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Sci-FI Surya The Protector. (WAR Between Two Immortal.) (Completed)

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Excellent updates bhai....superb

thanks bro............



aage dekhte hai ki or Kya Kya hota hai.........




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Nice update bhai or ye kon he jis ne surya ke ghar me hi surya pe hamla kar diya shayad kal ho sakta he par wo waha harry ke rahte pahucha kese bhai please agala update jaldi do wait nahi ho raha he aage kya hoga ye janne ke liye

Sorry bro thoda late ho gya. Lekin aaj ek update or dene Wala hu me. Raat Tak aajayega. Baki aapka andaja kuch had Tak sahi bhi hai insabke pechhe kaal hi hai. Ab dekhna ye hai ki aage or Kya Kya hota hai........




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Ab yeh kaun aa gaya jisne surya par hamla kiya hai.....
Khair family bonding kaafi umda thi bro...

thanks bro..............



ab ye sayad kaal hi aaya hai. Dekhna ye hai ki Surya akhir ab karta Kya hai. Or kaise....


dekhte rahiye.....




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Rahul0087@

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Nice update lag ta hai senoy ne agli chaal chal di

Ha Bhai senoy ne chaal chal hi di. Or Surya ko bhi maar Diya ab dekhna ye hai ki aage Kya hota hai or kaise. Or Surya ab Kya karta hai......





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UPDATE 96









Me behosh ho chuka tha lekin pori tarah se nahi. Meri healing power bahut high thi jis bajah se mere ghav sec. Me bhar jate hai. Or yahi sab yaha bhi hua mere ghav jaldi bhar gye or me hosh me aagya. Lekin utha nahi. Lete lete hi Maine Charo taraf najar ghumai or dekhne laga ki akhir kisne mujhe Mara hai. Maine dheere se Harry ko aawaj lagai lekin Harry ka koi respond hi nahi aaraha tha. Maine Kai baar haary ko aawaj lagai lekin koi reply nahi aaya. Mujhe shak hua ki Harry reply nahi de raha hai Matlab ki Harry shutdown hai. Lekin ye kaise sambhav hai. Harry band kaise ho gya. Apne AAP to hoga nahi. Jarur kisi ne use band Kiya hai. Lekin kisne. Or kaise. Me abhi soch hi raha tha ki mujhe kuch kadmo ki aahat aai. To main fir se lait gya. Lekin aankho ko thoda khula rakha.taki dekh saku ki akhir hai Kon. To main hairan reh gya kyuki samne 1-2 nahi pore 30-40 log the. Sabhi KE sabhi ghar me ghuste ja rahe the. Me samaj gya ki ab agar jyada der Tak me leta raha to gadbad ho sakti hai. To maine apne hath ki taraf dekha. Apni watch ko lekin kismat kharab ho mere hatho me nahi thi. Mujhe yaad aaya ki Maine sone SE pehle use nikal Kar table per rakh Diya tha. Mujhe kaise bhi karke bhaiyo ko jagana padega lekin agar sabhi jaag gye to sabhi dar jayenge. Mujhe akele ko hi kuch karna padega. Isliye me speed se utha or ek taraf chhip gya.kisika bhi dhyan Meri taraf nahi tha. Ek to me andhere me gira tha. Jaha aasani se kisi ko najar na aao. Lekin jisne mujhe Mara tha use jarur pata hoga ki me kaha per hu. Sabhi log andar aachuke the. Or Ghar me jhak andhera chhaya hua tha. Mujhe lences ki madad se sabhi log clear dikh rahe the. Ab main kitchen me gya or baha SE Maine ek bada chaku utha liya. Or apni speed ka istemaal karna suru Kiya. Me speed se bhaga palak jhapakte hi me us group ke peeche chalne laga kisi ki bhi pata nahi Chala. Maine apna chaku hatho me liya or peeche se hi ek ke muh per hath rakha or speed me uska gala kaat Diya. Use chillane ka bhi mouka nahi Mila.maine socha mujhe thodi speed ka istemal karte hue jaldi jaldi sabko marna padega. Verna ye sabhi kisi na kisi kamre me ghus jayenge.or agar kisi ko hostage bana liya or alag problem ho jayegi. Isliye Maine ek dum se apni speed ko high Kiya. Itna high ki sabhi mujhe ikdam se slow motion me chalte hue dikhai diye. Maine isi baat ka fayeda uthaya or ek ek KE gale ko kaat Diya. Unhe to sayad koi andaja bhi nahi laga hoga ki kaise or Kya ho raha hai. Jab sabke gale kaat Kar me ruka to sabhi log ek sath neeche gir gye.main ek KE pass gya or uski body ki scan Kiya andar Tak uska pora exray dekha Maine. To me hairan ho gya kyuki sabhi KE Dil ki dhadkane chal rahi thi. Or un sabke ghav bhi jaldi jaldi bharne lage the. Ye mere liye achhi baat nahi thi. Kyuki agar me inhi me uljha raha to gadbad ho jayegi. Main speed se apne kamre me gya or apni watch ko pehan liya. Or apna suit up Kar liya. Uske baad main jaldi se bhaiyo KE kamre KE Bahar gya or unke gate ko jor SE khat khataya.ye sab speed me hi Kiya or turant hi neeche aagya. Maine apni sword nikali or lences ki madad se sabhi ke heart per war Karne laga.or war aisa ki andar ki heart SE releted sari nase Kat Jaye. Or heart beat karna band karde. Maine Kuch ke body per aise hi war Kiya or kuch kk gardano ko unke dhad se uda Diya. Ye sab karke me free hi hua tha ki Bhai ne peeche se aawaj di




