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Thriller Talwaar

Black water

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Awesome update bhai
 

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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
 

Shivay chauhan

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Update 4


Rudra vicky aur hasrat station pe khade train ke aane intzaar kar rahe the jaise hi rudra ko train aate hue dikhai deti hai wo vicky se kahta hai .

Rudra – agle 3 min tak koi grpf wala yahan nahi aana chahiye .

Vicky – 3 min jyada nahi ho gye matlb tumhe lagta hai ke wo padke 3 min tak tumhare samne tikenge .

Vicky ne muskurate hue kaha jiske jawab me rudra bhi muskura diya .

Train aa kar platform par rukti hai kai passengers utar rahe the chadhte rahe the tabhi ek ladki train se utarti hai 5 feet 6 inch kad aur model wala figure ankhon pe kala chasma black color ki skirt me uska rang air khil raha tha wo bheed me kisi ko khoj rahi thi jaise hi use wo mil jata hai wo daudti hui uske seene se lag jati hai ye koi nahi rudra ki bahan suhana thi jo is waqt Rudra se lipti hui thi rudra uske sar pe haath pyar se haath pherta hai aur usse isharon me pahuchta hai ke wo ladke kahan hai suhana rudra ko ungli se ishara karke batati hai rudra jab uske ishare ki tarf dekhta hai toh pata chalta hai ke 20 22 saal ke 6 7 ladke unki taraf aa rahe the rudra suhana ko saath leker unki taraf badhta hai aur do qadam ki doori pe aake ruk jata hai tab un mese ek ladka bolta .

Ladka – kyu apne boyfriend ko leke aai ho hmm accha hai .

Uski baat sun ke rudra muskurata hai aur apni ghadi utar ke suhana ko thamate hue kahta hai

Rudra – bacchon ye tumhari is zindgi me dusri aur akhiri galti hai .

Apni baat khtm karke turant ek ghoosa samne wale dusra ghoosa uske bagal wale ko teesra peeche ko aur chautha baye taraf khade ladke ko raseed kar deta hai ye sab itni jaldi hua ki kisi ko kuch samjh hi nahi aya ke kya hua aur dekhte hi dekhte charon ladke zameen pe gire pade the rudra bakiyon ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Rudra – inhe hospital le jaoge ya .

Abhi uski baat khtm bhi nahi hui thi ek ladka bol padta hai.

Ladka – bhai hum inhe hospital le jayenge .

Rudra – gud .

Kah kar wo suhana ko lekar vicky aur hasrat ki taraf chal padta hai hasrat ko dekh kar suhana kahti hai .

Suhana – bhai ye kaun hai meri bhabhi hai kya .

Suhana ki baat pe hasrat sharma jati hai toh vicky kahta hai .

Vicky – nahi devi ji sirf dist hai .

Suhana – tumse kisi ne poochha.

Suhana ne ek dum garajte hue kaha aur phir pyar muskurate hue hasarat ki taraf haath badha ke kaha .

Suhana – hi mai suhana aur aap.

Hasrat – ji mera naam hasrat hai .

Usne haath milate hue jawab diya .

Suhana – hasrat nice name .

Vicky – ab ghar chalen ya yahi khade rahne ka irada hai .

Hasrat – lekin hume toh office jana tha .

Rudra – ohh shit mai toh bhool hi gya vicky tu ek kaam kar suhana ko lekar ghar nikal mai hasrat ke saath jata hun .

Vicky – lekin jayenge kisse gadi toh ek hi hai .

Rudra – toh dusri gadi mangwa le.

Kah kar rudra hasrat ko le kar chala jata hai car me baithne ke baad rudra kahta hai .

Rudra – I’m sorry wo suhana aisi hi hai .

Hasrat – koi baat magar use bura toh nahi laga hoga ke use chhod kar mere saath aa gye .

Rudra – nahi bilkul nahi aur waise bhi wo janti hai ke mujhe ghar se door rahna hi pasand hai .

