Fantasy SUPERNATURAL

[Hail_lover]

Story to tai ki chutiyapanti macha rkhi writter bhaiya.. meko ye batao aap likhne kya chahte ho update me bss sex hi hota he ye uska kiss kara usko kiss kara.. iske sath soke uthra uske sath soke uthra.. din bhar rath bhar yhi bss.. kya har kisi randi se pyar ho jata he kya hmare main hero ko.. khud khte he ki laksh ki 5 biwi hogi aur ab 9bnwa di.. kbhi story nidhi pe le ati ho kbhi rdha pe kbhi kisi pe.. pr story ka koi main plot nhi.. story yhi end ho jayegi . Kyuki sex ke siwa isme kuch nhi wtitter ka adha ka kaam bss yhi he 4 line ke baad sex .. bhaiya kuch likho vto . Aur kya har jagah sex bharrhe ho thoda suspense lao story me.. kbhi danav atte he unhe gyab kar diya .. pura hi. Matlab apko oata he ap kya likh rhe ho ya bss pote ja rhe ho .

Story to tai ki chutiyapanti macha rkhi writter bhaiya.. meko ye batao aap likhne kya chahte ho update me bss sex hi hota he ye uska kiss kara usko kiss kara.. iske sath soke uthra uske sath soke uthra.. din bhar rath bhar yhi bss.. kya har kisi randi se pyar ho jata he kya hmare main hero ko.. khud khte he ki laksh ki 5 biwi hogi aur ab 9bnwa di.. kbhi story nidhi pe le ati ho kbhi rdha pe kbhi kisi pe.. pr story ka koi main plot nhi.. story yhi end ho jayegi . Kyuki sex ke siwa isme kuch nhi wtitter ka adha ka kaam bss yhi he 4 line ke baad sex .. bhaiya kuch likho vto . Aur kya har jagah sex bharrhe ho thoda suspense lao story me.. kbhi danav atte he unhe gyab kar diya .. pura hi. Matlab apko oata he ap kya likh rhe ho ya bss pote ja rhe ho .

Suno bhai agr story psnd na aaye to mt pdho yaar... Or ye falt toxicity failane s kya hoga.. jaise story khtm honi hai waise hi hoga... Jaisa end hai waisa hi hoga....
Kisi k khne ya bbolne p change to nhi krunga na..

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice update

 

[Raj142]

Nice update

 

[Dark Devil]

UPDATE:-78


.....Previously.....

Gurudev.. nhi ab iska or unlogon ka koi nata nhi.. wo sb bhul gye or inki jindgi ab is lok tk hi simit hai..

Or fir gurudev us bacche ko apne goad m le lete hain .. idhr teeno m s koi v jane ko tyaar nhi tha..

Riza.. mai v bacchi bnkr inke sath bdi hona chahti hun..

Gurudev.. thik hai.. jaisa aapko accha lge .. pr agle sptaah aayiega qki tb tk ye baccha 10 saal ka ho Jayega.. or tb s ise sare vidya di jayegi ..

Svi haan m grdn hilate hain.. or wahan s chle jate hai idhr gurudev laksh k kaan m kuch mantr pdh rha tha.. or laksh dheere2 bda hone lgta hai..

.....AB AAGE.....

Ek sptaah baad riza or pakhi dono laksh ki hi umr ki hokr gurudev k gurukl m aati hai.. or wo laksh s milti hai..
Riza.. mai riza.. or ye pakhi..

Laksh.. mai laksh.. aap dono aaj hi aayi ho kya.?

Riza.. haan..

Laksh.. chlo mai aapdono ko meri psndida jgh le chlta hun.. or apne doston s milata hun..

Or laksh 2ono ko ek jungle le jata hai.. charo trf rang birange phool the.. fir laksh sbko bulata hai.. ek choti gilhari laksh k kandhe p aati hai.. fir panchiyan or pasu sb aate hain..

Laksh.. ye dekho mere dost ... Ol ye meli kitti.. muaah..

Pakhi kitti ko hath lgati hai.. to kitti laksh k piche chip jati hai..
Laksh.. kitti ye aaj s meri dost hai.. to daro mt isse..

Kitti pakhi k hath p uchl kr chli jati hai.. pakhi usko sahlati hai..
Laksh..riza phool mt todo guruji gussa honge..

