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UPDATE 10
AGYAKARI BETA
AGYAKARI BETA
At hospital
ICU ke bhar raj , rajni or shrikant teeno maujood the
sab kafi jyada dukhi najar aa rhe the
Paas me rakhi ek bench par rajni kafi jyada dukhi halat me shrikant ke bagal se baithi thi
Shrikant bhi bas kafi shant sthiti me baitha tha
Thodi hi door par raj apne dono hath bandhe peeth divar se tikaye khada tha
Uske chehre se hi pata chal rha tha ki is vakt vo kitna jyada pareshan hai
Bar bar apni gardan ghumakar vo ICU ki taraf dekhta or fir nirasha me apna sar divar se tika deta
Abki bar bhi usne khuch esa hi kiya
Usne firse ICU ki taraf dekha lekin fir use abhas hua ki koi bhot der se sirf use hi dhek raha hai
Ye or koi nhi balki shrikant tha jo raj ko dhek raha tha vo dhek pa raha tha ki raj kitna jyada tension me hai
Jab Raj ne shrikant se najre milayi to raj jyada der usse najre na mila paya or usne apni najre neeche kar li
Shayad vo anjali ke sath jo bhi hua uska jimmedar khud ko man rha tha .bar bar uske dimag me vo hi pal aata jab Anjali ne Raj ko bachane ke liye khud ki jaan dav par laga di .
Kal ka vo scene bar bar uske chehre ke samne aata
FLASHBACK
Jab Raj paglo ki tarah Anjali ko god me liye ro Raha tha , use to laga ki Anjali shayad sachme use bachate hue apni jaan gava baithi
Or ye sochte hi uske man me glani or dukh ke mile Jule bhaav Ane lage
Use jaise khud se hi nafrat hone lagi
RAJ : ( chillate hue) sab meri galti hai
......sab meri galtiiiiiiiiiiii haaiiiiiiiiiNa jane vo khud ko us rat kitna jyada kos rha tha
Anjali ko god me liye vo vahi us sunsan sadak par baitha hua tha
Usne Anjali ke chehre ko hilakar use hosh me lane ka bhi kafi prayas kra . Par vo nakam rha .
Uske dil ki dhadkan har pal tez ho rhi thi
Anjali ki maut ke bare me sochkar hi uska shareer kap utha
Lekin tabhi Usne foran Anjali ka hath uthaya or uski nerves check kri
Anjali ki nereves ab bhi chal rhi thi
Ye jante hi raj ke aansuo se bheege chehre par ek ummid bhari muskan aa gyi
Par ab use Anjali ko jald se jald hospital phuchana tha .lekin kaise ? Vo dono us sadak par bilkul akele the
Raj aafat me apna phone check karne laga . Shayad vo kisi ko apni madad ke liye bula sakta tha . Lekin jab usne apna phone ki halat dekhi to paya ki phone ki screen poori tarah toot chuki hai or vo chalu bhi nhi ho rha tha .
Shayad khuch der pehle hui ladai ki vajah se phone ka ye haal hua tha .
Usne gusse me apna phone jameen par de pataka
Raj : ( gusse me )arghhhhhhh
hUsi vakt ek tez roshni uski ankho par padi jiske chalte use apni ankho ko apne hatho se dhakna pada
Usne samne dekha to ye koi car thi car me kon hai ankho pe pad rhi tez roshni ki vajah se vo nhi dhek paa rha tha
Car uske ekdum kareeb akar ruki
*Click *
Or tezi se us car ka gate khula
Jisme se ek ladki tezi se bhar nikli or daudkar raj or Anjali ke paas ayi
" Ooh my god , kya hua inhe ? "
Raj jo kal ki ghatnao ko yad kar rha tha Vo achanak hi apni soch se bhar aya jab usne dekha ki abhi abhi operation room se koi bhar nikla
BACK TO PRESENT
*Click *
ICU ka darvaja jaese hi khula
Raj apni yaado se bhar aya
ek behad hi khoobsurat ladki lab coat pehne room se bhar nikli or bhar nikalte hi uski najar sabse pehle raj par gyi
INTRO TIME
Prachi : ( ek docktor . Usne 3 saal pehle apni mbbs ki padhayi poori kri thi or ab yha is hospital me doctor hai .)
Prachi ko jaise hi raj ne dekha raj diwar se hatkar sidha khada ho gaya or foran uske paas jane laga
Par uske kadam ruk gaye kyuki uske jane se pehle hi rajni ne prachi par apne sawalo ki bauchar kar di
Rajni : beta kaisi hai ab Anjali ? Vo thik to ho jayegi na ? Khatre ki koi bat to nhi hai na ?
Shrikant : haa doctor plz batiye ab kaisi halat hai meri beti ki?
Prachi ko dekhte hi rajni or shrikant ne uske upar sawalo ki bauchar shuru kar di
Vhi raj bhi do kadam door khada bas prachi ke khuch bolne ka intezar kar raha tha
Vo bhot umeed se uski taraf dekh raha tha
Prachi : dekhiye ap log ghabraiye mat . Ab vo khatre se bhar hai ,bullet unke shoulder ko Bas Chu kar nikal gyi thi . Hamne treatment kar diya hai . Bas unhe ab thode rest ki jarurat hai .
Ye baat prachi ne rajni or shrikant se bolte hue last me raj ki or dekha
Prachi se ye sunkar ki ab Anjali khatre se bhar hai sab ke dil ko jaese ab tassali mili
Raj : ( breathing) fuuuuu
Par raj , raj ne to ye sunte hi apne dono hath kamar par rakhte hue ek chain ki saaas li
Raj : ham unse mil sakte hai ?
Raj ne jaldbaji me phucha
Prachi : nhi , abhi unhe hosh nhi aya hai ek bar hosh aa jaye fir ap log unse mil sakte hi .
Raj : hmm
Prachi sabko Anjali ki halat ke bare me batakar vha se chali gyi
Ab vha bache bas shrikant rajni or raj
Raj : ye sab meri vajah se hua hai , mere tum logo ke sath rehne se uski jaan par bhi khatra aa gya , sab meri galti hai .
Raj ne jaese hi ye bola shrikant or rajni dono raj ko ektak dekhne lage
raj : Mai janta hu tum dono mujse gussa ho ,aur hona bhi chaiye .sala mujh jaisa gunda jiske bhi sath rhega uske sath bura hi hona hai .. to behtar hai ki Mai ab tum logo se door chala jau or ho sake to muje maaf kar Dena
Itna bolkar raj mud gya or jane laga
Shrikant: ruko !!
Raj rukna to bilkul nhi chahta tha par shrikant ki tez awaj ne use rukne par majboor kar diya
*Tak tak *
Tez kadmo ki awaj ke sath shrikant Raj ke samne akar khad ho gaya
Shrikant : ye kya keh rhe ho beta ?
Raj : shi keh raha hu , ab muje yha se chale jana chaiye
Shrikant: beta kya tumhe lagta hai ki Anjali tumhare jane ke baad khush reh paegi ?
Raj : muje nhi pata par par uska mujse door rehna hi shi hai
Itna bolkar raj mudkar vha se jane laga
Rajni : raj !
