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Romance Taqdeer [Completed]
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Prologue
"Rajveer Singh" India's most richest, hottest and more over rudest bachelor.
ye kahani suru hoti hai Rajveer (Raj) ki success party wali raat ko. Party kis liye, Raj ko most desirable person of the year and business man of the year ka award mila tha. Thodi der party mai rukhne ke baad wo bina kisiko bole hi apne party se nikal jata hai. Aaj pura duniya uske kadmo mai hai per usse baas uski hi talash hai...
Aage janne ke liye bane rahiye bahut jald update de dunga.
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"Jo dard chupana chahate hai,
wo dard pe pehra rakhte hai,
padhle na gham koi chehre pe,
chehre pe chehra rakhte hai."
Raj bina kisiko bataye party se nikal gaya. Raat bahut ho gayi thy aur raste bhi khali tha. Magar raste se bhi jyada khalipan to uske ander tha. Wo ek sunsan jagah per jake rukh gaya aur car se bahar aagaya, uske hath mai aaj ki trophies thy. Wo Ashman ki aur dekh ke,
Raj : dekha Ruhi aaj mai desh ka sabse bada admi ban gaya hun, per tum mere paas nahi ho....paas kya tum to janha bhi hogi tumhe to pata bhi nahi hoga ki koi tumhe itna yaad karta hai. Per itni to tasalli hai mujhe ki tumhe to mai yaad bhi nahi hun. Itna bol kar wo hasne lagta hai.
Thodi der wanhi rehke wo ghar lout jata hai. Jaab wo ghar jata hai to uski behen Anu uska intezaar kar rahi thy. Jaab wo ghar mai ghusta hai aur Anu ki nazar uspe padti hai to Anu uthke jake sidhe Raj ke gale lag jati hai.
Anu : Raj bhai kanha thy aapko pata hai mai kitni dar gayi thy.
Raj (Anu ki pith sehlate huye) : aare kya ho gaya meri behen ko.
Anu : bhai aap yese mujhe bina bataye maat jaya karo.
Raj : chal thik hai meri Anu aage se tujhe bata ke jaunga, chal aab khana khila de bahut zoro se bhuk lagi hai.
Anu : thik hai aap jake pehle fresh ho jayiye mai khana lagati hun.
fir Raj apne karme ki aur chal deta hai fresh hone ke liye aur Anu kitchen mai khana nikal ne ke liye.
Rajveer Singh, aur Anu (Anushka Singh) dono bhai behen hai aur dono hi anath hai. Inke bare aage kahani mai pata chalega.
Thodi der baad Raj fresh hoke dinning table aake beth jata hai.
Raj : aur kitne der Anu.
Anu : baas 2 min, Anu kitchen se hi awaj lagati hai.
Ye lijiye bhai, aap ki favourite dish Sambar, Dosa aur gajar ka halwa. Ye thy Anu ki awaj aur wo sara plate Raj ke samne rakh deti hai.
Anu : wese bhai yesi unique choice aapki hi ho sakti hai. Ye kehke hasne lag jati hai.hehehe
Raj : sach hai mai hun hi unique. Chal hasna band kar aaja tu bhi khale.
Anu bhi Raj ke paas beth jati hai, "Bhai aap thik to ho na, aaj aap India's no.1 businessman aur most desirable man bane ho, fir bhi aap khush nahi lag rahe hai, kyun bhai?"
Raj : Anu bacha..chal khana khale aur wese bhi koi baat nahi hai aaj bus mujhe maa baba ko miss kar raha tha, aur tuna apne iss chote se dimag per jyada zor maat dala kar.
chal mun khol aur khale, aur uske baad dono ek dusre ko khilane lag jate hai aur issi tarah khana bhi khatam ho jata hai.
Raj : Anu kal mai mumbai ja raha hun, jo nayi company ki announcement ki thy maine aaj party mai usko mumbai mai open kiya hai. 1 mahine usse setup karne mai lagega to mai wanhi rahunga. Tu apna khyal rakhna aur wese bhi teri MBA ko bhi khatam hone mai 1 hi mahina baki hai fir aajana mere paas.
Anu : bhai aapna meri chinta maat karo mai apni khyal rakh lungi per aap wanha ja rahe hai to anath ashram jarur jana aur kaka se mil lena.
Raj : thik hai Anu. Chal aab so jate hai kal jana bhi hai. Good Night Anu.
Anu : good night bhai.
Dono bhai behen apne apne kamre mai chale jate hai sone ke liye.
