Sci-FI Talaash...A Revenge Story

[Naina]

Update 93


Previously…

Riya : lagta hai woh log aa gaye…

Naidu : itni jaldi...kaise….

Riya : abhi time nahi hai ...sab samaan yahi chhodo aur hum vent se niklenge...woh yeh jagah check karne ke baad chale jayenge..uske baad hum wapas ayenge...chalo..!!

Fir dono vent se hote hue bahar nikal jate hai...bahar raka ke log laser cutter se darwaja cut kar dete hai aur andar check karne lagte hai...lekin waha kuch bhi nahi milta...iske baad woh dusre ghar ki aur jate hai...



Continue….

Riya aur Naidu vents se sarakte hue aage jaa rahe the...area kam hone ke karan aage badhna kafi mushkil ho raha tha...Riya ka toh theek tha lekin apna bada shareer le kar Naidu aage nahi badh pa raha tha…

Riya : Naidu... jaldi karo..Woh log yahi par hai...mein tumhare chate unke haath nahi lagna chahti..Mujhe DROHI ki maut nahi chahiye...Jaldi chalo…

Naidu : Kaisi baat karti ho Riya..Mujhe bada shouk hai DROHI ki maut marna...Mein koshish toh kar raha hun na...yeh bas mera pet ki wajah se thodi dikkat ho rahi hai...tum aage badho….mein aa raha hun…

Riya : Jaldi karo nahi toh yahi chhod kar chali jaungi…

Naidu : han han chalo..

Riya vent se bahar nikal jaati hai...yeh koi residential area nahi tha...Hawa me thodi garmi thi...Bahut saare vents ek badi vacuum canal se connect thi...garam hawa ke alawa yaha kuch nahi tha..

Riya ke pichhe Naidu bhi baahar aa jata hai…

Naidu : yeh kaha aa gaye hum…?

Riya : Yeh vents se aayi hui garmi air ko freezing karne le jane wala canal hai….yaha rehna sahi nahi hoga...kabhi kabhi kafi garam hawa ka jhonka aa sakta hai jo tumhe 1st degree burn bhi de sakti hai…

Naidu : Toh fir hum ruke kyun hai...Chalo…

Yeh keh kar Naidu aage badh jata hai…Aadhe ghante chalne ke baad unke saamne achanak ek flying bot aata hai...un dono ko dekh kar wahi khada rehta hai….

Naidu ; R..Riya abb kya kare…?

Riya apna mathe par aaya pasina saaf karte hue kehti hai..

Riya : Jab Tak woh light green hai tab tak hum safe hai..Waise bhi yeh ek WorkerBot hai...Iss se hame koi khatra nahi hai…

Naidu : abhi...woh lite red hui thi…

Riya : Nahi toh...green hi hai…

Naidu : Are maine dekha woh ek do decond ke liye red ho gayi thi…

Riya : Kuch bhi mat bolo...Lekin yeh ja kyun nahi raha…?

Tabhi dur pichhe se halke dhamake ki aawaj aati hai….

Riya aur Naidu dono pichhe dekhte hai…

Naidu : Riya…???

Riya : Naidu...Bhaag..!!!

Riya Naidu ko bhagane ke liye bol kar woh bhi bhaagne lagi...Baat ye thi ki jo dhamaka hua tha woh MilitaryBots ne liye the...5-6 honge...jo sirf maarna jaante the...Opar se yeh dono DROHI the..Inn bots se bachna unke liye possible nahi tha….WorkerBot ne unhe alert diya tha toh woh unke paas aa gaye ethe…Bhagte bhagte naidu ek jagah gir pada...


Riya : Naidu jaldi utho...time nahi hai….

Naidu...Riya..mein aur bhaag nahi sakta..Kuch karo…

Riya : Ahh..Naidu...fir maro tum ab…Mujhe nahi marna...