Rajni or Shrikant ne use kafi awaje di par raj to bas bina ruke vha se chala gaya
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Dusri taraf Behosh padi Anjali ko bhi ab hosh Ane laga tha
Uski ankhe dheere dheere jaese hi khulne lagi . Use apne samne shrikant or rajni baithe hue najar aye .
Anjali ne jab khudko is halat me dekha or apne apko hospital me paya to use kal ki sari ghatnaye yaad Ane lagi .
Vo jaldbaji me khadi hone ki koshish karti hai jis vajah se use ek tez dard hota hota hai
Anjali : "Ahhhhhhh"
Rajni foran apni beti ko uthne se rokti hai
Rajni: nhi beta ! leti rho ,abhi tumhari halat shi nhi hai
Anjali : mai yha...mai yha kaese phauchi or raa....raj kha hai ?
Anjali ne hosh me ate hi khuch bola to esa bola ki jiska jawab shrikant or rajni kisi ke paas nhi tha
Anjali ke is sawal par dono ek dusre ki shakal dekhne lage
Anjali : ap log khuch bol kyu nahi rahe bataiye na raj kha hai ?...khi use khuch hua to nhi hai na ? ...vo thik to hai na ?
Anjali bhot jyada tension me puchti hai
Shrikant or rajni ke ese maun chehre dekhkar na jane use kitne bure bure khayal aa rhe the
Shrikant : beta tum abhi aaram Karo ,ham badme aaram se bat karte hai , raj hamare sath hi hai .
Anjali : nhi ap log khuch chupa rhe ho . Ap raj ko bulao muje usse milna hai
Anjali ab jid par aa gayi
Shrikant Anjali ke is jiddi swabhav ko achhe se pehchante the . Anjali hmesha apni jid puri karwakar hi chorti hai . Lekin ab vo use kya jawab dete ? Ye ki raj ab chala gya hai .ye sunte hi Anjali ki kharab halat or jyada kharab ho sakti thi . Isliye vo use nhi batana chahte the
Lekin fir bhi jab Anjali nhi mani or khud bed se uthne lagi to ant me unhe laga ki use sab batana hi thik hai
Shrikant : beta raj ab hme chorkar .....
*MAI YHA HU *
Shrikant ki bat puri hone se pehle hi gate ki taraf se ek awaj ayi
Us awaj ki taraf dekhte hi rajni or shrikant hairaan the vhi Anjali ke chehre par bhot khushi jhalak rhi thi
Anjali ko ab jakar Chen ki saans ayi .
Awaj raj ki hi thi
Raj dheere dheere Anjali ki taraf chalkar aya
Raj : ab kaise lag rha hai ?
Anjali : ab mai thik hu , bas halka sa dard hai
Anjali muskrate hue boli
Raj jo kabse apni ankhe Anjali se chura rha tha achanak use apne hath par ek komal sparsh hua
Usne dekha ki Anjali ne apne ek hath me uska hath tham liya hai
Anjali : isme teri koi galti nhi hai . Samja ?
Raj ke dil ki bat kitni jaldi Anjali samaj gyi .vo raj ko uske guilt se bhar nikalna chahti thi .
Raj : muje tujse akele me bat karni hai
Raj ki bat sunkar Anjali ne rajni or shrikant ki taraf dekha or vo dono hi foran uthkar bhar chale gaye
Anjali : bol kya bat hai ?
Raj : mai jaa rha hu
Raj ki bat sunkar Anjali jo ki raj ka hath thame hue thi usne or jyada kaskar uska hath pakad liya
Anjali : par kha ?kyu ?
Raj : kyuki Mai tuje or khatre me nhi dalna chahta .
Anjali : to fir chorde na ye sab kaam .
Raj : itna aasan nhi hai jitna tu sochti hai , agar mai chorna bhi chau to vo log Mera peecha nhi chodenge
Raj ka matlab Raghu se tha jiske sath vo itne salo se kaam kr rha tha
Uski bat bhi shi thi agar koi insaan shi raste par ana bhi chahe to bhi 100 log hese hote hai jo use sudharne nhi dete
Raj ne apna hath Anjali ke hatho se churaya , Anjali ko raj ke ese bartav se bhot jyada peeda ho rha thi
Raj : chalta hu
Raj Anjali se itna bolkar vha se jane laga
Anjali : ek minute !
Anjali ne jate hue raj ko awaj lagayi
Raj Anjali ki awaj sunkar palta
Anjali : tuje ye lagta hai na ki meri ye halat teri vajah se hui hai? Or mene apni jaan dav par lagakar teri Jaan bachayi hai ?
Raj ne anjali ke is sawal par bas apni gardan hila kar hami bhar di
Anjali : to uske badle ab muje bhi khuch chaiye tujse
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar thoda hairan hua
Raj : kya chaiye tuje ?
Anjali : ek vada
Raj : kaisa vada
Anjali : chinta mat kar tujse hamesha mere sath rehne ke liye nhi khungi
Raj confuse tha ki Anjali ko ab kya vada chaiye usse
Raj : thik hai , kyuki tune meri jaan bachayi hai sirf isliye
Anjali : tune papa se vada kiya tha na ki tu ek mahine tak mere sath rhega abhi usme 25 din baki
Raj ko Anjali ki bat sunkar apna shrikant se kiya Vada yad aya
Raj : to muje 25 din or tere sath rehna hoga ?
Anjali : nhi sirf itna nhi , ye vada to tune papa se kiya tha , muje khuch or chaiya
Raj : kya ?
Anjali : mai ye chahti hu ki in 25 din tak tu meri har baat mane ek achhe bete ki tarah .
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar Anjali ko ajeeb tarike se dekhne laga
Anjali : bol manjoor hai
Raj : ye ab kya Naya natak hai , ye sab karne se khuch nhi hone vala , mai nhi badal sakta
Anjali : koi bat nhi , mai bas chahti hu ki tu jane se pehle bas thode din ke liye muje apni maa ka darza de . Sirf thode din mera beta bankar reh . Or fir tune ek mahine hmare sath rehne ka vada bhi to Kiya hai use poora nhi karega kya ?
Raj soch me pad gaya ye kaisi mang hai akhir vo kaese esa vada kar sakta hai
Bachpan se aj tak vo apni sharto se Jiya hai , usne kisi ke bap ka bhi kehna ajtak nhi mana or Anjali usse keh rhi thi ki vo 25 din tak uske tarike se jiye , uski har bat Mane
Anjali : soch kya rha , mene tere bare me suna tha ki Raju bhai koi vada nhi torta or na hi kisika udhar rakhta hai , par muje lagta hai sab jhuth tha , sab affah hai
Ab bat raj ke atamsamman par aa gyi thi
Bat ekdum sach thi raj ne ajtak kisi ka esan nhi liya tha or yha to Anjali ne uski Jaan bachayi thi vo bhi apni jaan dav par lagakar
Use vo hargiz mana nhi kar sakta tha
Raj : thik hai manjoor hai . 25 din tak mai teri har bat manunga . Lekin fir tuje bhi ek vada karna hoga ki uske baad tu muje jane se nhi rokegi aur mere paas Ane ki koshish bhi nhi karegi
Raj ki is bat se Anjali andar tak hil gyi lekin fir bhi jaese use yakeen tha apne upar
Anjali : thik hai nhi rokungi .