Hasrat – kyu .

Rudra – hai koi wajah baad me bataunga.

Baate karte karte dono virendra sharma ke office pahuch jate hai ye ek 8 floor ki building thi jispe bade bade aksharon me likha hua tha sharma industries rudra car se utarta hai aur uske peeche peeche hasrat bhi utar jati hai dono log office me dakhil ho jate hai ye kafi badi bada aur alishan office tha dono log chalte hue sharma ke cabin ki taraf badh rahe the ke tabhi hasrat kahti hai .

Hasrat – oh shit .

Rudra – rudra kya hua .

Hasrat – mai apna biodata toh lai hi nahi .

Rudra – mai hun kafi hun .

Phir wo use leker virendra sharma ke samne pahuch jata hai aur gate knock karta hai .

Under se awaz aati hai .

Come in .

Rudra aur hasrat cabin me dakhil ho jate hai rudra ko dekhte hi virendra sharma apna chair se uthta hai aur kahta hai .

Virendra sharma – rudra bhai aap aapne kyu taqleef ki mujhe bula liya hota mai aa jata .

Rudra – nahi isme taqleef kya baat hai ye hai wo jinki maine apse baat ki thi subah .

Virendra sharma – ji ji mujhe yaad hai inka appointment letter taiyar hai kya naam hai inka .

Rudra – hasrat .

Virendra turant intercom pe bolta hai .

Virendra – suno hasrat madam ka appointment letter leke aao .

Wo phone rakhta hai aur kahta hai .

Virendra sharma – are aap khade kyu baithiye na .

Rudra baith jata hai aur hasrat ko bhi baithne ka ishara karta hai hasrat bhi baith jati hai.

Virendra – chai piyengi ya coffee.

Rudra – nhikuch nahi .

Virendra sharma – are aise kaise nahi chai toh apko peeni hi padegi .

Virendra bell bajata hai aur peon se kahta hai .

Virendra sharma – 3 cup chai .

Poen chala jata hai toh virendra sharma kahta hai .

Virendra – aur bataiye rudra bhai kaisa chal raha hai .

Rudra – bas sab theek hi hai meri chhodiye aap apni bataiye .

Virendra sharma – ab kya bataiyen rudra bhai humare ek plot pe kuch gundon ne najayaz kabza kar liya hai bahut koshish ki magar kuch baat nahi bani .

Rudra – theek mai dekhta hun .

Tab tak peon chai aur appointment letter dono lekar aa jata hai virendra sharma turant us appointment letter pe sign kar deta hai aur kahta hai.

Virendra sharma – ye lijiye hasrat ji apka appointment letter aao kal se join kar sakti hai .

Rudra – kal se nahi agle hafte se .

Hasrat rudra ki taraf sawaliyan nazron se dekhti hai.

Rudra – are inke rahne ka bandobast karna hai inhe apne ghar jana is sab me 1 hafta toh lag hi jayega .

Virendra sharma – ji theek kaha aap ne .

Rudra – hasrat aap zara bahar jaiye mujhe zara inse kuch baat karni hai .

Hasrat uth ke bahar chali jati hai uske jaate hi rudra bola .

Rudra – sharma ji ye sirf naam ke liye yahan kaam karegi iski salary mai dunga theek hai aur han iske saath koi chhirori harkat mat karna samjhe .

Sharma – Ji bilkul samjh gya
 

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Awesome update bhai
 

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Waiting bhai
 

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Update 5


Rudra aur hasrat dono sharma industries ke office se bahar nikal kar gadi me baithte hai gadi me baithte hi rudra ka phone bajta hai rudra apne phone dekhta hai toh number suhana ka tha .

Rudra – kya hua ab .

Suhana – bhaiya ghar aao jaldi dadu apko bula rahe hai .

Rudra – theek hai aata hun .

