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Incest Sympathy for femenist brother ( Horror story)

Kya arya apne pariwar ke Dil me apni Mohabbat paida Kar payega


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Creepy story

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  • sympathy for feminist brother : demons strike back. Part 2.

jo reader bhul gaye agar First prt To revision maar le.
kal se episode ayenge.
 

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bhai ek suggestion hai ki ek Introduction type bana do sabhi character ka bahoot character hai is kahani me
Alag se bana du ya Kahani ke sath sath pehle jaise introduction deta tha same vaise hi ?
Ab Maine introduction Dena band Kar Diya ye sonchkar ki Kahani me hi pata chalta rahega unke bare me.
 
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Creepy story

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1st part
  • wo cm wala theek tha pm wala line thoda sa ajeeb laga, itna bhi jyada dikhana nahi tha :D
  • Ananya ne ek tarah gulaam hi banaya hai Arya ko lekin uske liye aur uske pariwaar ke lige to badhiya hi hai ye
  • Kiyara ka character mujhe clean lag raha hai ab bhi kyunki kahani me shayad hi aage jakar uska kuch galat role mile
  • College me wo audi adya ne bhejwaye the na? Waise is update me arya bahut kam dikhi aur adya ka cheej bahut ajeeb laga

Adya ko bui aata hai gussa? Wo to khush hona chahiye tha na?

2nd part
  • New character Dhanush ki entry par mujhe nahi lagta iska koi khass role hoga is kahani me haa agar main writer hota to isko partner type ka role deta wo Ananya ka wo bf hai na uske saath baki don’t know ye sab mere dimag ki upaj hai
  • Fashion career galat thodi hai, haa fashion se judd kar galat kaamo me involve hona galat hoga, jo ki lagta nahi hai ki ki Aakshi karegi kabhi
  • Haa wo Aakshi ka Dhanush ke party me jaane wala scene kya hi gand jalane wala tha, wahi dusri tarah Aakansha ka pyaar dekh ke purani Aakshi ki yaad agayi, ye dono character bahut hi najuk hai is kahani me

3rd part
  • Wao kya hi neutral kiya hai scene ko writer ne, ek taraf r@pe wala scene dekh kar to mera khud ka dimag kharab ho raha tha ki ye kya chutiyappa hai wahin dusri ore Spiderman wala concept jabardast tha, bas main itna hi kahunga bhai ki behak mat jaana aaltu faltu powers dekar jaisi mature type kahani chal rahi hai waisi hi chalne dena JYADA powerful bana doge tab maja nahi hoga utna kahani me

Main agar writer hota to ye teen part ka alag alag update bana kar deta aur last me suspense de kar hype create karta par apne lekhak sahab kuch jyada hi mehnat kar rahe hai itne bade bade update dekar, hamesa ki tarah jabardast update
Bro pure review ka reply baad me duga abhi pm wale ka Kar deta ho
ye Wala scane dalte samay Maine bhi aesa hi soncha tha lekin iske pichey 1 bahut bada reason hai jyada scane nahi bas 1 scane hai
jaisa ki Kahani sirf sex par besd nahi 1 uddesya par hai isliye ye scane dalna pada
raat me episode ayega tabhi pure review ka reply duga stay connected
 

Creepy story

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Bhai readers ki yhi demand h ab plss bro incest add kro mom se start kro taki arya ko thoda mental support mil jaye
Agar aesa hua to end dekhne ko milega
pehle hi readers power Milne ke baad jaa chuke hai aesa Karke Kahani end par ajayegi apne
episode 17 me hero ke man me kitne sawal uthe unka jawab Bhi hero khojega abhi to family ki reality bhi samne nahi ayi hai
Aese kaise ye Kar du Yar agar readers ye chahte hai to Bata de Mai Kar dunga lekin fir end hoga
 
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Alag se bana du ya Kahani ke sath sath pehle jaise introduction deta tha same vaise hi ?
Ab Maine introduction Dena band Kar Diya ye sonchkar ki Kahani me hi pata chalta rahega unke bare me.
Guys mere pass one week hai story complete karne ke liye fir Mai busy ho jaunga so ab daily 1 ya 2 episode ayenge ap sab bhi sath bane rahe aur thread chaek karte rahe .
Jaisa ki apne kaha ki kahani kuch dino me khatam karoge matlab kahani chhoti hogi tab rahne do, aur agar story ko lamba le jaoge aap to bana dena, asani hota hai bahut log khass kar main chhote mote character ke naam bhul jaata hu
 

Riky007

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यार लोग तो कहने ही, लेकिन उसके चलते प्लॉट क्यों चेंज कर रहे हो, जितना रीडर्स की सुनोगे उतना ही अपनी स्टोरी से न्याय नहीं कर पाओगे।

रीडर्स तो कहते रहेंगे की पहले अपडेट में मां से मिलन करवा दो, बाकी के है में एक बहन से, फिर हीरोइन से और लास्ट में नैना को कर कर के मार डालो, कहानी खत्म।
 

Creepy story

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Jaisa ki apne kaha ki kahani kuch dino me khatam karoge matlab kahani chhoti hogi tab rahne do, aur agar story ko lamba le jaoge aap to bana dena, asani hota hai bahut log khass kar main chhote mote character ke naam bhul jaata hu
Bro Maine to one month me complete karne ka soncha tha lekin bich bich me kaam ajata hai aur ab ye bhi confirm ho Gaya hai ki jitna samay complete karne ke liye soncha utne me nahi hogi
abhi maybe 15 to 20 episode waki hai agar story choti Kar du choti na karu to 50 lekin kahani ko boaring nahi hone dunga Jahan Tak Kahani boaring nhi hogi waha Tak likhi jayegi fir chahe 20 ya 50 episode aye .
 

Ezio Auditore

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Creepy story bhai, apne tarike se likhte rahiye. Logon ke khene par plot change karenge to kahani ka quality kharap ho jayega. Kuch readers ko shayad r@pe wala part pasand na aye lekin wo part realistic tha. aisi halat me ek normal ladka akela kar bhi kya sakta hai.
 

Harman11

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Bhai story ko lanba leke jao one week me end mat kro kise ke bolne par story me change mat kro story ap apne view point. Se chalne do or story bahut badiya hai ager ap ke pas time kam hota hai to daily updates mat post karo ager week me 2 jha 3 update mile ge to be chale ga par request hai story ko strong banao or lamba leke jao kise ke be bat me dheyan mat do kk Bhai
meri taref se best of luck 🤞
 

Yamraaj

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Bhai story incest based hi rah sakti h ab
Adya aur kiyara ko ladke pasand h nahi to unko hero ke sath dhire dhire pyar dikhao...

Bachi ek mom to ab inka adultry mat dikhana bs ab hero apni mom ko patane pe lag jaye ......aur pata ke sex kare....

Jaruri thodi h mom ko kisi aur se sex karao .... Ab to hero ke paas power h to kisi ko bhi mom ke paas aane se rok sakta h ....

Aur apna hero bahno se dur bhag raha

Dur mat bhage unhe pyar kare...
 

Yamraaj

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Kahani me bahut kuch baki h bhai abhi bina adultry ke bhi ye story bahut achhi h bs hero sabse pahle mom ko patane pe lage unhen dusre mardo se dur rakhe


Aur ye hero apna baar baar emotional na ho ... Yaar power aane ke baad ise apne emotion me change karna hoga thoda to majboot banana hoga tabhi apna badla le payega....

Dhhire dhire bhesh badal ke ek ek karke apne dushmano ko khatam karta rahe ...
 
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