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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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main- ab isme hasne ki kya baat hai. Simple sa hi to sawal puchha hai tumse






U- darashal is sawal ka jawab filhaal mere pass bhi nahi hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga ek or jhatka.




Main- ab ye kya baat hui. Jab tumhe itna sab pata hai to ye kaise nahi pata.





U- darashal inki kamjori baise koi hai hi nahi. Or agar koi hogi bhi to uske ware me inke aalawa kisi ko pata hi nahi hai.





Main- to ab kya karu main. Inko kaise roku. Main koi jadugar nahi hu jo in bhoot preto ko rok saku. Balki unke pass jadui shaktiya hai. Vo mujhe cheeti ki tarah masal denge.





U- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Vo tumhe aaram se hara sakte hai. Lekin tumhe maar nahi sakte. Kyuki tumhare andar bhi kuch shaktiya hai. Jo tumhe bhi immortal banati hai. Halaki puri tarah se nahi lekin fir bhi tum ek immortal ho. Jise maar pana har kisi ke bas me nahi hai. Or rahi baat in sabko harane ki to samay aane per iski jaankari bhi tumhe mil jayegi. Isliye chinta chhodo or filhaal to tum jao bapis apne ghar. Sabhi tumhara besabri se intjaar kar rahe hai. Or ek baat ka khaas dhyan rakhna. Abhi kaal ke saamne mat aana. Uski najro me tum mar chuke ho. Us ka fayeda uthana. Or chupchap apni tayyari karna.





Main- kam se kam ye to bata do ki ye black heart kaha per or kaise qaid hai or kaal kaise usko aazaad karane wala hai.






U- darashal kaal ek tilismi pathar ki talash kar raha hai. Jo prithvi per hi kahi chhipa hua hai. Jiska naam hai Paras Pathar. Jaise hi is pathar ko us black heart ki body se touch karaya jayega vo turant hi jaag jayega ya yu kaho ki jinda ho jayega. Kyuki filhaal vo qaid hai ya yu kaho ki mara hua hai. Uski soul ko usi ke baap ne qaid kar liya hai. Or uski body ko jalane ke liye chhod diya tha. Lekin kaal ne uski body ko bacha liya or tabse vo usi Paras Pathar ki khoj kar raha hai. Lekin use abhi tak kuch nahi mila. Lekin ab jald hi use paras pathar milne wala hai. Kyuki usne kai baar time travel kiya hai sirf yahi janne ke liye ki ye pathar akhir kaha per chhipa hua hai. Or use thoda andaja bhi ho gya hai. Isliye ab uska rukh usi taraf hai.











Main- ek baat batao jab tumhe sab pata hai to tum use rokte kyu nahi. Tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe sampurna gyan hai past present and future ka. Fir use rok kyu nahi lete tum.






U- is baat ka jawab tumhare sawal me hi chhipa hua hai. Mujhe pata hai ki aage kaise or kya hone wala hai. Or use kon pura karega. Or me samay me chedchaad nahi kar sakta. Jis kaam ke liye jise chuna gaya hai use bahi karna hoga. Isliye main use chah kar bhi nahi rok sakta. Rokna to tumhe hi padega.







Main- ye kaal is waqt kaha hai or kis bhes me hai. Bas itna or bata do.





U- vo is samay. Nagaland me hai baha ka ACP ban kar ghoom raha hai. Baaki uske sathi uske aaspass hi rehte hai.






Main- thanks for the information.
Main jau kaise ghar ye bhi bata do.






U- apni speed force se or kaise. Kholo portal





Main- poratl to main khol lu. Lekin mujhe ye idea nahi hai ki portal ko sahi jagah ke liye kaise nevigate karte hai. Maine labhi try kiya hi nahi hai. Agar me kahi or pahuch gya to.







U- are ye bahut hi simple hai. Tumhe bas apni soch ko kabu karna hai. Speed force ke douraan tumhe apne man me us jagah ke baare me hi sochna hai jaha tumhe jana hai. Bas vo poratl tumhe bahi pahucha dega.





Main- ye kaise sambhav hai.





U- dekho tum jo bhi energy generate karoge usper tumhara hi kabu hoga. Tumhara dimaag tumhari shaktiyo ko order dega ki tumhe kaha jana hai or kaise. Bas baaki shaktiya apna kaam baise hi karegi. Chaho to try karlo Ek baar.






Main- mujhe yakeen nahi.




Ye sunte hi vo hasne laga.




Main- uda lo mera majak




U- sorry. Lekin tum usme fase hi nahi.





Main- aise kaise fas jaunga. Us earth per mere se jyada dimaag sayad hi koi chalata hoga. Ye baat to tum bhi jante hi hoge.





U- ha bhai janta hu. Khair jokes a part. Tum apni speed ko bilkul high per jaise hi le jaoge. Usi samay time barrier toot jayega or fir us speed force me dakhil ho jaoge. Jaha se tum jaha chaho baha ja sakte ho. Chaho to time travel kar sakte ho. Ya fir kisi dusre dimensions me bhi travel kar sakte ho. Or isse pehle tum apna agla sawal puchho me bata du. Tum speed force me enter karoge to baha pahuch kar tumhe sab apne aap hi samajh aajayega. Tumhe jyada dimaag lagane ki jarurat nahi padegi.






Main- lekin maine suna hai ki speed force me fas bhi sakte hai. Kyuki aisa ek case mere saamne aachuka hai.






U- tum electro ki baat kar rahe ho.





Main- ha





U- ye bala matter tumper lagu nahi hota hai. Ha kuch paresani jarur aa sakti hai lekin uske liye thode sachet rahoge to kaam aaram se chal jayega.





Main- kaisi paresani.





U- jaise gunahon ko rokne or gunahgaro ko pakadne ke liye police hoti hai. Baise hi jo bhi time travel ya fir speed force se safar karte hai. Unhe pakadne ke liye bhi ek khaas tarah ki police tainat hoti hai. Jo aise logo ka sikaar karte hai. Or agar ik baar inke jaal me fas gye to gye kaam se.lekin lekin. Ye log bhi tab hi saamne aate hai jab koi baar baar aisa kar raha ho. Jaise ki kaal. Lekin use unse bachana aata hai isliye use abhi tak vo log pakad nahi paye hai. Isliye tum unki tension na lo. Or bina koi jhijhak ke aane safar per nikal pado.





Main- lekin kis jagah per me running karu.





U- is musibat ka hal hai mere pass. Aao mere sath.




Usne mera hath pakada or agle hi pal ham ek bahut bade maidaan me khade the. Jaha dur dur tak kuch nahi tha.




U- yaha per round chakkar lagao. Apni speed ko badalo or chale jao.






Main- ek baat batao tum mujhe pal bhar me ghar bhej sakte ho na.






U- ha bhej sakta hu. Lekin usme vo maja kaha. Jo ab aayega or dusri baat ye hai ki. Tum speed force me ghusne ki practice kar lo. Kyuki ye tumhara vo hathiyar hai jiski madad se tum kaal per bhari pad sakte ho. Isliye ab time waste na karo or doudna suru karo.





Uski baat ko sunkar main doudne hi wala tha ki maine usse kaha.






Main- ek aakhiri question.





U- theek hai puchho.





Main- tum ho kon. Or tumhara naam kya hai. Or ye sab kaise jaante ho tum.






U- me bhi ek insan hi hu. Naam hai. DEV SINHA.

yahi per rehta hu. Or rahi baat ki main ye sab kaise jaanta hu. To is sawal ka jawab fursat se dunga. Kyuki isme bahut time jayega. Isliye ab ye sab chhodo or apne man ko puri tarah se shant karo or doudna suru kar do. ( Ha to bhailog ye apni story Divyastra the power of five elements ka hero hai dev orf arnab hai baaki iski saari story agar pata karni hai to ye story jarur padle...)



Maine bhi ab usse kuch nahi puchha. Or doudna suru kar diya.



2-3 chakar ke baad meri speed form me aane lagi. Or isliye maine or tez doudna suru kiya. Meri speed se aaspaas ki puri jagah per ek aandhi si aagye thi. Charo taraf dhool udne lagi thi. Or vo ground karib 50 ekad ka tha. Or meri speed ki bajah se mujhe kuch mini sec hi lag rahe the uska pura chakkar lagane me. Or dheere ye fasla or kam hota ja raha tha. Kuch or round lagane ke baad main 1 sec. Me karib 10 round lagane laga tha.or ye ginti badti hi ja rahi thi.karib 1 min. Ki doud ke baad meri speed apni peak per thi. Almost full or is speed me main us ground ke karib 1000 chakkar laga raha tha 1 sec. Me. Tabhi mere saamne achanak se ek portal khul gya or bina kisi deri ke main usme ghus gya. Or aage doudte hue jaane laga. Or us speed force me mujhe bahut kuch dikh raha tha. Jo bahut hi tezi se nikalta ja raha tha. Thodi hi der baad mujhe ek portal dikha khula hua or main usse bahar nikal gya. Ab main bapis se jameen per aagya tha lekin meri speed bahut jyada thi jise control me lane ke liye thoda time laga or me bapis se khada ho gya.





