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SUBHAM- MYSTERIOUS PERSON
UPDATE- 28
Abtak apne padha
Achanak mere sapne Mai naradmuni padhare ..
Mai - pranam muniwar
Narad muni- wats khush raho ...wats ab tumhe apne safar par Jana hga ..apno ka moh chorna hga tumhare liye bht log intejar Kar rhe h ..tum grihast jiwan ke liye apitu bht bade karyo ke liye aaye ho ..apne udesyo ko pehchano ....
Mai- muniwar Mai janta hu parantu Mera v to mere mata pita pariwarjano ke liye koi kartwaya hai uska my
Narad muni- ha putra Mai janta hu parantu tum unki chinta na karo ...or samaye samaye par tum aate rehna
Mai- Jo aagaya muniwar waise mujhe Jana kha hai sbsai pehle ..Mai apne safar ki suruwat kaha sai karu
Narad muni - iska jawab Mai tumhe parso dunga.... Tum tab Tak apne pariwar jano ke sath bitao or apne pita ko vta Dena .
Yeah bol narad muni anterdhyan ho Gaye or mujhe gehri soch Mai chor Gaye ...
Ab aage
Aagle din Mai uth Kar nitya karm Karne ke paschat snan karke apne dhyan mudra Mai baith gaya ... Aj Mera man thoda vichlit tha isliye dhyan lagane Mai dikkat ho rhi thi.
to Mai uth gya or papa ke pass Chala gaya jaha wo sofe par baithe news paper padh rhe the..
Wo mujhe apne pass Mai baith liye or puche .
Papa- KY baat hai sb thik to hai na
Mai- ha SB thik hai kue
Papa- SB thik hai to Tera muh utra hua kue hai
Mai- NH aisa to kuch NH hai Papa apko aise hi lag Raha hai
Fir Papa mujhe pakar Kar apne room Mai le Gaye jaha unhone Mera hath apne sar par rakh Diya to majburan mujhe unhe sari baat btani padi ...
Papa- khus hokr yeah to bht khusi ki baat hai beta ismai udas hone ki koi baat nh hai ..Mai to khush hu ki yeah sobhagya mere bete ko Mila ...apne Ghar Mai to SB khusi dete hai par duniya ko khusi dene Wala hi asli hero hota hai ...I proud of u beta ..
Mai- par Papa mere Jane ke baad sb kese rahenge and Mai kese rahunga
Papa- beta sb ko aadat ho jayege tu chinta na Kar ha muskil to hai par samaye sb Kar dega
Maine Papa ko Gale laga liya ..mujhe pata hai wo mujhe khush dikhane ki kosis Kar rhe hai par aisa NH hai wo v andar sai bht dukhi hai..
Fir Mai waha sai uth Kar Bahar Chala aaya jaha mujhe Chachi mil Gaye unsai v bht der Tak baate kiya kafi din ho gaya tha sbsai bate kiye hue
Isi tarah sbsai bate karta Raha aj sb BHT khush the ki Mai unsai itni bate kiya uske baad mummy sai bate kiya ....maa to maa hoti hai wo jhat smjh Gaye or Gale sai laga liya fir boli
Mummy- beta tu dhukhi kue ho Raha hai itna bta or jhut mat bolna ..Mai tujhe kisi kasam Mai NH bandhna chati isliye khut mat bolna
Mummy ki iss baat sai mujhe majbooran unhe Puri baat btani hi pari jiska jawab unhone BHT khush hokr dia
Mummy- beta manti hu mujhe dhukh jarur hoga tumsai bicharne ka par usse Jada khusi hoge ki mere bete nai mere jaise kitni hi maa ke Ghar ki rakhsha karega ...hamesha beta Satya ki rah par chalna or kitni hi musibat aaye apne apko hamesha sant rakhna ..kueki sant dinag sahi rah btata hai wohi kroth vinash ki or le jata hai ....