Riya yeh keh kar Naidu ko wahi chhod kar aage bhaagne lagi...Woh bots paas aa rahe the...unhone abhi tak inn dono ko detect nahi kiya tha isiliye unka speed slow tha...agar detect karte toh ab tak dono bhi mare pade rehte…

Naidu : Please Riya….

Riya kuch soch kar wapas Naidu ki taraf badhi...uss ko sahara de kar khada kiya aur aage badhne lagi...ek vent ki opening khuli thi toh riya ne ussi me jane ka faisala kiya…

Riya : Naidu...jao andar…

NAidu : LEkin tum..?

Riya : Inn bots ka kuch karna padega yeh hamara pichha nahi chodenge...aur andar agar woh pahunch gaye toh aur mushkil ho jayegi,..Tum aage badho..Mein aati hun…

Naidu : Mein tumhara ehsan kabhi nahi bhulunga riya..Thank you…

Riya : Ab jao…!!

Naidu uss Vents se andar jata hai...MilitaryBots Kafi kareeb aa gaye the...Riya apne bag se kuch nikal kar apne tablet par kuch karne lagi...Woh Bots ne Riya ko detect kar liya tha…

Robos koi bhi actions lene se pehle scan/analyse karte hai..ussi tarah militaryBot Riya ko gher kar Analyse karne lage....

Riya : Come on….Come on...Come on…

MilitaryBot ne chup rehne ke liye Warning ka signal diya...riya apni screen dekhti hui rehti hai...Process khatam hote hi…

Riya : Yesss…!!!

Aur woh uss vent me kud jati hai...Uske piche militaryBots bhi vent ke andar jane lage lekin tabhi ek ke baad ek saare Military Bots TAbah ho gaye…

Riya piche mudh kar dekhti hai...Sab clear tha..ab unka pichh koi nahi kar raha tha…
Woh waise hi padi rahi aur pasine ko saaf kar kar woh vent se niche utar gayi...Niche Naidu ussi ka intezar kar raha tha…

NAidu : Riya...Tum theek toh ho...Woh bots kaha gaye…?

Riya : Woh sab chodo..Hum aaj hi STARCOM chod rahe hai...Bahut hua yeh khel….Hum sab badi CARGO ship se jayenge…

Riya ek badi si CARGO ship ki taraf point kar ke yeh baat kehti hai…

Riya : Aur tum yeh kaise karoge..I don't care...Tumne bola tha ki Khatri tumhare logo ko maar raha hai...Sab ko aane ke liye bol do….aur yeh sab ki khabar sirf bharose ke logo tak hi rakhna…

Naidu bhi ab samajh chuka tha ki yaha rehna kitna khatarnak ho sakta hai...Mr. Khatri use nahi chodne wala...woh haath dho kar uske pichhe pada hai…

Naidu : Riya...sahi bol...hum yaha nahi reh sakte...Sukun se toh kabhi nahi..aur mujhe sukun se rehna hai...mein sab intezam karta hun...STARCOMM chodne ki baat pas shaysd sab maan jaye aye bina dare yeh kaam kare…


Riya : hmm..Ab mein ja rahi hun...Mujhe kuch saman lana hai...tum aage ki taiyari karo…

Riya wahan se chali jati hai aur Naidu apne dost se baat karne lagta hai….

waise chaahe dost ho ya chaahe thode jaan pehchan wale... lekin musibat ke samay ek duje sath de bina dhokha diye to raah aasan ho jaata hai... aur kya pata us musibat se bahar nikalke manjil bhi mil jaye ....
wahan starcom dono ke paas bas do hi options hai... dhokha na de ek Dusre ko aur samajhdaari ke sath jitni jaldi ho sake starcom se nikal jaaye....

Waise abhi tak riya hi madad karti aa rahi naidu ko... aur ab bhi kar rahi hai... even jaan jaane se kayi baar bachaya...

ab baari hai naidu ki .. kuch bhi karke bas kuch idea laga ke ye log waha se nikal jaaye...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
... kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hatenge...

aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naik]

Update 93


Previously…

Riya : lagta hai woh log aa gaye…

Naidu : itni jaldi...kaise….

