Fantasy Tha great warrior

[Sky07]

Hallo friends me is I d se update number 32 se post krunga ager app sab ko mere purane wale Update padhna ho to app sab meri purani I d Raj Singh Thakur per jaker padh sakte hi


Update number..................32

Ajj pehli bar pita ji ne mujhe apne sine se lagaya tha mughe bahut acha lag rah tha me sabdo me
nhi kah sakta ye universe jinke darshan ke liye
pata nhai kitne Yugo tapasya karta hi

wo mere pita ji hi mughe ajj garva hi raha tha
KI me unki santan hu jinis pire Universe ke
Bhagwan hi
thodi der baad me pita ji se alag hua

me..........pita ji me earth 1 par ja raha hu maa
ki agya hi mughe ashirwad dijiye ki me
apne kam me safal hu
pita ji.............Tum jarur saphal hoge Raj but tumhe
earth 1 dyan lagana hoga tabhi jaker tum God of life and
Prince of death ban paoge
5 year tak tum koi bhi magic nhai kar
paoge aur na hi jinhe tum yaha se le

ja rhe ho wo waha tumhe 5 year tak rahker
dyan lagana hoga aur 5 year bad
tumhe is univarse ka ik bahut hi powerfull
astra Tha chain of white and black power

milega aur ha 5 year bad tumhe divya sharir
God wala aur tumhari sari skati mil gayega
tab jaker tum is univarse ke 4 God Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death ban paoge

earth 1 par tum ik sadharan insan jese ho jaoge
bas Tumhare pas tumhari physical power hongi
kya tum ab tyar ho waha jane ke liye

me............ji maa ji pita ji me tyar hu jane ke liye
earth 1 me hmesa apke nirdesho ka palan
krunga
uske baad mene maa pita ji ko per chu kar
pranam kia

Maa aur pita ji .........Vijayi bhawa putra

uske baad me apne app ko Tha mountain
of Andes me pragat kia
aur Tha jin king , Tha king of white sprit
aur dragon king ko apne mastisk dwara sanket
bhej Tha mountain of Andes me bula lia

wo tino a gaye

White sprit king............ malik ham chalne ke liye tyar hi
jin king.....me bhi
dragon king........chle malik
me..................Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
ye hi dragon king tum tino mere sath jaoge
earth 1 par 5 year ke liye waha tumhari power
kam nhai karegi thik hi


White sprit king..............( Gusse se ) me app ko pehle
se hi bata de raha hu malik ager app ko is
do take ke dragon king ko le jana hi to me nhai aunga
Jin king........me bhi malik While sprit king
KE sath hu Dregon king bahut hi makkar hi

dragon king jo itni der se inki bate sun raha tha wo bahut gussa ho gaya
mere sath marg hone par uski power Tha white
sprit king aur Tha jin king se jada ho gayi
thi
Dragon king...............( dahadte hue ) tum dono ko apni jan pyari nhai aaj tum mere war se nhai bach
skoge
USki awaj itni jada power full thi ki pura
ka pura Andes mountains kapne laga
wo dono bhi thoda dare

Tha white sprit king.......... tum ne kya socha hi ki me
tumhari is awaj se dar jaunga glat socha hi tumne
me koi chiti nhi Tha white sprit king hu
IS univarse ke sabse top creature me se ek

jin king........ha Tha white sprit king sahi kah rahe hi
me bhi nhai darta tumse koi me jine e Badshah
hu jisse bade se bada top warrior bhi darta hi

dragon king ( gusse se )..........bahut akad hi tum dono
me chalo dekh leta hu himmat hi to a jao
medan me

Tha white sprit king ( dhad mar ke )........ha chalo tumhe
dikha hi deta hu tum kya sochte ho
tumhare aag ke golo se me drunga ese golo
se me app na khana pakata hu samjhe

Tha jin king........aur nhai to kya

Uske baad wo tino jaker medan me khade ho gaye
me to ankhe phad kar unhe dekh raha tha

unki bate sun mughe bahut gussa a gaya
me light ke speed se jaker un tino ke bich me khada
ho gaya

me ( gusse se )............tum logo ne kya majal samajh
rakha hi bahut jada charbi chad gayi hi
aur ha Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
me tumhara wo do take ka malik nhai
me hu Tha God of life and the prince of death
esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap uthe gi

me ( gusse se )...........chup chap jitna kaha jae
utna karo nhai to halak me hath dal jaban
kich lenge ham tum tino ke chup chap khade raho
jitna kaha jae utna karo jaban mat ladaya karo

Tino......( Dar ke mare sahme hue )........j ji ma m malik

Uske bad mene un tino aur apna roop change kar liya
Normal human jese aur maa aur pita ji ko man
Hi man sanket de dia ki wo hame earth 1 par phuch de


Uske bad ham sab Teleport hoker earth 1 par agaye

mene jab apni ankhe kholi to me earth 1 par
ik jungle ke kinare road par tha jaha is samay koi nhai
tha mene magic karne ki kosis ki lakin
ho nhai pa raha tha





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Superb update and thanks Kuwar Thakur Raj Rajput for continuing this beautiful story

 

[Bhimsen]

Badhiya bhai

 

[Vickyabhi]

Wonderful update

 

[ragish7357]

Hallo friends me is I d se update number 32 se post krunga ager app sab ko mere purane wale Update padhna ho to app sab meri purani I d Raj Singh Thakur per jaker padh sakte hi