Isi tarah ki dhero bate karte hu last Mai Mai pahucha apni Radha ke pass
Radha apni room Mai baithi kuch soch rahi thi Mai uske room Mai gaya par wo apne dhyan Mai magn hi thi Maine use Puch
Mai- Radha KY Kar rhi ho
Par usnai koi reply NH dia..Mai usse hilaya tb uska dhyan tuta tab usnai pucha
Radha - are subham tm kb aaye bolo ky baat hai
Mai- itni gehri soch Mai kaha dubi hue thi
Radha - kahi NH tm btao aj mere liye kaha sai time mil gaya
Mai- aisa kue Bol rahi ho tmhare liye to time hi time hai
Wo- ha pata hai kitna
( Radha mere bht close thi sayad Mai use like v karne lag gaya tha par yeah galat tha ...jb sai Mai wapas aaya tha sbsai Jada dhyan wohi Mera rakhti thi)
Mai- KY hua KY soch rahi thi tm itna btao
Wo - kuch NH tm kaha ja rahe ho yeah btao
Mai(shock)- kahi NH aisa kue Bol rahi ho padhne jaunga naa
Wo - NH tm SB mujhsai jhut bolte ho Papa mummy tm sb
Mai( shock and sad) - aisa kue Bol rahi ho ..aisa kuch NH hai
Wo - Mera hath apne sar par rakh Kar to khao mere kasam aaj uski ankho Mai aansu the or ajib kasis ..mujhe kuch samjh hi NH aaraha tha ...
Maine utha or Jane laga to usnai bola tm chale jao par Mai jakr gate lock kiya or uske pass aakr baith gaya ..wo mujhe ektak dekh rahi thi...tab Maine faisla kiya or use suru sai lekar last Tak sb Bata Diya iss bich uske chehre ke haw bhaw badlte rahe par wo Shanti sai sb sunti rahi ....jab maine sb Bata Diya tab v wo shant rahi or mere or dekhti rahi ..mujhe kuch samjh hi NH aaraha tha ki KY Kar rhi hai KY nahi...
Thode der or shant rehne ke baad uske ankho Mai ek chamak sa aaya fir wo boli.
Radha- itna sb kuch tumne hum sabsai chupaya or aisa v hota hai par mujhe khusi hai ki tumne akhir Mai mujhe SB bta dia ha mujhe kuch kuch doubt tha par itna NH ...
Mai- to akhir tum sb samjh gaye ho to yeah v Jan lo kl sai Mai ja Raha hu apne safar par bich bich Mai aata rahunga par kb yeah NH pata or aage ky hai wo v NH pata
Radha- Mai v tumhare sath jaungi ....
Mai- NH yeah NH ho sakta hai ...waha safar Mai bht khatra hga kitna itna andaja to mujhe v NH hai ...Mai tumhare ko itne bade khatre Mai NH daal sakta hu ..
Radha - dekho subham Mai v tumko kuch btanA chati hu ..waise to ladkiya kavi aise bate NH btati hai par Mai tumhare sath koi risk NH Lena chati hu..
Har ladki ka sapno ka rajkumar hota hai waise Mai v chati hu ki mere sapno ka rajkumar hi mujhe mile par ajtk mujhe aisa koi NH Mila par jb tum aaye to tumme mujhe wo sari khubi dikhi ..Mai tumhare close hote Gaye or last Mai tumsai na chate hue v pyar Kar baithi ...jb pyar hua to room Mai baith Kar apne ko bht kosa v ki tm mere Bhai ho yesb galat hai ..par SB bekar Mai apne aap ko NH rok paye ....par aj jb mujhe SB tumne Bata dia to ab mujhe koi dar NH ab chayea Jo ho jaye Mai agar shadi karungi to sirf tumsai NH to nh karungi....
Mai- dekho Radha yesb galat hai ...Bhai behan ke bich yesb NH hta hai ..or mujhe to yebhi NH pata ki aage KY hga KY nahi ..kese mere jindagi rahege..sayad mere jindagi pariwar pyar shadi wagerah hai v NH ...yesb mere liye sambhav NH hai Radha ...or kl ko na jane mere jindagi Mai bht ladkiya v aasakti hai tb tum KY karoge ...
