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Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

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Nevil singh

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aur chuti bhi le liya hai advance maine ..”

RB ko iss awaaz ke sath aur bhi awaaz suni dete hain ..
RB apne naak ko sehlata hua upar sar uthata hai uske saamne uske saare purane dost Vicky dipika Anita aur Ritesh khade the .. aur Ritesh usse teesra mooka maarne ko hath uthaye khada tha .
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Ab Aage
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RB - what the fuck .. ?
Ritesh- wo english nawab site hat be tab se kahda hai aur do khane hain kya .
Ritesh RB ko side karke anadar chala jata hai aur jaake couch pe let jata hai ..
Tabhi piche se vicky aur Dipika bhi ghar ke nadar chale jaate hain . RB vicky ko yun uss se bina mile jaata hua dekh raha tha ki tabhi Anita uske kaan ke paas aak ekehti hai .
Anita- dono bohat naraj hai ..
RB chalke vicky ke pass jata hai aur kaan pakad ke uthak bithak karne lagta hai ..
Vicky- ritesh tujhe kuch dikh raha hai kya
Ritesh – nahini yaar abhi dhoop se anadr aaay to sab dhundla dhundla sa dikhayee de raha hai ..
Vicky- mujhe bhi .
Dipika- RB band karo ye sab iska koi faida nahni hai .. tum yanha aake ponhach gaye par humein batay nahini abhi tak .
Vicky- sorry bhavi ji thoda busy ho gaya tha aate hi plz maaf kardo .
Dipika- chalo shadi ke liye itne pehle aaye ho isiliye maaf kar rahi hoon barna ..
RB – thanks bhavi ji ..(RB uthak bithak karna band kar deta hai .)
Vicky- ohh kya kya kya .. chalu rakh chalu rakh maine abhi tak band karne ko nahini kaha hai .
RB – tu hota kon hai be maine yeh to bhavi ko mana ne ke liye kar raha tha tujhe maine pucha ..
Vicky- wah bhai bhai ko bhulke bhavi ko maska lagaya jaa raha hai ..
RB – haan to joru ke gulamon ke sath to yehi karna hota hai ..
Vicky- kya kaha be ..joru ka gulam tu hoga .. joru k agulam maine nahini samjha .. kyun kya kehta hai Ritesh .
Ritesh- dekh ab jo hai wo hai iss maine sarmaane jaisa koi baat nahini hai .. chal ab maan bhi le ..
Vicky- sala tujhe to, rook yeh bolke wo ritesh ke pich wade pe ek laat jad deta hai .. aur kudke uske upar beth jata hai ..
Ritesh- RB help bhai jo bolega karunga ..
RB – thik hai .
Vicky- tu dur reh saale .
RB – kyun be tu hota kon hai be ..
RB bhi piche se jake uske gale se pakad ke lock laga deta hai ..
Dipika aur Anita sirf inhe dekh ke muskura rahe the ..
Anita- shadi hone wala hai aur dulha yanah pe bachon ke tarah ladh raha hai ..
Dipika- itne din baad mile hain itna toh banta hai ..
Tabhi nurse bahar aake awaaz lagati ahi ..
Nurse- sir plz awaaz kam kijiye , madam ko dikkat hogi ..
RB jhat se hat ke sofe pe beth jata hai ..
Vicky bhi ritesh ko chhod deta hai ..aur sab sahi se beth jaate hain .
Vicky- dekho mujhe joru ka gulaam bol raha tha khud usle naam se hi dum daba ke beth gaya .
Ritesh- ek minute ye konsi madam ki baat ho rahi hai be oye RB yeh kon hai be ..
RB – wo wo
Ritesh- ha ha ha aaya beta aaj oont pahad ke niche .. tune jitne chugli kiya hai na uska badlaaaaaaaaaaaa .. ha ha
Ritesh faouran uth ke uss room ke taraf chal padta hai ..uske piche piche vicky .. jab ki RB wanhi chup chap betha rehta hai ..
“what the fuck ye yanah pe “
Iss se pehle Vicky kuch aur bolta ritesh jo uske thik piche tha uska moonh band kar deta hai ..
Achanak hue iss awaaz se sab ke najr uss tarf jaati hai .. anita aur Dipika bhi usi taraf chal padti hai .. abhi tak ke awaaz se soi hui swati bhi jag chuki thi .. uske aankhe khulte hi wo saamne wohi jaane pehchane chehere dekhti hai jin sab ko wo apne phone maine photo maine na jaane inn kitne salo se sirf dekha karti thi . par farak sirf yeh tha ki aaj wo uske phone ke screen maine nahini uske saamne khade the .. uske aankhon se ansoo ke pani ke tarha behne lag jaati hai ..swati rona chahati thi kuch bolna chahati thi par sirf aansoo bahane ke alwa wo kuch nahin kar payee.
