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Naik

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Sorry guys you have to go through that(waiting)...i thought about leaving this story unfiinished but my heart dosen't allowed me to do so....

I know the feeling when you read somthing and suddenly writers decided to stop writing...there may be genuine reasons or not but at the end readers left hanging there...

i dont want that happen to my readers...i will finish this story no matter what...

the main reason behind my absense was "my eyes"...dur to stress, i coundn't stare at any digital screen or brighter objects more than 5-10 sec...obiviously i have to leave my job(digital advertisement)...as doctor instructed i stayed away from mobile/latop and today here i am after more than a month later...

now i still cant stare at screens long time but i am better now...i can give few minuits for you guys.... from now on please bear with me...i will post updates every week...and will try to finish this story...


thank you...!!!


tips for your seafty :

posture matters..how you use your mobile...you should keep 15-20 cm distance between your eyes and mobile
use reading mode on your mobile/laptops all the time...
try to use it in normal brightness...
use blue light filtered glasses

if you have job(on laptop)then take breaks every hour...
Pehle apne aankh ka achche se elaj karai fir baad m update dijiyega bhai
Pehle sahet fir baad m sab kuch
 

Ultron

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Sorry guys you have to go through that(waiting)...i thought about leaving this story unfiinished but my heart dosen't allowed me to do so....

I know the feeling when you read somthing and suddenly writers decided to stop writing...there may be genuine reasons or not but at the end readers left hanging there...

i dont want that happen to my readers...i will finish this story no matter what...

the main reason behind my absense was "my eyes"...dur to stress, i coundn't stare at any digital screen or brighter objects more than 5-10 sec...obiviously i have to leave my job(digital advertisement)...as doctor instructed i stayed away from mobile/latop and today here i am after more than a month later...

now i still cant stare at screens long time but i am better now...i can give few minuits for you guys.... from now on please bear with me...i will post updates every week...and will try to finish this story...


thank you...!!!


tips for your seafty :

posture matters..how you use your mobile...you should keep 15-20 cm distance between your eyes and mobile
use reading mode on your mobile/laptops all the time...
try to use it in normal brightness...
use blue light filtered glasses

if you have job(on laptop)then take breaks every hour...
no hurry bro...take your time...
 

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New update tonight 11PM
 

Black_Mamba

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Update 107


Previously…


Mr. Singh : Yeh sab kya chal raha hai…Answer do mere sawal ka…

Ratan : Dost..Singh bhai…ek baat hum sab ne tumse chupai thi….

Mr. Singh : kya…? kaunsi baat chupai thi…

Ratan : tumhe pata hai ki hum travelers the pehle aur yaha settle ho gaye…naye log hamare saath judh gaye aur aise karte karte aaj ETERNAL Clan taiyaar hua…But maine tumhe ek chij nahi batai thi ki….ki….hum…STARCOM se hai…Mein…Siddharth…Aasha aur Dr. Khan…

MR. Singh : yeh baat pehle hi bata deni chahiye thi Dost…kya tum sach me mere dost ho ya fir uss STARCOMM walon ki koi chaal hai…?



Continue…


Ratan : dost...sab se pehle hua kya tha woh jaan lo…phir koi bhi natije par pahunchana…

Mr. Singh : aur kya hona bacha hai...jise mein dost samajhta tha woh log mere Dushman hi nikle...aakhir kya chahte the hum logon se...aisa kya nahi tha tumhare paas jis ke liye tum sab ne mujhe dhoka diya...

Ratan : pehle meri baat suno dost ...sabse pehle aasha aur siddharth ki jaan ko khatra tha toh woh Dev ke saath meri madat se Earth aa gaye aur fir jab STARCOMM ko yeh baat pata chali ki innke bhaag Jane me hum ne madat ki hai toh uss ke baad STARCOM Government ne Dr. Khan aur mujhe unn ka Saath dene ke liye DROHI bana diya…aur fir hamare paas aur koi option nahi bacha... STARCOMM chodne ke alawa….aur phir hum bhi yaha aa gaye…aur tab se hum yahi reh rahe hai…Lagbhag 14 saal se… ab tum hi batao iss me tum logo ko dhoka dene ki kya baat hai…?

Mr. Singh : Ratan Dost..Yeh sab tumhe pehle batana chahiye tha…Abb mein tum par pehle jaisa bharosa nahi kar sakta..I am sorry…

Aasha : Aise mat bolo Singh bhai…Hum STARCOMM se the toh kya hua..aaj hum EARTH par reh rahe hai…aur yahi hamara ghar hai…STARCOMM toh humne kab ka chhod diya…aur rahi baat ko chipane ki baat toh hame kabhi laga hi nahi tha ki aisa koi situation khadi ho jayegi…lekin aaj unexpectedly STARCOMM ke log yaha aa pahunche..aur hamara past aapke saamne aaya….

Mr. Singh : Ek choti si situation kya kuch nahi kar sakti…sab rishte naate ek chutki me badal jaate hai….Sach kahu toh mein thoda befikre tha ki aapke rehte mujhe aur mere logon ko koi pareshani nahi hogi….mujhe tum sab par poora bharosa tha…aur aaj mein chah kar bhi pehle jaisa bharosa nahi kar pa raha…sab badal gaya mere dost… kya tumhe aisa nahi lagta...?

Siddharth : dost…we are sorry…jab hum mile the tabhi yeh sab bata dena chahiye tha…lekin tum ek baar hamari jagah khud ko rakh ki socho tab tumhe sab samajh aayega ki humne yeh sab kyun kiya…

Dr. Khan : jitni nafrat tum me hai utni hi maftrat hamare andar bhi hai…Meri beti abhi bhi wahi STARCOMM par hai…Unn STARCOMM walon ne mujhe meri beti se alag hone ke liye majboor kiya…

Aasha : Aur RATAN bhai….Jinhone poori zindagi me banaya hua empire chhod kar yahan aana pada….kya yeh sab sun ne ke baad bhi aap ko aisa lagta hai ki hum unn STARCOMM ke saath mile hue hai ?

Mr. Singh Kuch nahi bolte…

Aasha : Singh bhai...mein aapko galat bhi nahi samajh rahi...aap ka aisa reaction dena mein samajh sakti hun...I'm sure apne bahut kuch Saha hoga...aur bunker ke baare me bhi toh hum jaante hai...aapki nafrat ko samajh sakti hun...lekin hum STARCOMM se hai isliye aap hum se aise rishte nahi tod sakte…

Mr. Siddharth : tum batao dost ki hum kya kare jis se tumhe hum par phir se bharosa karoge…?

Mr. Singh bahut hi serious hote hue..

Mr. Singh : theek hai...agar tum chahte ho ki mein pehle jaise aap sab par bharosa karu to...tum sabko… aise hi mera saath dena hoga...yeh jo rishta ban gaya hai uss me kabhi darar nahi ban-ne dena…

Aasha : mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha….

Mr singh apni hassi ko rok na paue aur kil mila kar hasne lage…

Mr. Singh : I'm sorry behan...I'm sorry...lekin ab mere se aur nahi control ho raha ...so I'm sorry…

Mr singh ki iss bartav ko samajh ne ki koshish karne lage…har koi apne dimag daudayein ja raha tha ki aakhir Mr. Singh kya kar rahe hai...

Mr. Siddharth : Mr. Singh ko pehle se bhi yeh sab pata tha...hai na Singh Saab..?

Mr. Ratan : kya…?

Dr. Khan : But how ..? Maine toh nahi bataya kisi ko...kya tum ne ..?

Mr. Siddharth : nahi...Ratan…?

Mr. Ratan : mein kyun...dost tum hi batao yaar...nahi toh yeh sab meri jaan le lenge…

Mr. Singh : aap sab Dev ke baare me kaise bhool gaye….jab aasha ji ne usse starcomm ke baare me bata diya tha...aur Dev ne mujhe...mein pehle se sab jaanta tha...but aap sab logo ka dil bada hone ke karan hi mein aap se nafrat nahi kar paya...hahaha…so sorry for the prank...haha

Aasha : aapne toh Dara hi diya tha Singh bhai...lekin jo bhi hua accha hua... hum par se bojh halka hua…

Mr. Singh : theek hai….ab woh sab chodo...kya aap me se koi NAIDU hai…?

RatanK : Naidu…? Nahi toh...dost...kya tum hamare naam bhool gaye ho …

Mr. Singh : nahi...par kya pata STARCOMM par toh ho sakta hai...kya pata yaha dusra naam jod diya ho ..?

Siddharth : Sorry to disappoint you Mr Singh but hum me se koi bhi Naidu nahi hai...aur hamare naam bhi wahi hai...jo aap ko bataye gaye the …

Mr singh : hahaha...kya pata kya ho gaya hai mujhe…. sorry...Haan...phir woh log aap ko dhoondte hue nahi aaye the….koi DROHI hai Naidu...usse talash te hue yaha pahunch gaye the….

Aasha : DROHI..?

Mr. Singh : waise DROHI...hota kya hai..tum bhi toh drohi the na…? To fir aapko kyun nahi dhund rahe…?

