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UPDATE 23
mere baar baar kehne SE vo aage bada or mujhe pata tha ki sayad uske pass bhi mere moves padne ki kabiliyat ho sakti hai. Or iske liye me ready tha. Lekin pehla baar usne Kiya. Jaise hi usne apna left hand ka punch mere chere ki taraf Kiya. Maine foran duk Kiya or uske dono ghutno per apne chaku SE ek sath baar Kar diya. Sale ke dono pair gye kaam se. Or pair per lagne se uski speed Kam ho gyi. Or iska Maine fayeda uthaya or uske gale me aar paar Kar diya mere chaku ko...Sala bahi dher ho gya.
Main- sirf speed se Kya hoga. Uska sahi istemaal karna bhi aana chahiye… abhi bhi mere samne karib 15 log khade hue the. Or unme se bahuto ki fat ke hath me aagyi thi. Ye sab dekh ke.
Main- Kya hua dar gye Kya. Jao Ghar Jake apni MAA ki god me chhip jao. Mere samne dobara mat aana kabhi bhi. Nahi to ye mouka dobara nhi milega.
Is lalkaar se kuch ne apne kadam peeche Kar liye lekin kuch Meri taraf aage bad gye. Sale sab KE sab super speed me aage bade. Maine apne mind ko thoda roka me bhi speed me aage bada. Ab ye speed kitni thi pata nhi lekin mere ko sab KE sab slowmotion me dikh rahe the. Jo mere liye bahut achhi baat thi. Maine apne dono hatho me ek ek chaku liye or salo ki gardano ko gajar muli ki tarah katne laga. Jo bhi samne aata uska pata nhi kitna khoon me jameen per gira raha tha. Tabhi ek ne mere baar ko duk Kiya or dusre ne Mujhr Kamar se pakad liya or thodi door fek Diya. Me fir se khada hua. Ab keval 6-7 log hi Bache hue the. Jinme se 2 to bilkul pechhe hi khade hue the. Kevl 5 aage the. Vo fir bade Meri taraf. Abki baar Charo taraf se. Main baise hi khada raha vo log mere ikdam karib aagye. Or jaise hi mujh per baar Kiya me turant hi neeche baith gya. Or fir se sabke ghutno per apne dono hatho se baar Kar diye. Sab KE sab slow pad gye. Maine foran khada hua or ek ko seene per apni laat or uske samne wale ke chehre per ek punch jad Diya. Bilkul ek sath. Dono ke dono ek sath neeche. Samne Wala ladkhada Kar aage bada Maine uske gale me khanjar utara Diya. Tabhi ek pechhe se says Maine apni laat seedhe uske gale me ghusa di. Or jaise hi vo neeche hua Maine apne dusre hath ke chaku ko uski khopdi me seedha ghusa Diya. Ab keval ek bacha tha. Main uski taraf doudta hua gya or uchhal Kar apne dono pair uski garden me fasa Kar pechhe ki taraf neeche ho gya or pairo KE Bal usko seedha neeche patak Diya. Sale ka pora sir bahi khul gya. Or turant hi apna chaku uske mathe ke beecho beech ghusa Diya. Is sab ke baad me fir SE khada hua or un dono ki taraf dekha to sale baha se bhagne lage. Maine apne dono chaku ko nisana laga Kar unki taraf fek Diya. Jo unke gale me ghus gye seedhe….ab baha koi nhi bacha hua tha. Maine fir apne logo ki taraf dekha to sabhi KE sabhi apni aankhe fade mujhe hi dekh rahe the. Ek to me pora khoon me naha gya tha. Or dusra bahut hi bure trike se Maine un sabko Mara tha.
Main- Kya hua koi alian dekha Kya.
Bhai- pagal hai Kya itni speed Teri kab se ho gyi.
Main- Kya pehle jitni hi to hai.
Rony- Suri Harry bhi tujhe nahi pakad pa raha tha. Harry ne calculate Kiya to Teri speed karib 1500 km/h thi. Or sayad isse jyada hi thi.
