko de do KY pata kha le

Fir mummy ek plate Mai Dadi ke liye Khana dalkar di

Mai Khana lekar unke room Mai Gaya or darwaja band Kar Diya fir unke pass jakr baitha or unko aawaz Diya ...sab bahar khare the unko samjh Mai NH aaya ki Maine darwaza kue band Kiya hai .

Ambika chachi- subham tune darwaja kue band Kiya hai ..darwaja to kholo

Mai (andar sai) - Chachi aap log hum Dadi pota ko akele chor do ..dekho mere Dadi Khana v khayege or thik v ho jayege

Fir koi kuch nh bola bahar sai par aapas Mai wo log baat Kar rhe the

Ambika( mummy sai) - Didi ab KY bole subham ko ...kese btaye use ki uske Jane ke baad KY Kya hua hai...kese btaye ki maaji ko heart attack or paralysis aaya hai ek sath ...jisse wo uth kar usse baat nh karege..uski heart Mai blockage hai

Lata- ambika Saab thik hga ...dekhna Mera Dil bolta hai ki subham hi maaji ko thik karega...

Ambika- Didi yeah aap kese baat bol rahi ho ..itne bade bade doctor Jo NH Kar paye wo subham KY karega

Lata kuch nh bolti par apne man Mai ( ab tumhe kese btau ambika ki wo koi aam bacha nh hai Baki sab upar Wala Jane)

Itne Der Mai waha bhanu or komal Chachi v aajati hai fir ambika dono ko v sare baat btati hai jisse sun sabki ankho Mai aasu the..

Idhar room mai
Mai( smile ke sath ) Dadi uthoge nh ..apne subham sai miloge nh ..dekho tumsai milne kitne dur sai aaya hu ...dekho Khana v laaya hu khaoge nh ....
Dadi ab tumhara bister sai uthne ka time aagaya hai ...ab Mai aagaya hu sb thik hga.....

Fir Mai apne pocket sai kuch jadi buti nikala Jo gharelu hi thi unko hatho sai Pis Kar unke muh Mai uska Ras dalne laga ....fir unki nabs check karne laga jisse check karne ke baad mere hotho Mai muskan fal Gaye ..or ghari Mai dekha bas Dadi kuch minutes

Idhar bahar khare sab bathe samaye dekh rahe the or aapas Mai baat Kar rahe the

Ambika- mujhe lagta hai ki subham unhe uthane ki kosis Kar RHA hga par wo uthi nh ...kahi subham unki aise halat dekhkar Tut na Jaye

Komal- ha Didi mujhe v aisa hi lagta hai ...kese sambhalenge usko ...waise v dekho kitni Der ho Gaye andar Gaye

Avi yeah bate hi Kar rahe the ki sab Bache school college sai aagaye

( Sabka intro de chuka hu ab sirf name and uske bare Mai thoda Bata Detaa hu

Riya Singh- yeah Ghar ki sabsai badi beti hai..yeah Avi 3rd year Mai hai ...yeah padhne Mai bht achi hai ..iska goal and MBA karkai bht badi business women banne ka...yeah bht Sundar hai khash karkai iske boobs or iska body measurements v perfect hai

Radha Singh- yeah Ghar ki 2sri number beti haai ..yeah Avi mbbs ke 2nd year Mai hai ..yeah v padhne Mai bht achi hai ..iska goal hai bht badi doctor banne ka ...yeah v bht Sundar hai khaskar iske lips or Baki to sab perfect hai..

Amayra singh- yeah Ghar ki sabsai choti beti hai..yeah IST year Mai hai ...yeah v padhne Mai bht achi hai ..iska goal hai scientist banna ...yeah v Sundar hai ..par yeah nakchari bht hai ..iske nose Mai gussa jaise baitha rehta ho...

