Incest Sulaghde Akhar - Mini Kahaniya (ਸੁਲਘਦੇ ਅੱਖਰ- ਮਿੰਨੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਸੰਗ੍ਰਹਿ)
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DRAGON WOLF
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It's good you have taken feedback positively. Well the points that you have justified are debatable too.
But mai debate nahi krni chahuna. Actually if a writer is writing mindless sex story then there is no need of logic. Because that is just written for entertainment purpose.
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It's short stories so j short stort ch har ik point nu logic and justify kara ge ode naal long ho jani kafi. So you are doing great. Waiting for next story
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Story chahe short hove ya long. Thora logic hona chahida tanhi interesting bandi hai. I mean liberty hundi hai par thora realistic v hove.
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"Dhadammmmmmmmmm....." ohde toofani gahsseya karke mera santulan vigad geya te meri shalwar aje vi mere pairan vich payi honn karke raddi kagaza te dabbeya te dher te jaa diggi. Ohda lun "ptukk" di awaaz naal meri fuddi cho bahar aa gya. Injh laggya jive koi supna tutteya hove.
"Bhaine..... tenu laggi tan nahi...." achanak ohde moonhon nikaleya.
"Kiiiiiiiii......" mere kanna vich jive kise te tatta sheesha rodh dita hove. Paira thalleyo jameen khisk gayi si mere. Mainu mere kanna te yakeen nahi si aa reha ke eh mere bhra guri di awaaz si. Ikke dum sara kuch akhan moohre ghum geya ke kive mera ashiq mere bare ena jaanda si te kive menu chithia mildia rahia. Meria akhan vichon hanju vag ture.
Main apne pairan vicho apni shalwaar chukki te tudhi wali dhaare vicho duskdi hoyi bahar nu nangi hi bhajj nikli.
"Jeetu... jeetu... meri gal tan sunn " mera bhra eh kehnda hoyea mere pichhe turr peya.
Apne kamre vich aake main apne app val dheyan maareya. Mere jisam te mera suit si jo mummeya tak chukkeya hoyea si, jinna utte mere veer de chumbana de nishan san. Thalle meri fuddi ton khoon nikal nikal ke patta tak veh chukka si jo halka halka jamm geya si. Eh sab dekh mera dil hor udass ho geya, main manje te digg munh te sirhana rakh ronn lag gayi.
Enne nu guri vi kamre vich aa geya. Koi chauvia ke vareya da bhar jwaan, kad 6 foot to utte hi hona. Ohde kurte vicho ohda shareer dul dul painda si chaudi chaati si osdi. Pajama khabre ohda turhi vale dhaare vich hi reh gya si. Kurte ne ohda lun tan dhak leya si par tambu ajje vi dikhda si.
"Jeetu.. " guri ne bhare gal na awaz maari. Main aggeo koi jwaab na dita.
"Jeetu mere nal gal tan kar" guri tarle lain lag gya.
Os vele kamre di haalat eh si. Ke main bed ne adh nangi payi si te meri bund mere bhra val nu si fuddi jis vicho lahu sim reha si oh ain bhra diya akhan de sahmne si.
Guri gode tek ke thalle baith egya, ohdia akham vich hanju si.
"Bhaine mainu maaf karde main tere naal dhokha kita. Par main tainu sachhi dilo jaan toh pyar karda haan. Mera tareeka galat si bhaave par mera pyaar rabb vangu sacha hai. Eh sab tenu paaun vaste kita main bhaine!"
Main sirhaana munh toh pare kar bhra val dekheya ohdia akhan vicho athru dig rahe si te munh thalle kari bol reha si "bhaine es veer nu maaf kardey te apna pyaar meri jholi vich paade." Ehna keh ke ohne apne kurte da palla chukk ke jholi bna layi. Palla chukkan nal ohde lun da pehla jhalkaara dekheya main. Meri gitth naalo lamma houga te mota enna ke mere mutthi vich na aave. Mera dheyan fer mere veer de hanjua val chala geya.
