Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Luffy]

UPDATE - 93













Jaise taise subah hui is waqt jeetu so raha tha or lagta nhi tha ki uski neend aaj jaldi khulne wali thi. Uske chehre per ek kushi chhai hui thi kyuki kal raat use vo mila jiski kalpana bhi usne nhi ki thi kabhi.




Bahi amar bhi gaav me tha or nidhi apne ghar per. Sab sahi se chal raha tha or aage bad raha tha.





Bahi black heart bhi apni sadhna me leen tha or surya ke aaram ke din chal rahe the. Halaki use sab khabar thi ki amar ki life me kya chal raha hai or kal yaha mumbai me kya hua hai. Kyuki Harry surya ke bina permission ke kuch bhi nhi karta hai. Surya ko puri jaankari hoti hai hai ki uske bache kab kya kar rahe hai or harry se kis prakaar ki madad lete hai.



Khair amar to bhul gya tha lekin surya ne Harry subah uthate hi Harry ko jeetu per najar rakhne ko bol diya tha kyuki surya jaanta tha ki jeetu itni aasani se sudharne walo mese nhi hai. Lekin kash surya ne raat me hi usper najar rakhne ko bol diya hota Harry ko. To kamse kam raat me hi uska kaam tamam ho jata. Lekin der aaye saber aaye. Abhi bhi jyada der nhi hui hai. Or abhi bhi mouka hai. Jeetu jaisa ladka power ke nashe me kuch na kuch galti to karega hi or jaise hi kuch galat karega Harry ko pata chal jayega or harry ko pata chala matlab surya ko pata chala. Or fir jeetu ko khair nhi.







Khair amar ne ashk avi or Samar ko bhi bataya ki kal kya hua tha or kisne kiya tha. Jise sunke sabhi ka para ek dum high ho gya tha. Lekin amar ke samjhane per vo log shant ho gye. Or mamle ko samajh bhi gye ki kyu amar ne usko kuch nhi kiya. Verna uske liye to amar akela hi kaafi tha.




Khair jaise taise sham hui or jeetu is waqt udaypur me tha jaisa usse takshak ne kaha tha. Vo apne samay per baha pahuch gya tha. Or takshak ka hi intjar kar raha tha. Or uska intjar bhi jaldi hi khatam ho gya. Kyuki takshak uske pass aagya tha.






Jeetu- ab batao kya karna hai mujhe.






Takshak- bataunga lekin pehle mujhe ye batao ki kisse puchh ke kal raat tumne vo sab kiya.







Jeetu- maine kya kiya.






Takshak- mujhse hoshiyari karne ki kosis bhi mat karna. Kyuki meri najar sab jagah hoti hai or mujhe achhe se pata hai kal raat tumne kya kiya hai.







Jeetu- ohh un ladkiyo ki baat kar rahe ho. Vo to bas apni powers ki testing kar raha tha me or kuch nhi.








Takshak- ha pata hai mujhe power ki testing kar rahe the ki apni hawas mita rahe the.







Jeetu- to usme aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.








Takshak- tujhe abhi kuch nhi pata hai. Sehar me ek khukhar darinda ghum raha hai jo ham jaisi buri shaktiyon ko sungh kar unka khatma kar deta hai. Or agar use teri gandh aajati to kal raat hi tera kaam tamam ho jata fir ho jata tera badla pura.








Ye sunke jeetu thoda hairan hua.






Jeetu- aisa konsa darinda hai jisse aapki bhi fati padi hai.







Takshak- chinta mat kar tera saamna bhi usse jald hi ho jayega.
Fir tumhe bhi pata chal hi jayega ki vo kon hai or kya hai. Or kyu meri usse itni fat rahi hai.







Jeetu- theek hai abse nhi karunga aisa kuch bhi






Takshak- badiya hai. Yahi behtar hai tumhare liye. Ab chalo mere sath tumhare sikaar ke pass.






Jeetu- chalo me bahut exited hu.





Ye kehkar takshak ne jeetu ka hath pakada or agle hi sec vo log usi jheel ke pass jhadiye me pahuch gye.





Jeetu- ye kaha le aaye mujhe.






Takshak- ahhh ye dekho tumhara sikar tumhare saamne hai. Vo raha amar or uske bhai bahen. Tu agar chahe to uski bahen ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai meri taraf se chhut hai. Mujhe bas mera badla chahiye or isse tera badla bhi pura hoga.





Ye sunke jeetu ne Gour se ashk ko dekha or vo usi pal nidhi ko bhul gya. Uske muh se maar tapakne lagi.








Jeetu- ma kasam kya kadak maal hai. Isper to hajar nidhi kurban hai.







Ye sunke takshak hasne laga.




Takshak- tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Chal shuru ho ja. Maar daal sabko. Baaki me yahi rahunga. Taaki agar tujhe madad ki jarurat pade to me kar saku.






Jeetu- theek hai.







Bahi Harry ye sab dekh raha tha. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad to jarur hai. Kyuki usne jeetu ke sath wale ki powers ko dekha isliye usne turant hi mujhe vo saari info di. Or me sunte hi bhaga gaav ke liye.







Bahi jeetu ek dum se amar ke saamne aagya.





Jeetu- kyu re bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai khud ko. Tujhe me nhi chhodne wala saale tune mere or nidhi ke beech duriya bana di.






Ye sunke amar or baaki sab ne peeche mud ke dekha.



Or jaise hi amar ne jeetu ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki usne expect nhi kiya tha ki jeetu yaha tak pahuch jayega.





Amar- tu yaha kaise.







Jeetu- aagya me tujhe dhundte dhundte. Aaj tu nhi bachega.







Amar- marna hai kya. Bhag ja yahan se. Vo nidhi ka bhai hai tu isliye abhi tak apne pairo per khada hai verna vo haalat karta teri ki agle 7 janam tak langda paida hota tu. Or itna sab hone ke baad bhi teri akal thikane per nhi aai jo yaha tak chala aaya.








Jeetu- meri akal thikane per hi hai. Or achha hua jo me yaha aagya ab nidhi ke sath teri bahen ko bhi me apna banaunga. Vakai me kya kamal ki cheez hai.






Itna bolna tha ki use ek jordaar kick lagi jisse uska thoda santulan bigad gya lekin vo gira nhi. Ye kick thi amar ki.






Jeetu- dum nhi laga rahe ho tum. Thoda or jor lagao.





Ye kehkar jeetu ek dum adig amar ke saamne khada ho gya.




Bahi amar ne ek jordaar punch mara unke seene me dil ke just uper.




Or is punch ko jeetu sayad hi kabhi bhul paaye. Kyuki agar usne powers nhi hoti to is punch se uska raam naam satya ho hi jata. Lekin uski powers ne uski jaan bacha ki lekin use girne se nhi bacha paya. Bahi jeetu ko bahut jor se laga ye punch. Jisse vo ek dum se bokhla sa gya. Use yakeen nhi hua ki amar me itni takat hai. Or use is baat per yakeen ho gya ki ye koi aam insan to nhi hai matlab takshak sahi keh raha tha.




Bahi use kya pata ki amar to normal hi hai. Ye jo power uske hatho me hai ye use virasat me mili hai apne purkho se.







Amar- ab aaya maja. Beta bhale hi tu strong ho bahut lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki ye hath bhi kam nhi hai.






Jeetu- bakai me bahut dum hai I'm hatho me.





Ye kehkar jeetu khada hua.



Or usne achanak se apni aankho se lazor nikalna shuru kar diya. Bahi amar ne furti dikhate hue apni position badli or uski lazor se bach gya. Bahi avi Samar ashk or varsha bhi yaha baha ho gye kyuki lazor un per bhi nishana laga rahi thi.





Bahi lazor ke jameen se takrane se neeche ki ghaas or ped vagera jal gye the.





Bahi is waqt jeetu ki najar dusro per thi isliye usne jeetu ke peeche jaake jump maarke apne ghutne ki maar uski peeth per maari jisse vo jhuk gya.





Bahi uski anakho se lazor nikalna band ho gya. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar Samar ne ek jordaar kick uski naak per maari jisse vo ulti gulati khate hue jameen per pasar gya.




Ye mouka dekhke amar me uski garden ko daboch liya apne hatho me. Or jor se daba diya. Amar ne apna pura dabav uski peeth per banaya hua tha jisse vo uth nhi pa raha tha. Uske keval hath hi khule hue the. Jinka vo pura jor laga raha tha. Uthne ke liye. To Samar ne uske hatho ko pakad kar daba liya. Ab vo keval tadap hi raha tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kare kaise is qaid se aazad ho.






Yaha jeetu me saaf kami dikh rahi thi technique ki. Bhale hi insan ke pass power ho. Lekin agar uske pass un power ko istemaal karne ki technique nhi hai to vo koi jung nhi jeet sakta. Bahi amar or Samar bachpan se hi self defence ki training lete aarahe hai. Unhe pata hai ki kisko kaise kabu karna hai.







Bahi dur se me bhi ye najara dekh raha tha or kush ho raha tha ki kaise bacho ne usko kabu kar liya.







Amar- bol haramjade. Maja aaya.






Jeetu- maja to aaya lekin jyada nhi.




Ye kehkar jeetu ne apna pura jor laga diya or ek dum se khada ho gya. Bahi is jor se amar or Samar dono hi alag alag disha me udte hue dur ja gire.





Jeetu- ab maja aaya kamino.






Ye kehkar vo sabse pehle amar ke pass gya speed se. Or usne amar ko utha liya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Bahi tab tak Samar or avi dono hi jeetu ke pass aaye or usper hamla karne lage lekin abki baar vo apni speed ka pura istemaal kar raha tha. Jis bajah se avi or Samar ke har baar khali ja rahe the.





Bahi takshak ye sab dekhke bahut kush ho raha tha. Use apna plan anjaam tak pahuchta hua najar aaraha tha. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki uska baap uske aas pass hi moujud hai.








Abki baar bazi puri tarah se palat gyi thi. Kyuki jeetu akela hi teeno per bhari pad raha tha. Or iska kaaran keval itna tha ki jeetu apni super power ka istemaal kar raha tha. Bahi ye teeno apni normal power ka istemaal kar rahe the.






Jeetu ne teeno ki hi haalat tight kar rakhi thi. Lekin the to sabhi surya ke hi bache. Or is bajah se jeetu unhe jeet nhi pa raha tha. Kyuki girte hi vo fir se khade ho rahe the. Or is bajah se jeetu kaafi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi avi samajh gya tha ki ye aise control me nhi aayega isliye usne apne mobile me kuch kiya or lete lete hi wait karne laga.





Tabhi sabhi ko najar aasmaan me gyi jaha se kuch udta hua jameen per aa raha tha. Use dekhke aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi ulka pind ho. Kyuki uski speed bahut tez thi.





Bahi avi ke chehre per smile aai or vo jaldi se khada hua. Or jeetu ki taraf bhaga apni speed se




Bahi vo udti hui cheez avi se takarai lekin isse avi ko kuch fark nhi pada. Balki avi ke charo taraf usne ek kavach ka aakar le liya. Like iron man. Avi abhi bhi douda hua hi ja raha tha.or isi beech avi puri tarah se iron man ban gya tha.




Bahi ye najar baha moujud sabhi ne dekha or dekhte hi jeetu ko chhodke sabhi ke chehre per hasi aagyi. Or sabne apna matha peet liya. Kyuki vo aaj real me iron man dekh rahe the. Or avi ke dimaag ki daad de rahe the. Ashk ne jordaar seeti bajai avi ke liye.



Bahi jeetu ek dum se hairan tha. Use laga kahi Tony stark sach me to yaha nhi aagya. Vo thoda hairan pareshan sa bahi per khada raha. Or isi beeche use ek jabardast punch laga jiski bajah se vo udta hua dur ja girne laga. Tabhi avi ne apne hatho se power generate ki or jeetu ke uper use chhodna start kar diya.





Bhale hi jeetu ka sarir bajr jaisa kathor ho lekin arc reactor ki power ka jabardast prahar laga use. Jisse uske sarir per kai jagah jalne ke nishan aagye.





Bahi dur se jab maine ye seen dekha to mere bhi hosh udd gye or mere chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.



Or takshak ne jab ye dekha to uska haal bhi jeetu jaisa hi tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye aakhir hai kya. Ye kis tarah ki power hai.







Khair aage dekhte hai avi or kya kya kaarname karta hai.

















To be continue………………………..