Riza .. pr mujhe ye chahiye..

Laksh.. guru ji hme daantenge...

Riza.. nhi mujhe chahiye to chahiye..

Or riza phool tod deti hai.. guru ji dhyaan m the phool tutne p unka dhyaan tut jata hai or wo gusse m wahan aate hai..

Gurudev.. laksh maine tujhe kitni baar mna kiya ki ye phool mt todo bs kuch hi bache hain..

Laksh.. maafi guruji..

Gurudev... Maafi.. itna bda ho gya or kuch akl nhi aaya.. aaj tujhe iska dand milega.. jao or jitne v sukhe ptte jameen p gire hain use chun kr ikkatha kro.. haan tum sb m s koi v apne dost ki madad nhi krega..

Laksh.. ji guru ji..

Or gurudev wahan s gayab ho jate hain laksh sare sukhe phool ptte ko uthane lgta hai idhr kitti riza or pakhi p gussa thi..
Kitti.. aap bahot gandi ho.. mere dost ko aapki sja mili.. phool apne toda oor sja unhe mili..

Riza.. maaf kr do kitti glti ho gyi.. dubara aisa nhi hoga..

Kitti kuch nhi bolti or laksh k kandhe p baith jati hai.. idhr piche s pakhi or riza aati hai..
Riza..maaf kr do laksh..

Laksh.. aap to meri dost ho.. dost k liye itna to kr hi skta hun..

Riza laksh k gle lg jati hai to kitti riza k hath m daat gda deti hai riza jht s alg ho jati hai..
Laksh.. kitti ye glt baat hai.. aise kisi k sath nhi krte.. ye tumhari v dost hai..

Kitti.. nhi meli nhi hai.. na ye na wo..

Laksh.. kitti mafi mango..

Kitti.. nhi mai nhi mangungi.. na hi inhe dost bolungi..

Laksh... Kitti ye pari lok s hai tujhe v pari ki trh bna degi..

Kitti.. sach m..

Laksh.. haan.. sach m..

Kitti.. fir sorry.. aap gle lgo kiss kro mai nhi rokingi..

Laksh.. ye kiss kya hota hai.. kitti..

Kitti.. hey bhgwaan itne bde ho gye or kiss nhi pta.. pakhi aapko pta hai kya..

Pakhi(jaanbujh kr).. nhi.. wo kya hota hai..

Kitti.. jb ek ldka ek ldki ko chummi krte hai wo v hoth p..

Laksh.. tujhe kaise pta..?

Kitti.. dhrti p sb aise hi krte hain.. jahan mai phle rhti thi..

Laksh.. dhrti kon lok m hai... Mujhe v wahan jana hai ...

Kitti.. aap wahan nhi ja skte..

Laksh.. q..

Kitti.. wo to guru ji jante honge pr agr aap sb patte nhi uthaye to guru ji dhrti lok kya narak lok k v laya nhi chodhenge..

Or laksh ghbra kr teji s patte utha kr ek jgh ikkatha krta hai..
Tvi ek panchi aata hai ..
Panchi.. guruji ne aapsb ko gurukul m bulaya hai..

Laksh.. q..

Panchi... Wo to wo hi jane..

Or fir svi wahan pahunchte hain.. or guruji k pair chukr baith jate hain..

Gurudev.. aaj mai tujhe dhanush vidya sikhaunga... To sb apne2 dhanush utha kr jldi aajao..

Or fir svi apne2 dhnush uthata hai or maidaan m pahunch jata hai..
Gurudev..ye tumsb ki 5vi vidya hai.. jahan riza or pakhi insb m maharat hasil hai.. qki indon ko grv s hi sb mila hai ..

Laksh..mujhe q nhi mila guru ji..

Gurudev.. qki tujhe apne dum p sb hasil krna hai .. chl ab prtyancha chadha or nisana lgao..

Laksh prtyancha chdhata hai or nisana lgata hai.. nisana miss ho jata hai..

Gurudev.. njr lakshya p.. jise bhedna hai wahan idhr udhr kahin nhi.. pakhi ,riza tumdono lgao..

Dono nisana lgati hai or dono ki teer sidha lakshya p jakr lgta hai... Laksh or svi taliyan bjate hain..

Guruji.. ab teri bari..

Laksh dobara miss kr deta hai.. guruji fir bolte hain laksh fir miss kr deta hai to..
Guruji pakhi ko samne khda kr uske sr p apple rkh dete hain..