Agle din Raj mumbai ke liye nikal gaya. Ye wanhi seher hai janha uska bachpan gujra tha. Uske dil mai bahut kuch chal raha tha. Ruhi se bhi to issi sehar mai hi mila tha ya ye kehlo ki mil kar bhi nahi mila tha. Yahi saab sochte sochte kaab mumbai pahunc gaya kuch pata hi nahi chala.
Driver car ko ek bade se banglow ke samne rokta hai.
Driver : Sir ghar aagaya hai.
Driver ke pukarne se Raj apne yaado se bahar nikalta hai, "thik hai, tum saman nikal kar le jao aur khana kha se aram karo, bahut der se car chala rahe ho. Ye car key mujhe de do mai aata hun.
Driver : ji sir.
Jesse ki Raj ne kaha tha driver sara saman nikal ke banglow ke ander chala jata hai aur Raj car leke nikal jata hai kahi aur.
Thodi der drive karne ke baad wo ek anath ashram ke samne aake rukta hai aur car se utar ke anath ashram ke ander chala jata hai. Yese hi anath ashram mai ghumte ghumte ek kamre ke aage aake rukh jata hai aur us kamre ko ache se dekhne lag jata hai.
Tabhi uske piche se awaj aati hai, "ye kamra bilkul wesa hi rakha hua hai jesa tu chod ke gaya tha Raj".
Raj jaab wo awaj ki disha ki aur ghumta hai to ek budha admi khade thy wo bhi ek dande ke sahare se.
Raj kaka kehke sidhe jake pehle uss admi ka pair chuta hai fir gale lag jata hai.
Kaka : (Raj ko gale lagate huye) mera bacha, kesa hai tu? Aur gudiya kesi hai? (Kaka Anu ko pyaar se gudiya kehte thy)
Raj : kaka mai to badhiya hun aur Anu bhi badhiya hai baas apko yaad karti rehti hai.
Kaka : hmm gudiya ko to akshar phone aata rehta hai per tera nahi aata hai kabhi bhi. Jyada hi busy rehta hai.
Raj : nahi nahi kaka, wo...wo...mai
Kaka : rehne de janta hun tujhe, tu jisse pyaar karta hai usse apna pyaar jata nahi pata hai.
Raj : hmm kaka aur yanhi mera sabse bada kamjori hai.
kaka : chod wo saab aa beth idhar, tere se bahut bate karni hai.
Fir dono kafi der tak bare karte hai.
Raj : chalo kaka aab mai chalta hun, kal office bhi jana hai, apna khyal rakhna aur bacho ka bhi.
Kaka : tu bhi apna aur gudiya rakhna, bye.
fir Raj apne ghar aajata hai aur kaam khatam karke dinner karke fir Anu se thodi der baate karke so jata hai.
Kaka : inko sabhi Rajesh kaka kehke pukar te hai. Ye ek anath ashram chalate hai.
jaab se Raj ne taraki ki hai taab se wo haar mahine ache khasse paisa de deta hi jisse ki in bacho ki ache se parvarish ho.
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Update 2
Raj ki iss sehar mai bahut se yaadein judi huyi hai kuch achi aur kuch buri.
Buri yaadon mai, issi seher mai Raj ki maa aur baap ki mout huyi thy, aur uske sabhi ristedaar no in dono bacho se apna muhn mod liya tha. Tab Anu baas 4 saal ki thy aur Raj 10 saal ka tha, tabhi Rajesh kaka ki najar in dono pe padi thy, aur wo un dono ko sath leke anath ashram chale aaye thy.
Kuch saal baad Raj ne 10th ke exam mai pure dist. mai top kiya aur usse ek bahut bade school mai scholarship mil gayi aage ki padhayi ke liye. Yahi se Raj ki taqdeer usse kisi se milwana chahati thy, yanhi tha Raj ka sabse achi yaadein.
Raj ne commerce liya aur Ruhi (ji han achi yaadein Ruhi ka hi tha, apko yaad to hoga, iska naam) aur Ruhi bhi issi school mai thy, aur wo non-medical ki thy. 6 mahine Ruhi ne baas Raj ke baare mai suna tha kyun ki Raj school ki magazine mai apna review likhta tha, jo ki Ruhi ko bahut pasand aate thy.
Ek din bahut zoro se barish ho rahi thy, kuch bacho ke maa baap unke bacho ko lene ke liye aaye thy aur kuch school bus mai bhi chale gaye thy. Raj bhi wanhi school ke paas apna sar chupa ke khada hua tha aur barish kaam hone ka intezar kar raha tha, tabhi usne dekha ki ek chota puppy (kutte ka bacha) bhig raha hai aur barish se bachne ki kosis kar raha hai.