Shahar ki sab se haweli jo aaj dulhan ki tarah saji hui thi sabhi khushiyan mana rahe the us haweli ke maine gate pe sunahre aksharon me likha hua tha chaudhry mansion is haweli ke malik devraj Chaudhry hai aur rudra aur suhana ke dadu unka sirf ek hi beta hai balraj chaudhary suhana aur rudra ke pita yun har baap ko apne bete aur beti se ek jaisa hi pyar hota hai magar jahan wo suhana ko jee bhar ke pyar karte the wahi apne bete se nafarat jiska karan tha unke bete ki bagawat aaj se 15 saal pahle jab suhana 5 saal ki thi aur rudra 10 saal ka tab mandir jate waqt kisi ne balraj chaudhary pe humla kiya tha jisme unki biwi ki maut ho gai thi bas usi din se rudra ne apni ma ki maut ka zimmedar apne pita ko samjh liya aur door hota chala gya biwi ke ghum balraj chaudhary itni doob gye ke unhe is baat andaza hi nahi hua ke kab wo apne hi bete ko apna dushman bana baithe jab rudra 17 saal ka hua toh uske dadu ne usse wada liya ki wo apne pita saath kabhi nahi chhodega aur apne dadu ki baat rudra kabhi nahi talta kyuki ek wahi toh the jisne rudra ko baap aur maa dono ka pyar diya tha is poori duniya me agar rudra kisi ke bas me tha toh sirf aur sirf devaraj chaudhary ke bas me yahi wajah thi ke wo apne pita ka sara kaam dhandha sari gang sambhalta tha magar apne pita se nafart bhi karta tha wo is haweli me tab hi aata jab uske dadu use bulate .

Rudra ki car geeli ke main gate me dakhil hote hue haweli ke gate pe aake rukti hai gate se andar ghuste hi samne ki taraf ek takht numa sofa rakha hua tha jispe 70 saal ka ek buzurg magar raub dar shaks baitha hua tha uske dye aur baye taraf do sofe aur the daye sofe pe 50 saal ka lambi chaudi kad kathi wala shaks baitha hua tha aur dya sofa khali tha suhana aur vicky 70 saal wake buzurg ke agal bagal khade hue the rudra andar dakhil hota hai aur 70 saal ke buzurg wyakti ke pair chhota hai aur kahta hai .

Rudra – kaise ho dadu .

Wo uske sar par pyar se haath pherta hai aur kahte hai .

Dadu – mai toh theek hi hun mujhe kya hona hai tu bata tu kaisa hai aur ye ladki wahi hai na jiski kal raat tune madad ki thi .

Unhone hasrat ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

Rudra - aapko kaise pata .

Sawaal puchhte ne saath saath rudra ne suhana aur vicky ki taraf dekha jawab me dono ne kandhe uchka diye.

Dadu – tu kaha kitni sansen keta hai ye bhi mujhe pata hai beta toh ye baat mujhse kaise chhipi rah sakti hai .

Dadu ki baat sunke rudra ke pita yani balraj chaudhary uth ke chal dete hai .

Dadu – tu kaha ja raha hai ballu .

Balraj chaudhary – mujhe ek urgent meeting me jana vicky ise yaad dila dena ki aaj ise gold ki delivery lene jaba hai .

Kah kar wo ghar se bahar chale jate hai shyad aone bete dwara hue unke rejection ko wo bardasht nahi kar pate unke jane ke baad dadu kahte hai .

Dadu – kabse wo ladki bahar khadi hai andr kyu nahi bula leta mujhse milana nahi chahta kya ya phir tujhe dar hai ki meri personality dekh kar wo mujhe par fida hi jayegi .

Unhone mazakiya laheje me kaha ye unki adat thi wo in dono ko ya yun kahe ki teeno ko aone dist ki tarah hi rakhte the .

Suhana – wo kya apki personality dekh kar toh koi bhi ladki aap par fida ho sakti hai .