Riya : abhi time nahi hai ...sab samaan yahi chhodo aur hum vent se niklenge...woh yeh jagah check karne ke baad chale jayenge..uske baad hum wapas ayenge...chalo..!!

Fir dono vent se hote hue bahar nikal jate hai...bahar raka ke log laser cutter se darwaja cut kar dete hai aur andar check karne lagte hai...lekin waha kuch bhi nahi milta...iske baad woh dusre ghar ki aur jate hai...



Continue….

Riya aur Naidu vents se sarakte hue aage jaa rahe the...area kam hone ke karan aage badhna kafi mushkil ho raha tha...Riya ka toh theek tha lekin apna bada shareer le kar Naidu aage nahi badh pa raha tha…

Riya : Naidu... jaldi karo..Woh log yahi par hai...mein tumhare chate unke haath nahi lagna chahti..Mujhe DROHI ki maut nahi chahiye...Jaldi chalo…

Naidu : Kaisi baat karti ho Riya..Mujhe bada shouk hai DROHI ki maut marna...Mein koshish toh kar raha hun na...yeh bas mera pet ki wajah se thodi dikkat ho rahi hai...tum aage badho….mein aa raha hun…

Riya : Jaldi karo nahi toh yahi chhod kar chali jaungi…

Naidu : han han chalo..

Riya vent se bahar nikal jaati hai...yeh koi residential area nahi tha...Hawa me thodi garmi thi...Bahut saare vents ek badi vacuum canal se connect thi...garam hawa ke alawa yaha kuch nahi tha..

Riya ke pichhe Naidu bhi baahar aa jata hai…

Naidu : yeh kaha aa gaye hum…?

Riya : Yeh vents se aayi hui garmi air ko freezing karne le jane wala canal hai….yaha rehna sahi nahi hoga...kabhi kabhi kafi garam hawa ka jhonka aa sakta hai jo tumhe 1st degree burn bhi de sakti hai…

Naidu : Toh fir hum ruke kyun hai...Chalo…

Yeh keh kar Naidu aage badh jata hai…Aadhe ghante chalne ke baad unke saamne achanak ek flying bot aata hai...un dono ko dekh kar wahi khada rehta hai….

Naidu ; R..Riya abb kya kare…?

Riya apna mathe par aaya pasina saaf karte hue kehti hai..

Riya : Jab Tak woh light green hai tab tak hum safe hai..Waise bhi yeh ek WorkerBot hai...Iss se hame koi khatra nahi hai…

Naidu : abhi...woh lite red hui thi…

Riya : Nahi toh...green hi hai…

Naidu : Are maine dekha woh ek do decond ke liye red ho gayi thi…

Riya : Kuch bhi mat bolo...Lekin yeh ja kyun nahi raha…?

Tabhi dur pichhe se halke dhamake ki aawaj aati hai….

Riya aur Naidu dono pichhe dekhte hai…

Naidu : Riya…???

Riya : Naidu...Bhaag..!!!

Riya Naidu ko bhagane ke liye bol kar woh bhi bhaagne lagi...Baat ye thi ki jo dhamaka hua tha woh MilitaryBots ne liye the...5-6 honge...jo sirf maarna jaante the...Opar se yeh dono DROHI the..Inn bots se bachna unke liye possible nahi tha….WorkerBot ne unhe alert diya tha toh woh unke paas aa gaye ethe…Bhagte bhagte naidu ek jagah gir pada...


Riya : Naidu jaldi utho...time nahi hai….

Naidu...Riya..mein aur bhaag nahi sakta..Kuch karo…

Riya : Ahh..Naidu...fir maro tum ab…Mujhe nahi marna...

