Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Rahul0087@]

Beautifull update mitr

awesome update

superb update

good update

super duper update

very nice update

Shandhar update

awesome super update

Thanks bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye....



Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Isme dekhiye ki surya apne bhaiyo ke liye kya karta hai. Or janiye ki ye villain akhir hai kon...





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Toh kya yash mar gaya? Ya phir yeh yoon hi phenk raha hai
Ab aage kya hona hai kaun hai yeh aakhir?

Ha bhai dekhiye is update me ki usne yash ke sath or baakio ke sath kiya kya hai. Or surya unhe bacha pata hai bhi ya nahi.. janne ke liye sath bane rahe...




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To aakhir aamna samna ho hi gya ya ye bhi koi bluff h iska...agr saamne aagya h to lgta h pkka kuchh kaand kr hi dega dekhte h surya sabhi ko bacha bhi paayega aur khud bhi bach paayega ya fir ek guilt lekr ki wo kisi ko bhi ya kisi ek ko bcha nhi paya sab usi ki wajha se hua. Iss guilt ke sath yaha se jayega...khair ye to dekha jaayega pr ye jo villain h ye technology me bahut hi aage h...aur base ke bahar jo badal aur ret ka tufaan aur bijliyaan thi wo usne kratrim bnai hongi...to dekhte h ki aage kya hota h kahani me...
Wairing brother..🗡

Sahi kaha bhai villain ki technology kuch jyada hi advance hai. Or yahi surya per bhari padne wali hai. Ab dekhna ye hai ki surya iska saamna kaise karta hai. Or ye villain akhir surya ko harane ke liye kya karta hai. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe..





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Good job dude
jakaaaaaaasssssss update diya hai Surya base pa ponch gya hai villain ka samany ponch gya ab dekhiye hain kia hota hai.......
marvelous awesome fabolous

Sahi kaha bhai dono ka samana samana ho gya hai dhamaka to jarur hoga. Ab dekhna ye hai ki isme jeet kiski hoti hai...




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Nice update kya sach me rony mara gaya ya ye koi chaal hai

Awesome update bro

Nice upy bro

Zaberdast bahot shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

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Bahot khoob superb

Thanks bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye..


Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Isme janiye ki villajn ne akhir kya kiya hai yash or vakio ke sath or kya surya unhe bacha payega ya nahi..




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UPDATE - 8















Mera chehra dekhkar vo fir se hasne laga.



Mask- dekh sakl dekh teri. Aaj asal maayne me teri haar ho gyi.





Mujhe bahut gussa aaraha tha or maine usi gusse me ek jordaar punch us box me de mara. Or isse us kanch me ek crack aagya. Or ye dekhkar vo char kadam peechhe ho gya.




Mask- gjb yaar tujhe pata hai ye dunia ka sabse majbut kanch hai. Isper agar chattan bhi gira do tab bhi isme ek halka sa skretch tak nahi aayega. Lekin tere ek punch ne hi isme itni badi darar laga di.






Main- agle punch me ye kanch jameen per chhote chhote tukdo me pada hoga. Isliye jaldi bata kaha hai Rony.






Mask- ghabra mat. Filhaal jinda hai. Lekin kab tak rahega iski guarantee nahi hai.







Main- matlab.





Mask- matlab ye ki. Maine uske andar ek bahut hi khatarnaak virus inject kar diya hai. Or uske lagte hi agle 2 ghanto me rony ki death tay hai. Bhale hi uske andar tere baap ka formula ho. Vo bhi use nahi bacha payega.






Main- kitna time hua hai tujhe ye virus inject kiye.






Mask- lagbhag 1 ghanta ho gya hai. Or tere baaki ke dono bhaiyo me bhi ye formula maine inject kar diya hai. Teeno hi agle 1 ghante me mout ko gale laga lenge. Or unko keval antidote hi bacha sakta hai jo mere pass hai.





Main- ab jara ye batayega ki vo antidote ke liye mujhe kya karna hoga.






Mask- ha kyu nahi. Tujhe apne aap ko maarna hoga. Jaan se. Main tujhe ab jinda nahi dekhna chahta.






Main- ye sambhav nahi hai.






Mask- fir bhi marna to tujhe padega hi tabhi un teeno ki jaan bach payegi. Kya tu apne bhaiyo ke liye itna nahi kar sakta.






Main- kar sakta hu. Lekin meri body aisa hone nahi degi. Isliye ye hona filhaal mumkin nahi hai. Baaki tere pass koi rasta ho to bata de. Me kar lunga baisa or mar jaunga. Lekin usse pehle mujhe mere teeno bhai sahi salamat chahiye








Mask- kya tu sach me marne ko tayyar hai.mat really.





Main- apne bhaiyo ke liye kuch bhi.





Mask- kya baat. Lekin iski kya guarntee hai ki tere bhaiyo ko sahi salamat dekh kar Tera irada nahi badlega.





Main- itna bharosa to rakhna padega tujhe. Kyuki is hisaab se to main bhi keh sakta hu ki mere marne ke baad tune unhe antidote nahi diya to. Isliye tujhe meri mout chahiye main dene ko tayyar hu. Lekin mujhe jo chahiye vo mujhe pehle chahiye.






Tabhi mere kano me lage microphone me ek aawaj aai.





Bhai teeno mil gye hai. Bas antidote ki kami hai. Jo jaldi se inhe dena padega.







Main- to bol kya bolta hai.





Mask- theek hai main unhe antidote de dunga lekin aadha pura tere marne ke baad dunga.





Main- nahi. Pura ek hi baar me dena hoga. Verna deal cancel.