"Bhaine main tenu saccha pyar kita hai... jo ajj toh baad kise naal nahi ho sakna.. je tu menu maaf na kita tan main aapne aap nu kade maaf nahi kar sakda" guri vilakhde hoye boleya.
"Veere pyar main vi tuhanu bahut kardi haan par kon bhai apni bhain naal es trah karda hai?" Main thoda gusse vich boli.
"Bhaine tu mera bachpan da pyar aen, tere paun di laalsa vich main eh kadam chukkeya. Par ehnu sirf meri jisam di bhukh na samjhi, tenu rooh da haani mann chukka han main. tere pyaar karke main samaj naal vi ladh javanga" Guri thramme nal hanju poonjhda hoyea boleya.
Ek minute layi main sunn ho gayi ohda pyar dekhke. Main aksar sahelia toh sunndi si ohda yar shad geya kise nu dhokha de geya, kise di jisam nal chand din khedke chla geya. Par mera veer ehna sarey toh vakh lagga menu. Kise raanjhe majnu varga sachha ashiq.
"Enna pyar kardey ho mainu" meri awaaz naram pai chukki si.
"Aapni jaan naalo vi jyada" enne ke guri ne menu baahon fadh ke bed to khade kita te mere bullan nal bull jodh laye. Main anmanne mann nal ohdi kiss da jwaab den lagi.
Ohda mota lunn mere makhmali pattan te ragad kha reha si.
Guri ne ek hath thalle lija ke apne lun nu meri fuddi te set karna chaheya.
"Eh sab galat hai..." main guri nu dhakka de ke pare ho gayi.
"Main teri marzi toh bina tenu hath vi nahi lavanga Baljeet. Par sochke dekh kuch min pehla tu tudhi vale dhaare vich kise anjaan bande nal jis bare pta vi nahi ke oh kaun hai, kive disda hai, koi dhokhebaaz tan nahi eh sab jane bina apna jisam usnu saump rahi si. Te hun farak enna hai ke tere sahmne tera bhra hai jo tenu be intha mohabbat karda hai" Guri ne daleel diti.
Ohdi daleel sun main pighal gayi te menu apni galti tan ehsaas vi hoyea. Main bhajj guri de galle lagg gayi te ohnu maaf kar den layi keha.
Asi kamleya vaang ek dooje nu chumman lagge te sade hatth ek dooje de pindeya te firan lagge. Mainu mera pyaar mil geya si jisnu hun main khona nahi si chahundi.
Guri ne kahli nal apna kurta laah maareya hun oh mere sahmne poora nanga si osnu eda main kade nahi si dekheya. Chaudi chaati te ghunghare vaal, spaat dhidd, dauleya te macchli banndi si. Gundve patt te pattan vichaale lamakda ohda lun.
Ohne mera suit vi kannia to fadhke upar nu khicheya jo pehla hi mummeya toh upar si. Hun asi dono jane alaf nange ek dooje di agosh vich si.
"Kariye shuru jitho chhadeya si " guri ne mere kann vich hauli dene keha. Main muskra ke ohde chaati te mukki maari.
Guri ne lun nu fuddi de bullan te tika ke andar dhakkna chaheya par thoda sama beetan karke ohda lun te meri fudi dono sukke hoye si. Ohne hatth te thoda thukk suttke apne lun te maleya par fer vi lun thoda jeha hi ander geya menu bahut dard hon lag gyi. Ek tan fuddi tang si dooja thodi sukk chukki si.
Jina nu nahi pta ohna nu dss deni han ke jdo asi sex to pehla foreplay karde haan te sade organs de vich fluids release hunde han jo organs nu lubricate karde han. Eh fluid sma pake absorb ho jande han.
Guri vi shayad eh gal samjh chukka si par ohdi sex baare jaankari enni jayada nahi si. Par enni gal oh samjh geya ke pehli vaar thoda saukha chla gya si chipchipahat karke. Ohne pehla vaang hi sab kuch karan da faisla kita.
Ohne mere bullan nu chusna shuru kar dita naal nal hi oh mere mummeya nu palosda kade nappda kade ohna di dodi bhorda. Main fer madhossh honn lagi si.