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[Luffy]

UPDATE - 94













avi- khada ho kameene. Tujhe batata hu aaj ki ham akhir me cheez kya hai.







Ye sunke jeetu jo thoda jhakmi hua tha dheere dheere khada hua. Uske ghaav nhi bhare the. Na hi bharne wale the. Kyuki uske pass ye power thi hi nhi.







Jeetu khada hua or apne aap dekha. Use khud ke ghav dikhe jisse usko gussa aane lagi.


Or usne jordaar lazor avi per chhodi.



Bahi avi ready tha iske liye. Vo hawa me udd gya or jor se uske muh per punch mara or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi usne uske thobde per kai baar kiye. Or apna panja pura jhalke uske thobde per rakh diya or jor se apni power ka jhatka uske thobde per diya. Ye jhatka use bahut jor se laga uska pura thobda isme sulag gya. Or vo dard me tadapane laga. Or jameen per apna chehra pakad kar let gya. Bahi avi ne agla baar kiya uske main part per. Jaha bhi use tagda jhatka laga.




Aisa lag raha tha jaise jeetu ki powers uska sath chhodne lagi hai. Kyuki use ab bahut dard ho raha tha. Uska sarir kamjor sa padta ja raha tha.







Takshak bhi ye sab dekh raha tha or vo samajh gya tha ki ye jyada der tak nhi tikega isliye ab usne saamne jaane ka Faisla kiya. Bahar jaane se pehle use sabhi jagah dekha jab use dur dur tak koi dikhai nhi diya to vo bahar aaya.





Or vo chupke se ashk ke peechhe gya or use daboch liya




Takshak- ruk jaao chhod do use. Verna iska kaam tamam karne me mujhe jara bhi der nhi lagegi.





Ye aawaj sunte hi sabhi ne oechhe mud ke dekha or sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki takshak is waqt aadhe insan or aadhe naag ke rup me tha. Usne ashk ko garden se pakad rakha tha.or uska rup bakai me bahut bada or vishal tha.






amar- ab ye kya nai musibat hai. Sala ye ho kya raha hai. Ye lounda apni aankho se lazor nikaal raha hai. Or ye tuchhadhari naag








Samar- dekh ashk se dur hatja. Verna itne tukde karunga ki agle are janam tere unko batorne me hi nikal jayenge. Dur hat.






Ye Lalkaar aisi thi ki koi kamjor hota to mut deta. Kuch had tak to takshak bhi hill gya lekin usne jaldi hi khud ko sambhala








Takshak- bache ye ruabb idhar nahi kaam aayega. Mere aadmi ko chhod do me isko chhod dunga.






Samar- hamne use pakada hi nhi to chhodenge kya. Vo dala hai neeche ise utha or nikal le yaha se. Verna sach me aaj tera aakhiri din hoga. Tu janta nhi tune kitni badi galti ki hai ashk per hath dalke. Uske papa ko jaanta hai na.







Takshak- ha janta hu surya ko. Or usne jitna hamara nuksan kiya hai uske badle ye chhota sa tohfa kaafi hoga uski bharpai ke liye.







Itni der me jeetu thoda normal ho gya tha.



Or is mouke ka fayeda usne uthaya or pechhe se avi per lazor chhod di. Lazor ka asar avi ke suit per bahut hi kam ho raha tha. Vibranium se jo bana tha uska suit. Lekin iska impact ise jarur mehsus hua kyuki vo aage ko thoda pressure se chala gya or jameen per let gya. Bahi jeetu ne lazor ko band nhi kiya or chhodta hi raha avi per.





Bahi ye sab dekh ke ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Uski anakho ke saamne uske bhaiyo ki halat patli ho rahi ho vo kaise dekh sakti hai ye sab.




In sab me varsha per kisi ka dhyan hi nhi gya. Kyuki vo pehle hi ghar chali gyi thi amar ke papa ko bulane ke liye. Kyuki vo samajh gyi thi ki yaha mamla bigadne wala hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha aankho se.



Or vo is waqt ghar pahuch hi gyi thi. Or use bahar hi veer ki car dikh gyi jisme baithke vo office se ghar aaya tha or car se nikal hi raha tha.







Varsha- uncle pls jaldi chaliye mere. Sath.





Bahi veer ne jab varsha ki aisi haalat dekhi to vo hairan ho gya.




Veer- shant ho jaao or batao kya hua tum itna haff kyu rahi ho. Baaki sab kaha hai.






Varsha- uncle jheel ke kinare kisi anjaan shakti ne hamla kiya hai. Ek ladka aaya hai amar se ladne jo apni aankho se lazor chhod raha hai. Vo normal nhi hai. Isse pehle kuch galat ho jaaye pls chaliye.





Ye sunke veer ka matha ghum gya. Usne varsha ko bahi rukne ko kaha or use andar bhej diya. Bahi amar tez raftar se doudta hua jheel ke pass jaane laga.




Abhi jheel ke pass pahuchne hi wala tha ki maine veer ko raste me hi rok liya




Or mujhe dekhke veer ki jaan me jaan aai.





Veer- hai vo jheel kinare kya ho raha hai.






Main- aao dikhata hu.




Main bhai ko leke usi jagah aaya jaha se me ab tak sab dekh raha tha.




Main- vo dekhiye bache kaise baha duri se unka mukabla kar rahe hai.






Bhai- tu pagal hai kya unki madad karne kyu nhi gya tu.






Main- bhai me yaha isiliye to ruka hua hu. Taaki waqt padne per unki madad kar saku. Lekin bache itni bahaduri or akalmandi se unhe sambhal rahe hai ki baha jaane ka man hi nhi kar raha hai. Or dusri baat unko aiso se nipatne ka abhyas karna chahiye kya pata kab iski noubat sajaye. Ye samajh lo unki traning chal rahi hai.







Bhai- achha. Baise ye ladka hai kon. Or ye aadha naag kon hai.





Main- ye ladka aapki hone wali bahu ka aashiq hai. Or iska pata nhi sayad black heart ka koi samarthak hoga.







Ye sunke bhai choukee




Bhai- kya kaha tune. Meri bahu.






Main- ha bhai amar ki gf ka aashiq hai. Kal iski band bajai amar ne aaj ye uska badla lene aagya powers ke sath. Or i m sure ye powers use is aadhe naag ne hi di hongi.







Bhai- badiya hai. Baise ab kya karne ka irada hai ashk ko pakad liya hai usne.






Main- bahi me dekhna chahta hu ki is situation ko kaise ye log handle karte hai.








Bhai- ok dekhte hai.










Ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare or kaise kare. Takshak ka hath uske muh ke ekdum pass tha isliye usne usne hath me jor se kaat liya. Or is achanak kaatne se takshak ki cheekh nikal gyi or uski pakad bhi dheeli hogyi ashk per or isi ka fayeda utha kar ashk takshak ke changul se aazad ho gyi. Or ek pathar usne uthaya or nishana laga kar use fel diya. Or vo pathar super speed se jeetu ki aankh me ghus gya. Or me sach kahunga uski ek aankh kaam se chali gyi. Or jeetu is dard me tadapane laga. Bahi teeno ne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya. Avi udd ke gya takshak ke pass to baaki dono ne jeetu ko pakad liya. Or Samar ne apni ungli se uski dusri aankh bhi fod daali. Jisse jeetu dard me tilbila gya. Use itna dard ho raha tha jiski koi seema nhi tha.







Bahi dusri taraf avi udta hua takshak ki taraf gya bahi beech beech me takshak apni puchh se ji ki kaafi lumbi thi avi ko maarne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin avi kaafi fast tha or uske har ek war se bach ke vo us tak pahuch hi gya or apne dono hatho ko aage karke ek sath usper energy ko chhoda or iska tagda jhatka laga usko. Or vo flat jameen per let gya. Bahi avi ne apne arm se ek sword banai or jor se uske pet per gira jisse us sword ne uske 2 tukde kar diye.






Lekin iska asar jyada nhi hua kyuki ab takshak apne insani rup me aagya tha. Or uske hatho me bhi ek sword thi.






Takshak- kya baat hai tin ke dibbe. Ab dikha kitna dum hai.





Ye kehkar usne uchhal kar avi per hamla kiya lekin avi ne hawa me hi use ek kick masti or vo is prahaar se dur ja gira.



Uske girte hi avi hawa me hi punch ki position leke tezi se neeche uske thobde ki taraf gya.



Bahi takshak samajh gya ki ab kya hone wala hai isliye vi jaldi se move kar gya or avi ka punch uski jagah jameen me dhas gya.



Avi jaldi se khada hua or usne ek chhoti si missile takshak ke uper nishana laga kar chhod di. Takshak kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo missile usse takta gyi or ek tez dhamaka sabhi ke kaano me gunja.



Charo taraf dhua or aag dikhne lagi.





Avi isme thoda carefree hogya tabhi achanak se use ek jordaar kick lagi or vo udta hua thodi dur girne hi wala tha ki usne beech hawa me udna shuru kar diya or full speed se udta hua gya or ek or jhatka mara energy ka. Jisse vo thodi dur ja gira.





Bahi dusri taraf jeetu ka kaam to almost tamam hi hi gya tha. Uski dono aankhe foot chuki thi. Or vo dard me behosh ho chuka tha. Bahi baaki ke teeno log bas in dono ki fight dekh rahe the. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki akhir ye fight jeet kon raha hai or is naag ka kaise ant hoga.






Bahi takshak ka bhi dimaag kharab ho raha tha kyuki usper ye bacha bhari pad raha hai. Na hi use jeetne de raha tha balki ulta usi ki band baja raha tha.





Isliye usne apni power ka istemaal karne ka socha or usne apni talvar ko hath me pakda or apne hatho ko joda. Bahi avi or baaki dekhne lage ki ye kya kar raha hai.





Bahi takshak ne kuch mantra pade or apna muh khola. Or uske muh kholte hi uske muh se kuch nikalne laga kuch dhua type or charo taraf failne laga.


Or itna Ghana failne laga ki khud ke hath bhi na dikhe kisi dusre ko dekhne ki baat to chhod hi do.










Ab dekhte hai is dhuye me kya karta hai takshak or surya or veer kab tak aise dekhte hai is fight ko.


Or avi or baaki kaise is takshak ko harate hai.

















To be continue………………………..

Mind blowing update bro

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 89













Amar payal or nidhi bahi baithe rahe or harry ke call ka wait karne lage. To thodi hi der me usne amar se contact kiya.







Harry- sir no. To band hai filhaal lekin jab ye no. Chalu tha or jab ye msg bheje gye the maine tab ki location check ki or us insan ka lata laga liya jisne ye photos send ki thi.






Amar- great to batao kon hai vo or kaha milega. Or ha chacha ko beech me mat bhejna me sambhal lunga.







Harry- ok sir. Vo ladka filhaal filhaal uski shop per hai. Ek net cafe ki shop chalata hai vo.nehru nagar me hai sumit net cafe naam se. Maine uski location aapko bhen di hai aap check karle.





Amar- ok. Ek kaam karo ek car bhejo yaha ham usi se jayenge.






Harry- already bhej di hai or pahuch bhi gyi hai. Aap dekh lo.





Amar- thanks Harry. Byy.




Harry- ok sir. Byy.





Ye kehkar connection kata or amar khada hua or uske sath baaki dono bhi.





Amar- chalo uska pata chal gya hai jisne ye photos tumhe send ki thi.





Payal- baise kon hai vo.





Amar- pata nhi koi cafe wala hai sumit naam ka cafe chalata hai. Baaki bahi Chalke dekhte hai kon hai kya hai.







Nidhi- jaldi chalo aaj uski khair nhi hai.




Ye kehkar nidhi aage badi or amar or payal uske pechhe. Bahar aaye to car khadi hui thi. RR



Payal to dekhte hi gir gyi.





Payal- isme jayenge ham.





Amar- ha jald bazi me yahi available thi to aagyi. Itni low car me baithne ki aadat si hi mit gyi hai ab.





Ye sunke payal ne apni aankhe chada li. Or tirchhi nigahon se amar ko dekha.


Jab tak nidhi aage ki seat per baith gyi or amar gya driving seat per or payal pechhe baith gyi. Or amar ne car ko aage bada diya. Raste me thoda bahut traffic mila lekin use aasani se paar karte hue vo nehru nagar pahuch gye. Amar ke mob. Me live location chal rahi thi. Or amar usi raste per apni car ko aage badhata gya or akhir me vo log pahuch hi gye ek chaurahe per jaha per ek kone me chhoti si dukan thi sumit net cafe.