Mask- to theek hai bacha le unhe. Bina mare hi. Main janta hu tu abhi is kanch ko tod kar bahar niklega or sabko maar dega. Bas kuch sec. Lagenge tujhe. Lekin aisa karne ke baad bhi tujhe antidote nahi milega.fir chahe tu pura base hi chhan marna. Tu uski ek boond tak nahi dhund payega. Or tu ghar se bhi itni door hai ki tujhe ghar tak pahuchne me bahut time lagega. Or tera baap jo iska antidote bana sakta hai. Use bhi kuch ghanto to lag hi jayenge antidote banane me. Tab tak in teeno mese koi bhi jinda nahi bachega. Ab faisla tujhe karna hai.






Main- theek hai mere saamne tu unko antidote laga. Fir jo kahega me baise kar dunga khud ko.






Mask- theek hai.



Uske baad vo baha se chala gya. Or uske jaate hi us cabin me AC duct se koi gas leak hone lagi. Jisse mujhe kuch fark nahi pad raha tha. Kam se kam mujhe to aisa hi lag raha tha.




Tabhi kuch logo ne samne ke moniters ko on kar diya. Jisme bahi mask wala banda ek ek ko aadha antidote de raha tha. Baaki ka alag rakhta ja raha tha.




Bahi ye seen koi or bhi dekh raha tha. Bade gour se. Or uski najar antidote per hi thi.jab teeno ko antidote lag gya uske baad vo mask wala un teeno ke bache hue doj ko baha se le gya. Or ek khaas jagah per unhe chhipa diya. Or vo aisi jagah thi ki agar surya sach me dhundta to bhi use nahi milta. Lekin ab do aankho ne vo jagah dekh li thi or use kaise open karna hai ye bhi. Bas ab use uske baha se jaane ka hi intjaar tha.


Or vo baha per kuch uske khaas bando ko chhod gya. Or surya ki taraf nikal gya. Uske chehre per ek vijay muskaan thi.


Bahi uske baha se jaate hi Uper ki AC duct se vo insan neeche kuda or koi kuch samajh pata usse pehle hi baha per sabhi ki lashe padi hui thi. Uske baad usne jaldi hi us secrate safe ko open kiya or vo baaki ka doj le liya. Or bapis se usi duct me ghus gya. Or jaldi se un teeno ke kamro me gya jaha per vo teeno ek chair se bandhe hue the. Usne teeno ko unka baaki ka doj bhi de diya. Or turant hi mujhe uski jaankari de di.





Mask- lo ab tumhara kaam to hogya. Ab mere kaam ki baari hai. To ready ho.




Main- pehle ye batao ki tum ho kon. Apni asliyat to bata do.





Mask- ha ye kaam reh gya hai.



Ye kehke usne apna mask nikalna suru kiya. Or jaise hi uska mask hata or meri najar padi uske chehre per. Lekin main use nahi pehchanta tha. Tabhi usne kuch kiya or uska pura huliya ek dum se badal gya. Like kisi jadu ki tarah. Or mere samne jo saks tha uske to main neend me bhi pehchan lu.





Main- Kaal tu mara nahi.






Kaal- mujhe maar pana itna aasan nahi surya. Us raat me jaan gya tha ki meri aakhiri raat hone baali hai kyuki main kai saalo se time travel karta aaya hu. Or apna past present and future sab dekh chuka hu. Or agar kuch nahi dekha hai to use me jab chahu baha jaake dekh sakta hu. Jaise maine aaj ke is scane ko dekha tha. Jaha tu mere samne hai or tera chhota bhai Aadil tere baaki teeno bhaiyo ko antidote ka baaki doj de raha hai or unke hosh me aane ka wait kar raha hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka.





Main- matlab tujhe sab pehle hi pata tha ki kaise kab kya hone wala hai.






Kaal- ha us raat jise tune mara tha. Vo meri hi shaktiyo se bana mera hi ek putla tha. Jisme meri jaisi hi shaktiya thi. Or jise tune maar diya. Or tune socha ki tune kaal ko maar diya.





Main- abe to itna sab karne ki jarurat kya thi. Agar tujhe ter jeevandaan mil gya tha to yaha se bhag kyu nahi gya. Bapis kyu aaya hai yaha marne.








Kaal- mujhe maarega tu. Bhool mat ki jaise tujhe ab maar pana bahut hi muskil hai baise hi mujhe maar pana ab aasambhav hai. Tere andar to meri thodi hi shaktiya hai jo us bebakoof senoy ki bajah se tujhe mil gyi. Lekin ye mat bhool ki mere andar un saari shaktiyo ka bhandaar hai.






Main- chal jaane de. Mujhe ye bata ki tu akhir chahta kya hai or ye sab kyu kar raha hai. Yaha aaya hi kyu tha tu.







Kaal- mera jo bhi maksad hai vo tujhe kabhi pata nahi chal payega. Bas itna jaan le ki teri is prithvi ka ant ab najdeek hai. Or tu chinta mat kar tere charo bhaiyo ko main sahi salamat ghar pahucha dunga. Mujhe bas tujhse hi khatra tha. Jo ab dur ho gya hai.




Itna kehkar kaal apne moniter me kuch karne laga. Bahi main apni puri takat laga kar us kanch per punch maarne laga. Lekin main hairan tha ki meri saari takat laga kar bhi main us kanch ka kuch nahi bigaad pa raha tha. Jabki uske andar pehle maine hi itna bada crack laya tha.abhi.




Ye sab dekhkar kaal hasne laga.




Kaal- lagale jitni taakat bachi hai sab laga le. Tune jo abhi gas apne andar li hai.ye sab uska hi asar hai. Vo gas teri shaktiyo ko kamjor karti ja rahi hai. Or tujhe heal hone ka time nahi mil pa raha hai. Or ab uska koi fayeda bhi nahi hai.