Maine aaspaas dekha to ye bhi ek khaali maidan jaisa hi tha. Yahi achha hua ki yaha koi tha nahi. Lekin ab mujhe confirm karna tha ki main sahi jagah per pahucha hu ya nahi. Isliye maine doudte hue aage gya thodi hi der ke baad mujhe kuch ghar dikhne lage. To maine apni speed bapis se kam ki or normally unke ghar ke saamne jaake khada ho gya.maine apna suit bapis off kiya or unke ghar ka darwaja khatkhataya.



Thodi der baad ek lady ne darwaja khola.




Lady- ji kahiye kon chahiye.




Main- ji mujhe thoda paani chahiye hai or me bhatak gya hu isliye jagah ki jaankari bhi chahiye.




Lady- theek hi rukiye me paani lekar aati hu.



Vo jaise hi andar gyi. Mera mobile bajne laga. Maine mobile nikala to koi unknown no. Tha. Maine call received kiya.






Main- hello.





Harry- hello sir main Harry.




Ye aawaj me achhe se pehchanta tha.




Main- Harry lekin tumhare andar to virus agaya tha na.





Harry- ha sir lekin ab me theek hu. Or tab se aapki hi talash kar raha hu. Jaise hi aapka tracker on hua maine aapko call kiya. Main samajh gya tha ki aap bapis agaye hai.





Main- baise ye konsi jagah per hu main abhi. Or yha se ghar kaise aau.




Tabhi vo lady paani lekar aagyi. Maine unse paani liya or pura ek hi jhatke me pee gya. Or unko gilaas bapis kiya.





Harry- sir me usi jagah per choper bhej raha hu. Aap tension na lo. Baise is waqt aap. Dehradun ke aaspass ho.





Main- theek hai bhejo me intjaar karta hu.



Ye Kehke maine call cut kiya. Or un lady ko thanks kaha




Main- thanks mere log abhi aate hi honge ab me rasta dhudn lunga.





Lady- chaliye koi baat nahi. Baise or paani chahiye aapko. Lagta nahi aapki pyaas bujhi hogi.





Main- ha baise thoda or mil jata to.




Lady- rukiye me abhi lai.




Ye kehke vo andar gyi or thodi hi der me mere liye or paani le aai. Or sath me is baar ek jug bhi lagai bhar kar. Taaki or pyas lage to me pi saku


Or maine dekhte dekhte hi dekhte pura jug khaali kar diya. Bakai bahut pyaas lagi thi mujhe. Us dev ne to mujhe paani bhi nahi pilaya bas apni baato me hi uljhata raha.lekin agar vo na hota to main bahi per fasa rehta. Isliye maine man me hi use thanks kaha.



Tabhi uper se ek chopper ki aawaj aane lagi. Jo dheere dheere neeche utarta ja raha tha. Or vo lady ye dekhkar bahut hi hairan thi.




Main- lagta hai vo log aagye.thanks aapne mujhe paani pilaya. Aapko kabhi bhi kisi jagah meri madad ki jarurat pade to mujhe aap call kar sakti hai. Ye leejiye mera card.





Maine unhe card or unka jug bapis diya or me chopper ki traf gya. Or chopper land hote hi usme se nikle bhai.



Or jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha doud kar gale se laga liya.





Bhai- kaha chala gya tha tu. Pata hai ham sab ki kya haalat ho gyi thi.




Main- kya bhai aap bhi. Haalat to meri bhi kharab ho thi. Lekin abhi mujhe gye 2-3 ghante hi hue honge usme itna kya tension lena.




Ye sunte hi bhai mujhse alag hue.





Bhai- kaya kaha tune 2-3 ghante.




Main- ha or nahi to kya.




Bhai- beta tujhe gye pure 1 saal ho chuka hai. Ye dekh date




Bhai ne mujhe date dikhai jisme pura 1 saal aage tha.




Main- lekin ye kaise sambhav hai. Mujhe to aisa laga jaise kuch ghante hi hue hai.





Bhai- ab chhod baaki baate ghar ja kar karenge. Filhaal ghar chal sabhi teri raah dekh rahe hai. Or khas kar radha. Usne apna jo haal bana rakha hai use dekhega to rone lagega.





Main- aisa kya hua use. Mujhe batao bhai abhi.




Bhai- darashal tere jaane ke baad usne apne aap ko kamre me band kar liya hai or uska kehna hai ki us kamre ka darwaja tu hi kholega or koi nahi. Or agar tu bapis nahi aata to vo usi kamre me sara jeevan nikaal deti. Hamne maa ne papa ne sabhi ne use bahut samjhaya lekin usne kisi ki baat suni hi nahi. Ab tu chal tu hi use samjhana.



Ye sunte hi mujhe bahut bura lagne laga. Or main jhat se chopper me baith gya or bhai mere sath or ham udd gye ghar ki taraf.















To be continue………………..
Akhirkaar surya wapas aa gya. Nice update brother
 

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main- ab isme hasne ki kya baat hai. Simple sa hi to sawal puchha hai tumse






U- darashal is sawal ka jawab filhaal mere pass bhi nahi hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga ek or jhatka.




Main- ab ye kya baat hui. Jab tumhe itna sab pata hai to ye kaise nahi pata.





U- darashal inki kamjori baise koi hai hi nahi. Or agar koi hogi bhi to uske ware me inke aalawa kisi ko pata hi nahi hai.





Main- to ab kya karu main. Inko kaise roku. Main koi jadugar nahi hu jo in bhoot preto ko rok saku. Balki unke pass jadui shaktiya hai. Vo mujhe cheeti ki tarah masal denge.





U- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Vo tumhe aaram se hara sakte hai. Lekin tumhe maar nahi sakte. Kyuki tumhare andar bhi kuch shaktiya hai. Jo tumhe bhi immortal banati hai. Halaki puri tarah se nahi lekin fir bhi tum ek immortal ho. Jise maar pana har kisi ke bas me nahi hai. Or rahi baat in sabko harane ki to samay aane per iski jaankari bhi tumhe mil jayegi. Isliye chinta chhodo or filhaal to tum jao bapis apne ghar. Sabhi tumhara besabri se intjaar kar rahe hai. Or ek baat ka khaas dhyan rakhna. Abhi kaal ke saamne mat aana. Uski najro me tum mar chuke ho. Us ka fayeda uthana. Or chupchap apni tayyari karna.





Main- kam se kam ye to bata do ki ye black heart kaha per or kaise qaid hai or kaal kaise usko aazaad karane wala hai.






U- darashal kaal ek tilismi pathar ki talash kar raha hai. Jo prithvi per hi kahi chhipa hua hai. Jiska naam hai Paras Pathar. Jaise hi is pathar ko us black heart ki body se touch karaya jayega vo turant hi jaag jayega ya yu kaho ki jinda ho jayega. Kyuki filhaal vo qaid hai ya yu kaho ki mara hua hai. Uski soul ko usi ke baap ne qaid kar liya hai. Or uski body ko jalane ke liye chhod diya tha. Lekin kaal ne uski body ko bacha liya or tabse vo usi Paras Pathar ki khoj kar raha hai. Lekin use abhi tak kuch nahi mila. Lekin ab jald hi use paras pathar milne wala hai. Kyuki usne kai baar time travel kiya hai sirf yahi janne ke liye ki ye pathar akhir kaha per chhipa hua hai. Or use thoda andaja bhi ho gya hai. Isliye ab uska rukh usi taraf hai.











Main- ek baat batao jab tumhe sab pata hai to tum use rokte kyu nahi. Tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe sampurna gyan hai past present and future ka. Fir use rok kyu nahi lete tum.






U- is baat ka jawab tumhare sawal me hi chhipa hua hai. Mujhe pata hai ki aage kaise or kya hone wala hai. Or use kon pura karega. Or me samay me chedchaad nahi kar sakta. Jis kaam ke liye jise chuna gaya hai use bahi karna hoga. Isliye main use chah kar bhi nahi rok sakta. Rokna to tumhe hi padega.







Main- ye kaal is waqt kaha hai or kis bhes me hai. Bas itna or bata do.





U- vo is samay. Nagaland me hai baha ka ACP ban kar ghoom raha hai. Baaki uske sathi uske aaspass hi rehte hai.






Main- thanks for the information.
Main jau kaise ghar ye bhi bata do.






U- apni speed force se or kaise. Kholo portal





Main- poratl to main khol lu. Lekin mujhe ye idea nahi hai ki portal ko sahi jagah ke liye kaise nevigate karte hai. Maine labhi try kiya hi nahi hai. Agar me kahi or pahuch gya to.







U- are ye bahut hi simple hai. Tumhe bas apni soch ko kabu karna hai. Speed force ke douraan tumhe apne man me us jagah ke baare me hi sochna hai jaha tumhe jana hai. Bas vo poratl tumhe bahi pahucha dega.





