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Namaskar Mitro!


Hazir hon ek bar firse aap sab ke saamne.

tahe dil se shama chahta hon. kai kahaniyan likhne ke bawajud mai kahani chhod kalti maar gaya. 2 4 kahaniyon ke siva mai apni koi kahani puri nahi kar saka.

kya karta.....
HIMMAT-WALA ke jaisi koi story ban nahi paai. dil khatta hua to adhuri chhod bhaag gaya.

parantu.....

is baar ek tagde plot ke sath main aap sabhi ke saamne hazir hon. aur wada karta hon. is baar kahani ko adhhura nahi chhodonga. aur HIMMAT-WALA ke jaise is story ko bhi END tak pohnchaunga.. woh bhi zayada samay na lagate hue apne END tak pohnchgi.

kahne ko bade bade bol bole ja raha hon.

lekin.....

aap sab ke pyar aur bharpur support ke bina kuch bhi mumkin nahi ho paayega.

ek baar.....

last baar...

chahta hon..... aap sab mere sath jud jaaiye.. aur akhri bar mujhe azmaiye.. aisi maze ki story dunga is baar aap ko.. HIMMAT-WALA ko bhi bhul jaayenge.....

aisa main nahi.....

mera dil.....

mere irade bol rahe han.....

is baar ka mera josh alag ha.... junun alag ha..

aap bhi sab kuch bhul kar apna pyar aur support dikhaiye.. aur sath jud jaaiye.. jaise pahle mere sath jud chuke han.. pahli ki sabhi stories ko bhul jaaiye.. vaise bhi XP par hazaron stories pending padi hui han.. kuchh meri bhi sahi..

is baar aseem sawad dene wali, puri hone wali story ke sath jud jaaiye.....

story me wahi sab kuch hoga.. sex romance pyar mohabbat maar dhaar.....

kuchh aur bhi add hoga......

housefull cinema haal ki tarah yahan par bhi toot padiye.....



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IntroDuction.......


Harsh Chauhan: 18 hero of the story

Nalini Chauhan: 44 harsh chauhan ki maa.

5 sherdil bhaiyon ki ikloti bahan. sabse chhoti... sabse ladli bahan. jab tak mayke me rahi. rani bankar rahi. sabpar raj karti rahi.. nalini ki shadi usi ke pasand ke ladke se ki gayi. sasural me bhi nalini ko palkon par bithaya gaya. honeymoon ke liye pahle pura india ghumne ka plan banaya gaya.. desh me kai jaga ghumne ke bad apne pati vikram chauhan ke sath himaliya ke barf se dhake hue pahadon me ja pohnchi... wahan sadiyon se rah rahe ek wahshi kabile ke wahshiyon ne unpar hamla kar dia.. hamle me vikram chauhan mara gaya... sath kai guards raksha ke liye aaye the. zayada tar maare gaye.. jo zinda bach gaye woh vikram singh ke marit sharir ko utha kar wahan se wapis bhaag nikle. nalini chauhan wahshi kabile walun ke hathe chadhti hui wahan se bohut door dunya ki nazron se ojhal wahshi kabile me ja pohnchi. jahan uska koi apna nahi tha.


payal chauhan: 20
paridhi chauhan: 19


bhushan: 50 saal

ye ha wo vyakti.. jisne kabile ke balshali wahshiyon ke sath muqabla karne ke bad nalini chauhan ko jeet liya tha.


Harsh chauhan, payal aur paridhi teeno bhushan ki aulad han.. bhushan ne nalini par jabran kabza jama kar usay teen bachhon ki maa bana dia tha.



nalini chauhan ki zindagi ka ek hi maksad ha... apne parivar me wapis laut kar jana. wahin unke beech zindagi ki saansen puri karna. sath hi sath bhushan ka kata hua sar dekhna.. jisne uske sharir ko barson tak jabran kuchla tha......


nalini chauhan jo laadon me pali thi.. ab ek inteqam aur hasrat ki devi bankar rah gayi thi.