Ye kehke kaal ne keypad per last button press kiya or us cabin me uper ki chhat ek side ko hone lagi. Or us chhat ke uper kuch bahut hi bade equipment lage hue the. Pata nahi kis kaam ke the. Lekin thodi hi der me unse ek roshni nikalne lagi. Or jaise jaise vo roshni ekathhi ho rahi baise hi vo ek aakar leti ja rahi thi. Or mujhe samajhte jyada der nahi lagi ki ye sab kya hai.





Main- Kaal tu bachega nahi ye yaad rakhna. Abki baar tu chahe kitni baar hi apna future dekh ke aa jana lekin tu jinda nahi bach payega. Or agar bach gya to main ek baap ki aulaad nahi.




Maine itna hi bola tha ki uper saari roshni ekathhi ho chuki thi or usne ek chhote se black hole ma roop le liya tha. Or me uske itne karib tha jaise hi black hole complete hua usne mujhe tezi se apne andar kheech liya. Bahi main uske andar chala gya or mere andar jaate hi kaal ne black hole ko turant hi band kar diya.



Bahi main tez speed se anant aakash me aage badta hua ja raha tha. Baha per na hawa tha na gravity lekin black hole ne mujhe andar kheech kar meri thodi speed bada di thi lekin mujhe to kuch hosh hi nahi tha ki main kaha hu or kaha ja raha hu. Kyuki baha ke atmosphere me pahuchte hi main behosh hogya tha. Ya mar gya tha pata nahi…










To be continue………………..

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 8















Mera chehra dekhkar vo fir se hasne laga.



Mask- dekh sakl dekh teri. Aaj asal maayne me teri haar ho gyi.





Mujhe bahut gussa aaraha tha or maine usi gusse me ek jordaar punch us box me de mara. Or isse us kanch me ek crack aagya. Or ye dekhkar vo char kadam peechhe ho gya.




Mask- gjb yaar tujhe pata hai ye dunia ka sabse majbut kanch hai. Isper agar chattan bhi gira do tab bhi isme ek halka sa skretch tak nahi aayega. Lekin tere ek punch ne hi isme itni badi darar laga di.






Main- agle punch me ye kanch jameen per chhote chhote tukdo me pada hoga. Isliye jaldi bata kaha hai Rony.






Mask- ghabra mat. Filhaal jinda hai. Lekin kab tak rahega iski guarantee nahi hai.







Main- matlab.





Mask- matlab ye ki. Maine uske andar ek bahut hi khatarnaak virus inject kar diya hai. Or uske lagte hi agle 2 ghanto me rony ki death tay hai. Bhale hi uske andar tere baap ka formula ho. Vo bhi use nahi bacha payega.






Main- kitna time hua hai tujhe ye virus inject kiye.






Mask- lagbhag 1 ghanta ho gya hai. Or tere baaki ke dono bhaiyo me bhi ye formula maine inject kar diya hai. Teeno hi agle 1 ghante me mout ko gale laga lenge. Or unko keval antidote hi bacha sakta hai jo mere pass hai.





Main- ab jara ye batayega ki vo antidote ke liye mujhe kya karna hoga.






Mask- ha kyu nahi. Tujhe apne aap ko maarna hoga. Jaan se. Main tujhe ab jinda nahi dekhna chahta.






Main- ye sambhav nahi hai.






Mask- fir bhi marna to tujhe padega hi tabhi un teeno ki jaan bach payegi. Kya tu apne bhaiyo ke liye itna nahi kar sakta.






Main- kar sakta hu. Lekin meri body aisa hone nahi degi. Isliye ye hona filhaal mumkin nahi hai. Baaki tere pass koi rasta ho to bata de. Me kar lunga baisa or mar jaunga. Lekin usse pehle mujhe mere teeno bhai sahi salamat chahiye








Mask- kya tu sach me marne ko tayyar hai.mat really.





Main- apne bhaiyo ke liye kuch bhi.





Mask- kya baat. Lekin iski kya guarntee hai ki tere bhaiyo ko sahi salamat dekh kar Tera irada nahi badlega.





Main- itna bharosa to rakhna padega tujhe. Kyuki is hisaab se to main bhi keh sakta hu ki mere marne ke baad tune unhe antidote nahi diya to. Isliye tujhe meri mout chahiye main dene ko tayyar hu. Lekin mujhe jo chahiye vo mujhe pehle chahiye.






Tabhi mere kano me lage microphone me ek aawaj aai.





Bhai teeno mil gye hai. Bas antidote ki kami hai. Jo jaldi se inhe dena padega.







Main- to bol kya bolta hai.





Mask- theek hai main unhe antidote de dunga lekin aadha pura tere marne ke baad dunga.





Main- nahi. Pura ek hi baar me dena hoga. Verna deal cancel.





Mask- to theek hai bacha le unhe. Bina mare hi. Main janta hu tu abhi is kanch ko tod kar bahar niklega or sabko maar dega. Bas kuch sec. Lagenge tujhe. Lekin aisa karne ke baad bhi tujhe antidote nahi milega.fir chahe tu pura base hi chhan marna. Tu uski ek boond tak nahi dhund payega. Or tu ghar se bhi itni door hai ki tujhe ghar tak pahuchne me bahut time lagega. Or tera baap jo iska antidote bana sakta hai. Use bhi kuch ghanto to lag hi jayenge antidote banane me. Tab tak in teeno mese koi bhi jinda nahi bachega. Ab faisla tujhe karna hai.






Main- theek hai mere saamne tu unko antidote laga. Fir jo kahega me baise kar dunga khud ko.