Mahool firse shant ho gya or ab raj ko vha se nikalna hi shi laga
Raj : chal ab tu Aram kar
Anjali : ek minute !
Raj : hmm?
Anjali : mai chahti hu ab tu muje maa bola kre
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar muskraya
Jaise keh raha ho ki achha maajak hai or bhar ki or jane laga
Anjali bhi raj ka behaviour dhek kar thoda muskrati hai
Anjali : bhul gaya na abhi abhi Kiya hua vada , agle 25 din tuje meri har bat manni padegi .
Raj ki chehre ki muskan ab gayab ho gayi
Jaldi jaldi me usne vada kar to Diya par ab use ahsas ho rha tha ki usne kya kar diya
25 din tak vo anjali ki koi bat nhi tal sakta
Vo kha jayega , kha rhega kya khayega kya piyegi ab Agle 25 din Anjali decide karegi
Ab use Ahsas hua ki Anjali ne ye vada usse kyu liya
Anjali : abse tu muje maa bolega , chal jaldi bol muje tere muh se sunna hai
Raj bas ankhe fade Anjali ko chup chap dhek rha tha
Anjali : boool ! Ya vada bhool gaya apna ?
Raj : (dheere se ) maa
Raj ne bhot mushkil se dheemi awaj me kha . Use bhot jyada ajeeb lag rha tha
Anjali : mene suna nhi jara tez bol na beta
Raj ko Anjali ka khud ko yu pareshan karna bilkul pasand nhi aya or vo muh fulaye bhar chala gaya
Or Anjali vha bethi raj ke gusse par muskrati rhi
Anjali : ek or safalta ke liye shukriya Prabhu . Papa ne shi kha tha ek mahine me bhot khuch ho sakta hai dekho na raj mere sath rehne bhi laga aur to aur ab vo meri har bat bhi manega .
Anjali apni is dusri safalta par khush ho rhi thi vhi raj khud ko Kosta hua neeche hospital ke hall me aya . Anjali ki kharab halat dekhkar pata nhi kya hua jo usne ye vada kar diya . Vo use mana nhi kar paya .
Or Anjali ab iska kaese fayda uthati hai ye to usne abhi abhi dhek hi liya .
Usne tension me apni jeb se ciggerate nikalkar use jalakar kash mari
Abhi vo hall me khada maze se ciggerate pi rha tha
Achanak uski nazar hospital ke bhar akar ruki ek car par padi
Car me se ek behad hi khoobsurat aurat bhar nikli
Aurat ki umar lagbhag 30 - 35 ki hogi
Vo aurat dhekne se kisi bade Ghar se lag rhi thi .
Raj cigerette ke kash Leta hue use hi dhek raha tha . Khuch der ke liye us aurat ki nazar bhi raj se takrayi thi par ye jyada der ke liye nhi tha
Raj us aurat ko dhyan se dhek raha tha ki achanak hi uske kandhe par use kisi ka hath mehsoos hua
Vo palta to usne dekha ki samne Dr. Prachi khadi hai
Prachi : can't you see, yha smoking karna allowed nhi
Prachi ne paas me lage board ki taraf ishara karte hue ye bat khi
Raj ne prachi ki bat ko jaise anusna hi kar diya or cigerette peena chalu rakha
Prachi : tumhe sunai nhi deta kya ?
Abki bar bhi raj ne prachi ke sawal ka koi jawab nhi Diya use to jaise prachi ka ye gusse se ubla hua chehra achha lag rha tha
Prachi ka gussa ab or badh gaya usne abki bar raj ke hath se ciggerate cheeni or jameen par fek di or apni sandel se use kuchal diya
Prachi : rascle
Itna bolkar prachi mudkar chal padi
Raj : vese kal madad karne ke liye shukriya.
Prachi raj ki bat sunkar palti or jhillate hue boli
Prachi : tumhari mom ki halat kharab thi or mai ek doctor hu to madad na karne ka to sawal hi nhi tha .
Vo ladki prachi hi thi jisne kal rat anajli ko hospital phuchane me raj ki madad kri thi
Prachi gusse me bolkar vha se muh banate hue chali gyi
Raj khada khada bas muskrata raha
Usne dubara palatkar dekha to vo aurat or jise vo pehle dhek raha tha vo is vakt reception par khadi receptionist se khuch phuch Rahi thi
Vo kya bol rhi thi raj ko sunayi nhi de rha tha
*Excuse me Mrs . Anjali konse ward me hai *
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guys thode din se khuch pareshaniyo ke chalte update thoda late hai
lekin ab sab normal hai or ab next update Monday Tak aa jayega
koshish karunga ki next week se Weekly do updates dene ki
thankyou all
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Nice updateUPDATE 10
AGYAKARI BETA
At hospital
ICU ke bhar raj , rajni or shrikant teeno maujood the
sab kafi jyada dukhi najar aa rhe the
Paas me rakhi ek bench par rajni kafi jyada dukhi halat me shrikant ke bagal se baithi thi
Shrikant bhi bas kafi shant sthiti me baitha tha
Thodi hi door par raj apne dono hath bandhe peeth divar se tikaye khada tha
Uske chehre se hi pata chal rha tha ki is vakt vo kitna jyada pareshan hai
Bar bar apni gardan ghumakar vo ICU ki taraf dekhta or fir nirasha me apna sar divar se tika deta
Abki bar bhi usne khuch esa hi kiya
Usne firse ICU ki taraf dekha lekin fir use abhas hua ki koi bhot der se sirf use hi dhek raha hai
Ye or koi nhi balki shrikant tha jo raj ko dhek raha tha vo dhek pa raha tha ki raj kitna jyada tension me hai
Jab Raj ne shrikant se najre milayi to raj jyada der usse najre na mila paya or usne apni najre neeche kar li
Shayad vo anjali ke sath jo bhi hua uska jimmedar khud ko man rha tha .bar bar uske dimag me vo hi pal aata jab Anjali ne Raj ko bachane ke liye khud ki jaan dav par laga di .
Kal ka vo scene bar bar uske chehre ke samne aata
FLASHBACK
Jab Raj paglo ki tarah Anjali ko god me liye ro Raha tha , use to laga ki Anjali shayad sachme use bachate hue apni jaan gava baithi
Or ye sochte hi uske man me glani or dukh ke mile Jule bhaav Ane lage
Use jaise khud se hi nafrat hone lagi
RAJ : ( chillate hue) sab meri galti hai
Na jane vo khud ko us rat kitna jyada kos rha tha
Anjali ko god me liye vo vahi us sunsan sadak par baitha hua tha
Usne Anjali ke chehre ko hilakar use hosh me lane ka bhi kafi prayas kra . Par vo nakam rha .
