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Jaguaar

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Update number..........36..........Tha great warrior






Universe play queen and king war.........

ki tyeri bahut jor shor par chal rahi thi
Angle lok se Vikram Tha Prince of Angle and
Tha son of lord of angle
Bhag le rahe the

Vikram ko young age ka univarse ka top warrior mana
Jata hi aur wo koi mamuli warrior
To hi nhai Tha lord of Angle ka beta hi


Vikram bahut jor shor se juta hi supreme angle
Ke kahne ki wajah se Vikram ki prectice
Aur fast ho gayi lekin Vikram ko Tha Prince of
Universe banne ke liye bahut ache ache
Compatetar se Lada tha jisme 1 number par
nam ata hi Lucifier ke bete

Setan ke ans Rahul ka
use harana namumkin jesa hi uske bas Tha kenif
of hell hi jo ki use Setan se mila hi
uske ik attack se supreme leval
ke warrior ko bhi haraya ja sakta hi

Aur Rahul ka nam bhi universe ke top warrior
me ata hi

Tha Devil mountain........ik esa mountain hi universe
me jaha ja to har koi sakta hi but
Nikal koi bhi nhai sakta hi mout ke sima
Ke nam se jana jata hi devil mountain ko


Isme Setan ka was hi dark lord jese
Universe ke tip warrior bhi yaha jane se darte hi
Itna khof hi is devil mountain ka univarse me

Location............Tha devil mountain

Is samay devil mountain me Rahul Setan ki
Haradhna me Lin hi pure devel
Mountain me bhukamp aya hua hi

Rahul fir bhi Setan ka dyan me Lin hi
Tabhi waha bahut jada andhakar hota hi ik
Chaya ata hi pure devil mountain me
Ik nam gunjata hi
Aur wo nam hi
Pranam Pita shree

Ji ha sahi samjhe app sab ye awaj hi Rahul ki
Aur usne pranam kia hi apne pita jiska wo
Ans hi Setan ko jiske nam se universe ke sare
Warrior kapte hi

Setan.......drawani awaj me........kush raho putra
Kese ho
Rahul..........Thik hu pita shree mujhe aur sakti chahiye
Mughe Shreya ko hasil karna hi aur pita ji
Mujhe kuch din bad hone wali
Partyogita me bhag lene hi

aur wo Angle prince Vikram aur evil Prince
Rudra mujhe kadi takkar denge
Setan.........Vikram bahut hi powerfull
warrior hi aur Rudra bhi evil God ka ans hi

in dono ko harana asan nhai hoga
ME tumhe Tha bleed of death deth deta hu
iske ik war se tum kisi ko bhi mar sakte ho
Ha lekin ik baat ka khayal rakhna iska war

sirf tum ik bar hi kar sakte ho aur jab karna jab
tumhe lage ab tum jit nhai sakte

Setan........Rudra ko tumhe dimag aur apni shaktiyo
Se harana hoga uske pas evil God ki
sakti hi aur uske pas

THa sword of God of evil hi jiske ik war se
lord chorus jese warrior ko bhi jakhmi kia ja sakta hi
tumhe dimag se yudh ladna hoga

Rahul........ji me dyan rakhunga pita ji
Setan........ho sakta hi tumhara samna Shreya se
Ho jaye to dimag se ladna

ese hi kuch bate karne ke baad Rahul us gupha
Se nikal aya aur apna ik per jor se mara pura
Devil lok hilne laga
aur fir gunji ik drawani hasi jise sun ruh bhi kap
Uthe




location..............Delhi love park

Ye wah park hi jaha Raj aur Tha dregon king
White sprit king aur jin king lete the
un tino ki halat kharab thi akhir
Mar jo khaye the suhagrat jo manaya


tha A c p kirti ne khub dhoya tha tino ko
aram se so rahe the me bhi leta tha in
Bench par age ke bare me soch raha tha ki
kya kia jaye ab kuch na kich to karna
hi tha

mene socha a hi so jate hi Subha uth kar dekhenge
kya karna hi ab kuch nhai tha khane ke
Liye to bukhe pet hi so rahe the
akhir kar bhi kya sakte
the