Main- ye kaise sambhav hai.





U- dekho tum jo bhi energy generate karoge usper tumhara hi kabu hoga. Tumhara dimaag tumhari shaktiyo ko order dega ki tumhe kaha jana hai or kaise. Bas baaki shaktiya apna kaam baise hi karegi. Chaho to try karlo Ek baar.






Main- mujhe yakeen nahi.




Ye sunte hi vo hasne laga.




Main- uda lo mera majak




U- sorry. Lekin tum usme fase hi nahi.





Main- aise kaise fas jaunga. Us earth per mere se jyada dimaag sayad hi koi chalata hoga. Ye baat to tum bhi jante hi hoge.





U- ha bhai janta hu. Khair jokes a part. Tum apni speed ko bilkul high per jaise hi le jaoge. Usi samay time barrier toot jayega or fir us speed force me dakhil ho jaoge. Jaha se tum jaha chaho baha ja sakte ho. Chaho to time travel kar sakte ho. Ya fir kisi dusre dimensions me bhi travel kar sakte ho. Or isse pehle tum apna agla sawal puchho me bata du. Tum speed force me enter karoge to baha pahuch kar tumhe sab apne aap hi samajh aajayega. Tumhe jyada dimaag lagane ki jarurat nahi padegi.






Main- lekin maine suna hai ki speed force me fas bhi sakte hai. Kyuki aisa ek case mere saamne aachuka hai.






U- tum electro ki baat kar rahe ho.





Main- ha





U- ye bala matter tumper lagu nahi hota hai. Ha kuch paresani jarur aa sakti hai lekin uske liye thode sachet rahoge to kaam aaram se chal jayega.





Main- kaisi paresani.





U- jaise gunahon ko rokne or gunahgaro ko pakadne ke liye police hoti hai. Baise hi jo bhi time travel ya fir speed force se safar karte hai. Unhe pakadne ke liye bhi ek khaas tarah ki police tainat hoti hai. Jo aise logo ka sikaar karte hai. Or agar ik baar inke jaal me fas gye to gye kaam se.lekin lekin. Ye log bhi tab hi saamne aate hai jab koi baar baar aisa kar raha ho. Jaise ki kaal. Lekin use unse bachana aata hai isliye use abhi tak vo log pakad nahi paye hai. Isliye tum unki tension na lo. Or bina koi jhijhak ke aane safar per nikal pado.





Main- lekin kis jagah per me running karu.





U- is musibat ka hal hai mere pass. Aao mere sath.




Usne mera hath pakada or agle hi pal ham ek bahut bade maidaan me khade the. Jaha dur dur tak kuch nahi tha.




U- yaha per round chakkar lagao. Apni speed ko badalo or chale jao.






Main- ek baat batao tum mujhe pal bhar me ghar bhej sakte ho na.






U- ha bhej sakta hu. Lekin usme vo maja kaha. Jo ab aayega or dusri baat ye hai ki. Tum speed force me ghusne ki practice kar lo. Kyuki ye tumhara vo hathiyar hai jiski madad se tum kaal per bhari pad sakte ho. Isliye ab time waste na karo or doudna suru karo.





Uski baat ko sunkar main doudne hi wala tha ki maine usse kaha.






Main- ek aakhiri question.





U- theek hai puchho.





Main- tum ho kon. Or tumhara naam kya hai. Or ye sab kaise jaante ho tum.






U- me bhi ek insan hi hu. Naam hai. DEV SINHA.

yahi per rehta hu. Or rahi baat ki main ye sab kaise jaanta hu. To is sawal ka jawab fursat se dunga. Kyuki isme bahut time jayega. Isliye ab ye sab chhodo or apne man ko puri tarah se shant karo or doudna suru kar do. ( Ha to bhailog ye apni story Divyastra the power of five elements ka hero hai dev orf arnab hai baaki iski saari story agar pata karni hai to ye story jarur padle...)



Maine bhi ab usse kuch nahi puchha. Or doudna suru kar diya.



2-3 chakar ke baad meri speed form me aane lagi. Or isliye maine or tez doudna suru kiya. Meri speed se aaspaas ki puri jagah per ek aandhi si aagye thi. Charo taraf dhool udne lagi thi. Or vo ground karib 50 ekad ka tha. Or meri speed ki bajah se mujhe kuch mini sec hi lag rahe the uska pura chakkar lagane me. Or dheere ye fasla or kam hota ja raha tha. Kuch or round lagane ke baad main 1 sec. Me karib 10 round lagane laga tha.or ye ginti badti hi ja rahi thi.karib 1 min. Ki doud ke baad meri speed apni peak per thi. Almost full or is speed me main us ground ke karib 1000 chakkar laga raha tha 1 sec. Me. Tabhi mere saamne achanak se ek portal khul gya or bina kisi deri ke main usme ghus gya. Or aage doudte hue jaane laga. Or us speed force me mujhe bahut kuch dikh raha tha. Jo bahut hi tezi se nikalta ja raha tha. Thodi hi der baad mujhe ek portal dikha khula hua or main usse bahar nikal gya. Ab main bapis se jameen per aagya tha lekin meri speed bahut jyada thi jise control me lane ke liye thoda time laga or me bapis se khada ho gya.





Maine aaspaas dekha to ye bhi ek khaali maidan jaisa hi tha. Yahi achha hua ki yaha koi tha nahi. Lekin ab mujhe confirm karna tha ki main sahi jagah per pahucha hu ya nahi. Isliye maine doudte hue aage gya thodi hi der ke baad mujhe kuch ghar dikhne lage. To maine apni speed bapis se kam ki or normally unke ghar ke saamne jaake khada ho gya.maine apna suit bapis off kiya or unke ghar ka darwaja khatkhataya.



Thodi der baad ek lady ne darwaja khola.




Lady- ji kahiye kon chahiye.




Main- ji mujhe thoda paani chahiye hai or me bhatak gya hu isliye jagah ki jaankari bhi chahiye.




Lady- theek hi rukiye me paani lekar aati hu.



Vo jaise hi andar gyi. Mera mobile bajne laga. Maine mobile nikala to koi unknown no. Tha. Maine call received kiya.






Main- hello.





Harry- hello sir main Harry.




Ye aawaj me achhe se pehchanta tha.




Main- Harry lekin tumhare andar to virus agaya tha na.





Harry- ha sir lekin ab me theek hu. Or tab se aapki hi talash kar raha hu. Jaise hi aapka tracker on hua maine aapko call kiya. Main samajh gya tha ki aap bapis agaye hai.





Main- baise ye konsi jagah per hu main abhi. Or yha se ghar kaise aau.




Tabhi vo lady paani lekar aagyi. Maine unse paani liya or pura ek hi jhatke me pee gya. Or unko gilaas bapis kiya.





Harry- sir me usi jagah per choper bhej raha hu. Aap tension na lo. Baise is waqt aap. Dehradun ke aaspass ho.





Main- theek hai bhejo me intjaar karta hu.



Ye Kehke maine call cut kiya. Or un lady ko thanks kaha




Main- thanks mere log abhi aate hi honge ab me rasta dhudn lunga.





Lady- chaliye koi baat nahi. Baise or paani chahiye aapko. Lagta nahi aapki pyaas bujhi hogi.





Main- ha baise thoda or mil jata to.




Lady- rukiye me abhi lai.




Ye kehke vo andar gyi or thodi hi der me mere liye or paani le aai. Or sath me is baar ek jug bhi lagai bhar kar. Taaki or pyas lage to me pi saku


Or maine dekhte dekhte hi dekhte pura jug khaali kar diya. Bakai bahut pyaas lagi thi mujhe. Us dev ne to mujhe paani bhi nahi pilaya bas apni baato me hi uljhata raha.lekin agar vo na hota to main bahi per fasa rehta. Isliye maine man me hi use thanks kaha.



Tabhi uper se ek chopper ki aawaj aane lagi. Jo dheere dheere neeche utarta ja raha tha. Or vo lady ye dekhkar bahut hi hairan thi.




Main- lagta hai vo log aagye.thanks aapne mujhe paani pilaya. Aapko kabhi bhi kisi jagah meri madad ki jarurat pade to mujhe aap call kar sakti hai. Ye leejiye mera card.





Maine unhe card or unka jug bapis diya or me chopper ki traf gya. Or chopper land hote hi usme se nikle bhai.



Or jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha doud kar gale se laga liya.





Bhai- kaha chala gya tha tu. Pata hai ham sab ki kya haalat ho gyi thi.




Main- kya bhai aap bhi. Haalat to meri bhi kharab ho thi. Lekin abhi mujhe gye 2-3 ghante hi hue honge usme itna kya tension lena.




Ye sunte hi bhai mujhse alag hue.





Bhai- kaya kaha tune 2-3 ghante.




Main- ha or nahi to kya.