Amar ne car ko ek jagah park kiya or teeno car se utar kar uski shop ke pass chale gye.




Harry ne uski ek photo bhi bheji thi jisse inko thoda andaja rahe ki akhir hai kon vo.




Baha pahuch kar amar ne us photo wale ko dhunda to vo apne counter per hi baitha dikh gya. Net chala raha tha.





To amar uske pass gya.




Amar- hii.




Ye sunke usne apni mundi uper ki or jaise hi amar ko dekha uski aankhe chodi ho gyi.





Amar- kya baat hai yaar bahut khatarnaak editing karte ho tum to. Kya photos banai hai meri.





Ye sunke use paseena aane laga. Lekin usne socha ki agar abhi kamjor pada to bahut pitaai lagegi. Isliye usne thodi himmat se bola.






Sumit- kon ho bhai kis bare me baat kar rahe ho. Kya me janta hu tumhe.






Amar- kamaal hai ye photos tumne edit karke kisi ko bheji or ab puchh rahe ho ki jante ho mujhe.






Ye sunke usne apna thok andar liya or fir se bola.






Sumit- dekhiye yaha ye sab nhi hota hai me ye kaam nhi karta hu. Jarur aapko koi galatfehmi hui hai.
Pls aap jaiye yaha se.







Amar- lagta hai tum aise nhi manoge. Mujhe cyber police ki madad leni hi padegi.


Ye kehkar amar ne apna phone nikala or vijay ko call kiya.





Amar- hii uncle



Vijay- hii amar kaise ho.




Amar- badiya hu uncle. Darashal mujhe aapki thodi help chahiye hai.





Vijay- ha bolo.






Amar- uncle aaj kisi ne meri kuch ashleel photos edit karke meri ek friend ko send kardi. Halaki Harry ne bataya mujhe ki vo kon hai lekin vo apna jurm kabul nhi kar raha hai. Isliye aap aao jara or cyber walo ko leke aao or isse badiya se puchhtachh karo. I m sure jab aapke dabde padenge to apne aap sab bak dega ki kyu kiya ye sab isne.







Vijay- address bhejo ham pahuchte hai.




Amar- maine bhej diya hai aap jaldi aao.





Vijay- 15 min. Me pahuchte hai





Amar- ok uncle.




Ye kehkar amar ne call cut kar diya.



Bahi jab usne ye sab suna to uski to pent hi geeli ho gyi. Use sach me samajh nhi aaya ki ab vo akhir kare to kya kare. Kyuki vo aise chhote mote kaam paiso ke liye karta rehta hai. Or uska backup bhi uske computer me available tha. Isliye usne sabse pehle apne computer ko totally formate maarne ki try ki. Lekin amar uske baaju me hi tha or jaise hi usne dekha ki ye kuch karne laga hai jaldi me. To amar ne uski coller ko pakda or uski seat se utha kar use apne baju me baitha liya.






Amar- jo karna hai baad me kar lena. Itni jaldi kya hai karne ki. Jail me bahut time milega.





Sumit- dekho tum ye theek nhi kar rahe ho. Me tumhe police ke hawale kar dunga.





Amar- ha kar dena police yahi to aarahi hai. Kar dena.





Amar ne use ladke ke pakad rakha tha. Taaki vo bhagne ki kosis na kare. Bahi uska dill bahut hi hoti se dhadak raha tha or uska pura sarir halke halke kamp raha tha. Or aisi situation aksar dekhi jati hai logo me jab uski koi chori bahut jaldi unki ummid ke ulte pakde jaati hai to. Jiske baare me unhone kabhi socha bhi na ho or vo achanak se ho jaaye to kaisa lagta hai baisa hi is waqt sumit ko lag raha tha. Bahi payal or nidhi chupchhap bas use hi dekh rahi thi. Man to unka bhi bahut kuchh karne ka ho raha tha lekin vo filhaal ruki hui thi. Taaki ek baar ye kabul karle fir dekhte hai ise.






Bahi theek 15 min. Baad 2 police ki jeep usi dukaan ke saamne aake ruki. Or unhe dekhte hi uski haalat or kharab hone lagi. Use laga ab to vo gya kaam se.






Vijay- Amar




Amar- ha uncle idhar.





Amar ki aawaj sunke vo sabhi andar aaye




Vijay- to yahi hai vo. Kyu be. Bahut shock hai editing ka. Chal teri editing nikalta hu me jail me. Saale sari zindagi tujhe jail me na baithaya to bolna tu. Aap sabhi iske computer check keejiye or unhe seize keejiye




Ye sunte hi 2 log ek ek computer per baith gye. Or jab unhone uska computer check kiya to usme aisi kai photos thi jinhen edit kiya gya tha. Kuch per ladkiyo ke chehre lagaye gye the to kuch per ladko ke.




Or ye sab dekhte hi vijay ne lagaya use kheech kar. Or vo jameen per dhul chatne laga. Or vijay use dusra maarta usse pehle hi usne unke pair pakad liya








Sumit- maaf kar do sir. Maine hi edit kiya tha inka bhi photo or ye baaki sab bhi. Lekin sir ye me apne liye nhi karta hu. Balki mujhe paise dete hai log aisa karne ke liye. Unko kisi na kisi ko badnaam karna hota hai to ye sabse best trick hoti hai. Pls sir maaf kar deejiye. Aainda se nahi karunga pls sir







Vi gidgidane laga tha. Bahi amar aagye gussa or amar ne baise hi khade khade uske thobde per maari ek laat. Or itni jordaar thi ki sale ke kuch dant to hil hi gye honge kyuki muh se khun jo tapakane laga tha. Or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi amar ne use uthaya or 3k jordaar punch mara uske naak per. Or ye hogya uska kaam khatam. Sala do hi baar me behosh ho gya. Ye dekhke vijay ne amar ko roka. Or use jor se pakad liya.






Vijay- bas kar mar jayega vo. Abhi usse pata lagana hai ki tumhari photos edit karne ko kisne kaha tha ise. Fir uski jitni chahe utni dhulai kar lena.




Ye sunke amar thoda thanda hua. Bahi ek hawaldaar ne uske muh per paani dala jisse vo turant hi hosh me aagya or aate hi jordaar karah nikli uske muh se. Or amar ko dekhke vo vijay ke pass chala gya.






Sumit- pls sir bacha leejiye aap jo kahenge vo karunga pls sir.






Vijay- sach sach bata kisne kaha tha tujhe iski photo edit karne ke liye. Bata.







Sumit- sir sach keh raha hu. Me use nhi jaanta hu. Uska mujhe kal phone aaya tha or ek parcel me inki photo. Or usne phone per kaha tha ki edit kardo kisi or ke sath. Baaki mera jo bhi charge hota hai vo usne usi packet me rakh kar pahucha diya tha. Baaki mujhe koi idea nahi hai ko vo kon tha or kyu usne aisa karne ko kaha tha. Baad me jab photos ready hui to usne mujhse kaha ki me hi ye photo ek no. Per bhej du. Jo sayad in madam ka no. Tha. Kyuki usme inki dp lagi thi.bas mujhe or kuch nhi pata hai.






Ye sunke vijay ko bhi gussa aagyu or usne bhi ek rakh diya uske thobde per.





Vijay- vo lifafa or no. Batao hame.




Sumit pagalo ki tarah khada hua or usne vo lifafa nikala or usme vo photo or paise abhi bhi rakhe hue the. Or fir usne apne mobile me vo no. Bataya or uski time bhi or uski recording bhi sunai usne ham sabhi ko.




Hamme se koi bhi uski aawaj nhi pehchanta tha. Sayad usne aawaj badal kar baat ki hogi. Bahi vo no. Bhi public phone ka tha. Na ki kisi mobile ka. Lekin isse Harry pata laga hi lega ki vo kon tha or kya tha. Bahi us recording me bahi sab baate thi jo sumit ne batai thi.






Baaki ek baat to thi ye jo bhi tha tha bahut hi shatir. Usne kitni aasani se apna kaam karwa kiya or dur dur tak uska naam bhi nhi aaya. Vakai me kaafi soch samajh kar ye kiya usne. Or uske itna smart hone ka shrey jata hai crime petrol CID or movies ko. Jinse crime band karne ki jagah log naye crime ko kaise anjam dena hai ye seekhte hai.police unhe kaha or kaise pakad sakti hai ye cheeze vo pehle hi calculate kar lete hai. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki hamare pass out of syllabus me Harry hai. Jo achhe se achhe crime seen ko chutkiyo me solve kar deta hai. Past ki footage dekh ke.




Uske baad vijay ne use baithaya jeep me or uski dukaan ko kiya seize or uske computer ko bhi or use le gye thane. Bahi ham bhi unke pechhe baha gye. Jaha pahuch kar hamne apni complaint darz karwai or unhone use arrest karke andar daal diya.



Bahi ab bhi asli apradi bahar hi ghum raha tha or ab uski baari thi.

Baaki ab dekhte hai vo pakdata hai ya nahi.














To be continue………………………..

Mast update bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 90















Amar- uncle ab hame chalna chahiye jara us pco ka bhi haal dekh le.






Vijay- ha chalo Chalke dekhte hai.





Uske baad ham charo gye us Pco ke pass. Vijay ne uske no. Se uski location ka pata laga liya tha. Vo PCo bahi nehru nagar me hi ek kone me bana hua tha. Or uski haalat dekhke hi lag raha tha ki yaha per kon aaya kon gya kuch pata nhi chalta agar Harry nhi hota to.





Vijay- wah beta kya jagah dhundi haj call karne ke liye.





Amar- hmm lagta hai harry ki madad firse leni padegi.





Vijay- le lo bhai. Hamara bhi time bachega.




Ye sunke amar ne Harry se contact kiya.




Harry- ha sir.





Amar- bas last kaam bacha hai.






Harry- ha mujhe pata hai. Or me usi kaam me laga hua hu. Jaldi hi batata hu pata lagte hi.






Amar- timing pata hai.






Harry- ha pata hai. Rukiye me batata hu.






Amar- thanks Harry. Jaldi batao.




Ye kehkar connection kata.





Amar- vo pata kar raha hai jaldi hi bata dega.





Vijay- good.





Payal- mera ek sawal hai





Amar- ha puchho.






Payal- ye Harry akhir hai kon. Jo itna smart hai ki itni jaldi sab pata laga leta hai.





Ye sunkar amar or vijay ek dusre ko dekhne lage or muskurane lage.





Amar- ye mera ek friend hai jo kamaal ka hacker hai. Or ham sabki security yahi sambhalta hai. Or ye jo itni jaldi ye sab information nikalta hai uska kaaran hai settelite jo hamari khud ki hai. Jisse vo control karta hai.







Ye sunke nidhi or payal dono ne hi apne apne muh per hath rakh diya.





Payal- kitna paisa hai tumhare pass.aise kitne ameer hi tum






Amar- keh pana muskil hai. Agar aaj sare paise ginane baithenge to mahina usi me nikal jayega to bhi ginti khatam nhi hogi. Kyuki har ek sec hamara paisa badta hi jata hai. Itna jitna log soch bhi nhi sakte. Bas ham dikhate nhi hai. Mere papa or dono chacha sara business sambhalte hai.






Payal- vakai me pehle mujhe lagta tha ki tum ek ameer insan ho lekin ab vo galat fehmi dur ho gyi tum to Raees ho.





Amar- keh sakti ho. Hamara maharajo ka khandaan hai.






Nidhi- konse raja ke vanshaj hai aap






Amar- GREAT MAHARANA PRATAP SINGH SISODIYA.





YE naam sunte hi dono ko kadak jhatka laga. Unke muh se shabd nikalna hi band ho gye.







Nidhi- achha isi liye us din aap keh rahe the ki udaypur ka palace aapka hi hai. Mujhe laga aap aise hi majak me keh rahe hai.





Amar- ha





Payal- vakai aaj aapse milke me to bahut kush hu. Pata hai me bahut badi fan hun MAHARAN PRATAP KI. unki kahani jab bhi sunti or padti hu. Pure tan badan me ek alag hi josh bhar jata hai. Aisa lagta hai kash me us time per paida hui hoti to unke sath ek 2 ladai to jarur ladti.






Amar- ab aisa hona to sambhav nhi hai. Baaki kya keh sakte hai sayad aap us time lee unke sath hui ho. Kisi janam me kya keh sakte hai.




Ye sunte hi payal ke chehre per ek alag hi smile aagyu ye soch ke ki kash aisa sach me hua ho.