Riya yeh keh kar Naidu ko wahi chhod kar aage bhaagne lagi...Woh bots paas aa rahe the...unhone abhi tak inn dono ko detect nahi kiya tha isiliye unka speed slow tha...agar detect karte toh ab tak dono bhi mare pade rehte…

Naidu : Please Riya….

Riya kuch soch kar wapas Naidu ki taraf badhi...uss ko sahara de kar khada kiya aur aage badhne lagi...ek vent ki opening khuli thi toh riya ne ussi me jane ka faisala kiya…

Riya : Naidu...jao andar…

NAidu : LEkin tum..?

Riya : Inn bots ka kuch karna padega yeh hamara pichha nahi chodenge...aur andar agar woh pahunch gaye toh aur mushkil ho jayegi,..Tum aage badho..Mein aati hun…

Naidu : Mein tumhara ehsan kabhi nahi bhulunga riya..Thank you…

Riya : Ab jao…!!

Naidu uss Vents se andar jata hai...MilitaryBots Kafi kareeb aa gaye the...Riya apne bag se kuch nikal kar apne tablet par kuch karne lagi...Woh Bots ne Riya ko detect kar liya tha…

Robos koi bhi actions lene se pehle scan/analyse karte hai..ussi tarah militaryBot Riya ko gher kar Analyse karne lage....

Riya : Come on….Come on...Come on…

MilitaryBot ne chup rehne ke liye Warning ka signal diya...riya apni screen dekhti hui rehti hai...Process khatam hote hi…

Riya : Yesss…!!!

Aur woh uss vent me kud jati hai...Uske piche militaryBots bhi vent ke andar jane lage lekin tabhi ek ke baad ek saare Military Bots TAbah ho gaye…

Riya piche mudh kar dekhti hai...Sab clear tha..ab unka pichh koi nahi kar raha tha…
Woh waise hi padi rahi aur pasine ko saaf kar kar woh vent se niche utar gayi...Niche Naidu ussi ka intezar kar raha tha…

NAidu : Riya...Tum theek toh ho...Woh bots kaha gaye…?

Riya : Woh sab chodo..Hum aaj hi STARCOM chod rahe hai...Bahut hua yeh khel….Hum sab badi CARGO ship se jayenge…

Riya ek badi si CARGO ship ki taraf point kar ke yeh baat kehti hai…

Riya : Aur tum yeh kaise karoge..I don't care...Tumne bola tha ki Khatri tumhare logo ko maar raha hai...Sab ko aane ke liye bol do….aur yeh sab ki khabar sirf bharose ke logo tak hi rakhna…

Naidu bhi ab samajh chuka tha ki yaha rehna kitna khatarnak ho sakta hai...Mr. Khatri use nahi chodne wala...woh haath dho kar uske pichhe pada hai…

Naidu : Riya...sahi bol...hum yaha nahi reh sakte...Sukun se toh kabhi nahi..aur mujhe sukun se rehna hai...mein sab intezam karta hun...STARCOMM chodne ki baat pas shaysd sab maan jaye aye bina dare yeh kaam kare…


Riya : hmm..Ab mein ja rahi hun...Mujhe kuch saman lana hai...tum aage ki taiyari karo…

Riya wahan se chali jati hai aur Naidu apne dost se baat karne lagta hai….

Marte marte bache h dono kia sahi salamt yeh dono STARCOMM chod payenge yeh dekhne wale baat hogi
Behtareen lajawab update bhai

 

[Naina]

waise bahot kam hi aise sci fir stories lines hai jo meri nazar mein best hai ..
un kuch dilchasp sci fi stories mein se ek ye talaash story hai..
Milan2010 sahab ki sci fi story series ke baad ye ek aisi story hai jo dil ko chu gayi hai...

 

[Ultron]

Update 93


Previously…

Riya : lagta hai woh log aa gaye…

Naidu : itni jaldi...kaise….