Isse pehle Raj wanha pe ja pata uss puppy ke help ke liye, ek ladki aake uss puppy ko utha liya aur ek ped ke niche jake chod diya aur uski chatri (umbrella) bhi uske upar rakh diya taki uske upar barish na pade aur phir apna rumal bag se nikal ke puppy ke sar ke upar rakh diya taki wo aur bhi safe ho jaye. Raj baas uss ladki ko dekhe ja raha tha, Raj apna nazar uss ladki se hata hi nahi pa raha tha.
Wo saab kaam karke wo ladki apne car mai beth ke chali gayi. Raj baas usike baare sochta reh gaya. Wo ladki bahut hi zyada khubsurat thy. Iss baat ko bahut din ho gaye Raj usse bhula hi nahi pa raha tha usse baas uska chehra yaad aata rehta tha. Ek din kisi kaam se wo library gaya hua tha to usne wanha Ruhi ko dekha, Ruhi ko dekhne ke baad Raj ka khushi ka koi thikana hi nahi raha.
Jaab tak Ruhi wanha se chali nahi gayi tab tak Raj baas usse hi dekhe ja raha tha. Ruhi to chali gayi apne kitab ko rakh ke per kitab rakhne se pehle uss kitab se kuch gir gaya tha jo ki Raj ne dekh liya tha.
raj wanha jake uss paper ko utha ta hai aur kitab bhi nikal leta hai, wo kitab ek love story ki kitab thy aur wo paper pe Ruhi ne apna jajbat likhe huye thy.
"Agar aapka pyaar itna hi Sacha hai to kabhi bhi uske liye jhukna mat, kyun ki wo kabhi apko jhukne nahi dega, wo hi apki sabse badi takat banega." Raj ye padke uss paper ke niche kuch likhta hai fir usko kitab mai rakh ke library se chala jata hai.
Agle din jaab Ruhi wapas aati hai library aur kitab nikal ti hai padhne ke liye to wo paper pe kuch likha hua pati hai.
"Agar tum kisi se pure dil se pyaar karte ho to uski ek khushi ke liye jindegi bhar bhi jhuk jaoge aur agar nahi to tumhara pyaar kabhi sacha tha hi nahi". Ye mere bichar hai Ruhi ji, apka naam mujhe iss kitab pe likha mila aur wese bhi pure library ke iss kone mai ye kitab kisi aur ne nahi padhi hai. Wese mera naam..........
Agar aap puchogi to hi bataunga warna nahi.
Ruhi shock mai thy ki kisne uske jajbat ko samjha aur kuch samjhaya bhi, fir Ruhi kuch uss paper pe likhi aur kitab mai rakh ke chali gayi.
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Behtareen suruwat huyi hai... Lagta hai raj kisike pyar mein hai...
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Wo Kehte hai na jitni bhi duniya bhar ki khushiya hasil kar le ya paise, rutba par agar chaahne wala agar paas na ho to sab adhuri lagti hai...
raj bhi isse alag nahi.... aaj top ke business man hone ke baad bhi, itne Achievements ke baad bhi ek khali pan, ek adhura pan ushe kaatne ko daude... rah rah kar ushe uski pyar ruhi ki yaad aaye...
Shayad is baare mein anu ko pata nahi..
hmm.... shayad us anath asharam se gehra nata hai dono bhai bahan ka...
Khair...... Update kaafi dilchasp tha aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
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Bahot kam umr mein raj aur anu ne apne mom dad ko kho diye... wo dono kya chale gaye ye duniya chhod ke, idhar raj aur anu se muh mod liye unke hi apno ne.. unlogo ne ye tak nahi socha ki in dono bachho ka kya hoga... wo to bhala ho us ashram wale baba ka jinhone raj aur anu ko sahara diya.. di ek nayi ummid.... raj bahot hi talented ladka hai aur padhayi mein kaafi tez.... ishi baat se pata chale ki aaj jo wo hai uske piche uski mehnat, tez dimag aur sahi soch vichar hai...
So ushi daud mein ruhi se mulakat huyi thi... aur dekhte hi pyar ka ehsaas dilo dimag mein cha gaya...
Shayad ruhi bhi uske ehsaas ko bhali bhaanti mehsoos kar pa rahi thi...
baatein bhi suru huyi to paper pe likhe shadbo ke dwara, aur sath hi dono ke ehsaas bhi...
sach mein us shahar se kayi yaadein judi hai.. jin yaadon mein kabhi kabhi raj kho jata hai aaj bhi....
Khair... Bahot hi Behtareen update tha...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
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