Uske dil ki dhadkan har pal tez ho rhi thi
Anjali ki maut ke bare me sochkar hi uska shareer kap utha
Lekin tabhi Usne foran Anjali ka hath uthaya or uski nerves check kri
Anjali ki nereves ab bhi chal rhi thi
Ye jante hi raj ke aansuo se bheege chehre par ek ummid bhari muskan aa gyi
Par ab use Anjali ko jald se jald hospital phuchana tha .lekin kaise ? Vo dono us sadak par bilkul akele the
Raj aafat me apna phone check karne laga . Shayad vo kisi ko apni madad ke liye bula sakta tha . Lekin jab usne apna phone ki halat dekhi to paya ki phone ki screen poori tarah toot chuki hai or vo chalu bhi nhi ho rha tha .
Shayad khuch der pehle hui ladai ki vajah se phone ka ye haal hua tha .
Usne gusse me apna phone jameen par de pataka
Raj : ( gusse me )arghhhhhhh
Usi vakt ek tez roshni uski ankho par padi jiske chalte use apni ankho ko apne hatho se dhakna pada
Usne samne dekha to ye koi car thi car me kon hai ankho pe pad rhi tez roshni ki vajah se vo nhi dhek paa rha tha
Car uske ekdum kareeb akar ruki
*Click *
Or tezi se us car ka gate khula
Jisme se ek ladki tezi se bhar nikli or daudkar raj or Anjali ke paas ayi
" Ooh my god , kya hua inhe ? "
Raj jo kal ki ghatnao ko yad kar rha tha Vo achanak hi apni soch se bhar aya jab usne dekha ki abhi abhi operation room se koi bhar nikla
BACK TO PRESENT
*Click *
ICU ka darvaja jaese hi khula
Raj apni yaado se bhar aya
ek behad hi khoobsurat ladki lab coat pehne room se bhar nikli or bhar nikalte hi uski najar sabse pehle raj par gyi
INTRO TIME
Prachi : ( ek docktor . Usne 3 saal pehle apni mbbs ki padhayi poori kri thi or ab yha is hospital me doctor hai .)
Prachi ko jaise hi raj ne dekha raj diwar se hatkar sidha khada ho gaya or foran uske paas jane laga
Par uske kadam ruk gaye kyuki uske jane se pehle hi rajni ne prachi par apne sawalo ki bauchar kar di
Rajni : beta kaisi hai ab Anjali ? Vo thik to ho jayegi na ? Khatre ki koi bat to nhi hai na ?
Shrikant : haa doctor plz batiye ab kaisi halat hai meri beti ki?
Prachi ko dekhte hi rajni or shrikant ne uske upar sawalo ki bauchar shuru kar di
Vhi raj bhi do kadam door khada bas prachi ke khuch bolne ka intezar kar raha tha
Vo bhot umeed se uski taraf dekh raha tha
Prachi : dekhiye ap log ghabraiye mat . Ab vo khatre se bhar hai ,bullet unke shoulder ko Bas Chu kar nikal gyi thi . Hamne treatment kar diya hai . Bas unhe ab thode rest ki jarurat hai .
Ye baat prachi ne rajni or shrikant se bolte hue last me raj ki or dekha
Prachi se ye sunkar ki ab Anjali khatre se bhar hai sab ke dil ko jaese ab tassali mili
Raj : ( breathing) fuuuuu
Par raj , raj ne to ye sunte hi apne dono hath kamar par rakhte hue ek chain ki saaas li
Raj : ham unse mil sakte hai ?
Raj ne jaldbaji me phucha
Prachi : nhi , abhi unhe hosh nhi aya hai ek bar hosh aa jaye fir ap log unse mil sakte hi .
Raj : hmm
Prachi sabko Anjali ki halat ke bare me batakar vha se chali gyi
Ab vha bache bas shrikant rajni or raj
Raj : ye sab meri vajah se hua hai , mere tum logo ke sath rehne se uski jaan par bhi khatra aa gya , sab meri galti hai .
Raj ne jaese hi ye bola shrikant or rajni dono raj ko ektak dekhne lage
raj : Mai janta hu tum dono mujse gussa ho ,aur hona bhi chaiye .sala mujh jaisa gunda jiske bhi sath rhega uske sath bura hi hona hai .. to behtar hai ki Mai ab tum logo se door chala jau or ho sake to muje maaf kar Dena
Itna bolkar raj mud gya or jane laga
Shrikant: ruko !!
Raj rukna to bilkul nhi chahta tha par shrikant ki tez awaj ne use rukne par majboor kar diya
*Tak tak *
Tez kadmo ki awaj ke sath shrikant Raj ke samne akar khad ho gaya
Shrikant : ye kya keh rhe ho beta ?
Raj : shi keh raha hu , ab muje yha se chale jana chaiye
Shrikant: beta kya tumhe lagta hai ki Anjali tumhare jane ke baad khush reh paegi ?
Raj : muje nhi pata par par uska mujse door rehna hi shi hai
Itna bolkar raj mudkar vha se jane laga
Rajni : raj !
Rajni or Shrikant ne use kafi awaje di par raj to bas bina ruke vha se chala gaya
*****
Dusri taraf Behosh padi Anjali ko bhi ab hosh Ane laga tha
Uski ankhe dheere dheere jaese hi khulne lagi . Use apne samne shrikant or rajni baithe hue najar aye .
Anjali ne jab khudko is halat me dekha or apne apko hospital me paya to use kal ki sari ghatnaye yaad Ane lagi .
Vo jaldbaji me khadi hone ki koshish karti hai jis vajah se use ek tez dard hota hota hai
Anjali : "Ahhhhhhh"
Rajni foran apni beti ko uthne se rokti hai
Rajni: nhi beta ! leti rho ,abhi tumhari halat shi nhi hai
Anjali : mai yha...mai yha kaese phauchi or raa....raj kha hai ?
Anjali ne hosh me ate hi khuch bola to esa bola ki jiska jawab shrikant or rajni kisi ke paas nhi tha
Anjali ke is sawal par dono ek dusre ki shakal dekhne lage
Anjali : ap log khuch bol kyu nahi rahe bataiye na raj kha hai ?...khi use khuch hua to nhi hai na ? ...vo thik to hai na ?
Anjali bhot jyada tension me puchti hai
Shrikant or rajni ke ese maun chehre dekhkar na jane use kitne bure bure khayal aa rhe the
Shrikant : beta tum abhi aaram Karo ,ham badme aaram se bat karte hai , raj hamare sath hi hai .
Anjali : nhi ap log khuch chupa rhe ho . Ap raj ko bulao muje usse milna hai
Anjali ab jid par aa gayi
Shrikant Anjali ke is jiddi swabhav ko achhe se pehchante the . Anjali hmesha apni jid puri karwakar hi chorti hai . Lekin ab vo use kya jawab dete ? Ye ki raj ab chala gya hai .ye sunte hi Anjali ki kharab halat or jyada kharab ho sakti thi . Isliye vo use nhi batana chahte the
Lekin fir bhi jab Anjali nhi mani or khud bed se uthne lagi to ant me unhe laga ki use sab batana hi thik hai
Shrikant : beta raj ab hme chorkar .....