Dipika- swatiiiiii
Dipika aage badhne hi wali thi ki achanak uske kadam wanhi roook gaye .. uske aankhon aur chehera ke rang badlne lage the . tabhi vicky aur dipika dono wanha se mood ke bhaar ke taraf chal gaye .. swati- iss sceen ko dekh ke she nahini payee aur jo awaaz ab tak ansoo banke beh rahe the wo fir se juban se nikalne lage ..
Vicky aur dipika aake RB ke saamne khade ho jaate hian .
Vicky- plz mujhe sach batana ye sab kya hai barna sach bata raha hoon kasam se aaj tera aakhir din hoga .
RB sar uthake vicky ke tarf dekhta hai vicky aur dipika usse gusse se ghur rahe the .. RB dono ko wait karne ko kehta hai aur andar room ke taraf badh jaata hai ..door ke pass abhi bhi anita ur ritesh khade the RB unhe side karke swati ke pass jata hai swati abhi bhi ro rahi thi ..
RB – tum tension mat lo maine inse baat karke aata hoon aur rona bilkool bhi nahini ..
Swati- haan maine sar hilati hai .
RB wanha se aata hai aur ritesh aur anita ko bhi sath maine bahar le aata hai . aur sofe maine jaake beth jata hai .
Ritesh aur anita bhi aake uske pass sofe pe bth jate hain ..
Dipika- RB ye sab kya hai tu sach batayega
RB – uss din maine office se advance chuti le liya tha .mujhe kuch office ke kaam tha yanha pe to maine socha tha aake tumhe surprise doonga aur uss din jab maine raat ko drive karke wpas aaraha tha to ************************** uske baad maine usse yanha le aaya..
Vicky- par tu usse uske ghar kyun nahini chod diya khamokhan tu jaanta hai na agar uske ghar walon ko pata chala to kya hoga ur wo wo aaj aisi halat maien hai isiliye aise bol rahi hai barna wo ab tak tujhe phir se pareshaan karne ka koi nayee tarikha bana liya hota ..
Dipika- dekh RB dost to meri bhi thi par ..ab nahini hai .. dekh wo abhi jada tar sahi ho chuki hai meri maan to tu usse apne ghar bhej de ya phir mere sath bhej de maine uske rehne wagera ka bandobast kardoongi jab tak wo thik nahni ho jati .. par maine phir bhi yehi kahungi ki jitni jaldi wo sake usse apne se door kar .. tu janta hai ki wo teri life maine kisi bhuchal se kam nahin hai ..
RB – par uski aisi halat maine .
Vicky- dekh RB maine pehle hi keh chuka hoon tu phir se wohi galti nahin kar sakta jo tu 7 saal pehle kiya tha ..
Ritesh- thik hai iss bare maine baad maine baat karenge filhaal anadr chalke uss se mil lete hain .usse bohat bura lag raha hoga humara yun munh Mod ke aajane se ..
Anita- hmm ye thik keh raha hai .
Dipika- shayad ab maine andar jaun to khud ko sambhal na pau .. shyad purani dosti meri jajbaton pe havi ho jaye par ek baat yaad rakhna jo hua hai aur jo usne kiya hai uske liye maine usse kabhi maafi nahini kar paungi ..c chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.
Iskke baad sab phir swati ke pass chale jaate hain janha swati bed maine aankhne band karke aansoo baha rahi thi tabhi swati ko ek hath apne gaal pe mehsooh hoti hai jo ki dhire se uske aansoo ko poch rahi thi ..
ye hath ke sparsh ko wo kabhi nahini bhul sakti thi itne dino se yeh wo dusri hath thi jiske kami usse hamesha se satati thi .ek dost ka hath ek behen ka hath jo uski sath de uske aansoo poch de ,
uske khusi maine uske sath khus ho uske dukh maien uska sahara bane par apni ek nadani ke wajha se wo sab kuch kho diya tha .. itne salon ne wo isi pal ka intezaar kar rahi thi .
dipika- swati
swati she nahni pati hai itne der se jo awaaz ko roke sirf aansoo baha rahi thi wo khulke rone lagti hai ..
swati- dipu mujhe maaf kardena dipu . maien bohat buri thi maine teri sath bhi bohat bura kiya shyad usika saja mujhe mili hai .
dipik- bas bas aur mat ro maine hon na ab ro mat chal ab rona band kar .
dipika swati ke ansoo poch deti hai .anita bhi swati ke pass aajati hai .. swati ek karke sab se mafi mangti hai ..
Roitesh – dipika mujhe lagta hai yumhe swati se kuch baat karni hai tum baat karo hum sab bahar bethe hain ..kyun kya kehti ho .(anita )