Main- Kya baat karte ho mujhe to nahi laga aisa.
Aarav- Bhai ye Sach hai AAP karib 416m/s ki raftar se bhag rahe the. Or Baki sab kebal 2 m/s ki.
Main- me jab china me gira tha tab me karib 1km/s ki raftar se bhaga tha ye lagta hai kuch jyada hi raftar hai.
Aadil- Bhai bahut jyada. Is pori dunia me sabse tez raftar light ki hai. Lagbhag 299792458 m/s hai. Or aapki 416 m/s hai. Jo bahut hai. Baise rocket ki speed bhi 1000 km/h Tak Chalo jati hai lekin AAP fir bhi usse jydaa fast ho.
Main- khair Jo bhi ho ab niklo yaha se. Verna or log aajayenge. Or me tum logo ko yaha Kya kebal Meri speed jachne KE liye laya tha. Kam se Kam 1-2 bando ko to marte.
Bhai- hame Kya pagal kisi kutte ne kata hai Jo Tere hote hue ham samne aaye vo bhi itne tez logo ke samne. Ham 1 sec. Bhi nhi tik sakte. Baise jab koi or Rasta nhi bachega tab to AA hi jayenge. Or baise bhi tune kisi ko koi mouka hi nahi Diya. Sab kuch kebal 10-15 sec. Me khatm ho gya. Itne me to ham keval apni jagah SE Hil hi pate hai. Or tune 100 logo ko nipta Diya. Ab tu hi Bata ki ham isme Kya Kar sakte hai.
Main- badiya bahana banana khobb as gya hai AAP logo ko. Chalo ab nikalte hai yaha se. Harry kaam hua ki nahi.
Harry- almost done. Bas 2 min. Or.
Uske baad ham bahi intjaar Karne lage.
Main- Harry abhi Baki ke log kaha hai.
Harry- sir sab KE sab north side wale raste se bhag rahe hai. Or kuch yahi base me aage moujood hai.
Main- koi main aadmi dikha ya nhi.
Harry- sir jitne bhi dikhe sabko capture Kar liya hai. Or kuch ki purani pehchan bhi mil gyi hai. Jo me baad me batata hu. Abhi to yaha SE nikalne ka Rasta dekhne deejiye.
Main- Theek hai dekh lo.
Uske theek 2 min. Baad Harry bola.
Harry- sir yaha se Bahar Jane ka Rasta mil gya hai
Maine 30 min. Ka timer set Kar Diya hai. Ab hame yaha SE nikalna chahiye.
Main- Rasta kaha hai
Harry- sir aage right me ek gairage type hai. Baha per bahut gadiya khadi Hui hai. Bahi SE ham Bahar niklenge.
Uske baad ham sab Harry KE kahe mutabik aage bad gye. Or hame gadiya dikh gyi. Ham aage bade tabhi 4-5 bande aage aagye. Lekin abki baar me aage badta usse pehle hi Bhai or Baki team aage Badi or sabko shoot Kar diya. Bina koi time gabaye. Fir hame 2 gadiya li. Badi wali. Or Harry ne exit open Kar Diya. Ham gadiyo ko drive marte hue baha se Bahar nikaliye. Ye achha hua ki ham south Korea me hi nikle. Hamne jaldi un gadiyo ko chhoda or apni chhiapyi Hui gadiyo me baith Kar us base ke radius se Bahar nikal gye. Or ek jagah per ruk Kar dekhne lage ki Kya hota hai. Karib 10 min. Me baha itna jordar blast hua ki pori ki pori jameen hi neeche dhas gyi. Jo aage border tha. Vo bhi neeche Chala gya jameen me. Ye najara bahut hi bhayanak tha. Hamne fir apni gadiya start ki or nikal gye airport ki taraf.
Ham seedhe apne plane me gye or apni gadiyo ko park karke me seedha washroom me ghus gya. Or nahane laga. And pilot ne plane ko takoff Kar liya. Or ham nikal gye India apne Ghar ki taraf.
