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Ye story kaisi hai......?

  • Achhi hai

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Siraj Patel

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.



To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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Update -22
Me… han wo to katt gaya…
Ammi… achah bachay aap ko main ny kaam kaha tha kuch…
jao zareena aunty k ghar sy saman utha lao…
Me… g mummi bus ghanti baja kr jata hon…
Ammi… kia kaha…
Me… kk kuch nahi bus ja raha hon (aik to bhenchod jab milti
hay dmagh chod jati hay ye larki)… main dor kr nechay agaya
or ammi k kaam sy chala gaya…
Us din main bohat stressed tha.. yeh sab acha to lag raha
tha lakin jis tarah pehli stage pay maza ana khatam ho gaya
tha usi tarha ye sab kafi mehsos nahi ho raha tha ab lun wali
side sy pressure bht barh chukka tha jesay tesay hamail ko
chodna zarori hota ja raha tha lakin wo thi k thoray hi
mazay sy dil behla kr ghaib ho jati… bhenchod tension k
maray main ny pehly raat ko muth mari phr ciggerete petay
howay do char indian movies daikhin… raat kafi dair tak ye
sab chlata raha… or raat k akhri pehar so gaya main…
Subah ankh khuli to hamail meray hi sarhanay bethi thi..
bhayya g kesay ho aap (us ny muskra kr kal walay andaz main
hi baat ki)… main ny ankhain malty howay usay daikha to
pehla khyal jo dil main aya wo ye tha… lo g sadi sar mehant
gharat gai… ye main ny is liay socha kyon k wo is waqt aik red
dress main bethi thi jo na to see through tha bal k oper sy
us nay dopatta bhi nihayat saleeqay sy lia howa tha… senay
par bhi or sir par bhi… main ny samny ghari ki janib daikha..
yar abhi time bhi itna nahi howa k ammi wapis aa gai ho or na
hi is main ye himmat hay k ammi k hotay howay meray room
main aiay.. phr agr sirf hum dono hi ghar main hain to ye
achanak kesay sudhar gai….
Me… han m good.. bus wo hath main dard sa hay…
She… chota sa to zakham tha bhara nahi kia…
Me… nahi wo to bhar gaya lakin pata nahi kyon thora dard sa
baqi hay… tmharay pas koi takor wali jaga hay to takor kr do
(us k munh main subah subah ungli jati to “good mrning suck”
wali feeling aatin…
Wo meri baat ko bakhoobi samajh gai aik dam gehri si
muskan us k chehray par aai phr us ny mera dayan hath
pakra apna dopatta oper uthaya or mera hath sedha apni
left bagahl main lay gai or oper sy dopatta day dia…
O bhenchod ye pehli bar thi k wo begher bra k meray samny
aai thi.. ab oper to dopatta tha lakin jesay hi hath baghel
main gaya mujhay is baat ka ehsas howa k us ny bra nahi
pehna us k left mamay ka side touch itna zalim tha k manni
ny soay howay lun to theek tarha sy jagnay ka moqa bhi nahi
dia or semi erect lun main hi meri manni bilkul tip par
pohanch gai… ager is moqay par hamail aik halka sa hath bhi
lun pay marti to main ny choot jana tha… udhar us k boob sy
uthany wali warmth ny na sirf hath bal k meri pori rooh ki
takor kr dali thi… swad e agaya sajno tay belio… lakin ye iss
dressing ki koi logic samajh nahi aai shaid wo apni taraf sy
koi plan bana kr chal rahi hy or puthay sedhay chaskay lay
rahi hay…us ny hath wahin rakhay rakha or boli… ab kesa
feel kr rahay ho…
Me… han farq to par raha hay…
Us ny meray uthtay howay lun ki janib daikh kr kaha… hath
ko bhi koi farq par raha hay ya nahi…
Me… han han its getting bigger I mean better… wo khilkhila
kr hans di…
She.. acha bhayya aik kaam karo na… mujhay shehtoot
khanay hain kal ki barish k baad pak gaiay hain chalo tor kr
khatay hain (wo hmaray lawn main lagay darakht ki hi baat kr
rahi thi…acha to lawn main jana tha is liay thora insano wala
dress pehna)..