Bhai- beta tujhe gye pure 1 saal ho chuka hai. Ye dekh date




Bhai ne mujhe date dikhai jisme pura 1 saal aage tha.




Main- lekin ye kaise sambhav hai. Mujhe to aisa laga jaise kuch ghante hi hue hai.





Bhai- ab chhod baaki baate ghar ja kar karenge. Filhaal ghar chal sabhi teri raah dekh rahe hai. Or khas kar radha. Usne apna jo haal bana rakha hai use dekhega to rone lagega.





Main- aisa kya hua use. Mujhe batao bhai abhi.




Bhai- darashal tere jaane ke baad usne apne aap ko kamre me band kar liya hai or uska kehna hai ki us kamre ka darwaja tu hi kholega or koi nahi. Or agar tu bapis nahi aata to vo usi kamre me sara jeevan nikaal deti. Hamne maa ne papa ne sabhi ne use bahut samjhaya lekin usne kisi ki baat suni hi nahi. Ab tu chal tu hi use samjhana.



Ye sunte hi mujhe bahut bura lagne laga. Or main jhat se chopper me baith gya or bhai mere sath or ham udd gye ghar ki taraf.















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main- ab isme hasne ki kya baat hai. Simple sa hi to sawal puchha hai tumse






U- darashal is sawal ka jawab filhaal mere pass bhi nahi hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga ek or jhatka.




Main- ab ye kya baat hui. Jab tumhe itna sab pata hai to ye kaise nahi pata.





U- darashal inki kamjori baise koi hai hi nahi. Or agar koi hogi bhi to uske ware me inke aalawa kisi ko pata hi nahi hai.





Main- to ab kya karu main. Inko kaise roku. Main koi jadugar nahi hu jo in bhoot preto ko rok saku. Balki unke pass jadui shaktiya hai. Vo mujhe cheeti ki tarah masal denge.





U- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Vo tumhe aaram se hara sakte hai. Lekin tumhe maar nahi sakte. Kyuki tumhare andar bhi kuch shaktiya hai. Jo tumhe bhi immortal banati hai. Halaki puri tarah se nahi lekin fir bhi tum ek immortal ho. Jise maar pana har kisi ke bas me nahi hai. Or rahi baat in sabko harane ki to samay aane per iski jaankari bhi tumhe mil jayegi. Isliye chinta chhodo or filhaal to tum jao bapis apne ghar. Sabhi tumhara besabri se intjaar kar rahe hai. Or ek baat ka khaas dhyan rakhna. Abhi kaal ke saamne mat aana. Uski najro me tum mar chuke ho. Us ka fayeda uthana. Or chupchap apni tayyari karna.





Main- kam se kam ye to bata do ki ye black heart kaha per or kaise qaid hai or kaal kaise usko aazaad karane wala hai.






U- darashal kaal ek tilismi pathar ki talash kar raha hai. Jo prithvi per hi kahi chhipa hua hai. Jiska naam hai Paras Pathar. Jaise hi is pathar ko us black heart ki body se touch karaya jayega vo turant hi jaag jayega ya yu kaho ki jinda ho jayega. Kyuki filhaal vo qaid hai ya yu kaho ki mara hua hai. Uski soul ko usi ke baap ne qaid kar liya hai. Or uski body ko jalane ke liye chhod diya tha. Lekin kaal ne uski body ko bacha liya or tabse vo usi Paras Pathar ki khoj kar raha hai. Lekin use abhi tak kuch nahi mila. Lekin ab jald hi use paras pathar milne wala hai. Kyuki usne kai baar time travel kiya hai sirf yahi janne ke liye ki ye pathar akhir kaha per chhipa hua hai. Or use thoda andaja bhi ho gya hai. Isliye ab uska rukh usi taraf hai.











Main- ek baat batao jab tumhe sab pata hai to tum use rokte kyu nahi. Tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe sampurna gyan hai past present and future ka. Fir use rok kyu nahi lete tum.






U- is baat ka jawab tumhare sawal me hi chhipa hua hai. Mujhe pata hai ki aage kaise or kya hone wala hai. Or use kon pura karega. Or me samay me chedchaad nahi kar sakta. Jis kaam ke liye jise chuna gaya hai use bahi karna hoga. Isliye main use chah kar bhi nahi rok sakta. Rokna to tumhe hi padega.







Main- ye kaal is waqt kaha hai or kis bhes me hai. Bas itna or bata do.





U- vo is samay. Nagaland me hai baha ka ACP ban kar ghoom raha hai. Baaki uske sathi uske aaspass hi rehte hai.






Main- thanks for the information.
Main jau kaise ghar ye bhi bata do.






U- apni speed force se or kaise. Kholo portal





Main- poratl to main khol lu. Lekin mujhe ye idea nahi hai ki portal ko sahi jagah ke liye kaise nevigate karte hai. Maine labhi try kiya hi nahi hai. Agar me kahi or pahuch gya to.







U- are ye bahut hi simple hai. Tumhe bas apni soch ko kabu karna hai. Speed force ke douraan tumhe apne man me us jagah ke baare me hi sochna hai jaha tumhe jana hai. Bas vo poratl tumhe bahi pahucha dega.





Main- ye kaise sambhav hai.





U- dekho tum jo bhi energy generate karoge usper tumhara hi kabu hoga. Tumhara dimaag tumhari shaktiyo ko order dega ki tumhe kaha jana hai or kaise. Bas baaki shaktiya apna kaam baise hi karegi. Chaho to try karlo Ek baar.






Main- mujhe yakeen nahi.




Ye sunte hi vo hasne laga.




Main- uda lo mera majak




U- sorry. Lekin tum usme fase hi nahi.





Main- aise kaise fas jaunga. Us earth per mere se jyada dimaag sayad hi koi chalata hoga. Ye baat to tum bhi jante hi hoge.





U- ha bhai janta hu. Khair jokes a part. Tum apni speed ko bilkul high per jaise hi le jaoge. Usi samay time barrier toot jayega or fir us speed force me dakhil ho jaoge. Jaha se tum jaha chaho baha ja sakte ho. Chaho to time travel kar sakte ho. Ya fir kisi dusre dimensions me bhi travel kar sakte ho. Or isse pehle tum apna agla sawal puchho me bata du. Tum speed force me enter karoge to baha pahuch kar tumhe sab apne aap hi samajh aajayega. Tumhe jyada dimaag lagane ki jarurat nahi padegi.






Main- lekin maine suna hai ki speed force me fas bhi sakte hai. Kyuki aisa ek case mere saamne aachuka hai.






U- tum electro ki baat kar rahe ho.





Main- ha





U- ye bala matter tumper lagu nahi hota hai. Ha kuch paresani jarur aa sakti hai lekin uske liye thode sachet rahoge to kaam aaram se chal jayega.





Main- kaisi paresani.





U- jaise gunahon ko rokne or gunahgaro ko pakadne ke liye police hoti hai. Baise hi jo bhi time travel ya fir speed force se safar karte hai. Unhe pakadne ke liye bhi ek khaas tarah ki police tainat hoti hai. Jo aise logo ka sikaar karte hai. Or agar ik baar inke jaal me fas gye to gye kaam se.lekin lekin. Ye log bhi tab hi saamne aate hai jab koi baar baar aisa kar raha ho. Jaise ki kaal. Lekin use unse bachana aata hai isliye use abhi tak vo log pakad nahi paye hai. Isliye tum unki tension na lo. Or bina koi jhijhak ke aane safar per nikal pado.





Main- lekin kis jagah per me running karu.





U- is musibat ka hal hai mere pass. Aao mere sath.




Usne mera hath pakada or agle hi pal ham ek bahut bade maidaan me khade the. Jaha dur dur tak kuch nahi tha.




U- yaha per round chakkar lagao. Apni speed ko badalo or chale jao.






Main- ek baat batao tum mujhe pal bhar me ghar bhej sakte ho na.






U- ha bhej sakta hu. Lekin usme vo maja kaha. Jo ab aayega or dusri baat ye hai ki. Tum speed force me ghusne ki practice kar lo. Kyuki ye tumhara vo hathiyar hai jiski madad se tum kaal per bhari pad sakte ho. Isliye ab time waste na karo or doudna suru karo.





Uski baat ko sunkar main doudne hi wala tha ki maine usse kaha.






Main- ek aakhiri question.





U- theek hai puchho.





Main- tum ho kon. Or tumhara naam kya hai. Or ye sab kaise jaante ho tum.






U- me bhi ek insan hi hu. Naam hai. DEV SINHA.

yahi per rehta hu. Or rahi baat ki main ye sab kaise jaanta hu. To is sawal ka jawab fursat se dunga. Kyuki isme bahut time jayega. Isliye ab ye sab chhodo or apne man ko puri tarah se shant karo or doudna suru kar do. ( Ha to bhailog ye apni story Divyastra the power of five elements ka hero hai dev orf arnab hai baaki iski saari story agar pata karni hai to ye story jarur padle...)