Anita- haan thik hai swati hum bahar bathe hain dono saheli baat karlo phir hum sab milke baat karenge ..
Phir sab bahar aajate hain RB swati ko ishara karta hai ki sab thik hai aur bahar chala jaata hai ..bahar sab jaake couch maine beth jate hain tabhi maid sabhi keliye kuch snacks le aati hai ..
RB – mina didi aap filhaal ke liye to kuch kaam nahini hai aap chahe to ghar jaa sakte ho baad , maine aajana .
Mina – nahni baba mujhe kuch kaam nahini hai ghar maine ,thik hai maine upar hoon , mujhe lagta hai meri jarurat pad sakti hai .
RB – par did
Mina – baba maine upar hun .. jab jarurat pade bula lena
Mina yeh bolke upar chali jaati hai ..
RB – yehh mina didi bhi na
Ritesh – kya hua ..
RB – unhe lagta hai maine kanhi swati ke chakar maine kuch idhar udahr na kardoon isliye jab se wo yanha aayee hai wo yanhi par hai kuch hi der ke liye ghar jaati hain phir chali aati hai ..
Vicky-hmm unka bhi tenison hona banta hai aakhir kaar aunty ke jaane ke baad unhone hi tujhe sambhala tha ur itne din tak tujhe maa ke jaise pala tha ..
RB – hmmm ..
Ritesh- tujhe pata chala ki wo log kon the .
RB – agar pata hota to ho jinda na hote ..
Vicky- RB ,
RB – sorry , nahin pata chala police ne bhi mana kiya case register karne se .
Ritesh- chalo jo bhi hai wo filhaal ke liye sahi hai wohi badi baat hai . bas wo puri tarha se thik ho jaye ..
Vicky- ab aage kya
RB – matlab
Vicky- tu ache se jaanta hai mera matlab kya hai ..
RB – par
Vicky- dekh maine jaanta hoon tu bohat muskil se mere shadi ke liye chuti leke aaya hai .. abhi tujhe samjhane pe bhi tu nahini samjhega usse yanhi rakhega par tere jaane ke baad ??
RB - wo wo
Vicky- jaanta tha ki tere pass koi answer nahini hoga . isiliye kehta honn abhi bhi tere pass time hai sochne ka .. ek baat hamesha yaad rakhan ye ladki tere life maine poison hai ..
RB – chal chod uss baat ko wo thik hojayegi jab tab dekhenge aur abhi to maine hoon na yanhi pe shadi tak .. dekhte hain tab ..
Ritesh- haan ye tune sahi kaha ..
Wanhi andar swati aur dipika bethe hue sirf ek dosre ko dekhe jaarahe the ..
Shyad kisi ke pass koi bolne ko word nahini tha ya phir itne words the ki kaise bole wo samajh nahini paa rahe the .
Swati- dipika mujhe maaf kardena . maine sirf RB ka hi nahini tera bhi bura chaha maine tere aur vicky ke realation todne ke kosis ki ..
Dipika- koi baat nahini mujhe mere pyaar pe bharosha tha ki ..wo mujh pe bharosha karega aur aaj hum saath maine hai ..
Swati- kash maine ye baat tab samjah pati ki bharosha karna .. kitna eham hota hai ..
Dipika- chal chod wo baat sab jo bit gaya wo bit gaya
Swati- nahin yaar aise kaise jaane doon .. mere dil maine wo sab yadein kaante ke tarha chubhte hain .. maine RB ke sath kitna bura kiya uska dil na jaane kitna baar dukhaya par phir bhi wo aaj mujhe dekh ke moonh mod lene ke wajaye mera dekh bhal kar raha hai ..
Dipik- kyun ki wo aisa hi hai aur hamesha se tha .. haan shyad wo aaj aise na hota uss din ke baad tune na sirf uske dil ko dukhay tha par teri wajha se uske mom ko heart attack aaya aur unkim mot ho gayee. Tu iska matlab jaanti hai na uske mom ke marne ke piche tera hath hai .
Swati- uss waqt mere dimag maine sirf badla chala rha tha maine itna andhi ho gayee thi ki mujhe khud bhi pata na thi kimaine kya kar rahi hoon .. kash kuch ho jaye jaise maine uss waqt ko badal doon ..
FLASBACK
Uss din RB ka yeh halat dekh ke dipika ko sehan na hua .dipika phone leke call laga deti hai ..
Dipika- hlw .kya kar rahi hai tu .
Uss side- dipika ??
Dipika- haan meri baat sun ,, tu kya kar rahi hai kitna busy hai mujhe uss se koi matlab nahin hai tu koi bhi bahan degi mujhe uss se matalab nahin hai ..maine jaanti hoon ki tune kya pagal panti ki hai ..tu jaldi se jaldi aake ponhach ..
Barsha- kya hua
Dipika- kya farak padta hai bas ye jaan RB ke baare maien hai tu yanha ponach maine tujhe sab batati hoon ..
Barsha- par .. dipi**
