Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[mashish]

Wait is over bhailog.


Aaj ka update post kar diya hai.ummid hai ki pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye apni kahani me aage kya hota hai.




And manish bhai laddu to kha liya kab ka. Ab to bas bill chukane me lage hue hai sabhi ke. Or body ki thakaan mita rahe hai.





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kya writer ji ek hi baar khaya ye to galat hai are saadi ka laddu to aaram se aur alag alag tarike se khana chahiye aur rahi bill ki baat to ye aap per depand karta hai jab chahe bhar dijiye

 

[mashish]

UPDATE - 74













next day me or baki sabhi breakfast karne ke liye baithe hi the ki ek car ke rukne ko aawaj aai. Hamne jyada dhyan nahi diya socha hoga koi aayega to andar hi.



Thodi der baad ek or car ke rukne ki aawaj aai or uske baad or caro ki aawaje aane lagi.




Ham sabhi ek dum se hairan ho gyi ki itni care kaha se aagyi. Ye janne ke liye ham sabhi darwaje per pahuche. Or jab baha ka najara dekha to ham sabke hosh udd gye.



Hamare saamne Aarav sunny rishi vijay karan sekhar or sath me unka parivar matlab unke biwi bache vidya bhi aai thi.



Or vo aake sabse pehle mere gale lag gyi. Or baaki sabhi bhi shock the ki sabhi aagye unko laga ki sirf bahi aane wale hai. Or hame bhi ki ye sab achanak se kaise





Main- sabhi log ek sath what a pleasant surprise.





Vidya- bas aane ka man hua to aagye.




Aarav- ab andar nahi bulaoge kya.






Main- abhi ruko sabhi log yahi per. Aarti to utar lene do sabki.




Maine mom bua or radha or baki bhabhio ko aawaj lagai.to vo sabhi bhi aagyi. Or sabko dekh ke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Uske baad radha ne sabko aarti utari. Or ghar me sabka swagat kiya. Or fir sabhi ek baad ek andar aaye.





Main- achanak kaise aana hua bataya bhi nahi.





Shekhar- kyu hamara aana achha nahi laga kya





Main- kaisi baat karte ho ofcourse achha laga. Me bas janma chah raha hu ki ye kiske dimaag ki upaj thi.





Aarav- bacho ke dimaag ki. Unhone hi sabhi ko call karke bulaya hai. Family reunion.








Dad- kya baat hai maja aagya kitna time ho gya sabko ek sath dekhe hue.






Tabhi pechhe se bache bhi aagye or sabko dekhke kush ho gye vo bhi sabse mile.





Main- or karan babu kabhi mil bhi liya karo. Bahut busy ho gye ho tum to.






Sekhar- yahi saval mera bhi hai tumse surya. Kabhi phone hi kar liya karo. Bahut busy ho gye ho tum to.





Ye sunke me jhep gya.





Main- sorry thoda busy ho jata hu kaamo me mumbai me hote to milna hota rehta lekin abse delhi gye ho milna ho hi nahi pata hai.







Sekhar- ye bat to hai.b





Karan- same yahi mera jawab hai.





Vidya- kyu ashk tum log milne kyu nahi aate ho ek hi sehar me rehte ho tab bhi.





Ashk- bua ab kya kare study se kam hi time mil pata hai. Isiliye milna nahi ho pata hai. Baaki aapko yaad to roj hi karte hai. Or isiliye to hamne sabko yaha bulaya hai taaki sabke sath achhe se time spend kiya ja sake. Sab sath me honge to maja aayega.





Main- ye badiya kiya tum logo ne. Dil kush kar diya. Ab batado sab achhi chhuti leke aaye ho na. Verna kal hi bolne lago ki jana hai vapis. Ab me nahi jaane dene wala






Sunny- ha bhai sab kaam badiya se samet kar hi aaye hai taaki kuch din sath me bita sake.




Karan- ha tum jane ko kahoge tab bhi na jaye ham log. Puri mehman nabazi karwake hi jayenge.






Main- Mom damad ki khatirdari shuru kardo. Achhe se khilao pilao






Mom- tumhe kehne ki jarurat nhi hai me kar lungi





Isper sabhi hasne lage.






Rishi- ha to bacho batao ab kya karna hai kaise dhamaal machana hai.







Avi- jaise aap bolo. Ham sabke liye ready hai.






Dad- vo baad me kar lena filhaal sabhi nasta karo bahut baate karni hai sabse.






Vijay- ye bhi theek hai.




Uske bad sabhi baith gye nasta karne bhabhio ne jaldi se sabke liye badiya nasta banaya or sabhi jut gaye khane me.





Uske baad sabhi ki baate chalne lagi. Karne ko kuch tha sivay bate or masti ke. Or sab bahi kar rahe the. Bahut dino baad jo aise sabka milna hua tha.




Bahi amar or nidhi bhi beech beech me mobile per bate karte rehte the. Or dono ki hi ab milne ki ikchha badti ja rahi thi. Dono hi ek dusre ko prapose karna chahte the. Jo filhaal posible nhi ho pa raha tha.




Aise hi kuch din or nikle. Or ab sabhi ke vapis jaane ka time aagya tha. In 4-5 dino me sabhi ne badiya time spend kiya. Bahi radha ne vidya ko rukne ke liye kaha ki kuch time or sath rehke jaao





Vidya ka man to tha isliye karan ne use rukne ko keh diya. Jisse vo kush ho gyi. Or vidya fir bahi ruk gyi and baaki sabhi Bapis chale gye jinme bache bhi shamil the.





( Sorry guys is seen ko jyada lamba kheechne ka koi matlab tha nahi isliye ise jaldi hi khatm kar diya. Or dusri baat mujhe kuch sujh bhi nahi raha tha ki aisa kya kare ye log jo inhone pehle nahi kiya hai. Isliye inko jaldi nipta diya. Baaki aaplogo ke man me koi vichar ho to mujhe bataye next reunion me main baisa hi likh dunga. )






Very next day amar ne nidhi ko milne ke liye bulaya. Lovers point per. Jo ek badiya sa garden restaurant tha beach ke kinare. Jaha lovers aate jate bane rehte hai.