Maine bhi ab usse kuch nahi puchha. Or doudna suru kar diya.



2-3 chakar ke baad meri speed form me aane lagi. Or isliye maine or tez doudna suru kiya. Meri speed se aaspaas ki puri jagah per ek aandhi si aagye thi. Charo taraf dhool udne lagi thi. Or vo ground karib 50 ekad ka tha. Or meri speed ki bajah se mujhe kuch mini sec hi lag rahe the uska pura chakkar lagane me. Or dheere ye fasla or kam hota ja raha tha. Kuch or round lagane ke baad main 1 sec. Me karib 10 round lagane laga tha.or ye ginti badti hi ja rahi thi.karib 1 min. Ki doud ke baad meri speed apni peak per thi. Almost full or is speed me main us ground ke karib 1000 chakkar laga raha tha 1 sec. Me. Tabhi mere saamne achanak se ek portal khul gya or bina kisi deri ke main usme ghus gya. Or aage doudte hue jaane laga. Or us speed force me mujhe bahut kuch dikh raha tha. Jo bahut hi tezi se nikalta ja raha tha. Thodi hi der baad mujhe ek portal dikha khula hua or main usse bahar nikal gya. Ab main bapis se jameen per aagya tha lekin meri speed bahut jyada thi jise control me lane ke liye thoda time laga or me bapis se khada ho gya.





Maine aaspaas dekha to ye bhi ek khaali maidan jaisa hi tha. Yahi achha hua ki yaha koi tha nahi. Lekin ab mujhe confirm karna tha ki main sahi jagah per pahucha hu ya nahi. Isliye maine doudte hue aage gya thodi hi der ke baad mujhe kuch ghar dikhne lage. To maine apni speed bapis se kam ki or normally unke ghar ke saamne jaake khada ho gya.maine apna suit bapis off kiya or unke ghar ka darwaja khatkhataya.



Thodi der baad ek lady ne darwaja khola.




Lady- ji kahiye kon chahiye.




Main- ji mujhe thoda paani chahiye hai or me bhatak gya hu isliye jagah ki jaankari bhi chahiye.




Lady- theek hi rukiye me paani lekar aati hu.



Vo jaise hi andar gyi. Mera mobile bajne laga. Maine mobile nikala to koi unknown no. Tha. Maine call received kiya.






Main- hello.





Harry- hello sir main Harry.




Ye aawaj me achhe se pehchanta tha.




Main- Harry lekin tumhare andar to virus agaya tha na.





Harry- ha sir lekin ab me theek hu. Or tab se aapki hi talash kar raha hu. Jaise hi aapka tracker on hua maine aapko call kiya. Main samajh gya tha ki aap bapis agaye hai.





Main- baise ye konsi jagah per hu main abhi. Or yha se ghar kaise aau.




Tabhi vo lady paani lekar aagyi. Maine unse paani liya or pura ek hi jhatke me pee gya. Or unko gilaas bapis kiya.





Harry- sir me usi jagah per choper bhej raha hu. Aap tension na lo. Baise is waqt aap. Dehradun ke aaspass ho.





Main- theek hai bhejo me intjaar karta hu.



Ye Kehke maine call cut kiya. Or un lady ko thanks kaha




Main- thanks mere log abhi aate hi honge ab me rasta dhudn lunga.





Lady- chaliye koi baat nahi. Baise or paani chahiye aapko. Lagta nahi aapki pyaas bujhi hogi.





Main- ha baise thoda or mil jata to.




Lady- rukiye me abhi lai.




Ye kehke vo andar gyi or thodi hi der me mere liye or paani le aai. Or sath me is baar ek jug bhi lagai bhar kar. Taaki or pyas lage to me pi saku


Or maine dekhte dekhte hi dekhte pura jug khaali kar diya. Bakai bahut pyaas lagi thi mujhe. Us dev ne to mujhe paani bhi nahi pilaya bas apni baato me hi uljhata raha.lekin agar vo na hota to main bahi per fasa rehta. Isliye maine man me hi use thanks kaha.



Tabhi uper se ek chopper ki aawaj aane lagi. Jo dheere dheere neeche utarta ja raha tha. Or vo lady ye dekhkar bahut hi hairan thi.




Main- lagta hai vo log aagye.thanks aapne mujhe paani pilaya. Aapko kabhi bhi kisi jagah meri madad ki jarurat pade to mujhe aap call kar sakti hai. Ye leejiye mera card.





Maine unhe card or unka jug bapis diya or me chopper ki traf gya. Or chopper land hote hi usme se nikle bhai.



Or jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha doud kar gale se laga liya.





Bhai- kaha chala gya tha tu. Pata hai ham sab ki kya haalat ho gyi thi.




Main- kya bhai aap bhi. Haalat to meri bhi kharab ho thi. Lekin abhi mujhe gye 2-3 ghante hi hue honge usme itna kya tension lena.




Ye sunte hi bhai mujhse alag hue.





Bhai- kaya kaha tune 2-3 ghante.




Main- ha or nahi to kya.




Bhai- beta tujhe gye pure 1 saal ho chuka hai. Ye dekh date




Bhai ne mujhe date dikhai jisme pura 1 saal aage tha.




Main- lekin ye kaise sambhav hai. Mujhe to aisa laga jaise kuch ghante hi hue hai.





Bhai- ab chhod baaki baate ghar ja kar karenge. Filhaal ghar chal sabhi teri raah dekh rahe hai. Or khas kar radha. Usne apna jo haal bana rakha hai use dekhega to rone lagega.





Main- aisa kya hua use. Mujhe batao bhai abhi.




Bhai- darashal tere jaane ke baad usne apne aap ko kamre me band kar liya hai or uska kehna hai ki us kamre ka darwaja tu hi kholega or koi nahi. Or agar tu bapis nahi aata to vo usi kamre me sara jeevan nikaal deti. Hamne maa ne papa ne sabhi ne use bahut samjhaya lekin usne kisi ki baat suni hi nahi. Ab tu chal tu hi use samjhana.



Ye sunte hi mujhe bahut bura lagne laga. Or main jhat se chopper me baith gya or bhai mere sath or ham udd gye ghar ki taraf.















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main- ab isme hasne ki kya baat hai. Simple sa hi to sawal puchha hai tumse






U- darashal is sawal ka jawab filhaal mere pass bhi nahi hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga ek or jhatka.




Main- ab ye kya baat hui. Jab tumhe itna sab pata hai to ye kaise nahi pata.





U- darashal inki kamjori baise koi hai hi nahi. Or agar koi hogi bhi to uske ware me inke aalawa kisi ko pata hi nahi hai.





Main- to ab kya karu main. Inko kaise roku. Main koi jadugar nahi hu jo in bhoot preto ko rok saku. Balki unke pass jadui shaktiya hai. Vo mujhe cheeti ki tarah masal denge.





U- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Vo tumhe aaram se hara sakte hai. Lekin tumhe maar nahi sakte. Kyuki tumhare andar bhi kuch shaktiya hai. Jo tumhe bhi immortal banati hai. Halaki puri tarah se nahi lekin fir bhi tum ek immortal ho. Jise maar pana har kisi ke bas me nahi hai. Or rahi baat in sabko harane ki to samay aane per iski jaankari bhi tumhe mil jayegi. Isliye chinta chhodo or filhaal to tum jao bapis apne ghar. Sabhi tumhara besabri se intjaar kar rahe hai. Or ek baat ka khaas dhyan rakhna. Abhi kaal ke saamne mat aana. Uski najro me tum mar chuke ho. Us ka fayeda uthana. Or chupchap apni tayyari karna.





Main- kam se kam ye to bata do ki ye black heart kaha per or kaise qaid hai or kaal kaise usko aazaad karane wala hai.






U- darashal kaal ek tilismi pathar ki talash kar raha hai. Jo prithvi per hi kahi chhipa hua hai. Jiska naam hai Paras Pathar. Jaise hi is pathar ko us black heart ki body se touch karaya jayega vo turant hi jaag jayega ya yu kaho ki jinda ho jayega. Kyuki filhaal vo qaid hai ya yu kaho ki mara hua hai. Uski soul ko usi ke baap ne qaid kar liya hai. Or uski body ko jalane ke liye chhod diya tha. Lekin kaal ne uski body ko bacha liya or tabse vo usi Paras Pathar ki khoj kar raha hai. Lekin use abhi tak kuch nahi mila. Lekin ab jald hi use paras pathar milne wala hai. Kyuki usne kai baar time travel kiya hai sirf yahi janne ke liye ki ye pathar akhir kaha per chhipa hua hai. Or use thoda andaja bhi ho gya hai. Isliye ab uska rukh usi taraf hai.











Main- ek baat batao jab tumhe sab pata hai to tum use rokte kyu nahi. Tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe sampurna gyan hai past present and future ka. Fir use rok kyu nahi lete tum.