Bhai- Surya ye sab Kya hai.



Main- Bhai jaldi sabhi bhaiyo ko uthao or khas Kar aadil ko or usse bolo ki Harry sayad shutdown hai koi reply nahi de raha hai. Jaldi use start Kare Verna yaha lasho ka ambar lag jayega.



Ye sunte hi Bhai doud Kar aadil or aarav KE kamre ki taraf gye or unke darwaje ko peetne lage. Thodi hi der me aadil ne gate khola.or Bhai ko dekhkar thoda chouka.


Bhai ne use sari situation samjhai or foran hi base me Jane ko kaha lekin secratly.base me Jane ka Rasta uske kamre SE bhi tha to vo jaldi hi us raste se neeche Chala gya. Or Bhai aarav ko uthane chale gye. Thodi der baad aarav ne bhi darwaja khola to Bhai ne use bhi neeche base me Jane ko kaha. To vo bhi Bina koi sawal ke neeche Chala gya. Or uske baad Bhai ne Rony ko jagaya or use lekar mere pass aagya.



Rony- ohh to salo ne chaal chal hi di. Koi nai Suri aane de. Aaj sabki kabr yahi khodunga me.




Main- vo to ham karenge hi lekin mujhe ye samaj me nahi aaraha hai ki mujhper hamla kisne Kiya.



Bhai- Kya tujhper hamla kaise kab.



Fir Maine Bhai ko bataya ki kaise or kab hua.




Bhai- Matlab ki koi pehle se hi yaha per moujood tha.




Main- ha yahi baat to mujhe paresan Kar rahi hai. Ki kisne mujhper hamla Kiya.




Rony- kahi vo kaal to nahi hai. Sayad vo kisi tarah andar aagya ho or usi ne tumper hamla Kiya ho.




Main- ho sakta hai lekin sabse Badi baat ye hai ki Harry band kaise hua. Or kaal andar aaya kaise. Harry me hote hue to ek parinda bhi nahi aasakta hai andar.




Bhai- hmmm. Ha me samaj gya. Ho na ho aarav ko fir se hypnotized Kiya gya ho. Or usi ne Harry ko band Kiya ho. Jisse kaal andar aaya ho. Or usne tumper hamla Kiya ho.






Main- aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Ya fir aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki sayad jise ham aarav samaj rahe ho vo aarav ho hi na. Balki koi or hi ho. Jise senoy ne aarav KE jaisa bana Diya ho. Or hamari aankho me dhool jhok di ho. Or sath me Harry KE bhi. Kyuki use Harry KE bare me sab kuch pata chal chuka hai. Or use kaise dhoka Dena hai ye bhi.






Rony- nahi mujhe nahi lagta ki aarav nakli hai. Balki tumhari dusri baat me point hai. Sayad use Harry KE sabhi system ke bare me aarav SE pata chal gya hai. Or usne usi KE aadhar per Harry ko band Kiya ho.





Bhai- ye baat ho sakti hai. Lekin isme bhi ek doubt hai ki. Harry aisi kisi bhi problem se khud nipat sakta hai. Vo kisi bhi hack SE khud ko aaram se bacha sakta hai. Or apne AAP ko shutdown bhi nahi hone deta.