Khair amar baha pahucha or uska wait karne laga.




To thodi hi der me vo aati hui dikhai di use. Akeli.




Amar- hii kaisi ho.





Nidhi- ab or bhi jyada badiya ho gyi hu me. Aapko jo dekh liya.






Amar- me bhi.



Fir amar nidhi ko ek khali jagah per le gya. Or dono baha baith ke baate karne lage.





Bato hi bato me amar ne nidhi ko prapose kar diya. Jisse nidhi ek dum hairan reh gyi. Use sayad iski ummid thi nahi






Amar- jabse tumhe dekha hai sab kuch Veerana sa lagta hai. Kya tum meri life me aake use fir se hara bhara karogi. Will you be my future wife.







Ye sunke nidhi ne ek tak amar ki aankho me dekha or uske chehre per ek alag hi muskaan aagyi. Or usne turant hi ha keh diya. Amar ne use ring pehnaai or dono fir gale mile.






Nidhi- i love you too amar. Pehli hi najar me ghayal kar diya tha tumne. Kabse me is pal ka intjar kar rahi thi.






Amar- me bhi. Bas thoda samay dena chahta tha tumhe or jab tumne bina kisi shart ke yaha aana swikaar kiya to mujhe yakeen ho gya ki mujhe kya jawab milne wala hai tumse. Or dekho me sahi tha. I love you nidhi.






Uske baad nidhi ne bina kisi der ke ek chhota sa smotch amar ko kar diya jisse amar bhi kush ho gya.



Uske baad dono ne ek sath kai pictures click ki or bahi per badiya sa lunch kiya or apni date ko yaadgaar banaya.



Or sham tak dono baha se hile bhi nhi. Sham Tak dono ki bate chalti rahi.






Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko uske ghar chhoda jo dikhne me or bhi jyada shandaar tha. Nidhi use andar bulana chah rahi thi lekin amar ne filhaal baha jana theek nahi samjha isliye vo bye bolke nikal gya. Nidhi bhi kush hoke andar chali gyi.





Bahi us bunglow ki khidki se koi tha jisne ye najara dekha tha or vo dekhte hi pehchan gya ki mamla akhir hai kya. Or use bahut jalan si hone lagi nidhi ka hasta hua chehra dekh ke. Khair vo baha se filhaal andar chala gya or sochne laga ki kya kiya jaaye.




( Ye wala matter aage kaafi tool pakdega isliye kya hota hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.)







Bahi amar bhi ghar ghar or uske chehre ki kushi dekhte hi banti thi. Sabhi samajh gye ki kaam ban gya hai. Or baad me amar ne khud sabko bataya jise sunke sabhi kush ho gye. Or sbahi ne amar ko congratulations kiya. Or use best wishes di.











Bahi ab bahut hi kam samay bacha hua tha black heart ko jinda karne ka. Or abhi bhi uske sare sathi baha ki jail main baithe hue yahi soch rahe the ki kya kare kaise kare.





Bahi vikraal ek band gufa me tha. Unki aankhe band thi or vo aadhe hawa me tair raha tha. Uske charo taraf bahut hi alag alag prakaar ki roshni faili hui thi. Uski mudra bhi dhyan me baithne wali thi. Uske badan per ek bhi kapda nahi tha. Vo puri tarah se nagn tha uska hathiyar hawa me hi latak raha tha jaise kisi gadhe ka hathiyar ho. Dekhne me hi kaafi ajeeb lag raha tha.





Bahi us gufa me uske seene se 2 roshniya nikli or jameen per gir gyi. Unke girte hi baha per 2 bahut hi sundar or seductive ladkiya pragat ho gyi. Ye dono uski ki shaktiyo se nirmit uski patniyan hai. "Chhaya or Kaya" thi.




Jaisa naam tha baisa hi kaam tha. Ye dono hi kaafi powerfull thi vikraal ka to chhod hi do. Vikraal ke dushmano ke liye ye dono kisi kaal se kam nhi hai. Or akele me vikraal ki biwiya. Ye dono har tarah se vikraal ke liye pagal hai. Or use har kushi deti hai. Fir chahe vo tan ki kushi ho ya man ki. Ya fir kuch or.





Vikraal ki shaktiyo ke sath ye dono bhi lupt ho gyi thi usi locket me. Or jab vo mantra surya ne pade tak ye bhi aazad ho gyi.







Ye dono apne hatho ko jod ke vikraal ke samne khadi ho gyi or uske jaagne ka intjar karne lagi. Or in dono ke bahar aane ka matlab hi yahi tha ki vikral ab kisi bhi waqt jaag sakta hai.







Baaki dekhiye ab next update me ki kya hota hai yaha.












To be continue………………..

lovely update

 

[mashish]

UPDATE - 75













Chhaya or kaya dono hi hath jod ke vikraal ka aavahan karne lagi use neend se jagane ke liye. Jor jor se chillane lagi uska naam lene lagi.


Is sabse vikraal ki aankhe thodi thodi hilne lagi isliye vo or jor jor se pukarne lagi use.



Or thodi hi der me vikraal ne ek hi jhatke me apni dono aankho ko khol liya. Or uski aankhe khulte hi uski aankho se ek bhayankar jwala nikli jo us gufa ki dewar se takrai or baha per bhayankar dhamaka hua. Puri gufa kampne lagi is dhamake se. Jagah jagah se pathar girne lage neeche. Chhaya or kaya dono hi khushi se bachane lagi or vikraal ki jay jay kaar karne lagi.





Ye sunke vikral kush ho gya or jaise hi uske kadam jameen per touch hue puri gufa ka kampan ek dum se band pad gya. Gufa ka hilna pathar ka girna sab band ho gya ek hi jhatke me.





Uske baad dono ne vikraal ke pairon ko chhua or uska aasirbaad liya.