 

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Update: 01




bhushan bada hi tagda wahshi tha.. pahle hi teen salon me usne nalini ko teen baar maa bana dia tha. jab bhi nalini ne bachhe ko janam deti.. bhushan nalini ko dekh apni junglee moochhon ko tav de kar kahta..

bhushan: koi mard nahi ha is pure kabile me mujh jaisa... hahaha

nalini usay nafrat se dekh moh fer liya karti.

bhushan aur bhi zor se hasne lagta...

bhushan: tera ye guse wala chahra bhagwan kasam mujhe bohut pasand ha.. arre woh bhi koi nari ha.. jo apni ichha se mard ki aaghosh me aaye.. hahaha... tu mujhe badi pasand ha....

jab nalini ne harsh ko janam dia.. to bhushan ne sare kabile ki dawat kari... bhushan ki 2 patniyan aur bhi thi. wo kabile ke sardar ke baad 10 bade wahshiyon me jana jata tha. sardar ke bad koi uski takkar ka nahi tha..

nalini harsh ko liye apni lakdee ki jhonpdi se bahar aai.. aur dono hathu me harsh ko upar uthati hui bhare majme me cheekh kar boli

nalini: aaj se main apne tan man ka maalik mere bete harsh ko banati hon.

bhushan jo apni dusri dono patniyon ke sath bade gharoor ke sath betha hua tha.. wahan kabile ke bade bade nami girami wahshi bhi maujud the..

nalini ki baat sunkar bhushan pahle to hairan hua.. fur bepanah ghuse me aata hua talvar niyam se bahar nikaal kar nalini ki orr badha... nalini bhushan ko wahshi roop me dekh darr gai... lekin fir bhi wo cheekhti hui boli

nalini: kabile ke niyamo ke anusar koi bhi nari ho ya mard.. apni man marzi se kisi ko bhi chun sakti ha. maine bhi chun liya ha.. kyunki mai ab isi kabile ki ek sadasy hon...

payal aur paridhi bhi wahin thi. lekin itni badi nahi thi.. kuch samjh sakti.. lekin wo darr gai.. darr kar rone lagi...

bhushan talvar liye nalini ke karib pohnchta.. kabile ke sardar ne goonjdar awaz me kaha

sardar: rukkk jaaaaaaoooo bhushan

bhushan sardar ko dekh bola: nahi sardar.. mujhe mat roko.. mai is kameeni se apne apmaan ka badla le kar rahunga..

sardar: nahi bhushan.. tu kuch nahi kar sakta. niyam sab ke liye ek samman hann.. sadiyon se hamare purkhon ke banaye niyam mai to kyaa koi bhi nahi tod sakta.. ab tu is bahar wali se janam liye apne bete ke jawan hone tak intezar karega.. fir tu usse lad kar is bahar ko wali ko firse jeet sakta ha.. usse pahle na to tum ise kuch kah sakte ho.. aur na hi iski kokh se paida hue apne bete ko...

bhushan khunkhar nazron se nalini ko dekhta hua bola: mai janta hon. tuney aisa kyu kiya ??

fir bhushan sardar ko dekh goonjdar awaz me bola: sardar! ye nalini aaj bhi hamare kabile me nahi rahna chahti.. aaj bhi ye yahan se bhagne ki soche hue han

sardar ke sath sath bhushan ki baat par wahan khade hue sare wahshi zor zor se hasne lage

fir sardar bola: bhushan..... is kabile ke charon orr akash se baaten karte hue parbat han.... koi rasta nahi ha hamare kabile me aane ke liye.. na upar se na hi neeche se.... siva un gupt raston ke.. jo hamare purkhon ne banaye.. aur tum ye baat achhe se jante ho... fir bhi iske irade jaan kar tum darre hue ho

bhushan: mai darta warta kisi se nahi hon sardar.. mai to bass isliye kah raha tha.. ye aurat apne iradon se baaz nahi aayegi.

nalini: jab jaante ho mai yahan se wapis apni dunya me nahi ja sakti to fir baat hi khatam ho jati ha bhushan...