Main- yes Bhai. Isiliye mujhe lagta hai aarav ya kisi or ne Harry ko band Kiya hai. Usi KE baad sayad kaal andar aaya hai. Or usne mujhper hamla Kiya hai. Halaki mujhe aabhas ho gya tha kisi KE yaha hone ka lekin andhere me koi theek se dikha nahi.jis bajah se me use bahem samaj baitha or usi ka fayeda utha Kar usne mujhper hamla Kar Diya.






Rony- ye sab bate filhal chhodo or ye pata Karo ki agar kaal yaha hai to gya kaha. Kahi vo kisi ko kuch Kar na de. Isiliye pehle use dhundo. Ye sab ham baad me pata karenge ki kisne Harry ko band Kiya.




Main- your right Bhai. Ek kaam Karo fail jao sabhi jagah. Bhai aap sabhi ko base me bhejo. Lekin pehle base ki janch karlena. Jab Tak me or Rony Bhai dhundte hai us ko.



Bhai- ha ye theek hai. Me Le jata hi sabhi ko.




Uske baad Bhai suru hue dad KE kamre SE.unhone ek ek karke sabhi ko jagaya or base me pahuchne ko kaha.sab apne kamre SE hi base me Jane lage.or bacho ko sath leke Bhai khud base me chale gye. Jaha aarav or aadil dono hi Harry ko start Karne me lage hue the. Kyuki Harry ki Jo powersupply thi arc reactor se. Uski sari wiring ko hi nikal Diya gya.or kaat Diya gya tha. Jis bajah se dono ko use firse jodne me time lag raha tha. Sabhi baha per aachuke the. Sunny or rishi bhi aadil or aarav ki madad Karne lage the.bina Harry KE ham pore Ghar ko lockdown nahi Kar sakte the. Uske pass sari security ka access tha. Jis bajah se filhal hamara Ghar sabse unsafe tha. Lekin dikkat ye thi ki kaal gayab tha. Or vo kisi ko kuch nuksan pahuchaye usse pehle mujhe use dhundna tha. Me or Rony Bhai pore Ghar ko scan Kar rahe the. Hamne ek chhota sa Kona bhi nahi chhoda tha. Lekin kaal ka kuch pata nahi tha. Maine Bahar Jake sabhi jagah per use dekha lekin vo hame nahi Mila.




Main- Bhai Mila kahi.




Rony- nahi yaar lagta hai bhag gya hai. Baise bhi mujhe lagta hai vo tujhe maarkar hi Bahar nikal gya hoga. Or in logo ko bheja hoga. Ki ye sabko maar de ya kuch bada nuksan Kar de. Use ye ummid bhi nahi hogi ki tu itni jaldi heal Kar lega. Verna vo kuch or plan karta pakka. Or khud Bahar se hi bhag gya hoga.





Main- aisa hi hua ho to theek Verna agar usne kuch or plan Kiya hoga to gadbad ho jayegi. Or Meri six sense keh rahi hai. Ki baat sirf itni nahi hai jitni dikh rahi hai. Jarur kuch gadbad hai. Jo mujhe samaj me nahi aarahi hai. Kuch to aisa karke gya hai vo. Jise ham samaj nahi pa rahe hai.





Rony- kahi koi bomb bagera ka chakkar to nahi hoga na.





Main- hamara Ghar bomb se hilega bhi nahi.




Rony- ha ye baat bhi hai. To fir Kya ho sakta hai. Kahi kisi ko apne sath le to nahi gya bo.




Main- pata nahi. AAP Bhai ko call Karo or unse kaho ki sabhi logo ki ginti Kare. Or dekhe ki koi missing to nahi hai na.




Rony- ha me karta hu.



Rony Bhai SE baat karne laga. Or me sochne laga ki akhir Kya kand karke gya hai ye. Ye itna jokhim aise hi Khali hath Jane KE liye to nahi uthayega.harry ko band karna itne logo ko Ghar me bhejna.nahi kuch to karke gya hai ye. Lekin Kya karke gya hai iska pata kaise chalega.kahi arc reactor se khud ko or jyada powerful to nahi bana liya usne. Lekin vo baha Tak pahuch hi nahi sakta hai. Lekin agar vo kisi ko apne sath le gya ho base me to jarur ye sambhav hai. Arc reactor se power Lena. Lekin kaise.




Bahi neeche base me Avi bhi laga hua tha sab jagah per dekh raha tha. Wiring ko samaj raha tha. Tabhi uski najar ek jagah per padi or vo bahut jyada hairan ho gya. Use kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha tha ki Kya Kiya Jaye.


Avi- dadu jaldi yaha aaiye.