Kaya- Swamy aapko Bapis dekhke bahut hi aanand mil raha hai.





Chhaya- ha Swamy me to dhanyavad kehti hu us insan ko jisne aapko is shrap se aazad kiya hai.









Vikraal- ha uska shukriya to karna hi chahiye lekin ek baat ye bhi hai ki usko marna bhi padega. Kyuki bahut pareshan kiya hai usne mujhe. Mere bhai ko mara hai black heart ko jinda karne me sabse badi adchan banke khada hai vo.








Kaya- aap chinta na kare Swamy aap bas hame aadesh de. Ham dono abhi jaake uske sath uske pure parivar ka ant kar denge.





Chhaya- lekin denge use aasan mout hi. Kyuki usne aapko shrap se aazad jo kiya hai.




Ye kehkar vo dono hasne lagi.






Vikraal- usne vo pathar jaagrit kar liya hai. Isliye ab vo hamse use chhipa kar nhi rakh sakta hai. Lekin abhi sabse badi musibat bhi hamare liye bahi pathar hi hai. Kyuki use uski shaktiyo ka istemaal karna aane laga hai or uske istemaal se vo hame pal bhar me hara sakta hai. Isliye hame usse vo pathar hasil karna hi hoga. Fir chahe uske liye kuch bhi kyu na karna pade.







Kaya- ham aapke sath hai Swamy aagya de hame kya karna hai.






Vikraal- sabse pehle us gaddar ko pakad kar laao jisne mujhe dhoka diya hai. Us vanraj ko uske kiye ki saza mujhe deni hi hogi. Or vanraj ke khatam hone se surya ki powers bhi aadhi ho jayegi.







Chhaya- lekin Swamy vo aapse juda hua tha vo aapko dhoka de hi nahi sakta tha uski aisa sochne matra se jaan chali jati fir aisa kaise ho gya.







Vikraal- mere shrap se mukt hote hi vo bhi us bandhan se mukt ho gya. Jis bandhan me vo bandha hua tha meri shaktiyon ke jariye. Lekin mujhe is baat ka bura nhi laga balki use mere prati bafadari banaye rakhni thi lekin usne apna rasta badal liya or ab use uske kiye ki saza dena jaruri hai. Verna mere jitne samarthak hai kal ko vo bhi aisa kar sakte hai.







Kaya- aapka kehna sahi hai Swamy me abhi jaake use le kar aati hu.






Vikraal- ham prithvi per hi ja rahe hai bahi usko dekhenge




Ye kehkar vikral ne apni powers se ek portal khola or usme ye teeno ghus gye or seddhe nikle prithvi per. Baha pahuchte hi in teeno ke rup apne aap badal gye. Ye dekhne se ab normal insan hi lag rahe the. Baaki ye kya hai ye to sirf ham log hi jante hai.






Ye teeno mumbai pahuche. Baha vikraal ne apni shaktiyo se vanraj ko turant hi dhund liya.





Vikraal ne chhaya ke kaan me kuch kaha or vo baha se use pranam karke gayab ho gyi. Or ye dono pahuche seedhe vanraj ke ghar.




Is waqt vanraj ke ghar me keval uski patni hi thi. Na varsha thi na hi vanraj tha.




Kaya ne door bell bajai to usne darwaja khola




Vikraal- ji namaste. Vanraj bhai hai kya.






V mom- ji nhi vo to bahar gye hai. Aap kon.






Vikraal- ji me unka purana dost hu. Ye meri patni hai kaya. Hame pata chala tha ki vanraj ab yaha rehne lage hai to milne ke liye aa gye ham. Actually London me ham sath me hi padte the. Mujhe bhi scholarship mili thi vanraj ke sath.






Vikraal vanraj ki har ek baat janta tha uski sari janam kundali use pata tha. Or ye baat sunke uski wife ko yakeen ho gya ki ye vanraj ke dost hi honge isliye usne in dono ko andar invite kar liya.






Vo inke liye paani laai.




Vikraal- aap jara unhe call keejiye eme unse baat karta hu.





V mom- ji abhi lagati hu.




Unhone vanraj ko call kiya to kuch rings ke baad usne call utha liya.




Vanraj- ha ji boliye





V mom- ji aapke koi dost aaye hai aapse milne ke liye keh rahe hai London me aap dono sath me padte the.






Vanraj- achha kya naam hai unka.





V mom- ek min. Aapka Naam to me puchhna hi bhul gyi.






Vikraal- ji koi baat nhi. Laaiye mujhe phone deejiye.





Vikral ne unse phone liye or baat karne laga.




Vikraal- hello my friend pehchana mujhe.






Vanraj- ji nhi aapka Naam kya hai. Sayad usse yaad aajaye mujhe.






Vikraal ne bahut hi slow aawaj me apna naam bataya vanraj ko. Jise sunte hi vanraj ke hath pair ek dum se kamp gye.






Vanraj- vikraal don't do that. Pls.






Vikraal- ha pehchan liya na. Ab 15 min. Ke andar ghar pahuch jaao Verna me chala jaunga yaha se.






Vanraj- mumbai me nhi hu itni jaldi nahi pahuch paunga.






Vikraal- kya bhul gye ho ko tum kya ho. 15 min bahut hi jyada hai tumhare liye. Isliye ab sirf 5 min. Hai tumhare pass.


Ye kehkar vikraal ne call cut kar diya






Bahi varsha ki mom ye sab dekh or sun rahi thi lekin unhe samajh me kuch nhi aaraha tha.





V mom- ye aap kya keh rahe the ki 5 min. Me aajaiye. Bhala vo itni jaldi kaise aasakte hai yaha per. Vo to mumbai me hi nhi hai.







Vikraal- kamaal hai aap to sab janti hi hai vanraj ke bare me uski shaktiyo ke bare me fir bhi aisa sawal kar rahi ho ye to galat baat hai.






Ye sunte hi unhe laga bhayankar shock.





V mom- kon ho tum. Kyuki ye baat sirf kuch khaas logo ko hi pata hai.