Mask- theek hai.



Uske baad vo baha se chala gya. Or uske jaate hi us cabin me AC duct se koi gas leak hone lagi. Jisse mujhe kuch fark nahi pad raha tha. Kam se kam mujhe to aisa hi lag raha tha.




Tabhi kuch logo ne samne ke moniters ko on kar diya. Jisme bahi mask wala banda ek ek ko aadha antidote de raha tha. Baaki ka alag rakhta ja raha tha.




Bahi ye seen koi or bhi dekh raha tha. Bade gour se. Or uski najar antidote per hi thi.jab teeno ko antidote lag gya uske baad vo mask wala un teeno ke bache hue doj ko baha se le gya. Or ek khaas jagah per unhe chhipa diya. Or vo aisi jagah thi ki agar surya sach me dhundta to bhi use nahi milta. Lekin ab do aankho ne vo jagah dekh li thi or use kaise open karna hai ye bhi. Bas ab use uske baha se jaane ka hi intjaar tha.


Or vo baha per kuch uske khaas bando ko chhod gya. Or surya ki taraf nikal gya. Uske chehre per ek vijay muskaan thi.


Bahi uske baha se jaate hi Uper ki AC duct se vo insan neeche kuda or koi kuch samajh pata usse pehle hi baha per sabhi ki lashe padi hui thi. Uske baad usne jaldi hi us secrate safe ko open kiya or vo baaki ka doj le liya. Or bapis se usi duct me ghus gya. Or jaldi se un teeno ke kamro me gya jaha per vo teeno ek chair se bandhe hue the. Usne teeno ko unka baaki ka doj bhi de diya. Or turant hi mujhe uski jaankari de di.





Mask- lo ab tumhara kaam to hogya. Ab mere kaam ki baari hai. To ready ho.




Main- pehle ye batao ki tum ho kon. Apni asliyat to bata do.





Mask- ha ye kaam reh gya hai.



Ye kehke usne apna mask nikalna suru kiya. Or jaise hi uska mask hata or meri najar padi uske chehre per. Lekin main use nahi pehchanta tha. Tabhi usne kuch kiya or uska pura huliya ek dum se badal gya. Like kisi jadu ki tarah. Or mere samne jo saks tha uske to main neend me bhi pehchan lu.





Main- Kaal tu mara nahi.






Kaal- mujhe maar pana itna aasan nahi surya. Us raat me jaan gya tha ki meri aakhiri raat hone baali hai kyuki main kai saalo se time travel karta aaya hu. Or apna past present and future sab dekh chuka hu. Or agar kuch nahi dekha hai to use me jab chahu baha jaake dekh sakta hu. Jaise maine aaj ke is scane ko dekha tha. Jaha tu mere samne hai or tera chhota bhai Aadil tere baaki teeno bhaiyo ko antidote ka baaki doj de raha hai or unke hosh me aane ka wait kar raha hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka.





Main- matlab tujhe sab pehle hi pata tha ki kaise kab kya hone wala hai.






Kaal- ha us raat jise tune mara tha. Vo meri hi shaktiyo se bana mera hi ek putla tha. Jisme meri jaisi hi shaktiya thi. Or jise tune maar diya. Or tune socha ki tune kaal ko maar diya.





Main- abe to itna sab karne ki jarurat kya thi. Agar tujhe ter jeevandaan mil gya tha to yaha se bhag kyu nahi gya. Bapis kyu aaya hai yaha marne.








Kaal- mujhe maarega tu. Bhool mat ki jaise tujhe ab maar pana bahut hi muskil hai baise hi mujhe maar pana ab aasambhav hai. Tere andar to meri thodi hi shaktiya hai jo us bebakoof senoy ki bajah se tujhe mil gyi. Lekin ye mat bhool ki mere andar un saari shaktiyo ka bhandaar hai.






Main- chal jaane de. Mujhe ye bata ki tu akhir chahta kya hai or ye sab kyu kar raha hai. Yaha aaya hi kyu tha tu.







Kaal- mera jo bhi maksad hai vo tujhe kabhi pata nahi chal payega. Bas itna jaan le ki teri is prithvi ka ant ab najdeek hai. Or tu chinta mat kar tere charo bhaiyo ko main sahi salamat ghar pahucha dunga. Mujhe bas tujhse hi khatra tha. Jo ab dur ho gya hai.




Itna kehkar kaal apne moniter me kuch karne laga. Bahi main apni puri takat laga kar us kanch per punch maarne laga. Lekin main hairan tha ki meri saari takat laga kar bhi main us kanch ka kuch nahi bigaad pa raha tha. Jabki uske andar pehle maine hi itna bada crack laya tha.abhi.




Ye sab dekhkar kaal hasne laga.




Kaal- lagale jitni taakat bachi hai sab laga le. Tune jo abhi gas apne andar li hai.ye sab uska hi asar hai. Vo gas teri shaktiyo ko kamjor karti ja rahi hai. Or tujhe heal hone ka time nahi mil pa raha hai. Or ab uska koi fayeda bhi nahi hai.




Ye kehke kaal ne keypad per last button press kiya or us cabin me uper ki chhat ek side ko hone lagi. Or us chhat ke uper kuch bahut hi bade equipment lage hue the. Pata nahi kis kaam ke the. Lekin thodi hi der me unse ek roshni nikalne lagi. Or jaise jaise vo roshni ekathhi ho rahi baise hi vo ek aakar leti ja rahi thi. Or mujhe samajhte jyada der nahi lagi ki ye sab kya hai.