Dipika- tujhe kya kaha maine RB ki jindegi ka sawal hai tujhe aana hai ki nahini ?
Barsha- kya hua RB ko kya hua .. , bata na yaar
Dipika- usse kuch nahini hua hai par teri jarurat hai usse jitna jaldi ho sake tu yanha aa..
Barsha- thik hai maine jaldi se jaldi jaake ponhachti hoon ..
Dipika phone rakh deti hai ..
Ritesh – ye kya kiya ab
Dipika- jo kiya sahi kiya RB ko koi chahiye jo usse abhi sambhal sake aur wo kaam barsha bakhoobi kar sakti hai ..
Vicky- haan . thik kaha .
Kuch hi der maine RB ke papa aur shasank uncle aake ponhach jaate hain ..
Wo bhi yeh baat sunke bohat hi shock maine chale gaye the ..jab unhe pata chala ki swati kon hai .. jo baat wo chupana chahte the wo saamne aa chuka tha ..
Uske papa RB ke upar bohat gussa the par shashank uncle ne uske papa ko samjhaya ..
Wanhi doosre aur swati ka phone bajne lagta hai ..
Swati- haan bolo
Nisha- swati ye tumne kya kiya ,mujhe bahi pata chala ki RB ke maa ko heart aatack aaya hai aur wo medical maine admit hai ..
Swati- sach maine chalo usse ab samjh maine aayega ki apno ko mout se tadapta hua dekhna kaisa lagta hai ..
Nisha- tu pagal swati puri ki puri .
Swati- sun ab tujhe kya karan ahai tu jaake police complain file kar ki RB ne tujhe black mail karke tere sath jabardasti physical relation banaya aur abhi tujhe blackmail kar raha hai .. sun meri baat jab tu suke upar case karegi phir usse batana tu case tabhi wapas legi jab wo tujh se shadi karega
Nisha- kya kaha tune tu pagal hai bilkool .. aur ek bat kaan kholke sun le maine RB ko pyaar karti hoon uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon par itna niche kabhi nahini gir sakti hoon .. aise harqat karne se acha hi hai ki maine RB ko bhul hi jaun apni khusi ke liye maine uske life barbaad nahini kar sakti ..
Swati- acha teri andar ki achayee jag agyee ek baat yaad rakh tune jo kiya hai na uske baad wo teri shakal bhi nahini dekhega ..
Nisha- to sahi hai wohi sahi aur maine uss se mafi mang loongi agar wo maaf karta hai to thik hai barna aisa hi sahi ..
Swati- thik hai jo tujhe karna hia kar aur jo mujhe karna hai maine wo karoongi bye ..
Swati phone rakh deti hai ..
Swati- thik hai ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga ..
Wanhi doosre aur andar se khabar aati hai ki RB ke mom ko hosh aajati hai .
Sabhi unse milne ko andar jaate hain ..
RB mom- mujhe maaf kardena hamar RB ne jo galti kiya hai hum kisi ko moonh dikha ne ke kabil nahini rakha hai shashank- bhavi .. wo ritu ki behan hai wo diwaang family se aur kya ummed kar sakte ho wo RB ko phasa rahi hai ..uss time to uska kuch nahini kar paye ..
RB mom- nahain bhai agar sirf wohi baat hota to maine isse kab ka maaf kardeti par isne ek ladki ke sath .. chi .. mujhe to isse apne beta bolne ko bhi shram aati hai ..
Tabhi bahar se kuch awaaz aati hai ..
RB ke papa aur shasahank bahar gate pe jate hain.
Insp- hlw sir hum RB ko giraftaar karne aaye hain uske khilaaf swati diwang ne F.I.R file kiya hai sexually abuse aur black mail ka ..
RB papa- kya kaha insp .. aisa nahini hai aap
Insp- aapko jo kehna hai apne lawyer se ya phir swati diwang se baat kijiye .. constable aarest kar o ..
Constable RB ko ko handcuff daal dete hai aur sath maine le jaane lagte hain .. rb ko abhi tak kuch bhi hosh hi nahini tha ..
Sab ke rokne ke bawjood bhi police RB ko le jaati hai ..
RB papa – maine lawer ko phone karta hoon ..
Shasank – uska koi faida nahini hoga agar diwan family usse jail maine daalna chahega to usse koi lawyer bahar nahin la sakta
Vicky- uncle aap tension mat le aap lawer se baat kijiye aur shashank uncle aap mere sath aaye maine kisi ko jaanta hoon jo shyad hamar madad kar sake ..
RB ke papa bhar lawer se milne chale jaate hain aur vicky shasank bhi bhar chale jaate hain ..
Dipika- RB ko kuch nahin hoga na ….
Ritesh – bhagwaan yehi kare bas .. tum aunty ke pass ruko ..
Dipika – hmm thik hai
Dipika- RB ke mom ke pass jaati hai ..