Radha- dekho Mai sbke liye tayar hu ..agar tum NH mile to Mai Marne ko v tayar hu...or rahi baat ladkiyo ki to mujhe isse koi problem NH hai mujhe mere hisse ka pyar chayea Baki mujhe NH Matlab ...ha mujhe bht Jalan v hgi or dikkat v par mujhe pata hai tum yesb janbujh Kar NH Kar rhe ho ...
Mai- NH aisa NH ho sakta hai tum samjhti kue NH ho
Wo- kue tumhare jindagi Mai koi or hai to Bata do..
Mai- NH koi NH hai par NH ho sakta or yeah bolkar Mai aagaya waha sai apne room Mai ..Mai v Radha ko pasand karta tha par iska matlb yeah to NH ki Mai apni khusi ke liye uski jindagi kharab Kar du..
Mere jindagi na Jane kb kaha rahunga ..kb KY hga ..kl hga v ya nh Mai v NH janta ...jindagi v ajib hai par khusi v hai ki Mai kisi ke kaam aaraha hu...
Tabhi Mai dhyan Mai baitha thori.der dhyan kiya to mere kano Mai aawaz aaye subham mere Bache yeah tum KY Kar rhe ho
Mai- KY hua Prabhu Maine KY kiya
Awaz- yeah Janam tumhara sbko khusi dene ke liye hi hua hai or tum dukhi Kar rhe ho
Mai- Prabhu Mai uski jindagi kharab NH karna chata hu
Awaz- iss sansar Mai sbki niyati atal hai ...tum bas karm karo fal ki chinta na karo putra..or Radha to tumhare sakti hai ..tumhare jindagi Mai bht aayenge ..tumhe bht logo ki awasakta hai isliye inhe jodte jao ..kueki muskilo Mai SB mil.kar hi Hal ho payega ..yeah tumhare kamjori NH sakti hai.
Mai- par Prabhu yeah bin saktio ke kese kuch karege ..
Awaz- ha tumhara sochna Satya hai putra ..iska Hal v tumhe kl narad Muni sai mil jayega ...or Avi to tumhe vhi apni saktio ko jagrit karna hai or Pana hai ...
Mai- jaisa Prabhu apki aagya
Or fir awaz aana band ho gaya or Mai dhyan sai uth gaya
..
Ab Mera man sant ho gaya tha or Mai waha sai Radha ke kamre ki taraf gaya to dekha wo ro rahi thi or uske hatho Mai koi sisi type ki thi or dusre hatho Mai mere taswir thi ...Jise dekh Kar wo Bol rahi thi
Radha( taswir sai) - Mai tumhare Bina nahi ji sakti or tum mujhe NH pyar karte to Mai jinda rehkar KY karungi isliye Mai aj maar jaungi ...
Or sisi kholne lagi ...yeah sun kar mujhe dukh hua ki agar Mai deri karta to aaj Radha ko kho baithta ..
Maine jaldi sai wo sisi uske hatho sai liya or usko feka or ek thappar mara usko or Gale sai laga liye ...
Dono ke ankho Mai aansu the ...wo mujhe kas Kar pakri thi or Mai v
Mai- yeah tum KY Kar rhi ho ..tumhare Bina Mera KY hga socha kavi
Wo- to Mai ky karti tum to mujhe chor Kar ja rahe ho to isse acha marna pasand karungi
Mai- aage sai aisa kavi socha na to dekh lena ..I love you Mai v Tere Bina NH ji sakta Mai pagl tha Jo tumko chorne ka socha
Wo yeah sun kar khush ho Gaye or I love you bole ja rahi thi ..
Dosto aj try kiya BHT bada update dene ka ..and Mai late post jarur karta hu par update aate rahenge ...Mai bg rehta hu dusro ki story v parta hu ..apni v likhta hu ..or Ghar ke kaam v karta hu ...dosto yeah story dhire jarur chalege par chalte rahege aplog chinta na Kare ...
And Ghar par rahe SB ..stay at home ..stay safe ...
