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Thanks BhaiWelcome bhai as a writer... first scene se hi story interesting lagee... ek larka kisi aurat ka balatkar kar raha hai... aur ek larki usse aake bachati hain... lekin jab uske karmo se itna hi ghinn hain,., toh police ke hawale kyun na kar deti hain.. jab wo khud kee behno aur maao ko bhi izzat na deta hain... itna begairat larka ko kyun bardast kar rahi hain... Khair KARMA se koi nahin bach shakta hain.... kisi kee ungli karee thee usne... aaj hockey karne aa gaya hain....
Nice Start CongratulationsUpdate 1
Dophar k samay ek bde se aalishan ghr m ek room k andar 18 19 saal ka ladka ek aurat pr chada hua tha aur jordar dhakka lagaya ja raha tha aur vo aurat rote hue uss se chutne ki kosis kr rhi thi asa lg rha tha jese uss ghr m unke shivay koi aur nhi tha
Tbhi ekdaam de room ka darwaja khulta h aur ek 22 23 saal ki ek ladki andar akr jor se cheekte hue bolti h hramjade chod usse to vo ladka chokte hue uth khada hota h aur tbhi vo ldki uss jordar 4 5 thapad lagate hue khti aur kitni ladkiyon aur aurto ki jindingiya barbaad krega tb tk vo aurat dri shmi apne kpde phn chuki thi fort vo ladki uss aurat ko lkr nikal jaati h
Vo ladka gusse m bathroom me chla jata h aur kuch der baad nahakr bahr aata h aur so jaata kareeb 5 bje uski neend khulti h aur fresh hokar neche aata h to neeche hall uss ladki ki sath ek aurat bath k to rhi thi tbhi uss ladki ki najr ldke pr pdti h aur tb usse galyian dene lgti h haramjade kute hawasi phele to teri ye gandi harkate bhr thi to ab ghr ki nokrani bhi nhi chodte aur uske pass jake ek thappad lagati h tbhi vo ladka phir gusse m aa jata h aur ek ulta thapad markr kheta sali tu mere hr kaam me Tang adati h kuch bhi chain se nhi krne deti h tbhi uski maa usse thpd Marti h to vo ldka usse Dhaka dete hue bhr nikal jata h
Kuch der tk dono vhi bathi rone lgti h tbhi vo ladki boti h
Dekh liya maa usne rupa ka baltkar kiya h aur uska thoda sa bhi drr nhi h ab to muje bhi uss se drr lagta hai ki kbhi mere sath bhi asa hi na ho jaye aur rone lgti h
Raat ko vo ladka sarab ke nse m car chala rha tha aur gusse me bdabadye ja rha tha haramjadi kuti kuch bhi ajadi se nhi krne deti h sali ko chodunga nhi agli baar uska hi no h bhot sh liya sali mere p hath uthi h behn h to kya hua chodunga nhi uska usko apni randi bnauga fir dekhta hu mujko kese rokti h ki tbhi vo achanak se apni car ke break matra h use sheeshe neeche karke galiyan dene lagta madrchod gaadi ko lagyi h samne hata usko tbhi ek car uske peeche aakr rukti h tbhi dono car me se kuch gunde type ke log utrte h aur uske hockey stick se marne lagte h 10 15 mint marne ke baad vo ldka khta h kon ho kyo maar rhe ho
Gunda 1. bhot din m hath aaya h sala aur sare gunde usko dekhr hsne lgte hahahaha aur vo ldka neeche pda drd se tapad rha tha
Tbhi ek aur admi gadi se nikalta h aur khta b
Mujko to phchanta h naa aur ek kamini simle deta h aur apne sathiyo ko khta h dalo re sale ko gadi m aur ek gunda uski gaadi ko side me lagakar nikal jaate h .