Me… tm ja k tor lo na (banday ka hath behan k mammay par
ho or wo uski baat mannay sy inkar kr dy ye niri zyadti hay…
khair meri har harkat to plan k mutabiq thi nahi)
She… acha chalo tm sath to aao ab ki bar main drakht par
charhon gi tm bus mujhay pechay sy push krna (g phr main
aap sy do char kassay lagwaon gi or apnay room main dor
jaon gi… putar a kahania hun puranian ho gian nay)
Ab kia kiya ja sakta tha milni to tabhi thi jab wo apni marzi
sy daiti so ya to ab tak ki sari effort zaya jati ya phr aik
chance lia ja skta tha shaid ab ki bar kismet khul jaiay… and
obviously main ny chance laina munasib samjha jesay hi main
ny ok kaha us ny mera hath bahir nikala or boli.. acha phr
munh hath dho kr lawn main aajao… or wo chali gai… hath ny
bahir atay hi mujhay kaha… putar meray oper meri marzi
chalti na to teray munh pay aik esi chaper parni thi k teray
chehray ka naqsha badal jata…. (Bhenchod behan k pechay
aik main hi nahi meray jism ka roan roan tharki howa betha
hay….)
Khair main munh hath dho kr shalwar or vest pehan kr bahir
chala aya… is bar shalwar meri bhi us k dresses ki tarha kafi
bareek thi or vest itni choti thi k shalwar sy oper hi thi…
shalwar main semi erect lun saaf dikh raha tha … shalwar
elastic wali thi (aksar raat ko pehan k sota hon) or main ny
uski sari chuntain akathi kr k pechay ko kr deen… so 8 inch k
lambay or motay lun pay bus bareek sa kapra… yeh besharmi
ki inteha thi lakin aaj dil aar ya par honay ko kr raha tha is
liay main ny bhi nangay pan main koi kasar na chori… lawn
main pohncha to hamail wahan lagay darakht sy shehtoot tor
kr kha rahi thi (jitni tehnio tak uska hath pohanch paa raha
tha)… meray wahan anay ka notice kia us ny… mur kr smile di
or phr dobara samnay daikha or phr aik bar phr mur kr
daikha… is bar uski nazer lun pay thi… main uski kal wali
harkat pay itna tapa howa tha k aaj issay kutt kut kr bhi
chodna parta to chod dalta so yeh besharmi to meray iradon
k samny kuch na thi….
Wo shehtoot tornay lagi… main us k pechay ja kr khara ho
gaya (and obviously sirf main hi nahi khara howa tha)… us ny
apni gandh ka dbao lun par thora sa barhaya or phr muskra
kr aik hath sy shetoot murk r meray munh main dala…
bhayya tasty hay na…
Me… hmm delicious (awaz sex sy bharpor thi or yaqeenan wo
hundered percent sure nahi thi k main shehtoot k tast par
comment kr raha hon ya us k baden ki garmi pay)
She… acha to plan yeh hay g k aap na g mujhay darakht par
charhain gay or main toron gi shehtoot…
Me… ok g so charho darakht pay main tmhain pechay sy push
krta hon or sahara bhi deta hon aaj apna ye adventure bhi
pora kr lo…. Or ye dopatta utar do to behter hay…
She… nahi dupatta theek hay… utaray begher bhi chalay ga
(yar ye aaj chahti kia hay… ajeeb khwari hay bhai)
Us ny darakht par charny ki koshish ki or sath sath halkay
halkay hansny lagi jesay bachay adventure ka maza laitay
hain… main ny bhi pehcay sy bund ko press kia… wo is waqt
dono paon darakht k tanay par rakh chuki thi or soorat e hal
ye thi k wo thori bend ho gai thi or uski bund hawa main
meray samnay thi… main ny usay kaha… or oper karon… who
boli… han g bhaya push me more… chon k meray hath uski
bund pay aai hoi kameez sy slip ho rahay thay so main ny apni
asani k liay kameez ko bund sy hata dia… ta k sirf tight
shalwar ho or meri grip us k motay chotron par asani sy ho
sakay… jesay hi main ny kameez oper ki meray osaan khata
ho gai… bhenchod esi garmi charhi k kano sy dhoain nikalny
lagay…
To yeh tha surprise apnay bhai jan k liay… kameez uthatay
hi pata chala k uski shalwar ko aik acha khasa bara cut laga