UPDATE- 28
Abtak apne padha
Achanak mere sapne Mai naradmuni padhare ..
Mai - pranam muniwar
Narad muni- wats khush raho ...wats ab tumhe apne safar par Jana hga ..apno ka moh chorna hga tumhare liye bht log intejar Kar rhe h ..tum grihast jiwan ke liye apitu bht bade karyo ke liye aaye ho ..apne udesyo ko pehchano ....
Mai- muniwar Mai janta hu parantu Mera v to mere mata pita pariwarjano ke liye koi kartwaya hai uska my
Narad muni- ha putra Mai janta hu parantu tum unki chinta na karo ...or samaye samaye par tum aate rehna
Mai- Jo aagaya muniwar waise mujhe Jana kha hai sbsai pehle ..Mai apne safar ki suruwat kaha sai karu
Narad muni - iska jawab Mai tumhe parso dunga.... Tum tab Tak apne pariwar jano ke sath bitao or apne pita ko vta Dena .
Yeah bol narad muni anterdhyan ho Gaye or mujhe gehri soch Mai chor Gaye ...
Ab aage
Aagle din Mai uth Kar nitya karm Karne ke paschat snan karke apne dhyan mudra Mai baith gaya ... Aj Mera man thoda vichlit tha isliye dhyan lagane Mai dikkat ho rhi thi.
to Mai uth gya or papa ke pass Chala gaya jaha wo sofe par baithe news paper padh rhe the..
Wo mujhe apne pass Mai baith liye or puche .
Papa- KY baat hai sb thik to hai na
Mai- ha SB thik hai kue
Papa- SB thik hai to Tera muh utra hua kue hai
Mai- NH aisa to kuch NH hai Papa apko aise hi lag Raha hai
Fir Papa mujhe pakar Kar apne room Mai le Gaye jaha unhone Mera hath apne sar par rakh Diya to majburan mujhe unhe sari baat btani padi ...
Papa- khus hokr yeah to bht khusi ki baat hai beta ismai udas hone ki koi baat nh hai ..Mai to khush hu ki yeah sobhagya mere bete ko Mila ...apne Ghar Mai to SB khusi dete hai par duniya ko khusi dene Wala hi asli hero hota hai ...I proud of u beta ..
Mai- par Papa mere Jane ke baad sb kese rahenge and Mai kese rahunga
Papa- beta sb ko aadat ho jayege tu chinta na Kar ha muskil to hai par samaye sb Kar dega
Maine Papa ko Gale laga liya ..mujhe pata hai wo mujhe khush dikhane ki kosis Kar rhe hai par aisa NH hai wo v andar sai bht dukhi hai..
Fir Mai waha sai uth Kar Bahar Chala aaya jaha mujhe Chachi mil Gaye unsai v bht der Tak baate kiya kafi din ho gaya tha sbsai bate kiye hue
Isi tarah sbsai bate karta Raha aj sb BHT khush the ki Mai unsai itni bate kiya uske baad mummy sai bate kiya ....maa to maa hoti hai wo jhat smjh Gaye or Gale sai laga liya fir boli
Mummy- beta tu dhukhi kue ho Raha hai itna bta or jhut mat bolna ..Mai tujhe kisi kasam Mai NH bandhna chati isliye khut mat bolna
Mummy ki iss baat sai mujhe majbooran unhe Puri baat btani hi pari jiska jawab unhone BHT khush hokr dia
Mummy- beta manti hu mujhe dhukh jarur hoga tumsai bicharne ka par usse Jada khusi hoge ki mere bete nai mere jaise kitni hi maa ke Ghar ki rakhsha karega ...hamesha beta Satya ki rah par chalna or kitni hi musibat aaye apne apko hamesha sant rakhna ..kueki sant dinag sahi rah btata hai wohi kroth vinash ki or le jata hai ....