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Ek gaon m subh k samay ek ladka frsh(mitti) pr soya hua tha usko jor jor se hilake ek ladki uthane lgi hui thi
Ladki . Abe kumb karan uth jaa kb tk sota rhega uthkar kuch kam bhi krn hoga
Ladka. Adhkhuli neend m kya yrr didi sone do naa kyu preshan kr rhi ho asa khkr vo chadr tankr phir so jata h
Ladki.uthja bhai mere phir tuje maa ke sath kaam pr bhi jana h tuje acha lagega ki maa akeli kaam kre Sara din
Ladka apni didi ki baat sunkar khada ho jata h
Aur lota lekar bhr nikal jata
Tbhi us ladki ki maa usse bolti h
Maa. Are Neha agr Ashu uth gaya ho to Priyanka k sath milkar jldi khana bna do
Chota sa intro
Rajesh Mehra : Umr 47 saal
Pta nhi jinda h bhi ya nhi 17 saal se koi ata ya pta nhi
Rohini Mehra : Umr 42 saal
Gaon ki sbse khubsurat mahila kaam karke sarir kafi majboot aur bhra hua ek tarh se gaon ke logon ki dream lady pr kisi ki tarf nhi dekhti h apne bacho ko jaan se bhi jada pyar krti h
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Priyanka Mehra: 22 saal
Nrm dil aur behd smjdaar jada kisi se baat nhi krti ghr ke andr hi rhne vali BSC complete kr chuki aage pdhai chod di h apne bhai bheno se bhot pyar krti h ye bhi apni maa ki trh hi behad sundar h
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Neha Mehra : 20 saal
Chulbuli hmesha hsti rhti h aur bhot hi majakiya apni bhai ko bhot chedti h aur pyar bhi bhot krti h Sundar apni maa bheno se bhi jada iski kuch sheliya h gaon me ye philal BSC kr rhi h
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Ashu Mehra : Abhi 18 ka hi hua h
Sundar aur ghet m kaam krne se sarir majboot ho chuka h apne pariwar se bhot pyaar krta h 12th karke pdhai chod chuka h majboori me
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To ab aage chalte h
To neha aur Priyanka milkar khana bnati h tbtk ashu bhi sb kaam khtm kr aa chuka tha fir charo milkar naashta krte h fir
Maa : tum dono bhn milkar kaam kr lena m aur aahu jangal se lakdiya aur fruits laake aate h
To dosto ab kuch gaon k baare me jaan lete h to ye gaon naa to jaada chota h naa jada bda ek traf iske phad h dusri taraf jungal Jha se ashu aur uski maa lkdi aur phl laakr bajr me becti h aur ek tarf khet h gaon valo k jisme ek chota sa tukda ashu ka bhi
To ashu aur uski maa jungal me nikal jaate jha pr jaake ashu lkdi kaata h aur uski maa phl ikhte krne lgti h
Vhii dusri taraf
Raat ko dono maa beti bhot samay tk roti rhti h aur bhukhi hi so jaati subh jb dono uthi h to ladki bina kuch khaye piye hi office nikal jaati h
Vhi maa jb ldke k room m jaati h to vo bhi tha vo usko pura ghr m dhkti h usko vo khi nhi milta to vo pura din ladke ka wait krti rhti h pr vo nhi aata to usko apne bete ki fikar hone lagti h fir saam k samay doorbell rang hoti h to vo sochti h vo aagya fir door kholne pr vo do police valo ko dekhti h
Police: Mam ye car aapki
Vo usko car k no plate ki photo dikhate h
Vo aurat:Haa ye hmari h kyo kya hua usko tension hone lgti h
Police: Hme ye main road pr mili h aap fine bhrkr usko pick kra le
Aur police vala chla jata h
Aurat andr aakr apne vakil ko call krti h aur kuch khti h aur kuch der baad ghr se nikalti h aur ek driver ko car pick krne ko khti hu chli jaati h
Vahi gaon m
Ashu ko lkdi kaate hue bhot der ho chuki thi tabhi uski maa uske paas aati h aur khti h beta aaja pani pee le aur kuch der aaram kr le
Aur vo ldka neeche aata h aur paani peekar khta h
Ashu : Maa hme kb tk uss thakur k krj tale dabe rhna padega hm kitne salo se usse pese de rhe hr baar puchne par vo 1 lakh hi baki btata h
Maa:kya kre beta vo bda aadmi h dra dhmka ke asa hi krta
Ashu:Maa m aaj hi thakur se hisab puchunga
Maa:acha beta chl ab ghr chalte h dophr ho gye h
Ashu:chlo maa
Doston btana jaroor kesa lga update