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Nice Update Bro.
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Mai Bas Itna Hi Kahunga Bro Ke Story Complete Kariye Chahe Salon (Years) Le Lijiye.
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Aur Agar Ho Sake To Daily Na Sahi Par Week Me 1,2 Ya 3 Updates Jarur Dijiye Iss Se Ham Readers Ko Bhi Tasalli Rahegi Ke Story Chal Rahi Hai Band Nahi Hui Hai.
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And Last Me Mafi Chahunga Agar Maine Koi Galat Bat Keh Di Ho To.
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By The Way Thanks For Update.

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Nice update Biradar

UPDATE NO 16


Mohit:-pagal woh behan hai meri ab chle

Dono ne coffee pee li thi toh dono bike se nikl lete hai iss baat se befikar ke college me aaj kuch kand hone wala hai dono pyar bhari baate kare jaa rahe the subh thi toh traffic ka thoda kaam hona jayaj hi tha

Dono lagbhag college poch hi gye the ke ek car aage aa kar ruk jati hai

Car ko dekh avni dar jati hai aur car se 10 log nikl jate hai par jo last me niklta hai usse dekh dono jada hairan nhi hote par avni ghabra jati hai

Mohit iske liye tyar tha woh dekh raha tha sab ke hatho me hathyar the par last ko dekh mohit gusse se apne hath kass leta hai par Avni mohit ke hath pakad leti gai jis se mohit ruk jata hai ..

Ab aage...........

Samne raj tha sath me uske dost the sab ke hath me hockey Bessball rod sab the sab ke sab ke sab gusse me the

Sab ko dekh avni Raj ke baju ko kass ke pakad leti hai

Raj:-behanchhod Tu aaj nhi bache gaa

Mohit:-dekh yaha kuch hoga tujhe v preshani hogi aur mujhe bhi toh yaha se chlte hai bahar

Raj:-maa chuda gya sab kuch aaj nhi tu bachne wala samjh le

Mohit:-avni tum yaha se jao

Avni:-main nhi jao gyi tumhe chhod plss chalo yaha se plss

Mohit:-maine bola naa jao yaha se main dekh luga

Avni:-main aryan ko call karti ho

Mohit dekhta hai avni ke aakho me halke aasu aa gye the woh uske dono gaalo ko apne hatho me pakad leta hai aur aakho me dekh raj ke samne hi mohit avni ke hotho par kiss kar deta hai

Jis se toh Raj ke jhhat ke baal jal gye the daat bich gye the

Mohit:-tum bas mujhpe viswas rakho aur jao yaha se

Raj:-behanchhod tune.......

Raj ne abhi gali hi di thi ke Mohit aage badh Raj ki gardan pakad leta hai

Mohit:-tune meri behan ko gali di

Raj:-Mohit ki gardan pakad) sale tune meri avni ko kiss kaise kiya

Mohit:-teri avni meri hone wali biwi hai agar ab kabhi naam bhi liya toh jubaan khich luga

Raj:-salo maaro isse aaj yeh rahe gaa ya main

Mohit bhi jaldi se Raj ko dhaka de deta hai khud ko tyar karta uss se pehle hi uske pith par ek hockey lagti hai woh piche mud kar dekhta hai toh fir uske piche se rod lagta hai

Mohit:-aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh.... Behanchhod

Mohit bola hi tha ke tabhi uske ek side se baseball laga toh fir pith par hockey laga Mohit sambhal nhi paa raha tha lagatar uske uper kabhi hockey toh kabhi baseball toh kabhi rod padhne lagta hai

Mohit ki halat bahut buri ho gyi thi Mohit uthne ki khosis kar rhaa tha woh kar nhi paa raha tha par tabhi sab marna band kar dete hai Mohit ki halat bahut kharab thi

Aas pass student hi student the par koi bhi aage aa naa rok raha tha naa kuch kar raha tha par tabhi avni teacher ke sath aa gyi sath me varsha bhi thi woh samne Mohit ki halat dekh ghabra gyi thi

Teacher:-Raj yeh sab kya hai band karo isse

Raj:-sunno sir aap mujhe college se bahar karna chahta ho kar do par abhi bich me maat aana nhi acha nhi hoga

Raj ki baat sunn aur mohit ki halat ko dekh sab kuch nhi bol paa rahe the ke tabhi waha par aryan aur Suman bhi aa jati hai jaise aryan aur Suman Mohit ki halat dekhte hai woh dono uske pass aa jate hai