Time........ morning


morning meri nend kisi ke ladne ki awaj se khuli
dekha to koi Aadmi dregon king ko mar
raha tha aur 5 log mil kar wahite sprit king
aur jin king ko bhi mar raha tha





me........man me......sala ye tino kisi din mujhe
bhi apni trah pagal kar denge mar khane do
kuch der baad jab are log chale gaye to tino
girte padhte mere pas aye
me.......ab kya kia tum tino ne
dregon king........dard se....malik kya kahu ham sab
ko pata nhai ap e kaha phasa dia


kutte jesi halat ho gayi hi
white king........mene socha ki ye sba yaha kam karne wale
log hi us korti ne to suhagrat manane ka kahkr
itna mara ki hath per uth nhai raha hi mene ik se

aler mujhe utha e ke liye kaha to usne mujhe
bikhari aur pata nhai kesi kesi kesi gali
di
kaha Raja tha kaha app ne bikhari bana dia
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Hello bhai sahab the great writer Mr kuwar thakur rajput bla bla bla bla 😴😴😴😴 hat's off to you brother ap to Kamaal ho yr 🤪awesome😜 mind-blowing😝 fantastic 🤭outstanding 🤫fabulous🤔 simple stunning 😛😛

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Sidhi bat to ye he ke tumse na ho payega so just accept it OK and leave
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Chattan Singh ji app ke jesa comments karna me bhi janta hu
but ager me bhi app ke jese ho gaya to kya farak rah jayega
kuch different rahna chahiye na itne din se meri
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me update diya app ko apni problem bhi bataya


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Luffy

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Update number..........36..........Tha great warrior






Universe play queen and king war.........

ki tyeri bahut jor shor par chal rahi thi
Angle lok se Vikram Tha Prince of Angle and
Tha son of lord of angle
Bhag le rahe the

Vikram ko young age ka univarse ka top warrior mana
Jata hi aur wo koi mamuli warrior
To hi nhai Tha lord of Angle ka beta hi


Vikram bahut jor shor se juta hi supreme angle
Ke kahne ki wajah se Vikram ki prectice
Aur fast ho gayi lekin Vikram ko Tha Prince of
Universe banne ke liye bahut ache ache
Compatetar se Lada tha jisme 1 number par
nam ata hi Lucifier ke bete

Setan ke ans Rahul ka
use harana namumkin jesa hi uske bas Tha kenif
of hell hi jo ki use Setan se mila hi
uske ik attack se supreme leval
ke warrior ko bhi haraya ja sakta hi

Aur Rahul ka nam bhi universe ke top warrior
me ata hi

Tha Devil mountain........ik esa mountain hi universe
me jaha ja to har koi sakta hi but
Nikal koi bhi nhai sakta hi mout ke sima
Ke nam se jana jata hi devil mountain ko


Isme Setan ka was hi dark lord jese
Universe ke tip warrior bhi yaha jane se darte hi
Itna khof hi is devil mountain ka univarse me

Location............Tha devil mountain

Is samay devil mountain me Rahul Setan ki
Haradhna me Lin hi pure devel
Mountain me bhukamp aya hua hi

Rahul fir bhi Setan ka dyan me Lin hi
Tabhi waha bahut jada andhakar hota hi ik
Chaya ata hi pure devil mountain me
Ik nam gunjata hi
Aur wo nam hi
Pranam Pita shree

Ji ha sahi samjhe app sab ye awaj hi Rahul ki
Aur usne pranam kia hi apne pita jiska wo
Ans hi Setan ko jiske nam se universe ke sare
Warrior kapte hi

Setan.......drawani awaj me........kush raho putra
Kese ho
Rahul..........Thik hu pita shree mujhe aur sakti chahiye
Mughe Shreya ko hasil karna hi aur pita ji
Mujhe kuch din bad hone wali
Partyogita me bhag lene hi

aur wo Angle prince Vikram aur evil Prince
Rudra mujhe kadi takkar denge
Setan.........Vikram bahut hi powerfull
warrior hi aur Rudra bhi evil God ka ans hi

in dono ko harana asan nhai hoga
ME tumhe Tha bleed of death deth deta hu
iske ik war se tum kisi ko bhi mar sakte ho
Ha lekin ik baat ka khayal rakhna iska war

sirf tum ik bar hi kar sakte ho aur jab karna jab
tumhe lage ab tum jit nhai sakte