Ghar Mai sab ek sai badkar ek hot hai ..chayea wo Chachi ho ya Mami ya behne koi v ....Baki or v bate story ke sath pata chalte jayege)

Riya - mom, taiji aplog Dadi ke room ke bahar khade hai aise KY baat hai sab thik hai na

Komal- ha sab thik hai bas tera bh... Mera Matlab hai doctor aaya hai Dadi ko check karne

Lata komal ki taraf dekhte hai to wo ankh Mar dete hai

Radha - MAA mujhe Jane do Mai dekhte hu kahi koi aira gaira doctor to nh

Komal- badi aaye dekhne wali doctarni ...andar Jana Avi Mana hai

Wohi udhar Dadi ko dawaye Diya bht time ho chuka tha ..

Mai- ab Dadi uth jao ..

Fir Mai dhire dhire Dadi ke paw ki malish karne lagta hu...sumitra apni ankhe kholti hai..or bolti hai beta ....
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UPDATE- 17

Abtak apne padha

Komal- badi aaye dekhne wali doctarni ...andar Jana Avi Mana hai

Wohi udhar Dadi ko dawaye Diya bht time ho chuka tha ..

Mai- ab Dadi uth jao ..

Fir Mai dhire dhire Dadi ke paw ki malish karne lagta hu...sumitra apni ankhe kholti hai..or bolti hai beta ....

Ab aage

Mai- Dadi apne kese pehchana mujhe

Sumita- beta tumhe to Mai bht pehle hi pehchan Gaye thi jab tum dophar Mai room.mai aaya tha bas na to ankhe khol parahi thi na kuch bol pa rahi thi..par tumne na Jane Kya pilaya ...sarir ek dum halka lag raha hai or Dil Mai v koi dard NH hai..

Mai - Dadi Maine to bas uhi pila Diya ...apko kaha kuch hua tha ap to bas soye hue thi or uth Gaye...smile karte hue

Sumita - beta Maine aise hi dhup Mai Baal safed NH kiye hai ...mujhe pata ki tumne mujhe koi dawaye pilaye thi jisse Mai thik ho rahi hu bht jaldi ... Waise beta tumhe yesb ka kese pata...

Mai- Dadi bas aise hi ap tension na lo Mai to bas apko Tulsi or adrak ka Ras pilaya( jhuth) ...waise Dadi aab aap utho or jaldi sai Khana Khao or mere sath bahar Chalo....

Sumita - par beta Mai chal nh paungi ...mujhe paralysis hua hai..or v na Jane KY KY bimari..

Mai- Dadi aap Chalo to sahi..try to karo..usse pehle Khana Khao dekho aap kitna kamjor ho Gaya hai..

Sumita- ab tum aagaya hai na to Mai thik ho jaungi

Fir maine Dadi ko Khana khilaya apne hatho sai ..unki ankho nai aasu aagye jisse Maine saaf Kiya ...fir plate ko ek side Mai rakhkar unke hatho ko pakar Kar bistar sai uthaya ...suru Mai unke paw larkhara rahe the or dard v Kar rahe the ...par dhire dhire khare ho Gaye fir Mai unko pakar ke gate Tak laya or gate khola...jaise hi gate khula sab Dadi ko aise dekhkar shock ho Gaye ..unko apne ankho Mai viswash nh ho raha tha ki Dadi ko itna bimari tha or wo itni jaldi kese uth Gaye ...khash Kar komal Chachi ko

Komal Chachi apne man Mai( Jo itne bade bade doctor nh kar paye wo isnai kese Kar Diya wo v adhe ghante Mai ...koi to baat hai)

Fir sabki tandra tuti or sab dodh pare Dadi ki taraf..sabnai Dadi ko gher Kar gale lagaya ...sabki ankho sai aansu nikal rahe the...pariwar hota hi aisa hai ki har kisi ke dukh sukh ka khyal rakhna ....

