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Congratulations Bhai for your new and first thread jaldi se start kardo aur pura support milega
Good morning bhaiyon maafi chatha hoon ki kal update nahi de paya hoon mere honewale salle aur sali ki family ayithi isliye kal likhna possible nahi ho paya hai abhi likhna shuru kiya hoon apko aaj update ajayega
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Update 1:
Toh kahani shuru hoti hai ek gaun jahan par ek school key andar teacher students ko pad raha tha tabhi ek student chawk phek kar mara tha hai aur who khaayalon mey tha usko jab hosh aatha hai sochene lagtha hai aakhir mujhe kisiney bachaya hai .
Flashback:
Ek chota sa bacha apni cultivation kar raha tha lekinwoh apna cultivation thik nahi kar pa raha tha tabhi ek aadmi aake usko khetha hai ki tum ek kamzor insaan ho aur aaj tak tum apni cultivation thik nahi kar pa rahe ho tum kabhi bhi life ek powerful cultivator nahi ban payoge. Isko baad Veer kafi sad ek jagah baita tha tabhi kuch bache aake uska mazak uda tey hai ki tum kabhi bhi powerful cultivator nahi ban payoge apne family key liye tum ek kala dabha ho. Usko gussa atha hai aur who marne key liye aage badtha hai lekin who sare bache milkar usko marne lagtey hai.
Old flalshback:
Jis jagah par abhi sab log haye wahan 10000 years pehle Veer naam key king rule karta tha uske pass ek powerful dragon scroll tha jisse woh famous, powerful aur sabse strong tha. Veer ek acha insan bhi tha uske pass itne power hon key baad woh kabhi kisiko haani nahi pahunchtha lekin jahan achai wahan par burai bhi rehti hai aur isliye Veer key pass joh dragon scroll tha woh bahuth powerful tha har koi usko hasil karna chatha taki woh sabse powerful ban sake aur sab par raj kar sake aur evil forces key saath yudh hota tha aur veer jeet jatha tha lekin yudh. Ek bada sa yudh chal tha jahan sare evil forces ney milkar veer ko har diya aur uski body ko destroy kar diya lekin woh use dragon scroll ki waja se uski SOUL ek khandar mey chali jathi hai.
Flashback ends.
Present.
Jab teacher ko hosh aatha hai tab jake veer ki soul uske body chali jathi hai aur phir veer ko patha chal jata hai ki uski soul iss body ko chuna hai aur veer acharya hotha ki mai school mai kaise agaya tab jab woh sab kuc aapne samne dekh tha tab usko yaar ki kaise veer ki soul us teacher ki body mey chali gayi uske baad.
Note: Aage sey teacher ka naam veer hoga aur humara main hero hai.
Phir veer ko khayal aatha ki sab log iss teacher ko Marjane key liye chod dete hai kyunki woh ek loser tha without cultivator insan tha. Uske baad Veer johuske table par students key scrool uske arrange karne mey laga rehta hai tabhi un students mey ek veer ko disturb karne key liye chawk phek kar marta hai lekin veer unke har chawk dodge kar leta hai yeh dekh kar sabhi students chwonk jate hai. Veer ko gussa aatha hai aur students gussa karta hai lekin koi uski ek baat nahi sunta hai who gusse table par aapne haath marta hai aur woh table kahi sare pieces mey break hojata hai yeh dekh kar sabhi students shock ho jate aur sab sahi sey baite ney lagte hai.
Kal Mega Update rahega.....
Toh kahani shuru hoti hai ek gaun jahan par ek school key andar teacher students ko pad raha tha tabhi ek student chawk phek kar mara tha hai aur who khaayalon mey tha usko jab hosh aatha hai sochene lagtha hai aakhir mujhe kisiney bachaya hai .
Flashback:
Ek chota sa bacha apni cultivation kar raha tha lekinwoh apna cultivation thik nahi kar pa raha tha tabhi ek aadmi aake usko khetha hai ki tum ek kamzor insaan ho aur aaj tak tum apni cultivation thik nahi kar pa rahe ho tum kabhi bhi life ek powerful cultivator nahi ban payoge. Isko baad Veer kafi sad ek jagah baita tha tabhi kuch bache aake uska mazak uda tey hai ki tum kabhi bhi powerful cultivator nahi ban payoge apne family key liye tum ek kala dabha ho. Usko gussa atha hai aur who marne key liye aage badtha hai lekin who sare bache milkar usko marne lagtey hai.
Old flalshback:
Jis jagah par abhi sab log haye wahan 10000 years pehle Veer naam key king rule karta tha uske pass ek powerful dragon scroll tha jisse woh famous, powerful aur sabse strong tha. Veer ek acha insan bhi tha uske pass itne power hon key baad woh kabhi kisiko haani nahi pahunchtha lekin jahan achai wahan par burai bhi rehti hai aur isliye Veer key pass joh dragon scroll tha woh bahuth powerful tha har koi usko hasil karna chatha taki woh sabse powerful ban sake aur sab par raj kar sake aur evil forces key saath yudh hota tha aur veer jeet jatha tha lekin yudh. Ek bada sa yudh chal tha jahan sare evil forces ney milkar veer ko har diya aur uski body ko destroy kar diya lekin woh use dragon scroll ki waja se uski SOUL ek khandar mey chali jathi hai.
Flashback ends.
Present.
Jab teacher ko hosh aatha hai tab jake veer ki soul uske body chali jathi hai aur phir veer ko patha chal jata hai ki uski soul iss body ko chuna hai aur veer acharya hotha ki mai school mai kaise agaya tab jab woh sab kuc aapne samne dekh tha tab usko yaar ki kaise veer ki soul us teacher ki body mey chali gayi uske baad.
Note: Aage sey teacher ka naam veer hoga aur humara main hero hai.
Phir veer ko khayal aatha ki sab log iss teacher ko Marjane key liye chod dete hai kyunki woh ek loser tha without cultivator insan tha. Uske baad Veer johuske table par students key scrool uske arrange karne mey laga rehta hai tabhi un students mey ek veer ko disturb karne key liye chawk phek kar marta hai lekin veer unke har chawk dodge kar leta hai yeh dekh kar sabhi students chwonk jate hai. Veer ko gussa aatha hai aur students gussa karta hai lekin koi uski ek baat nahi sunta hai who gusse table par aapne haath marta hai aur woh table kahi sare pieces mey break hojata hai yeh dekh kar sabhi students shock ho jate aur sab sahi sey baite ney lagte hai.
Kal Mega Update rahega.....