Riya : abhi time nahi hai ...sab samaan yahi chhodo aur hum vent se niklenge...woh yeh jagah check karne ke baad chale jayenge..uske baad hum wapas ayenge...chalo..!!

Fir dono vent se hote hue bahar nikal jate hai...bahar raka ke log laser cutter se darwaja cut kar dete hai aur andar check karne lagte hai...lekin waha kuch bhi nahi milta...iske baad woh dusre ghar ki aur jate hai...



Continue….

Riya aur Naidu vents se sarakte hue aage jaa rahe the...area kam hone ke karan aage badhna kafi mushkil ho raha tha...Riya ka toh theek tha lekin apna bada shareer le kar Naidu aage nahi badh pa raha tha…

Riya : Naidu... jaldi karo..Woh log yahi par hai...mein tumhare chate unke haath nahi lagna chahti..Mujhe DROHI ki maut nahi chahiye...Jaldi chalo…

Naidu : Kaisi baat karti ho Riya..Mujhe bada shouk hai DROHI ki maut marna...Mein koshish toh kar raha hun na...yeh bas mera pet ki wajah se thodi dikkat ho rahi hai...tum aage badho….mein aa raha hun…

Riya : Jaldi karo nahi toh yahi chhod kar chali jaungi…

Naidu : han han chalo..

Riya vent se bahar nikal jaati hai...yeh koi residential area nahi tha...Hawa me thodi garmi thi...Bahut saare vents ek badi vacuum canal se connect thi...garam hawa ke alawa yaha kuch nahi tha..

Riya ke pichhe Naidu bhi baahar aa jata hai…

Naidu : yeh kaha aa gaye hum…?

Riya : Yeh vents se aayi hui garmi air ko freezing karne le jane wala canal hai….yaha rehna sahi nahi hoga...kabhi kabhi kafi garam hawa ka jhonka aa sakta hai jo tumhe 1st degree burn bhi de sakti hai…

Naidu : Toh fir hum ruke kyun hai...Chalo…

Yeh keh kar Naidu aage badh jata hai…Aadhe ghante chalne ke baad unke saamne achanak ek flying bot aata hai...un dono ko dekh kar wahi khada rehta hai….

Naidu ; R..Riya abb kya kare…?

Riya apna mathe par aaya pasina saaf karte hue kehti hai..

Riya : Jab Tak woh light green hai tab tak hum safe hai..Waise bhi yeh ek WorkerBot hai...Iss se hame koi khatra nahi hai…

Naidu : abhi...woh lite red hui thi…

Riya : Nahi toh...green hi hai…

Naidu : Are maine dekha woh ek do decond ke liye red ho gayi thi…

Riya : Kuch bhi mat bolo...Lekin yeh ja kyun nahi raha…?

Tabhi dur pichhe se halke dhamake ki aawaj aati hai….

Riya aur Naidu dono pichhe dekhte hai…

Naidu : Riya…???

Riya : Naidu...Bhaag..!!!

Riya Naidu ko bhagane ke liye bol kar woh bhi bhaagne lagi...Baat ye thi ki jo dhamaka hua tha woh MilitaryBots ne liye the...5-6 honge...jo sirf maarna jaante the...Opar se yeh dono DROHI the..Inn bots se bachna unke liye possible nahi tha….WorkerBot ne unhe alert diya tha toh woh unke paas aa gaye ethe…Bhagte bhagte naidu ek jagah gir pada...


Riya : Naidu jaldi utho...time nahi hai….

Naidu...Riya..mein aur bhaag nahi sakta..Kuch karo…

Riya : Ahh..Naidu...fir maro tum ab…Mujhe nahi marna...

Riya yeh keh kar Naidu ko wahi chhod kar aage bhaagne lagi...Woh bots paas aa rahe the...unhone abhi tak inn dono ko detect nahi kiya tha isiliye unka speed slow tha...agar detect karte toh ab tak dono bhi mare pade rehte…

Naidu : Please Riya….