Dipika- “aunty ..aunty no …nurse doctor”
kuch hi pal maine nurse aur doctor wanha aajaate hain par mout se bhala tej kon ho sakta hai... Doctor aake phir bhi apna aakhir kosis karte hain par koi faida nahini hota.. Unhe RB ka giraftaar hona dekha nahini gaya aur unke sanson ne unka sath chod diya...
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Nevil singh

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RB ke papa bhar lawer se milne chale jaate hain aur vicky shasank bhi bhar chale jaate hain ..
Dipika- RB ko kuch nahin hoga na ….
Ritesh – bhagwaan yehi kare bas .. tum aunty ke pass ruko ..
Dipika – hmm thik hai
Dipika- RB ke mom ke pass jaati hai ..
Dipika- “aunty ..aunty no …nurse doctor”
kuch hi pal maine nurse aur doctor wanha aajaate hain par mout se bhala tej kon ho sakta hai... Doctor aake phir bhi apna aakhir kosis karte hain par koi faida nahini hota.. Unhe RB ka giraftaar hona dekha nahini gaya aur unke sanson ne unka sath chod diya..

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Swati- maine jaanit hoon dipu ki mere galti ke wajha se bohat si jindegi tabha ho gayee .. aur uske liye maine kabhi khud ko maaf nahn karpaungi.. jinke upar maine sab se jada bharosha kiya tha unhi log hi asal maine doshi nikle ..koi itna niche kaise gir sakta hai ..

Dipika- ab uss bare maine discuss karke koi faida nahini hai .

Swati- kaise na bolun dipu tu ek baar khud ko meri jagha pe rakh ke dekh itna bada biswasghat .. tujhe batati hoon maine sab kuch tu khud hi batana maine aur kya karti ..

“yeh uss waqt ki baat hai jab mere exams khatam hue the .. uss waqt ritu didi hamare ghar pe hi rehti thi unko Nihar Bhai ka uss ladki ke baare maine pata chal gaya tha . aur Nihar Bhai unse milne ko hamesha wanha aajate the isiliye dad ne unhe hamare yanah le aaye the .

didi ne bhi ghar wale janha shadi tay kiya tha wanha shadi karne ko raaji ho gaye sab thik tha .. unka shadi bhi hone wala tha ..usi time mera vacation ka plan ban gaya tha doston ke sath US ka isiliye maine chali gayee .. ek baar didi ka call aaaya . didi bohat khus maloom pad rahi thi maine didi se poocha ki kya baat hai to unhone maine batya ki wo pregnant hai ..

Didi ne batya ki unhe kal hi pata chala tha .aur didi ab iss bachhe ke liye Nihar ko maaf karne ko bhi raaji hogyee thi aur unko ek aur chance dene ko tayar ho gayee thi didi ne ghar pe bhi bata diya tha .. sir papa hi mana kar rahe the par didi ke khusi ke chalte wo bhi raaji ho gaye .

didi ne mujhe batya ki wo nihar ko msg kiya hai milne ko . unhone usse iss bare maine kuch nahini batya hai wo usse surprise dena chahate the ..maine bhi did ke iss faisle se khus thi kyun ki in the end didi ki khusi hi mere liye maine rakhti thi ..

Phir ek din mujhe achanak call aaya aur emergency maine bulaya . jab maine yanah ponhachi to pata chala didi ke body ko police nadi ke pass se paye haine koi local log ne police ko inform kiya tha . local logon ke aajane se wo log didi ko wanhi chod ke bhag gaye ..

tum soch bhi nahni sakti uss waqt didi ka kya haal tha pap ne batya ki didi jab Nihar se milne ke liye gayi thi tab Nihar ne didi se shadi karne ko mana kardiya yanha tak bache ko apna maan ne ko bhi mana kardiya .aur Nihar aur uske bahi RB ne Didi ke rape karke maarke fek diya tha .

wo toh shukar hai thik time maine kuch logon ne unhe dekh liye aur police ko khabar de diya aur hospital aane pa pata chala ki didi jinda thi .. maine bohat toot gayee thi isiliye maine wo sab kiya .. par asliyat main saach hai isss se bohat alag thi kash ye sach mujhe kabhi pata hi nahin chalti ..

Sach to yeh thi ki mere dad hi asi gunhe gaar the .RB ke jaane ke kuch din baad mere mom ko maine RB ke sath j o sab kiya uska pata chal gaya tab unhone mujhe room maine bulake thapaad maar aur mujhe bohat gaali diya aur wo sab kuch kehne lage jo itne dino se wo apne dil maine chupa rakha tha .