Nidhi- ab ye bhi bata deejiye ki aap itni jaldi baha se yaha kaise aajate hai. Kya choper se aate ho aap.






Amar- choper to kaafi slow hai hamare liye. Me to usse bhi dhansu item se aata hu.






Payal- kisse.




Amar- dikha dunga pehle ye sab nipat jaaye.




Tab tak Harry ka phone aagya.





Amar- ha Harry koi good news






Harry- ha sir uski photo aapke mobile per bhej di hai check kar leejiye. Or ithink nidhi mam janti hai ise. Isliye unse puchh leejiye.






Amar- pakka





Harry- 100% sure sir.





Amar- good work Harry and thanks






Harry- your welcome sir. Baise iski jaankari surya sir ko deni hai ki nhi.







Amar- khabar daar jo unko kuch bhi bataya to. Hamesha ke liye shutdown kar dunga tumhe me. Pls Harry samjha Karo.






Harry- samajh gya sir.





Amar- good thanks.





Ye kehkar call cut gya.





Vijay- kya hua pata chala.





Amar- ha. Nidhi jara ye photo dekho to.




Amar ne vo photo nikali or nidhi ko dikhai.



Or jaise hi nidhi ne vo photo dekhi uske hosh udd gye.




Nidhi- what ye




Payal ne ye reaction dekha or vo bhi pass me aai or jaise hi usne bhi vo photo dekhi uske bhi hosh udd gye.




Payal- ye hai in sabke pechhe.





Ye sab dekhke amar or vijay dono hi confuse the ki ye akhir hai kon






Vijay- aao dono janti ho ise.




Amar- ha kon hai ye.






Ye sawal sunke payal or nidhi ek dusre ka chehra dekhne lagi. Tabhi payal ne aoni aankho se hami bhari nidhi ko.




Nidhi- actually ye mera hi cousine hai. Mere papa ki bahen ka ladka. Hamare sath hi rehta hai hamare hi ghar me. Or iska naam hai jeetu. Yahi rehke padai karta hai ye.





Ye sunke baha khade sabhi ke dimaag ke fuse udd gye the. Or ab amar or vijay ek dusre ka chehra dekh rahe the.





Vijay- ab kya karna hai tum hi batao nidhi. Agar kahi to me ise aarest kar lunga or agar kahogi to chhod dunga.








Nidhi- usse pehle mujhe janna hai ki isne ye harkat akhir ki kyu hai. Uske baad hi me decide kar paungi.






Vijay- ye bhi sahi hai. Amar Harry ko bolo vo recording hame bhej de with voice.





Amar- usne already bhen di hai.





Vijay- ab nidhi pata karo ye aakhir hai kaha. Ghar per hai ya kahi or.






Bahi usi samay Harry ne amar ko chupke se mob. Me koi msg diya.





Jise dekhke amar choukanna ho gya.





Amar vijay ke pass gya or uske kaan me bahi sandesh suna diya jise sunke vo bhi choukanna ho gya.






Ye dekhke nidhi or payal ek dum hairan the.





Nidhi- kya hua.




Amar- aapke cousine is waqt yahi kahi hai or hame dekh rahe hai. Ab dua karo ki usne hamari baate na suni ho.





Ye sunke donk hi shocked reh gyi. Or yaha baha dekhne lagi. Lekin unhe jeetu kahi bhi nhi dikh raha tha.




Amar- Harry kaha hai vo.





Harry- sir samne wali gali me seediya lagi hui hai jo seedhi samne wali building ke terrace per jaati hai. Bahi hai vo.






Amar- badiya. Aaiye mere sath.




Ye sunke sabhi amar ke peechhe chalne lage amar or baaki sabhi baha se aise nikle jaise baha se vo kahi or ja rahe ho. Lekin vo sabhi galiyon me se hote hue unhi seediyi tak pahuch gye or seedha gye uper jaha jeetu baitha hua charo taraf dekh raha tha kyuki use ab vo dikhai nhi de rahe the.




Tabhi use uske peechhe se nidhi ko aawaj aai.





Nidhi- yaha kya kar rahe ho jeetu.





Ye sunke vo ek dum seedha khada reh gya or sochne laga ki ab kya karu. Kaise yaha se bachke niklu.



Bahi ye baat amar or vijay jante the ki ye bachke bhagne ki kosis jarur karega isliye vijay uske pass gya or uske hath ko pakad liya jor se.




Vijay- beta bhagne ki kosis to chhodo sochna bhi mat veena encounter ka naam suna hai.





Ye sunke vo pichhe muda.





Nidhi- aapko sharm nhi aai mere sath aisa karte hue.





Jeetu- me majbur tha nidhi. I m sorry.






Nidhi- achha aisi kya majburi thi tumhari jara mujhe bhi to batao.







Jeetu- because I love you. Bachpan se hi. Or mera yaha study karna ka kaaran hi tum thi. Kyuki tumhare karib rehna chahta tha me. Tumhe apna banana chahta tha me. Or me tumhe kuch kehta usse pehle hi tum iske sath relationship me aagyu or ye jalan mujhse bardast nhi ho rahi thi isiliye maine ye kadam utha liya usi jalan me.





Ye sunte hi nidhi ek dum shocked reh gyi. Use samajh me nhi aaya ki vo akhir kaise react kare.






Jeetu- me janta hu mujhse galti hui hai or iski jo saza tum mujhe dogi vo mujhe manjur hai. Lekin pls nidhi mujhe police ke hawale mat karo. Me yaha se hamesha ke liye chala jaunga or kabhi tumhe apni shakal nhi dikhaunga.






Amar- or iska kya bharosa hai ki tum apne vade per adig rahoge kal ko fir agar tumne hamare beeche aise hi galat fehmi paida karne ki kosis ki to.






Jeetu- me gaav Bapis chala jaunga nidhi se dur rahunga to ye jalan dheere dheere khatam ho jayegi. Lekin agar yaha raha to ye kabhi kam nahi hogi. Kash maine tumhe pehle prapose kar diya hota.






Nidhi- agar mujhe prapose karte to usi samay tumhare gaal per ek thappad laga deti me. Or tumhari akal thikane laga deti. Tumne aisa socha bhi kaise tumhe sharm nhi aai.




Or isi gusse me nidhi jeetu ke pass aaj or use jor se 5-6 thappad laga diye. Jo itne kadak the ki uska pura gaal hi laal ho gya.





Nidhi- aainda agar apni ye gandi shakal mujhe kabhi bhi dikhai to usi samay tumhara gala ghot dungi me. Fir chahe mujhe jail me hi kyu na jana pade. Or suno. Ye jo me tumhe mouka de rahi hu ye sirf or sirf bua ke liye de rahi hu. Kyuki vo bechari akeli hai or agar tum jail gye to unka kya hoga. Isliye mouka hai sudhar jaao or apni mom ke liye kuch achha socho. Verna agli baar me unka nahi sochungi.






Ye sab nidhi ne itne gusse me kaha ki jeetu ki to ruh hi kamp gyi.


Uske baad vijay me use chhod diya or vo baha se bhag gya.



Bahi amar or payal ne nidhi ko sambhala.



Or bahi jeetu ne baha se bhagate hue chain ki saas li or mand mand muskurata hua baha se nikal gya.




Jeetu vakai me hoshiyaar tha. Usne nidhi ko thoda emotional karke khud ko bacha liya tha. Or rishte ki bajah se use bhi pata tha ki vo itni jaldi jail me nhi jaane wala. Or jeetu vo kutte ki dum thi jo kabhi seedhi nhi ho sakti thi.




Bahi agar dusre najariye se ye sab dekhe to abki baar jeetu bach gya. Lekin agar aage vo fir se inki life me disturb karne aaya to vo soch bhi nhi sakta ki uska kya haal hoga.



Baaki dekhte hai kya hota hai. Aage or kya jeetu apne mansubo me kaamyab ho payega ya abki baar vo aisi koi harkat karega hi nhi sudhar jayega.


Kya hota hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.

















To be continue………………………..

Jakash update bandhu

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 91














Jeetu baha se seedha ghar gya jaha usne chupchap apna saman uthaya or baha se nikal gya apne ek dost ke pass room per.




Bahi nidhi is sab se bahut dukhi thi. Usne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki use aisa din bhi dekhna padega. Or amar or payal use samjha rahe the.



Or iska asar bhi ho raha tha. Nidhi ab sambhal chuki thi.



Vijay- achha bacho ab ghar jaao or aaram karo me bhi chalta hu.





Amar- ok uncle. Lekin ab us sumit ka kya hoga.






Vijay- dekhte hai agar maan gya to chhod denge Verna lamba jayega vo






Amar- ok uncle aao dekh lena jo bhi theek lage.





Vijay- ok.




Ye kehkar vijay baha se chala gya and amar or baaki sab bhi baha se apni car tak aagye and amar ne car ko bada diya nidhi ke ghar ki taraf.





Nidhi ab theek thi.




Jaldi hi amar nidhi ke ghar ke bahar pahuch gya.





Nidhi- aaj aapko chalna hi hoga andar Verna me baat nhi karungi aapse.





Amar- me abhi aake kya hi karunga tumhare mom dad honge unko kya jawab dunga me.






Nidhi- jo kehna ho keh dena lekin andar to chalna hi padega.




Nidhi ne bahut jid ki to haar kar amar ne bhi ha bol diya.




Amar or baaki car se utre or nidhi ne amar ka hath pakada or andar le jaane lagi.



Jaha nidhi ke mom dad baithe hue the.





N.dad- beta kabse phone kar raha hu kaha thi tum. Or ye kon hai.






Nidhi- sorry dad thodi busy thi isliye call nhi utha paai. By the way ye amar hai my friend ham udaypur me mile the. Abhi gyi thi me jab.






N.dad- ohh hi amar





Amar- namaste uncle.



Amar ne aage badke unke pair chhuye or unka aasirbaad liya.



Jisse ek hi baar me vo amar se impress ho gye. Bahi nidhi ki mom bhi thi to amar ne unke bhi pair chhu liye vo bhi kush.





N.dad- beta jeetu kaha hai kuch pata hai tumhe






Uska naam sunte hi nidhi ka chehra ek dum se badal gya or ye sab uske mom dad ne bhi dekha.







N.mom- kya hua beta jhagda kiya kya usse. Tum dono kab bade hoge.






Nidhi- aisi baat nhi hai mom. Aaj kuch aisa hua hai jo me kabhi nhi bhul sakti hu. Isliye vo ghar chhodke chala gya hai. Ab kaha gya hai mujhe nhi pata.





Ye sunke vo dono ek sath khade ho gye.




n.dad- kaha gya or hua kya. Saaf saaf batao.






Nidhi batane me sankoch kar rahi thi isliye payal aage aai.




Payal- uncle me batati hu. Darashal hua ye ki. Vo jeetu nidhi per gandi najar rakh raha tha. Jiske bare me kisi ko bhi pata nhi tha. Or aaj usne had hi kar di. Usne amar or nidhi ko ek sath dekha to use laga inke beech kuch ho jayega or uska patta saaf ho jayega isliye usne amar ki kuch photos edit karke nidhi ko bhej di taaki inme dushmani ho jaye. Or hua bhi aisa hi lekin amar ne apni begunahi sabit ki or police ki madad ki or police ne jab tehkikaat ki to pata chala ki in sabke pechhe jeetu ka hath hai. Or fir usne apna jurm bhi kabula or ye bhi kaha ki vo nidhi ko pana chahata tha hamesha se. Or isiliye usne aisa kiya. Ye sab sunke hamare to hosh hi udd gye the. Or nidhi ne use yaha se jaane ko keh diya. Or rishta tha isliye use police ke hawale nhi kiya. Aaj ye kiya hai kal ko nidhi ko akela pakar kuch or bhi kar sakta tha. Uske man me kya chal raha hai kya pata isliye nidhi ne use jane ko keh diya.






Ye sab sunke nidhi ke mom dad ek dum sann reh gye unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki vakai me jeetu aisa ladka hai. Bahi nidhi ki mom uske pass aai or use gale se laga liya or nidhi ke dad bahi sofe per baith gye or sochne lage ki ab kya karu unki bahen ko kya jawab du me.






Amar- i m sorry ye sab meri hi bajah se hua hai.






N. Mom- nhi beta balki ye to achha hua. Waqt rehte hame uski asliyat pata chal gyi Verna ham kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak bhi nhi rehte. Isliye thanks beta.





N.mom- aap kya soch rahe hai.