Isi tarah ki dhero bate karte hu last Mai Mai pahucha apni Radha ke pass
Radha apni room Mai baithi kuch soch rahi thi Mai uske room Mai gaya par wo apne dhyan Mai magn hi thi Maine use Puch
Mai- Radha KY Kar rhi ho
Par usnai koi reply NH dia..Mai usse hilaya tb uska dhyan tuta tab usnai pucha
Radha - are subham tm kb aaye bolo ky baat hai
Mai- itni gehri soch Mai kaha dubi hue thi
Radha - kahi NH tm btao aj mere liye kaha sai time mil gaya
Mai- aisa kue Bol rahi ho tmhare liye to time hi time hai
Wo- ha pata hai kitna
( Radha mere bht close thi sayad Mai use like v karne lag gaya tha par yeah galat tha ...jb sai Mai wapas aaya tha sbsai Jada dhyan wohi Mera rakhti thi)
Mai- KY hua KY soch rahi thi tm itna btao
Wo - kuch NH tm kaha ja rahe ho yeah btao
Mai(shock)- kahi NH aisa kue Bol rahi ho padhne jaunga naa
Wo - NH tm SB mujhsai jhut bolte ho Papa mummy tm sb
Mai( shock and sad) - aisa kue Bol rahi ho ..aisa kuch NH hai
Wo - Mera hath apne sar par rakh Kar to khao mere kasam aaj uski ankho Mai aansu the or ajib kasis ..mujhe kuch samjh hi NH aaraha tha ...
Maine utha or Jane laga to usnai bola tm chale jao par Mai jakr gate lock kiya or uske pass aakr baith gaya ..wo mujhe ektak dekh rahi thi...tab Maine faisla kiya or use suru sai lekar last Tak sb Bata Diya iss bich uske chehre ke haw bhaw badlte rahe par wo Shanti sai sb sunti rahi ....jab maine sb Bata Diya tab v wo shant rahi or mere or dekhti rahi ..mujhe kuch samjh hi NH aaraha tha ki KY Kar rhi hai KY nahi...
Thode der or shant rehne ke baad uske ankho Mai ek chamak sa aaya fir wo boli.
Radha- itna sb kuch tumne hum sabsai chupaya or aisa v hota hai par mujhe khusi hai ki tumne akhir Mai mujhe SB bta dia ha mujhe kuch kuch doubt tha par itna NH ...
Mai- to akhir tum sb samjh gaye ho to yeah v Jan lo kl sai Mai ja Raha hu apne safar par bich bich Mai aata rahunga par kb yeah NH pata or aage ky hai wo v NH pata
Radha- Mai v tumhare sath jaungi ....
Mai- NH yeah NH ho sakta hai ...waha safar Mai bht khatra hga kitna itna andaja to mujhe v NH hai ...Mai tumhare ko itne bade khatre Mai NH daal sakta hu ..
Radha - dekho subham Mai v tumko kuch btanA chati hu ..waise to ladkiya kavi aise bate NH btati hai par Mai tumhare sath koi risk NH Lena chati hu..
Har ladki ka sapno ka rajkumar hota hai waise Mai v chati hu ki mere sapno ka rajkumar hi mujhe mile par ajtk mujhe aisa koi NH Mila par jb tum aaye to tumme mujhe wo sari khubi dikhi ..Mai tumhare close hote Gaye or last Mai tumsai na chate hue v pyar Kar baithi ...jb pyar hua to room Mai baith Kar apne ko bht kosa v ki tm mere Bhai ho yesb galat hai ..par SB bekar Mai apne aap ko NH rok paye ....par aj jb mujhe SB tumne Bata dia to ab mujhe koi dar NH ab chayea Jo ho jaye Mai agar shadi karungi to sirf tumsai NH to nh karungi....
Mai- dekho Radha yesb galat hai ...Bhai behan ke bich yesb NH hta hai ..or mujhe to yebhi NH pata ki aage KY hga KY nahi ..kese mere jindagi rahege..sayad mere jindagi pariwar pyar shadi wagerah hai v NH ...yesb mere liye sambhav NH hai Radha ...or kl ko na jane mere jindagi Mai bht ladkiya v aasakti hai tb tum KY karoge ...