Ye ek bahut hi bada jhatka Diya tha hamne us villain ko. Sale ne Mera Ghar jalaya tha. Ye uska badla tha. Aaj man bahut khus tha. Lekin ab bahut si problem ko hamne nimantran de diya tha. Jiska mujhe aabhas ho raha tha. Sala pata nhi ab Kya Naya kand karega.sabki safety ab badani padegi. Abhi koi bhi usse ladne ke liye ready nhi tha. Or sayad ye baat vo bhi janta hai. Kahi mere bhaiyo per hamla na karde. Isliye dad ko ab jaldi hi apna jadu dikhana hoga. Verna lene ke Dene pad jayenge… isi sab socho me Mera nahana nikal gya. Or me Naye kapde pehan Kar bapis aagya. Ham Ghar per land karne wale the. Jo karib 30 min. Me Kar gye. Jaise hi land hue Mera mobile Baja jiski mujhe ummid thi.
Main- hello.
V- time aaj Jo Kiya hai bahut bura hai ye. Iski bhari keemat chukani padegi tujhe.
Main- ye to keval ek badla tha or Tere liye ek chetavni ki dobara mere Ghar ki taraf aakh bhi utha Kar dekha to isse bhi bhayankar tabahi machaoga me. Or sayad agli baar uski chapet me tu bhi aajaye.isliye abhi bhi waqt hai mere raste se hat ja. Or kahi apni ek nayi jindgi suru Kar de. Or ye pehla or akhiri mouka hai Tere liye. Uske baad koi chance nahi milega tujhe.
V- ye to waqt hi batayega. Ki Kon kise mouka deta hai. Aaj tune ek soye hue ser ki puchh per pair rakh Diya hai. Ab iski kitni bhari keemat tujhe chukani padegi. Iski tu kalpna bhi nahi Kar sakta.
Main- bakai lekin ye set hai Kon. Mujje to keval ek geedad hi najar aata hai jab bhi me Teri taraf dekhta hu. Or agar tujhe ye galat fehmi ho gyi hai ki tu set hai to Jara aaine me apni sakl ko 3-4 baar dhayan se dekh Lena tujhe apna jawab apne AAP mil jayega. Ki asli ser Kon hai. Samjha Kya. Ye Jo faltu ke formule per itna uchhal raha hai na. Mare hue insan. Band Kar de. Or Tere us creator se bhi keh de. Ki dobara Mera Rasta na kaate. Verna is baar Maine use jinda Jane Diya. Agli baar ye mouka nhi milega use.
V- ye Badi Badi bate tu bahut karta hai. Us din Kya hua tha jab Maine ter ek hath today tha.
Main- me sirf bate hi nhi kaam bhi bade bade karta hu. Or iska jeeta jagta example tune dekh hi liya hoga. Or rahi baat us din ki. To me tujhe Bata du. Ki us din Tera ek test hua tha. Jisme me haarkar bhi Jeet gya tha. Or tujhe agar samaj me nhi aaya ho ki kaise. To apne us creator se puchh Lena. Samjha Kya. Ab phone rakh. Mujhe or bhi kaam hai.
Uske baad Maine call cut Kar Diya.
Bhai- bahi tha Kya.
Main- or Kon ho sakta hai.sala bhadva kahi ka.
Rony- Abe language per dhyan de. Aas pass ladkiya khadi Hui hai.
Main- ab Kya karu in sab ko maar maar Kar Meri Jawan bhi inhi jaisi ho gyi hai. KHair chhodiye or Ghar chalte hai…
Uske baad ham sab Ghar ki taraf nikal gye.
To be countinue…………..
mere baar baar kehne SE vo aage bada or mujhe pata tha ki sayad uske pass bhi mere moves padne ki kabiliyat ho sakti hai. Or iske liye me ready tha. Lekin pehla baar usne Kiya. Jaise hi usne apna left hand ka punch mere chere ki taraf Kiya. Maine foran duk Kiya or uske dono ghutno per apne chaku SE ek sath baar Kar diya. Sale ke dono pair gye kaam se. Or pair per lagne se uski speed Kam ho gyi. Or iska Maine fayeda uthaya or uske gale me aar paar Kar diya mere chaku ko...Sala bahi dher ho gya.