Guruji.. agr miss kiya to ye gyi.. ab tujhe dekhna hai..

Pakhi laksh k aankh m dekhti hai.. laksh apple p nisana lgata hai uske hath kaanpne lgte hain.. to wo dhanush niche kr leta hai..
Gurudev..ek saccha yoddha kvi v dhanush niche nhi krta.. nisana lgao.

Laksh samne dekhta hai.. pakhi isare s nisana lgane ko khti hai.. laksh nisana lgata hai.. or apple k beechobeech teer ghus jati hai..

Gurudev..sabaas.. ye hui na mardo wali baat..

Tvi gurumata andr s bahr aati hai.. laksh daud kr uske gle lg jata hai..

Gurumata.. hm aurtein kisi s km hai kya..

Or wo v dhanush utha kr nisana lgati hai..
Nisana thik lakshya p lgti hai.. laksh or svi tali bjata hai..

Gurudev.. maafi .. priye.. laksh riza or pakhi ko uske kmre dikha do...

Or fir laksh dono ko apne kmre m le jata hai..
Laksh.. ye hmara kmra or aap dono wahan rhenge...

Pakhi.. mai tumhare sath so jaun aaj..

Laksh.. nhi gurumata ne mujhe kaha hai ki jb tk 18saal ka na ho jaun koi v ldki ya aurat k sath sona nhi hai.. or avi to meri umr 17 hi hai..

Pakhi.. hmdono ki v 17hai.. or kya btati hai gurumata..

Laksh.. sb kuch btati hai.. accha aapdono so jaiye kl hm baat krenge..

Or fir svi so jate hain.. idhr laksh ki neend nhi aa rhi thi to wo kitti ki batein yaad krta hai.. or wo pakhi k bagl m baith jata hai or use uthata hai..

Pakhi.. kya hua..?

Laksh.. mujhe kiss krna hai .. tum janti ho..?

Pakhi.. nhi.. pr kitti to btayi na ki ek ldka ek ldki ko chummi lete hain..

Laksh pakhi k hoth p apne hoth rkhta hai or chummi lete hain tb tk riza jaag jati hai..

Laksh.. bs aise hi kya..?

Pakhi.. mujhe pta nhi..

Riza.. mai btati hun..

Or riza laksh k hoth p apna hoth rkh kiss krne lgti hai.. laksh riza ko pkd leta hai..
Kuch der baad dono alg hote hain..

Riza.. kaisa lga..?

Laksh.. ye to bakai m bahot bdhiya tha.. pr guruji ko pta chla to bahot gussa honge..

Pakhi.. kisi ko pta nhi chlega.. hm nhi btayenge..

Laksh.. pkka na..

Pakhi.. haan.. plka..

Laksh.. chliye so jaiye subah jldi uthna pdta hai..

Or fir svi so jate hain...



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Nice update
Pls Bhai thoda jaldi update de Diya karo
Laksh ki training khatam hone k baad
Kya wo Wapisdharti lok aayega Kya
Kya wo phirse apni sab patniyo
ko ek Kar payega
Kya uski sabhi patniyo ko Laksh k baare mein sab yaad aa jayega
Riza k pati ko apni galti pe koi pachtawa
bhi hai Ya nai
Ab wo Kya Kar Raha hai dekhna padega

Waiting for the next update

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Nic update

 

[Jon123]

Sandar update bro waiting for the next update

 

[John Cena]

Wah yar story pori asi ki tesi ho gai 2 dafa hero ko mar kar 3 dfa la ae ho

 

[Vickey1211]

Bhai aapko story ki subah kamnaye
Ye last comment h is story m

 

[Rohan008]

UPDATE:-78


.....Previously.....

Gurudev.. nhi ab iska or unlogon ka koi nata nhi.. wo sb bhul gye or inki jindgi ab is lok tk hi simit hai..

Or fir gurudev us bacche ko apne goad m le lete hain .. idhr teeno m s koi v jane ko tyaar nhi tha..

Riza.. mai v bacchi bnkr inke sath bdi hona chahti hun..

Gurudev.. thik hai.. jaisa aapko accha lge .. pr agle sptaah aayiega qki tb tk ye baccha 10 saal ka ho Jayega.. or tb s ise sare vidya di jayegi ..