*MAI YHA HU *
Shrikant ki bat puri hone se pehle hi gate ki taraf se ek awaj ayi
Us awaj ki taraf dekhte hi rajni or shrikant hairaan the vhi Anjali ke chehre par bhot khushi jhalak rhi thi
Anjali ko ab jakar Chen ki saans ayi .
Awaj raj ki hi thi
Raj dheere dheere Anjali ki taraf chalkar aya
Raj : ab kaise lag rha hai ?
Anjali : ab mai thik hu , bas halka sa dard hai
Anjali muskrate hue boli
Raj jo kabse apni ankhe Anjali se chura rha tha achanak use apne hath par ek komal sparsh hua
Usne dekha ki Anjali ne apne ek hath me uska hath tham liya hai
Anjali : isme teri koi galti nhi hai . Samja ?
Raj ke dil ki bat kitni jaldi Anjali samaj gyi .vo raj ko uske guilt se bhar nikalna chahti thi .
Raj : muje tujse akele me bat karni hai
Raj ki bat sunkar Anjali ne rajni or shrikant ki taraf dekha or vo dono hi foran uthkar bhar chale gaye
Anjali : bol kya bat hai ?
Raj : mai jaa rha hu
Raj ki bat sunkar Anjali jo ki raj ka hath thame hue thi usne or jyada kaskar uska hath pakad liya
Anjali : par kha ?kyu ?
Raj : kyuki Mai tuje or khatre me nhi dalna chahta .
Anjali : to fir chorde na ye sab kaam .
Raj : itna aasan nhi hai jitna tu sochti hai , agar mai chorna bhi chau to vo log Mera peecha nhi chodenge
Raj ka matlab Raghu se tha jiske sath vo itne salo se kaam kr rha tha
Uski bat bhi shi thi agar koi insaan shi raste par ana bhi chahe to bhi 100 log hese hote hai jo use sudharne nhi dete
Raj ne apna hath Anjali ke hatho se churaya , Anjali ko raj ke ese bartav se bhot jyada peeda ho rha thi
Raj : chalta hu
Raj Anjali se itna bolkar vha se jane laga
Anjali : ek minute !
Anjali ne jate hue raj ko awaj lagayi
Raj Anjali ki awaj sunkar palta
Anjali : tuje ye lagta hai na ki meri ye halat teri vajah se hui hai? Or mene apni jaan dav par lagakar teri Jaan bachayi hai ?
Raj ne anjali ke is sawal par bas apni gardan hila kar hami bhar di
Anjali : to uske badle ab muje bhi khuch chaiye tujse
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar thoda hairan hua
Raj : kya chaiye tuje ?
Anjali : ek vada
Raj : kaisa vada
Anjali : chinta mat kar tujse hamesha mere sath rehne ke liye nhi khungi
Raj confuse tha ki Anjali ko ab kya vada chaiye usse
Raj : thik hai , kyuki tune meri jaan bachayi hai sirf isliye
Anjali : tune papa se vada kiya tha na ki tu ek mahine tak mere sath rhega abhi usme 25 din baki
Raj ko Anjali ki bat sunkar apna shrikant se kiya Vada yad aya
Raj : to muje 25 din or tere sath rehna hoga ?
Anjali : nhi sirf itna nhi , ye vada to tune papa se kiya tha , muje khuch or chaiya
Raj : kya ?
Anjali : mai ye chahti hu ki in 25 din tak tu meri har baat mane ek achhe bete ki tarah .
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar Anjali ko ajeeb tarike se dekhne laga
Anjali : bol manjoor hai
Raj : ye ab kya Naya natak hai , ye sab karne se khuch nhi hone vala , mai nhi badal sakta
Anjali : koi bat nhi , mai bas chahti hu ki tu jane se pehle bas thode din ke liye muje apni maa ka darza de . Sirf thode din mera beta bankar reh . Or fir tune ek mahine hmare sath rehne ka vada bhi to Kiya hai use poora nhi karega kya ?
Raj soch me pad gaya ye kaisi mang hai akhir vo kaese esa vada kar sakta hai
Bachpan se aj tak vo apni sharto se Jiya hai , usne kisi ke bap ka bhi kehna ajtak nhi mana or Anjali usse keh rhi thi ki vo 25 din tak uske tarike se jiye , uski har bat Mane
Anjali : soch kya rha , mene tere bare me suna tha ki Raju bhai koi vada nhi torta or na hi kisika udhar rakhta hai , par muje lagta hai sab jhuth tha , sab affah hai
Ab bat raj ke atamsamman par aa gyi thi
Bat ekdum sach thi raj ne ajtak kisi ka esan nhi liya tha or yha to Anjali ne uski Jaan bachayi thi vo bhi apni jaan dav par lagakar
Use vo hargiz mana nhi kar sakta tha
Raj : thik hai manjoor hai . 25 din tak mai teri har bat manunga . Lekin fir tuje bhi ek vada karna hoga ki uske baad tu muje jane se nhi rokegi aur mere paas Ane ki koshish bhi nhi karegi
Raj ki is bat se Anjali andar tak hil gyi lekin fir bhi jaese use yakeen tha apne upar
Anjali : thik hai nhi rokungi .
Mahool firse shant ho gya or ab raj ko vha se nikalna hi shi laga
Raj : chal ab tu Aram kar
Anjali : ek minute !
Raj : hmm?
Anjali : mai chahti hu ab tu muje maa bola kre
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar muskraya
Jaise keh raha ho ki achha maajak hai or bhar ki or jane laga
Anjali bhi raj ka behaviour dhek kar thoda muskrati hai
Anjali : bhul gaya na abhi abhi Kiya hua vada , agle 25 din tuje meri har bat manni padegi .
Raj ki chehre ki muskan ab gayab ho gayi
Jaldi jaldi me usne vada kar to Diya par ab use ahsas ho rha tha ki usne kya kar diya
25 din tak vo anjali ki koi bat nhi tal sakta
Vo kha jayega , kha rhega kya khayega kya piyegi ab Agle 25 din Anjali decide karegi
Ab use Ahsas hua ki Anjali ne ye vada usse kyu liya
Anjali : abse tu muje maa bolega , chal jaldi bol muje tere muh se sunna hai
Raj bas ankhe fade Anjali ko chup chap dhek rha tha
Anjali : boool ! Ya vada bhool gaya apna ?
Raj : (dheere se ) maa
Raj ne bhot mushkil se dheemi awaj me kha . Use bhot jyada ajeeb lag rha tha
Anjali : mene suna nhi jara tez bol na beta
Raj ko Anjali ka khud ko yu pareshan karna bilkul pasand nhi aya or vo muh fulaye bhar chala gaya
Or Anjali vha bethi raj ke gusse par muskrati rhi
Anjali : ek or safalta ke liye shukriya Prabhu . Papa ne shi kha tha ek mahine me bhot khuch ho sakta hai dekho na raj mere sath rehne bhi laga aur to aur ab vo meri har bat bhi manega .
Anjali apni is dusri safalta par khush ho rhi thi vhi raj khud ko Kosta hua neeche hospital ke hall me aya . Anjali ki kharab halat dekhkar pata nhi kya hua jo usne ye vada kar diya . Vo use mana nhi kar paya .