Main- sirf speed se Kya hoga. Uska sahi istemaal karna bhi aana chahiye… abhi bhi mere samne karib 15 log khade hue the. Or unme se bahuto ki fat ke hath me aagyi thi. Ye sab dekh ke.
Main- Kya hua dar gye Kya. Jao Ghar Jake apni MAA ki god me chhip jao. Mere samne dobara mat aana kabhi bhi. Nahi to ye mouka dobara nhi milega.
Is lalkaar se kuch ne apne kadam peeche Kar liye lekin kuch Meri taraf aage bad gye. Sale sab KE sab super speed me aage bade. Maine apne mind ko thoda roka me bhi speed me aage bada. Ab ye speed kitni thi pata nhi lekin mere ko sab KE sab slowmotion me dikh rahe the. Jo mere liye bahut achhi baat thi. Maine apne dono hatho me ek ek chaku liye or salo ki gardano ko gajar muli ki tarah katne laga. Jo bhi samne aata uska pata nhi kitna khoon me jameen per gira raha tha. Tabhi ek ne mere baar ko duk Kiya or dusre ne Mujhr Kamar se pakad liya or thodi door fek Diya. Me fir se khada hua. Ab keval 6-7 log hi Bache hue the. Jinme se 2 to bilkul pechhe hi khade hue the. Kevl 5 aage the. Vo fir bade Meri taraf. Abki baar Charo taraf se. Main baise hi khada raha vo log mere ikdam karib aagye. Or jaise hi mujh per baar Kiya me turant hi neeche baith gya. Or fir se sabke ghutno per apne dono hatho se baar Kar diye. Sab KE sab slow pad gye. Maine foran khada hua or ek ko seene per apni laat or uske samne wale ke chehre per ek punch jad Diya. Bilkul ek sath. Dono ke dono ek sath neeche. Samne Wala ladkhada Kar aage bada Maine uske gale me khanjar utara Diya. Tabhi ek pechhe se says Maine apni laat seedhe uske gale me ghusa di. Or jaise hi vo neeche hua Maine apne dusre hath ke chaku ko uski khopdi me seedha ghusa Diya. Ab keval ek bacha tha. Main uski taraf doudta hua gya or uchhal Kar apne dono pair uski garden me fasa Kar pechhe ki taraf neeche ho gya or pairo KE Bal usko seedha neeche patak Diya. Sale ka pora sir bahi khul gya. Or turant hi apna chaku uske mathe ke beecho beech ghusa Diya. Is sab ke baad me fir SE khada hua or un dono ki taraf dekha to sale baha se bhagne lage. Maine apne dono chaku ko nisana laga Kar unki taraf fek Diya. Jo unke gale me ghus gye seedhe….ab baha koi nhi bacha hua tha. Maine fir apne logo ki taraf dekha to sabhi KE sabhi apni aankhe fade mujhe hi dekh rahe the. Ek to me pora khoon me naha gya tha. Or dusra bahut hi bure trike se Maine un sabko Mara tha.
Main- Kya hua koi alian dekha Kya.
Bhai- pagal hai Kya itni speed Teri kab se ho gyi.
Main- Kya pehle jitni hi to hai.
Rony- Suri Harry bhi tujhe nahi pakad pa raha tha. Harry ne calculate Kiya to Teri speed karib 1500 km/h thi. Or sayad isse jyada hi thi.
Main- Kya baat karte ho mujhe to nahi laga aisa.
Aarav- Bhai ye Sach hai AAP karib 416m/s ki raftar se bhag rahe the. Or Baki sab kebal 2 m/s ki.
Main- me jab china me gira tha tab me karib 1km/s ki raftar se bhaga tha ye lagta hai kuch jyada hi raftar hai.