Dad- Kya hua



Avi- AAP aaiye to ye dekhiye.




Dad jaldi uske pass gye



Dad- Kya hua.



Avi- dadu ye dekhiye arc reactor kitni tez speed pakad raha hai. Iski speed lagatar bad rahi hai. Iski normal speed se ye bahut tez bhag raha hai.





Dad ne turant hi uska meter check Kiya. To vo bhi hairan ho gye. Kyuki arc reactor ki speed lagatar bad rahi thi. Or unhe bhi ye samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki ye kaise ho raha hai.






Bahi mere dimag ki batti jali. Or Jo mujhe samaj me aaya use jaankar Mera matha fatne ko ho gya kyuki bahut Badi gadbad hone wali thi.




Main- Bhai jaldi sabhi ko leke Bahar aaiye




Bhai- Kya hua.



Main- Bhai aap sabhi ko Bahar nikaliye. Kyuki Harry bahut der se band hai. Or aapko pata haina ki Harry arcreactor ki speed ko control karta hai.





Bhai- ha pata hai.to usme Kya hai.



Main- Bhai jab Harry band pada hai to Jara socho ki arc reactor ki speed ko Kon control karega. Uski speed badti jayegi. Or ho sakta hai base me blast karde vo. Isliye aap sabhi ko leke jaldi se Bahar nikaliye. Foran.





Bhai- oh my God yaar. Abhi abhi nikalta hu.




Bhai- dad jaldi yaha se Bahar nikalna hoga hame.




Dad- ha bahi me kehne Wala tha. Ye dekho ye reactor ki speed badti ja rahi hai. Agar use jaldi control me nahi Kiya gya to bahut Badi tension ho sakti hai.




Bhai- ha dad isiliye AAP sabhi ko leke Bahar jaiye or Ghar se karib 1 km doori per rehna. Sunny rishi sabhi ko lejao jaldi. Baki ham dekhte hai isko.




Mom- lekin beta yaha tum logo ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai.



Bhai- ha pata hai mom lekin agar Harry ko jaldi start nahi Kiya to pora Goan iski chapet me aajayega. Isliye hame usko start Karne ki kosis karni hogi. Verna bahut bada hadsa ho sakta hai. Ab ap log bahes na Kare or jaldi se Bahar nikaliye.



Sabhi ko Bhai ki baat sahi lagi. Isliye dad sunny or rishi sabhi ko jaldi se Bahar nikalne lage. Or Bhai aarav and aadil bahi per ruk gye



Uper hall me main or Rony Bhai khade hue the. Maine Rony Bhai ko sabhi KE sath Jane ko kaha. Kyuki ho sakta hai ki inlogo per koi baha per hamla karde.



Rony Bhai jaldi se sabhi ko leke hamare Ghar se karib ek km door leke pahuch gye. Sabhi alag alag gadiyo me nikal chuke the.me bhi jaldi SE neeche base me gya. Jaha ham Charo hi Bache the.




Main- aadil kitna waqt lagega.




Aadil- Bhai almost done ho gya hai. Bas 5 min baad Harry on hone lagega.



Aarav- ha Bhai sab set ho chuka hai.




Main- badiya jaldi se isko on Karo. Or sabse pehla kaam reactor ki speed ko control karne ko kehna.



Bhai- tu kaha ja raha hai.



Main- Bhai me gharwalo KE pass ja raha hu. Baha per bhi gadbad hone ke chances najar aa RAHE hai.




Bhai- kaisi gadbad.




Main- Bhai sayad kaal yahi kahi ghat lagaye baitha ho. Or vo sabhi ko akela samajkar hamla karde. Ya chupke SE kisi ko agwah karle.





Bhai- yes your right. Ek kaam Karo tum bhi jao yaha ham sambhal lenge.



Main- ha or Harry KE on hote hi pore Ghar ko achhe se scan karwana. Kuch bhi mat chhodna.




Bhai- ha me samaj gya. Tum jao ham yaha dekh lenge.



Bahi Ghar SE thodi Dori per kaal bakai me chhipkar sab dekh raha tha. Jaise hi use sabhi Ghar ke log Bahar hate hue dikhe vo samaj gya ki uska plan Surya samaj chuka hai. Isliye ab usne dusra plan per Amal Kiya. Uske sath karib 30-40 log or the. Vo in sabhi ko gharwalo ki taraf jaldi se le Jane laga. Sabhi kafi fast the to chutki me baha per pahuch gye. Vo sabhi bahi per jhadiyo me chhip gye. Or sabhi ko dekhne lage. Sabhi log abhi apni gadiyo me hi baithe hue the.koi bhi Bahar nahi nikla tha.




