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Fantasy Tha great warrior

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Nevil singh

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Update number............37....... story name......Tha great warrior.......



Setan se ashirwad lekar Rahul devil lok lout aya
Lucifier ko jab pata chala
Rahul a raha hi to wo bahut jada kush ho gya
usne pure devil lok ko sajaya

ajj uska bata a rha tha jo Lucifier ko ye yakin tha ki
Rahul ab univarse play king and queen war me jit kar
devil lok ka nam roshan krega aur Tha Prince of Universe
ban jayega univarse ke Prince banne par use
bahut man samman milega use Tha sword of Prince of Universe
milegi 1 year ke liye ye har year hota hi isme
universe ke gret warrior bhag kete hi

Vikram jese warrior bhag lete hi to jitna namumkin
sa ho jata hi


Lucifier ne Rahul ko gale laga kar swagat kia
Rahul bhi kushi se apne pita ke gale laga

Lucifier......kese ho mere bete mughe ye asha hi
ki tum ab mera nam roshan karoge

Rahul.....ye to mera farz hi pita ji ab mujhe
Prince of Universe banne se koi nhai
rok sakta hi

Lucifier.......putra Vikram hamre liye kadi chunoti
hi

Rahul......uski chinata na kare app ab mujhe
harana Vikram ke bas ki baat nhai hi

Lucifier apne puta ki baat sun behad kush hota hi
aur fir se use gale se lagata hi

location.........Tha great Andes mountains of Isla

yaha chro trafh bhayankar youdh chida hi ik
trafh hi is univarse ka sabse bada king Tha black sprite
king aur dushare trafh hi Raj ka clone Raj 6 dono
am e samne khade gusse se ik dushare ko ghur rahe hi

Black sprite king......bhaut badi galti kar di tune
Bache ab tumhe mujh se koi nhai bacha sakta
hi

Raj 6........bacha kisi aur ko kahna lagta hi
tumhari maa tumhare baap ke bare me batana
bhul gyi

black sprite king Raj 6 ki baat sun ke gussa
HO gya usne ik powerfull speel ka war Raj par kia

black sprite king....... light univarse thandhar strome

ye ik bhed hi khatarnak speel hota hi iska use
God hi kar sakte hi

uske ye speel bolte hi light se bhi tez speed ke sath ik
sword Raj 6 ke sine me lagi aur Raj 6 ke sine se Talwar
chute hi do tukdo me tut gyi

ye dekh kar ab black sprit king ki solid phati pehli bar
kyoki jis speel ka us e war kia tha Raj 6 ka uske war
se lord chorus bhi havy injured ho jata

ye dekh kar wo behad hi dar gya

Raj 6...........mene socha tha tumhe pyar se harunga
lekin nhai ab tumhe me chodunga nhai

Raj 6..........Tha lock of God Raj

ye speel nikla Raj 6 ke mukh se ye speel
banaya hi Raj ne iske bolte ho black sprite king ke
charo trafh ik black colour ke ghere ne gher lia

black sprite king ne apne app ko chudane ke
liye behad hi prayas kia lekin wo jitna kosis
karta use utna hi dard hota

location......... magic school of Isla

me sab kuch sahi chal raha tha karna bar
bar Raj 2 se badla lene ke liye plan banaya
karta lekin bar bar asafhal hota rahta


Raj 2 ne Thunder element aur lightning element
me highar leval par pahunch gaya


Aur Raj 1 ne magic world
ki sari education sikh lia tha Aarti bhi bahut kadi
mehnat se ji jan laga kar padhai kar rahi

thi

Raj 2 aur godess princess Suwarna ki doshti ab behad hi majbut ho gyi thi



location..........Singh Kabila

Raj ke Amma aur Baba behad kush the
Raj ke dwara dia gya dhan aur anaj se wo ab behad amir
ho gaye the

kishi kishi rah rahe the bas unki icha bas ik hi thi ki
kese apne bete ko ik bahut acha yodha banye

baba.........hmara beta kitna pyara hi na

Amma......ha app sahi kah rahe ho jab se
wo hmari jindagi me aya hi tab se hma behad
kush hi

dono log ese hi bate karne lagte hi fir kuch der baad
khana khakar so jate hi
Raj ke kahne se Raj 7 sab ka che se khayal rakh raha tha