Radha- dekho Mai sbke liye tayar hu ..agar tum NH mile to Mai Marne ko v tayar hu...or rahi baat ladkiyo ki to mujhe isse koi problem NH hai mujhe mere hisse ka pyar chayea Baki mujhe NH Matlab ...ha mujhe bht Jalan v hgi or dikkat v par mujhe pata hai tum yesb janbujh Kar NH Kar rhe ho ...
Mai- NH aisa NH ho sakta hai tum samjhti kue NH ho
Wo- kue tumhare jindagi Mai koi or hai to Bata do..
Mai- NH koi NH hai par NH ho sakta or yeah bolkar Mai aagaya waha sai apne room Mai ..Mai v Radha ko pasand karta tha par iska matlb yeah to NH ki Mai apni khusi ke liye uski jindagi kharab Kar du..
Mere jindagi na Jane kb kaha rahunga ..kb KY hga ..kl hga v ya nh Mai v NH janta ...jindagi v ajib hai par khusi v hai ki Mai kisi ke kaam aaraha hu...
Tabhi Mai dhyan Mai baitha thori.der dhyan kiya to mere kano Mai aawaz aaye subham mere Bache yeah tum KY Kar rhe ho
Mai- KY hua Prabhu Maine KY kiya
Awaz- yeah Janam tumhara sbko khusi dene ke liye hi hua hai or tum dukhi Kar rhe ho
Mai- Prabhu Mai uski jindagi kharab NH karna chata hu
Awaz- iss sansar Mai sbki niyati atal hai ...tum bas karm karo fal ki chinta na karo putra..or Radha to tumhare sakti hai ..tumhare jindagi Mai bht aayenge ..tumhe bht logo ki awasakta hai isliye inhe jodte jao ..kueki muskilo Mai SB mil.kar hi Hal ho payega ..yeah tumhare kamjori NH sakti hai.
Mai- par Prabhu yeah bin saktio ke kese kuch karege ..
Awaz- ha tumhara sochna Satya hai putra ..iska Hal v tumhe kl narad Muni sai mil jayega ...or Avi to tumhe vhi apni saktio ko jagrit karna hai or Pana hai ...
Mai- jaisa Prabhu apki aagya
Or fir awaz aana band ho gaya or Mai dhyan sai uth gaya
..
Ab Mera man sant ho gaya tha or Mai waha sai Radha ke kamre ki taraf gaya to dekha wo ro rahi thi or uske hatho Mai koi sisi type ki thi or dusre hatho Mai mere taswir thi ...Jise dekh Kar wo Bol rahi thi
Radha( taswir sai) - Mai tumhare Bina nahi ji sakti or tum mujhe NH pyar karte to Mai jinda rehkar KY karungi isliye Mai aj maar jaungi ...
Or sisi kholne lagi ...yeah sun kar mujhe dukh hua ki agar Mai deri karta to aaj Radha ko kho baithta ..
Maine jaldi sai wo sisi uske hatho sai liya or usko feka or ek thappar mara usko or Gale sai laga liye ...
Dono ke ankho Mai aansu the ...wo mujhe kas Kar pakri thi or Mai v
Mai- yeah tum KY Kar rhi ho ..tumhare Bina Mera KY hga socha kavi
Wo- to Mai ky karti tum to mujhe chor Kar ja rahe ho to isse acha marna pasand karungi
Mai- aage sai aisa kavi socha na to dekh lena ..I love you Mai v Tere Bina NH ji sakta Mai pagl tha Jo tumko chorne ka socha
Wo yeah sun kar khush ho Gaye or I love you bole ja rahi thi ..
Dosto aj try kiya BHT bada update dene ka ..and Mai late post jarur karta hu par update aate rahenge ...Mai bg rehta hu dusro ki story v parta hu ..apni v likhta hu ..or Ghar ke kaam v karta hu ...dosto yeah story dhire jarur chalege par chalte rahege aplog chinta na Kare ...
And Ghar par rahe SB ..stay at home ..stay safe ...