Or Anjali ab iska kaese fayda uthati hai ye to usne abhi abhi dhek hi liya .
Usne tension me apni jeb se ciggerate nikalkar use jalakar kash mari
Abhi vo hall me khada maze se ciggerate pi rha tha
Achanak uski nazar hospital ke bhar akar ruki ek car par padi
Car me se ek behad hi khoobsurat aurat bhar nikli
Aurat ki umar lagbhag 30 - 35 ki hogi
Vo aurat dhekne se kisi bade Ghar se lag rhi thi .
Raj cigerette ke kash Leta hue use hi dhek raha tha . Khuch der ke liye us aurat ki nazar bhi raj se takrayi thi par ye jyada der ke liye nhi tha
Raj us aurat ko dhyan se dhek raha tha ki achanak hi uske kandhe par use kisi ka hath mehsoos hua
Vo palta to usne dekha ki samne Dr. Prachi khadi hai
Prachi : can't you see, yha smoking karna allowed nhi
Prachi ne paas me lage board ki taraf ishara karte hue ye bat khi
Raj ne prachi ki bat ko jaise anusna hi kar diya or cigerette peena chalu rakha
Prachi : tumhe sunai nhi deta kya ?
Abki bar bhi raj ne prachi ke sawal ka koi jawab nhi Diya use to jaise prachi ka ye gusse se ubla hua chehra achha lag rha tha
Prachi ka gussa ab or badh gaya usne abki bar raj ke hath se ciggerate cheeni or jameen par fek di or apni sandel se use kuchal diya
Prachi : rascle
Itna bolkar prachi mudkar chal padi
Raj : vese kal madad karne ke liye shukriya.
Prachi raj ki bat sunkar palti or jhillate hue boli
Prachi : tumhari mom ki halat kharab thi or mai ek doctor hu to madad na karne ka to sawal hi nhi tha .
Vo ladki prachi hi thi jisne kal rat anajli ko hospital phuchane me raj ki madad kri thi
Prachi gusse me bolkar vha se muh banate hue chali gyi
Raj khada khada bas muskrata raha
Usne dubara palatkar dekha to vo aurat or jise vo pehle dhek raha tha vo is vakt reception par khadi receptionist se khuch phuch Rahi thi
Vo kya bol rhi thi raj ko sunayi nhi de rha tha
*Excuse me Mrs . Anjali konse ward me hai *
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lekin ab sab normal hai or ab next update Monday Tak aa jayega
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AGYAKARI BETA
At hospital
ICU ke bhar raj , rajni or shrikant teeno maujood the
sab kafi jyada dukhi najar aa rhe the
Paas me rakhi ek bench par rajni kafi jyada dukhi halat me shrikant ke bagal se baithi thi
Shrikant bhi bas kafi shant sthiti me baitha tha
Thodi hi door par raj apne dono hath bandhe peeth divar se tikaye khada tha
Uske chehre se hi pata chal rha tha ki is vakt vo kitna jyada pareshan hai
Bar bar apni gardan ghumakar vo ICU ki taraf dekhta or fir nirasha me apna sar divar se tika deta
Abki bar bhi usne khuch esa hi kiya
Usne firse ICU ki taraf dekha lekin fir use abhas hua ki koi bhot der se sirf use hi dhek raha hai
Ye or koi nhi balki shrikant tha jo raj ko dhek raha tha vo dhek pa raha tha ki raj kitna jyada tension me hai
Jab Raj ne shrikant se najre milayi to raj jyada der usse najre na mila paya or usne apni najre neeche kar li
Shayad vo anjali ke sath jo bhi hua uska jimmedar khud ko man rha tha .bar bar uske dimag me vo hi pal aata jab Anjali ne Raj ko bachane ke liye khud ki jaan dav par laga di .
Kal ka vo scene bar bar uske chehre ke samne aata
FLASHBACK
Jab Raj paglo ki tarah Anjali ko god me liye ro Raha tha , use to laga ki Anjali shayad sachme use bachate hue apni jaan gava baithi
Or ye sochte hi uske man me glani or dukh ke mile Jule bhaav Ane lage
Use jaise khud se hi nafrat hone lagi
RAJ : ( chillate hue) sab meri galti hai
Na jane vo khud ko us rat kitna jyada kos rha tha
Anjali ko god me liye vo vahi us sunsan sadak par baitha hua tha
Usne Anjali ke chehre ko hilakar use hosh me lane ka bhi kafi prayas kra . Par vo nakam rha .
Uske dil ki dhadkan har pal tez ho rhi thi
Anjali ki maut ke bare me sochkar hi uska shareer kap utha
Lekin tabhi Usne foran Anjali ka hath uthaya or uski nerves check kri
Anjali ki nereves ab bhi chal rhi thi
Ye jante hi raj ke aansuo se bheege chehre par ek ummid bhari muskan aa gyi
Par ab use Anjali ko jald se jald hospital phuchana tha .lekin kaise ? Vo dono us sadak par bilkul akele the
Raj aafat me apna phone check karne laga . Shayad vo kisi ko apni madad ke liye bula sakta tha . Lekin jab usne apna phone ki halat dekhi to paya ki phone ki screen poori tarah toot chuki hai or vo chalu bhi nhi ho rha tha .
Shayad khuch der pehle hui ladai ki vajah se phone ka ye haal hua tha .
Usne gusse me apna phone jameen par de pataka
Raj : ( gusse me )arghhhhhhh
Usi vakt ek tez roshni uski ankho par padi jiske chalte use apni ankho ko apne hatho se dhakna pada
Usne samne dekha to ye koi car thi car me kon hai ankho pe pad rhi tez roshni ki vajah se vo nhi dhek paa rha tha
Car uske ekdum kareeb akar ruki
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Or tezi se us car ka gate khula
Jisme se ek ladki tezi se bhar nikli or daudkar raj or Anjali ke paas ayi
" Ooh my god , kya hua inhe ? "
Raj jo kal ki ghatnao ko yad kar rha tha Vo achanak hi apni soch se bhar aya jab usne dekha ki abhi abhi operation room se koi bhar nikla
BACK TO PRESENT
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ICU ka darvaja jaese hi khula
Raj apni yaado se bhar aya
ek behad hi khoobsurat ladki lab coat pehne room se bhar nikli or bhar nikalte hi uski najar sabse pehle raj par gyi
INTRO TIME
Prachi : ( ek docktor . Usne 3 saal pehle apni mbbs ki padhayi poori kri thi or ab yha is hospital me doctor hai .)
Prachi ko jaise hi raj ne dekha raj diwar se hatkar sidha khada ho gaya or foran uske paas jane laga
Par uske kadam ruk gaye kyuki uske jane se pehle hi rajni ne prachi par apne sawalo ki bauchar kar di
Rajni : beta kaisi hai ab Anjali ? Vo thik to ho jayegi na ? Khatre ki koi bat to nhi hai na ?
Shrikant : haa doctor plz batiye ab kaisi halat hai meri beti ki?