N.dad- soch raha hu ye jeetu to bada chapter nikla. Lekin ab didi ko kaise or kya kahu me. Vo bechari pata nhi kya sochengi hamare bare me. Kahi zindagi bhar ki dushmani na ban jaaye.






Nidhi- unko kuch bhi batane ki jarurat nhi hai. Jeetu ne jo kiya hai uski bajah se aapke or bua ke beech dushmani kyu bane. Jeetu khud hi bata dega jo batana hoga unhe. Or agar fir vo aapse puchhe to unko bata dena aap ye sab.







N.dad- nhi beta aisa nhi kar sakte ham. Jeetu hamari jimmedari tha vo hamare yaha rehta tha. Isliye uska pata lagana hi padega or uski maa ko bhi batana padega ki jeetu ab yaha nhi reh raha hai.





Ye log abhi baate hi kar rahe the ki nidhi ke papa ka phone baja



Or jab unhone phone dekha to unke hosh udd gye kyuki phone jeetu ki maa ka hi tha. Or jab sabne dekha to sabke hosh udd gye.




N.mom- uthaiye.





Ye sunke unhone phone uthaya or unse baat karne lage. Or thodi hi der me unke chehre per ek smile aagyi. Or unhone baat karke call cut kar diya.






N.mom- kya hua aapke chehre per smile.




N dad- hamara kaam jeetu ne aasan kar diya





Nidhi- kaise.





N.mom- usne apni maa ko bol diya hai ki abse vo uske dost ke pass rehne wala hai kyuki baha uski padai or achhe se ho payegi or vo hame jaane se pehle bata nhi pata kyuki use dar tha ki ham use jaane nhi dege isliye hame vina bataye hi vo chala gya hai. Or yahi sab vo hame bata de. Or unhone yahi kiya.





Ye sunke sabke sir ka tension ek hi jhatke me dur ho gya. Or sabhi relex ho gye.





N.mom- chalo ye achha hua sir se tension gyi.






n.dad- ha





Amar- theek hai nidhi ab me chalta hu.




Ye sunke sabhi ka dhyan amar per gya.







N.mom- are aise kaise chalta hu. Yaha baitho me sabke liye nasta leke aati hu. Or chai bhi. Or khabardaar jo mana kiya hai to. Mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.






Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile gyi. Or amar ne bhi ha me mundi hilai or bahi baith gya.





Or nidhi payal or uski mom kitchen me chali gyi. Bahi uske pita or amar bahi baith gye.







N.dad- ha to amar apne bare me kuch batao. Kya karte ho kaha rehte ho bagera bagera.






Amar- ji me yahi rehkar padai kar raha hu. Lekin abhi jo cyclone aaya tha usme hamara clg bhi tabah ho gya hai isliye filhaal ghar per hi rehkar padai kar raha hu.







N. Dad- kaha per hai ghar tumhara.






Amar- ji Ratangarh rajasthan.






N.dad- vakai me are bahut suna hai maine Ratangarh ke baare me. Tum sach me baha ke rehne wale ho.






Amar- ji uncle me bahi ka rehne wala hu usi gaav me hi mera ghar hai. Or mera pura parivar bhi.







N.dad- kya baat hai. Fir to tum pratap parivar ko achhe se jante hoge haina.






Ye sunke amar halke se muskuraya.





Amar- ha uncle achhe se janta hu. Lekin aap unhe kaise jante hai.







N.dad- beta janta nhi hu bas suna hai unke bare me. Business man hu na to aai din unke bare me sunta hi rehta hu. Or ye bhi suna hai ki kaise unhone us pure gaav ka naksha badal diya. Vakai me unka kaam or unhone jo hasil kiya hai vo kabile tariff hai.







Amar- ha uncle ye baat to hai.







N.dad- baise tumhare pita kya karte hai.






Amar- actually uncle aap jis pratap parivar ki baat kar rahe hai vo mera hi parivar hai. Mera pura naam Amar pratap singh hai s/o veer pratap singh.





Ye sunte hi vo ek dum se khade ho gye or ek dum hairani se amar ko dekhne lage.







N.dad- sach me.





Amar- ha uncle





N.dad- kya baat hai me bata nhi sakta ki mujhe kitni kushi ho rahi hai aaj tumse milke. Ki me bata nhi sakta.








Amar- aisa kyu







N.dad- actually me unke kaam se bahut impress hu or unke business se bhi. Or isi liye me unse milna chah raha tha lekin hamara milna nhi ho pa raha tha. Or dekho aaj achanak unki next generation se mulkaat ho gyi.






Amar- ohh ha actually dad or chachi sabhi bahut busy rehte hai. Baise to hamesha vo time nikaal hi lete hai lekin kabhi kabhi aisa season aata hai jab vo mahino tak ghar bhi nhi aate hai. Kyuki business pure world me faila hua hai. Or use sambhalne me kai kaam miss ho jaate hai. Baise bahar ke sare mamle mere chhote chachu hi sambhalte hai. Baaki india ka kaam mere dad or chachi dekhte hai.







N.dad- chhote chachu matlab mr. Surya






Amar- ha






n.dad- vakai me unke baare me to kuch Google per bhi nhi milta hai. Kitne rehasymayi insan hai vo.







Ye sunke amar ki hasi nikal gyi.





Amar- ha actually unhe apni publicity pasand nhi hai. Isiliye vo limelight se dur hi rehte hai. Or parde ke pichhe se sabko sambhalte rehte hai.






N.dad- sabko sambhalte hai matlab.







Amar- matlab yahi ki sara business sambhalte hai sare deals ko crack karte hai. Vagera vagera.







N. Dad- ohh. Vaise ek sawal puchhna tha tumse.







Amar- ha puchhiye.







N. Dad- aapke or nidhi ke beech kuch serious hai kya. Keval meri info ke liye puchhna chahta hu.







Amar- actually ha. We love each other. But filhaal hamara shadi ko leke koi bhi irada nhi hai. Isliye pls aap is mamle ko aage na hi banaye to theek hoga. Abhi hamare khelne khane ke din hai. Baaki jab shadi ka time aayega to kar lenge. And ek baat or me kehna chahunga. Ki aap apne man me avishwas paida mat hone deejiyega. Aapki beti mere sath safe hai uska kabhi bhi galat istemaal me nahi karunga na hi kar sakta hu.






Ye sunke nidhi ke dad ke chehre per smile aagyi.





N.dad- mujhe pata hai beta. Or mujhe jo ye viswas hai vo tumhare parivar ki bajah se hai. Isliye fikr mat karo. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai jab bhi aap log kahoge me aapki shadi ka praposal leke aapke ghar aajanga.







Uske baad nidhi payal or uski maa aagyi nasta leke. Fir sabne milke nasta kiya or uske baad amar ne sabse bida li.














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UPDATE - 92














Amar ke jaane ke baad nidhi or payal apne kamre me chali gyi bahi nidhi ke dad ne uski mom ko abhi hui saari bate batai jise sunke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Or unhe bhi amar bahut pasand aagya tha pehli hi mulakat me.




Khair jeetu is waqt building ki chhat per baitha hua tha akele hi or daru or cigrate pi raha tha. Use bahut hi bura lag raha tha ki nidhi ne use thappad mara or ghar se bhi nikaal diya. Uska dimaag kharab ho raha tha. Or gussa bhi aaraha tha. Vo apman ki aag me jal raha tha. Or ab usne ye tay kar liya tha ki ab vo nidhi ko apne neeche lakar hi rahega fir chahe iske liye use kuch bhi kyu na karna pade. Nidhi ko uski aukaat batani padegi ki. Lekin vo ye diside nhi kar pa raha tha ki apna mansuba pura kaise kare. Kyuki vo itna to samajh gya tha amar koi sadharan insan nhi hai. Uski pahuch bahut uper tak hai. Kyuki usne matra 2 ghanto me ye pata laga liya ki in sab ke pichhe mera hath hai. Isiliye vo ab har kadam fook fook ke uthana chahta tha.






Tabhi use pechhe se ek aawaj aai.




Jeetu pechhe muda to uske samne ek saks khada hua tha three piece suit me.




Jeetu- kon ho tum or yaha kya kar rahe ho. Jaao yaha se mujhe akela chhod do.






U- chala jaunga lekin me yaha tumhari madad karne aaya hu.






Jeetu- kis tarah ki madad.me apni madad karne me khud saksham hu.







U- achha nidhi ko apne neeche laane me to nhi ho saksham






Ye sunte hi jeetu ka sara nasha ek dum se utar gya. Or vo ek dum ghor ke us insan ko dekhne laga. Jaise puchh raha ho ki tumhe kaise pata.







U- jyada socho mat. Me is mamle me tumhari madad kar sakta hu. Or nidhi hamesha ke kiye tumhari hi sakti hai kisi dashi ki tarah. Tum jaise chaho uska istemaal karo vi uff tak nhi karegi. Or uski sari property bhi tumhari ho jayegi






Jeetu- or badle me tumhe kya chahiye hai.





U- jyada kuch nhi bas amar or uski family se badla chahiye hai. Or is kaam me mera badla bhi mil jayega or tumhara kaam bhi hi jayega. Vo kahavat to tumne suni hi hogi.

EK PANT DO KAAJ.







Ye sunke jeetu soch me pad gya. Use vo insan theek to nhi lag raha tha lekin is waqt uske sir per nidhi ko paane ka bhut savar tha isliye usne ha keh diya.





Jeetu- theek hai batao kaise or kya karna hai.






U- ye hui na baat. Tum super natural Power me belive karte ho.








Jeetu- nhi.






U- to karne lago. Kyuki abse tum mere hathiyar banoge






Jeetu- me kuch samjha nhi.







U- matlab ki me tumhe kuch super natural Power dene wala hu. Jiski madad se tum aasani se unhe hara paoge.







Jeetu- kya bakwas hai. Normal insano ko harane ke liye super natural Power ki madad kabse padne lagi. Or sabse imp agar tumhare pass powers haj to tum khud hi kyu nhi unka istemaal karke apna badla le lete ho.








U- beta tum abhi amar or uski family ko jante nhi ho. Vo log jitna jameen ke uper hai utna hi jameen ke nechhe hai. Verna tum hi socho ki itni jaldi unlogo ne kaise pata kar liya ki is sabke pechhe tumhara hath hai. Or jara ye bhi socho ki vo apne gaav se 10-15 min. Me kaise pahuch jata hai mumbai. Aisi konsi car ya flight hai jo itni jaldi use yaha pahucha deti hai.







Ye sab sunke jeetu ke dimaag ka bhi fuse udd gya.





Jeetu- are ha yaar.






U- isiliye keh raha hu me.







Jeetu- lekin aap ye kyu nhi karte ho.








U- me bhi karunga lekin me filhaal unke saamne nhi aasakta hu. Kyuki me unki radaar me hu. Isiliye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye haj taaki unhe pata hi nhi chale ki unki band akhir baja kon raha hai.






Ye sunke jeetu kush ho gya





Jeetu- to fir bataiye kya karna hai






Ye sunke uske chehre per smile aagyu or vo jeetu ke ekdum karib aagya palak jhapkate hi or ye dekh jeetu ek baar or hairan ho gya. Khair us unknown ne jeetu ke mathe per apna hath rakha or kuch mantra pade aisa karte hi uske hatho se kuch roshni nikal kar jeetu me samane lagi. Bahi jeetu ka pura sharir us roshni se chamakne laga tha or use andar se bahut hi takat mehsus ho rahi thi.




Karib 10 min. Tak vo aise hi mantra padta gya or idhar jeetu ke andar ab kaafi takat aagyu thi.



Or fir usne apna hath uske sir se utha liya.





U- ab tum koi mamuli insan nhi rahe ho. Ek khatarnaak hathiyar ban gye ho. Jiska koi tod nhi hai. Tumhara sharir vajr ka ho gya hai jise koi nhi bhed sakta hai. Tumhari raftaar bhi bakio se bahut tez hai. Or sabse imo hai tumhari aankhe jinse tum kisi ko bhi apne vash me kar sakte ho or jarurat padne per inhi aankho se uska vinash bhi kar sakte hai.






Ye sunke jeetu ek dum hairan tha.





Jeetu- kaise







U- apni aankho per jor daalo or saamne kisi jagah per focus karo.





Usne aisa hi kiya usne apni aankho per jor dala or ek khali jagah per focus kiya. Or aisa karte hi uski anakho se bhayankar lazor nikli.



Ye dekhke jeetu ek dum hi achambhit reh gya.




Jeetu- ye dekha tumne lazor nikli meri aankho se. Kahi ye koi sapna to nhi hai.