Bhanu- ab to double party hga

Amayra- tauji double party kue

Bhanu- are mere guriya ko kisi nai NH btaya ki tera Bhai aagaya hai...( Avi Tak kisi ka dhyan mere taraf nh Gaya tha 3no Mai sai)

3no uchalte hue Kya Bhai aagaye or kisi nai Hume NH btaya kaha hai wo or tino dodh pare or last Mai jab unhe kahi nh Mila tab thaak haar ke wapas aagaye or bole kaha hai humara Bhai

Bhanu- are tumlog bolne Doge tab to ...yeah Raha tumhare samne to hai...

Fir Tino mere ko dekhte hai
riya or amayra uchalte hue mere gale lag jate hai unki ankho Mai aasu tha par Radha waha sai room Mai bhag jati hai

Bhai ab is Kya hua komal Chachi bolti hai

Mai halka sa smile karte hue Mai dekhta hu chaciii
Mai waha sai Radha ke room ki taraf Gaya Jo mujhe amayra nai btaya jab waha pahucha to dekha ki room lock tha ...aaj to pakki mere shamat aane wala hai Mai apne man Mai badbadaya ...fir gate knock karte hue Radha gate kholo ( Mai kisi ko v Didi NH bolta hu bachpan sai hi kisi ko v pasnad nh Mera Didi bolna) par andar sai koi aawaz NH aaye mai fir sai knock Kiya ki gate kholo ..isbar andar sai aawaz aaye

Radha- jao yaha sai apne school

Mai - aab maaf v Kar do and gate kholo

Radha- gate nh khulega jao yaha sai

Mai- thik hai jab tumko Mai pasand hi nh to thik hai Mai ja raha hu

Yeah bol Mai chup ho Gaya par Gaya kahi nh ...jab 5 min Tak Mai kuch nh bola tab wo gate kholi or bhar ko bhagti hue aaye par wo mere sai takra Gaye ...wo Sochi ki Mai kahi Sach Mai to nh Chala Gaya ...takrate hi wo sambhal nh paye or mere upar gir Gaye or Maine unhe kas Kar pakar liya ..unki ankhe laal thi iska matlb wo ro rahi thi
..fir sambhal Kar wo mujhe pakar Kar andar le Gaye or door lock kar liya or mujhe Marne lagi ..or khud ro v rahi thi....

Radha( marte and rote hue) - bhaut bure ho tum itne salo Mai mere yaad nh aaye tumhe

Mai- yaad to bht aaye par Kya karu aane hi nh Mila

Radha ( rote hue)- jhuthe khi ke

Fir mere sai gale lag Gaye

Radha - pata hai hum sab tumko kitna miss karte the..ghar sai jaise khusiya hi chali Gaye thi tumhare Jane said..par aaj wapas Ghar ki khusiya lout aaye Dadi thik ho Gaye

yeah bolti hi use kuch yaad aaya....

Radha- waise ek baat btao tumne Dadi ko thik kese Kiya

Mai- are Dadi ko kuch nh hua tha mere aawaz sunte hi thik ho Gaye

Radha mujhe shak ki najar sai dekhte hue jab jhuth bolna NH aata to kue bolte ho

Mai - are Mai jhuth kaha bol Raha hu waise tum itni moti kese ho Gaye ho

Wo mujhe marte hue Mai tumhe moti dikh rahi hu ruk tu itni Der Mai maai door open karkai bhag Gaya or wo mere piche bhagi Marne or maai idhar udhar bhagne laga it Der Mai wo dono v aagaye or hum Tino baith Kar uhi idhar udhar ki baate karne lage

Isi tarah sham ho Gaye ..aj komal Chachi nai bola kue na hum sab bahar sai order Kar dai taki sab kha sake Dadi v

Lata - par Dadi ko bhar ka masala Wala Khana Dena acha hga Kya

Mai bich mai- ha MAA aap de sakte ho Dadi ko sab ....

Fir amayra kue na hum Charo Bache ghumne chale jisse sunkar hum sab ready ho gaye
 
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