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UPDATE- 19
Abtak apne padha
Payal ( man Mai) - yeah to wohi ankhe lag rahi hai waise hi blue...par sayad Mera vaham hga or v Jan ki ankhe blue hote hai ...
Mai halka sai smile karte hue fir jab wo saving complete ki to mere face ko dekhe ..ek baar ke liye to usmai doob hi Gaye or man Mai kitna pyara hai yeah fir
Wo mujhe uthne boli jaise hi Mai utha wo mere body Mai wohi Nishan dekhkar chok Gaye or mere paw pakar liya ....
Ab aage
Mai smile ke sath - KY hua payal tum mere paw kue pakar li
Payal- bhige ankho sai aap to sab jante hai fir v yeah baate ....uss din apne mujhe bachaya NH hota to aaj Mai yaha nh hote na hi mere MAA bachti ....
Mai- usko uthate hue ..sab upar Wala karta hai par umeed karunga yeah baat tum apne Tak hi rakhoge...waise tumhare MAA ab thik to hai na ( dosto yaad hoga jab subham aaya tha tb apne padha tha ki kisi maahakal nai farm house Mai kisi ladki ko bachaya tha ...wo mahakaal subham hi hai or wo ladki payal..)
Payal- Mai yeah baat apne Tak hi rakhungi ....ha apne Jo dawaye di thi usse mere MAA bilkul thik ho Gaye..or apke Karan aaj humlog khush hai ...
Mai- waise sab upar Wala karta hai ...aab mereko ready karo NH to wo sab aati hi honge....
Fir payal mujhe tayar karne Mai lag Gaye jismai bht samaye lag Gaya tha ...wo double mehnat ki jitna wo pehle karti usse double ....akhir Kar uski mehnat rang laye or Mai yaha ke hisab sai ready ho Gaya par utni Der uski ankho Mai aasu the or man Mai ek khusi... Jab Mai ready hua to fir ek baar wo mere Mai kho Gaye jisse Mai usse hila Kar jagaya ...
Itne Der Mai mere behne mere liye bht Sare shopping Kar liya tha jaise pura mall hi le liya ho ...unhone apne liye v purchase kiya par mere liye Jada ... Fir unhone ek dress manager ko dekar aaye thi ...tab manager nai unhe ek ghante Mai aane bola tha par Avi to aadha ghanta hi hua tha tab v wo wapas aagaye the....fir payal mujhe wo dress lakar di or tayar hone boli ...
Jab Mai ready hokar bahar aaya to sab dekhte hi reh Gaye mujhe... Waha jitne v ladke the mujhsai jealous feel karne lage or jitni v ladkiya thi wo mujhe hi dekhte rahi...mere behne v mujhmai hi kho Gaye tab Mai bola KY hua acha NH lag Raha Kya tab unhe hosh aaya or boli ki tumsai perfect koi nh ....
Fir bill Dene ka time aaya to Riya nai card Diya or bill Diya ...bill 90000 ka aagaya tha....
Mai Riya ko bola
Mai- Riya 500 ja Ek bundle Dena
Riya nai Bina puche ki Mai Kya karunga mujhe de Diya ....jisse Mai payal ko de Diya jisse dekh sab shock hue ...payal nai lene sai Mana kiya par Maine usse aankh dikha Kar bola le lo yeah tumhare mehnat ka hai ....tab usnai rakh liya ...or dete samaye dhire sai bola chinta NH karo tumhara man ka kuch pura jarur honga...
Or yeah bol humlog bahar nikal Gaye ...bahar jaha pehle mujh par has rahe the sab wohi ab ladkiya mujhe dekh mujmai hi kho Gaye or ladke jealous feel Kar rahe the ...wohi humlog jab mall sai bahar Nikle tab waha wo Charo v the ..wo v mujhe aise dekh shock khaskar wo ladki jisnai Mera majak udaya tha ...
Anjali- Riya ke pass aakar sorry Riya mujhe aisa NH karna chayea tha waise wo kaha Gaya Mai usse v Mafi mang lete hu
Riya- koi jarurat nh hai tum Jao yaha sai ....or yeah Raha tumhara jungli...