RatanK : DROHI woh hote hai joh jinhe seedhe marne ki saza di jaati hai...aur woh maut bhi bahut hi khaufnak hoti hai…. STARCOMM se seedha space me chhoda jata hai….aur kuch hi pal me body freeze ho jati hai...aur uski maut ho jati hai...ek DROHI hote hue bhi woh unn sab se kaise bacha hoga…?




Yahan se kahin dur…

Radha : Bani abhi tak Dev nahi aaya...kya woh theek hoga...hum chalte hai na...usse dekhne…

Bani : woh koi 10 saal ka bacha nahi hai….usse khud ko sambhalna aata hai...tum ne bhi to dekha hai….hai na…? So don't worry...aa jayega…

Radha : I hope ki woh theek ho….

Bani aur radha ke paas time tha toh Bani ne baat karna sahi samajha...city me aasha ke saath jo baatchit ho rahi thi woh toh uss ne kisi karan suni nahi thi toh woh ab radha se puchti hai…

Bani : waise Radha apni sasuma ji se kafi achhi ban rahi hai ab toh….? Yaha aane se pehle kya chal raha tha mujhe bhi toh batao ..


Radha iss baat pe Sharma jati hai…

Radha : are kuch nahi hum dono mil ke Dev ki khichai kar rahe the...woh kisi chhote bachhe ki tarah aasha aunty ko bata raha tha ki usse hamare saath nahi aana...hahaha

Bani : lekin ek baat mein notice kar rahi hun Radha….ab woh tumhe kuch alag tarike se dekhne laga hai…

Radha : kya sach me...lekin tum kaise keh sakti ho ki….

Bani : maine uski aankho me dekha hai...jab tum uss market me baat karne jaa rahi thi toh I'm sure tumhare se jyada woh dar Raha tha tumhare liye….ki kahin tumhe kuch ho na jaye…


Radha yeh sun kar wapis Sharma jati hai…

Radha : waise tumhare liye bhi woh care karta hai toh kya woh tumhe bhi chahne laga hai…?

Bani yeh sun kar shock hoti hai lekin phir apna poker face bana kar radha ko jawab deti hai…

Bani : yeh kya baat Hui radha….aisa mazak mat kiya kar...nahi toh mein hi tumhare dev ko le jaungi...phir roti rehna baithe….apne dev ki yaad me….hahaha….

Radha Bani ko gale laga kar….

Radha : tumhare liye puri permission hai...jaao dev ko lekar...mujhe khushi hi hogi….dev hum dono ka hai….samajhi…

Bani : tum bilkul bachi ho radha ….apne pyar ko kisi aur ke paas kaise Jane de sakti ho….?

Radha : kisi aur ke paas nahi...meri pyari behna ke paas Jane de rahi hun...jo mujhe kabhi dhoka nahi de sakti…

Bani : ab toh mein usse hasil karke hi rahungi….hahaha

Radha : ok go on….woh tumhe ghas bhi nahi dalega….

Bani : lagi shart…?

Radha : yahi ki dev kis ke paas pehle jaata hai….?

Bani : That works too...sure….

Radha : sure…

Unn dono ki baate chal hi rahi thi ki kuch ships tunnel ke saamne aakar khadi ho gayi…

Bani : Radha!!! Jaldi chup jao….aur koi bhi awaz mat karna…

Bani ke bataye anusar radha waha andhere me chup gayi...Bani bhi ek jagah dekh chup gayi…

Tunnel ke baahar se thodi thodi aawaj sunai de rahi thi….

Mishra: BIO-Bots ne toh yahi location di thi...lekin yaha toh koi bhi suspicious activity nahi ho rahi….

Unknown1 : nahi sir...signal toh issi jagah se aa raha hai...aur BOTs ne diya hua signal hame nahi mila woh STARCOMM ko diya tha aur hame orders bhi upar se aaye the ….unhone koi research kar ke hi hame yaha bheja hoga…


Mishra: hmm..baat toh theek ki tum ne...do baatein ho sakti hai….ek toh woh iss tunnel me chhupe hue hai...yah toh yaha se chale gaye hoge…Cadets !! Iss tunnel ko search Karo...dekho koi milta hai ya nahi….

Superior ki awaz sunte je 3 logo ki team uss tunnel me chali gayi...lekin kafi time ke baad bhi woh wapas nahi laute…

Mishra: kaha chale gaye ye log...ab tak aute kyun nahi…???(ek guard ko point karte hue) aye...sun tum..!! Jao andar jao aur dekho kya ho raha hai…

Guard : sir...yes...sir….

Aur woh pairo se thap thap ki awaz karte tunnel ke andar chala gaya . Lekin yeh kya woh bhi bahut der tak baahar nahi nikla…

Mishra: jet ko tunnel ke theek saamne hower karte raho aur headlight se pure tunnel ke andar ujala kar do...dekhu toh kya chal raha hai andar ….

Tabhi ek jet tunnel me focus chhod deta hai...achanak itna saara ujala dekh Bani aur radha ko kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha …

Mishra: agar Zinda rehna chahte ho toh chup chap bahar nikal jao...hame pata hai ki tunnel ki dusari side band hai...toh tumhare liye ek yahi rasta hai baahar nikalne ka toh samajhdar bano aur chup chap baahar aa jao ...aur koi bhi hoshiyari karne ki sochna bhi mat .. agar bahar aane me deri hui toh hum puri force andar lekar aa jayenge ..so...choice is yours…hum bas baat karna chahte hai ...

Bani : let's go Radha ..hamare paas ab aur koi option nahi hai…

Radha : But behna...woh log hame jane nahi denge...aur abhi tak Dev bhi nahi aaya….mujhe toh Darr lag raha hai…

Bani : don't worry….main hoon na….tumhe kuch hone nahi dungi...aur waise bhi woh jo koi bhi hai...woh bas hum se baat karna chahta hai...so don't worry…

Radha: Ok… inn bodies ko dekh kar bhi woh sirf baat karega…?

Bani : As I told you earlier…we have no choice…let's go…

Aur fir dono tunnel ke baahar aate hai.. Unke aate hi bache hue guards apni gun unn dono par point kar dete hai…dono ladkiyaan apne dono haath upar uthaye Deere dheere aage badh rahe the…

Mishra guards ko ishare se relax rehne ko kehte hai…

Mishra : hahaha…Maan-na padega…yahan ki ladkiyon me bhi dam toh hai… aasani se mere cadets ko lita dia…

Mishra unn dono ki taraf badhne laga…tabhi Bani bhi do kadam aage ja kar fight ke liye taiyaar ho gayi…

Mishra : don't worry…mujhe bas iss ki talash hai…aur mujhe tum keedon se kuch Lena dena nahi hai…bas yeh batao ki kya tumne iss aadmi ko dekha hai ya nahi…?

Mishra apne wrist par lage gadget ko dabata hai aur uss me se Naidu ka hologram dikhai deta hai…tabhi Radha ek galti kar baithti hai….

Radha : Bani yeh toh….

Radha ko apni galti ka ehsaas hota hai aur woh beech me hi baat ko chhod deti hai…

Iss harkat se naraz bani usse nirasha se dekhti hai…

Mishra : lagta hai meri talaash ab khatam ho gayi hai…hahaha….abb…kya tum log mujhe batane ka kasht karoge…ki yeh aadmi kaha hai…?

Bani : mujhe nahi lagta ki isse humne kahin dekha hai…jara phir se dikhana…

Mishra phir se uss hologram ho dikhata hai…

Bani : confirm…isse hum ne kahi nahi dekha…

Radha : arre yeh toh koi aur hai…isse toh maine bhi nahi dekha…pehle toh yeh hamare driver Ramu jaisa laga lekin yeh toh koi aur hai…

Radha ki baat pe mishra ki hasi AA gayi…

Mishra : hahaha…kya tum log hamme itna bewakoof samajhte ho..? Jaldi batao kaha hai woh nahi toh bewajah Mari jaogi…

Mishra apni gun nikal kar bani pe point kar deta hai…

Yeh dekh..

Radha : ok…ok…yeh aadmi…kuch der pehle yahi…iss tunnel me hi tha…

Bani : Radha..!!!

Mishra apni gun load kar ke phir se bani ke sar par laga deta hai….

Mishra : abb ek aawaz bhi nikli toh sari goliya tumhare bheje me khaali…

Radha : nahi usse kuch mat karo mein batati hun…

Mishra bani se thoda piche hat jata hai…aur piche khadi guards abhi bhi alert the…

Radha : iss aadmi ne hame iss tunnel me pakda tha…hamari jaan ke badle unhone hamara saara saaman aur bike lekar woh yaha se chale gaye…kuch 10-20 log ho sakte hai unke saath…

Mishra : hmmm…aur kuch…?

Radha : aur woh yaha se kisi beach par jane ki baat kar rahe the apni sasthion se…abb please mujhe aur meri behan ko jaane do..meine sab bata diya hai…abhi woh dur bhi nahi gaye honge kad bhi sakte ho…
yaha se aap unhe pa

Mishra : thank you for the information..lekin kya hai na…mujhe tumhari baaton par bharosa nahi ho raha…

Bani : yeh bilkul sach bol rahi hai…hame jaane do…

Mishra : don't worry mein tumhe jarur jane dunga…tumhari madat se ab me jaldi STARCOMM chala ja sakta hun…nahi to pata nahi kitna dhoondhna padta usse…toh ladies…jab tak Naidu nahi mil jata tum mere saath hi rahogi…is that clear…

Bani gusse se…

Bani : lekin humne saari baat pata toh di hai ab kyun rok rahe ho…

Mishra : As I told you before…i don't trust you guys…

Radha : ok hum taiyaar hai…hum aapke saath rehne ke liye taiyaar hai….