Vikraal- un khaas logo me main bhi aata hu. Or mera naam hai vikraal.



Ye bolte hi dono apne asli rup me aagye jise dekhte hi vi char kadam pichhe ho gyi uski rooh kamp gyi ye seen dekhke.



Usne kuch socha or darwaje ki taraf bhagi lekin uske pair apnk hi jagah per jam gye vo hil bhi nhi pa rahi thi.




Uske baad kaya uske pass gyi or uska hath pakda or baha se gayab ho gyi. Usko leke. Bahi vikraal fir se apne normal rop me aagya or sofe per baith ke vanraj ka intjar karne laga. Abhi sirf 2 min. Hi hue the ki vanraj ghar ka darwaja kholte hue andar dakhil hua. Or apne samne usne kisi anjan saks ko dekha.






Vikraal- aaiye mahashay kaise hai aap.






Vanraj- vikraal





Vikraal- sahi pehchana.




Ye sunke usne ghar me uski patni ko aawaj lagai lekin koi nhi aaya bahar.





Vanraj- kaha hai meri patni.





Vikraal- filhaal jinda hai or sahi salamat hai. Lekin aisi kab tak rahegi ye tum per nirbhar karega.






Vanraj- kya chahiye tumhe.






Vikraal- paras pathar vo bhi surya ko khabar lage bina.






Vanraj- me aisa nahi kar sakta hu.






Vikraal- afsos fir tumhe apni patni ko hamesha ke liye bhulna hoga.






Vanraj- nhi. Tum samajh nhi rahe ho. Ye kaam tum aasani se kar sakte ho. Lekin me ye nhi kar sakta hu. Or ab to tumhe use dhundne ki bhi jarurat nhi hai.







Vikraal- me janta hu ki ye me aasani se kar sakta hu. Lekin mujhe ye kaam tumse karwana hai. Agar tumne ye kaam kar diya to tumhari jindagi se hamesha ke liye chala jaunga me. Verna tumhari patni or beti dono ko tumse hamesha ke liye cheen lunga me. Kyuki tumhe saza jo deni hai mujhe dhoka dene ki.







Vanraj- maine tumhe koi dhoka nhi diya hai.






Vikraal- achha mere sare raj khol diye tumne or ab kehte hi dhoka nhi diya mujhe. Tum agar surya se milke kahi gayab ho jate apne pariwar ke sath to mujhe koi afsos nhi rehta lekin tumne mera sath chhod ke mere dushman ka sath diya isliye ab tum bhi mere dushman ho or dushman ko kaise kabu me karna hai me achhe se janta hu. Isliye 24 ghante hai tumhare pass mere liye pathar le aao or apni biwi ko le jaao. Or agar aisa na kar paaye to 25be ghante me khud khushi kar lena kyuki itna dard tum seh nhi paoge jitna me tumhe dene ki soch raha hu. Or sabse imp baat mujhe dhoka dene ka vichar tyag dena kyuki meri najar har waqt rahegi tumper. Jaha mujhe thoda sa bhi doubt hua baha tumhari biwi gyi.





Ye kehke vo gayab ho gya.






Bahi vanraj apna sir pakad kar baith gya. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare kaise kare.



Uski sabse badi samasya ye thi ki vo surya ko dhoka kaise de. Or vo varsha ko kya muh dikhayega. Jab vo apni mom ke bare me puchhegi.




Or agar usne kuch dhoke baji karne ki sochi bhi to vikraal ko pata chal jayega or vo turant hi use maar dega.





Bahi ek sawal ye bhi tha ki kaam hone ke baad is baat ki koi gurantee nhi hai ki vo uske pariwar ko chhod dega. Vo pagal hai pura kaam bhi karwa lega or uske pariwar ko bhi maar dega.






Inhi sab socho me gum tha is waqt vanraj vo decide nhi kar pa raha tha ki vo kya kare or kaise kare. Pathar is waqt surya ke ghar me hai. Or baha per ghuste hi Harry ko pata chal jayega ki main use churane aaya hu.










Baaki dekhiye ki ab kya karta hai vanraj.












To be continue……………………..

amazing update

 

[mashish]

Waiting for next

 

[Rudrathakur]

Wlcm back brother and congratulations for ur marriage... ..

To aakhirkar vikral jaag hi gya ...bss kuchh hi din shesh rh gye the black heart ko zinda krne ki avdhi khtm hone me fir chlta lmba intzaar....pr ye kuchh din hi lgta h bdi mushkil se guzarne wale h...kyuki jaagte hi vikral ne apna daav chal diya h vanraj ko puri trha se vivas krke...agr surya ko dhokha dekr patthar ko vikral ko sonp deta h to sabki nazro se nichd gir jaayega agr aisa nhi krega to apni family ko kho dega pr wo janta h ki agr vikral ka kaam kr bhi diya usne to bhi uski family ka bachna namumkin sa hi h...to dekhte h ab vanraj kya krta h kya wo dhokha dega ya surya ko chalaki se sach bta dega ki kya ho rha h ab... Lgta h vanraaj ke sacrifice krne ka waqt aagya h....ek bahadur ki trha pesh aana chahiye usko.....wahi amar ki lovestory ki officially shuruaat ho chuki h pr lgta h uski premika se uske ghr ka hi koi beinteha nafrat krta h ab wo kon h ye to aage pta chlega aur kyu ye bhi...so waiting for the next dekhte h kya bhokaal mchne wala h inn kuchh dino me hi...

 

[SameerK]

UPDATE - 74













next day me or baki sabhi breakfast karne ke liye baithe hi the ki ek car ke rukne ko aawaj aai. Hamne jyada dhyan nahi diya socha hoga koi aayega to andar hi.



Thodi der baad ek or car ke rukne ki aawaj aai or uske baad or caro ki aawaje aane lagi.




Ham sabhi ek dum se hairan ho gyi ki itni care kaha se aagyi. Ye janne ke liye ham sabhi darwaje per pahuche. Or jab baha ka najara dekha to ham sabke hosh udd gye.