pahli bar bhari mahfil me bhushan ki izzat do kodi ki ho rahi thi. nalini aise usse kabhi nahi boli thi. hamesha usse darr kar rahi thi

nalini ke honto par bhushan ko tav dilane wali muskan ubhar aai: maine apne sharir par tera jabar khatam karke tujhe ek maat to de di ha bhushan...

fir bhushan ke karib aa kar boli: tere hath ki talvar se hi main mere bete se tera ye ghamandi sar katwaungi.. nalini chauhan naam ha mera.. mujhe dekhne walun ki mere bhai ankhen nikaal den.. tuney to fir bhi apne gande sharir se mere phoolon jaise sharir ko kuchla ha... ja ja kar kush saal aish ke ji le.. mera harsh jawan hokar tere dhad se tere sar ko alag karke hamesha ke liye mujhe apni bana lega.. fir wahi mujhe yahan se le kar bhi jaayega....

bhushan ag barsati ankhon se nalini chauhan ko dekhta raha.. der tak dekhta raha. nalini chauhan bhi uski ankhon me dekhti rahi...

fir.....

bhushan peeche hat zor se talvar zameen me gaadhta hua zor zor se hasne laga...

hahaha...

hahaha...

hahaha...

fir bhare majme ko dekh bola: ye moam ki bani aurat mujhe dhamki de rahi ha.. kahti ha... mera beta jawan hokar mere sar ko mere dhad se alag karke ise mujhse hamesha ke liye chheen lega....

hahaha....
hahaha....
hahaha....
hahaha....
hahaha....

sardar samet sab aur bhi zor zor se hasne lage... haste haste pet pakad kar dohre hone lage..

sardar hasta hua bola: bhushan fir to tere sar ko ache se dekh lena chahiye.. jald hi tera sar tere dhad se alag ho jane wala ha. hahaha

bhushan aur sab hass rahe the.. nalini sabko haste dekh buri tarah ghabra gai thi. ek to wahan akeli thi... kuch aur bhi bahar se apaharan kar ke laai gai ladkiyan thee.......... lekin wahan koi bhi nahi thi.. koi bhi khule aam kahin chal fir nahi sakti thi.. wahi ghum fir sakti thi.. jise ijazat di jaati thi..


bhushan fir nalini se bola: ye barf se dhake pahad.. aas paas ke jungle.. junglon me rahne wale junglee darinde aur hum sab wahshi.. hahaha..... tu aam si nari hokar itni badi badi baaten bol rahi ha.. tu kyaaaa kar sakti ha.. bhala tu kar hi kyaa sakti ha.. tu kuch nahi kar sakti... tu apne bete ko akele nahi paal sakti. usay mujhse door nahi rakh sakti.. tuney kaible ke niyamo ka prayog karte hue mujhse to apni jaan kuch barson ke liye bacha li... lekin ab mai tere bete ko tere jaisa nahi apne jaisa hi ek wahshi banaunga.... suna tuney.. jaa tu apna dil razi kar le.. mai aaj se tujhpar thuk raha hon. aur ye bhushan kabhi thuka hua nahi chaata karta.. tere hi bete ke roop me mai ek wahshi bankar tujhe din raat loonga.. suna tunye tu apne bete ko pyar dekar usay apna banayegi.. aur mai usay wahshi banaoga.. yahan hum sab wahshi han... harsh ki ragon me wahshi ka khun ha.. aur mera khun mere jaisa hi banega...... tu mujhse nafrat karti ha na.... harsh ko jawan ho lene de.. fir tujhe teri hi kokh se janme se akhri saans tak nafrat rahegi... hahaha... nafrat karti rahegi to apne hi bete se... hahaha. koi tera hamdard nahi hoga.... teri betiyan bhi nahi... wo bhi wahshi banegi... hahaha

sab zor zor se has rahe the. aur nalini ko chakkar aa rahe the.. wo harsh ko apni ankhon ke saamne karti dhundli ankhon se dekhne lagi.. fir mann me boli

nalini: kyaaaaaa tu bhi apni maa ke dukhi dil ki pukaar nahi sunega.. dekh yahan teri maa ke sath kaisa ghor anyaay ho raha ha... dekh beta tu bada hokar wahshi.. jo marzi bann... lekin mere doodh ki laaj tu kabhi mat bhulna.. ab to bhagwan ka sahara bhi nahi raha.. ek tera hi sahara ha mere dil ko.... tu mujhe nirash mat karna.......