Radha ki iss baat par Bani ko bahut gussa aata hai par woh kuch nahi kehti sirf uss ki taraf dekh ke apna gussa jataya…par Radha ne aankh maar kar usse ek taraf dekhne ka ishara kar diya…Bani uss taraf dekhti hai toh waha Dev chhipa baitha tha…aur woh unhe ishare se unke saath jane ke liye keh raha tha…

Mishra : ohh wow…tumhe darr nahi lagta ladki…?

Radha : Aap ko kya lagta hai…Unn andar pade guards se puch lo…jo pata tha sab bata toh diya hai humne…ab jaisa aapne kaha hai ki aap ko bharosa nahi hai hamari baaton ka toh hum aap ke saath chal kar woh dene ki koshish karenge…aur bahut jald woh Naidu bhi aapko mil jayega…agar aap usse dhoondo ge toh…

Bani : Wait Radha…Hamari ek hi shart hai…pehle hame batao ki hame kaha le ja raha hai….aur…hum STARCOMM nahi aayenge…chahe hame maar do…

Mishra : Ohh ok…mujhe aap ki shart manjur hai…waise bhi…uss naidu ke bina hame STARCOMM jaane ki permission bhi nahi hai…aur tum mere safe house rahogi…

Bani : Safe house..? Yaha se kitni dur hai woh…

Mishra : mein mein nahi batane wala….

Mishra guards ko ishara kar ke Radha aur Bani ko pakadne ke liye kehta hai…woh guards unhe pakad lete hai..

Mishra : Cadets..!!! Naidu abhi yahi kahi hoga…saara jungle chhan maaro….aur usse pakad kar Safe house le aao…Aur yeh ladkiyan mere saath Safe house jayegi…now…GO!!!

Uss ke baad saare ships wahan se chale jate hai…aur Mishra unn dono ladkiyon ko lekar Safe house ki taraf chala gaya….


Dev yeh sab dekh kar jald se jald ETERNAL CITY jane laga…woh jyada der tak ladkiyon ko unke saath nahi rakh sakta tha…waise usse un par kafi bharosa tha isliye uss ne dono ko unke saath jane ke liye bola tha…



LOCATION : PLANET GAZZO

Raka ne apne planet par hahakar machaya hua tha…500 se jyada logo ki haddiyon ke beech baith kar ek aadmi ki power le raha tha…aur thodi der baad woh aadmi bhi baaki ki tarah haddion me badal gaya…

Raka : aaahhhh…abb mere pet bhar gaya…abb asli kaam karte hai….

Raka ka yeh roop dekh saare log uss se darne lage tha…Raka abb uss “alien race” se kafi alag dikhai de raha tha…kafi bhayanak….

Uss ke saath aaya hua alien apne ghutno par baith ke sar jhuka leta hai….uss ko aisa karte dekh waha maujud saare aliens bhi apna sar niche jhuka ke baith gaye….

Raka yeh dekh bahut khush ho jata hai…ajeeb se chinkh nikal kar apni khushi jatata hai…

Raka : Sab log khade ho jao…

Raka ki order sunte hi saare log khade ho gaye…

Raka : uss chij ko banane me aur kitna time lagega…?

Scientist : ALMIGHTY RAKA…hum koshish kar toh rahe hai lekin…hamari quality uss ki jaise nahi hai…aur product bhi bharose layak nahi hai…

Raka : Testing ka kya report hai abb tak ka…

Scientist : We are not able to channel energy efficiently…energy loss bahut ho raha hai…matlab usse use karne ke baad ek toh object ki maut ho rahi hai….aur kuch cases me objects kafi jaldi thak rahe hai…

Raka : Mere se ab raha nahi ja raha….uss mujhe do…mein khud usse test karna chahta hun…..

Scientist : But ALMIGHTY…..iss me aapki jaan ko bhi dhoka…

Raka : Don't worry Brother…I am powerful enough to handle that…

Scientist : As you say ALMIGHTY….

Aur phir woh scientist baahar chala jata hai…kuch der baad wapas aakar ek diamond shape ki device Raka ko deta hai…

Raka : Toh yeh hai woh cheez…jise banakar woh bhagauda yaha se bhaag gaya….

Scientist : Nahi ALMIGHTY…..Yeh woh nahi hai..lekin uss ke jaisi hai…

Raka : I know….isse use kaise karte hai…?

Scientist : Usse aapko apne chest ke andar rakhna hoga….

Raka bina kuch soche usse apne chhati ke area ko flesh me convert karta hai aur usse andar rakh deta hai…lekin uska effect kuch bhi nahi hota…

Raka yeh dekh kafi disappoint hota hai….gusse se woh usse scientist ko hi pakad leta hai…

Raka : Yeh kya brother…iss ka toh kuch effect hi nahi ho raha…tumne mera time barbad kiya hai…ab tumhe marna hoga….

Scientist : nahi ALMIGHTY…usse activate hone me thoda time lagta hai…please mujhe mat maro….

Raka ek baar uss Scientist ki taraf dekhta hai…jo dar ke maare kafi kaamp raha tha….

Raka : Pehle batana tha na brother….

Aur raka usse chod deta hai….tabhi Raka apne andar dard ki ek lehar mehsoos kiya…kuch samjha aata iss se pehle woh dard ke maare jor se chinkhne laga….

Raka : aahhh..!!!! Ahh…!!!yeh kya tha…!!!!Brother…!!!!

Scientist : Bas thodi der aur ALMIGHTY…..woh device aap ke saath judne ki koshish kar raha hai….just stay in there…

Raka ko kafi pain ho raha tha…woh bina ruke chinkhe ja raha tha….chest ki woh jagah jaha device tha woh area flesh me badal raha tha uss device se dur jane ki koshish kar raha tha…lekin woh device bhi usse chod hi nahi raha tha….2-3 min baad sab kuch band ho gaya…

Raka abb khada ho gaya….aur ab uss ke chehre par ek jeet ki khushi thi…

Raka : Brother mujhe lagta hai ki abb mein ready hun isse use karne ke liye…

Scientist : ALMIGHTY…aisa karna aap ke liye khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai….yeh final product nahi hai….

Raka : jaisa bhi ho…mein meri saari energy ko mehsoos kar pa raha hun…

Aur yeh kehte hue raka apna ek haath saamne karta hai aur phir uss ke haath ke aage energy ek ball ki shape me aa gayi…jo purple color ki thi…aur woh uss ke haath se nikal rahi thi…

Raka jaise hi usse chodta hai..woh aage jakar bahut bade blast me convert hoti hai..jise dekh Raka kafi khush hota hai…

Raka : Yeh hui na baat….Aur Brother…Mujhe koi bhi kamjori mehsoos nahi ho rahi hai…mein isse apne saath hi rakhna chahta hun…. Aur tum apna kaam jari rakhna….aur “SHAI” ke jaisa device banane ki koshish karo…baut mujhe toh aisa lag raha hai ki anjane me tum logo ne uss se bhi behtar device banaya hai…hahaha Ab Dekhta hun kaun mujhe rokta hai….iss poore brahmand par raj karne se…..hahaha





 

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Mr. Singh : Yeh sab kya chal raha hai…Answer do mere sawal ka…

Ratan : Dost..Singh bhai…ek baat hum sab ne tumse chupai thi….

Mr. Singh : kya…? kaunsi baat chupai thi…

Ratan : tumhe pata hai ki hum travelers the pehle aur yaha settle ho gaye…naye log hamare saath judh gaye aur aise karte karte aaj ETERNAL Clan taiyaar hua…But maine tumhe ek chij nahi batai thi ki….ki….hum…STARCOM se hai…Mein…Siddharth…Aasha aur Dr. Khan…

MR. Singh : yeh baat pehle hi bata deni chahiye thi Dost…kya tum sach me mere dost ho ya fir uss STARCOMM walon ki koi chaal hai…?




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Ratan : dost...sab se pehle hua kya tha woh jaan lo…phir koi bhi natije par pahunchana…

Mr. Singh : aur kya hona bacha hai...jise mein dost samajhta tha woh log mere Dushman hi nikle...aakhir kya chahte the hum logon se...aisa kya nahi tha tumhare paas jis ke liye tum sab ne mujhe dhoka diya...

Ratan : pehle meri baat suno dost ...sabse pehle aasha aur siddharth ki jaan ko khatra tha toh woh Dev ke saath meri madat se Earth aa gaye aur fir jab STARCOMM ko yeh baat pata chali ki innke bhaag Jane me hum ne madat ki hai toh uss ke baad STARCOM Government ne Dr. Khan aur mujhe unn ka Saath dene ke liye DROHI bana diya…aur fir hamare paas aur koi option nahi bacha... STARCOMM chodne ke alawa….aur phir hum bhi yaha aa gaye…aur tab se hum yahi reh rahe hai…Lagbhag 14 saal se… ab tum hi batao iss me tum logo ko dhoka dene ki kya baat hai…?