Anjali ek baar fir shock mujhe itna change hote dekh or mujhmai hi kho Gaye ...usse uski galti ka ahsash ho chuka tha...
Anjali- Riya mujhe maaf karde yaar
Riya- kabhi NH aaj sai hum frnds nh ha
Mai - Riya usse apni galti ka ahsas ho Gaya hai ...maaf Kar do usse mere liye plz
Riya- tu aisa kue hai bachpan Mai v tu aisa hi karta tha..fir Anjali sai thik hai aaj maaf Kar Diya aage sai NH karungi
Fir dono aapas Mai gale laga lete hai..
Anjali mujhsai- thnx ...Maine tumhara majak udaya tab v tum mujhe maaf Kar diye..KY hum frnds ban sakte hai
Mai - maaf karna par yeah nh ho sakta hai ....tumne in Tino ka Dil dhukhaya hai Jo mujhe kavi bardast NH hoga so plz and sry
Yeah baat un tino ko hi pasand NH aaya
Ladki 2- tum jante v ho kiski frndship thukra rahe ho ...tumhare aukat hi KY hai iske samne upar sai iske liye ladko ki line lagti hai par yeah bhaw NH dete ....
Ladki 3- samjhte KY ho apne aap ko ...tum iske frndship ke layak v nh ho fir v yeah tumsai frndship karna chati hai
Anjali- koi nh aage pachtaoge
Mai- mere aukat kitni hai kitni nh isse koi maatlb nh or lagte honge iske aage piche bht line par Mai usmai NH hu or rahi baat layak ki to Mai KY hu KY NH yeah Janna NH hoga or Mai sabko lekar pade Ghar ki taraf
Raste Mai Riya subham sai
Riya- babu tumne uski frndship kue thukra di
Mai- mere liye aplog Jada important ho na ki wo so Jo mere family ko rulayega usko uska harzana bharna hga...
Yeah sun sab chup ho jate hai par sabke man Mai
Riya- Kya subham humlog ke liye itna sochta hai..waise v kitna smart and caring hai yeah ...dusre ladko ke jaisa Ganda v nh hai ..body v kitni strong lag rahi hai....
UPDATE- 19
Abtak apne padha
Payal ( man Mai) - yeah to wohi ankhe lag rahi hai waise hi blue...par sayad Mera vaham hga or v Jan ki ankhe blue hote hai ...
Mai halka sai smile karte hue fir jab wo saving complete ki to mere face ko dekhe ..ek baar ke liye to usmai doob hi Gaye or man Mai kitna pyara hai yeah fir
Wo mujhe uthne boli jaise hi Mai utha wo mere body Mai wohi Nishan dekhkar chok Gaye or mere paw pakar liya ....
Ab aage
Mai smile ke sath - KY hua payal tum mere paw kue pakar li
Payal- bhige ankho sai aap to sab jante hai fir v yeah baate ....uss din apne mujhe bachaya NH hota to aaj Mai yaha nh hote na hi mere MAA bachti ....
Mai- usko uthate hue ..sab upar Wala karta hai par umeed karunga yeah baat tum apne Tak hi rakhoge...waise tumhare MAA ab thik to hai na ( dosto yaad hoga jab subham aaya tha tb apne padha tha ki kisi maahakal nai farm house Mai kisi ladki ko bachaya tha ...wo mahakaal subham hi hai or wo ladki payal..)
Payal- Mai yeah baat apne Tak hi rakhungi ....ha apne Jo dawaye di thi usse mere MAA bilkul thik ho Gaye..or apke Karan aaj humlog khush hai ...
Mai- waise sab upar Wala karta hai ...aab mereko ready karo NH to wo sab aati hi honge....
Fir payal mujhe tayar karne Mai lag Gaye jismai bht samaye lag Gaya tha ...wo double mehnat ki jitna wo pehle karti usse double ....akhir Kar uski mehnat rang laye or Mai yaha ke hisab sai ready ho Gaya par utni Der uski ankho Mai aasu the or man Mai ek khusi... Jab Mai ready hua to fir ek baar wo mere Mai kho Gaye jisse Mai usse hila Kar jagaya ...
