Incest Tambu ki Aag jo bhadak chuki hai -(mom son)

[sumimaster]

actually you have got a good concept for the story main problem is that being a creator you aren't showing love to your creation I.e. the updates are not regular,once there used to be 2-3 updates per day whether they used to be short...just wanna say show love to your creation I.e. update in regular basis.if you hadn't started the story nobody would say nothing but u have started the story so finish it as soon as possible.

 

[Jassybabra]

Waiting

 

[Vigkad]

Mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aati agar kahani likhana hi nahi tha to likhate kyon ho

 

[axm]

Waiting for next update.

 

[Amit99]

Lovely story. Please don't waste it. Please continue. We are eagerly waiting.

 

[Singh ji]

mast update

 

[Adityaadi23]

agar kahani likhana hi nahi tha to likhate kyon ho

 

[firefox420]

nice intro

 

[Xabhi]

दशहरे की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ भाई

 

[sumimaster]

greatest chutiya in the xforum world is one who destroys his story himself