Mr. Singh : Ratan Dost..Yeh sab tumhe pehle batana chahiye tha…Abb mein tum par pehle jaisa bharosa nahi kar sakta..I am sorry…

Aasha : Aise mat bolo Singh bhai…Hum STARCOMM se the toh kya hua..aaj hum EARTH par reh rahe hai…aur yahi hamara ghar hai…STARCOMM toh humne kab ka chhod diya…aur rahi baat ko chipane ki baat toh hame kabhi laga hi nahi tha ki aisa koi situation khadi ho jayegi…lekin aaj unexpectedly STARCOMM ke log yaha aa pahunche..aur hamara past aapke saamne aaya….

Mr. Singh : Ek choti si situation kya kuch nahi kar sakti…sab rishte naate ek chutki me badal jaate hai….Sach kahu toh mein thoda befikre tha ki aapke rehte mujhe aur mere logon ko koi pareshani nahi hogi….mujhe tum sab par poora bharosa tha…aur aaj mein chah kar bhi pehle jaisa bharosa nahi kar pa raha…sab badal gaya mere dost… kya tumhe aisa nahi lagta...?

Siddharth : dost…we are sorry…jab hum mile the tabhi yeh sab bata dena chahiye tha…lekin tum ek baar hamari jagah khud ko rakh ki socho tab tumhe sab samajh aayega ki humne yeh sab kyun kiya…

Dr. Khan : jitni nafrat tum me hai utni hi maftrat hamare andar bhi hai…Meri beti abhi bhi wahi STARCOMM par hai…Unn STARCOMM walon ne mujhe meri beti se alag hone ke liye majboor kiya…

Aasha : Aur RATAN bhai….Jinhone poori zindagi me banaya hua empire chhod kar yahan aana pada….kya yeh sab sun ne ke baad bhi aap ko aisa lagta hai ki hum unn STARCOMM ke saath mile hue hai ?

Mr. Singh Kuch nahi bolte…

Aasha : Singh bhai...mein aapko galat bhi nahi samajh rahi...aap ka aisa reaction dena mein samajh sakti hun...I'm sure apne bahut kuch Saha hoga...aur bunker ke baare me bhi toh hum jaante hai...aapki nafrat ko samajh sakti hun...lekin hum STARCOMM se hai isliye aap hum se aise rishte nahi tod sakte…

Mr. Siddharth : tum batao dost ki hum kya kare jis se tumhe hum par phir se bharosa karoge…?

Mr. Singh bahut hi serious hote hue..

Mr. Singh : theek hai...agar tum chahte ho ki mein pehle jaise aap sab par bharosa karu to...tum sabko… aise hi mera saath dena hoga...yeh jo rishta ban gaya hai uss me kabhi darar nahi ban-ne dena…

Aasha : mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha….

Mr singh apni hassi ko rok na paue aur kil mila kar hasne lage…

Mr. Singh : I'm sorry behan...I'm sorry...lekin ab mere se aur nahi control ho raha ...so I'm sorry…


Mr singh ki iss bartav ko samajh ne ki koshish karne lage…har koi apne dimag daudayein ja raha tha ki aakhir Mr. Singh kya kar rahe hai...

Mr. Siddharth : Mr. Singh ko pehle se bhi yeh sab pata tha...hai na Singh Saab..?

Mr. Ratan : kya…?

Dr. Khan : But how ..? Maine toh nahi bataya kisi ko...kya tum ne ..?

Mr. Siddharth : nahi...Ratan…?

Mr. Ratan : mein kyun...dost tum hi batao yaar...nahi toh yeh sab meri jaan le lenge…

Mr. Singh : aap sab Dev ke baare me kaise bhool gaye….jab aasha ji ne usse starcomm ke baare me bata diya tha...aur Dev ne mujhe...mein pehle se sab jaanta tha...but aap sab logo ka dil bada hone ke karan hi mein aap se nafrat nahi kar paya...hahaha…so sorry for the prank...haha

Aasha : aapne toh Dara hi diya tha Singh bhai...lekin jo bhi hua accha hua... hum par se bojh halka hua…

Mr. Singh : theek hai….ab woh sab chodo...kya aap me se koi NAIDU hai…?

RatanK : Naidu…? Nahi toh...dost...kya tum hamare naam bhool gaye ho …

Mr. Singh : nahi...par kya pata STARCOMM par toh ho sakta hai...kya pata yaha dusra naam jod diya ho ..?

Siddharth : Sorry to disappoint you Mr Singh but hum me se koi bhi Naidu nahi hai...aur hamare naam bhi wahi hai...jo aap ko bataye gaye the …

Mr singh : hahaha...kya pata kya ho gaya hai mujhe…. sorry...Haan...phir woh log aap ko dhoondte hue nahi aaye the….koi DROHI hai Naidu...usse talash te hue yaha pahunch gaye the….

Aasha : DROHI..?

Mr. Singh : waise DROHI...hota kya hai..tum bhi toh drohi the na…? To fir aapko kyun nahi dhund rahe…?

RatanK : DROHI woh hote hai joh jinhe seedhe marne ki saza di jaati hai...aur woh maut bhi bahut hi khaufnak hoti hai…. STARCOMM se seedha space me chhoda jata hai….aur kuch hi pal me body freeze ho jati hai...aur uski maut ho jati hai...ek DROHI hote hue bhi woh unn sab se kaise bacha hoga…?




Yahan se kahin dur…

Radha : Bani abhi tak Dev nahi aaya...kya woh theek hoga...hum chalte hai na...usse dekhne…

Bani : woh koi 10 saal ka bacha nahi hai….usse khud ko sambhalna aata hai...tum ne bhi to dekha hai….hai na…? So don't worry...aa jayega…

Radha : I hope ki woh theek ho….

Bani aur radha ke paas time tha toh Bani ne baat karna sahi samajha...city me aasha ke saath jo baatchit ho rahi thi woh toh uss ne kisi karan suni nahi thi toh woh ab radha se puchti hai…

Bani : waise Radha apni sasuma ji se kafi achhi ban rahi hai ab toh….? Yaha aane se pehle kya chal raha tha mujhe bhi toh batao ..


Radha iss baat pe Sharma jati hai…

Radha : are kuch nahi hum dono mil ke Dev ki khichai kar rahe the...woh kisi chhote bachhe ki tarah aasha aunty ko bata raha tha ki usse hamare saath nahi aana...hahaha

Bani : lekin ek baat mein notice kar rahi hun Radha….ab woh tumhe kuch alag tarike se dekhne laga hai…

Radha : kya sach me...lekin tum kaise keh sakti ho ki….

Bani : maine uski aankho me dekha hai...jab tum uss market me baat karne jaa rahi thi toh I'm sure tumhare se jyada woh dar Raha tha tumhare liye….ki kahin tumhe kuch ho na jaye…


Radha yeh sun kar wapis Sharma jati hai…

Radha : waise tumhare liye bhi woh care karta hai toh kya woh tumhe bhi chahne laga hai…?

Bani yeh sun kar shock hoti hai lekin phir apna poker face bana kar radha ko jawab deti hai…

Bani : yeh kya baat Hui radha….aisa mazak mat kiya kar...nahi toh mein hi tumhare dev ko le jaungi...phir roti rehna baithe….apne dev ki yaad me….hahaha….

Radha Bani ko gale laga kar….

Radha : tumhare liye puri permission hai...jaao dev ko lekar...mujhe khushi hi hogi….dev hum dono ka hai….samajhi…

Bani : tum bilkul bachi ho radha ….apne pyar ko kisi aur ke paas kaise Jane de sakti ho….?

Radha : kisi aur ke paas nahi...meri pyari behna ke paas Jane de rahi hun...jo mujhe kabhi dhoka nahi de sakti…

Bani : ab toh mein usse hasil karke hi rahungi….hahaha

Radha : ok go on….woh tumhe ghas bhi nahi dalega….

Bani : lagi shart…?

Radha : yahi ki dev kis ke paas pehle jaata hai….?

Bani : That works too...sure….

Radha : sure…

Unn dono ki baate chal hi rahi thi ki kuch ships tunnel ke saamne aakar khadi ho gayi…

Bani : Radha!!! Jaldi chup jao….aur koi bhi awaz mat karna…

Bani ke bataye anusar radha waha andhere me chup gayi...Bani bhi ek jagah dekh chup gayi…

Tunnel ke baahar se thodi thodi aawaj sunai de rahi thi….

Mishra: BIO-Bots ne toh yahi location di thi...lekin yaha toh koi bhi suspicious activity nahi ho rahi….

Unknown1 : nahi sir...signal toh issi jagah se aa raha hai...aur BOTs ne diya hua signal hame nahi mila woh STARCOMM ko diya tha aur hame orders bhi upar se aaye the ….unhone koi research kar ke hi hame yaha bheja hoga…


Mishra: hmm..baat toh theek ki tum ne...do baatein ho sakti hai….ek toh woh iss tunnel me chhupe hue hai...yah toh yaha se chale gaye hoge…Cadets !! Iss tunnel ko search Karo...dekho koi milta hai ya nahi….