Location........angle lok

yah Vikram joro shoro se laga hua
tha tayeyari karne me
Sunder update bhai
 
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Update number...............38



Time...................6.00 morning in earth 1

meri nend khuli to mene tino ki jagaya
kuch der bad tino uthe

White sprit king........good morning malik

me..... Good morning
me....ajj tum sab ko kam karna hoga nhai to
roj yahi sona hoga samjhe
tino......ji malik

fir ham sab uth kar nahaye sur sab karne ke
bad ji rupaye mere pas the usse khana khaye
ik saste dhabe par

ABhi ham dhabe par hi the ki mene
dhabe ke malik ko apne pas bulaya
me........in tino ko kam ki jarurat hi
dhaba malik......age jane ke bad ik seth ki dukan
hi nam hi Ram pal wo in tino ko
kam de sakta hi

me........ dhanyawad
dhaba malik.......ji koi baat nhai
fir mene un sabke sath seth ki dukan par chal dia
kuch der chalne ke bad
me waha pahucha
Seth ji bahar hi bethe the

me......pranam seth ji
seth ji...........Ram Ram bhaya
me.......seth ji in tino ko kam karna hi dhabe malik
ne btaya ki apke pas koi kam hi
seth.........ha bhai in tino ko saman dhone ke kam
me laga deta hu hatte katte dikhte hi tino
Tino ko milakar 900 ik din me milege

me.......bahut bahut dhanyawad seth ji
white king......man me.....sala ab yahi baki
rah gya kya s kya ban gya
me
ji. King........jindagi jhand ho tab yahi hota hi
dregon king.........sala kha mujh se pura universe darta tha kha me in kido ke liye kam karna hoga

me.......seth ji yaha kamre kaha mil jayega rahne ke liye
seth ji......bagal me ik basti abhi me Ramu ko
bula deta hu wo tum charo ke liye
kamre ka intajam kar dega

fir us seth ne apne ik nukar Ramu ko bulaya
Ramu.......apne bulaya malik
seth......ha Ramu in ke liye apni basthi me ik ghar
dial do

Ramu.......ji malik
fir me Ramu basti ki aur chal die
raste me mene Ramu se pucha ki

me..........Ramu chacha app seth ke yaha kab se kam
karte hi
Ramu......beta seth ji bahut ache hi me to 20 year se
kam karta hu
me........thik hi chacha

uske baad Ramu ne mujhe ik tute phute
Ghar me le aya



Ramu.......beta ye raha tumhara ghar kriya 1000 mahina lagega
me......thik hi chcha
fir Ramu chala gya
me ghar me jakar dekha ki usne do room hi ik
rasoi aur bathroom aur ik nalka hi
aur do khatiya rakhi hi

me......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gay
tha
mene din bhr mehnat kar ke sara ghar saf kia rahne layak bnaya

aur fir dekha ki abhi tino ki chutti hone me two hour
baki hi tp socha chalo aram kar le

ME......men me.......ese to me nhai rah paunga mujhe
koi underground fight me hissa lena hoga
nahi to 5 year yahi gujar a hoga
mar mar ke
fir mujhe nend a gyai wese to me thaka nhai tha mere
pas bhale hi kon power nhai thi is samay


tab bhi me hajaro admiyo se jit sakta tha
mere pas supar strength thi hi
jise mene univarse ke sabse khaternak kabile
me sikha tha



location....................Andes mountains



yaha Raj 6 black sprite king ko Raj God lock me
band kar dia tha

black king ne bahut kosis ki par kudh ko
chudane me nakamiyab raha bechara

Black sprite king.......mujhe chod do mujhe appka
gulam banna manjur hi
Raj ........kyu re sara ghamand utar gya ki kuch baki
hi abhi bhi
black sprite king.......nhai malik

RAj 6.....dubara mere samne agar aar uthaya to cut kar dunga
ajj se to mera guala. Hi
uske bad Raj 6 ne use ajad kar dia


ajad hote hi black sprite king bada kush ho gaya




malik.....app jarur koi god honge
RAj 6......apne kam se kam rakh samjha kya
black sprite king.......darte hue ji
me......chal tu to samajhdar nikla
 