Prachi ko dekhte hi rajni or shrikant ne uske upar sawalo ki bauchar shuru kar di
Vhi raj bhi do kadam door khada bas prachi ke khuch bolne ka intezar kar raha tha
Vo bhot umeed se uski taraf dekh raha tha
Prachi : dekhiye ap log ghabraiye mat . Ab vo khatre se bhar hai ,bullet unke shoulder ko Bas Chu kar nikal gyi thi . Hamne treatment kar diya hai . Bas unhe ab thode rest ki jarurat hai .
Ye baat prachi ne rajni or shrikant se bolte hue last me raj ki or dekha
Prachi se ye sunkar ki ab Anjali khatre se bhar hai sab ke dil ko jaese ab tassali mili
Raj : ( breathing) fuuuuu
Par raj , raj ne to ye sunte hi apne dono hath kamar par rakhte hue ek chain ki saaas li
Raj : ham unse mil sakte hai ?
Raj ne jaldbaji me phucha
Prachi : nhi , abhi unhe hosh nhi aya hai ek bar hosh aa jaye fir ap log unse mil sakte hi .
Raj : hmm
Prachi sabko Anjali ki halat ke bare me batakar vha se chali gyi
Ab vha bache bas shrikant rajni or raj
Raj : ye sab meri vajah se hua hai , mere tum logo ke sath rehne se uski jaan par bhi khatra aa gya , sab meri galti hai .
Raj ne jaese hi ye bola shrikant or rajni dono raj ko ektak dekhne lage
raj : Mai janta hu tum dono mujse gussa ho ,aur hona bhi chaiye .sala mujh jaisa gunda jiske bhi sath rhega uske sath bura hi hona hai .. to behtar hai ki Mai ab tum logo se door chala jau or ho sake to muje maaf kar Dena
Itna bolkar raj mud gya or jane laga
Shrikant: ruko !!
Raj rukna to bilkul nhi chahta tha par shrikant ki tez awaj ne use rukne par majboor kar diya
*Tak tak *
Tez kadmo ki awaj ke sath shrikant Raj ke samne akar khad ho gaya
Shrikant : ye kya keh rhe ho beta ?
Raj : shi keh raha hu , ab muje yha se chale jana chaiye
Shrikant: beta kya tumhe lagta hai ki Anjali tumhare jane ke baad khush reh paegi ?
Raj : muje nhi pata par par uska mujse door rehna hi shi hai
Itna bolkar raj mudkar vha se jane laga
Rajni : raj !
Rajni or Shrikant ne use kafi awaje di par raj to bas bina ruke vha se chala gaya
*****
Dusri taraf Behosh padi Anjali ko bhi ab hosh Ane laga tha
Uski ankhe dheere dheere jaese hi khulne lagi . Use apne samne shrikant or rajni baithe hue najar aye .
Anjali ne jab khudko is halat me dekha or apne apko hospital me paya to use kal ki sari ghatnaye yaad Ane lagi .
Vo jaldbaji me khadi hone ki koshish karti hai jis vajah se use ek tez dard hota hota hai
Anjali : "Ahhhhhhh"
Rajni foran apni beti ko uthne se rokti hai
Rajni: nhi beta ! leti rho ,abhi tumhari halat shi nhi hai
Anjali : mai yha...mai yha kaese phauchi or raa....raj kha hai ?
Anjali ne hosh me ate hi khuch bola to esa bola ki jiska jawab shrikant or rajni kisi ke paas nhi tha
Anjali ke is sawal par dono ek dusre ki shakal dekhne lage
Anjali : ap log khuch bol kyu nahi rahe bataiye na raj kha hai ?...khi use khuch hua to nhi hai na ? ...vo thik to hai na ?
Anjali bhot jyada tension me puchti hai
Shrikant or rajni ke ese maun chehre dekhkar na jane use kitne bure bure khayal aa rhe the
Shrikant : beta tum abhi aaram Karo ,ham badme aaram se bat karte hai , raj hamare sath hi hai .
Anjali : nhi ap log khuch chupa rhe ho . Ap raj ko bulao muje usse milna hai
Anjali ab jid par aa gayi
Shrikant Anjali ke is jiddi swabhav ko achhe se pehchante the . Anjali hmesha apni jid puri karwakar hi chorti hai . Lekin ab vo use kya jawab dete ? Ye ki raj ab chala gya hai .ye sunte hi Anjali ki kharab halat or jyada kharab ho sakti thi . Isliye vo use nhi batana chahte the
Lekin fir bhi jab Anjali nhi mani or khud bed se uthne lagi to ant me unhe laga ki use sab batana hi thik hai
Shrikant : beta raj ab hme chorkar .....
*MAI YHA HU *
Shrikant ki bat puri hone se pehle hi gate ki taraf se ek awaj ayi
Us awaj ki taraf dekhte hi rajni or shrikant hairaan the vhi Anjali ke chehre par bhot khushi jhalak rhi thi
Anjali ko ab jakar Chen ki saans ayi .
Awaj raj ki hi thi
Raj dheere dheere Anjali ki taraf chalkar aya
Raj : ab kaise lag rha hai ?
Anjali : ab mai thik hu , bas halka sa dard hai
Anjali muskrate hue boli
Raj jo kabse apni ankhe Anjali se chura rha tha achanak use apne hath par ek komal sparsh hua
Usne dekha ki Anjali ne apne ek hath me uska hath tham liya hai
Anjali : isme teri koi galti nhi hai . Samja ?
Raj ke dil ki bat kitni jaldi Anjali samaj gyi .vo raj ko uske guilt se bhar nikalna chahti thi .
Raj : muje tujse akele me bat karni hai
Raj ki bat sunkar Anjali ne rajni or shrikant ki taraf dekha or vo dono hi foran uthkar bhar chale gaye
Anjali : bol kya bat hai ?
Raj : mai jaa rha hu
Raj ki bat sunkar Anjali jo ki raj ka hath thame hue thi usne or jyada kaskar uska hath pakad liya
Anjali : par kha ?kyu ?
Raj : kyuki Mai tuje or khatre me nhi dalna chahta .
Anjali : to fir chorde na ye sab kaam .
Raj : itna aasan nhi hai jitna tu sochti hai , agar mai chorna bhi chau to vo log Mera peecha nhi chodenge
Raj ka matlab Raghu se tha jiske sath vo itne salo se kaam kr rha tha
Uski bat bhi shi thi agar koi insaan shi raste par ana bhi chahe to bhi 100 log hese hote hai jo use sudharne nhi dete
Raj ne apna hath Anjali ke hatho se churaya , Anjali ko raj ke ese bartav se bhot jyada peeda ho rha thi
Raj : chalta hu
Raj Anjali se itna bolkar vha se jane laga
Anjali : ek minute !
Anjali ne jate hue raj ko awaj lagayi
Raj Anjali ki awaj sunkar palta
Anjali : tuje ye lagta hai na ki meri ye halat teri vajah se hui hai? Or mene apni jaan dav par lagakar teri Jaan bachayi hai ?
Raj ne anjali ke is sawal par bas apni gardan hila kar hami bhar di
Anjali : to uske badle ab muje bhi khuch chaiye tujse
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar thoda hairan hua
Raj : kya chaiye tuje ?