Main- Kaal tu bachega nahi ye yaad rakhna. Abki baar tu chahe kitni baar hi apna future dekh ke aa jana lekin tu jinda nahi bach payega. Or agar bach gya to main ek baap ki aulaad nahi.




Maine itna hi bola tha ki uper saari roshni ekathhi ho chuki thi or usne ek chhote se black hole ma roop le liya tha. Or me uske itne karib tha jaise hi black hole complete hua usne mujhe tezi se apne andar kheech liya. Bahi main uske andar chala gya or mere andar jaate hi kaal ne black hole ko turant hi band kar diya.



Bahi main tez speed se anant aakash me aage badta hua ja raha tha. Baha per na hawa tha na gravity lekin black hole ne mujhe andar kheech kar meri thodi speed bada di thi lekin mujhe to kuch hosh hi nahi tha ki main kaha hu or kaha ja raha hu. Kyuki baha ke atmosphere me pahuchte hi main behosh hogya tha. Ya mar gya tha pata nahi…










To be continue………………..

Beshkimti update bhai

 

[krish1152]

Mast update surya kisi aur greh per paunch gaya

 

[Akil]

UPDATE - 8















Mera chehra dekhkar vo fir se hasne laga.



Mask- dekh sakl dekh teri. Aaj asal maayne me teri haar ho gyi.





Mujhe bahut gussa aaraha tha or maine usi gusse me ek jordaar punch us box me de mara. Or isse us kanch me ek crack aagya. Or ye dekhkar vo char kadam peechhe ho gya.




Mask- gjb yaar tujhe pata hai ye dunia ka sabse majbut kanch hai. Isper agar chattan bhi gira do tab bhi isme ek halka sa skretch tak nahi aayega. Lekin tere ek punch ne hi isme itni badi darar laga di.






Main- agle punch me ye kanch jameen per chhote chhote tukdo me pada hoga. Isliye jaldi bata kaha hai Rony.






Mask- ghabra mat. Filhaal jinda hai. Lekin kab tak rahega iski guarantee nahi hai.







Main- matlab.





Mask- matlab ye ki. Maine uske andar ek bahut hi khatarnaak virus inject kar diya hai. Or uske lagte hi agle 2 ghanto me rony ki death tay hai. Bhale hi uske andar tere baap ka formula ho. Vo bhi use nahi bacha payega.






Main- kitna time hua hai tujhe ye virus inject kiye.






Mask- lagbhag 1 ghanta ho gya hai. Or tere baaki ke dono bhaiyo me bhi ye formula maine inject kar diya hai. Teeno hi agle 1 ghante me mout ko gale laga lenge. Or unko keval antidote hi bacha sakta hai jo mere pass hai.





Main- ab jara ye batayega ki vo antidote ke liye mujhe kya karna hoga.






Mask- ha kyu nahi. Tujhe apne aap ko maarna hoga. Jaan se. Main tujhe ab jinda nahi dekhna chahta.






Main- ye sambhav nahi hai.






Mask- fir bhi marna to tujhe padega hi tabhi un teeno ki jaan bach payegi. Kya tu apne bhaiyo ke liye itna nahi kar sakta.






Main- kar sakta hu. Lekin meri body aisa hone nahi degi. Isliye ye hona filhaal mumkin nahi hai. Baaki tere pass koi rasta ho to bata de. Me kar lunga baisa or mar jaunga. Lekin usse pehle mujhe mere teeno bhai sahi salamat chahiye








Mask- kya tu sach me marne ko tayyar hai.mat really.





Main- apne bhaiyo ke liye kuch bhi.





Mask- kya baat. Lekin iski kya guarntee hai ki tere bhaiyo ko sahi salamat dekh kar Tera irada nahi badlega.





Main- itna bharosa to rakhna padega tujhe. Kyuki is hisaab se to main bhi keh sakta hu ki mere marne ke baad tune unhe antidote nahi diya to. Isliye tujhe meri mout chahiye main dene ko tayyar hu. Lekin mujhe jo chahiye vo mujhe pehle chahiye.






Tabhi mere kano me lage microphone me ek aawaj aai.





Bhai teeno mil gye hai. Bas antidote ki kami hai. Jo jaldi se inhe dena padega.







Main- to bol kya bolta hai.





Mask- theek hai main unhe antidote de dunga lekin aadha pura tere marne ke baad dunga.





Main- nahi. Pura ek hi baar me dena hoga. Verna deal cancel.





Mask- to theek hai bacha le unhe. Bina mare hi. Main janta hu tu abhi is kanch ko tod kar bahar niklega or sabko maar dega. Bas kuch sec. Lagenge tujhe. Lekin aisa karne ke baad bhi tujhe antidote nahi milega.fir chahe tu pura base hi chhan marna. Tu uski ek boond tak nahi dhund payega. Or tu ghar se bhi itni door hai ki tujhe ghar tak pahuchne me bahut time lagega. Or tera baap jo iska antidote bana sakta hai. Use bhi kuch ghanto to lag hi jayenge antidote banane me. Tab tak in teeno mese koi bhi jinda nahi bachega. Ab faisla tujhe karna hai.






Main- theek hai mere saamne tu unko antidote laga. Fir jo kahega me baise kar dunga khud ko.






Mask- theek hai.



Uske baad vo baha se chala gya. Or uske jaate hi us cabin me AC duct se koi gas leak hone lagi. Jisse mujhe kuch fark nahi pad raha tha. Kam se kam mujhe to aisa hi lag raha tha.




Tabhi kuch logo ne samne ke moniters ko on kar diya. Jisme bahi mask wala banda ek ek ko aadha antidote de raha tha. Baaki ka alag rakhta ja raha tha.