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Devil hunter123

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Update number...............38



Time...................6.00 morning in earth 1

meri nend khuli to mene tino ki jagaya
kuch der bad tino uthe

White sprit king........good morning malik

me..... Good morning
me....ajj tum sab ko kam karna hoga nhai to
roj yahi sona hoga samjhe
tino......ji malik

fir ham sab uth kar nahaye sur sab karne ke
bad ji rupaye mere pas the usse khana khaye
ik saste dhabe par

ABhi ham dhabe par hi the ki mene
dhabe ke malik ko apne pas bulaya
me........in tino ko kam ki jarurat hi
dhaba malik......age jane ke bad ik seth ki dukan
hi nam hi Ram pal wo in tino ko
kam de sakta hi

me........ dhanyawad
dhaba malik.......ji koi baat nhai
fir mene un sabke sath seth ki dukan par chal dia
kuch der chalne ke bad
me waha pahucha
Seth ji bahar hi bethe the

me......pranam seth ji
seth ji...........Ram Ram bhaya
me.......seth ji in tino ko kam karna hi dhabe malik
ne btaya ki apke pas koi kam hi
seth.........ha bhai in tino ko saman dhone ke kam
me laga deta hu hatte katte dikhte hi tino
Tino ko milakar 900 ik din me milege

me.......bahut bahut dhanyawad seth ji
white king......man me.....sala ab yahi baki
rah gya kya s kya ban gya
me
ji. King........jindagi jhand ho tab yahi hota hi
dregon king.........sala kha mujh se pura universe darta tha kha me in kido ke liye kam karna hoga

me.......seth ji yaha kamre kaha mil jayega rahne ke liye
seth ji......bagal me ik basti abhi me Ramu ko
bula deta hu wo tum charo ke liye
kamre ka intajam kar dega

fir us seth ne apne ik nukar Ramu ko bulaya
Ramu.......apne bulaya malik
seth......ha Ramu in ke liye apni basthi me ik ghar
dial do

Ramu.......ji malik
fir me Ramu basti ki aur chal die
raste me mene Ramu se pucha ki

me..........Ramu chacha app seth ke yaha kab se kam
karte hi
Ramu......beta seth ji bahut ache hi me to 20 year se
kam karta hu
me........thik hi chacha

uske baad Ramu ne mujhe ik tute phute
Ghar me le aya



Ramu.......beta ye raha tumhara ghar kriya 1000 mahina lagega
me......thik hi chcha
fir Ramu chala gya
me ghar me jakar dekha ki usne do room hi ik
rasoi aur bathroom aur ik nalka hi
aur do khatiya rakhi hi

me......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gay
tha
mene din bhr mehnat kar ke sara ghar saf kia rahne layak bnaya

aur fir dekha ki abhi tino ki chutti hone me two hour
baki hi tp socha chalo aram kar le

ME......men me.......ese to me nhai rah paunga mujhe
koi underground fight me hissa lena hoga
nahi to 5 year yahi gujar a hoga
mar mar ke
fir mujhe nend a gyai wese to me thaka nhai tha mere
pas bhale hi kon power nhai thi is samay


tab bhi me hajaro admiyo se jit sakta tha
mere pas supar strength thi hi
jise mene univarse ke sabse khaternak kabile
me sikha tha



location....................Andes mountains



yaha Raj 6 black sprite king ko Raj God lock me
band kar dia tha

black king ne bahut kosis ki par kudh ko
chudane me nakamiyab raha bechara

Black sprite king.......mujhe chod do mujhe appka
gulam banna manjur hi
Raj ........kyu re sara ghamand utar gya ki kuch baki
hi abhi bhi
black sprite king.......nhai malik

RAj 6.....dubara mere samne agar aar uthaya to cut kar dunga
ajj se to mera guala. Hi
uske bad Raj 6 ne use ajad kar dia


ajad hote hi black sprite king bada kush ho gaya




malik.....app jarur koi god honge
RAj 6......apne kam se kam rakh samjha kya
black sprite king.......darte hue ji
me......chal tu to samajhdar nikla
Nice update
 