Svi haan m grdn hilate hain.. or wahan s chle jate hai idhr gurudev laksh k kaan m kuch mantr pdh rha tha.. or laksh dheere2 bda hone lgta hai..

.....AB AAGE.....

Ek sptaah baad riza or pakhi dono laksh ki hi umr ki hokr gurudev k gurukl m aati hai.. or wo laksh s milti hai..
Riza.. mai riza.. or ye pakhi..

Laksh.. mai laksh.. aap dono aaj hi aayi ho kya.?

Riza.. haan..

Laksh.. chlo mai aapdono ko meri psndida jgh le chlta hun.. or apne doston s milata hun..

Or laksh 2ono ko ek jungle le jata hai.. charo trf rang birange phool the.. fir laksh sbko bulata hai.. ek choti gilhari laksh k kandhe p aati hai.. fir panchiyan or pasu sb aate hain..

Laksh.. ye dekho mere dost ... Ol ye meli kitti.. muaah..

Pakhi kitti ko hath lgati hai.. to kitti laksh k piche chip jati hai..
Laksh.. kitti ye aaj s meri dost hai.. to daro mt isse..

Kitti pakhi k hath p uchl kr chli jati hai.. pakhi usko sahlati hai..
Laksh..riza phool mt todo guruji gussa honge..

Riza .. pr mujhe ye chahiye..

Laksh.. guru ji hme daantenge...

Riza.. nhi mujhe chahiye to chahiye..

Or riza phool tod deti hai.. guru ji dhyaan m the phool tutne p unka dhyaan tut jata hai or wo gusse m wahan aate hai..

Gurudev.. laksh maine tujhe kitni baar mna kiya ki ye phool mt todo bs kuch hi bache hain..

Laksh.. maafi guruji..

Gurudev... Maafi.. itna bda ho gya or kuch akl nhi aaya.. aaj tujhe iska dand milega.. jao or jitne v sukhe ptte jameen p gire hain use chun kr ikkatha kro.. haan tum sb m s koi v apne dost ki madad nhi krega..

Laksh.. ji guru ji..

Or gurudev wahan s gayab ho jate hain laksh sare sukhe phool ptte ko uthane lgta hai idhr kitti riza or pakhi p gussa thi..
Kitti.. aap bahot gandi ho.. mere dost ko aapki sja mili.. phool apne toda oor sja unhe mili..

Riza.. maaf kr do kitti glti ho gyi.. dubara aisa nhi hoga..

Kitti kuch nhi bolti or laksh k kandhe p baith jati hai.. idhr piche s pakhi or riza aati hai..
Riza..maaf kr do laksh..

Laksh.. aap to meri dost ho.. dost k liye itna to kr hi skta hun..

Riza laksh k gle lg jati hai to kitti riza k hath m daat gda deti hai riza jht s alg ho jati hai..
Laksh.. kitti ye glt baat hai.. aise kisi k sath nhi krte.. ye tumhari v dost hai..

Kitti.. nhi meli nhi hai.. na ye na wo..

Laksh.. kitti mafi mango..

Kitti.. nhi mai nhi mangungi.. na hi inhe dost bolungi..

Laksh... Kitti ye pari lok s hai tujhe v pari ki trh bna degi..

Kitti.. sach m..

Laksh.. haan.. sach m..

Kitti.. fir sorry.. aap gle lgo kiss kro mai nhi rokingi..

Laksh.. ye kiss kya hota hai.. kitti..

Kitti.. hey bhgwaan itne bde ho gye or kiss nhi pta.. pakhi aapko pta hai kya..

Pakhi(jaanbujh kr).. nhi.. wo kya hota hai..

Kitti.. jb ek ldka ek ldki ko chummi krte hai wo v hoth p..

Laksh.. tujhe kaise pta..?

Kitti.. dhrti p sb aise hi krte hain.. jahan mai phle rhti thi..

Laksh.. dhrti kon lok m hai... Mujhe v wahan jana hai ...

Kitti.. aap wahan nhi ja skte..

Laksh.. q..

Kitti.. wo to guru ji jante honge pr agr aap sb patte nhi uthaye to guru ji dhrti lok kya narak lok k v laya nhi chodhenge..

Or laksh ghbra kr teji s patte utha kr ek jgh ikkatha krta hai..
Tvi ek panchi aata hai ..
Panchi.. guruji ne aapsb ko gurukul m bulaya hai..