U- is baat ka jawab tumhare sawal me hi chhipa hua hai. Mujhe pata hai ki aage kaise or kya hone wala hai. Or use kon pura karega. Or me samay me chedchaad nahi kar sakta. Jis kaam ke liye jise chuna gaya hai use bahi karna hoga. Isliye main use chah kar bhi nahi rok sakta. Rokna to tumhe hi padega.







Main- ye kaal is waqt kaha hai or kis bhes me hai. Bas itna or bata do.





U- vo is samay. Nagaland me hai baha ka ACP ban kar ghoom raha hai. Baaki uske sathi uske aaspass hi rehte hai.






Main- thanks for the information.
Main jau kaise ghar ye bhi bata do.






U- apni speed force se or kaise. Kholo portal





Main- poratl to main khol lu. Lekin mujhe ye idea nahi hai ki portal ko sahi jagah ke liye kaise nevigate karte hai. Maine labhi try kiya hi nahi hai. Agar me kahi or pahuch gya to.







U- are ye bahut hi simple hai. Tumhe bas apni soch ko kabu karna hai. Speed force ke douraan tumhe apne man me us jagah ke baare me hi sochna hai jaha tumhe jana hai. Bas vo poratl tumhe bahi pahucha dega.





Main- ye kaise sambhav hai.





U- dekho tum jo bhi energy generate karoge usper tumhara hi kabu hoga. Tumhara dimaag tumhari shaktiyo ko order dega ki tumhe kaha jana hai or kaise. Bas baaki shaktiya apna kaam baise hi karegi. Chaho to try karlo Ek baar.






Main- mujhe yakeen nahi.




Ye sunte hi vo hasne laga.




Main- uda lo mera majak




U- sorry. Lekin tum usme fase hi nahi.





Main- aise kaise fas jaunga. Us earth per mere se jyada dimaag sayad hi koi chalata hoga. Ye baat to tum bhi jante hi hoge.





U- ha bhai janta hu. Khair jokes a part. Tum apni speed ko bilkul high per jaise hi le jaoge. Usi samay time barrier toot jayega or fir us speed force me dakhil ho jaoge. Jaha se tum jaha chaho baha ja sakte ho. Chaho to time travel kar sakte ho. Ya fir kisi dusre dimensions me bhi travel kar sakte ho. Or isse pehle tum apna agla sawal puchho me bata du. Tum speed force me enter karoge to baha pahuch kar tumhe sab apne aap hi samajh aajayega. Tumhe jyada dimaag lagane ki jarurat nahi padegi.






Main- lekin maine suna hai ki speed force me fas bhi sakte hai. Kyuki aisa ek case mere saamne aachuka hai.






U- tum electro ki baat kar rahe ho.





Main- ha





U- ye bala matter tumper lagu nahi hota hai. Ha kuch paresani jarur aa sakti hai lekin uske liye thode sachet rahoge to kaam aaram se chal jayega.





Main- kaisi paresani.





U- jaise gunahon ko rokne or gunahgaro ko pakadne ke liye police hoti hai. Baise hi jo bhi time travel ya fir speed force se safar karte hai. Unhe pakadne ke liye bhi ek khaas tarah ki police tainat hoti hai. Jo aise logo ka sikaar karte hai. Or agar ik baar inke jaal me fas gye to gye kaam se.lekin lekin. Ye log bhi tab hi saamne aate hai jab koi baar baar aisa kar raha ho. Jaise ki kaal. Lekin use unse bachana aata hai isliye use abhi tak vo log pakad nahi paye hai. Isliye tum unki tension na lo. Or bina koi jhijhak ke aane safar per nikal pado.





Main- lekin kis jagah per me running karu.





U- is musibat ka hal hai mere pass. Aao mere sath.




Usne mera hath pakada or agle hi pal ham ek bahut bade maidaan me khade the. Jaha dur dur tak kuch nahi tha.




U- yaha per round chakkar lagao. Apni speed ko badalo or chale jao.






Main- ek baat batao tum mujhe pal bhar me ghar bhej sakte ho na.






U- ha bhej sakta hu. Lekin usme vo maja kaha. Jo ab aayega or dusri baat ye hai ki. Tum speed force me ghusne ki practice kar lo. Kyuki ye tumhara vo hathiyar hai jiski madad se tum kaal per bhari pad sakte ho. Isliye ab time waste na karo or doudna suru karo.





Uski baat ko sunkar main doudne hi wala tha ki maine usse kaha.






Main- ek aakhiri question.





U- theek hai puchho.





Main- tum ho kon. Or tumhara naam kya hai. Or ye sab kaise jaante ho tum.






U- me bhi ek insan hi hu. Naam hai. DEV SINHA.

yahi per rehta hu. Or rahi baat ki main ye sab kaise jaanta hu. To is sawal ka jawab fursat se dunga. Kyuki isme bahut time jayega. Isliye ab ye sab chhodo or apne man ko puri tarah se shant karo or doudna suru kar do. ( Ha to bhailog ye apni story Divyastra the power of five elements ka hero hai dev orf arnab hai baaki iski saari story agar pata karni hai to ye story jarur padle...)



Maine bhi ab usse kuch nahi puchha. Or doudna suru kar diya.



2-3 chakar ke baad meri speed form me aane lagi. Or isliye maine or tez doudna suru kiya. Meri speed se aaspaas ki puri jagah per ek aandhi si aagye thi. Charo taraf dhool udne lagi thi. Or vo ground karib 50 ekad ka tha. Or meri speed ki bajah se mujhe kuch mini sec hi lag rahe the uska pura chakkar lagane me. Or dheere ye fasla or kam hota ja raha tha. Kuch or round lagane ke baad main 1 sec. Me karib 10 round lagane laga tha.or ye ginti badti hi ja rahi thi.karib 1 min. Ki doud ke baad meri speed apni peak per thi. Almost full or is speed me main us ground ke karib 1000 chakkar laga raha tha 1 sec. Me. Tabhi mere saamne achanak se ek portal khul gya or bina kisi deri ke main usme ghus gya. Or aage doudte hue jaane laga. Or us speed force me mujhe bahut kuch dikh raha tha. Jo bahut hi tezi se nikalta ja raha tha. Thodi hi der baad mujhe ek portal dikha khula hua or main usse bahar nikal gya. Ab main bapis se jameen per aagya tha lekin meri speed bahut jyada thi jise control me lane ke liye thoda time laga or me bapis se khada ho gya.





Maine aaspaas dekha to ye bhi ek khaali maidan jaisa hi tha. Yahi achha hua ki yaha koi tha nahi. Lekin ab mujhe confirm karna tha ki main sahi jagah per pahucha hu ya nahi. Isliye maine doudte hue aage gya thodi hi der ke baad mujhe kuch ghar dikhne lage. To maine apni speed bapis se kam ki or normally unke ghar ke saamne jaake khada ho gya.maine apna suit bapis off kiya or unke ghar ka darwaja khatkhataya.



Thodi der baad ek lady ne darwaja khola.




Lady- ji kahiye kon chahiye.




Main- ji mujhe thoda paani chahiye hai or me bhatak gya hu isliye jagah ki jaankari bhi chahiye.




Lady- theek hi rukiye me paani lekar aati hu.



Vo jaise hi andar gyi. Mera mobile bajne laga. Maine mobile nikala to koi unknown no. Tha. Maine call received kiya.






Main- hello.





Harry- hello sir main Harry.




Ye aawaj me achhe se pehchanta tha.




Main- Harry lekin tumhare andar to virus agaya tha na.





Harry- ha sir lekin ab me theek hu. Or tab se aapki hi talash kar raha hu. Jaise hi aapka tracker on hua maine aapko call kiya. Main samajh gya tha ki aap bapis agaye hai.





Main- baise ye konsi jagah per hu main abhi. Or yha se ghar kaise aau.




Tabhi vo lady paani lekar aagyi. Maine unse paani liya or pura ek hi jhatke me pee gya. Or unko gilaas bapis kiya.





Harry- sir me usi jagah per choper bhej raha hu. Aap tension na lo. Baise is waqt aap. Dehradun ke aaspass ho.





Main- theek hai bhejo me intjaar karta hu.



Ye Kehke maine call cut kiya. Or un lady ko thanks kaha




Main- thanks mere log abhi aate hi honge ab me rasta dhudn lunga.





Lady- chaliye koi baat nahi. Baise or paani chahiye aapko. Lagta nahi aapki pyaas bujhi hogi.





Main- ha baise thoda or mil jata to.




Lady- rukiye me abhi lai.




Ye kehke vo andar gyi or thodi hi der me mere liye or paani le aai. Or sath me is baar ek jug bhi lagai bhar kar. Taaki or pyas lage to me pi saku


Or maine dekhte dekhte hi dekhte pura jug khaali kar diya. Bakai bahut pyaas lagi thi mujhe. Us dev ne to mujhe paani bhi nahi pilaya bas apni baato me hi uljhata raha.lekin agar vo na hota to main bahi per fasa rehta. Isliye maine man me hi use thanks kaha.



