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sympathy for feminist brother : demons strike back. Part 2.
jo reader bhul gaye agar First prt To revision maar le.
kal se episode ayenge.
Tnx bro regular ayengi episodeBhai aapki story bhot bahdiya h buss ase hi lge rho hero ka character bhi aage jaake strong hoga Bina muskil ke strong bnta kon h
Keep going bro
Regular updates ki umeed rakhte h bhai hum aapse![]()
Tnx dear for lovely revo isi tarah support karti rahe Mai samjha tha ap chali gayi hai ab sath bani rahe .अभी तक कहानी बहुत बढ़िया चल रही है, आर्य एक आम इंसान है न कि सुपर हीरो, उसका सामना खुद अपनी फैमिली और कुछ अजीबोगरीब लोगो से, क्रेचर जैसे,
जैसे अनन्या और नैना का किरदार है वो बहुत पावरफुल वमन्स है, जब अनन्या एक कमिश्नर को थप्पर्ड मारने की हिम्मत कर सकती है तो आर्य की उसके सामने क्या ओकात है।
आर्य एक पॉकेटमार था, जो दिल्ली जैसे सिटी में अपने ही जैसे पॉकेटमार लडकों से नही निपट पाया, उसे अभी से अनन्या के खिलाफ कैसे खड़ा कर सकते है।
आर्य अभी जैसे सोच रहा है कियारा के मन मे अपने लिए एक पुरूष की फीलिंग पैदा करना जिससे उसे जलन वाला भाव महसूस हो। ऐसे ही वो अनन्या को इमोशनल रूप से अपने साथ करके ही नैना के खिलाफ कर सकता है और मुकाबला कर सकता है, कियारा ने साफ किया है कि उनको लेस्बियन बनाया गया है, जबकि अनन्या नही चाहती थी और मालूम चलने पर उन्हें पिटा भी था
अब कोई न कोई कारण से ही आर्य को मजबूत दिखाया जा सकता है, ऐसे ही नही की अचानक से उसमे ताकत आ गयी।
वैसे भी कोई जरूरी नही हीरो शारीरिक रूप से ताकतवर हो हीरो मानसिक रूप से भी ताकतवर हो सकता है, अपने दिमाग से प्लान बनाकर इन सबसे निपट सकता है
TnxBhai ek request hai please update 10.30 tak post kar diya karo pleasebhai
Tnx bro tumhare support se hi bro mai jaldi episode deta hoon tnxBro take your time and follow your plot.
बाकी कहानी खुद ही पाठकों को खींचती है, कई बार कहानी बाद में हिट होती है कई बार शुरू से, so don't worry about it.
Keep Calm
And have faith in your own plot
TnxNice and superb update....
Thnx broBhai jesi story chal ne do achi story likh rahe ho. Keep it up bro
Thanks bro keep support stay tuned.Time nahi mil raha tha isiliye last 2 updates ek sath padha.
Ye mera kuch points hai last do updates ke.
- Arya ke khilaf Naina aur Akanksha ke khilaf Adya sajish rach rahi hai. Dekhte hai kya hota hai unke sath.
- Kiyara ke bareme mera guess sahi nikla. Uske dil me apne bachpan ke kuch yaadein abhi bhi jinda hai.
- Kiyara bhi apni ma-behen ki tarah open minded hai. Wo jaisi environment me badi hui hai, ye to hona hi tha.
- Akshi modeling me pura dhyan dene ke bareme soch rahi hai, nude modeling bhi, dekhte hai kya hota hai.
- Aisa lag raha hai ki Raj babu ka accident nahi murder hua hai.
- Arya aab puri tarah fas chuka hai police case mai. Uske upar murder ka iljam bhi lag gaya. Agar Ananya use bacha bhi legi to wo Ananya ke niche aur bhi daba rahega.
Ab agar readers jane ki baat kare to Creepy story bhai aap apne story likhte rahiye. Story bahut badiya chal rahi hai. Iss site par jyadatar log hilane ke liye ate hai. Unko story me sirf sex chahiye, logic nahi. Iss type ke readers aapke story nahi padhenge. Aur kuch readers hai jo incest padhneke liye aye, lekin abhi tak incest na pa kar chale gaye. Aur kuch readers ke liye adultry galat hai lekin incest sahi hai.
Hero ke weakness ko lekar bhi kuch log complain kar rahe hai, lekin koi bhi insan raato raat weak se strong nehi ban jata. Bachpan me hi ma-baap ko khoya hai. Pyar ke liye taras raha hai. Jo sadma use mil raha hai wo hi aage jakar uska takat banega.