hay wo bhi ain phuddi or gandh k sorakh par… cut itna bara
tha k bakhoobi iidea ho raha tha k shalwar phati nahi phari
gai hay or cut bhi itna bara lgaya gaya k ager shalwar thori
agay pechay bhi ho to target place nangi hi rahay… main ny
dono hathon ki unglian us k chotron par or dono anghotay us
ki phuddi par rakh diay… jesay hi phuddi par meray hath ka
touch laga us ny muskra kr daikha or boli… common bhayya
jan khatam ho gai kia thora zaor lgao na… (han behna jan to
khatam honi hay na .. dil ny jo saray jism ka khoon akatha kr
k lun ko supply kr dia hay)
Me… uff bohat wazen hay tmhara.. m trying ma best…(or
infact uski geeli phuddi ka massage kr raha tha)… maza to
ussay bhi out of world aa raha tha so boli… ok bhayya keep
trying har nahi manni (siskarian rokny ki koshish main uski
awaz ki tone bhi badel si gai thi)…
Main ny thora uski bund ko dheela chora wo nechay ko hoi or
phr main ny yeh kehty howay k “zor laga k hayya” apna munh
us k chotron main day dia… main is waqt yon act kr raha tha
k goya uska wazen na sehnay ki waja sy meray hath bend ho
gaiay hain or uski gandh naturally meray munh tak aa phonchi
hay… gandh k dar pay pohnchty hi main ny zuban bahir nikal
kr uski phuddi ko chata.. bal k zuban ki tip uski geeli phuddi
main daali… us k baden ny jhatka khaya or munh sy wazeh
tor par moan nikli… ummhh… usay bhi ye sab itna pasand aya
k mazeed zor meray munh pay dalnay lagi… main ny bhi choot
ki chusai tazi krdi sari dunya sy bekhaber ho kr… ager ammi
ghar pay hoti or iss manzer ko daikh laiti to khsuh ho jati k
kesay uski phuddi sy nikli uski khandani or shareef beti
apnay gherat mand bhai sy choot ka dana chuswa rahi hay…
Choot to geeli thi hi or usay chatnay ka maza bhi delicious
tha… lakin main to pehly din sy is gandh ka ashiq tha iss liay
choot chaton or zra hi dori par gandh k sorakh ko ignore kr
don esa mumkin nahi tha… so us ki choot k pani or apni thook
sy bhara howa munh us ki gandh k sorakh par jott dia…
gandh k sorakh ko zara chata to apni gandh main ungli hoi
pata nahi kia soch kr main ny uski gandh main ungli krny ka
socha or usi purani position main hath rakh kr is bar
anghotha us ki gandh k moray par rakh dia… thora bht gela
to main kr chukka tha sorakh ko ab us main angotha
dhakelnay laga… khoob maza aa raha tha… lakin main mazay
main bhool gaya k ye maza sirf meray liay tha… hamail ko
gandh k tight sorakh main angotha janay sy maza nahi aya
bal k dard howa… us ny dard sy halki si cheekh bhi mari or
dard bhari awz main sirf itna boli… bhayya!!!... main is baat
sy bekhaber k us par kia guzar rahi hogi apni masti main
ungal charta raha or oper ko zor lgatay howay kaha… chalo
shabash oper chalo don’t worry main nechay khara hon..
She… nahi bhayya plz nechay utaro mujh sy nahi charha ja
raha main gir jaon gi (wo mushkil sy words ada kr rahi thi)
Me… come on main hon na kuch nahi hota…
She… usman suna nahi main ny kia kaha (us ny pehli bar mera
naam lia wo bhi intehai ghussay sy)
Main mazay main esa gharq tha k us k ghussay ko bnawti
samajh raha tha… wesay bhi aaj aar par karny ki kasam chuki
thi so kuch sujhai nahi day raha tha…
Wo baqaida chillai… utaro mujhay.. utaro mujhay.. or sath hi
aik tang utha kr pechay meray senay par bhi mari…
Ab jesay aik jhatkay sy main wapis reality main aya… wo
waqai khoob naraz thi… main ny usay ehtyat sy nechay
utara… nechay utri to uski ankhon main anso bhi thay or
chehray par ghussa bhi (ohh shitt… thts not normal man…
kuch to gar bar hogai mujh sy… mujhay us watq idea nahi tha
k kia chawal mar betha hon)
TO be continued........
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