Aadil- Bhai bahut jyada. Is pori dunia me sabse tez raftar light ki hai. Lagbhag 299792458 m/s hai. Or aapki 416 m/s hai. Jo bahut hai. Baise rocket ki speed bhi 1000 km/h Tak Chalo jati hai lekin AAP fir bhi usse jydaa fast ho.
Main- khair Jo bhi ho ab niklo yaha se. Verna or log aajayenge. Or me tum logo ko yaha Kya kebal Meri speed jachne KE liye laya tha. Kam se Kam 1-2 bando ko to marte.
Bhai- hame Kya pagal kisi kutte ne kata hai Jo Tere hote hue ham samne aaye vo bhi itne tez logo ke samne. Ham 1 sec. Bhi nhi tik sakte. Baise jab koi or Rasta nhi bachega tab to AA hi jayenge. Or baise bhi tune kisi ko koi mouka hi nahi Diya. Sab kuch kebal 10-15 sec. Me khatm ho gya. Itne me to ham keval apni jagah SE Hil hi pate hai. Or tune 100 logo ko nipta Diya. Ab tu hi Bata ki ham isme Kya Kar sakte hai.
Main- badiya bahana banana khobb as gya hai AAP logo ko. Chalo ab nikalte hai yaha se. Harry kaam hua ki nahi.
Harry- almost done. Bas 2 min. Or.
Uske baad ham bahi intjaar Karne lage.
Main- Harry abhi Baki ke log kaha hai.
Harry- sir sab KE sab north side wale raste se bhag rahe hai. Or kuch yahi base me aage moujood hai.
Main- koi main aadmi dikha ya nhi.
Harry- sir jitne bhi dikhe sabko capture Kar liya hai. Or kuch ki purani pehchan bhi mil gyi hai. Jo me baad me batata hu. Abhi to yaha SE nikalne ka Rasta dekhne deejiye.
Main- Theek hai dekh lo.
Uske theek 2 min. Baad Harry bola.
Harry- sir yaha se Bahar Jane ka Rasta mil gya hai
Maine 30 min. Ka timer set Kar Diya hai. Ab hame yaha SE nikalna chahiye.
Main- Rasta kaha hai
Harry- sir aage right me ek gairage type hai. Baha per bahut gadiya khadi Hui hai. Bahi SE ham Bahar niklenge.
Uske baad ham sab Harry KE kahe mutabik aage bad gye. Or hame gadiya dikh gyi. Ham aage bade tabhi 4-5 bande aage aagye. Lekin abki baar me aage badta usse pehle hi Bhai or Baki team aage Badi or sabko shoot Kar diya. Bina koi time gabaye. Fir hame 2 gadiya li. Badi wali. Or Harry ne exit open Kar Diya. Ham gadiyo ko drive marte hue baha se Bahar nikaliye. Ye achha hua ki ham south Korea me hi nikle. Hamne jaldi un gadiyo ko chhoda or apni chhiapyi Hui gadiyo me baith Kar us base ke radius se Bahar nikal gye. Or ek jagah per ruk Kar dekhne lage ki Kya hota hai. Karib 10 min. Me baha itna jordar blast hua ki pori ki pori jameen hi neeche dhas gyi. Jo aage border tha. Vo bhi neeche Chala gya jameen me. Ye najara bahut hi bhayanak tha. Hamne fir apni gadiya start ki or nikal gye airport ki taraf.
Ham seedhe apne plane me gye or apni gadiyo ko park karke me seedha washroom me ghus gya. Or nahane laga. And pilot ne plane ko takoff Kar liya. Or ham nikal gye India apne Ghar ki taraf.