Luffy

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Update number...............38



Time...................6.00 morning in earth 1

meri nend khuli to mene tino ki jagaya
kuch der bad tino uthe

White sprit king........good morning malik

me..... Good morning
me....ajj tum sab ko kam karna hoga nhai to
roj yahi sona hoga samjhe
tino......ji malik

fir ham sab uth kar nahaye sur sab karne ke
bad ji rupaye mere pas the usse khana khaye
ik saste dhabe par

ABhi ham dhabe par hi the ki mene
dhabe ke malik ko apne pas bulaya
me........in tino ko kam ki jarurat hi
dhaba malik......age jane ke bad ik seth ki dukan
hi nam hi Ram pal wo in tino ko
kam de sakta hi

me........ dhanyawad
dhaba malik.......ji koi baat nhai
fir mene un sabke sath seth ki dukan par chal dia
kuch der chalne ke bad
me waha pahucha
Seth ji bahar hi bethe the

me......pranam seth ji
seth ji...........Ram Ram bhaya
me.......seth ji in tino ko kam karna hi dhabe malik
ne btaya ki apke pas koi kam hi
seth.........ha bhai in tino ko saman dhone ke kam
me laga deta hu hatte katte dikhte hi tino
Tino ko milakar 900 ik din me milege

me.......bahut bahut dhanyawad seth ji
white king......man me.....sala ab yahi baki
rah gya kya s kya ban gya
me
ji. King........jindagi jhand ho tab yahi hota hi
dregon king.........sala kha mujh se pura universe darta tha kha me in kido ke liye kam karna hoga

me.......seth ji yaha kamre kaha mil jayega rahne ke liye
seth ji......bagal me ik basti abhi me Ramu ko
bula deta hu wo tum charo ke liye
kamre ka intajam kar dega

fir us seth ne apne ik nukar Ramu ko bulaya
Ramu.......apne bulaya malik
seth......ha Ramu in ke liye apni basthi me ik ghar
dial do

Ramu.......ji malik
fir me Ramu basti ki aur chal die
raste me mene Ramu se pucha ki

me..........Ramu chacha app seth ke yaha kab se kam
karte hi
Ramu......beta seth ji bahut ache hi me to 20 year se
kam karta hu
me........thik hi chacha

uske baad Ramu ne mujhe ik tute phute
Ghar me le aya



Ramu.......beta ye raha tumhara ghar kriya 1000 mahina lagega
me......thik hi chcha
fir Ramu chala gya
me ghar me jakar dekha ki usne do room hi ik
rasoi aur bathroom aur ik nalka hi
aur do khatiya rakhi hi

me......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gay
tha
mene din bhr mehnat kar ke sara ghar saf kia rahne layak bnaya

aur fir dekha ki abhi tino ki chutti hone me two hour
baki hi tp socha chalo aram kar le

ME......men me.......ese to me nhai rah paunga mujhe
koi underground fight me hissa lena hoga
nahi to 5 year yahi gujar a hoga
mar mar ke
fir mujhe nend a gyai wese to me thaka nhai tha mere
pas bhale hi kon power nhai thi is samay


tab bhi me hajaro admiyo se jit sakta tha
mere pas supar strength thi hi
jise mene univarse ke sabse khaternak kabile
me sikha tha



location....................Andes mountains



yaha Raj 6 black sprite king ko Raj God lock me
band kar dia tha

black king ne bahut kosis ki par kudh ko
chudane me nakamiyab raha bechara

Black sprite king.......mujhe chod do mujhe appka
gulam banna manjur hi
Raj ........kyu re sara ghamand utar gya ki kuch baki
hi abhi bhi
black sprite king.......nhai malik

RAj 6.....dubara mere samne agar aar uthaya to cut kar dunga
ajj se to mera guala. Hi
uske bad Raj 6 ne use ajad kar dia


ajad hote hi black sprite king bada kush ho gaya




malik.....app jarur koi god honge
RAj 6......apne kam se kam rakh samjha kya
black sprite king.......darte hue ji
me......chal tu to samajhdar nikla
Fantastic update
 

