asad bhai maine aapki last story padhi hai bhot achi thi ye stpry bhi achi hai bs aapse ek request hai ki aap jo dailogue bol rhe characters please unhe unke name se likhe kyuli aise mixup dailogue padhne mai or samjhne mai bhot problem hoti hai hope aapko mera suggestion bura na lage
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aapka pyara reader
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