Laksh.. q..

Panchi... Wo to wo hi jane..

Or fir svi wahan pahunchte hain.. or guruji k pair chukr baith jate hain..

Gurudev.. aaj mai tujhe dhanush vidya sikhaunga... To sb apne2 dhanush utha kr jldi aajao..

Or fir svi apne2 dhnush uthata hai or maidaan m pahunch jata hai..
Gurudev..ye tumsb ki 5vi vidya hai.. jahan riza or pakhi insb m maharat hasil hai.. qki indon ko grv s hi sb mila hai ..

Laksh..mujhe q nhi mila guru ji..

Gurudev.. qki tujhe apne dum p sb hasil krna hai .. chl ab prtyancha chadha or nisana lgao..

Laksh prtyancha chdhata hai or nisana lgata hai.. nisana miss ho jata hai..

Gurudev.. njr lakshya p.. jise bhedna hai wahan idhr udhr kahin nhi.. pakhi ,riza tumdono lgao..

Dono nisana lgati hai or dono ki teer sidha lakshya p jakr lgta hai... Laksh or svi taliyan bjate hain..

Guruji.. ab teri bari..

Laksh dobara miss kr deta hai.. guruji fir bolte hain laksh fir miss kr deta hai to..
Guruji pakhi ko samne khda kr uske sr p apple rkh dete hain..

Guruji.. agr miss kiya to ye gyi.. ab tujhe dekhna hai..

Pakhi laksh k aankh m dekhti hai.. laksh apple p nisana lgata hai uske hath kaanpne lgte hain.. to wo dhanush niche kr leta hai..
Gurudev..ek saccha yoddha kvi v dhanush niche nhi krta.. nisana lgao.

Laksh samne dekhta hai.. pakhi isare s nisana lgane ko khti hai.. laksh nisana lgata hai.. or apple k beechobeech teer ghus jati hai..

Gurudev..sabaas.. ye hui na mardo wali baat..

Tvi gurumata andr s bahr aati hai.. laksh daud kr uske gle lg jata hai..

Gurumata.. hm aurtein kisi s km hai kya..

Or wo v dhanush utha kr nisana lgati hai..
Nisana thik lakshya p lgti hai.. laksh or svi tali bjata hai..

Gurudev.. maafi .. priye.. laksh riza or pakhi ko uske kmre dikha do...

Or fir laksh dono ko apne kmre m le jata hai..
Laksh.. ye hmara kmra or aap dono wahan rhenge...

Pakhi.. mai tumhare sath so jaun aaj..

Laksh.. nhi gurumata ne mujhe kaha hai ki jb tk 18saal ka na ho jaun koi v ldki ya aurat k sath sona nhi hai.. or avi to meri umr 17 hi hai..

Pakhi.. hmdono ki v 17hai.. or kya btati hai gurumata..

Laksh.. sb kuch btati hai.. accha aapdono so jaiye kl hm baat krenge..

Or fir svi so jate hain.. idhr laksh ki neend nhi aa rhi thi to wo kitti ki batein yaad krta hai.. or wo pakhi k bagl m baith jata hai or use uthata hai..

Pakhi.. kya hua..?

Laksh.. mujhe kiss krna hai .. tum janti ho..?

Pakhi.. nhi.. pr kitti to btayi na ki ek ldka ek ldki ko chummi lete hain..

Laksh pakhi k hoth p apne hoth rkhta hai or chummi lete hain tb tk riza jaag jati hai..

Laksh.. bs aise hi kya..?

Pakhi.. mujhe pta nhi..

Riza.. mai btati hun..

Or riza laksh k hoth p apna hoth rkh kiss krne lgti hai.. laksh riza ko pkd leta hai..
Kuch der baad dono alg hote hain..

Riza.. kaisa lga..?

Laksh.. ye to bakai m bahot bdhiya tha.. pr guruji ko pta chla to bahot gussa honge..

Pakhi.. kisi ko pta nhi chlega.. hm nhi btayenge..

Laksh.. pkka na..

Pakhi.. haan.. plka..

Laksh.. chliye so jaiye subah jldi uthna pdta hai..

Or fir svi so jate hain...



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Bht hi cute sa update h bhai
Mazza aaya

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai

 

[sonukale]

Nice update