Kah kar wo hasne lagti uske saath saath vicky aur dadu bhi hasne lagte hai rudra hasrat ko ishara karke andar bula leta hai hasrat andar aa kar dadu ke pair chhuti hai toh dadu use rok dete hai .

Dadu – are ye kya kar rahi nai itna bhi boodha nahi hun .

Unhone phir sharati dhang se kaha aur hasne lage jispe hasrat ne rudra ki taraf dekha usne use normal rahne ko ka ishara kiya .

Dadu apni jagah se uthe aur hasrat ke sar pe hath phirte hue kaha .

Dadu – naam kya hai apka beta .

Hasrat – j.

Dadu – bada pyara naam hai aur aap bhi .

Hasrat dadu ki baat sunke sharma jati hai .

Vicky jo itni der se chup tha wo bol padta hai .

Vicky – dadu naam toh mera bhi accha apne meri kabhi tareef nahi ki .

Dadu – mai gadhon ki tareef nahi karta .

Dadu ki baat teeno log hasne lage magar hasrat sirf muskurai .

Dadu – chalo sab log khana khate hai aaj bade dino baad aone pariwar ke saath khana khane ko milega .

Sabhi log dinning table pe baith jate hai hasrat suhana vicky aur rudra amne samne baithe hue the aur dadu centre of the table ki chair pe baithe hue the khana aa jata hai sabhi log khana khane lagte hai magar hasrat gumsum baithi hui thi uski ye halat dekh kar dadu kahte hai .

Dadu – beta hasrat kya baat hai tum kuch kha kyu nahi rahi .

Hasrat ek feeki muskan ke saath kahti hai .

Hasrat – ji mujhe is baat yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aap logon jaise bhi log hai warna mai jahan bhi gai waha mujhe sirf hawas aur bhook ki hi nazaron se dekha gya fir chahe wo 20 saal ka ladka ho ya 70 saal ka buddha aur dusri taraf aap log ji mujhe jane pahchane bina hi mere saath izzat aur apnepan se pesh aa rahe hai .

Kahte kahte uski awaz bhari ho gai .

Dadu – dekhi beta har sikke ke do pahlu hote hai agar duniya ke burai hai toh acchai bhi hai kyuki ye dono hi ek dusre ke poorak hai agar burai nahi hogi toh acchai koi ahmiyat nahi hogi aur rahi baat janne aur pahchanne ki toh ye jo rudra hai na ye insaan se milta baad me hai uske bare pata pahle laga leta hai aur sabse badi baat ye hai ki ye tumhe apne saath ghar laya bas itna kafi hai .

Vicky – aur kya warna aaj tak jane kitni hi ladkiyon ne rudra se dosti karni chahi aur rahi bhi magar rudra kisi ko bhi ghar nahi leke aya hasrat ji you are very lucky.

Rudra apni tareef sunke sharma jata hai jise dekh kar suhana kahti hai .

Suhana – oh my god the angry young man the royal tiger is blushing .

Rudra – apna muh band rakh aur khana kha .

Dadu – bhai muh band karke kaise khaya jata hai mujhe bhi sikha do .

Sabhi dadu ki is baat pe hasne lagte hai khana khane ke baad dadu sabhi se kahte hai

Dadu – bhai tum sab zara mujhe aur hasrat ko akela chhod do mujhe isse kuch baat karni hai .

Sabhi ko ye baat kuch ajeeb lagi magar dadu ki baat koi kaise taal sakta tha sabhi log thodi door jake khade hogye.

Dadu - beta aaj bade dino baad mujhe rudra ki ankhon me sukoon dikhai diya hai aur ye sirf tumhari wajah se hai mai ye baat janta hun kyuki maine use bachpan se dekha hai khara sona hai mera baccha iska saath mat chhodna .

Hasrat unki baat sunke kahti .

Hasrat – ji dadu .

Hasrat ke muh se dadu sunke dadu use pyar se gale laga lete
 
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