Suman Mohit ko pakad uske chehre ko dekhti hai toh aag babula ho jati hai

Suman:-tumhri himmat kaise huyi Raj mere bete ko marne ki

Aryan:-aaj isse zinda nhi chhodo gaa aunty aap bas Mohit ko hospital me le jaiye aaj isse main sabak sikha duga

Raj:-haste huye) sale do kodi ke tu Raj ko mare gaa aur tum dono maa beti iske piche lage rehte ho naya yaar hai kya dono ka

Raj ki baat sunn Mohit ko buri halat me tha woh khada ho jata hai

Mohit:-behanchhod tune gali kaise di meri bua ko

Mohit pagal ho jata hai Raj ke dosto ne pehle hi aryan ko pakad rakha tha Mohit apni puri jaan laga Raj par khud jata hai

Raj ko bhi iski umid nhi thi woh iske liye tyar nhi tha par Mohit bahut furti ke sath lapka tha woh Raj ke muh par teen char kass ke mukke marta hai wahi mohal jada kharab dekh baki teacher ne principal aur police dono ko bula liya tha

Raj ke dost toh aryan ko chhod Mohit ki aur lapke toh aryan piche se do ko pakad dhone laga woh unhe buri halat kar raha tha toh baki 8 Mohit ko Raj se chhuda rahe the par jiss Mohit ki unhonne ne halat patli kar di thi ab usse milkar utha bhi nhi paa rahe the

Mohit pagal ho gya tha Raj ka muh lahuluhaan ho gya tha tabhi waha par college ke gards ke sath principal aa jate hai

Gards Raj ke dost ko pakad alag karte hai par jaise hi Mohit ko pakad ke haatane ko hote hai Mohit palat kar gards ki hi gardan pakad leta hai

Mohit gards ko panch marta ke tabhi suman khud aage aa Mohit ke baju ko pakad leti hai jo Mohit ko rokne ko aage aayi thi

Suman:-nhi mere nhi tu ab band kar yeh sab

Mohit:-bua iss kutte ne apko gali di isne apko didi ko galat kaha

Suman:-(gale laga) sant ho jaa mere bache dekh police aa gyi hai woh dekh lenge

Police ko aaya dekh principal aur baki teacher Raj ke khilaaf FIR likha deti hai sath me Mohit ka naam bhi de deti hai

Police Raj aur uske ke sath Mohit ko pakad kar le jati hai wahi avni varsha ka ro ro bura hall tha

Aryan phone nikl jhat se apne papa ko phone kar sab baat baata deta hai aur khud chl deta hai police station uske sath avni bhi chl deti hai

Suman bhi apne husband ko call kar ke sab bata deti hai kyoki Raj uske jeth ka ladka tha woh bhi police station nikl leti hai varsha ko lekar apne sath

Principal ko bhi jana padta hai sab dekhne ke liye kyoki dono student unke college ke hi the

Idher avni Mohit ki mummy ko call karti hai toh pehli baar pick nhi hota par dusri baar me call pick ho jata hai aur avni rote huye sab kuch baata deti hai uss waqt uske papa bhi sath me hote hai

M dad:-beta tension nhi leta hai main sab sambhal luga ham kal nikl hi rahe hai waha mera advocate aa jaye gaa office wala main usse call karta hu

Avni:-papa unhe kuch hoga toh nhi aa woh sab.....

M mummy:-kuch nhi hoga mere bete ko aap jo marji kariye mujhe mera beta sahi salamat ghar chahiye

M dad:-tum dono rona band karo usse kuch nhi hoga beta main advocate ko call kar raha tum ghabro nhi kuch nhi hoga samjhe main ho naa

Avni:-jee uncle

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Sabhi iss waqt police station par the Raj ke papa ko bhi pata lag gya tha woh khud bhi aa gye the advocate ke sath woh kuch jada hi gusse me the

Jab waha par woh suman varsha aur sath me apne bhai ko dekhta hai toh woh wahi aa jata hai

(Raj ke papa kishor jo ki janemane businessman the unki takkar hamesa se hi Mohit ki company ke sath thi par yeh naa usse pata tha naa Mohit ko abhi pata tha

Kishor ki wife:-riya (mordan aur stylish lady thi dikhne me kafi young thi par hamesa class mention karti thi

Avantika:- dono ki beti jo ek advocate thi sath me sath me papa ke sath business dekhti thi yeh ek role model thi apni age ke gernation ke liye.. Iska attitude hi alag tha apne aap par sabse jada yakeen tha)