Setan........Rudra ko tumhe dimag aur apni shaktiyo
Se harana hoga uske pas evil God ki
sakti hi aur uske pas

THa sword of God of evil hi jiske ik war se
lord chorus jese warrior ko bhi jakhmi kia ja sakta hi
tumhe dimag se yudh ladna hoga

Rahul........ji me dyan rakhunga pita ji
Setan........ho sakta hi tumhara samna Shreya se
Ho jaye to dimag se ladna

ese hi kuch bate karne ke baad Rahul us gupha
Se nikal aya aur apna ik per jor se mara pura
Devil lok hilne laga
aur fir gunji ik drawani hasi jise sun ruh bhi kap
Uthe




location..............Delhi love park

Ye wah park hi jaha Raj aur Tha dregon king
White sprit king aur jin king lete the
un tino ki halat kharab thi akhir
Mar jo khaye the suhagrat jo manaya


tha A c p kirti ne khub dhoya tha tino ko
aram se so rahe the me bhi leta tha in
Bench par age ke bare me soch raha tha ki
kya kia jaye ab kuch na kich to karna
hi tha

mene socha a hi so jate hi Subha uth kar dekhenge
kya karna hi ab kuch nhai tha khane ke
Liye to bukhe pet hi so rahe the
akhir kar bhi kya sakte
the

Time........ morning


morning meri nend kisi ke ladne ki awaj se khuli
dekha to koi Aadmi dregon king ko mar
raha tha aur 5 log mil kar wahite sprit king
aur jin king ko bhi mar raha tha





me........man me......sala ye tino kisi din mujhe
bhi apni trah pagal kar denge mar khane do
kuch der baad jab are log chale gaye to tino
girte padhte mere pas aye
me.......ab kya kia tum tino ne
dregon king........dard se....malik kya kahu ham sab
ko pata nhai ap e kaha phasa dia


kutte jesi halat ho gayi hi
white king........mene socha ki ye sba yaha kam karne wale
log hi us korti ne to suhagrat manane ka kahkr
itna mara ki hath per uth nhai raha hi mene ik se

aler mujhe utha e ke liye kaha to usne mujhe
bikhari aur pata nhai kesi kesi kesi gali
di
kaha Raja tha kaha app ne bikhari bana dia



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Devil hunter123

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Update number..........36..........Tha great warrior






Universe play queen and king war.........

ki tyeri bahut jor shor par chal rahi thi
Angle lok se Vikram Tha Prince of Angle and
Tha son of lord of angle
Bhag le rahe the

Vikram ko young age ka univarse ka top warrior mana
Jata hi aur wo koi mamuli warrior
To hi nhai Tha lord of Angle ka beta hi


Vikram bahut jor shor se juta hi supreme angle
Ke kahne ki wajah se Vikram ki prectice
Aur fast ho gayi lekin Vikram ko Tha Prince of
Universe banne ke liye bahut ache ache
Compatetar se Lada tha jisme 1 number par
nam ata hi Lucifier ke bete

Setan ke ans Rahul ka
use harana namumkin jesa hi uske bas Tha kenif
of hell hi jo ki use Setan se mila hi
uske ik attack se supreme leval
ke warrior ko bhi haraya ja sakta hi

Aur Rahul ka nam bhi universe ke top warrior
me ata hi

Tha Devil mountain........ik esa mountain hi universe
me jaha ja to har koi sakta hi but
Nikal koi bhi nhai sakta hi mout ke sima
Ke nam se jana jata hi devil mountain ko


Isme Setan ka was hi dark lord jese
Universe ke tip warrior bhi yaha jane se darte hi
Itna khof hi is devil mountain ka univarse me

Location............Tha devil mountain

Is samay devil mountain me Rahul Setan ki
Haradhna me Lin hi pure devel
Mountain me bhukamp aya hua hi

Rahul fir bhi Setan ka dyan me Lin hi
Tabhi waha bahut jada andhakar hota hi ik
Chaya ata hi pure devil mountain me
Ik nam gunjata hi
Aur wo nam hi
Pranam Pita shree