Superior ki awaz sunte je 3 logo ki team uss tunnel me chali gayi...lekin kafi time ke baad bhi woh wapas nahi laute…

Mishra: kaha chale gaye ye log...ab tak aute kyun nahi…???(ek guard ko point karte hue) aye...sun tum..!! Jao andar jao aur dekho kya ho raha hai…

Guard : sir...yes...sir….

Aur woh pairo se thap thap ki awaz karte tunnel ke andar chala gaya . Lekin yeh kya woh bhi bahut der tak baahar nahi nikla…

Mishra: jet ko tunnel ke theek saamne hower karte raho aur headlight se pure tunnel ke andar ujala kar do...dekhu toh kya chal raha hai andar ….

Tabhi ek jet tunnel me focus chhod deta hai...achanak itna saara ujala dekh Bani aur radha ko kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha …

Mishra: agar Zinda rehna chahte ho toh chup chap bahar nikal jao...hame pata hai ki tunnel ki dusari side band hai...toh tumhare liye ek yahi rasta hai baahar nikalne ka toh samajhdar bano aur chup chap baahar aa jao ...aur koi bhi hoshiyari karne ki sochna bhi mat .. agar bahar aane me deri hui toh hum puri force andar lekar aa jayenge ..so...choice is yours…hum bas baat karna chahte hai ...

Bani : let's go Radha ..hamare paas ab aur koi option nahi hai…

Radha : But behna...woh log hame jane nahi denge...aur abhi tak Dev bhi nahi aaya….mujhe toh Darr lag raha hai…

Bani : don't worry….main hoon na….tumhe kuch hone nahi dungi...aur waise bhi woh jo koi bhi hai...woh bas hum se baat karna chahta hai...so don't worry…

Radha: Ok… inn bodies ko dekh kar bhi woh sirf baat karega…?

Bani : As I told you earlier…we have no choice…let's go…

Aur fir dono tunnel ke baahar aate hai.. Unke aate hi bache hue guards apni gun unn dono par point kar dete hai…dono ladkiyaan apne dono haath upar uthaye Deere dheere aage badh rahe the…

Mishra guards ko ishare se relax rehne ko kehte hai…

Mishra : hahaha…Maan-na padega…yahan ki ladkiyon me bhi dam toh hai… aasani se mere cadets ko lita dia…

Mishra unn dono ki taraf badhne laga…tabhi Bani bhi do kadam aage ja kar fight ke liye taiyaar ho gayi…

Mishra : don't worry…mujhe bas iss ki talash hai…aur mujhe tum keedon se kuch Lena dena nahi hai…bas yeh batao ki kya tumne iss aadmi ko dekha hai ya nahi…?

Mishra apne wrist par lage gadget ko dabata hai aur uss me se Naidu ka hologram dikhai deta hai…tabhi Radha ek galti kar baithti hai….

Radha : Bani yeh toh….

Radha ko apni galti ka ehsaas hota hai aur woh beech me hi baat ko chhod deti hai…

Iss harkat se naraz bani usse nirasha se dekhti hai…

Mishra : lagta hai meri talaash ab khatam ho gayi hai…hahaha….abb…kya tum log mujhe batane ka kasht karoge…ki yeh aadmi kaha hai…?

Bani : mujhe nahi lagta ki isse humne kahin dekha hai…jara phir se dikhana…

Mishra phir se uss hologram ho dikhata hai…

Bani : confirm…isse hum ne kahi nahi dekha…

Radha : arre yeh toh koi aur hai…isse toh maine bhi nahi dekha…pehle toh yeh hamare driver Ramu jaisa laga lekin yeh toh koi aur hai…

Radha ki baat pe mishra ki hasi AA gayi…

Mishra : hahaha…kya tum log hamme itna bewakoof samajhte ho..? Jaldi batao kaha hai woh nahi toh bewajah Mari jaogi…

Mishra apni gun nikal kar bani pe point kar deta hai…

Yeh dekh..

Radha : ok…ok…yeh aadmi…kuch der pehle yahi…iss tunnel me hi tha…

Bani : Radha..!!!

Mishra apni gun load kar ke phir se bani ke sar par laga deta hai….

Mishra : abb ek aawaz bhi nikli toh sari goliya tumhare bheje me khaali…

Radha : nahi usse kuch mat karo mein batati hun…

Mishra bani se thoda piche hat jata hai…aur piche khadi guards abhi bhi alert the…

Radha : iss aadmi ne hame iss tunnel me pakda tha…hamari jaan ke badle unhone hamara saara saaman aur bike lekar woh yaha se chale gaye…kuch 10-20 log ho sakte hai unke saath…

Mishra : hmmm…aur kuch…?

Radha : aur woh yaha se kisi beach par jane ki baat kar rahe the apni sasthion se…abb please mujhe aur meri behan ko jaane do..meine sab bata diya hai…abhi woh dur bhi nahi gaye honge kad bhi sakte ho…
yaha se aap unhe pa

Mishra : thank you for the information..lekin kya hai na…mujhe tumhari baaton par bharosa nahi ho raha…

Bani : yeh bilkul sach bol rahi hai…hame jaane do…

Mishra : don't worry mein tumhe jarur jane dunga…tumhari madat se ab me jaldi STARCOMM chala ja sakta hun…nahi to pata nahi kitna dhoondhna padta usse…toh ladies…jab tak Naidu nahi mil jata tum mere saath hi rahogi…is that clear…

Bani gusse se…

Bani : lekin humne saari baat pata toh di hai ab kyun rok rahe ho…

Mishra : As I told you before…i don't trust you guys…

Radha : ok hum taiyaar hai…hum aapke saath rehne ke liye taiyaar hai….

Radha ki iss baat par Bani ko bahut gussa aata hai par woh kuch nahi kehti sirf uss ki taraf dekh ke apna gussa jataya…par Radha ne aankh maar kar usse ek taraf dekhne ka ishara kar diya…Bani uss taraf dekhti hai toh waha Dev chhipa baitha tha…aur woh unhe ishare se unke saath jane ke liye keh raha tha…

Mishra : ohh wow…tumhe darr nahi lagta ladki…?

Radha : Aap ko kya lagta hai…Unn andar pade guards se puch lo…jo pata tha sab bata toh diya hai humne…ab jaisa aapne kaha hai ki aap ko bharosa nahi hai hamari baaton ka toh hum aap ke saath chal kar woh dene ki koshish karenge…aur bahut jald woh Naidu bhi aapko mil jayega…agar aap usse dhoondo ge toh…

Bani : Wait Radha…Hamari ek hi shart hai…pehle hame batao ki hame kaha le ja raha hai….aur…hum STARCOMM nahi aayenge…chahe hame maar do…

Mishra : Ohh ok…mujhe aap ki shart manjur hai…waise bhi…uss naidu ke bina hame STARCOMM jaane ki permission bhi nahi hai…aur tum mere safe house rahogi…

Bani : Safe house..? Yaha se kitni dur hai woh…

Mishra : mein mein nahi batane wala….

Mishra guards ko ishara kar ke Radha aur Bani ko pakadne ke liye kehta hai…woh guards unhe pakad lete hai..

Mishra : Cadets..!!! Naidu abhi yahi kahi hoga…saara jungle chhan maaro….aur usse pakad kar Safe house le aao…Aur yeh ladkiyan mere saath Safe house jayegi…now…GO!!!

Uss ke baad saare ships wahan se chale jate hai…aur Mishra unn dono ladkiyon ko lekar Safe house ki taraf chala gaya….


Dev yeh sab dekh kar jald se jald ETERNAL CITY jane laga…woh jyada der tak ladkiyon ko unke saath nahi rakh sakta tha…waise usse un par kafi bharosa tha isliye uss ne dono ko unke saath jane ke liye bola tha…



LOCATION : PLANET GAZZO

Raka ne apne planet par hahakar machaya hua tha…500 se jyada logo ki haddiyon ke beech baith kar ek aadmi ki power le raha tha…aur thodi der baad woh aadmi bhi baaki ki tarah haddion me badal gaya…

Raka : aaahhhh…abb mere pet bhar gaya…abb asli kaam karte hai….

Raka ka yeh roop dekh saare log uss se darne lage tha…Raka abb uss “alien race” se kafi alag dikhai de raha tha…kafi bhayanak….

Uss ke saath aaya hua alien apne ghutno par baith ke sar jhuka leta hai….uss ko aisa karte dekh waha maujud saare aliens bhi apna sar niche jhuka ke baith gaye….

Raka yeh dekh bahut khush ho jata hai…ajeeb se chinkh nikal kar apni khushi jatata hai…

Raka : Sab log khade ho jao…

Raka ki order sunte hi saare log khade ho gaye…

Raka : uss chij ko banane me aur kitna time lagega…?

Scientist : ALMIGHTY RAKA…hum koshish kar toh rahe hai lekin…hamari quality uss ki jaise nahi hai…aur product bhi bharose layak nahi hai…

Raka : Testing ka kya report hai abb tak ka…

Scientist : We are not able to channel energy efficiently…energy loss bahut ho raha hai…matlab usse use karne ke baad ek toh object ki maut ho rahi hai….aur kuch cases me objects kafi jaldi thak rahe hai…

Raka : Mere se ab raha nahi ja raha….uss mujhe do…mein khud usse test karna chahta hun…..