Anjali : ek vada
Raj : kaisa vada
Anjali : chinta mat kar tujse hamesha mere sath rehne ke liye nhi khungi
Raj confuse tha ki Anjali ko ab kya vada chaiye usse
Raj : thik hai , kyuki tune meri jaan bachayi hai sirf isliye
Anjali : tune papa se vada kiya tha na ki tu ek mahine tak mere sath rhega abhi usme 25 din baki
Raj ko Anjali ki bat sunkar apna shrikant se kiya Vada yad aya
Raj : to muje 25 din or tere sath rehna hoga ?
Anjali : nhi sirf itna nhi , ye vada to tune papa se kiya tha , muje khuch or chaiya
Raj : kya ?
Anjali : mai ye chahti hu ki in 25 din tak tu meri har baat mane ek achhe bete ki tarah .
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar Anjali ko ajeeb tarike se dekhne laga
Anjali : bol manjoor hai
Raj : ye ab kya Naya natak hai , ye sab karne se khuch nhi hone vala , mai nhi badal sakta
Anjali : koi bat nhi , mai bas chahti hu ki tu jane se pehle bas thode din ke liye muje apni maa ka darza de . Sirf thode din mera beta bankar reh . Or fir tune ek mahine hmare sath rehne ka vada bhi to Kiya hai use poora nhi karega kya ?
Raj soch me pad gaya ye kaisi mang hai akhir vo kaese esa vada kar sakta hai
Bachpan se aj tak vo apni sharto se Jiya hai , usne kisi ke bap ka bhi kehna ajtak nhi mana or Anjali usse keh rhi thi ki vo 25 din tak uske tarike se jiye , uski har bat Mane
Anjali : soch kya rha , mene tere bare me suna tha ki Raju bhai koi vada nhi torta or na hi kisika udhar rakhta hai , par muje lagta hai sab jhuth tha , sab affah hai
Ab bat raj ke atamsamman par aa gyi thi
Bat ekdum sach thi raj ne ajtak kisi ka esan nhi liya tha or yha to Anjali ne uski Jaan bachayi thi vo bhi apni jaan dav par lagakar
Use vo hargiz mana nhi kar sakta tha
Raj : thik hai manjoor hai . 25 din tak mai teri har bat manunga . Lekin fir tuje bhi ek vada karna hoga ki uske baad tu muje jane se nhi rokegi aur mere paas Ane ki koshish bhi nhi karegi
Raj ki is bat se Anjali andar tak hil gyi lekin fir bhi jaese use yakeen tha apne upar
Anjali : thik hai nhi rokungi .
Mahool firse shant ho gya or ab raj ko vha se nikalna hi shi laga
Raj : chal ab tu Aram kar
Anjali : ek minute !
Raj : hmm?
Anjali : mai chahti hu ab tu muje maa bola kre
Raj Anjali ki bat sunkar muskraya
Jaise keh raha ho ki achha maajak hai or bhar ki or jane laga
Anjali bhi raj ka behaviour dhek kar thoda muskrati hai
Anjali : bhul gaya na abhi abhi Kiya hua vada , agle 25 din tuje meri har bat manni padegi .
Raj ki chehre ki muskan ab gayab ho gayi
Jaldi jaldi me usne vada kar to Diya par ab use ahsas ho rha tha ki usne kya kar diya
25 din tak vo anjali ki koi bat nhi tal sakta
Vo kha jayega , kha rhega kya khayega kya piyegi ab Agle 25 din Anjali decide karegi
Ab use Ahsas hua ki Anjali ne ye vada usse kyu liya
Anjali : abse tu muje maa bolega , chal jaldi bol muje tere muh se sunna hai
Raj bas ankhe fade Anjali ko chup chap dhek rha tha
Anjali : boool ! Ya vada bhool gaya apna ?
Raj : (dheere se ) maa
Raj ne bhot mushkil se dheemi awaj me kha . Use bhot jyada ajeeb lag rha tha
Anjali : mene suna nhi jara tez bol na beta
Raj ko Anjali ka khud ko yu pareshan karna bilkul pasand nhi aya or vo muh fulaye bhar chala gaya
Or Anjali vha bethi raj ke gusse par muskrati rhi
Anjali : ek or safalta ke liye shukriya Prabhu . Papa ne shi kha tha ek mahine me bhot khuch ho sakta hai dekho na raj mere sath rehne bhi laga aur to aur ab vo meri har bat bhi manega .
Anjali apni is dusri safalta par khush ho rhi thi vhi raj khud ko Kosta hua neeche hospital ke hall me aya . Anjali ki kharab halat dekhkar pata nhi kya hua jo usne ye vada kar diya . Vo use mana nhi kar paya .
Or Anjali ab iska kaese fayda uthati hai ye to usne abhi abhi dhek hi liya .
Usne tension me apni jeb se ciggerate nikalkar use jalakar kash mari
Abhi vo hall me khada maze se ciggerate pi rha tha
Achanak uski nazar hospital ke bhar akar ruki ek car par padi
Car me se ek behad hi khoobsurat aurat bhar nikli
Aurat ki umar lagbhag 30 - 35 ki hogi
Vo aurat dhekne se kisi bade Ghar se lag rhi thi .
Raj cigerette ke kash Leta hue use hi dhek raha tha . Khuch der ke liye us aurat ki nazar bhi raj se takrayi thi par ye jyada der ke liye nhi tha
Raj us aurat ko dhyan se dhek raha tha ki achanak hi uske kandhe par use kisi ka hath mehsoos hua
Vo palta to usne dekha ki samne Dr. Prachi khadi hai
Prachi : can't you see, yha smoking karna allowed nhi
Prachi ne paas me lage board ki taraf ishara karte hue ye bat khi
Raj ne prachi ki bat ko jaise anusna hi kar diya or cigerette peena chalu rakha
Prachi : tumhe sunai nhi deta kya ?
Abki bar bhi raj ne prachi ke sawal ka koi jawab nhi Diya use to jaise prachi ka ye gusse se ubla hua chehra achha lag rha tha
Prachi ka gussa ab or badh gaya usne abki bar raj ke hath se ciggerate cheeni or jameen par fek di or apni sandel se use kuchal diya
Prachi : rascle
Itna bolkar prachi mudkar chal padi
Raj : vese kal madad karne ke liye shukriya.
Prachi raj ki bat sunkar palti or jhillate hue boli
Prachi : tumhari mom ki halat kharab thi or mai ek doctor hu to madad na karne ka to sawal hi nhi tha .
Vo ladki prachi hi thi jisne kal rat anajli ko hospital phuchane me raj ki madad kri thi
Prachi gusse me bolkar vha se muh banate hue chali gyi
Raj khada khada bas muskrata raha
Usne dubara palatkar dekha to vo aurat or jise vo pehle dhek raha tha vo is vakt reception par khadi receptionist se khuch phuch Rahi thi
Vo kya bol rhi thi raj ko sunayi nhi de rha tha
*Excuse me Mrs . Anjali konse ward me hai *
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