SwatI mom – tune ye kyun kiya beta maine tujhe kitni baar bola tha tu inn sab se dur reh par tu nahini maani maine nahini chahati thi ki teri jindegi bhi waisi hi kharab ho jaye jaise meri ritu ki hui hai ..

Swati- kya hua mom aap kya bol rahi ho ..

Phir mom ne mujeh bataya.

ek baar dad ke ek party maine dad ka ek dost ke beta didi ko pasand kar betha tha .. aur dad ne usse iss baat ka promise kar diya ki agar wo dad ke buisness maine invest karega to dad uske bete ke shadi didi se karadenege ..

Tabhi didi ne sab ko ghar maine Nihar Bhaiya ke baare maine bata diya , didi ke ghar maine sab raji the par jaise hi dad ko iss bare maine pata chala wo iske bilkool hi khilaaf chale gaye .unhone didi ko bohat samjhaya dhamkaya par didi nahini maani aakhir kaar pap ko didi ke jid ke aage jhukna pada ..

par ye sab ek natak tha unke dimag maien kuch aur hi chal raha tha . wo uss time to chup ho gaye par pith piche wo kuch aur hi plan kar rahe the unhine didi aur Nihar ke kuch common friends ke sahare Nihar ko ek party maine bulaya usse full nasha karake ek ladki ke sath ek room maine legaye aur tabhi didi ko bhi wanha pe bula diya .. iss se didi Nihar pe gussa ho gayee aur wo gusse maine dad janha shadi tay kiya tha wanha shadi karne ko raaji hoagyee ..

Sab kuch sahi chal raha tha jab didi ko pata chala ki wo pregnant hai aur wo phir se Nihar ko maaf kar ke uske sath shadi karne ko haan kardiya aur papa ke dost ke bete ke riste ko mana kardiya .

dad ne bohat samjhaya par wo na maani phir dad ne usse force kiya ki abortion kar de par didi uske liye raaji na hui .di ne ghar maine saaf kardiya ki wo kisi bhi haal maine na hi shadi karengi na hi iss bache ko girayengi .. aur to didi ne unlogon ke ghar phone karke bata diya ki wo shadi nahini karegi ..

Papa ko apni beijaati aur apne iss shadi ke tootne se jo investment hath se chala gaay uss ke badle ke aag maien wo uss had tak gir gaye ki koi soch bhi nahini sakta . aur to aur Nihar Bhaiya ke dad ke papa ka purana dushmani tha to jab papa ko pata chala Nihar Bhiaya Sashank Uncle ke bete hain to unka gussa aur badh gaya ..

Uss din jab didi Nihar ko milke sab kuch shortout karne gayee hui thi to dad ne apne log unke piche laga diye the . jab didi Nihar Bhaiya se milne unke ghar gayee thi to wo log wanha ponahach gaye aur unhone meri didi ka ek ke baad ek Nihar Bhaiya ke saamne rape kiya aur uske baad Nihar Bhiya ko Bhi didi ke sath jabardasti sex karaya aur uske baad didi ko maar ke nadi ke kinare fekne chale gayee .

par usitime kuch logon ne unhe dekh ke police ko khabar kar diya ..ab baat logon ke saamne aagyee thi isiliye dad ko na chahte hue bhi didi ko hospital maine admit karna pada . didi bach to gayee par dad ne isse as a tool use kiya wo mere bua aur fufa ko ye bola ki agar wo pane munh band nahin rakhe to wo didi ko maar denge .unhone dr ke jariye didi ko koma maine daal diya ..

Taki didi na hi apni juban khol paye na hi didi ke ghar waale sirf usse jinda rakhne ke liye apni munh na khol paye .. wanhi dad ne police ko bhi pane paise ke aur power ke bal pe kharid liya . to police ne Nihar aur uske bhai ke khilaaf didi ka Rape aur attempt murder charges laga diya …

par uss time ek to RB yanha nahini tha aur uske minor hone ke chalte wo kisi tarha iss sab se bach gaya aur uske ghar wale bhi usse chupa diya taki usse dad ke najar se bacha sake .

Dad ne Nihar ko jail maine daal diya aur usse iss baat ke liye force kiya gaya ki wo accept karle ki wo ye sab kiya .. halanki pehle se hi bohat case the usko iss case maien mujrim therane ke . usko itna torture kiya gaya ki wo pagal hoga .. sashank uncle ne apni puri pehchaan laga diya uss waqt usse bachane ko par kuch nahini hua .. aakhirkaar unhe dad ke saamne apne bete ki jaan bachaane ko bhik maagna pada .