U- nhi ye haqikat hai. Or test karo apni powers ko.




Ye sunke jeetu ne apna hath normali deewar me mara or uska hath deewar se takrate hi baha ek bada sa hole ban gya or deewar me bhi darar aagyi. Ye dekhke jeetu or kush ho gya.







U- ek baat dhyan rakhna filhaal tumhara focus keval amar or uske bhai bahen per hi rakhna. Sabse pehle unhe apne raste se hatana uske baad kisi or per focus karna. Or meri anumati ke bina kuch bhi harkat ki to ye yaad rakhna ki maine tumhe ye powers di hai. Agar me de sakta hu to le bhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe double cross karne ki sochna bhi mat.







Jeetu- me samajh gya hu. Aap befikr rahe. Ab me dikhaunga nidhi ko ki me kya kar sakta hu.






U- bahut badiya kal sham ko mujhe udaypur me milo aage me tumhe bataunga baha se kya karna hai.







Jeetu- ok. Baise aapne apna naam nhi bataya mujhe.







U- mera naam takshak hai. Filhaal itna hi kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Ye kehkar takshak baha se palak jhapkate hi gayab ho gya. Bahi jeetu jor jor se hasne laga. Use Biswas hi nhi ho raha tha ki ye haqikat hai.aaj to use neend bhi nhi aane wali thi. Is dar se ki kahi ye sapna na ho or subah jaagte hi ye sapna tut na jaaye.








Bahi sabse pehle jeetu ne apni sabhi powers ko aajmane ka decide kiya. Baaki sabto usne aajma liya tha. Bas sammohan kala ko aajmane baaki tha. Usne building ki chhat se neeche dekha to use ek ladki baha se jaati hui dikhi. To jeetu ka kameenapan jaag gya. Or usne usi chhat se nechhe chhalang laga di. Or dhadam se neeche land hua vo. Ek dum us ladki ke aage.





Or achanak aise kisi ko uper se aata dekhke vo ladki bhi dar gyi.




Bahi usne jeetu se puchhne ke liye jaise hi uski aankho me dekha chamatkaar ho gya. Ek hi jhatke me. Us ladki ki saari pareshani gayab ho gyi or vo jeetu ko dekhke mand mand muskurane lagi.





Bahi ye dekhke jeetu ke man me laddu footne lage.



Or usne us ladki ko apne pechhe aane ka ishara kiya. Or vo ladki bina kisi shart ke uske peechhe chalne lagi. Jeetu apne dost ke flat me gya jaha vo filhaal tha nhi. Vo kahi bahar gya hua tha isiliye jeetu chhat per baith ke pee raha tha.





Khair vo use flat me laya or uske baad baha kya hua hoga aap sabhi achhe se jaante hi hai.



Ji ha usne us ladki ka rape kiya. Us ladki ko to pata hi nhi tha ki vo kya or kyu kar rahi hai. Kyuki vo sammohit thi. Baaki jisne use baisa kiya tha use sab pata tha.



Khair uska jee bhar ke ras paan karne ke baad jeetu ne use fir sab kapde vagera pehnne ko kaha or vapis se road per pahucha diya or ek chutki baja ke uska sammohan tod diya. Or sammohan tutate hi vo seen fir se creat ho gya ki uske saamne jeetu uper se aaya tha.






Jeetu ne use sorry bola or baha se andar side chala gya bahi vo ladki bhi baha se apne raste per chali gyi. Lekin jab age jaake usne time dekha to uske hosh udd gye kyuki vo pure 2 ghante late ho gyi thi. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi thi ki aisa kaise ho gya office se to vo time per chali thi fir itna late kaise ho gyi. Bahi dusri baat use apni tango ke beech jalan bhi mehsus ho rahi thi. Jis bajah se vo or confuse thi.




Ab aage uska kya hoga ham sabhi jante hi hai. Use uske sawalo ke jawab kabhi nhi milenge vo hamesha isi soch me rahegi ki is raat akhir hua kya tha.





Bahi jeetu ne raat bhar me aise hi 3-4 ladkiyo ke sath kiya kuch ko to unke hi ghar me ghus ke. Is power ka jitna hi sakta tha vo misuse kar raha tha or aisa karne me main vo nidhi ko to bhul hi gya tha or sath me apna badla bhi. Vo bas apni raat ko enjoy hi kar raha tha. Bahi takshak ye sab dekh kar soch raha tha ki kahi usne bacahe ke hath me bhari hui pistol to nhi de di.




Khair ab ye or kya kya karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye ki ab takshak kya karega kaise jeetu ko kabu karega.














To be continue……………………...

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[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 93













Jaise taise subah hui is waqt jeetu so raha tha or lagta nhi tha ki uski neend aaj jaldi khulne wali thi. Uske chehre per ek kushi chhai hui thi kyuki kal raat use vo mila jiski kalpana bhi usne nhi ki thi kabhi.




Bahi amar bhi gaav me tha or nidhi apne ghar per. Sab sahi se chal raha tha or aage bad raha tha.





Bahi black heart bhi apni sadhna me leen tha or surya ke aaram ke din chal rahe the. Halaki use sab khabar thi ki amar ki life me kya chal raha hai or kal yaha mumbai me kya hua hai. Kyuki Harry surya ke bina permission ke kuch bhi nhi karta hai. Surya ko puri jaankari hoti hai hai ki uske bache kab kya kar rahe hai or harry se kis prakaar ki madad lete hai.



Khair amar to bhul gya tha lekin surya ne Harry subah uthate hi Harry ko jeetu per najar rakhne ko bol diya tha kyuki surya jaanta tha ki jeetu itni aasani se sudharne walo mese nhi hai. Lekin kash surya ne raat me hi usper najar rakhne ko bol diya hota Harry ko. To kamse kam raat me hi uska kaam tamam ho jata. Lekin der aaye saber aaye. Abhi bhi jyada der nhi hui hai. Or abhi bhi mouka hai. Jeetu jaisa ladka power ke nashe me kuch na kuch galti to karega hi or jaise hi kuch galat karega Harry ko pata chal jayega or harry ko pata chala matlab surya ko pata chala. Or fir jeetu ko khair nhi.







Khair amar ne ashk avi or Samar ko bhi bataya ki kal kya hua tha or kisne kiya tha. Jise sunke sabhi ka para ek dum high ho gya tha. Lekin amar ke samjhane per vo log shant ho gye. Or mamle ko samajh bhi gye ki kyu amar ne usko kuch nhi kiya. Verna uske liye to amar akela hi kaafi tha.




Khair jaise taise sham hui or jeetu is waqt udaypur me tha jaisa usse takshak ne kaha tha. Vo apne samay per baha pahuch gya tha. Or takshak ka hi intjar kar raha tha. Or uska intjar bhi jaldi hi khatam ho gya. Kyuki takshak uske pass aagya tha.






Jeetu- ab batao kya karna hai mujhe.






Takshak- bataunga lekin pehle mujhe ye batao ki kisse puchh ke kal raat tumne vo sab kiya.







Jeetu- maine kya kiya.






Takshak- mujhse hoshiyari karne ki kosis bhi mat karna. Kyuki meri najar sab jagah hoti hai or mujhe achhe se pata hai kal raat tumne kya kiya hai.







Jeetu- ohh un ladkiyo ki baat kar rahe ho. Vo to bas apni powers ki testing kar raha tha me or kuch nhi.








Takshak- ha pata hai mujhe power ki testing kar rahe the ki apni hawas mita rahe the.







Jeetu- to usme aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.








Takshak- tujhe abhi kuch nhi pata hai. Sehar me ek khukhar darinda ghum raha hai jo ham jaisi buri shaktiyon ko sungh kar unka khatma kar deta hai. Or agar use teri gandh aajati to kal raat hi tera kaam tamam ho jata fir ho jata tera badla pura.








Ye sunke jeetu thoda hairan hua.






Jeetu- aisa konsa darinda hai jisse aapki bhi fati padi hai.







Takshak- chinta mat kar tera saamna bhi usse jald hi ho jayega.
Fir tumhe bhi pata chal hi jayega ki vo kon hai or kya hai. Or kyu meri usse itni fat rahi hai.







Jeetu- theek hai abse nhi karunga aisa kuch bhi






Takshak- badiya hai. Yahi behtar hai tumhare liye. Ab chalo mere sath tumhare sikaar ke pass.






Jeetu- chalo me bahut exited hu.





Ye kehkar takshak ne jeetu ka hath pakada or agle hi sec vo log usi jheel ke pass jhadiye me pahuch gye.





Jeetu- ye kaha le aaye mujhe.






Takshak- ahhh ye dekho tumhara sikar tumhare saamne hai. Vo raha amar or uske bhai bahen. Tu agar chahe to uski bahen ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai meri taraf se chhut hai. Mujhe bas mera badla chahiye or isse tera badla bhi pura hoga.





Ye sunke jeetu ne Gour se ashk ko dekha or vo usi pal nidhi ko bhul gya. Uske muh se maar tapakne lagi.








Jeetu- ma kasam kya kadak maal hai. Isper to hajar nidhi kurban hai.







Ye sunke takshak hasne laga.




Takshak- tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Chal shuru ho ja. Maar daal sabko. Baaki me yahi rahunga. Taaki agar tujhe madad ki jarurat pade to me kar saku.






Jeetu- theek hai.







Bahi Harry ye sab dekh raha tha. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad to jarur hai. Kyuki usne jeetu ke sath wale ki powers ko dekha isliye usne turant hi mujhe vo saari info di. Or me sunte hi bhaga gaav ke liye.







Bahi jeetu ek dum se amar ke saamne aagya.





Jeetu- kyu re bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai khud ko. Tujhe me nhi chhodne wala saale tune mere or nidhi ke beech duriya bana di.






Ye sunke amar or baaki sab ne peeche mud ke dekha.



Or jaise hi amar ne jeetu ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki usne expect nhi kiya tha ki jeetu yaha tak pahuch jayega.





Amar- tu yaha kaise.







Jeetu- aagya me tujhe dhundte dhundte. Aaj tu nhi bachega.







Amar- marna hai kya. Bhag ja yahan se. Vo nidhi ka bhai hai tu isliye abhi tak apne pairo per khada hai verna vo haalat karta teri ki agle 7 janam tak langda paida hota tu. Or itna sab hone ke baad bhi teri akal thikane per nhi aai jo yaha tak chala aaya.








Jeetu- meri akal thikane per hi hai. Or achha hua jo me yaha aagya ab nidhi ke sath teri bahen ko bhi me apna banaunga. Vakai me kya kamal ki cheez hai.






Itna bolna tha ki use ek jordaar kick lagi jisse uska thoda santulan bigad gya lekin vo gira nhi. Ye kick thi amar ki.






Jeetu- dum nhi laga rahe ho tum. Thoda or jor lagao.





Ye kehkar jeetu ek dum adig amar ke saamne khada ho gya.




Bahi amar ne ek jordaar punch mara unke seene me dil ke just uper.




Or is punch ko jeetu sayad hi kabhi bhul paaye. Kyuki agar usne powers nhi hoti to is punch se uska raam naam satya ho hi jata. Lekin uski powers ne uski jaan bacha ki lekin use girne se nhi bacha paya. Bahi jeetu ko bahut jor se laga ye punch. Jisse vo ek dum se bokhla sa gya. Use yakeen nhi hua ki amar me itni takat hai. Or use is baat per yakeen ho gya ki ye koi aam insan to nhi hai matlab takshak sahi keh raha tha.




Bahi use kya pata ki amar to normal hi hai. Ye jo power uske hatho me hai ye use virasat me mili hai apne purkho se.







Amar- ab aaya maja. Beta bhale hi tu strong ho bahut lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki ye hath bhi kam nhi hai.






Jeetu- bakai me bahut dum hai I'm hatho me.





Ye kehkar jeetu khada hua.



Or usne achanak se apni aankho se lazor nikalna shuru kar diya. Bahi amar ne furti dikhate hue apni position badli or uski lazor se bach gya. Bahi avi Samar ashk or varsha bhi yaha baha ho gye kyuki lazor un per bhi nishana laga rahi thi.





Bahi lazor ke jameen se takrane se neeche ki ghaas or ped vagera jal gye the.





Bahi is waqt jeetu ki najar dusro per thi isliye usne jeetu ke peeche jaake jump maarke apne ghutne ki maar uski peeth per maari jisse vo jhuk gya.