Kaal ghat laga Kar baitha tha.



Ab dekhna ye tha ki ye karta Kya hai…..










To be countinue……………….
Chaal achhi chali hai kaal and party ne ab dekhte hain is action ka reaction kya nikalta hai......
 

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Nice update bhai or kaal ko marne ka achcha chance mila he surya ko kaal ka kam yahi khatam kar do fir senoy ko fir se bach pana muskil hoga or takkar bhi mast hogi senoy ke sath or jab kaal mar jayega to senoy to pagal hi ho jayega aur senoy ki takat bhi aadhi ho jayegi waiting for next update
 

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UPDATE 97









Kaal and party bahi per chhipi Hui thi.


G1- boss ab aage Kya karna hai.



Kaal- inlogo ki cars kafi safe hai. Inko kisi tarah Bahar nikalna padega. Jaise hi Bahar niklenge ham sabhi Charo taraf se unper toot padenge. Aaj koi bhi Jinda nahi bachna chahiye Surya ke khandan me.




G1- lekin boss inko Bahar kaise nikale car se. Or kahi Surya yaha aagya to. Vo to palak jhapakte hi sabko sula dega.




Kaal- nahi agar vo ayega to me use apne me uljha lunga. Or tum sabhi uske pariwar ko maar Dena bilkul bhi mat hichakna. Or rahi baat inko car se Bahar nikalne ki to sabhi tyres ko punkchar Kar do. Or gadi per pathar feko. Lekin keval 2 log hi pathar fekenge Baki log chhipe hi rahenge. Unko bhanak bhi nahi lagni chahiye ki yaha per or bhi log hai.sab samaj gye.



Sabhi- yes boss.



Kaal- to theek hai lag jao kaam per. Speed ka istemal Karo. Or sabhi tyres per gun se war kardo.




Uske baad 2 log us group se side me gye or speed se gun me silencer laga Kar fire karne lage. Sabhi goliya Tyre per hi Chala rahe the.4 car thi baha per Charo cars KE 16 tyres ko jaldi hi sabhi ne punkchar Kar Diya. Or turant hi cars ke uper pathar bazi Karne lage.



Bahi Rony ko aabhas ho gya tha kuch gadbad ka.isiliye usne sabhi ko car se Bahar nikalne se Mana Kar Diya. Chahe kuch bhi ho Jaye. Lekin jaise hi pathar padne lage car per to sabhi ledies ghabrane lagi.lekin mom or bua ne sabhi ko sambhala or car me hi baithe rehne ko kaha.



Dad- Rony Bahar jakar inko khatm kardo na.




Rony- dad ye jarur inki koi chaal hai. Jara sochiye ye dono hamper khule aam pathar feko rahe hai. Bhala Kyu.




Sunny- kyuki ham car se Bahar nikle or ye hame Charo taarf se gher le. Yakinan inke Baki ke sathi yahi kahi chhipe ho sakte hai. Bhai aap Jara apne lences ki madad lo.




Rony- me kabse dekh raha hu. Vo log yahi jhadiyo ke peeche hi chhipe hue hai.





Rishi- to ab hame Kya karna chahiye.





Rony- hame kuch nahi karna hai sab yahi baithe raho. Insabka baap aaraha hai peeche. Vo sabko dekh lega. Bas itna khayal rakhna ki koi bhi car ke aaspas na aa paye.samaj gye.




Sabhi- ha samaj gye.




Bahi me bhi cars ke karib pahuch chuka tha. Or seedha Jane ki jagah me thoda Charo taraf dekh Kar ja raha tha. Taki agar kahi koi chhipa hua ho to mujhe dikh Jaye. Me car me bilkul pass hi aagya tha to mujhe 2 log cars ke uper pathar fekte hue dikhai diye.



Main- Rony Bhai ye sab Kya hai.




Rony- us kaal KE hi aadmi hai. Yaha Charo taraf faile hue hai. Jhadiyo me chhipkar baithe hai. Or ye dono hame car se Bahar nikalne KE liye ye sab Kar rahe hai.




Main- badiya. theek hai sabper najar rakhna koi bhi cars ke aaspass na pahuch paye. Baki me dekhta hu.




Rony- ok. Maine sabko samjha Diya hai.