Ji ha sahi samjhe app sab ye awaj hi Rahul ki
Aur usne pranam kia hi apne pita jiska wo
Ans hi Setan ko jiske nam se universe ke sare
Warrior kapte hi

Setan.......drawani awaj me........kush raho putra
Kese ho
Rahul..........Thik hu pita shree mujhe aur sakti chahiye
Mughe Shreya ko hasil karna hi aur pita ji
Mujhe kuch din bad hone wali
Partyogita me bhag lene hi

aur wo Angle prince Vikram aur evil Prince
Rudra mujhe kadi takkar denge
Setan.........Vikram bahut hi powerfull
warrior hi aur Rudra bhi evil God ka ans hi

in dono ko harana asan nhai hoga
ME tumhe Tha bleed of death deth deta hu
iske ik war se tum kisi ko bhi mar sakte ho
Ha lekin ik baat ka khayal rakhna iska war

sirf tum ik bar hi kar sakte ho aur jab karna jab
tumhe lage ab tum jit nhai sakte

Setan........Rudra ko tumhe dimag aur apni shaktiyo
Se harana hoga uske pas evil God ki
sakti hi aur uske pas

THa sword of God of evil hi jiske ik war se
lord chorus jese warrior ko bhi jakhmi kia ja sakta hi
tumhe dimag se yudh ladna hoga

Rahul........ji me dyan rakhunga pita ji
Setan........ho sakta hi tumhara samna Shreya se
Ho jaye to dimag se ladna

ese hi kuch bate karne ke baad Rahul us gupha
Se nikal aya aur apna ik per jor se mara pura
Devil lok hilne laga
aur fir gunji ik drawani hasi jise sun ruh bhi kap
Uthe




location..............Delhi love park

Ye wah park hi jaha Raj aur Tha dregon king
White sprit king aur jin king lete the
un tino ki halat kharab thi akhir
Mar jo khaye the suhagrat jo manaya


tha A c p kirti ne khub dhoya tha tino ko
aram se so rahe the me bhi leta tha in
Bench par age ke bare me soch raha tha ki
kya kia jaye ab kuch na kich to karna
hi tha

mene socha a hi so jate hi Subha uth kar dekhenge
kya karna hi ab kuch nhai tha khane ke
Liye to bukhe pet hi so rahe the
akhir kar bhi kya sakte
the

Time........ morning


morning meri nend kisi ke ladne ki awaj se khuli
dekha to koi Aadmi dregon king ko mar
raha tha aur 5 log mil kar wahite sprit king
aur jin king ko bhi mar raha tha





me........man me......sala ye tino kisi din mujhe
bhi apni trah pagal kar denge mar khane do
kuch der baad jab are log chale gaye to tino
girte padhte mere pas aye
me.......ab kya kia tum tino ne
dregon king........dard se....malik kya kahu ham sab
ko pata nhai ap e kaha phasa dia


kutte jesi halat ho gayi hi
white king........mene socha ki ye sba yaha kam karne wale
log hi us korti ne to suhagrat manane ka kahkr
itna mara ki hath per uth nhai raha hi mene ik se

aler mujhe utha e ke liye kaha to usne mujhe
bikhari aur pata nhai kesi kesi kesi gali
di
kaha Raja tha kaha app ne bikhari bana dia



Nice update bhai
 

Naik

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Update number..........36..........Tha great warrior






Universe play queen and king war.........

ki tyeri bahut jor shor par chal rahi thi
Angle lok se Vikram Tha Prince of Angle and
Tha son of lord of angle
Bhag le rahe the

Vikram ko young age ka univarse ka top warrior mana
Jata hi aur wo koi mamuli warrior
To hi nhai Tha lord of Angle ka beta hi


Vikram bahut jor shor se juta hi supreme angle
Ke kahne ki wajah se Vikram ki prectice
Aur fast ho gayi lekin Vikram ko Tha Prince of
Universe banne ke liye bahut ache ache
Compatetar se Lada tha jisme 1 number par
nam ata hi Lucifier ke bete

Setan ke ans Rahul ka
use harana namumkin jesa hi uske bas Tha kenif
of hell hi jo ki use Setan se mila hi
uske ik attack se supreme leval
ke warrior ko bhi haraya ja sakta hi