Hamare saamne Aarav sunny rishi vijay karan sekhar or sath me unka parivar matlab unke biwi bache vidya bhi aai thi.



Or vo aake sabse pehle mere gale lag gyi. Or baaki sabhi bhi shock the ki sabhi aagye unko laga ki sirf bahi aane wale hai. Or hame bhi ki ye sab achanak se kaise





Main- sabhi log ek sath what a pleasant surprise.





Vidya- bas aane ka man hua to aagye.




Aarav- ab andar nahi bulaoge kya.






Main- abhi ruko sabhi log yahi per. Aarti to utar lene do sabki.




Maine mom bua or radha or baki bhabhio ko aawaj lagai.to vo sabhi bhi aagyi. Or sabko dekh ke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Uske baad radha ne sabko aarti utari. Or ghar me sabka swagat kiya. Or fir sabhi ek baad ek andar aaye.





Main- achanak kaise aana hua bataya bhi nahi.





Shekhar- kyu hamara aana achha nahi laga kya





Main- kaisi baat karte ho ofcourse achha laga. Me bas janma chah raha hu ki ye kiske dimaag ki upaj thi.





Aarav- bacho ke dimaag ki. Unhone hi sabhi ko call karke bulaya hai. Family reunion.








Dad- kya baat hai maja aagya kitna time ho gya sabko ek sath dekhe hue.






Tabhi pechhe se bache bhi aagye or sabko dekhke kush ho gye vo bhi sabse mile.





Main- or karan babu kabhi mil bhi liya karo. Bahut busy ho gye ho tum to.






Sekhar- yahi saval mera bhi hai tumse surya. Kabhi phone hi kar liya karo. Bahut busy ho gye ho tum to.





Ye sunke me jhep gya.





Main- sorry thoda busy ho jata hu kaamo me mumbai me hote to milna hota rehta lekin abse delhi gye ho milna ho hi nahi pata hai.







Sekhar- ye bat to hai.b





Karan- same yahi mera jawab hai.





Vidya- kyu ashk tum log milne kyu nahi aate ho ek hi sehar me rehte ho tab bhi.





Ashk- bua ab kya kare study se kam hi time mil pata hai. Isiliye milna nahi ho pata hai. Baaki aapko yaad to roj hi karte hai. Or isiliye to hamne sabko yaha bulaya hai taaki sabke sath achhe se time spend kiya ja sake. Sab sath me honge to maja aayega.





Main- ye badiya kiya tum logo ne. Dil kush kar diya. Ab batado sab achhi chhuti leke aaye ho na. Verna kal hi bolne lago ki jana hai vapis. Ab me nahi jaane dene wala






Sunny- ha bhai sab kaam badiya se samet kar hi aaye hai taaki kuch din sath me bita sake.




Karan- ha tum jane ko kahoge tab bhi na jaye ham log. Puri mehman nabazi karwake hi jayenge.






Main- Mom damad ki khatirdari shuru kardo. Achhe se khilao pilao






Mom- tumhe kehne ki jarurat nhi hai me kar lungi





Isper sabhi hasne lage.






Rishi- ha to bacho batao ab kya karna hai kaise dhamaal machana hai.







Avi- jaise aap bolo. Ham sabke liye ready hai.






Dad- vo baad me kar lena filhaal sabhi nasta karo bahut baate karni hai sabse.






Vijay- ye bhi theek hai.




Uske bad sabhi baith gye nasta karne bhabhio ne jaldi se sabke liye badiya nasta banaya or sabhi jut gaye khane me.





Uske baad sabhi ki baate chalne lagi. Karne ko kuch tha sivay bate or masti ke. Or sab bahi kar rahe the. Bahut dino baad jo aise sabka milna hua tha.




Bahi amar or nidhi bhi beech beech me mobile per bate karte rehte the. Or dono ki hi ab milne ki ikchha badti ja rahi thi. Dono hi ek dusre ko prapose karna chahte the. Jo filhaal posible nhi ho pa raha tha.




Aise hi kuch din or nikle. Or ab sabhi ke vapis jaane ka time aagya tha. In 4-5 dino me sabhi ne badiya time spend kiya. Bahi radha ne vidya ko rukne ke liye kaha ki kuch time or sath rehke jaao





Vidya ka man to tha isliye karan ne use rukne ko keh diya. Jisse vo kush ho gyi. Or vidya fir bahi ruk gyi and baaki sabhi Bapis chale gye jinme bache bhi shamil the.





( Sorry guys is seen ko jyada lamba kheechne ka koi matlab tha nahi isliye ise jaldi hi khatm kar diya. Or dusri baat mujhe kuch sujh bhi nahi raha tha ki aisa kya kare ye log jo inhone pehle nahi kiya hai. Isliye inko jaldi nipta diya. Baaki aaplogo ke man me koi vichar ho to mujhe bataye next reunion me main baisa hi likh dunga. )






Very next day amar ne nidhi ko milne ke liye bulaya. Lovers point per. Jo ek badiya sa garden restaurant tha beach ke kinare. Jaha lovers aate jate bane rehte hai.






Khair amar baha pahucha or uska wait karne laga.




To thodi hi der me vo aati hui dikhai di use. Akeli.




Amar- hii kaisi ho.





Nidhi- ab or bhi jyada badiya ho gyi hu me. Aapko jo dekh liya.






Amar- me bhi.



Fir amar nidhi ko ek khali jagah per le gya. Or dono baha baith ke baate karne lage.





Bato hi bato me amar ne nidhi ko prapose kar diya. Jisse nidhi ek dum hairan reh gyi. Use sayad iski ummid thi nahi






Amar- jabse tumhe dekha hai sab kuch Veerana sa lagta hai. Kya tum meri life me aake use fir se hara bhara karogi. Will you be my future wife.







Ye sunke nidhi ne ek tak amar ki aankho me dekha or uske chehre per ek alag hi muskaan aagyi. Or usne turant hi ha keh diya. Amar ne use ring pehnaai or dono fir gale mile.