Kishor:-yeh sab kaise hua suman

Suman:-apke ladle ki vajh se uss ne mere bhatije ko mara hai aur mujhe gali di hai

Kishor:-galti ki hogi uss ne iss liye hi mera beta lada hoga aur haa mere bete ko itni chhot kaise lag gyi tum kya kar rhi thi waha par chhuda nhi sakti thi kya uss se chhodo gaa nhi usse

Avantika:-dad yeh khuraana yaha kya kar raha hai M.K group ka advocate

Kishor:-hoga koi kaam pehle tere bhai ko chhuda lene de beti

Avantika:-Raj ko kuch nhi hoga papa main hoo naa

Suman:-bhai saab ek hi baat kaho gyi mere bache se door rahiye ek baar chup thi iss baar nhi

Avantika:-chachi aap uss ladke ko kyo bacha rahi ho jante huye uss ne mere bhai ko mara hai

Varsha:-(gusse se) woh bhi mera bhai hai aur main chup nhi rahe gaa

Kishor:-suraj samjho apni biwi aur beti ko iss baar maaf nhi karo gaa

Tabhi waha par hawaldar aa jata hai aur sabhi ko ander bula leta hai

Iss waqt ander aryan avni aur uske papa the toh sath hi suman varsha aur uske pati suraj the..... Ek tarf kishor uski beti avantika thi... Principal bhi wahi par baithe the toh ek tarf sabhi ladke aur Raj ke Mohit bhi tha

Inspector:-dekhiye principal sir apke tarf se kya FIR darj karyi jaa rhi hai

Principal:-dekhiye inspector inn dono ko maine pehle warning di thi fir bhi yeh harkat karna uchit nhi hai toh aap inke khilaf college ki property aur college ka mohal kharab karna plus teacher se batmizi ka case file kariye

Suman:-sir yeh sab toh Raj ne kiya tha

Kishor:-(chilate huye) suman...... Bhulo maat

Avantika:-inspector dekhiye Raj koi aam ladka nhi hai yaha ke jane maane A.R GROUP ke broad member ka sadasy hai kya woh sadak ke gunde jaisa ladai kre gaa jarur iss sadak chapp ladke ne ladke ne kuch kiya hoga

Varsha:-juwan sambhal kar baat kare aap nhi acha nhi hoga keh deti ho....

Abhi kuch koi bolta tabhi dusra advocate khurana bol padta hai

Khurana:-plss madam aap chup rahiye aur miss avantika ji app ko batana chahuga jise aap sadak chap keh rahe hai woh M.K GROUP'S ke CEO aur broad of memeber hai

Khurana ki baat sunn kishor aur avantika ki aakhe bahar aa jati hai unka business me sab sa bada dushman iss waqt samne tha woh bhi iss hall me yeh bhi unke liye chance tha

Avantika:-toh kya woh kisi se maar peet kare gaa

Khurana:-yahi baat apke client par bhi lagu hota hai miss avantika

Inspector:-dekhiye iss tarh se ladne se kuch nhi hoga case fir principal sir hi vapas le sakte hai

Avni:-sir par batmizi Raj ne ki thi tab jakar Mohit ne kuch kaha

Kishor:-ladki tum chup raho

Principal:-dekhiye kishor ji maine apki baat sunn bahut baar Raj ko maaf kiya hai par iss baar mujhe maaf kare

Avantika:-teek hai FIR kariye par sath bail leke aate hai ham papa main court jati ho bail paper tyar karne

Khurana:-beta Mohit mujhe tumhre papa ne bejha hai main paper tyar karta hu see you court dont worry aaj bail mil jaye gyi abhi time hai

Suman:-sir aap puri khosis kariye gaa aur inspector ji plss thoda ache se treatment kariye iss first aid se kuch nhi hoga plss

Inspector:-dekhiye mam inki bail asani se ho jaye gyi dont worry baki main kara deta ho

Uske baad sabhi waha se chle jate bail paper tyar karane yaha inspector bhi FIR darj kar khud inn sabhi ko court lekar chl deta hai

Sabhi waha se nikl jate hai suraj aur avni ke papa ne baki sab ko ghar jane ko keh diya tha khud nikl gye advocate ke sath kishor bhi apni beti ke sath jaa chuka tha kyoki yaha time barbad karna tha
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plz upload next part plz bro we are waiting plz plz plz
 
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

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