Main apni sword nikali or apne lences ki madad se sabhi chhipe hue logo ki location dekhne laga. Or mujhe sare log hi mil gye. Or mujhe is baat ka pora yakeen tha ki is gang me sayad kaal bhi hai.





Maine apni speed ka istemal Kiya. Or un sabki taraf Doud laga di. Palak jhapakte hi I'm dono ki garden neeche padi thi.or me baha ruka nahi balki me bhi ek jhadiyo ke peeche chhip gya. Meri najar in sabhi per bank Hui thi. Vo sabhi ek dum se hairan ho gye ki ye Kya ho gya. Vo log kuch khusar pusar Karne lage. To Maine fir se Doud lagai. Unki taraf. Or apni sword se jitni bhi mudiya raste me aai sabko udata Chala gya.jaise hi last row me pahucha.jaha per kul 10 log hi chhipe hue the. Maine unko bhi niptane ke liye Doud lagai. Pehla gya,dusra gya, aise hi karke 9 bande gye kaam se. Jaise hi last bale ki mudi Tak sword pahuchi. Usne apni mundi neeche Karli. Or usi douran mujhe ek jabardast punch Mara Jo mere chest me Jake laga. Or us war SE me speed me hi 50 meter door Jake gira. Mere chehre per ek smile aagyi. Kyuki kaal KE aalwa kisi me itni takat nahi thi. Ki mujhe itna tagda punch maar sake or Meri speed se Bach Jaye.


Me utha or foran hi kaal KE pass pahuch gya palak jhapakte hi.




Main- kaise ho Miya bade Dino me darsan diye.




Kaal- ha thoda busy tha. Tumhari barbadi ki planning me.





Main- lekin planning to fail hoti dikh rahi hai mujhe.




Kaal- bhale hi yaha sabko bacha liya ho. Lekin tumhare pehchan wale to har jagah per hai sabko kaise bacha paoge.




Main- tujhe yahi per jinda gaad deta hu. Fir to automatically sab Bach hi jayenge.





Kaal- lagta hai pichhli haar SE kuch seekha nahi hai. Verna mere samne u khade ho ki himmat nahi karte.





Main- tum kis haar ki baat Kar rahe ho. Kahi uski to nahi jab Maine Tera hath kata tha. Or tu us chuhe senoy KE sath uske bill me Jake chhip gya tha. Or tabhi se bill me hi chhipa hua hai.






Kaal ye sunke thoda shan't pad gya. Kyuki kahi na kahi Meri bato me use sachai najar aarahi thi.





Main- bolti band ho gyi Kya.




Kaal- aaj tu nahi bachega mere hatho se.




Main- lekin mujhe to aisa nahi lagta hai.




Kaal- achha to Kya lagta hai.




Main- yahi ki aaj Tera is pore brahamand me aakhiri din hai.




Kaal- Kya bahut power aagyi hai us arc reactor se. Bhool mat me har tarah ki energy ko sokh sakta hu. Fir chahe vo Tera ye arc reactor hi kyu na ho.




Main- achha to ye bhi mat bhool ki ye arc reactor bhi har tarah ki power apne andar kheech sakta hai.





Kaal- ha manta hu. Lekin ek samay aayega jab ye fat jayega. Lekin me nahi fatne Wala to Jeet Meri Hui. Kyu sahi kaha na.





Main- vo tab hogi jab me tujhe us position Tak pahuchne dunga.