Nidhi- i love you too amar. Pehli hi najar me ghayal kar diya tha tumne. Kabse me is pal ka intjar kar rahi thi.






Amar- me bhi. Bas thoda samay dena chahta tha tumhe or jab tumne bina kisi shart ke yaha aana swikaar kiya to mujhe yakeen ho gya ki mujhe kya jawab milne wala hai tumse. Or dekho me sahi tha. I love you nidhi.






Uske baad nidhi ne bina kisi der ke ek chhota sa smotch amar ko kar diya jisse amar bhi kush ho gya.



Uske baad dono ne ek sath kai pictures click ki or bahi per badiya sa lunch kiya or apni date ko yaadgaar banaya.



Or sham tak dono baha se hile bhi nhi. Sham Tak dono ki bate chalti rahi.






Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko uske ghar chhoda jo dikhne me or bhi jyada shandaar tha. Nidhi use andar bulana chah rahi thi lekin amar ne filhaal baha jana theek nahi samjha isliye vo bye bolke nikal gya. Nidhi bhi kush hoke andar chali gyi.





Bahi us bunglow ki khidki se koi tha jisne ye najara dekha tha or vo dekhte hi pehchan gya ki mamla akhir hai kya. Or use bahut jalan si hone lagi nidhi ka hasta hua chehra dekh ke. Khair vo baha se filhaal andar chala gya or sochne laga ki kya kiya jaaye.




( Ye wala matter aage kaafi tool pakdega isliye kya hota hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.)







Bahi amar bhi ghar ghar or uske chehre ki kushi dekhte hi banti thi. Sabhi samajh gye ki kaam ban gya hai. Or baad me amar ne khud sabko bataya jise sunke sabhi kush ho gye. Or sbahi ne amar ko congratulations kiya. Or use best wishes di.











Bahi ab bahut hi kam samay bacha hua tha black heart ko jinda karne ka. Or abhi bhi uske sare sathi baha ki jail main baithe hue yahi soch rahe the ki kya kare kaise kare.





Bahi vikraal ek band gufa me tha. Unki aankhe band thi or vo aadhe hawa me tair raha tha. Uske charo taraf bahut hi alag alag prakaar ki roshni faili hui thi. Uski mudra bhi dhyan me baithne wali thi. Uske badan per ek bhi kapda nahi tha. Vo puri tarah se nagn tha uska hathiyar hawa me hi latak raha tha jaise kisi gadhe ka hathiyar ho. Dekhne me hi kaafi ajeeb lag raha tha.





Bahi us gufa me uske seene se 2 roshniya nikli or jameen per gir gyi. Unke girte hi baha per 2 bahut hi sundar or seductive ladkiya pragat ho gyi. Ye dono uski ki shaktiyo se nirmit uski patniyan hai. "Chhaya or Kaya" thi.




Jaisa naam tha baisa hi kaam tha. Ye dono hi kaafi powerfull thi vikraal ka to chhod hi do. Vikraal ke dushmano ke liye ye dono kisi kaal se kam nhi hai. Or akele me vikraal ki biwiya. Ye dono har tarah se vikraal ke liye pagal hai. Or use har kushi deti hai. Fir chahe vo tan ki kushi ho ya man ki. Ya fir kuch or.





Vikraal ki shaktiyo ke sath ye dono bhi lupt ho gyi thi usi locket me. Or jab vo mantra surya ne pade tak ye bhi aazad ho gyi.







Ye dono apne hatho ko jod ke vikraal ke samne khadi ho gyi or uske jaagne ka intjar karne lagi. Or in dono ke bahar aane ka matlab hi yahi tha ki vikral ab kisi bhi waqt jaag sakta hai.







Baaki dekhiye ab next update me ki kya hota hai yaha.












To be continue………………..

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UPDATE - 75













Chhaya or kaya dono hi hath jod ke vikraal ka aavahan karne lagi use neend se jagane ke liye. Jor jor se chillane lagi uska naam lene lagi.


Is sabse vikraal ki aankhe thodi thodi hilne lagi isliye vo or jor jor se pukarne lagi use.



Or thodi hi der me vikraal ne ek hi jhatke me apni dono aankho ko khol liya. Or uski aankhe khulte hi uski aankho se ek bhayankar jwala nikli jo us gufa ki dewar se takrai or baha per bhayankar dhamaka hua. Puri gufa kampne lagi is dhamake se. Jagah jagah se pathar girne lage neeche. Chhaya or kaya dono hi khushi se bachane lagi or vikraal ki jay jay kaar karne lagi.





Ye sunke vikral kush ho gya or jaise hi uske kadam jameen per touch hue puri gufa ka kampan ek dum se band pad gya. Gufa ka hilna pathar ka girna sab band ho gya ek hi jhatke me.





Uske baad dono ne vikraal ke pairon ko chhua or uska aasirbaad liya.







Kaya- Swamy aapko Bapis dekhke bahut hi aanand mil raha hai.





Chhaya- ha Swamy me to dhanyavad kehti hu us insan ko jisne aapko is shrap se aazad kiya hai.









Vikraal- ha uska shukriya to karna hi chahiye lekin ek baat ye bhi hai ki usko marna bhi padega. Kyuki bahut pareshan kiya hai usne mujhe. Mere bhai ko mara hai black heart ko jinda karne me sabse badi adchan banke khada hai vo.








Kaya- aap chinta na kare Swamy aap bas hame aadesh de. Ham dono abhi jaake uske sath uske pure parivar ka ant kar denge.





Chhaya- lekin denge use aasan mout hi. Kyuki usne aapko shrap se aazad jo kiya hai.




Ye kehkar vo dono hasne lagi.






Vikraal- usne vo pathar jaagrit kar liya hai. Isliye ab vo hamse use chhipa kar nhi rakh sakta hai. Lekin abhi sabse badi musibat bhi hamare liye bahi pathar hi hai. Kyuki use uski shaktiyo ka istemaal karna aane laga hai or uske istemaal se vo hame pal bhar me hara sakta hai. Isliye hame usse vo pathar hasil karna hi hoga. Fir chahe uske liye kuch bhi kyu na karna pade.