Riya kuch soch kar wapas Naidu ki taraf badhi...uss ko sahara de kar khada kiya aur aage badhne lagi...ek vent ki opening khuli thi toh riya ne ussi me jane ka faisala kiya…

Riya : Naidu...jao andar…

NAidu : LEkin tum..?

Riya : Inn bots ka kuch karna padega yeh hamara pichha nahi chodenge...aur andar agar woh pahunch gaye toh aur mushkil ho jayegi,..Tum aage badho..Mein aati hun…

Naidu : Mein tumhara ehsan kabhi nahi bhulunga riya..Thank you…

Riya : Ab jao…!!

Naidu uss Vents se andar jata hai...MilitaryBots Kafi kareeb aa gaye the...Riya apne bag se kuch nikal kar apne tablet par kuch karne lagi...Woh Bots ne Riya ko detect kar liya tha…

Robos koi bhi actions lene se pehle scan/analyse karte hai..ussi tarah militaryBot Riya ko gher kar Analyse karne lage....

Riya : Come on….Come on...Come on…

MilitaryBot ne chup rehne ke liye Warning ka signal diya...riya apni screen dekhti hui rehti hai...Process khatam hote hi…

Riya : Yesss…!!!

Aur woh uss vent me kud jati hai...Uske piche militaryBots bhi vent ke andar jane lage lekin tabhi ek ke baad ek saare Military Bots TAbah ho gaye…

Riya piche mudh kar dekhti hai...Sab clear tha..ab unka pichh koi nahi kar raha tha…
Woh waise hi padi rahi aur pasine ko saaf kar kar woh vent se niche utar gayi...Niche Naidu ussi ka intezar kar raha tha…

NAidu : Riya...Tum theek toh ho...Woh bots kaha gaye…?

Riya : Woh sab chodo..Hum aaj hi STARCOM chod rahe hai...Bahut hua yeh khel….Hum sab badi CARGO ship se jayenge…

Riya ek badi si CARGO ship ki taraf point kar ke yeh baat kehti hai…

Riya : Aur tum yeh kaise karoge..I don't care...Tumne bola tha ki Khatri tumhare logo ko maar raha hai...Sab ko aane ke liye bol do….aur yeh sab ki khabar sirf bharose ke logo tak hi rakhna…

Naidu bhi ab samajh chuka tha ki yaha rehna kitna khatarnak ho sakta hai...Mr. Khatri use nahi chodne wala...woh haath dho kar uske pichhe pada hai…

Naidu : Riya...sahi bol...hum yaha nahi reh sakte...Sukun se toh kabhi nahi..aur mujhe sukun se rehna hai...mein sab intezam karta hun...STARCOMM chodne ki baat pas shaysd sab maan jaye aye bina dare yeh kaam kare…


Riya : hmm..Ab mein ja rahi hun...Mujhe kuch saman lana hai...tum aage ki taiyari karo…

Riya wahan se chali jati hai aur Naidu apne dost se baat karne lagta hai….

nice update bro
jaldi riya ko starcom se nikalo..
story intense hoti ja rahi hai...

 

[Badshah Khan]

Great story with a such a unique concept brother Black_Mamba
Just done with all the updates
Sid ke sath apni hi step sis he dhoka kits raka ke sath milkar but raka haha main villian hoga par anamika ka dimag next level par kaam karta hai starcom mai hukumat ka Jo sapna raka be dekha that usko anamika be apne tez dimag we itna asan kat diya that's great.
Dev bechara pehle starcom ke se kaise bhidna hai wo sonchega ya phir in ladkiyo se kaise handle wo.
Ab shayad bohut jald hi Sid and team ka raka se amna samna hoga aur lagta hai ki akhiri fight raj and riya bohut hi important role ada karenge
Riya waise to bohut hi dimag wali ladki hai but anamika ko samajh mai usse bhul hogayi but time rehte wo anamika se Bach gayi ab dekhte hai ki wo earth sahi salamat pahunchti hai ya nahi.
Story getting interesting by each updates and you have a such nice writing skills.
Waiting for next