Ye bolke Maine speed me uski chest per ek jordar laat Mari. Sala ghisatta hua those door ja pahucha. Or vo uthta usse pehle hi me speed me uske pass gya or usko uthne ka mouka diye Bina hi uska thobda fodne laga. Or Maine apni sari power ko apne punch me kheecha or ek powerful punch uski chest me jad Diya. Mera puncha itna powerful tha ki uske suit ko todta hua Mera hath seedha uski chest me ghus gya. Matlab ki aarpar nahi hua bas. Lekin Mera hath is waqt uske dill ke pass tha. Or ye seen dekhkar hi kaal ki fat gyi. Kyuki Mera hath dheere dheere uske heart ki taraf bad raha tha.or me apne lences SE uski pori body ka x-ray live dekh raha tha. Uska heart kidhar hai mere hath se kitna door hai mujhe sab pata tha. Uski chamdi bahut hi kadak thi. Or dheere dheere Mera hath usme kasne laga tha. Kyuki uski body heal Karne lagi thi. Lekin me bhi haar manne walo me se nahi tha. Maine ek bar fir SE apni power ko apne dusre hath Tak pahuchaya or us hath ka bhi punch bana Kar uske chest me ek dum heart ke uper de Mara. Or abki baar Mera hath andar ghusa to seedha heart per Jake ruka. Uska heart mere hatho me tha. Or uski body heal Karne lagi thi. Bahi kaal apne hatho ko jhatpata raha tha. Lekin mere ghutno ke neeche Dave hone ke Karan vo jyada kuch nahi Kar pa raha tha. Dard KE mare uski aankhe Bahar ko aane lagi thi. Bahi mere chehre per darindgi chha rahi thi. Sabhi bato ka gussa me us per nikal raha tha. Aarav ko kidnape karne ka. Mere Ghar per hamla karne ka. Or to or Kai baar city per alag alag hamla karne ka. Me Sara gussa aaj nikal raha tha. Maine apni muthhi me uske heart ko pakad liya.jo bahut hi Kam dhak dhak Kar raha tha. Maine use kaske pakda or pora jor laga Kar uske heart ko apne hath ke sath Bahar nikal liya.ek hi jhatke me.mere pore chehre per khoon KE dhavve as gye the.or mere dono hatho me kaal ka blood itna laga hua tha ki pore Lal ho gye the. Uska heart Jo mere hatho me tha vo abhi bhi dhadak raha tha. Jise dekhkar me thoda hairan hua. Or sabse Badi hairani tab Hui jab Mera hath apne AAP hi us jagah bapis khichne laga jaha per uska heart tha. Uski body apne heart ko bapis se andar kheech rahi thi. Or me pore jor laga raha tha ki Mera hath bapis andar na ja paye. Isiliye Maine apne dusre hath me sword li or us dill me ghusa di. Or sec me hi Maine apni sword ko nikal Kar uski garden ko dhad se uda Diya.




Main- Rony Bhai jaldi aaiye





Meri aawaj bahut door Tak sunai di hogi. Maine chillaya hi tha ki Rony Bhai foran hi mere pass aagye.




Main- jaldi jaiye or gadi SE petrol or lighter le aaiye iski body ko yahi rakh me Mila dunga me.



Meri baat sunkar Rony Bhai jaldi gye or car se petrol ki ek can utha laye or sath me lighter bhi.





Uske baad Rony ne jaldi se kaal ki pori body per pora petrol daal Diya. Lekin ab dikkat ye thi ki uski body abhi bhi respond Kar rahi thi. Or Mera hath apni taraf khench rahi thi. Lekin ab utni takat nahi laga rahi thi uski body. Main thoda jor laga Kar khada hua or uski body se door Jane laga to hairani ki baat ye Hui ki uski body ab mere peeche peeche khisakne lagi thi. Maine Rony Bhai ko ishara Kiya to unhone foran hi lighter Jala mar uski body per fek Diya. Or sec me hi usme itni bhayanak aag lagi ki Kya batao. Or body me aag lagte hi mere hatho me bhi aag lag gyi. Apne AAP hi. Kyuki mere hatho me uska heart tha to. Vo bhi Apne AAP jalne laga. Lekin Maine usko chhoda nahi. Kyuki agar me heart ko chhod deta to vo foran hi body me andar Chala jata. Or ek. Aar agar ye andar Chala jata to ye pori aag ko ye apne andar sokh leta or kaal fir SE jinda ho jata. Uski mudi Jo Maine alag ki thi. Vo bhi apne AAP khisak Kar fir se apni jagah per pahuch chuki thi. Or ye sab dekhne ke baad hamara bheja fry hone laga tha. Kyuki pata nahi iski body me aisa Kya hai. Jo ye sabko apne andar khichleti hai. Khaskar body ke parts ko. Lekin aaj me koi risk nahi lene Wala tha. Mera hath pora jal chuka tha. Or haddiya Bahar nikalne lagi thi. Lekin Maine uske heart ko nahi chhoda. Rony Bhai waar waar mujhse heart mang rahe the. Ki ye me unko de du Taki me heal ho saku. Lekin Maine unki baat nahi Mani or karib 1 ghanta Tak ye aag jalti rahi. Lekin akhir kaar uska heart bilkul rakh me badal gya. Or sath me uski body bhi. Or Jo aag lagi Hui thi vo bhi ab bhuj chuki thi. Or Mera hath ab heal hone laga tha. Or akhir kaar aaj kaal ka ant ho gya tha. Halaki ye bahut pehle ho jata agar ye mere samne aajata. Lekin Sala chhipkar war karta tha. Aaj jaise hi samne aaya Mara gya. Kaal ne ye bilkul bhi nahi Socha hoga ki aaj me usper itna jyada bhari padunga. Or ye Kamal hua Harry or mere lences ki madad se.