Scientist : But ALMIGHTY…..iss me aapki jaan ko bhi dhoka…

Raka : Don't worry Brother…I am powerful enough to handle that…

Scientist : As you say ALMIGHTY….

Aur phir woh scientist baahar chala jata hai…kuch der baad wapas aakar ek diamond shape ki device Raka ko deta hai…

Raka : Toh yeh hai woh cheez…jise banakar woh bhagauda yaha se bhaag gaya….

Scientist : Nahi ALMIGHTY…..Yeh woh nahi hai..lekin uss ke jaisi hai…

Raka : I know….isse use kaise karte hai…?

Scientist : Usse aapko apne chest ke andar rakhna hoga….

Raka bina kuch soche usse apne chhati ke area ko flesh me convert karta hai aur usse andar rakh deta hai…lekin uska effect kuch bhi nahi hota…

Raka yeh dekh kafi disappoint hota hai….gusse se woh usse scientist ko hi pakad leta hai…

Raka : Yeh kya brother…iss ka toh kuch effect hi nahi ho raha…tumne mera time barbad kiya hai…ab tumhe marna hoga….

Scientist : nahi ALMIGHTY…usse activate hone me thoda time lagta hai…please mujhe mat maro….

Raka ek baar uss Scientist ki taraf dekhta hai…jo dar ke maare kafi kaamp raha tha….

Raka : Pehle batana tha na brother….

Aur raka usse chod deta hai….tabhi Raka apne andar dard ki ek lehar mehsoos kiya…kuch samjha aata iss se pehle woh dard ke maare jor se chinkhne laga….

Raka : aahhh..!!!! Ahh…!!!yeh kya tha…!!!!Brother…!!!!

Scientist : Bas thodi der aur ALMIGHTY…..woh device aap ke saath judne ki koshish kar raha hai….just stay in there…

Raka ko kafi pain ho raha tha…woh bina ruke chinkhe ja raha tha….chest ki woh jagah jaha device tha woh area flesh me badal raha tha uss device se dur jane ki koshish kar raha tha…lekin woh device bhi usse chod hi nahi raha tha….2-3 min baad sab kuch band ho gaya…

Raka abb khada ho gaya….aur ab uss ke chehre par ek jeet ki khushi thi…

Raka : Brother mujhe lagta hai ki abb mein ready hun isse use karne ke liye…

Scientist : ALMIGHTY…aisa karna aap ke liye khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai….yeh final product nahi hai….

Raka : jaisa bhi ho…mein meri saari energy ko mehsoos kar pa raha hun…

Aur yeh kehte hue raka apna ek haath saamne karta hai aur phir uss ke haath ke aage energy ek ball ki shape me aa gayi…jo purple color ki thi…aur woh uss ke haath se nikal rahi thi…

Raka jaise hi usse chodta hai..woh aage jakar bahut bade blast me convert hoti hai..jise dekh Raka kafi khush hota hai…

Raka : Yeh hui na baat….Aur Brother…Mujhe koi bhi kamjori mehsoos nahi ho rahi hai…mein isse apne saath hi rakhna chahta hun…. Aur tum apna kaam jari rakhna….aur “SHAI” ke jaisa device banane ki koshish karo…baut mujhe toh aisa lag raha hai ki anjane me tum logo ne uss se bhi behtar device banaya hai…hahaha Ab Dekhta hun kaun mujhe rokta hai….iss poore brahmand par raj karne se…..hahaha
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Previously…


Mr. Singh : Yeh sab kya chal raha hai…Answer do mere sawal ka…

Ratan : Dost..Singh bhai…ek baat hum sab ne tumse chupai thi….

Mr. Singh : kya…? kaunsi baat chupai thi…

Ratan : tumhe pata hai ki hum travelers the pehle aur yaha settle ho gaye…naye log hamare saath judh gaye aur aise karte karte aaj ETERNAL Clan taiyaar hua…But maine tumhe ek chij nahi batai thi ki….ki….hum…STARCOM se hai…Mein…Siddharth…Aasha aur Dr. Khan…

MR. Singh : yeh baat pehle hi bata deni chahiye thi Dost…kya tum sach me mere dost ho ya fir uss STARCOMM walon ki koi chaal hai…?




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Ratan : dost...sab se pehle hua kya tha woh jaan lo…phir koi bhi natije par pahunchana…

Mr. Singh : aur kya hona bacha hai...jise mein dost samajhta tha woh log mere Dushman hi nikle...aakhir kya chahte the hum logon se...aisa kya nahi tha tumhare paas jis ke liye tum sab ne mujhe dhoka diya...

Ratan : pehle meri baat suno dost ...sabse pehle aasha aur siddharth ki jaan ko khatra tha toh woh Dev ke saath meri madat se Earth aa gaye aur fir jab STARCOMM ko yeh baat pata chali ki innke bhaag Jane me hum ne madat ki hai toh uss ke baad STARCOM Government ne Dr. Khan aur mujhe unn ka Saath dene ke liye DROHI bana diya…aur fir hamare paas aur koi option nahi bacha... STARCOMM chodne ke alawa….aur phir hum bhi yaha aa gaye…aur tab se hum yahi reh rahe hai…Lagbhag 14 saal se… ab tum hi batao iss me tum logo ko dhoka dene ki kya baat hai…?

Mr. Singh : Ratan Dost..Yeh sab tumhe pehle batana chahiye tha…Abb mein tum par pehle jaisa bharosa nahi kar sakta..I am sorry…

Aasha : Aise mat bolo Singh bhai…Hum STARCOMM se the toh kya hua..aaj hum EARTH par reh rahe hai…aur yahi hamara ghar hai…STARCOMM toh humne kab ka chhod diya…aur rahi baat ko chipane ki baat toh hame kabhi laga hi nahi tha ki aisa koi situation khadi ho jayegi…lekin aaj unexpectedly STARCOMM ke log yaha aa pahunche..aur hamara past aapke saamne aaya….

Mr. Singh : Ek choti si situation kya kuch nahi kar sakti…sab rishte naate ek chutki me badal jaate hai….Sach kahu toh mein thoda befikre tha ki aapke rehte mujhe aur mere logon ko koi pareshani nahi hogi….mujhe tum sab par poora bharosa tha…aur aaj mein chah kar bhi pehle jaisa bharosa nahi kar pa raha…sab badal gaya mere dost… kya tumhe aisa nahi lagta...?

Siddharth : dost…we are sorry…jab hum mile the tabhi yeh sab bata dena chahiye tha…lekin tum ek baar hamari jagah khud ko rakh ki socho tab tumhe sab samajh aayega ki humne yeh sab kyun kiya…

Dr. Khan : jitni nafrat tum me hai utni hi maftrat hamare andar bhi hai…Meri beti abhi bhi wahi STARCOMM par hai…Unn STARCOMM walon ne mujhe meri beti se alag hone ke liye majboor kiya…

Aasha : Aur RATAN bhai….Jinhone poori zindagi me banaya hua empire chhod kar yahan aana pada….kya yeh sab sun ne ke baad bhi aap ko aisa lagta hai ki hum unn STARCOMM ke saath mile hue hai ?

Mr. Singh Kuch nahi bolte…

Aasha : Singh bhai...mein aapko galat bhi nahi samajh rahi...aap ka aisa reaction dena mein samajh sakti hun...I'm sure apne bahut kuch Saha hoga...aur bunker ke baare me bhi toh hum jaante hai...aapki nafrat ko samajh sakti hun...lekin hum STARCOMM se hai isliye aap hum se aise rishte nahi tod sakte…

Mr. Siddharth : tum batao dost ki hum kya kare jis se tumhe hum par phir se bharosa karoge…?

Mr. Singh bahut hi serious hote hue..

Mr. Singh : theek hai...agar tum chahte ho ki mein pehle jaise aap sab par bharosa karu to...tum sabko… aise hi mera saath dena hoga...yeh jo rishta ban gaya hai uss me kabhi darar nahi ban-ne dena…

Aasha : mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha….

Mr singh apni hassi ko rok na paue aur kil mila kar hasne lage…

Mr. Singh : I'm sorry behan...I'm sorry...lekin ab mere se aur nahi control ho raha ...so I'm sorry…


Mr singh ki iss bartav ko samajh ne ki koshish karne lage…har koi apne dimag daudayein ja raha tha ki aakhir Mr. Singh kya kar rahe hai...

Mr. Siddharth : Mr. Singh ko pehle se bhi yeh sab pata tha...hai na Singh Saab..?

Mr. Ratan : kya…?

Dr. Khan : But how ..? Maine toh nahi bataya kisi ko...kya tum ne ..?

Mr. Siddharth : nahi...Ratan…?