 

[Naina]

Intezaar agle update ke liye

 

[Black_Mamba]

waise chaahe dost ho ya chaahe thode jaan pehchan wale... lekin musibat ke samay ek duje sath de bina dhokha diye to raah aasan ho jaata hai... aur kya pata us musibat se bahar nikalke manjil bhi mil jaye ....
wahan starcom dono ke paas bas do hi options hai... dhokha na de ek Dusre ko aur samajhdaari ke sath jitni jaldi ho sake starcom se nikal jaaye....

Waise abhi tak riya hi madad karti aa rahi naidu ko... aur ab bhi kar rahi hai... even jaan jaane se kayi baar bachaya...

ab baari hai naidu ki .. kuch bhi karke bas kuch idea laga ke ye log waha se nikal jaaye...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
... kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hatenge...

aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Riya ka dimag bahut tez hai...Time pe mauke pe chauka marna usse acchi tarah se aata hai....Uske BOLD character sabse alag hai...
JArurat padi tab usne ANAMIKA se bhi panga le liya..Ab woh janti hai ki akele STARCOMM chhodna possible nahi lsliye NAIDU ki madat kar ke wahan se bhaagne ka plan hai uska...

Naidu ko bhi ab samajh aa gaya hai ki pani kaha tak aa gaya hai...usse jaldi kuch karna padega nahi toh usse dubne me time nahi lagega...

waise bahot kam hi aise sci fir stories lines hai jo meri nazar mein best hai ..
un kuch dilchasp sci fi stories mein se ek ye talaash story hai..
Milan2010 sahab ki sci fi story series ke baad ye ek aisi story hai jo dil ko chu gayi hai...

Such a lovely comment...
it makes me happy ki aap sab ko yeh pasand aa rahi hai...
aise pyar ki wajah se aage badhne me aasani hoti hai....Reslly...it helps a lot...
Aise hi support karte rahiye..aur i'll try to keep you all busy reading...Talaash...
Thank you Naina ji..
Keep Supporting...Motivating...

 

[Black_Mamba]

Marte marte bache h dono kia sahi salamt yeh dono STARCOMM chod payenge yeh dekhne wale baat hogi
Behtareen lajawab update bhai

Thank you Naik

 

[Black_Mamba]

nice update bro
jaldi riya ko starcom se nikalo..
story intense hoti ja rahi hai...

Aur bhi intense hogi bhai..Keep supporting.. :

 

[Black_Mamba]

Great story with a such a unique concept brother Black_Mamba
Just done with all the updates
Sid ke sath apni hi step sis he dhoka kits raka ke sath milkar but raka haha main villian hoga par anamika ka dimag next level par kaam karta hai starcom mai hukumat ka Jo sapna raka be dekha that usko anamika be apne tez dimag we itna asan kat diya that's great.
Dev bechara pehle starcom ke se kaise bhidna hai wo sonchega ya phir in ladkiyo se kaise handle wo.
Ab shayad bohut jald hi Sid and team ka raka se amna samna hoga aur lagta hai ki akhiri fight raj and riya bohut hi important role ada karenge
Riya waise to bohut hi dimag wali ladki hai but anamika ko samajh mai usse bhul hogayi but time rehte wo anamika se Bach gayi ab dekhte hai ki wo earth sahi salamat pahunchti hai ya nahi.
Story getting interesting by each updates and you have a such nice writing skills.
Waiting for next

Welcome to my thread...
Dev ko kuch decide karna toh padega...LADKI ya LAKSH ya phir doni...
HAr ek character apni taraf se involve hoga ladai me..Stay tuned...
Thank you for your lovely comment... Badshah Khan
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