Kaya- ham aapke sath hai Swamy aagya de hame kya karna hai.






Vikraal- sabse pehle us gaddar ko pakad kar laao jisne mujhe dhoka diya hai. Us vanraj ko uske kiye ki saza mujhe deni hi hogi. Or vanraj ke khatam hone se surya ki powers bhi aadhi ho jayegi.







Chhaya- lekin Swamy vo aapse juda hua tha vo aapko dhoka de hi nahi sakta tha uski aisa sochne matra se jaan chali jati fir aisa kaise ho gya.







Vikraal- mere shrap se mukt hote hi vo bhi us bandhan se mukt ho gya. Jis bandhan me vo bandha hua tha meri shaktiyon ke jariye. Lekin mujhe is baat ka bura nhi laga balki use mere prati bafadari banaye rakhni thi lekin usne apna rasta badal liya or ab use uske kiye ki saza dena jaruri hai. Verna mere jitne samarthak hai kal ko vo bhi aisa kar sakte hai.







Kaya- aapka kehna sahi hai Swamy me abhi jaake use le kar aati hu.






Vikraal- ham prithvi per hi ja rahe hai bahi usko dekhenge




Ye kehkar vikral ne apni powers se ek portal khola or usme ye teeno ghus gye or seddhe nikle prithvi per. Baha pahuchte hi in teeno ke rup apne aap badal gye. Ye dekhne se ab normal insan hi lag rahe the. Baaki ye kya hai ye to sirf ham log hi jante hai.






Ye teeno mumbai pahuche. Baha vikraal ne apni shaktiyo se vanraj ko turant hi dhund liya.





Vikraal ne chhaya ke kaan me kuch kaha or vo baha se use pranam karke gayab ho gyi. Or ye dono pahuche seedhe vanraj ke ghar.




Is waqt vanraj ke ghar me keval uski patni hi thi. Na varsha thi na hi vanraj tha.




Kaya ne door bell bajai to usne darwaja khola




Vikraal- ji namaste. Vanraj bhai hai kya.






V mom- ji nhi vo to bahar gye hai. Aap kon.






Vikraal- ji me unka purana dost hu. Ye meri patni hai kaya. Hame pata chala tha ki vanraj ab yaha rehne lage hai to milne ke liye aa gye ham. Actually London me ham sath me hi padte the. Mujhe bhi scholarship mili thi vanraj ke sath.






Vikraal vanraj ki har ek baat janta tha uski sari janam kundali use pata tha. Or ye baat sunke uski wife ko yakeen ho gya ki ye vanraj ke dost hi honge isliye usne in dono ko andar invite kar liya.






Vo inke liye paani laai.




Vikraal- aap jara unhe call keejiye eme unse baat karta hu.





V mom- ji abhi lagati hu.




Unhone vanraj ko call kiya to kuch rings ke baad usne call utha liya.




Vanraj- ha ji boliye





V mom- ji aapke koi dost aaye hai aapse milne ke liye keh rahe hai London me aap dono sath me padte the.






Vanraj- achha kya naam hai unka.





V mom- ek min. Aapka Naam to me puchhna hi bhul gyi.






Vikraal- ji koi baat nhi. Laaiye mujhe phone deejiye.





Vikral ne unse phone liye or baat karne laga.




Vikraal- hello my friend pehchana mujhe.






Vanraj- ji nhi aapka Naam kya hai. Sayad usse yaad aajaye mujhe.






Vikraal ne bahut hi slow aawaj me apna naam bataya vanraj ko. Jise sunte hi vanraj ke hath pair ek dum se kamp gye.






Vanraj- vikraal don't do that. Pls.






Vikraal- ha pehchan liya na. Ab 15 min. Ke andar ghar pahuch jaao Verna me chala jaunga yaha se.






Vanraj- mumbai me nhi hu itni jaldi nahi pahuch paunga.






Vikraal- kya bhul gye ho ko tum kya ho. 15 min bahut hi jyada hai tumhare liye. Isliye ab sirf 5 min. Hai tumhare pass.


Ye kehkar vikraal ne call cut kar diya






Bahi varsha ki mom ye sab dekh or sun rahi thi lekin unhe samajh me kuch nhi aaraha tha.





V mom- ye aap kya keh rahe the ki 5 min. Me aajaiye. Bhala vo itni jaldi kaise aasakte hai yaha per. Vo to mumbai me hi nhi hai.







Vikraal- kamaal hai aap to sab janti hi hai vanraj ke bare me uski shaktiyo ke bare me fir bhi aisa sawal kar rahi ho ye to galat baat hai.






Ye sunte hi unhe laga bhayankar shock.





V mom- kon ho tum. Kyuki ye baat sirf kuch khaas logo ko hi pata hai.





Vikraal- un khaas logo me main bhi aata hu. Or mera naam hai vikraal.



Ye bolte hi dono apne asli rup me aagye jise dekhte hi vi char kadam pichhe ho gyi uski rooh kamp gyi ye seen dekhke.



Usne kuch socha or darwaje ki taraf bhagi lekin uske pair apnk hi jagah per jam gye vo hil bhi nhi pa rahi thi.




Uske baad kaya uske pass gyi or uska hath pakda or baha se gayab ho gyi. Usko leke. Bahi vikraal fir se apne normal rop me aagya or sofe per baith ke vanraj ka intjar karne laga. Abhi sirf 2 min. Hi hue the ki vanraj ghar ka darwaja kholte hue andar dakhil hua. Or apne samne usne kisi anjan saks ko dekha.






Vikraal- aaiye mahashay kaise hai aap.






Vanraj- vikraal





Vikraal- sahi pehchana.




Ye sunke usne ghar me uski patni ko aawaj lagai lekin koi nhi aaya bahar.