Bahi uski anakho se lazor nikalna band ho gya. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar Samar ne ek jordaar kick uski naak per maari jisse vo ulti gulati khate hue jameen per pasar gya.




Ye mouka dekhke amar me uski garden ko daboch liya apne hatho me. Or jor se daba diya. Amar ne apna pura dabav uski peeth per banaya hua tha jisse vo uth nhi pa raha tha. Uske keval hath hi khule hue the. Jinka vo pura jor laga raha tha. Uthne ke liye. To Samar ne uske hatho ko pakad kar daba liya. Ab vo keval tadap hi raha tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kare kaise is qaid se aazad ho.






Yaha jeetu me saaf kami dikh rahi thi technique ki. Bhale hi insan ke pass power ho. Lekin agar uske pass un power ko istemaal karne ki technique nhi hai to vo koi jung nhi jeet sakta. Bahi amar or Samar bachpan se hi self defence ki training lete aarahe hai. Unhe pata hai ki kisko kaise kabu karna hai.







Bahi dur se me bhi ye najara dekh raha tha or kush ho raha tha ki kaise bacho ne usko kabu kar liya.







Amar- bol haramjade. Maja aaya.






Jeetu- maja to aaya lekin jyada nhi.




Ye kehkar jeetu ne apna pura jor laga diya or ek dum se khada ho gya. Bahi is jor se amar or Samar dono hi alag alag disha me udte hue dur ja gire.





Jeetu- ab maja aaya kamino.






Ye kehkar vo sabse pehle amar ke pass gya speed se. Or usne amar ko utha liya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Bahi tab tak Samar or avi dono hi jeetu ke pass aaye or usper hamla karne lage lekin abki baar vo apni speed ka pura istemaal kar raha tha. Jis bajah se avi or Samar ke har baar khali ja rahe the.





Bahi takshak ye sab dekhke bahut kush ho raha tha. Use apna plan anjaam tak pahuchta hua najar aaraha tha. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki uska baap uske aas pass hi moujud hai.








Abki baar bazi puri tarah se palat gyi thi. Kyuki jeetu akela hi teeno per bhari pad raha tha. Or iska kaaran keval itna tha ki jeetu apni super power ka istemaal kar raha tha. Bahi ye teeno apni normal power ka istemaal kar rahe the.






Jeetu ne teeno ki hi haalat tight kar rakhi thi. Lekin the to sabhi surya ke hi bache. Or is bajah se jeetu unhe jeet nhi pa raha tha. Kyuki girte hi vo fir se khade ho rahe the. Or is bajah se jeetu kaafi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi avi samajh gya tha ki ye aise control me nhi aayega isliye usne apne mobile me kuch kiya or lete lete hi wait karne laga.





Tabhi sabhi ko najar aasmaan me gyi jaha se kuch udta hua jameen per aa raha tha. Use dekhke aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi ulka pind ho. Kyuki uski speed bahut tez thi.





Bahi avi ke chehre per smile aai or vo jaldi se khada hua. Or jeetu ki taraf bhaga apni speed se




Bahi vo udti hui cheez avi se takarai lekin isse avi ko kuch fark nhi pada. Balki avi ke charo taraf usne ek kavach ka aakar le liya. Like iron man. Avi abhi bhi douda hua hi ja raha tha.or isi beech avi puri tarah se iron man ban gya tha.




Bahi ye najar baha moujud sabhi ne dekha or dekhte hi jeetu ko chhodke sabhi ke chehre per hasi aagyi. Or sabne apna matha peet liya. Kyuki vo aaj real me iron man dekh rahe the. Or avi ke dimaag ki daad de rahe the. Ashk ne jordaar seeti bajai avi ke liye.



Bahi jeetu ek dum se hairan tha. Use laga kahi Tony stark sach me to yaha nhi aagya. Vo thoda hairan pareshan sa bahi per khada raha. Or isi beeche use ek jabardast punch laga jiski bajah se vo udta hua dur ja girne laga. Tabhi avi ne apne hatho se power generate ki or jeetu ke uper use chhodna start kar diya.





Bhale hi jeetu ka sarir bajr jaisa kathor ho lekin arc reactor ki power ka jabardast prahar laga use. Jisse uske sarir per kai jagah jalne ke nishan aagye.





Bahi dur se jab maine ye seen dekha to mere bhi hosh udd gye or mere chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.



Or takshak ne jab ye dekha to uska haal bhi jeetu jaisa hi tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye aakhir hai kya. Ye kis tarah ki power hai.







Khair aage dekhte hai avi or kya kya kaarname karta hai.

















To be continue………………………..

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[Nevil singh]

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avi- khada ho kameene. Tujhe batata hu aaj ki ham akhir me cheez kya hai.







Ye sunke jeetu jo thoda jhakmi hua tha dheere dheere khada hua. Uske ghaav nhi bhare the. Na hi bharne wale the. Kyuki uske pass ye power thi hi nhi.







Jeetu khada hua or apne aap dekha. Use khud ke ghav dikhe jisse usko gussa aane lagi.


Or usne jordaar lazor avi per chhodi.



Bahi avi ready tha iske liye. Vo hawa me udd gya or jor se uske muh per punch mara or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi usne uske thobde per kai baar kiye. Or apna panja pura jhalke uske thobde per rakh diya or jor se apni power ka jhatka uske thobde per diya. Ye jhatka use bahut jor se laga uska pura thobda isme sulag gya. Or vo dard me tadapane laga. Or jameen per apna chehra pakad kar let gya. Bahi avi ne agla baar kiya uske main part per. Jaha bhi use tagda jhatka laga.




Aisa lag raha tha jaise jeetu ki powers uska sath chhodne lagi hai. Kyuki use ab bahut dard ho raha tha. Uska sarir kamjor sa padta ja raha tha.







Takshak bhi ye sab dekh raha tha or vo samajh gya tha ki ye jyada der tak nhi tikega isliye ab usne saamne jaane ka Faisla kiya. Bahar jaane se pehle use sabhi jagah dekha jab use dur dur tak koi dikhai nhi diya to vo bahar aaya.





Or vo chupke se ashk ke peechhe gya or use daboch liya




Takshak- ruk jaao chhod do use. Verna iska kaam tamam karne me mujhe jara bhi der nhi lagegi.





Ye aawaj sunte hi sabhi ne oechhe mud ke dekha or sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki takshak is waqt aadhe insan or aadhe naag ke rup me tha. Usne ashk ko garden se pakad rakha tha.or uska rup bakai me bahut bada or vishal tha.






amar- ab ye kya nai musibat hai. Sala ye ho kya raha hai. Ye lounda apni aankho se lazor nikaal raha hai. Or ye tuchhadhari naag








Samar- dekh ashk se dur hatja. Verna itne tukde karunga ki agle are janam tere unko batorne me hi nikal jayenge. Dur hat.






Ye Lalkaar aisi thi ki koi kamjor hota to mut deta. Kuch had tak to takshak bhi hill gya lekin usne jaldi hi khud ko sambhala








Takshak- bache ye ruabb idhar nahi kaam aayega. Mere aadmi ko chhod do me isko chhod dunga.






Samar- hamne use pakada hi nhi to chhodenge kya. Vo dala hai neeche ise utha or nikal le yaha se. Verna sach me aaj tera aakhiri din hoga. Tu janta nhi tune kitni badi galti ki hai ashk per hath dalke. Uske papa ko jaanta hai na.







Takshak- ha janta hu surya ko. Or usne jitna hamara nuksan kiya hai uske badle ye chhota sa tohfa kaafi hoga uski bharpai ke liye.







Itni der me jeetu thoda normal ho gya tha.



Or is mouke ka fayeda usne uthaya or pechhe se avi per lazor chhod di. Lazor ka asar avi ke suit per bahut hi kam ho raha tha. Vibranium se jo bana tha uska suit. Lekin iska impact ise jarur mehsus hua kyuki vo aage ko thoda pressure se chala gya or jameen per let gya. Bahi jeetu ne lazor ko band nhi kiya or chhodta hi raha avi per.





Bahi ye sab dekh ke ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Uski anakho ke saamne uske bhaiyo ki halat patli ho rahi ho vo kaise dekh sakti hai ye sab.




In sab me varsha per kisi ka dhyan hi nhi gya. Kyuki vo pehle hi ghar chali gyi thi amar ke papa ko bulane ke liye. Kyuki vo samajh gyi thi ki yaha mamla bigadne wala hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha aankho se.



Or vo is waqt ghar pahuch hi gyi thi. Or use bahar hi veer ki car dikh gyi jisme baithke vo office se ghar aaya tha or car se nikal hi raha tha.







Varsha- uncle pls jaldi chaliye mere. Sath.





Bahi veer ne jab varsha ki aisi haalat dekhi to vo hairan ho gya.




Veer- shant ho jaao or batao kya hua tum itna haff kyu rahi ho. Baaki sab kaha hai.






Varsha- uncle jheel ke kinare kisi anjaan shakti ne hamla kiya hai. Ek ladka aaya hai amar se ladne jo apni aankho se lazor chhod raha hai. Vo normal nhi hai. Isse pehle kuch galat ho jaaye pls chaliye.





Ye sunke veer ka matha ghum gya. Usne varsha ko bahi rukne ko kaha or use andar bhej diya. Bahi amar tez raftar se doudta hua jheel ke pass jaane laga.




Abhi jheel ke pass pahuchne hi wala tha ki maine veer ko raste me hi rok liya




Or mujhe dekhke veer ki jaan me jaan aai.





Veer- hai vo jheel kinare kya ho raha hai.






Main- aao dikhata hu.




Main bhai ko leke usi jagah aaya jaha se me ab tak sab dekh raha tha.




Main- vo dekhiye bache kaise baha duri se unka mukabla kar rahe hai.






Bhai- tu pagal hai kya unki madad karne kyu nhi gya tu.






Main- bhai me yaha isiliye to ruka hua hu. Taaki waqt padne per unki madad kar saku. Lekin bache itni bahaduri or akalmandi se unhe sambhal rahe hai ki baha jaane ka man hi nhi kar raha hai. Or dusri baat unko aiso se nipatne ka abhyas karna chahiye kya pata kab iski noubat sajaye. Ye samajh lo unki traning chal rahi hai.







Bhai- achha. Baise ye ladka hai kon. Or ye aadha naag kon hai.





Main- ye ladka aapki hone wali bahu ka aashiq hai. Or iska pata nhi sayad black heart ka koi samarthak hoga.







Ye sunke bhai choukee




Bhai- kya kaha tune. Meri bahu.






Main- ha bhai amar ki gf ka aashiq hai. Kal iski band bajai amar ne aaj ye uska badla lene aagya powers ke sath. Or i m sure ye powers use is aadhe naag ne hi di hongi.







Bhai- badiya hai. Baise ab kya karne ka irada hai ashk ko pakad liya hai usne.






Main- bahi me dekhna chahta hu ki is situation ko kaise ye log handle karte hai.








Bhai- ok dekhte hai.










Ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare or kaise kare. Takshak ka hath uske muh ke ekdum pass tha isliye usne usne hath me jor se kaat liya. Or is achanak kaatne se takshak ki cheekh nikal gyi or uski pakad bhi dheeli hogyi ashk per or isi ka fayeda utha kar ashk takshak ke changul se aazad ho gyi. Or ek pathar usne uthaya or nishana laga kar use fel diya. Or vo pathar super speed se jeetu ki aankh me ghus gya. Or me sach kahunga uski ek aankh kaam se chali gyi. Or jeetu is dard me tadapane laga. Bahi teeno ne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya. Avi udd ke gya takshak ke pass to baaki dono ne jeetu ko pakad liya. Or Samar ne apni ungli se uski dusri aankh bhi fod daali. Jisse jeetu dard me tilbila gya. Use itna dard ho raha tha jiski koi seema nhi tha.







Bahi dusri taraf avi udta hua takshak ki taraf gya bahi beech beech me takshak apni puchh se ji ki kaafi lumbi thi avi ko maarne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin avi kaafi fast tha or uske har ek war se bach ke vo us tak pahuch hi gya or apne dono hatho ko aage karke ek sath usper energy ko chhoda or iska tagda jhatka laga usko. Or vo flat jameen per let gya. Bahi avi ne apne arm se ek sword banai or jor se uske pet per gira jisse us sword ne uske 2 tukde kar diye.






Lekin iska asar jyada nhi hua kyuki ab takshak apne insani rup me aagya tha. Or uske hatho me bhi ek sword thi.






Takshak- kya baat hai tin ke dibbe. Ab dikha kitna dum hai.