Fer oh mere mummeya nu choosan lag geya main pagala vang sir edher udhar kar rahi si. Ohne fadhke menu bed te sutt leya te aapni juban nal mere har ek angh da ras peen lagga kade mummeya nu chummda kade baahwan nu kade patta nu.
Fer ohdi jeeb meri fuddi utte chalan lagi menu mehsoos ho reha si jive meri fuddi vicho kuch ris reha hove. Kuch der baad ohne ek ungal mere fuddi vich paake bahar kadhi te kehn laggeya "hun theek aa, hun bannu gal"
Ehna keh ke ohne apna lun meri fuddi te set kar ditta te ohnu hauli hauli andar dhakkan lagga. Fuddi bhaave tight si par pehla naalo hun bahut saukha jaa reha si andar. Menu dard ho reha si par pehla jinna nahi. Jdo kde vi main dard nal karahundi te oh mere mumme nu choosda ke main sab dardan nu bhull jandi. Ohda poora lun andar jaan lagg gya si.
Hun main vi mazza aun lagg geya si, mere munho maze nal si si awaz nikaldi te veera jive khushi ch jhum jhum ke chodan lag janda.
Par koi kami lagdi si khabre sade rishte di sharm si jis karke asi dove aapas vich bol nahi si. Ehi kami menu khal rahi si mera veer menu pyar karde mere nal gallan kare. Menu laggeya ke menu hi koi heela karna paina.
"Haaye veere...." main apni chuppi todh di je keha.
Veere ghasse maarda maarda ek dum rukk geya. "Ki hoyea bhaine" veere ne pucheya.
"Kuch nahi... dard hundi si othe" main ageya jwab dita.
"Kithe????" Guri ne ageo fer swal kita.
Main sang di maari aggo kuch na boli. Par shayd guri vu sang lahun da faisla kar chukeya si.
Mere daane nu dona unglan vich masalde puchan lageya "ethe hundi aa dard?"
Main te siiiiii karke reh gayi te aggo muskra dita te oh fer apni speede chalu ho geya.
Hun main vi ohda saath den lag gyi si kuch hi minta baad mera shareer akadna chalu ho gya. Mera shareer jive kattha ho jana chahunda hove buri tarah kambnia aa rahi si menu. Eh mera jindgi da pehla orgasm si injh lageya jive mere sare shareer di jaan ik jagah katthi ho gyi hove. Kuch pala bad injh japeya jida saala di aaudh maari dharti utte barsaat hoyi hove, oh vi chutt gya si. Dono ek dooje di aagosh vich paye rahe jado tak asi mamool nahi hoye.
Osdin toh baad menu koi Benaam Khat nahi mileya.
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"Bhaine..... tenu laggi tan nahi...." achanak ohde moonhon nikaleya.
"Kiiiiiiiii......" mere kanna vich jive kise te tatta sheesha rodh dita hove. Paira thalleyo jameen khisk gayi si mere. Mainu mere kanna te yakeen nahi si aa reha ke eh mere bhra guri di awaaz si. Ikke dum sara kuch akhan moohre ghum geya ke kive mera ashiq mere bare ena jaanda si te kive menu chithia mildia rahia. Meria akhan vichon hanju vag ture.
Main apne pairan vicho apni shalwaar chukki te tudhi wali dhaare vicho duskdi hoyi bahar nu nangi hi bhajj nikli.
"Jeetu... jeetu... meri gal tan sunn " mera bhra eh kehnda hoyea mere pichhe turr peya.
Apne kamre vich aake main apne app val dheyan maareya. Mere jisam te mera suit si jo mummeya tak chukkeya hoyea si, jinna utte mere veer de chumbana de nishan san. Thalle meri fuddi ton khoon nikal nikal ke patta tak veh chukka si jo halka halka jamm geya si. Eh sab dekh mera dil hor udass ho geya, main manje te digg munh te sirhana rakh ronn lag gayi.
Enne nu guri vi kamre vich aa geya. Koi chauvia ke vareya da bhar jwaan, kad 6 foot to utte hi hona. Ohde kurte vicho ohda shareer dul dul painda si chaudi chaati si osdi. Pajama khabre ohda turhi vale dhaare vich hi reh gya si. Kurte ne ohda lun tan dhak leya si par tambu ajje vi dikhda si.