Dad ne apma purana badla lene ko mano sunhera absar milgaya jo itne din se dhoond rahe the .unhone ne Nihar ko chodne ke badle maine unke saare jaydaad apne naam karwa liye .. iss sab se mujhe anjaan rakha gaya tha .. mujhe sirf wohi sunaya gaya jo duniya ko pata tha .. aur maine ye na jaante hue na jaane kya kya kar gayee.. jab mujhe iss baat ka pata chala maine puri tarha se toot gayee thi .

Mujhe samajh nahini aaraha tha ki maine kya karun . har din maine didi ke pass jaake roti rehti thi .par maine kuch na kar payee tab tak RB yanha se kanhi dur chala gaya tha mujhe sirf ye pata chala ki atul ne RB ki help kiya tha jail se nikalne ke liye ..par jail se nikalne ke baad uska koi pata kisi ko nahini tha sirf tum logon ko hi pata tha par n atum kisi ko bata rahe the na hi mujh maine ab itni himmat thi tum logon ko saamna kar paun ..

Mera har din sirf didi ke pass ye sab sochte hue bit raha tha .shyad ye bhi kam tha ki ek din didi ko coma maien stroke aagaya aur wo bhi mujhe chod ke chali gayee . ab maine puri tarha se toot gayee thi .

Aur in sab maien ab mujhe meri sab se badi galti kaa saja milna baki tha aur wo mere life maine doosra sab se bada hewaan ke shakal maine aaya tha sooraj .. hamara shagai ho chuka tha ..

par ab maine ye shadi ko nahini karna chahati thi kyun ki maine kabhi uss se pyar nahini kiya tha . na hi maine kabhi samjha tha ki pyar kya hai par tab mujhe samjah maine aaya ki pyar kya hota hai ..judai kya hoti hai ..ye nahini keh sakti thi wo mujhe tabhi realise hua ya ye mere andar ye kab se panap raha tha uss feeling ko maine baya nahini kar sakti ..par kuch to mujhe mere andar khoya khoya sa lag raha tha ..

Aur ghar walo ko bata ke koi faida nahini tha .as dad aur sachin dono ek sikke ke do pehlu the ab ek toh sooraj ke dad ka buissness hamare sath merge ho raha tha aur upar se sachin local MLA ban ne ke baad uske power maine bane rehne ke liye aur ground level maine pakad banaye rakhne ke liye usse sooraj ke jaruraat thi .. to iss shadi ko maine kaise bhi tod nahini sakti thi ..

sooraj mujhe kabhi bhi dhang se baat nahini karta tha . uska jab dil karta tha mujhe kanhi hotel maien bula leta tha ya apne farm house maine bula leta tha aur mere mana karne ke bawjood bhi wo mere sath physical relation rakhne laga tha .. maien usse rok nahin sakti thi .

kyun ki na maine khud mere se door kar sakti thi na hi ghar wale aisa karne dete . ek baar maine socha tha to dad ne mujhe pan asli chehera dikha diya .. ki wo mere dad nahiin sirf paise ke liye aur apne izzat ke liye jeete hain .. mom jab mere liye papa se baat kiya to wo mujhe dhamki de diya ki agar maine kuch bhi idar udahr karti hoon to mom ko jaan se maar denge ab mera akhir rasta bhi toot chuka tha .

ab mere dil na chahte hue bhi uss pal ko yaad kar rahe the jab maine college maine RB ke sath ghanto batein kiya karti thi wo nadi kinare beth ke ghanto najar ka luft uthana ..

Jjaise jaise din bit te gaye mere andar ye khali pan ghar karne lag gayee thi .. sooraj meri halat jaanta tha isiliye wo khul ke jab chahe mera jaisa chahe istemaal karta tha jab usko dil karta tha maine uske bad maine hoti thi ..aur wo din bhar har doosri laadki ke sath ghoomta rehte the ..

maine apni jindegi se samjhota kar diya tha jo gunha maine kiya tha ye sab shyad usika hi saja thi .. par mere andar badh rahe frustration ne mujhe apne jindegi ko aur kharab karne pe majboor kar raha tha .. din bhar mere dimag maien sirf RB ke baare maine khayal chalta rehta tha jisse dabane ke liye maine har wo chiz karne lag gayee jo mujhe nahini karna chahiye the ..

mere dimag ye maan ne ko raji hi nahini tha ki maine RB ko pyar karne lagi thi par dil ye baar baar chila raha tha ki maine uss se pyar karne lagi hon. Maine ab khud ko busy karne maine lag gayee .. har din sirf sharaab club party ke nashe maine khud ko daal diya taki maine inn sab khayalon se khud ko nikaal sakun ..