Mr. Ratan : mein kyun...dost tum hi batao yaar...nahi toh yeh sab meri jaan le lenge…

Mr. Singh : aap sab Dev ke baare me kaise bhool gaye….jab aasha ji ne usse starcomm ke baare me bata diya tha...aur Dev ne mujhe...mein pehle se sab jaanta tha...but aap sab logo ka dil bada hone ke karan hi mein aap se nafrat nahi kar paya...hahaha…so sorry for the prank...haha

Aasha : aapne toh Dara hi diya tha Singh bhai...lekin jo bhi hua accha hua... hum par se bojh halka hua…

Mr. Singh : theek hai….ab woh sab chodo...kya aap me se koi NAIDU hai…?

RatanK : Naidu…? Nahi toh...dost...kya tum hamare naam bhool gaye ho …

Mr. Singh : nahi...par kya pata STARCOMM par toh ho sakta hai...kya pata yaha dusra naam jod diya ho ..?

Siddharth : Sorry to disappoint you Mr Singh but hum me se koi bhi Naidu nahi hai...aur hamare naam bhi wahi hai...jo aap ko bataye gaye the …

Mr singh : hahaha...kya pata kya ho gaya hai mujhe…. sorry...Haan...phir woh log aap ko dhoondte hue nahi aaye the….koi DROHI hai Naidu...usse talash te hue yaha pahunch gaye the….

Aasha : DROHI..?

Mr. Singh : waise DROHI...hota kya hai..tum bhi toh drohi the na…? To fir aapko kyun nahi dhund rahe…?

RatanK : DROHI woh hote hai joh jinhe seedhe marne ki saza di jaati hai...aur woh maut bhi bahut hi khaufnak hoti hai…. STARCOMM se seedha space me chhoda jata hai….aur kuch hi pal me body freeze ho jati hai...aur uski maut ho jati hai...ek DROHI hote hue bhi woh unn sab se kaise bacha hoga…?




Yahan se kahin dur…

Radha : Bani abhi tak Dev nahi aaya...kya woh theek hoga...hum chalte hai na...usse dekhne…

Bani : woh koi 10 saal ka bacha nahi hai….usse khud ko sambhalna aata hai...tum ne bhi to dekha hai….hai na…? So don't worry...aa jayega…

Radha : I hope ki woh theek ho….

Bani aur radha ke paas time tha toh Bani ne baat karna sahi samajha...city me aasha ke saath jo baatchit ho rahi thi woh toh uss ne kisi karan suni nahi thi toh woh ab radha se puchti hai…

Bani : waise Radha apni sasuma ji se kafi achhi ban rahi hai ab toh….? Yaha aane se pehle kya chal raha tha mujhe bhi toh batao ..


Radha iss baat pe Sharma jati hai…

Radha : are kuch nahi hum dono mil ke Dev ki khichai kar rahe the...woh kisi chhote bachhe ki tarah aasha aunty ko bata raha tha ki usse hamare saath nahi aana...hahaha

Bani : lekin ek baat mein notice kar rahi hun Radha….ab woh tumhe kuch alag tarike se dekhne laga hai…

Radha : kya sach me...lekin tum kaise keh sakti ho ki….

Bani : maine uski aankho me dekha hai...jab tum uss market me baat karne jaa rahi thi toh I'm sure tumhare se jyada woh dar Raha tha tumhare liye….ki kahin tumhe kuch ho na jaye…


Radha yeh sun kar wapis Sharma jati hai…

Radha : waise tumhare liye bhi woh care karta hai toh kya woh tumhe bhi chahne laga hai…?

Bani yeh sun kar shock hoti hai lekin phir apna poker face bana kar radha ko jawab deti hai…

Bani : yeh kya baat Hui radha….aisa mazak mat kiya kar...nahi toh mein hi tumhare dev ko le jaungi...phir roti rehna baithe….apne dev ki yaad me….hahaha….

Radha Bani ko gale laga kar….

Radha : tumhare liye puri permission hai...jaao dev ko lekar...mujhe khushi hi hogi….dev hum dono ka hai….samajhi…

Bani : tum bilkul bachi ho radha ….apne pyar ko kisi aur ke paas kaise Jane de sakti ho….?

Radha : kisi aur ke paas nahi...meri pyari behna ke paas Jane de rahi hun...jo mujhe kabhi dhoka nahi de sakti…

Bani : ab toh mein usse hasil karke hi rahungi….hahaha

Radha : ok go on….woh tumhe ghas bhi nahi dalega….

Bani : lagi shart…?

Radha : yahi ki dev kis ke paas pehle jaata hai….?

Bani : That works too...sure….

Radha : sure…

Unn dono ki baate chal hi rahi thi ki kuch ships tunnel ke saamne aakar khadi ho gayi…

Bani : Radha!!! Jaldi chup jao….aur koi bhi awaz mat karna…

Bani ke bataye anusar radha waha andhere me chup gayi...Bani bhi ek jagah dekh chup gayi…

Tunnel ke baahar se thodi thodi aawaj sunai de rahi thi….

Mishra: BIO-Bots ne toh yahi location di thi...lekin yaha toh koi bhi suspicious activity nahi ho rahi….

Unknown1 : nahi sir...signal toh issi jagah se aa raha hai...aur BOTs ne diya hua signal hame nahi mila woh STARCOMM ko diya tha aur hame orders bhi upar se aaye the ….unhone koi research kar ke hi hame yaha bheja hoga…


Mishra: hmm..baat toh theek ki tum ne...do baatein ho sakti hai….ek toh woh iss tunnel me chhupe hue hai...yah toh yaha se chale gaye hoge…Cadets !! Iss tunnel ko search Karo...dekho koi milta hai ya nahi….

Superior ki awaz sunte je 3 logo ki team uss tunnel me chali gayi...lekin kafi time ke baad bhi woh wapas nahi laute…

Mishra: kaha chale gaye ye log...ab tak aute kyun nahi…???(ek guard ko point karte hue) aye...sun tum..!! Jao andar jao aur dekho kya ho raha hai…

Guard : sir...yes...sir….

Aur woh pairo se thap thap ki awaz karte tunnel ke andar chala gaya . Lekin yeh kya woh bhi bahut der tak baahar nahi nikla…

Mishra: jet ko tunnel ke theek saamne hower karte raho aur headlight se pure tunnel ke andar ujala kar do...dekhu toh kya chal raha hai andar ….

Tabhi ek jet tunnel me focus chhod deta hai...achanak itna saara ujala dekh Bani aur radha ko kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha …

Mishra: agar Zinda rehna chahte ho toh chup chap bahar nikal jao...hame pata hai ki tunnel ki dusari side band hai...toh tumhare liye ek yahi rasta hai baahar nikalne ka toh samajhdar bano aur chup chap baahar aa jao ...aur koi bhi hoshiyari karne ki sochna bhi mat .. agar bahar aane me deri hui toh hum puri force andar lekar aa jayenge ..so...choice is yours…hum bas baat karna chahte hai ...

Bani : let's go Radha ..hamare paas ab aur koi option nahi hai…

Radha : But behna...woh log hame jane nahi denge...aur abhi tak Dev bhi nahi aaya….mujhe toh Darr lag raha hai…

Bani : don't worry….main hoon na….tumhe kuch hone nahi dungi...aur waise bhi woh jo koi bhi hai...woh bas hum se baat karna chahta hai...so don't worry…

Radha: Ok… inn bodies ko dekh kar bhi woh sirf baat karega…?

Bani : As I told you earlier…we have no choice…let's go…

Aur fir dono tunnel ke baahar aate hai.. Unke aate hi bache hue guards apni gun unn dono par point kar dete hai…dono ladkiyaan apne dono haath upar uthaye Deere dheere aage badh rahe the…

Mishra guards ko ishare se relax rehne ko kehte hai…

Mishra : hahaha…Maan-na padega…yahan ki ladkiyon me bhi dam toh hai… aasani se mere cadets ko lita dia…

Mishra unn dono ki taraf badhne laga…tabhi Bani bhi do kadam aage ja kar fight ke liye taiyaar ho gayi…

Mishra : don't worry…mujhe bas iss ki talash hai…aur mujhe tum keedon se kuch Lena dena nahi hai…bas yeh batao ki kya tumne iss aadmi ko dekha hai ya nahi…?

Mishra apne wrist par lage gadget ko dabata hai aur uss me se Naidu ka hologram dikhai deta hai…tabhi Radha ek galti kar baithti hai….

Radha : Bani yeh toh….

Radha ko apni galti ka ehsaas hota hai aur woh beech me hi baat ko chhod deti hai…

Iss harkat se naraz bani usse nirasha se dekhti hai…

Mishra : lagta hai meri talaash ab khatam ho gayi hai…hahaha….abb…kya tum log mujhe batane ka kasht karoge…ki yeh aadmi kaha hai…?

Bani : mujhe nahi lagta ki isse humne kahin dekha hai…jara phir se dikhana…

Mishra phir se uss hologram ho dikhata hai…

Bani : confirm…isse hum ne kahi nahi dekha…

Radha : arre yeh toh koi aur hai…isse toh maine bhi nahi dekha…pehle toh yeh hamare driver Ramu jaisa laga lekin yeh toh koi aur hai…

Radha ki baat pe mishra ki hasi AA gayi…

Mishra : hahaha…kya tum log hamme itna bewakoof samajhte ho..? Jaldi batao kaha hai woh nahi toh bewajah Mari jaogi…

Mishra apni gun nikal kar bani pe point kar deta hai…

Yeh dekh..