"Jeetu.. " guri ne bhare gal na awaz maari. Main aggeo koi jwaab na dita.
"Jeetu mere nal gal tan kar" guri tarle lain lag gya.
Os vele kamre di haalat eh si. Ke main bed ne adh nangi payi si te meri bund mere bhra val nu si fuddi jis vicho lahu sim reha si oh ain bhra diya akhan de sahmne si.
Guri gode tek ke thalle baith egya, ohdia akham vich hanju si.
"Bhaine mainu maaf karde main tere naal dhokha kita. Par main tainu sachhi dilo jaan toh pyar karda haan. Mera tareeka galat si bhaave par mera pyaar rabb vangu sacha hai. Eh sab tenu paaun vaste kita main bhaine!"
Main sirhaana munh toh pare kar bhra val dekheya ohdia akhan vicho athru dig rahe si te munh thalle kari bol reha si "bhaine es veer nu maaf kardey te apna pyaar meri jholi vich paade." Ehna keh ke ohne apne kurte da palla chukk ke jholi bna layi. Palla chukkan nal ohde lun da pehla jhalkaara dekheya main. Meri gitth naalo lamma houga te mota enna ke mere mutthi vich na aave. Mera dheyan fer mere veer de hanjua val chala geya.
"Bhaine main tenu saccha pyar kita hai... jo ajj toh baad kise naal nahi ho sakna.. je tu menu maaf na kita tan main aapne aap nu kade maaf nahi kar sakda" guri vilakhde hoye boleya.
"Veere pyar main vi tuhanu bahut kardi haan par kon bhai apni bhain naal es trah karda hai?" Main thoda gusse vich boli.
"Bhaine tu mera bachpan da pyar aen, tere paun di laalsa vich main eh kadam chukkeya. Par ehnu sirf meri jisam di bhukh na samjhi, tenu rooh da haani mann chukka han main. tere pyaar karke main samaj naal vi ladh javanga" Guri thramme nal hanju poonjhda hoyea boleya.
Ek minute layi main sunn ho gayi ohda pyar dekhke. Main aksar sahelia toh sunndi si ohda yar shad geya kise nu dhokha de geya, kise di jisam nal chand din khedke chla geya. Par mera veer ehna sarey toh vakh lagga menu. Kise raanjhe majnu varga sachha ashiq.
"Enna pyar kardey ho mainu" meri awaaz naram pai chukki si.
"Aapni jaan naalo vi jyada" enne ke guri ne menu baahon fadh ke bed to khade kita te mere bullan nal bull jodh laye. Main anmanne mann nal ohdi kiss da jwaab den lagi.
Ohda mota lunn mere makhmali pattan te ragad kha reha si.
Guri ne ek hath thalle lija ke apne lun nu meri fuddi te set karna chaheya.
"Eh sab galat hai..." main guri nu dhakka de ke pare ho gayi.
"Main teri marzi toh bina tenu hath vi nahi lavanga Baljeet. Par sochke dekh kuch min pehla tu tudhi vale dhaare vich kise anjaan bande nal jis bare pta vi nahi ke oh kaun hai, kive disda hai, koi dhokhebaaz tan nahi eh sab jane bina apna jisam usnu saump rahi si. Te hun farak enna hai ke tere sahmne tera bhra hai jo tenu be intha mohabbat karda hai" Guri ne daleel diti.
Ohdi daleel sun main pighal gayi te menu apni galti tan ehsaas vi hoyea. Main bhajj guri de galle lagg gayi te ohnu maaf kar den layi keha.
Asi kamleya vaang ek dooje nu chumman lagge te sade hatth ek dooje de pindeya te firan lagge. Mainu mera pyaar mil geya si jisnu hun main khona nahi si chahundi.
Guri ne kahli nal apna kurta laah maareya hun oh mere sahmne poora nanga si osnu eda main kade nahi si dekheya. Chaudi chaati te ghunghare vaal, spaat dhidd, dauleya te macchli banndi si. Gundve patt te pattan vichaale lamakda ohda lun.