Tabhi uper se ek chopper ki aawaj aane lagi. Jo dheere dheere neeche utarta ja raha tha. Or vo lady ye dekhkar bahut hi hairan thi.




Main- lagta hai vo log aagye.thanks aapne mujhe paani pilaya. Aapko kabhi bhi kisi jagah meri madad ki jarurat pade to mujhe aap call kar sakti hai. Ye leejiye mera card.





Maine unhe card or unka jug bapis diya or me chopper ki traf gya. Or chopper land hote hi usme se nikle bhai.



Or jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha doud kar gale se laga liya.





Bhai- kaha chala gya tha tu. Pata hai ham sab ki kya haalat ho gyi thi.




Main- kya bhai aap bhi. Haalat to meri bhi kharab ho thi. Lekin abhi mujhe gye 2-3 ghante hi hue honge usme itna kya tension lena.




Ye sunte hi bhai mujhse alag hue.





Bhai- kaya kaha tune 2-3 ghante.




Main- ha or nahi to kya.




Bhai- beta tujhe gye pure 1 saal ho chuka hai. Ye dekh date




Bhai ne mujhe date dikhai jisme pura 1 saal aage tha.




Main- lekin ye kaise sambhav hai. Mujhe to aisa laga jaise kuch ghante hi hue hai.





Bhai- ab chhod baaki baate ghar ja kar karenge. Filhaal ghar chal sabhi teri raah dekh rahe hai. Or khas kar radha. Usne apna jo haal bana rakha hai use dekhega to rone lagega.





Main- aisa kya hua use. Mujhe batao bhai abhi.




Bhai- darashal tere jaane ke baad usne apne aap ko kamre me band kar liya hai or uska kehna hai ki us kamre ka darwaja tu hi kholega or koi nahi. Or agar tu bapis nahi aata to vo usi kamre me sara jeevan nikaal deti. Hamne maa ne papa ne sabhi ne use bahut samjhaya lekin usne kisi ki baat suni hi nahi. Ab tu chal tu hi use samjhana.



Ye sunte hi mujhe bahut bura lagne laga. Or main jhat se chopper me baith gya or bhai mere sath or ham udd gye ghar ki taraf.















To be continue………………..
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main- ab isme hasne ki kya baat hai. Simple sa hi to sawal puchha hai tumse






U- darashal is sawal ka jawab filhaal mere pass bhi nahi hai.




Ye sunte hi mujhe laga ek or jhatka.




Main- ab ye kya baat hui. Jab tumhe itna sab pata hai to ye kaise nahi pata.





U- darashal inki kamjori baise koi hai hi nahi. Or agar koi hogi bhi to uske ware me inke aalawa kisi ko pata hi nahi hai.





Main- to ab kya karu main. Inko kaise roku. Main koi jadugar nahi hu jo in bhoot preto ko rok saku. Balki unke pass jadui shaktiya hai. Vo mujhe cheeti ki tarah masal denge.





U- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Vo tumhe aaram se hara sakte hai. Lekin tumhe maar nahi sakte. Kyuki tumhare andar bhi kuch shaktiya hai. Jo tumhe bhi immortal banati hai. Halaki puri tarah se nahi lekin fir bhi tum ek immortal ho. Jise maar pana har kisi ke bas me nahi hai. Or rahi baat in sabko harane ki to samay aane per iski jaankari bhi tumhe mil jayegi. Isliye chinta chhodo or filhaal to tum jao bapis apne ghar. Sabhi tumhara besabri se intjaar kar rahe hai. Or ek baat ka khaas dhyan rakhna. Abhi kaal ke saamne mat aana. Uski najro me tum mar chuke ho. Us ka fayeda uthana. Or chupchap apni tayyari karna.





Main- kam se kam ye to bata do ki ye black heart kaha per or kaise qaid hai or kaal kaise usko aazaad karane wala hai.






U- darashal kaal ek tilismi pathar ki talash kar raha hai. Jo prithvi per hi kahi chhipa hua hai. Jiska naam hai Paras Pathar. Jaise hi is pathar ko us black heart ki body se touch karaya jayega vo turant hi jaag jayega ya yu kaho ki jinda ho jayega. Kyuki filhaal vo qaid hai ya yu kaho ki mara hua hai. Uski soul ko usi ke baap ne qaid kar liya hai. Or uski body ko jalane ke liye chhod diya tha. Lekin kaal ne uski body ko bacha liya or tabse vo usi Paras Pathar ki khoj kar raha hai. Lekin use abhi tak kuch nahi mila. Lekin ab jald hi use paras pathar milne wala hai. Kyuki usne kai baar time travel kiya hai sirf yahi janne ke liye ki ye pathar akhir kaha per chhipa hua hai. Or use thoda andaja bhi ho gya hai. Isliye ab uska rukh usi taraf hai.











Main- ek baat batao jab tumhe sab pata hai to tum use rokte kyu nahi. Tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe sampurna gyan hai past present and future ka. Fir use rok kyu nahi lete tum.






U- is baat ka jawab tumhare sawal me hi chhipa hua hai. Mujhe pata hai ki aage kaise or kya hone wala hai. Or use kon pura karega. Or me samay me chedchaad nahi kar sakta. Jis kaam ke liye jise chuna gaya hai use bahi karna hoga. Isliye main use chah kar bhi nahi rok sakta. Rokna to tumhe hi padega.







Main- ye kaal is waqt kaha hai or kis bhes me hai. Bas itna or bata do.





U- vo is samay. Nagaland me hai baha ka ACP ban kar ghoom raha hai. Baaki uske sathi uske aaspass hi rehte hai.






Main- thanks for the information.
Main jau kaise ghar ye bhi bata do.






U- apni speed force se or kaise. Kholo portal





Main- poratl to main khol lu. Lekin mujhe ye idea nahi hai ki portal ko sahi jagah ke liye kaise nevigate karte hai. Maine labhi try kiya hi nahi hai. Agar me kahi or pahuch gya to.







U- are ye bahut hi simple hai. Tumhe bas apni soch ko kabu karna hai. Speed force ke douraan tumhe apne man me us jagah ke baare me hi sochna hai jaha tumhe jana hai. Bas vo poratl tumhe bahi pahucha dega.





Main- ye kaise sambhav hai.





U- dekho tum jo bhi energy generate karoge usper tumhara hi kabu hoga. Tumhara dimaag tumhari shaktiyo ko order dega ki tumhe kaha jana hai or kaise. Bas baaki shaktiya apna kaam baise hi karegi. Chaho to try karlo Ek baar.






Main- mujhe yakeen nahi.




Ye sunte hi vo hasne laga.




Main- uda lo mera majak




U- sorry. Lekin tum usme fase hi nahi.





Main- aise kaise fas jaunga. Us earth per mere se jyada dimaag sayad hi koi chalata hoga. Ye baat to tum bhi jante hi hoge.





U- ha bhai janta hu. Khair jokes a part. Tum apni speed ko bilkul high per jaise hi le jaoge. Usi samay time barrier toot jayega or fir us speed force me dakhil ho jaoge. Jaha se tum jaha chaho baha ja sakte ho. Chaho to time travel kar sakte ho. Ya fir kisi dusre dimensions me bhi travel kar sakte ho. Or isse pehle tum apna agla sawal puchho me bata du. Tum speed force me enter karoge to baha pahuch kar tumhe sab apne aap hi samajh aajayega. Tumhe jyada dimaag lagane ki jarurat nahi padegi.






Main- lekin maine suna hai ki speed force me fas bhi sakte hai. Kyuki aisa ek case mere saamne aachuka hai.






U- tum electro ki baat kar rahe ho.





Main- ha





U- ye bala matter tumper lagu nahi hota hai. Ha kuch paresani jarur aa sakti hai lekin uske liye thode sachet rahoge to kaam aaram se chal jayega.





Main- kaisi paresani.





U- jaise gunahon ko rokne or gunahgaro ko pakadne ke liye police hoti hai. Baise hi jo bhi time travel ya fir speed force se safar karte hai. Unhe pakadne ke liye bhi ek khaas tarah ki police tainat hoti hai. Jo aise logo ka sikaar karte hai. Or agar ik baar inke jaal me fas gye to gye kaam se.lekin lekin. Ye log bhi tab hi saamne aate hai jab koi baar baar aisa kar raha ho. Jaise ki kaal. Lekin use unse bachana aata hai isliye use abhi tak vo log pakad nahi paye hai. Isliye tum unki tension na lo. Or bina koi jhijhak ke aane safar per nikal pado.





Main- lekin kis jagah per me running karu.





U- is musibat ka hal hai mere pass. Aao mere sath.




Usne mera hath pakada or agle hi pal ham ek bahut bade maidaan me khade the. Jaha dur dur tak kuch nahi tha.




U- yaha per round chakkar lagao. Apni speed ko badalo or chale jao.






