Fantasy Tha demon king

[Rocky10.10]

Update 2
Pichle update mae apne pada ki God or devil dono ke bich bat or kisi ko mukat karne ki bat
Ab agae
Devil apne mahal Mae tha or kuch soch raha tha
Devil- (man Mae) ky God sahi tha ky wo mera bhi vinas kar dega fir sochta hai ki
Devil- nahi God ko lag raha hai agar wo mukat ho gaya to God mere samne kuch bhi nahi hoga
Hmm mujhe Use mukat karna hi hoga


( Tha devil)
Fir devil kisi ko yad karta hai or wo uske samne a jata hai


(Diablo)
Diablo- muje ky bulaya malik
( friends Diablo devil ka senapati hai
Devil- use sab bat bata deta hai
Diablo - malik ky ap sach mai Use mukat kar was Mae kar payenge
Devil- ( Gusse se) Diablo mat beulo ki mai kon hu
Dibolo - maf kar de malik
Ky agaya hai
Devil- hmm jab tak mai wo kary na kar du tab tak koi na ane pay
Diablo - jo Agay malik

Or aesa bol kar devil kahi chala jata hai
Ab chalte hai god ke pas God kuch soch rahe the
GOD - mujhe nahi lagta devil meri bat manega wo jarur Use mukat kar dega or fir winas hoga
Or uske pas koi ata hai jise dekh kar God muskurata hua bolta hai
God - kese ho beta
ladka- mai tik hu Mharaj par ap kyu pareshan lag rahe ho
Fir God use sab bata deta hai
Ladka- to apko bhi apni power Use deni chahiye
God- tum pagal ho gaya ho ky Isase wo or jada powerful ho jaega
Ladka- par wo pahale se hi powerful hai or ek bat apko bhi sochni chaiya ki agar wo devil ke sath ho gaya tha ky hoga
God-par
Ladka- ab hamare pas koi rasta nahi hai
God tik hai

Or god or devil dona ek alag puja karte hai
Or kuch mantra bolte hai or devil ke samne ek kala or lal stone rhate hai or Usse se kali or lal Roshni bahar ki or jati hair God ke pass bhi goldan or blue stone rahata hai or Usse se goldan or blue colour ki Roshni bahar jati hai kahi or


( tha...... Planet)
Or wo planet Roshni se chamkta hai pahle kali or fir


Or goldan roshni se
Fir ek saya samne ata hai


Or fir bolta hai
Akhir kar mai mukat ho hi gay
Fir uske charo or ek Roshni ka gola banta hai
Wo fir bolta hai
- nahi yesa nahi ho sakta or wo chalne lagta hai

Or in sab se dur ek dusra planet " tha red planet "


mai ek ladki muskan ke sath


( friends ise red Queen likhunga
Red queen - Akhir kar ap mukat ho hi gay ab mai ap ko pa kar rahungi
Tabhi ek bolti hai
Ladki-Malkin pichhli bar bhi apne kosis ki thi par ap nahi kar pai kahi is bar bhi
Par red queen uski Gardan Uda deti hai or bolti hai
Red queen - nahi is bar nahi is bar mai unko apna bana kar rahungi chae iskelliy mujhe kuch bhi karna pade

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[Rocky10.10]

Update 5
Pichle update mae apne pada hai ki
Sadhu apni atma ka balidaan dekar uski kuch sakti ko alag karna chata hai or Roshni se kuch shawal puchta hai

Ab agae
Sadhu- prabh iske bauise ke bare me kuch bata dijiye
Roshni - putra tum Jante ho ki iske undar kitni Sakti hai
Sadhu- ji prabhu
Roshni - or y bhi isko achi or Buri dono tarha ki sakti prapat hai
Sadhu- ji prabhu
Roshni - to isliye ya to y age ane wale samy me is puri duniya Mae burai fela kar charo or khun or lase bicha kar kali saktiy ka raja bane ga ya fir y ane wale samy Mae dono kali or achi sakti ke bich santulan Banega
Sadhu- par prabhu iske undar to Buri Sakti jada hai to
Roshni - putra suno
Sadhu- ji prabhu
Roshni - har ek ke pass achi or buri dono tarha ki sakti hoti hai
Kai esa bhi hai jo buri takat prapt kar ke bhi uska
Prayog achai ke liye karte hai to kai esa bhi hai jo achi takat prapat kar ke bhi uska prayag burai ke liye karte hai
Sadhu- dhanywad prabhu ab Mae apne atma ka balidan de sakta hu
Or fir sadhu daayan Mae bat kar apni aatma ko apne sarir se alag kar deta hai
Roshni apni takat se uski aatma ko bacche ke undar dal deta hai jise uske bacche ke sarir se alag alag Roshni bahar niklti hai

To ab chalte hai planet of river and Montan
( hindi Mae नदी or phado ki duniya)
To is planet ko river Montan kyu bolte hai or y kyu puri tarha se nature se juda hai

Puri bramhand mae river Montan ka sunrise bhot fams hai


yaha par rang birangi titli hai Jo asman Mae to kabhi fulo par ghumti rehti hai





Tha planet of river and Montan ke ped pohde alag alag tarha ki patiya


Yaha ke asman Mae udati hui sundar parchi


yaha ke alag alag tarha ke jharne( waterfall)


Jaha se sunset bohot hi sundar lagta hai



Jaha ka indrdanus(Rembo) bahot jada sundar jab wo asman se Jhil par padta hai


sabse alag tha planet of river and Montan ko
" Tha planet of Rambo Rose bhi bola jata hai
Jaha par ek hi Rose sat rango Mae hota hai esa lagta hai ki indrdanus Mae in gulab ko dubo kar ranga ho



ok friends aj ke liy itna hi

Bhai........
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[King Aryan]

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[Siraj Patel]

Eagerly waiting for the next update

 

[King Aryan]

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[Lucifer]

Closed on Ts's request feel free to pm me if you want to reopen it...

Thanks

 

[Aakash.]

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