nalini ko ek alag hi sardar ke jhonpde ke karib ek jhondi de di gai.. jahan wo apni dono betiyon aur harsh ke sath rahne wali.. bhushan bhi wahan aata rahta.. lekin wo ab nalini ke karib nahi aa sakta tha.. bass ab dono ke beech fasle the.. lekin baton se dono ek dusre ke liye zeher ugalte rahte the. bhushan kabhi payal aur paridhi ko to kabhi harsh ko apne sath le jata....

nalini ke ghar ka sara system bhushan aur uske dusre parivar wale chala rahe the. is maamle me sabhi niyamo par badi sakhti se chala karte the.


harsh panch varsh ka hua to bhushan usay apne sath jungle me shikar par lejane laga.. wo harsh ko apni tarah ka ek bada wahshi banana chahta tha.. nalini bhi kam nahi thi.. baki sara samay wo apni dono betiyon aur harsh ke sath rahte hue unke dil me apni mohabbat bharti raha karti.. teeno ko apni dunya ke kisse sunaya karti.. apne bhaiyon ki baaten karti.. wahan kon kon ha.. sab batati......

vikram chauhan se in teeno bachhon ka koi nata nahi tha.. vikram chauhan ki maut ka dard nalini ko bada tha.. lekin apni izzat kho dene ke dard ke aage, apnu se hamesha ke liye door ho jane ke dard ke aage vikram chauhan ki maut ka dard kuch bhi nahi tha..

nalini vikram chauhan ko bhul apne laksh ke liye din raat ek karne me lag gayi..

 

[Ritadanny]

Namaskar Mitro!


Hazir hon ek bar firse aap sab ke saamne.

tahe dil se shama chahta hon. kai kahaniyan likhne ke bawajud mai kahani chhod kalti maar gaya. 2 4 kahaniyon ke siva mai apni koi kahani puri nahi kar saka.

kya karta.....
HIMMAT-WALA ke jaisi koi story ban nahi paai. dil khatta hua to adhuri chhod bhaag gaya.

parantu.....

is baar ek tagde plot ke sath main aap sabhi ke saamne hazir hon. aur wada karta hon. is baar kahani ko adhhura nahi chhodonga. aur HIMMAT-WALA ke jaise is story ko bhi END tak pohnchaunga.. woh bhi zayada samay na lagate hue apne END tak pohnchgi.

kahne ko bade bade bol bole ja raha hon.

lekin.....

aap sab ke pyar aur bharpur support ke bina kuch bhi mumkin nahi ho paayega.

ek baar.....

last baar...

chahta hon..... aap sab mere sath jud jaaiye.. aur akhri bar mujhe azmaiye.. aisi maze ki story dunga is baar aap ko.. HIMMAT-WALA ko bhi bhul jaayenge.....

aisa main nahi.....

mera dil.....

mere irade bol rahe han.....

is baar ka mera josh alag ha.... junun alag ha..

aap bhi sab kuch bhul kar apna pyar aur support dikhaiye.. aur sath jud jaaiye.. jaise pahle mere sath jud chuke han.. pahli ki sabhi stories ko bhul jaaiye.. vaise bhi XP par hazaron stories pending padi hui han.. kuchh meri bhi sahi..

is baar aseem sawad dene wali, puri hone wali story ke sath jud jaaiye.....

story me wahi sab kuch hoga.. sex romance pyar mohabbat maar dhaar.....

kuchh aur bhi add hoga......

housefull cinema haal ki tarah yahan par bhi toot padiye.....



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