Bahi ye seen koi or bhi dekh raha tha. Bade gour se. Or uski najar antidote per hi thi.jab teeno ko antidote lag gya uske baad vo mask wala un teeno ke bache hue doj ko baha se le gya. Or ek khaas jagah per unhe chhipa diya. Or vo aisi jagah thi ki agar surya sach me dhundta to bhi use nahi milta. Lekin ab do aankho ne vo jagah dekh li thi or use kaise open karna hai ye bhi. Bas ab use uske baha se jaane ka hi intjaar tha.


Or vo baha per kuch uske khaas bando ko chhod gya. Or surya ki taraf nikal gya. Uske chehre per ek vijay muskaan thi.


Bahi uske baha se jaate hi Uper ki AC duct se vo insan neeche kuda or koi kuch samajh pata usse pehle hi baha per sabhi ki lashe padi hui thi. Uske baad usne jaldi hi us secrate safe ko open kiya or vo baaki ka doj le liya. Or bapis se usi duct me ghus gya. Or jaldi se un teeno ke kamro me gya jaha per vo teeno ek chair se bandhe hue the. Usne teeno ko unka baaki ka doj bhi de diya. Or turant hi mujhe uski jaankari de di.





Mask- lo ab tumhara kaam to hogya. Ab mere kaam ki baari hai. To ready ho.




Main- pehle ye batao ki tum ho kon. Apni asliyat to bata do.





Mask- ha ye kaam reh gya hai.



Ye kehke usne apna mask nikalna suru kiya. Or jaise hi uska mask hata or meri najar padi uske chehre per. Lekin main use nahi pehchanta tha. Tabhi usne kuch kiya or uska pura huliya ek dum se badal gya. Like kisi jadu ki tarah. Or mere samne jo saks tha uske to main neend me bhi pehchan lu.





Main- Kaal tu mara nahi.






Kaal- mujhe maar pana itna aasan nahi surya. Us raat me jaan gya tha ki meri aakhiri raat hone baali hai kyuki main kai saalo se time travel karta aaya hu. Or apna past present and future sab dekh chuka hu. Or agar kuch nahi dekha hai to use me jab chahu baha jaake dekh sakta hu. Jaise maine aaj ke is scane ko dekha tha. Jaha tu mere samne hai or tera chhota bhai Aadil tere baaki teeno bhaiyo ko antidote ka baaki doj de raha hai or unke hosh me aane ka wait kar raha hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka.





Main- matlab tujhe sab pehle hi pata tha ki kaise kab kya hone wala hai.






Kaal- ha us raat jise tune mara tha. Vo meri hi shaktiyo se bana mera hi ek putla tha. Jisme meri jaisi hi shaktiya thi. Or jise tune maar diya. Or tune socha ki tune kaal ko maar diya.





Main- abe to itna sab karne ki jarurat kya thi. Agar tujhe ter jeevandaan mil gya tha to yaha se bhag kyu nahi gya. Bapis kyu aaya hai yaha marne.








Kaal- mujhe maarega tu. Bhool mat ki jaise tujhe ab maar pana bahut hi muskil hai baise hi mujhe maar pana ab aasambhav hai. Tere andar to meri thodi hi shaktiya hai jo us bebakoof senoy ki bajah se tujhe mil gyi. Lekin ye mat bhool ki mere andar un saari shaktiyo ka bhandaar hai.






Main- chal jaane de. Mujhe ye bata ki tu akhir chahta kya hai or ye sab kyu kar raha hai. Yaha aaya hi kyu tha tu.







Kaal- mera jo bhi maksad hai vo tujhe kabhi pata nahi chal payega. Bas itna jaan le ki teri is prithvi ka ant ab najdeek hai. Or tu chinta mat kar tere charo bhaiyo ko main sahi salamat ghar pahucha dunga. Mujhe bas tujhse hi khatra tha. Jo ab dur ho gya hai.




Itna kehkar kaal apne moniter me kuch karne laga. Bahi main apni puri takat laga kar us kanch per punch maarne laga. Lekin main hairan tha ki meri saari takat laga kar bhi main us kanch ka kuch nahi bigaad pa raha tha. Jabki uske andar pehle maine hi itna bada crack laya tha.abhi.




Ye sab dekhkar kaal hasne laga.




Kaal- lagale jitni taakat bachi hai sab laga le. Tune jo abhi gas apne andar li hai.ye sab uska hi asar hai. Vo gas teri shaktiyo ko kamjor karti ja rahi hai. Or tujhe heal hone ka time nahi mil pa raha hai. Or ab uska koi fayeda bhi nahi hai.




Ye kehke kaal ne keypad per last button press kiya or us cabin me uper ki chhat ek side ko hone lagi. Or us chhat ke uper kuch bahut hi bade equipment lage hue the. Pata nahi kis kaam ke the. Lekin thodi hi der me unse ek roshni nikalne lagi. Or jaise jaise vo roshni ekathhi ho rahi baise hi vo ek aakar leti ja rahi thi. Or mujhe samajhte jyada der nahi lagi ki ye sab kya hai.





Main- Kaal tu bachega nahi ye yaad rakhna. Abki baar tu chahe kitni baar hi apna future dekh ke aa jana lekin tu jinda nahi bach payega. Or agar bach gya to main ek baap ki aulaad nahi.




Maine itna hi bola tha ki uper saari roshni ekathhi ho chuki thi or usne ek chhote se black hole ma roop le liya tha. Or me uske itne karib tha jaise hi black hole complete hua usne mujhe tezi se apne andar kheech liya. Bahi main uske andar chala gya or mere andar jaate hi kaal ne black hole ko turant hi band kar diya.