Dusri taraf, Ananya ek aisi aurat hai jo itni asani se sahi raste pe nahi ayegi. Toxic feminism ka ek example hai wo. Lekin abhi bhi usme kuch akal to hai. Kabhi kabhi apne bete ke liye pyar bhi dikha rahi hai, kam hi sahi. Kiyara-Adya lesbian hai ye sunkar unko mara bhi.
Creepy story bhai, aap jis type ke story likh rahe hain, is type ke story me readers kam hi hote hai. Aap apni tarike se likhte rahiye.
Thanx dearWow... Amazing update bro... Sach me padh ke maza hi aa gaya... Aise hi likhoge to ek din ye forum ka best story ho jayega... Waiting your next update bhai
Nhi hogi bro tnxAmazing story plz don't quit and jaise chal raha hai chalate rahiye
TnxBohat hi khoobsurat update![]()
PostedCreepy story bhai next update kab tak aayega?
Thanx bro sath dene ke liye bro story ka theme aesa hai jisme adultery ke Bina story age nahi badegi fir bhi Mai Kam karne ki try karungaSir me b ek incest lover Hu lekin agr koi writer incest likh adultery likhy to gussa Ata hy lekin me Kisi galiya nhi deta ya kabi apne mtlb Ka update aye to padh let's Hu Yaha ziyada tar stories ek jesi Hoti hy kio reders ko story apne mtlb ki chahiye e lekin ap ki kahani me Aj kal k mahol lekr kafi deep thinking hy is story me
Jo isse kafi unique banati hy bas itna he kahuga plz Kuch chotiyo lekr kahani ko delay mat krey or update regular dete rahy
TnxSir me b ek incest lover Hu lekin agr koi writer incest likh adultery likhy to gussa Ata hy lekin me Kisi galiya nhi deta ya kabi apne mtlb Ka update aye to padh let's Hu Yaha ziyada tar stories ek jesi Hoti hy kio reders ko story apne mtlb ki chahiye e lekin ap ki kahani me Aj kal k mahol lekr kafi deep thinking hy is story me
Jo isse kafi unique banati hy bas itna he kahuga plz Kuch chotiyo lekr kahani ko delay mat krey or update regular dete rahy
Exactly bro thnaxBhai so baat ki ek baat suno sabki kero apne dil ki sabki marji k hisab se story ni likhi ja sakti , isliye aapne jesa socha h vesa likho or esa bhi ni ki readers ko bilkul ignore ker do , yadi ho sake to halke fulke changes kerdo jese m kerta hu ya yu kaho apne readers ko na pasand aane per mane to apna ek story ka bada or important change ker diya per ap jesa thik samjho wesa kero
Offend nhhi hua yar log bar bar powerful banane ka chutiyapa Kar rahe they time se pehle kaise ho jata .I don't know why you offend 100 mese 10 to acchi bato par bhi kuch na kuch galat bolate rahate hai agar tum har update ke baad aise hi react karte rahoge kya story pe dhyan do kuch log to hote hi hai har jagah unko ignore kar diya karo
and i don't see any readers leave this story you don't see readers excitement around your story. ...
Waiting for next bro
Good morning bhai please Bhai ajj din me update post kar dena please![]()
TnxBhai aap likhte rehe readers aap ke sath hi he...
Ab Aarya aage kya karta he aur uska kesa haal hota he ye dekhne ko betab he...
Kese wo Naina se takrata he aur iska uspar kesa prabhav padta he ye dekhna raha...