Aur Rahul ka nam bhi universe ke top warrior
me ata hi

Tha Devil mountain........ik esa mountain hi universe
me jaha ja to har koi sakta hi but
Nikal koi bhi nhai sakta hi mout ke sima
Ke nam se jana jata hi devil mountain ko


Isme Setan ka was hi dark lord jese
Universe ke tip warrior bhi yaha jane se darte hi
Itna khof hi is devil mountain ka univarse me

Location............Tha devil mountain

Is samay devil mountain me Rahul Setan ki
Haradhna me Lin hi pure devel
Mountain me bhukamp aya hua hi

Rahul fir bhi Setan ka dyan me Lin hi
Tabhi waha bahut jada andhakar hota hi ik
Chaya ata hi pure devil mountain me
Ik nam gunjata hi
Aur wo nam hi
Pranam Pita shree

Ji ha sahi samjhe app sab ye awaj hi Rahul ki
Aur usne pranam kia hi apne pita jiska wo
Ans hi Setan ko jiske nam se universe ke sare
Warrior kapte hi

Setan.......drawani awaj me........kush raho putra
Kese ho
Rahul..........Thik hu pita shree mujhe aur sakti chahiye
Mughe Shreya ko hasil karna hi aur pita ji
Mujhe kuch din bad hone wali
Partyogita me bhag lene hi

aur wo Angle prince Vikram aur evil Prince
Rudra mujhe kadi takkar denge
Setan.........Vikram bahut hi powerfull
warrior hi aur Rudra bhi evil God ka ans hi

in dono ko harana asan nhai hoga
ME tumhe Tha bleed of death deth deta hu
iske ik war se tum kisi ko bhi mar sakte ho
Ha lekin ik baat ka khayal rakhna iska war

sirf tum ik bar hi kar sakte ho aur jab karna jab
tumhe lage ab tum jit nhai sakte

Setan........Rudra ko tumhe dimag aur apni shaktiyo
Se harana hoga uske pas evil God ki
sakti hi aur uske pas

THa sword of God of evil hi jiske ik war se
lord chorus jese warrior ko bhi jakhmi kia ja sakta hi
tumhe dimag se yudh ladna hoga

Rahul........ji me dyan rakhunga pita ji
Setan........ho sakta hi tumhara samna Shreya se
Ho jaye to dimag se ladna

ese hi kuch bate karne ke baad Rahul us gupha
Se nikal aya aur apna ik per jor se mara pura
Devil lok hilne laga
aur fir gunji ik drawani hasi jise sun ruh bhi kap
Uthe




location..............Delhi love park

Ye wah park hi jaha Raj aur Tha dregon king
White sprit king aur jin king lete the
un tino ki halat kharab thi akhir
Mar jo khaye the suhagrat jo manaya


tha A c p kirti ne khub dhoya tha tino ko
aram se so rahe the me bhi leta tha in
Bench par age ke bare me soch raha tha ki
kya kia jaye ab kuch na kich to karna
hi tha

mene socha a hi so jate hi Subha uth kar dekhenge
kya karna hi ab kuch nhai tha khane ke
Liye to bukhe pet hi so rahe the
akhir kar bhi kya sakte
the

Time........ morning


morning meri nend kisi ke ladne ki awaj se khuli
dekha to koi Aadmi dregon king ko mar
raha tha aur 5 log mil kar wahite sprit king
aur jin king ko bhi mar raha tha





me........man me......sala ye tino kisi din mujhe
bhi apni trah pagal kar denge mar khane do
kuch der baad jab are log chale gaye to tino
girte padhte mere pas aye
me.......ab kya kia tum tino ne
dregon king........dard se....malik kya kahu ham sab
ko pata nhai ap e kaha phasa dia


kutte jesi halat ho gayi hi
white king........mene socha ki ye sba yaha kam karne wale
log hi us korti ne to suhagrat manane ka kahkr
itna mara ki hath per uth nhai raha hi mene ik se

aler mujhe utha e ke liye kaha to usne mujhe
bikhari aur pata nhai kesi kesi kesi gali
di
kaha Raja tha kaha app ne bikhari bana dia
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
 
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