Ohne mera suit vi kannia to fadhke upar nu khicheya jo pehla hi mummeya toh upar si. Hun asi dono jane alaf nange ek dooje di agosh vich si.
"Kariye shuru jitho chhadeya si " guri ne mere kann vich hauli dene keha. Main muskra ke ohde chaati te mukki maari.
Guri ne lun nu fuddi de bullan te tika ke andar dhakkna chaheya par thoda sama beetan karke ohda lun te meri fudi dono sukke hoye si. Ohne hatth te thoda thukk suttke apne lun te maleya par fer vi lun thoda jeha hi ander geya menu bahut dard hon lag gyi. Ek tan fuddi tang si dooja thodi sukk chukki si.
Jina nu nahi pta ohna nu dss deni han ke jdo asi sex to pehla foreplay karde haan te sade organs de vich fluids release hunde han jo organs nu lubricate karde han. Eh fluid sma pake absorb ho jande han.
Guri vi shayad eh gal samjh chukka si par ohdi sex baare jaankari enni jayada nahi si. Par enni gal oh samjh geya ke pehli vaar thoda saukha chla gya si chipchipahat karke. Ohne pehla vaang hi sab kuch karan da faisla kita.
Ohne mere bullan nu chusna shuru kar dita naal nal hi oh mere mummeya nu palosda kade nappda kade ohna di dodi bhorda. Main fer madhossh honn lagi si.
Fer oh mere mummeya nu choosan lag geya main pagala vang sir edher udhar kar rahi si. Ohne fadhke menu bed te sutt leya te aapni juban nal mere har ek angh da ras peen lagga kade mummeya nu chummda kade baahwan nu kade patta nu.
Fer ohdi jeeb meri fuddi utte chalan lagi menu mehsoos ho reha si jive meri fuddi vicho kuch ris reha hove. Kuch der baad ohne ek ungal mere fuddi vich paake bahar kadhi te kehn laggeya "hun theek aa, hun bannu gal"
Ehna keh ke ohne apna lun meri fuddi te set kar ditta te ohnu hauli hauli andar dhakkan lagga. Fuddi bhaave tight si par pehla naalo hun bahut saukha jaa reha si andar. Menu dard ho reha si par pehla jinna nahi. Jdo kde vi main dard nal karahundi te oh mere mumme nu choosda ke main sab dardan nu bhull jandi. Ohda poora lun andar jaan lagg gya si.
Hun main vi mazza aun lagg geya si, mere munho maze nal si si awaz nikaldi te veera jive khushi ch jhum jhum ke chodan lag janda.
Par koi kami lagdi si khabre sade rishte di sharm si jis karke asi dove aapas vich bol nahi si. Ehi kami menu khal rahi si mera veer menu pyar karde mere nal gallan kare. Menu laggeya ke menu hi koi heela karna paina.
"Haaye veere...." main apni chuppi todh di je keha.
Veere ghasse maarda maarda ek dum rukk geya. "Ki hoyea bhaine" veere ne pucheya.
"Kuch nahi... dard hundi si othe" main ageya jwab dita.
"Kithe????" Guri ne ageo fer swal kita.
Main sang di maari aggo kuch na boli. Par shayd guri vu sang lahun da faisla kar chukeya si.
Mere daane nu dona unglan vich masalde puchan lageya "ethe hundi aa dard?"
Main te siiiiii karke reh gayi te aggo muskra dita te oh fer apni speede chalu ho geya.
Hun main vi ohda saath den lag gyi si kuch hi minta baad mera shareer akadna chalu ho gya. Mera shareer jive kattha ho jana chahunda hove buri tarah kambnia aa rahi si menu. Eh mera jindgi da pehla orgasm si injh lageya jive mere sare shareer di jaan ik jagah katthi ho gyi hove. Kuch pala bad injh japeya jida saala di aaudh maari dharti utte barsaat hoyi hove, oh vi chutt gya si. Dono ek dooje di aagosh vich paye rahe jado tak asi mamool nahi hoye.
Osdin toh baad menu koi Benaam Khat nahi mileya.
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