Bahi main tez speed se anant aakash me aage badta hua ja raha tha. Baha per na hawa tha na gravity lekin black hole ne mujhe andar kheech kar meri thodi speed bada di thi lekin mujhe to kuch hosh hi nahi tha ki main kaha hu or kaha ja raha hu. Kyuki baha ke atmosphere me pahuchte hi main behosh hogya tha. Ya mar gya tha pata nahi…










To be continue………………..

Yaar Surya agar mar gaya toh Kaal ko kaun rokega kyonki Avi iske liye abhi I think taiyar hai nahin aur baaqi sab milkar bhi yeh kar nahin sakte....... Dekhte hain ab aage kya hona hai
Wese Surya and family ko naya formulae kab milne wala hai

 

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UPDATE - 8















Mera chehra dekhkar vo fir se hasne laga.



Mask- dekh sakl dekh teri. Aaj asal maayne me teri haar ho gyi.





Mujhe bahut gussa aaraha tha or maine usi gusse me ek jordaar punch us box me de mara. Or isse us kanch me ek crack aagya. Or ye dekhkar vo char kadam peechhe ho gya.




Mask- gjb yaar tujhe pata hai ye dunia ka sabse majbut kanch hai. Isper agar chattan bhi gira do tab bhi isme ek halka sa skretch tak nahi aayega. Lekin tere ek punch ne hi isme itni badi darar laga di.






Main- agle punch me ye kanch jameen per chhote chhote tukdo me pada hoga. Isliye jaldi bata kaha hai Rony.






Mask- ghabra mat. Filhaal jinda hai. Lekin kab tak rahega iski guarantee nahi hai.







Main- matlab.





Mask- matlab ye ki. Maine uske andar ek bahut hi khatarnaak virus inject kar diya hai. Or uske lagte hi agle 2 ghanto me rony ki death tay hai. Bhale hi uske andar tere baap ka formula ho. Vo bhi use nahi bacha payega.






Main- kitna time hua hai tujhe ye virus inject kiye.






Mask- lagbhag 1 ghanta ho gya hai. Or tere baaki ke dono bhaiyo me bhi ye formula maine inject kar diya hai. Teeno hi agle 1 ghante me mout ko gale laga lenge. Or unko keval antidote hi bacha sakta hai jo mere pass hai.





Main- ab jara ye batayega ki vo antidote ke liye mujhe kya karna hoga.






Mask- ha kyu nahi. Tujhe apne aap ko maarna hoga. Jaan se. Main tujhe ab jinda nahi dekhna chahta.






Main- ye sambhav nahi hai.






Mask- fir bhi marna to tujhe padega hi tabhi un teeno ki jaan bach payegi. Kya tu apne bhaiyo ke liye itna nahi kar sakta.






Main- kar sakta hu. Lekin meri body aisa hone nahi degi. Isliye ye hona filhaal mumkin nahi hai. Baaki tere pass koi rasta ho to bata de. Me kar lunga baisa or mar jaunga. Lekin usse pehle mujhe mere teeno bhai sahi salamat chahiye








Mask- kya tu sach me marne ko tayyar hai.mat really.





Main- apne bhaiyo ke liye kuch bhi.





Mask- kya baat. Lekin iski kya guarntee hai ki tere bhaiyo ko sahi salamat dekh kar Tera irada nahi badlega.





Main- itna bharosa to rakhna padega tujhe. Kyuki is hisaab se to main bhi keh sakta hu ki mere marne ke baad tune unhe antidote nahi diya to. Isliye tujhe meri mout chahiye main dene ko tayyar hu. Lekin mujhe jo chahiye vo mujhe pehle chahiye.






Tabhi mere kano me lage microphone me ek aawaj aai.





Bhai teeno mil gye hai. Bas antidote ki kami hai. Jo jaldi se inhe dena padega.







Main- to bol kya bolta hai.





Mask- theek hai main unhe antidote de dunga lekin aadha pura tere marne ke baad dunga.





Main- nahi. Pura ek hi baar me dena hoga. Verna deal cancel.





Mask- to theek hai bacha le unhe. Bina mare hi. Main janta hu tu abhi is kanch ko tod kar bahar niklega or sabko maar dega. Bas kuch sec. Lagenge tujhe. Lekin aisa karne ke baad bhi tujhe antidote nahi milega.fir chahe tu pura base hi chhan marna. Tu uski ek boond tak nahi dhund payega. Or tu ghar se bhi itni door hai ki tujhe ghar tak pahuchne me bahut time lagega. Or tera baap jo iska antidote bana sakta hai. Use bhi kuch ghanto to lag hi jayenge antidote banane me. Tab tak in teeno mese koi bhi jinda nahi bachega. Ab faisla tujhe karna hai.






Main- theek hai mere saamne tu unko antidote laga. Fir jo kahega me baise kar dunga khud ko.






Mask- theek hai.



Uske baad vo baha se chala gya. Or uske jaate hi us cabin me AC duct se koi gas leak hone lagi. Jisse mujhe kuch fark nahi pad raha tha. Kam se kam mujhe to aisa hi lag raha tha.




Tabhi kuch logo ne samne ke moniters ko on kar diya. Jisme bahi mask wala banda ek ek ko aadha antidote de raha tha. Baaki ka alag rakhta ja raha tha.




Bahi ye seen koi or bhi dekh raha tha. Bade gour se. Or uski najar antidote per hi thi.jab teeno ko antidote lag gya uske baad vo mask wala un teeno ke bache hue doj ko baha se le gya. Or ek khaas jagah per unhe chhipa diya. Or vo aisi jagah thi ki agar surya sach me dhundta to bhi use nahi milta. Lekin ab do aankho ne vo jagah dekh li thi or use kaise open karna hai ye bhi. Bas ab use uske baha se jaane ka hi intjaar tha.