Darashal mere lences SE Maine iski body ke weak point ko dikhane ko kaha to mere aankhe seedha uske heart per ja Kar ruki. Or ye sab Maine tab Kiya jab me usse bate Kar raha tha. Jaise hi mujhe pata Chala ki iska weak point iska heart hai. Maine sidha usi per hamla Kar Diya. Usko koi mouka hi nahi Diya hamla karne ka. Or Harry ki bajah se aise kyuki Harry ne Avi ki madad se mere lences ko or bhi jyada modify Kar Diya tha. Halaki ye pehle se hi advance the lekin Avi ne inko or bhi sharp Kar Diya tha. Jis bajah se ye foran hi apna kaam suru Kar dete the. Or ye mujhe abhi kuch der pehle hi mile jab me base me gya tha. Avi ne sham ki bataya tha ki vo koi experiment Kar raha hai. To vo Naye lence bana raha tha. Jo base me usne Bhai ko diye the baha se Jane SE pehle. Or Maine Inka sidha experiment kaal per Kiya. Ye sab jaankar
Rony Bhai me foran hi mujhe gale SE laga liya.




Rony- Kamal Kar Diya tune to kaal ka khel khatm hi kar Diya.



Main- Bhai isme bada hath Avi ka bhi hai. Usi ne ye lence diye the jisne foran hi kaal ki kamjori mujhe Bata di. Or Maine usper foran hi war Kar Diya. Verna ye pakka hamper bhari padta.




Rony- bakai me Kamal ka bhatija hai Mera. Seekh kuch usse




Main- ha Bhai bahut kuch seekhna Baki hai.chaliye ab sabhi wait Kar rahe honge.




Rony- or Harry ka kya hua.




Main- vo bhi ab start ho chuka hoga. Or arc reactor bhi normal ho chuka hoga.abhi Tak





Rony- badiya.




Uske baad ham dono bapis cars ki taraf gye. Jaha sabhi log abhi bhi andar hi the. Hame aata hua dekh Kar sabhi bapis Bahar nikal aaye. Or uske baad sawalo ki jhadi lag gyi ki Kya hua kaise hua.



To Maine sabhi KE sawalo ke jawab diye. Jise sunkar ek baar fir sabhi me Avi or mujhe baho me bhar liya. Or Maine bhi Avi ko God me utha liya or use galo per kiss Kar Diya.

Or uske baad sabhi bacho ko apni bahi me leke Maine apna pyar jataya. Ye family milap ke baad ham sabhi Ghar ko bapis ho gye.





Bahi dusri taraf senoy ne ye pora kand live dekha tha. Or jab use ye pata Chala ki kaal Mar chuka hai. Vo bhi itni aasani se. To uske hairani ki koi Seema hi nahi rahi. Use ab apni mout saaf saaf dikhai dene lagi thi. Usne bahi per apna matha peet liya. Ki Kyu usne kaal ko baha per bheja.use kuch bhi samaj me hi nahi aaraha tha ki ab vo Kare to Kya Kare or kaise. Kyuki abhi Tak jitne bhi attack senoy ne karwaye the. Un sabhi ke peeche kaal ka hi dimag tha. Lekin fail to sabhi hue the. Lekin plan ek no. Banaya tha kaal. Or ab yahi senoy ko chinta kha rahi thi ki aisi planning ab Kon karega uske liye. Or ab bo kaise Surya ka samna karega.










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Rahul0087@

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Nice update bhai or kaal ko marne ka achcha chance mila he surya ko kaal ka kam yahi khatam kar do fir senoy ko fir se bach pana muskil hoga or takkar bhi mast hogi senoy ke sath or jab kaal mar jayega to senoy to pagal hi ho jayega aur senoy ki takat bhi aadhi ho jayegi waiting for next update

ha Bhai sahi kaha aapne. Or theek aisa hi hone Wala hai. AAP bas dekhte jaiye ki aage Kya Kya hota hai. Kaise senoy ki band bajti hai........





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Rahul0087@

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Chaal achhi chali hai kaal and party ne ab dekhte hain is action ka reaction kya nikalta hai......

ha Bhai chaal to hamesha achhi hi chalte hai ye log lekin Surya har bar inki chaalo ko nakam Kar deta hai. Ab dekhte hai ki kaal ka Kya hasra hota hai. Yaha per.





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