Ye kehkar usne uchhal kar avi per hamla kiya lekin avi ne hawa me hi use ek kick masti or vo is prahaar se dur ja gira.



Uske girte hi avi hawa me hi punch ki position leke tezi se neeche uske thobde ki taraf gya.



Bahi takshak samajh gya ki ab kya hone wala hai isliye vi jaldi se move kar gya or avi ka punch uski jagah jameen me dhas gya.



Avi jaldi se khada hua or usne ek chhoti si missile takshak ke uper nishana laga kar chhod di. Takshak kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo missile usse takta gyi or ek tez dhamaka sabhi ke kaano me gunja.



Charo taraf dhua or aag dikhne lagi.





Avi isme thoda carefree hogya tabhi achanak se use ek jordaar kick lagi or vo udta hua thodi dur girne hi wala tha ki usne beech hawa me udna shuru kar diya or full speed se udta hua gya or ek or jhatka mara energy ka. Jisse vo thodi dur ja gira.





Bahi dusri taraf jeetu ka kaam to almost tamam hi hi gya tha. Uski dono aankhe foot chuki thi. Or vo dard me behosh ho chuka tha. Bahi baaki ke teeno log bas in dono ki fight dekh rahe the. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki akhir ye fight jeet kon raha hai or is naag ka kaise ant hoga.






Bahi takshak ka bhi dimaag kharab ho raha tha kyuki usper ye bacha bhari pad raha hai. Na hi use jeetne de raha tha balki ulta usi ki band baja raha tha.





Isliye usne apni power ka istemaal karne ka socha or usne apni talvar ko hath me pakda or apne hatho ko joda. Bahi avi or baaki dekhne lage ki ye kya kar raha hai.





Bahi takshak ne kuch mantra pade or apna muh khola. Or uske muh kholte hi uske muh se kuch nikalne laga kuch dhua type or charo taraf failne laga.


Or itna Ghana failne laga ki khud ke hath bhi na dikhe kisi dusre ko dekhne ki baat to chhod hi do.










Ab dekhte hai is dhuye me kya karta hai takshak or surya or veer kab tak aise dekhte hai is fight ko.


Or avi or baaki kaise is takshak ko harate hai.

















To be continue………………………..

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[Nevil singh]

Intjaar rahega bhai

 

[ragish7357]

UPDATE - 94













avi- khada ho kameene. Tujhe batata hu aaj ki ham akhir me cheez kya hai.







Ye sunke jeetu jo thoda jhakmi hua tha dheere dheere khada hua. Uske ghaav nhi bhare the. Na hi bharne wale the. Kyuki uske pass ye power thi hi nhi.







Jeetu khada hua or apne aap dekha. Use khud ke ghav dikhe jisse usko gussa aane lagi.


Or usne jordaar lazor avi per chhodi.



Bahi avi ready tha iske liye. Vo hawa me udd gya or jor se uske muh per punch mara or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi usne uske thobde per kai baar kiye. Or apna panja pura jhalke uske thobde per rakh diya or jor se apni power ka jhatka uske thobde per diya. Ye jhatka use bahut jor se laga uska pura thobda isme sulag gya. Or vo dard me tadapane laga. Or jameen per apna chehra pakad kar let gya. Bahi avi ne agla baar kiya uske main part per. Jaha bhi use tagda jhatka laga.




Aisa lag raha tha jaise jeetu ki powers uska sath chhodne lagi hai. Kyuki use ab bahut dard ho raha tha. Uska sarir kamjor sa padta ja raha tha.







Takshak bhi ye sab dekh raha tha or vo samajh gya tha ki ye jyada der tak nhi tikega isliye ab usne saamne jaane ka Faisla kiya. Bahar jaane se pehle use sabhi jagah dekha jab use dur dur tak koi dikhai nhi diya to vo bahar aaya.





Or vo chupke se ashk ke peechhe gya or use daboch liya




Takshak- ruk jaao chhod do use. Verna iska kaam tamam karne me mujhe jara bhi der nhi lagegi.





Ye aawaj sunte hi sabhi ne oechhe mud ke dekha or sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki takshak is waqt aadhe insan or aadhe naag ke rup me tha. Usne ashk ko garden se pakad rakha tha.or uska rup bakai me bahut bada or vishal tha.






amar- ab ye kya nai musibat hai. Sala ye ho kya raha hai. Ye lounda apni aankho se lazor nikaal raha hai. Or ye tuchhadhari naag








Samar- dekh ashk se dur hatja. Verna itne tukde karunga ki agle are janam tere unko batorne me hi nikal jayenge. Dur hat.






Ye Lalkaar aisi thi ki koi kamjor hota to mut deta. Kuch had tak to takshak bhi hill gya lekin usne jaldi hi khud ko sambhala








Takshak- bache ye ruabb idhar nahi kaam aayega. Mere aadmi ko chhod do me isko chhod dunga.






Samar- hamne use pakada hi nhi to chhodenge kya. Vo dala hai neeche ise utha or nikal le yaha se. Verna sach me aaj tera aakhiri din hoga. Tu janta nhi tune kitni badi galti ki hai ashk per hath dalke. Uske papa ko jaanta hai na.







Takshak- ha janta hu surya ko. Or usne jitna hamara nuksan kiya hai uske badle ye chhota sa tohfa kaafi hoga uski bharpai ke liye.







Itni der me jeetu thoda normal ho gya tha.



Or is mouke ka fayeda usne uthaya or pechhe se avi per lazor chhod di. Lazor ka asar avi ke suit per bahut hi kam ho raha tha. Vibranium se jo bana tha uska suit. Lekin iska impact ise jarur mehsus hua kyuki vo aage ko thoda pressure se chala gya or jameen per let gya. Bahi jeetu ne lazor ko band nhi kiya or chhodta hi raha avi per.





Bahi ye sab dekh ke ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Uski anakho ke saamne uske bhaiyo ki halat patli ho rahi ho vo kaise dekh sakti hai ye sab.




In sab me varsha per kisi ka dhyan hi nhi gya. Kyuki vo pehle hi ghar chali gyi thi amar ke papa ko bulane ke liye. Kyuki vo samajh gyi thi ki yaha mamla bigadne wala hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha aankho se.



Or vo is waqt ghar pahuch hi gyi thi. Or use bahar hi veer ki car dikh gyi jisme baithke vo office se ghar aaya tha or car se nikal hi raha tha.







Varsha- uncle pls jaldi chaliye mere. Sath.





Bahi veer ne jab varsha ki aisi haalat dekhi to vo hairan ho gya.




Veer- shant ho jaao or batao kya hua tum itna haff kyu rahi ho. Baaki sab kaha hai.






Varsha- uncle jheel ke kinare kisi anjaan shakti ne hamla kiya hai. Ek ladka aaya hai amar se ladne jo apni aankho se lazor chhod raha hai. Vo normal nhi hai. Isse pehle kuch galat ho jaaye pls chaliye.





Ye sunke veer ka matha ghum gya. Usne varsha ko bahi rukne ko kaha or use andar bhej diya. Bahi amar tez raftar se doudta hua jheel ke pass jaane laga.




Abhi jheel ke pass pahuchne hi wala tha ki maine veer ko raste me hi rok liya




Or mujhe dekhke veer ki jaan me jaan aai.





Veer- hai vo jheel kinare kya ho raha hai.






Main- aao dikhata hu.




Main bhai ko leke usi jagah aaya jaha se me ab tak sab dekh raha tha.




Main- vo dekhiye bache kaise baha duri se unka mukabla kar rahe hai.






Bhai- tu pagal hai kya unki madad karne kyu nhi gya tu.






Main- bhai me yaha isiliye to ruka hua hu. Taaki waqt padne per unki madad kar saku. Lekin bache itni bahaduri or akalmandi se unhe sambhal rahe hai ki baha jaane ka man hi nhi kar raha hai. Or dusri baat unko aiso se nipatne ka abhyas karna chahiye kya pata kab iski noubat sajaye. Ye samajh lo unki traning chal rahi hai.







Bhai- achha. Baise ye ladka hai kon. Or ye aadha naag kon hai.





Main- ye ladka aapki hone wali bahu ka aashiq hai. Or iska pata nhi sayad black heart ka koi samarthak hoga.







Ye sunke bhai choukee




Bhai- kya kaha tune. Meri bahu.






Main- ha bhai amar ki gf ka aashiq hai. Kal iski band bajai amar ne aaj ye uska badla lene aagya powers ke sath. Or i m sure ye powers use is aadhe naag ne hi di hongi.







Bhai- badiya hai. Baise ab kya karne ka irada hai ashk ko pakad liya hai usne.






Main- bahi me dekhna chahta hu ki is situation ko kaise ye log handle karte hai.








Bhai- ok dekhte hai.










Ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare or kaise kare. Takshak ka hath uske muh ke ekdum pass tha isliye usne usne hath me jor se kaat liya. Or is achanak kaatne se takshak ki cheekh nikal gyi or uski pakad bhi dheeli hogyi ashk per or isi ka fayeda utha kar ashk takshak ke changul se aazad ho gyi. Or ek pathar usne uthaya or nishana laga kar use fel diya. Or vo pathar super speed se jeetu ki aankh me ghus gya. Or me sach kahunga uski ek aankh kaam se chali gyi. Or jeetu is dard me tadapane laga. Bahi teeno ne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya. Avi udd ke gya takshak ke pass to baaki dono ne jeetu ko pakad liya. Or Samar ne apni ungli se uski dusri aankh bhi fod daali. Jisse jeetu dard me tilbila gya. Use itna dard ho raha tha jiski koi seema nhi tha.







Bahi dusri taraf avi udta hua takshak ki taraf gya bahi beech beech me takshak apni puchh se ji ki kaafi lumbi thi avi ko maarne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin avi kaafi fast tha or uske har ek war se bach ke vo us tak pahuch hi gya or apne dono hatho ko aage karke ek sath usper energy ko chhoda or iska tagda jhatka laga usko. Or vo flat jameen per let gya. Bahi avi ne apne arm se ek sword banai or jor se uske pet per gira jisse us sword ne uske 2 tukde kar diye.






Lekin iska asar jyada nhi hua kyuki ab takshak apne insani rup me aagya tha. Or uske hatho me bhi ek sword thi.






Takshak- kya baat hai tin ke dibbe. Ab dikha kitna dum hai.





Ye kehkar usne uchhal kar avi per hamla kiya lekin avi ne hawa me hi use ek kick masti or vo is prahaar se dur ja gira.



Uske girte hi avi hawa me hi punch ki position leke tezi se neeche uske thobde ki taraf gya.



Bahi takshak samajh gya ki ab kya hone wala hai isliye vi jaldi se move kar gya or avi ka punch uski jagah jameen me dhas gya.



Avi jaldi se khada hua or usne ek chhoti si missile takshak ke uper nishana laga kar chhod di. Takshak kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo missile usse takta gyi or ek tez dhamaka sabhi ke kaano me gunja.



Charo taraf dhua or aag dikhne lagi.





Avi isme thoda carefree hogya tabhi achanak se use ek jordaar kick lagi or vo udta hua thodi dur girne hi wala tha ki usne beech hawa me udna shuru kar diya or full speed se udta hua gya or ek or jhatka mara energy ka. Jisse vo thodi dur ja gira.





Bahi dusri taraf jeetu ka kaam to almost tamam hi hi gya tha. Uski dono aankhe foot chuki thi. Or vo dard me behosh ho chuka tha. Bahi baaki ke teeno log bas in dono ki fight dekh rahe the. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki akhir ye fight jeet kon raha hai or is naag ka kaise ant hoga.






Bahi takshak ka bhi dimaag kharab ho raha tha kyuki usper ye bacha bhari pad raha hai. Na hi use jeetne de raha tha balki ulta usi ki band baja raha tha.





Isliye usne apni power ka istemaal karne ka socha or usne apni talvar ko hath me pakda or apne hatho ko joda. Bahi avi or baaki dekhne lage ki ye kya kar raha hai.





Bahi takshak ne kuch mantra pade or apna muh khola. Or uske muh kholte hi uske muh se kuch nikalne laga kuch dhua type or charo taraf failne laga.


Or itna Ghana failne laga ki khud ke hath bhi na dikhe kisi dusre ko dekhne ki baat to chhod hi do.










Ab dekhte hai is dhuye me kya karta hai takshak or surya or veer kab tak aise dekhte hai is fight ko.


Or avi or baaki kaise is takshak ko harate hai.

















To be continue………………………..

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