Main- ek baat batao tum mujhe pal bhar me ghar bhej sakte ho na.






U- ha bhej sakta hu. Lekin usme vo maja kaha. Jo ab aayega or dusri baat ye hai ki. Tum speed force me ghusne ki practice kar lo. Kyuki ye tumhara vo hathiyar hai jiski madad se tum kaal per bhari pad sakte ho. Isliye ab time waste na karo or doudna suru karo.





Uski baat ko sunkar main doudne hi wala tha ki maine usse kaha.






Main- ek aakhiri question.





U- theek hai puchho.





Main- tum ho kon. Or tumhara naam kya hai. Or ye sab kaise jaante ho tum.






U- me bhi ek insan hi hu. Naam hai. DEV SINHA.

yahi per rehta hu. Or rahi baat ki main ye sab kaise jaanta hu. To is sawal ka jawab fursat se dunga. Kyuki isme bahut time jayega. Isliye ab ye sab chhodo or apne man ko puri tarah se shant karo or doudna suru kar do. ( Ha to bhailog ye apni story Divyastra the power of five elements ka hero hai dev orf arnab hai baaki iski saari story agar pata karni hai to ye story jarur padle...)



Maine bhi ab usse kuch nahi puchha. Or doudna suru kar diya.



2-3 chakar ke baad meri speed form me aane lagi. Or isliye maine or tez doudna suru kiya. Meri speed se aaspaas ki puri jagah per ek aandhi si aagye thi. Charo taraf dhool udne lagi thi. Or vo ground karib 50 ekad ka tha. Or meri speed ki bajah se mujhe kuch mini sec hi lag rahe the uska pura chakkar lagane me. Or dheere ye fasla or kam hota ja raha tha. Kuch or round lagane ke baad main 1 sec. Me karib 10 round lagane laga tha.or ye ginti badti hi ja rahi thi.karib 1 min. Ki doud ke baad meri speed apni peak per thi. Almost full or is speed me main us ground ke karib 1000 chakkar laga raha tha 1 sec. Me. Tabhi mere saamne achanak se ek portal khul gya or bina kisi deri ke main usme ghus gya. Or aage doudte hue jaane laga. Or us speed force me mujhe bahut kuch dikh raha tha. Jo bahut hi tezi se nikalta ja raha tha. Thodi hi der baad mujhe ek portal dikha khula hua or main usse bahar nikal gya. Ab main bapis se jameen per aagya tha lekin meri speed bahut jyada thi jise control me lane ke liye thoda time laga or me bapis se khada ho gya.





Maine aaspaas dekha to ye bhi ek khaali maidan jaisa hi tha. Yahi achha hua ki yaha koi tha nahi. Lekin ab mujhe confirm karna tha ki main sahi jagah per pahucha hu ya nahi. Isliye maine doudte hue aage gya thodi hi der ke baad mujhe kuch ghar dikhne lage. To maine apni speed bapis se kam ki or normally unke ghar ke saamne jaake khada ho gya.maine apna suit bapis off kiya or unke ghar ka darwaja khatkhataya.



Thodi der baad ek lady ne darwaja khola.




Lady- ji kahiye kon chahiye.




Main- ji mujhe thoda paani chahiye hai or me bhatak gya hu isliye jagah ki jaankari bhi chahiye.




Lady- theek hi rukiye me paani lekar aati hu.



Vo jaise hi andar gyi. Mera mobile bajne laga. Maine mobile nikala to koi unknown no. Tha. Maine call received kiya.






Main- hello.





Harry- hello sir main Harry.




Ye aawaj me achhe se pehchanta tha.




Main- Harry lekin tumhare andar to virus agaya tha na.





Harry- ha sir lekin ab me theek hu. Or tab se aapki hi talash kar raha hu. Jaise hi aapka tracker on hua maine aapko call kiya. Main samajh gya tha ki aap bapis agaye hai.





Main- baise ye konsi jagah per hu main abhi. Or yha se ghar kaise aau.




Tabhi vo lady paani lekar aagyi. Maine unse paani liya or pura ek hi jhatke me pee gya. Or unko gilaas bapis kiya.





Harry- sir me usi jagah per choper bhej raha hu. Aap tension na lo. Baise is waqt aap. Dehradun ke aaspass ho.





Main- theek hai bhejo me intjaar karta hu.



Ye Kehke maine call cut kiya. Or un lady ko thanks kaha




Main- thanks mere log abhi aate hi honge ab me rasta dhudn lunga.





Lady- chaliye koi baat nahi. Baise or paani chahiye aapko. Lagta nahi aapki pyaas bujhi hogi.





Main- ha baise thoda or mil jata to.




Lady- rukiye me abhi lai.




Ye kehke vo andar gyi or thodi hi der me mere liye or paani le aai. Or sath me is baar ek jug bhi lagai bhar kar. Taaki or pyas lage to me pi saku


Or maine dekhte dekhte hi dekhte pura jug khaali kar diya. Bakai bahut pyaas lagi thi mujhe. Us dev ne to mujhe paani bhi nahi pilaya bas apni baato me hi uljhata raha.lekin agar vo na hota to main bahi per fasa rehta. Isliye maine man me hi use thanks kaha.



Tabhi uper se ek chopper ki aawaj aane lagi. Jo dheere dheere neeche utarta ja raha tha. Or vo lady ye dekhkar bahut hi hairan thi.




Main- lagta hai vo log aagye.thanks aapne mujhe paani pilaya. Aapko kabhi bhi kisi jagah meri madad ki jarurat pade to mujhe aap call kar sakti hai. Ye leejiye mera card.





Maine unhe card or unka jug bapis diya or me chopper ki traf gya. Or chopper land hote hi usme se nikle bhai.



Or jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha doud kar gale se laga liya.





Bhai- kaha chala gya tha tu. Pata hai ham sab ki kya haalat ho gyi thi.




Main- kya bhai aap bhi. Haalat to meri bhi kharab ho thi. Lekin abhi mujhe gye 2-3 ghante hi hue honge usme itna kya tension lena.




Ye sunte hi bhai mujhse alag hue.





Bhai- kaya kaha tune 2-3 ghante.




Main- ha or nahi to kya.




Bhai- beta tujhe gye pure 1 saal ho chuka hai. Ye dekh date




Bhai ne mujhe date dikhai jisme pura 1 saal aage tha.




Main- lekin ye kaise sambhav hai. Mujhe to aisa laga jaise kuch ghante hi hue hai.





Bhai- ab chhod baaki baate ghar ja kar karenge. Filhaal ghar chal sabhi teri raah dekh rahe hai. Or khas kar radha. Usne apna jo haal bana rakha hai use dekhega to rone lagega.





Main- aisa kya hua use. Mujhe batao bhai abhi.




Bhai- darashal tere jaane ke baad usne apne aap ko kamre me band kar liya hai or uska kehna hai ki us kamre ka darwaja tu hi kholega or koi nahi. Or agar tu bapis nahi aata to vo usi kamre me sara jeevan nikaal deti. Hamne maa ne papa ne sabhi ne use bahut samjhaya lekin usne kisi ki baat suni hi nahi. Ab tu chal tu hi use samjhana.



Ye sunte hi mujhe bahut bura lagne laga. Or main jhat se chopper me baith gya or bhai mere sath or ham udd gye ghar ki taraf.















To be continue………………..
Marvelous and awesome update dude
and you reveal the truth and future planning of Kaal, but it's also good to see see two Heroes of your stories are infront of each other this part is beyond the words awesome ........
At last good to see Suriya on earth 1 and met his brother soooooooooo met his family too🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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Sandeep singh nirwan

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Great update Bhai main dev sinha he pdh raha hu aur apki ye story bi ho sake toh dono ko mila he do dono he character ache h
Milane ka logic koyi bi ho i know dev ke pass powers bahut h but like a guru isko guide kar sakta h ya opponent strong aur kardo maza dubble ho jayega baki update shandar h bhai
 

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Are wo dev tha gjb to yaani abhi aur bhi dev ka role hone wala h aur bahut khub...👏👏👏to akhir kaar dev ne surya ko rashta dikhaya aur uski madad se surya waps apne dimension me aagya but 1 saal aage....ab jb surya waps aagya h to dekhte h wo kaal ki najro se kb tk bachta h aur usko paras patthar hasil krne se rok pata h ya nhi...wahi dev ke anusar is kaam ke liye surya ko chuna gya h to sayd surya ko bhavishya me aur bhi shaktiyaan prapt ho jaaye jo super natural ho...khair abhi to sayd kaal ka idhr koi najar nhi hogi uski najar filhal paras patthar pr tiki hogi issi karan wo abhi nhi jaan payega ki surya is back..
Ab sbse phle to jald se jald radha ko room se bahar nikalega wo bechari ki na jaane kya halat hogi pichhle ek saal se room me pde pde...
Chliye dekhte h kya hoga aage...aur ye avi ne jo robo bnaya wo kb aata h samne active hoga...
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