Vanraj- kaha hai meri patni.





Vikraal- filhaal jinda hai or sahi salamat hai. Lekin aisi kab tak rahegi ye tum per nirbhar karega.






Vanraj- kya chahiye tumhe.






Vikraal- paras pathar vo bhi surya ko khabar lage bina.






Vanraj- me aisa nahi kar sakta hu.






Vikraal- afsos fir tumhe apni patni ko hamesha ke liye bhulna hoga.






Vanraj- nhi. Tum samajh nhi rahe ho. Ye kaam tum aasani se kar sakte ho. Lekin me ye nhi kar sakta hu. Or ab to tumhe use dhundne ki bhi jarurat nhi hai.







Vikraal- me janta hu ki ye me aasani se kar sakta hu. Lekin mujhe ye kaam tumse karwana hai. Agar tumne ye kaam kar diya to tumhari jindagi se hamesha ke liye chala jaunga me. Verna tumhari patni or beti dono ko tumse hamesha ke liye cheen lunga me. Kyuki tumhe saza jo deni hai mujhe dhoka dene ki.







Vanraj- maine tumhe koi dhoka nhi diya hai.






Vikraal- achha mere sare raj khol diye tumne or ab kehte hi dhoka nhi diya mujhe. Tum agar surya se milke kahi gayab ho jate apne pariwar ke sath to mujhe koi afsos nhi rehta lekin tumne mera sath chhod ke mere dushman ka sath diya isliye ab tum bhi mere dushman ho or dushman ko kaise kabu me karna hai me achhe se janta hu. Isliye 24 ghante hai tumhare pass mere liye pathar le aao or apni biwi ko le jaao. Or agar aisa na kar paaye to 25be ghante me khud khushi kar lena kyuki itna dard tum seh nhi paoge jitna me tumhe dene ki soch raha hu. Or sabse imp baat mujhe dhoka dene ka vichar tyag dena kyuki meri najar har waqt rahegi tumper. Jaha mujhe thoda sa bhi doubt hua baha tumhari biwi gyi.





Ye kehke vo gayab ho gya.






Bahi vanraj apna sir pakad kar baith gya. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare kaise kare.



Uski sabse badi samasya ye thi ki vo surya ko dhoka kaise de. Or vo varsha ko kya muh dikhayega. Jab vo apni mom ke bare me puchhegi.




Or agar usne kuch dhoke baji karne ki sochi bhi to vikraal ko pata chal jayega or vo turant hi use maar dega.





Bahi ek sawal ye bhi tha ki kaam hone ke baad is baat ki koi gurantee nhi hai ki vo uske pariwar ko chhod dega. Vo pagal hai pura kaam bhi karwa lega or uske pariwar ko bhi maar dega.






Inhi sab socho me gum tha is waqt vanraj vo decide nhi kar pa raha tha ki vo kya kare or kaise kare. Pathar is waqt surya ke ghar me hai. Or baha per ghuste hi Harry ko pata chal jayega ki main use churane aaya hu.










Baaki dekhiye ki ab kya karta hai vanraj.












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Fabulous update bhai

 

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kya writer ji ek hi baar khaya ye to galat hai are saadi ka laddu to aaram se aur alag alag tarike se khana chahiye aur rahi bill ki baat to ye aap per depand karta hai jab chahe bhar dijiye

Bhai jaisa aap keh rahe hai baise bahut hi aaram se or alag alag tarikon se laddu ko jee bhar ke kha liya hai. Or rahi sahi kasar baad me puri kar lenge. Lekin baaki ke kaam to khatm karne padenge na tabhi to free mind se laddu ka maja le payenge.

lovely update

amazing update

Waiting for next

Fantastic update bhai

Fabulous update bhai

Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhne ke liye.



Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya karta hai vanraj kya vo vikraal ke kehne per surya ko dhoka de dega ya kuch or hi hoga janne ke liye sath bane rahe..




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Wlcm back brother and congratulations for ur marriage... ..

To aakhirkar vikral jaag hi gya ...bss kuchh hi din shesh rh gye the black heart ko zinda krne ki avdhi khtm hone me fir chlta lmba intzaar....pr ye kuchh din hi lgta h bdi mushkil se guzarne wale h...kyuki jaagte hi vikral ne apna daav chal diya h vanraj ko puri trha se vivas krke...agr surya ko dhokha dekr patthar ko vikral ko sonp deta h to sabki nazro se nichd gir jaayega agr aisa nhi krega to apni family ko kho dega pr wo janta h ki agr vikral ka kaam kr bhi diya usne to bhi uski family ka bachna namumkin sa hi h...to dekhte h ab vanraj kya krta h kya wo dhokha dega ya surya ko chalaki se sach bta dega ki kya ho rha h ab... Lgta h vanraaj ke sacrifice krne ka waqt aagya h....ek bahadur ki trha pesh aana chahiye usko.....wahi amar ki lovestory ki officially shuruaat ho chuki h pr lgta h uski premika se uske ghr ka hi koi beinteha nafrat krta h ab wo kon h ye to aage pta chlega aur kyu ye bhi...so waiting for the next dekhte h kya bhokaal mchne wala h inn kuchh dino me hi...

Bhoukaal to machne wala hi hai. Kyuki bahut wait ho gya hai is moment ka. Baaki rahi baat vanraj ke secrifice ki to chinta na kare bro abhi vo time nahi aaya hai. Filhaal kya hota hai vanraj kya karta hai dekhiye is update me.





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welcome back bro
bhut hi shandaar update tha bhai

superbb update bro

for new journey of life & walcome back nice update

Gajab shandar dhansu update wapsi bi shandar update ke sath

Bahut pyara update bhai acha laga
Bahut acha laga apko wapas dhek ke
Aise he ap bhadte rahe

Behad shaandaar zaberdast update bhai

Bahot behtareen shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya karta hai vanraj kaise is situation ko handel karta hai or kya vikraal apne mansubo me kaamyab hota bhi hai ya nhi janne ke liye sath bane rahe






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