Itne Der Mai mere behne mere liye bht Sare shopping Kar liya tha jaise pura mall hi le liya ho ...unhone apne liye v purchase kiya par mere liye Jada ... Fir unhone ek dress manager ko dekar aaye thi ...tab manager nai unhe ek ghante Mai aane bola tha par Avi to aadha ghanta hi hua tha tab v wo wapas aagaye the....fir payal mujhe wo dress lakar di or tayar hone boli ...
Jab Mai ready hokar bahar aaya to sab dekhte hi reh Gaye mujhe... Waha jitne v ladke the mujhsai jealous feel karne lage or jitni v ladkiya thi wo mujhe hi dekhte rahi...mere behne v mujhmai hi kho Gaye tab Mai bola KY hua acha NH lag Raha Kya tab unhe hosh aaya or boli ki tumsai perfect koi nh ....
Fir bill Dene ka time aaya to Riya nai card Diya or bill Diya ...bill 90000 ka aagaya tha....
Mai Riya ko bola
Mai- Riya 500 ja Ek bundle Dena
Riya nai Bina puche ki Mai Kya karunga mujhe de Diya ....jisse Mai payal ko de Diya jisse dekh sab shock hue ...payal nai lene sai Mana kiya par Maine usse aankh dikha Kar bola le lo yeah tumhare mehnat ka hai ....tab usnai rakh liya ...or dete samaye dhire sai bola chinta NH karo tumhara man ka kuch pura jarur honga...
Or yeah bol humlog bahar nikal Gaye ...bahar jaha pehle mujh par has rahe the sab wohi ab ladkiya mujhe dekh mujmai hi kho Gaye or ladke jealous feel Kar rahe the ...wohi humlog jab mall sai bahar Nikle tab waha wo Charo v the ..wo v mujhe aise dekh shock khaskar wo ladki jisnai Mera majak udaya tha ...
Anjali- Riya ke pass aakar sorry Riya mujhe aisa NH karna chayea tha waise wo kaha Gaya Mai usse v Mafi mang lete hu
Riya- koi jarurat nh hai tum Jao yaha sai ....or yeah Raha tumhara jungli...
Anjali ek baar fir shock mujhe itna change hote dekh or mujhmai hi kho Gaye ...usse uski galti ka ahsash ho chuka tha...
Anjali- Riya mujhe maaf karde yaar
Riya- kabhi NH aaj sai hum frnds nh ha
Mai - Riya usse apni galti ka ahsas ho Gaya hai ...maaf Kar do usse mere liye plz
Riya- tu aisa kue hai bachpan Mai v tu aisa hi karta tha..fir Anjali sai thik hai aaj maaf Kar Diya aage sai NH karungi
Fir dono aapas Mai gale laga lete hai..
Anjali mujhsai- thnx ...Maine tumhara majak udaya tab v tum mujhe maaf Kar diye..KY hum frnds ban sakte hai
Mai - maaf karna par yeah nh ho sakta hai ....tumne in Tino ka Dil dhukhaya hai Jo mujhe kavi bardast NH hoga so plz and sry
Yeah baat un tino ko hi pasand NH aaya
Ladki 2- tum jante v ho kiski frndship thukra rahe ho ...tumhare aukat hi KY hai iske samne upar sai iske liye ladko ki line lagti hai par yeah bhaw NH dete ....
Ladki 3- samjhte KY ho apne aap ko ...tum iske frndship ke layak v nh ho fir v yeah tumsai frndship karna chati hai
Anjali- koi nh aage pachtaoge
Mai- mere aukat kitni hai kitni nh isse koi maatlb nh or lagte honge iske aage piche bht line par Mai usmai NH hu or rahi baat layak ki to Mai KY hu KY NH yeah Janna NH hoga or Mai sabko lekar pade Ghar ki taraf
Raste Mai Riya subham sai
Riya- babu tumne uski frndship kue thukra di
Mai- mere liye aplog Jada important ho na ki wo so Jo mere family ko rulayega usko uska harzana bharna hga...
Yeah sun sab chup ho jate hai par sabke man Mai
Riya- Kya subham humlog ke liye itna sochta hai..waise v kitna smart and caring hai yeah ...dusre ladko ke jaisa Ganda v nh hai ..body v kitni strong lag rahi hai....
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