Aise hi dekhte dekhte din mahino maine aur mahina saal maien badal gaye .. dost to bohat the par koi tere jaisa nahini tha dipu jo sahi kya hai galat kya hai samjha sake .. wo jo the ya to sirf masti karne ko ya phir mere paise ko udaane wali ..

jitna maine iss bare maine sochti thi utna hi jada mujhe dard hota tha aur maine apne aap iss se nikaalne ke liye phir se wohi sab karne lag jaati thi .. aur phir wo raat jab maine apne sapne maine bhi nahini socha tha ki mere sath kya kya ho sakta hai aur maine RB se phir se mil bhi sakti hoon ..

Dipika- swati ke aankhon se beh rahe aansoo ko poch deti hai ..

Dipika- swati tu ro mat sab thik ho jayega ..

Swati- kaise rokun khud ko tu bata maien soch bhi nahini paa rahi hon meri haqat jada kharab thi ye mere ghar wale ya phir mera naseeb ..

Dipika- tujhe meri kasam swati tu ab rona band kar jo hona tha ho gaya ab sab thik hao jayega ,, dekh aaj hum sab haine na tere pass .

Swati- tune dekha na dipu RB aaj bhi mera kitna khayal rakha raha hai maine uske sath kya kuch na kiya mere ghar walon ne uske sath kya kuch na kiya mere wajha se uske mom ki death ho gayee par wo aaj mera dekh bhal kar raha hai .. aise insaan ko dil maine dukhaya kash wo mujhe ek baar maaf kar sake . par pata hai maine jo galti ki hai uski koi maafi nahini hai .

Dipika- tu ab kuch dimag maine mat daal thik hai aur aaram kar sab kuch thik ho jaye ga .tu filhaal ke liye aaraam kar maien thodi bahar hoke aati hoon unke pass ..

Dipika swati ko sulake bahar aajati hai ,swati waise ro ro ke bohat thak chuki thi isiliye wo bhi thodi der maine so jaati hai.

Dipika bahar apne dosto ke pass aati hai ..

Anita – kya hua ..

Dipika i- kuch nahini bas batein kar rahe the .ab so agyee hai ..

Anita- sahi hai waise bhi usse rest karna chahiye ..

Ritesh- waise ab kya karein ..

RB- matlab ..

Ritesh- hum to soch rakhe the shopping karne jayenge ghoomne jayenge ab thodi hi din bache hain inki shadi maine ab nahin lag raha hai swati ki iss haalt maine humein ye karna chhaiye ..

RB – nahin tum tension nalo tum log ghoom aao maine hoon yenhi pe ..

Vicky- koi jarurat nahini hai hum to kabhi bhi ghoomne jaa sakte hain tu aaraha hai isiliye humne plan bana rakha tha ab tu hi nahini jayega to hum jaa ke kya kre ..

Dipika- haan , vicky thik keh raha hai .

Ritesh- waise wo to dekha jayeg a.but swato ka kya kare ek din to uske ghar wale usse dhoondege kab tak usse yanha rakhenge .

Vicky- wo ek baar thik ho jaye maine leke usse khud uske ghar chod aaunga tum tension na lo iss bare maine .

RB – par maien kya

Vicky- kahan maine ek baar bas ab iss bare maine koi discussion nahini hogi wo jab tak thik nahini ho jaati yanha reh sakti hai aur jaise hi wo thik hoti hai wo yanah se chali jayegi .. tu filhaal ke liye jab tak hamari shadi ka date nahini hua hai hum charo maine se koi yanah rookega .aur uske baad maine uske liye kuch intejaam kara doonga ..

Ritesh- maine bhi yehi keh raha hoon ..

RB – par tum yanah kyun rahoge maine ..

Vicky- tune meri baat suni na kya kaha .. shadi tak hum maine se koi yanah rahega bas finaal .. barna wo yanah nahini rahegi .. that’s it .

Anita – bohat ho gaya discussion mujhe bhook lagi hai .. chalo market chalte hai shopping karne wanhi kuch kha lenge ..

Ritesh- oh bhukad abhi dopehar ko market jayegi .. thodi der rukjaa fir evening ko jayenge ..

Anita- par bhuk lagi hai yaar ..

Ritesh- yaar had hai bhukaadpanna ki ruk maine kuch order kar deta hoon ..

Ritesh- tum sab ke liye bhi order kardeta hoon kuch .. sab batdo ek hi baar maien baad maien mat bolna ..

Sab kuch na kuch bolte hain aur ritesh order kardeta hai ..

Tab tak RB upar se mina didi ko bula deta hai aur kuch snack tab tak lagane ko bol deta hai ..

Mina kuch snacks le aati hai aur sab ko serve karne lagti hai .. tabhi bell bajne lagta hai ..

Vicky- didi lagta hai delivery wala aagaya shyad .

Mina- ji maine abhi le aati hoon ..

Mina gate ke pass chali jaati hai ..

Aur gate kholke wapas aajati hai ..


Mina – baba , Barsha mem shahab aaye hui hain ….
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Hello Everyone :hello:

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.


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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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