Sci-FI Surya The Protector. (WAR Between Two Immortal.) (Completed)

[Rahul0087@]

For starting new story thread
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Thanks siraj Bhai.....

 

[Rahul0087@]

Wah hero to shok ho gya ab kis na pharni ha hero ki

Ha Bhai use issab ki ummid to ab bilkul nhi thi.lekin ab aagya hai to use bhi dekh hi lenge..


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[Rahul0087@]

Nice update

or yaar dushman bhi powerful hai toh surya mein aur nayi khubiya aur powers hone chahiye .......surya ke pita old formulae ko modifie kar ke or jada powerful banaye surya ko ...ya phir surya ke sath kuch hadsa ho jaye aur uske body mein kuch naya inject kiya jaye jisse old formula or naya ke mix hone se kuch or hi powerful wala roop samne aaye ...

bhai surya ke ladka ladki hai unme bhi kuch khubi toh honi chahiye aakhir surya ke bete hai or o apne dad ki kabhi kabhi madad bhi kar sakte hai ghar baite baite naye gadgets banaye ya idea de unki baate sun kar ....chote hai toh unhe iss kam mein nahi la sakte but chupke se sunkar ya kuch advance kuch bana kar

YE MEINE APNI RAY DI BHAI BAAKI AAPKO JAISA ACCHA LAGE lekin ek bar soch ke dekhna

Ha Bhai aapne jaisa kaha hai.usse kafi milta julta us story me bhi hoga.aap tension na Le abhi to story suru Hui. Abhi bahut Baki hai....AAp bas dekhte jaiye..


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[Rahul0087@]

Bhai pehla part ki PDF dedo kuch samajh nehi aaya

Bhai pdf to nhi lekin Maine apne thread ke index ki link daal di hai AAP baha Jake story ko pad sakte hai....



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[Rahul0087@]

Shandar update bhai or ek bat ye jo bhi naya dushman hai wo kitna bhi powerful kyu na ho par wo surya ke England wale base or surya ke gav me na pahoch paye esa karna surya ka gav or England ka base ye dono jagah surya ka sabse majbut ghad hona chahiye jaha surya ki marji ke bina koi nahi ja paye or surya me flash speed ke alawa or koi dusari power ho to wo bhi bata do

Ha Bhai ab uske base or Ghar ke bare me Kya hota hai.iske bare me abhi khas socha nhi hai.baki aage dekhte hi ki villain Kya Kya Kar sakta hai Surya ke sath....


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[Rahul0087@]

Sahi kaha bhai me bhi sahmat hu is bat se

Ha Bhai aapke sath me bhi sehmat hu is baat se or aisa hi kuch aage story me jarur hoga abhi to kebal shuruwta Hui hai..aage dekhte jaiye Kya hota hai....



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[MEHAR1234]

Bhai aap kis web series ki baat Kar rahe ho mujhe iska koi idea nhi hai. Lekin. Maine ye khud socha tha. Or naam mere dhyan me aagya to Maine likh Diya...


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The Protector Turkish web series hy us main bhi ek protecter hota hy aur Immortals bhi

 

[Rahul0087@]

Sahi kaha dost aisa hi hona chahiye

Ha Bhai is bare me dekhte hai ki Kya Kiya ja sakta hai.abhi to shuruwat hi Hui hai..aage Kya hota hai.is bare me dekhte hai aage....

 

[Rahul0087@]

The Protector Turkish web series hy us main bhi ek protecter hota hy aur Immortals bhi

Bhai Sach kahu to Maine nahi dekha hai abhi Tak is ko. Lekin naam same to hai. Baki dekhte hai apni story kitni same lagti hai... Or Bhai ye naam to mujhe ek Bhai ne purane thraed per hi bataya tha.jo mujhe achha laga to Maine yahi rakh diya.or immortal Maine khud jood Diya..

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai or aap jin do logo ki bat last me ki he unka name to bata do