Sauravb

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Update number...............38



Time...................6.00 morning in earth 1

meri nend khuli to mene tino ki jagaya
kuch der bad tino uthe

White sprit king........good morning malik

me..... Good morning
me....ajj tum sab ko kam karna hoga nhai to
roj yahi sona hoga samjhe
tino......ji malik

fir ham sab uth kar nahaye sur sab karne ke
bad ji rupaye mere pas the usse khana khaye
ik saste dhabe par

ABhi ham dhabe par hi the ki mene
dhabe ke malik ko apne pas bulaya
me........in tino ko kam ki jarurat hi
dhaba malik......age jane ke bad ik seth ki dukan
hi nam hi Ram pal wo in tino ko
kam de sakta hi

me........ dhanyawad
dhaba malik.......ji koi baat nhai
fir mene un sabke sath seth ki dukan par chal dia
kuch der chalne ke bad
me waha pahucha
Seth ji bahar hi bethe the

me......pranam seth ji
seth ji...........Ram Ram bhaya
me.......seth ji in tino ko kam karna hi dhabe malik
ne btaya ki apke pas koi kam hi
seth.........ha bhai in tino ko saman dhone ke kam
me laga deta hu hatte katte dikhte hi tino
Tino ko milakar 900 ik din me milege

me.......bahut bahut dhanyawad seth ji
white king......man me.....sala ab yahi baki
rah gya kya s kya ban gya
me
ji. King........jindagi jhand ho tab yahi hota hi
dregon king.........sala kha mujh se pura universe darta tha kha me in kido ke liye kam karna hoga

me.......seth ji yaha kamre kaha mil jayega rahne ke liye
seth ji......bagal me ik basti abhi me Ramu ko
bula deta hu wo tum charo ke liye
kamre ka intajam kar dega

fir us seth ne apne ik nukar Ramu ko bulaya
Ramu.......apne bulaya malik
seth......ha Ramu in ke liye apni basthi me ik ghar
dial do

Ramu.......ji malik
fir me Ramu basti ki aur chal die
raste me mene Ramu se pucha ki

me..........Ramu chacha app seth ke yaha kab se kam
karte hi
Ramu......beta seth ji bahut ache hi me to 20 year se
kam karta hu
me........thik hi chacha

uske baad Ramu ne mujhe ik tute phute
Ghar me le aya



Ramu.......beta ye raha tumhara ghar kriya 1000 mahina lagega
me......thik hi chcha
fir Ramu chala gya
me ghar me jakar dekha ki usne do room hi ik
rasoi aur bathroom aur ik nalka hi
aur do khatiya rakhi hi

me......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gay
tha
mene din bhr mehnat kar ke sara ghar saf kia rahne layak bnaya

aur fir dekha ki abhi tino ki chutti hone me two hour
baki hi tp socha chalo aram kar le

ME......men me.......ese to me nhai rah paunga mujhe
koi underground fight me hissa lena hoga
nahi to 5 year yahi gujar a hoga
mar mar ke
fir mujhe nend a gyai wese to me thaka nhai tha mere
pas bhale hi kon power nhai thi is samay


tab bhi me hajaro admiyo se jit sakta tha
mere pas supar strength thi hi
jise mene univarse ke sabse khaternak kabile
me sikha tha



location....................Andes mountains



yaha Raj 6 black sprite king ko Raj God lock me
band kar dia tha

black king ne bahut kosis ki par kudh ko
chudane me nakamiyab raha bechara

Black sprite king.......mujhe chod do mujhe appka
gulam banna manjur hi
Raj ........kyu re sara ghamand utar gya ki kuch baki
hi abhi bhi
black sprite king.......nhai malik

RAj 6.....dubara mere samne agar aar uthaya to cut kar dunga
ajj se to mera guala. Hi
uske bad Raj 6 ne use ajad kar dia


ajad hote hi black sprite king bada kush ho gaya




malik.....app jarur koi god honge
RAj 6......apne kam se kam rakh samjha kya
black sprite king.......darte hue ji
me......chal tu to samajhdar nikla
Nice update.Aab raj ko jese tese karke earth me 5 saal guzarne honge.
 
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