Yes yahi wajah haiSite nahi jo add skreen par ata hai 15 sekend me 60mb ho jata hai
Tnx bro Arya ne aesa isliye kaha ki usne apni mom ke face par koi gham ka bhao nahi dekha balki wo pehle se jyada chamak Raha tha wo tana tha Jo Arya ne Diya tha aur incect jaisa nahi soncha us par condition bhi lagayi dur se hi thik karega aur kyo soncha ye agli episode me pata chalegaabtak is kahani ka best part ye hai Hero chutiya nahi dikhaya gaya hai, chutiya bole to ekdum se powerful ekdum se hero ko mahan bana dena, ek pal ko mujhe laga tha ki un diamonds ka use karega hero par nahai diamonds ko bechna asaan kaam bhi to nahi hai, jab majdoori ke paise lutt sakte hai to diamonds ke paise bhi lutt sakte hai
Pata nahi lekhak ne is line ko likha hai Ananya ke ke charitra ke baare me ya fir beauty ke baare me yahan pe beauty ka matlab hua wo Naina jo bottle dene wali thi na wo…Ananya ke skin/body ka kuch scene hai is kahani me jo mere samajh ke pare hai baki pata nahi abhi abhi dekh kar to aisa hi lagta hai ki Ananya ne jyada kuch galat nahi kiya hai…
Kiyara ke munh se raaz khula uske baap ka to well jhooth lag nahi raha hai, sach hi lag raha hai, aur kahani me Kiyara ka abhi tak ek bhi galat behaviour dikha nahi to uske character ko judge karna galat hi hoga…., aur kahin na kahin mere man me khayal aya tha ki Aakshi ki tarah Raj ko bhi model wali line me Kiyara le jaayegi
Akankha aur Aarya wali scene jabardast tha bro aur Akansha aur Aakshi ka character is kahani me chaar chand laga rahi hai bro, dono hadd se jyada sweet hai, ab dekhna ye hoga ki Akansha bhi ye lesbian wali bakchodi me padegi ya safe hi rahegi hamesa, waise jo bhi ho lesbian scene dekhne ko milega wo majedaar hoga
Hamesa ki tarah mast update tha haa is baar wale update me wo Aarya jo man me Kiyara ke baare me incest jaisa sochna wo ajeeb laga……
Intejaar rahega agle update ki
आर्या ने जो अनन्या को कहा वो बेशक उसके चरित्र की तरफ इशारा करके ही कहा था, उस रसायन का इस कहानी पर बहुत ज्यादा प्रभाव लग रहा है मुझे भी।
वैसे मुझे लगता है कि तीनों मां बेटियों के अध्या ही सबसे अच्छी निकलेगी बाद में जब उसे फेमिनिज्म का सच पता चलेगा, क्योंकि कहीं न कहीं वो भी अपने हीरो भाई की तरह ही उसूलों वाली है, बल्कि कियारा के कैरेक्टर पर मुझे पूरा डाउट है, जैसे कि वो अक्षी को भी लेस्बियन बनाना चाहती है, और आर्या को भी मैनिपुलेट करने की कोशिश में दिख रही है, उसका संबंध भी कई लड़कियों से है, जबकि अभी तक में अध्या को बस कियारा के साथ ही बताया गया है।
Waiting for update bro
Intezaar rahega Creepy story bhai....
Tnx bro don't think ki har 1 chiz me sab kamiyab ho jayenge..Dear writer,
Frankly saying I am writing here to point out few things:
1.Akanksha:as far as I know she loves lead character and seems like it's same on both sides but lead character doesn't want to show his feelings because he doesn't thinks he is a best guy for her...and this character is going to be changed into a lesbian slut by his own elder sister...
2.Akshi:Younger sister,whom lead character loves more than anything and who is most precious for him,and most close with him who is with him in his ups and down and who understands and loves him more than anything and she is thinking of doing nude shoots...
What if 1st case's character turns into lesbian just like that bitch adya has thought and Akshi also does nude shoot just like she has thought...what will the lead character do...he will have no option other than letting them do whatever they are doing and go somewhere and kill himself out of shame...
think about this and at first read story and try to understand everything character and their bonds...akshi who was living modest life with her modest parents and brother doing nude shoots will be huge blow for her late father too....
waiting for the next update....
Thx bro keep support thnx agn for lovely Revo.Ayya ek emotional Banda h uske pyaar apni akshi ke liye besumaar h but mujhe lagta h ki aab baat Arya ki nahi balki uski ijjat uski aukat ki hogayi h last update me Kiara bhi apne mom se mile hue h bas natak kar rahi h Arya ko open karne me aur wo sab ye baat Jaan gaye h ki arya ka ek kamjori h akshi aab dekhne h ki arya is sab ko bhap lete h ya nahi . And last I want to say bad situation create strong person and to face these rich ,supernatural, feminist people arya not should be only strong but also be clever as fox, and mostly important gang to oppse these people.
Isi tarah chalegi story thnx keep supportBahut hi shandar likh rahe ho writer sahab. Iss story ka abhi tak ka sabse khaas baat h emotion. Sabhi positive characters ek dusre se kisi na kisi tarah emotion se jude h. Meri aapse request h aap story ko isi emotion par aage badhaye warna sex aur lust iss forum pr har dusre kahani pr mil jata h
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phle jesa long update do maza aa jye
Okayakansha aur akshi ka use ache se Krna request
Creepy story bhai next update kab tak aayega?
YesKya hua tum v bhag gay
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waiting for update sir![]()
Seems that woman Gayathri meeting Ananya and the incidents there after were the result of a plan...since Naina is a supernatural power holder what would she get by destroying their family and degrading her...may be they hold something precious to Naina that they haven't realised or she is related with them...I don't know how writer will explain this but if he does in a more justified way it would be great twist...
waiting for the next update...
Creepy story bhai next update kab tak aayega?