Radha : ok…ok…yeh aadmi…kuch der pehle yahi…iss tunnel me hi tha…

Bani : Radha..!!!

Mishra apni gun load kar ke phir se bani ke sar par laga deta hai….

Mishra : abb ek aawaz bhi nikli toh sari goliya tumhare bheje me khaali…

Radha : nahi usse kuch mat karo mein batati hun…

Mishra bani se thoda piche hat jata hai…aur piche khadi guards abhi bhi alert the…

Radha : iss aadmi ne hame iss tunnel me pakda tha…hamari jaan ke badle unhone hamara saara saaman aur bike lekar woh yaha se chale gaye…kuch 10-20 log ho sakte hai unke saath…

Mishra : hmmm…aur kuch…?

Radha : aur woh yaha se kisi beach par jane ki baat kar rahe the apni sasthion se…abb please mujhe aur meri behan ko jaane do..meine sab bata diya hai…abhi woh dur bhi nahi gaye honge kad bhi sakte ho…
yaha se aap unhe pa

Mishra : thank you for the information..lekin kya hai na…mujhe tumhari baaton par bharosa nahi ho raha…

Bani : yeh bilkul sach bol rahi hai…hame jaane do…

Mishra : don't worry mein tumhe jarur jane dunga…tumhari madat se ab me jaldi STARCOMM chala ja sakta hun…nahi to pata nahi kitna dhoondhna padta usse…toh ladies…jab tak Naidu nahi mil jata tum mere saath hi rahogi…is that clear…

Bani gusse se…

Bani : lekin humne saari baat pata toh di hai ab kyun rok rahe ho…

Mishra : As I told you before…i don't trust you guys…

Radha : ok hum taiyaar hai…hum aapke saath rehne ke liye taiyaar hai….

Radha ki iss baat par Bani ko bahut gussa aata hai par woh kuch nahi kehti sirf uss ki taraf dekh ke apna gussa jataya…par Radha ne aankh maar kar usse ek taraf dekhne ka ishara kar diya…Bani uss taraf dekhti hai toh waha Dev chhipa baitha tha…aur woh unhe ishare se unke saath jane ke liye keh raha tha…

Mishra : ohh wow…tumhe darr nahi lagta ladki…?

Radha : Aap ko kya lagta hai…Unn andar pade guards se puch lo…jo pata tha sab bata toh diya hai humne…ab jaisa aapne kaha hai ki aap ko bharosa nahi hai hamari baaton ka toh hum aap ke saath chal kar woh dene ki koshish karenge…aur bahut jald woh Naidu bhi aapko mil jayega…agar aap usse dhoondo ge toh…

Bani : Wait Radha…Hamari ek hi shart hai…pehle hame batao ki hame kaha le ja raha hai….aur…hum STARCOMM nahi aayenge…chahe hame maar do…

Mishra : Ohh ok…mujhe aap ki shart manjur hai…waise bhi…uss naidu ke bina hame STARCOMM jaane ki permission bhi nahi hai…aur tum mere safe house rahogi…

Bani : Safe house..? Yaha se kitni dur hai woh…

Mishra : mein mein nahi batane wala….

Mishra guards ko ishara kar ke Radha aur Bani ko pakadne ke liye kehta hai…woh guards unhe pakad lete hai..

Mishra : Cadets..!!! Naidu abhi yahi kahi hoga…saara jungle chhan maaro….aur usse pakad kar Safe house le aao…Aur yeh ladkiyan mere saath Safe house jayegi…now…GO!!!

Uss ke baad saare ships wahan se chale jate hai…aur Mishra unn dono ladkiyon ko lekar Safe house ki taraf chala gaya….


Dev yeh sab dekh kar jald se jald ETERNAL CITY jane laga…woh jyada der tak ladkiyon ko unke saath nahi rakh sakta tha…waise usse un par kafi bharosa tha isliye uss ne dono ko unke saath jane ke liye bola tha…



LOCATION : PLANET GAZZO

Raka ne apne planet par hahakar machaya hua tha…500 se jyada logo ki haddiyon ke beech baith kar ek aadmi ki power le raha tha…aur thodi der baad woh aadmi bhi baaki ki tarah haddion me badal gaya…

Raka : aaahhhh…abb mere pet bhar gaya…abb asli kaam karte hai….

Raka ka yeh roop dekh saare log uss se darne lage tha…Raka abb uss “alien race” se kafi alag dikhai de raha tha…kafi bhayanak….

Uss ke saath aaya hua alien apne ghutno par baith ke sar jhuka leta hai….uss ko aisa karte dekh waha maujud saare aliens bhi apna sar niche jhuka ke baith gaye….

Raka yeh dekh bahut khush ho jata hai…ajeeb se chinkh nikal kar apni khushi jatata hai…

Raka : Sab log khade ho jao…

Raka ki order sunte hi saare log khade ho gaye…

Raka : uss chij ko banane me aur kitna time lagega…?

Scientist : ALMIGHTY RAKA…hum koshish kar toh rahe hai lekin…hamari quality uss ki jaise nahi hai…aur product bhi bharose layak nahi hai…

Raka : Testing ka kya report hai abb tak ka…

Scientist : We are not able to channel energy efficiently…energy loss bahut ho raha hai…matlab usse use karne ke baad ek toh object ki maut ho rahi hai….aur kuch cases me objects kafi jaldi thak rahe hai…

Raka : Mere se ab raha nahi ja raha….uss mujhe do…mein khud usse test karna chahta hun…..

Scientist : But ALMIGHTY…..iss me aapki jaan ko bhi dhoka…

Raka : Don't worry Brother…I am powerful enough to handle that…

Scientist : As you say ALMIGHTY….

Aur phir woh scientist baahar chala jata hai…kuch der baad wapas aakar ek diamond shape ki device Raka ko deta hai…

Raka : Toh yeh hai woh cheez…jise banakar woh bhagauda yaha se bhaag gaya….

Scientist : Nahi ALMIGHTY…..Yeh woh nahi hai..lekin uss ke jaisi hai…

Raka : I know….isse use kaise karte hai…?

Scientist : Usse aapko apne chest ke andar rakhna hoga….

Raka bina kuch soche usse apne chhati ke area ko flesh me convert karta hai aur usse andar rakh deta hai…lekin uska effect kuch bhi nahi hota…

Raka yeh dekh kafi disappoint hota hai….gusse se woh usse scientist ko hi pakad leta hai…

Raka : Yeh kya brother…iss ka toh kuch effect hi nahi ho raha…tumne mera time barbad kiya hai…ab tumhe marna hoga….

Scientist : nahi ALMIGHTY…usse activate hone me thoda time lagta hai…please mujhe mat maro….

Raka ek baar uss Scientist ki taraf dekhta hai…jo dar ke maare kafi kaamp raha tha….

Raka : Pehle batana tha na brother….

Aur raka usse chod deta hai….tabhi Raka apne andar dard ki ek lehar mehsoos kiya…kuch samjha aata iss se pehle woh dard ke maare jor se chinkhne laga….

Raka : aahhh..!!!! Ahh…!!!yeh kya tha…!!!!Brother…!!!!

Scientist : Bas thodi der aur ALMIGHTY…..woh device aap ke saath judne ki koshish kar raha hai….just stay in there…

Raka ko kafi pain ho raha tha…woh bina ruke chinkhe ja raha tha….chest ki woh jagah jaha device tha woh area flesh me badal raha tha uss device se dur jane ki koshish kar raha tha…lekin woh device bhi usse chod hi nahi raha tha….2-3 min baad sab kuch band ho gaya…

Raka abb khada ho gaya….aur ab uss ke chehre par ek jeet ki khushi thi…

Raka : Brother mujhe lagta hai ki abb mein ready hun isse use karne ke liye…

Scientist : ALMIGHTY…aisa karna aap ke liye khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai….yeh final product nahi hai….

Raka : jaisa bhi ho…mein meri saari energy ko mehsoos kar pa raha hun…

Aur yeh kehte hue raka apna ek haath saamne karta hai aur phir uss ke haath ke aage energy ek ball ki shape me aa gayi…jo purple color ki thi…aur woh uss ke haath se nikal rahi thi…

Raka jaise hi usse chodta hai..woh aage jakar bahut bade blast me convert hoti hai..jise dekh Raka kafi khush hota hai…

Raka : Yeh hui na baat….Aur Brother…Mujhe koi bhi kamjori mehsoos nahi ho rahi hai…mein isse apne saath hi rakhna chahta hun…. Aur tum apna kaam jari rakhna….aur “SHAI” ke jaisa device banane ki koshish karo…baut mujhe toh aisa lag raha hai ki anjane me tum logo ne uss se bhi behtar device banaya hai…hahaha Ab Dekhta hun kaun mujhe rokta hai….iss poore brahmand par raj karne se…..hahaha
to raka ko brahmand par raj karna hai :lol1:
but dev ke liye kafi pareshani hone wali hai aur pata nahi woh raka ke samne kaise tik payega.. :hinthint:
udhar dev bani aur radha kuch plan kar rahe hai...

nice update...waiting for next update bro :yourock: :yourock:
 
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