Ye ek bahut hi bada jhatka Diya tha hamne us villain ko. Sale ne Mera Ghar jalaya tha. Ye uska badla tha. Aaj man bahut khus tha. Lekin ab bahut si problem ko hamne nimantran de diya tha. Jiska mujhe aabhas ho raha tha. Sala pata nhi ab Kya Naya kand karega.sabki safety ab badani padegi. Abhi koi bhi usse ladne ke liye ready nhi tha. Or sayad ye baat vo bhi janta hai. Kahi mere bhaiyo per hamla na karde. Isliye dad ko ab jaldi hi apna jadu dikhana hoga. Verna lene ke Dene pad jayenge… isi sab socho me Mera nahana nikal gya. Or me Naye kapde pehan Kar bapis aagya. Ham Ghar per land karne wale the. Jo karib 30 min. Me Kar gye. Jaise hi land hue Mera mobile Baja jiski mujhe ummid thi.
Main- hello.
V- time aaj Jo Kiya hai bahut bura hai ye. Iski bhari keemat chukani padegi tujhe.
Main- ye to keval ek badla tha or Tere liye ek chetavni ki dobara mere Ghar ki taraf aakh bhi utha Kar dekha to isse bhi bhayankar tabahi machaoga me. Or sayad agli baar uski chapet me tu bhi aajaye.isliye abhi bhi waqt hai mere raste se hat ja. Or kahi apni ek nayi jindgi suru Kar de. Or ye pehla or akhiri mouka hai Tere liye. Uske baad koi chance nahi milega tujhe.
V- ye to waqt hi batayega. Ki Kon kise mouka deta hai. Aaj tune ek soye hue ser ki puchh per pair rakh Diya hai. Ab iski kitni bhari keemat tujhe chukani padegi. Iski tu kalpna bhi nahi Kar sakta.
Main- bakai lekin ye set hai Kon. Mujje to keval ek geedad hi najar aata hai jab bhi me Teri taraf dekhta hu. Or agar tujhe ye galat fehmi ho gyi hai ki tu set hai to Jara aaine me apni sakl ko 3-4 baar dhayan se dekh Lena tujhe apna jawab apne AAP mil jayega. Ki asli ser Kon hai. Samjha Kya. Ye Jo faltu ke formule per itna uchhal raha hai na. Mare hue insan. Band Kar de. Or Tere us creator se bhi keh de. Ki dobara Mera Rasta na kaate. Verna is baar Maine use jinda Jane Diya. Agli baar ye mouka nhi milega use.
V- ye Badi Badi bate tu bahut karta hai. Us din Kya hua tha jab Maine ter ek hath today tha.
Main- me sirf bate hi nhi kaam bhi bade bade karta hu. Or iska jeeta jagta example tune dekh hi liya hoga. Or rahi baat us din ki. To me tujhe Bata du. Ki us din Tera ek test hua tha. Jisme me haarkar bhi Jeet gya tha. Or tujhe agar samaj me nhi aaya ho ki kaise. To apne us creator se puchh Lena. Samjha Kya. Ab phone rakh. Mujhe or bhi kaam hai.
Uske baad Maine call cut Kar Diya.
Bhai- bahi tha Kya.
Main- or Kon ho sakta hai.sala bhadva kahi ka.
Rony- Abe language per dhyan de. Aas pass ladkiya khadi Hui hai.
Main- ab Kya karu in sab ko maar maar Kar Meri Jawan bhi inhi jaisi ho gyi hai. KHair chhodiye or Ghar chalte hai…
Uske baad ham sab Ghar ki taraf nikal gye.
To be countinue…………..
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Baise hero ke hote hue koi uske pariwar Tak pahuch Jaye yahi bhaut Badi bat hai. Nuksan to bahut door ki baat hai Bhai...Baki in sab ka to khatma pakka samjho aap.
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Ha Bhai udhar usne Chouhan ko pagal banaya or udhar hero ne usi KE logo ko pagal bana Diya. Hissab barabar hua dono ka. Ab aage ye dekhna hai ki villain aage Kya karta hai.....
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Ha Bhai iska kaam to khatm samjho aap. Bas dekhte jaiye sale thodi der bhi nahi til sakte apne hero ke aage. Ye sab abhi noseekhiya hai. Baki dekhte hai V KYA karta hai aage....
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