Or vo baha per kuch uske khaas bando ko chhod gya. Or surya ki taraf nikal gya. Uske chehre per ek vijay muskaan thi.


Bahi uske baha se jaate hi Uper ki AC duct se vo insan neeche kuda or koi kuch samajh pata usse pehle hi baha per sabhi ki lashe padi hui thi. Uske baad usne jaldi hi us secrate safe ko open kiya or vo baaki ka doj le liya. Or bapis se usi duct me ghus gya. Or jaldi se un teeno ke kamro me gya jaha per vo teeno ek chair se bandhe hue the. Usne teeno ko unka baaki ka doj bhi de diya. Or turant hi mujhe uski jaankari de di.





Mask- lo ab tumhara kaam to hogya. Ab mere kaam ki baari hai. To ready ho.




Main- pehle ye batao ki tum ho kon. Apni asliyat to bata do.





Mask- ha ye kaam reh gya hai.



Ye kehke usne apna mask nikalna suru kiya. Or jaise hi uska mask hata or meri najar padi uske chehre per. Lekin main use nahi pehchanta tha. Tabhi usne kuch kiya or uska pura huliya ek dum se badal gya. Like kisi jadu ki tarah. Or mere samne jo saks tha uske to main neend me bhi pehchan lu.





Main- Kaal tu mara nahi.






Kaal- mujhe maar pana itna aasan nahi surya. Us raat me jaan gya tha ki meri aakhiri raat hone baali hai kyuki main kai saalo se time travel karta aaya hu. Or apna past present and future sab dekh chuka hu. Or agar kuch nahi dekha hai to use me jab chahu baha jaake dekh sakta hu. Jaise maine aaj ke is scane ko dekha tha. Jaha tu mere samne hai or tera chhota bhai Aadil tere baaki teeno bhaiyo ko antidote ka baaki doj de raha hai or unke hosh me aane ka wait kar raha hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka.





Main- matlab tujhe sab pehle hi pata tha ki kaise kab kya hone wala hai.






Kaal- ha us raat jise tune mara tha. Vo meri hi shaktiyo se bana mera hi ek putla tha. Jisme meri jaisi hi shaktiya thi. Or jise tune maar diya. Or tune socha ki tune kaal ko maar diya.





Main- abe to itna sab karne ki jarurat kya thi. Agar tujhe ter jeevandaan mil gya tha to yaha se bhag kyu nahi gya. Bapis kyu aaya hai yaha marne.








Kaal- mujhe maarega tu. Bhool mat ki jaise tujhe ab maar pana bahut hi muskil hai baise hi mujhe maar pana ab aasambhav hai. Tere andar to meri thodi hi shaktiya hai jo us bebakoof senoy ki bajah se tujhe mil gyi. Lekin ye mat bhool ki mere andar un saari shaktiyo ka bhandaar hai.






Main- chal jaane de. Mujhe ye bata ki tu akhir chahta kya hai or ye sab kyu kar raha hai. Yaha aaya hi kyu tha tu.







Kaal- mera jo bhi maksad hai vo tujhe kabhi pata nahi chal payega. Bas itna jaan le ki teri is prithvi ka ant ab najdeek hai. Or tu chinta mat kar tere charo bhaiyo ko main sahi salamat ghar pahucha dunga. Mujhe bas tujhse hi khatra tha. Jo ab dur ho gya hai.




Itna kehkar kaal apne moniter me kuch karne laga. Bahi main apni puri takat laga kar us kanch per punch maarne laga. Lekin main hairan tha ki meri saari takat laga kar bhi main us kanch ka kuch nahi bigaad pa raha tha. Jabki uske andar pehle maine hi itna bada crack laya tha.abhi.




Ye sab dekhkar kaal hasne laga.




Kaal- lagale jitni taakat bachi hai sab laga le. Tune jo abhi gas apne andar li hai.ye sab uska hi asar hai. Vo gas teri shaktiyo ko kamjor karti ja rahi hai. Or tujhe heal hone ka time nahi mil pa raha hai. Or ab uska koi fayeda bhi nahi hai.




Ye kehke kaal ne keypad per last button press kiya or us cabin me uper ki chhat ek side ko hone lagi. Or us chhat ke uper kuch bahut hi bade equipment lage hue the. Pata nahi kis kaam ke the. Lekin thodi hi der me unse ek roshni nikalne lagi. Or jaise jaise vo roshni ekathhi ho rahi baise hi vo ek aakar leti ja rahi thi. Or mujhe samajhte jyada der nahi lagi ki ye sab kya hai.





Main- Kaal tu bachega nahi ye yaad rakhna. Abki baar tu chahe kitni baar hi apna future dekh ke aa jana lekin tu jinda nahi bach payega. Or agar bach gya to main ek baap ki aulaad nahi.




Maine itna hi bola tha ki uper saari roshni ekathhi ho chuki thi or usne ek chhote se black hole ma roop le liya tha. Or me uske itne karib tha jaise hi black hole complete hua usne mujhe tezi se apne andar kheech liya. Bahi main uske andar chala gya or mere andar jaate hi kaal ne black hole ko turant hi band kar diya.



Bahi main tez speed se anant aakash me aage badta hua ja raha tha. Baha per na hawa tha na gravity lekin black hole ne mujhe andar kheech kar meri thodi speed bada di thi lekin mujhe to kuch hosh hi nahi tha ki main kaha hu or kaha ja raha hu. Kyuki baha ke atmosphere me pahuchte hi main behosh hogya tha. Ya mar gya tha pata nahi…










To be continue………………..

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