Update number..................32

Ajj pehli bar pita ji ne mujhe apne sine se lagaya tha mughe bahut acha lag rah tha me sabdo me
nhi kah sakta ye universe jinke darshan ke liye
pata nhai kitne Yugo tapasya karta hi

wo mere pita ji hi mughe ajj garva hi raha tha
KI me unki santan hu jinis pire Universe ke
Bhagwan hi
thodi der baad me pita ji se alag hua

me..........pita ji me earth 1 par ja raha hu maa
ki agya hi mughe ashirwad dijiye ki me
apne kam me safal hu
pita ji.............Tum jarur saphal hoge Raj but tumhe
earth 1 dyan lagana hoga tabhi jaker tum God of life and
Prince of death ban paoge
5 year tak tum koi bhi magic nhai kar
paoge aur na hi jinhe tum yaha se le

ja rhe ho wo waha tumhe 5 year tak rahker
dyan lagana hoga aur 5 year bad
tumhe is univarse ka ik bahut hi powerfull
astra Tha chain of white and black power

milega aur ha 5 year bad tumhe divya sharir
God wala aur tumhari sari skati mil gayega
tab jaker tum is univarse ke 4 God Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death ban paoge

earth 1 par tum ik sadharan insan jese ho jaoge
bas Tumhare pas tumhari physical power hongi
kya tum ab tyar ho waha jane ke liye

me............ji maa ji pita ji me tyar hu jane ke liye
earth 1 me hmesa apke nirdesho ka palan
krunga
uske baad mene maa pita ji ko per chu kar
pranam kia

Maa aur pita ji .........Vijayi bhawa putra

uske baad me apne app ko Tha mountain
of Andes me pragat kia
aur Tha jin king , Tha king of white sprit
aur dragon king ko apne mastisk dwara sanket
bhej Tha mountain of Andes me bula lia

wo tino a gaye

White sprit king............ malik ham chalne ke liye tyar hi
jin king.....me bhi
dragon king........chle malik
me..................Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
ye hi dragon king tum tino mere sath jaoge
earth 1 par 5 year ke liye waha tumhari power
kam nhai karegi thik hi


White sprit king..............( Gusse se ) me app ko pehle
se hi bata de raha hu malik ager app ko is
do take ke dragon king ko le jana hi to me nhai aunga
Jin king........me bhi malik While sprit king
KE sath hu Dregon king bahut hi makkar hi

dragon king jo itni der se inki bate sun raha tha wo bahut gussa ho gaya
mere sath marg hone par uski power Tha white
sprit king aur Tha jin king se jada ho gayi
thi
Dragon king...............( dahadte hue ) tum dono ko apni jan pyari nhai aaj tum mere war se nhai bach
skoge
USki awaj itni jada power full thi ki pura
ka pura Andes mountains kapne laga
wo dono bhi thoda dare

Tha white sprit king.......... tum ne kya socha hi ki me
tumhari is awaj se dar jaunga glat socha hi tumne
me koi chiti nhi Tha white sprit king hu
IS univarse ke sabse top creature me se ek

jin king........ha Tha white sprit king sahi kah rahe hi
me bhi nhai darta tumse koi me jine e Badshah
hu jisse bade se bada top warrior bhi darta hi

dragon king ( gusse se )..........bahut akad hi tum dono
me chalo dekh leta hu himmat hi to a jao
medan me

Tha white sprit king ( dhad mar ke )........ha chalo tumhe
dikha hi deta hu tum kya sochte ho
tumhare aag ke golo se me drunga ese golo
se me app na khana pakata hu samjhe

Tha jin king........aur nhai to kya

Uske baad wo tino jaker medan me khade ho gaye
me to ankhe phad kar unhe dekh raha tha

unki bate sun mughe bahut gussa a gaya
me light ke speed se jaker un tino ke bich me khada
ho gaya

me ( gusse se )............tum logo ne kya majal samajh
rakha hi bahut jada charbi chad gayi hi
aur ha Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
me tumhara wo do take ka malik nhai
me hu Tha God of life and the prince of death
esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap uthe gi

me ( gusse se )...........chup chap jitna kaha jae
utna karo nhai to halak me hath dal jaban
kich lenge ham tum tino ke chup chap khade raho
jitna kaha jae utna karo jaban mat ladaya karo

Tino......( Dar ke mare sahme hue )........j ji ma m malik

Uske bad mene un tino aur apna roop change kar liya
Normal human jese aur maa aur pita ji ko man
Hi man sanket de dia ki wo hame earth 1 par phuch de


Uske bad ham sab Teleport hoker earth 1 par agaye

mene jab apni ankhe kholi to me earth 1 par
ik jungle ke kinare road par tha jaha is samay koi nhai
tha mene magic karne ki kosis ki lakin
ho nhai pa raha tha





Hallo friends app log is Update ko padhe aur btaye ki app sab ko ye wala update kesa laga ager app sab ne kewal 12 comments bhi kar dia to next update bas kuch hours me mil jayega aur ager app sab ko ye story achi nhai lag rahi hi to bhi btaye me close kar dunga ok

superbb update bro

 

[ragish7357]

bhai 12 se jyada comment ho gye

 

[Devil hunter123]

Hallo friends me is I d se update number 32 se post krunga ager app sab ko mere purane wale Update padhna ho to app sab meri purani I d Raj Singh Thakur per jaker padh sakte hi


Update number..................32

Ajj pehli bar pita ji ne mujhe apne sine se lagaya tha mughe bahut acha lag rah tha me sabdo me
nhi kah sakta ye universe jinke darshan ke liye
pata nhai kitne Yugo tapasya karta hi

wo mere pita ji hi mughe ajj garva hi raha tha
KI me unki santan hu jinis pire Universe ke
Bhagwan hi
thodi der baad me pita ji se alag hua

me..........pita ji me earth 1 par ja raha hu maa
ki agya hi mughe ashirwad dijiye ki me
apne kam me safal hu
pita ji.............Tum jarur saphal hoge Raj but tumhe
earth 1 dyan lagana hoga tabhi jaker tum God of life and
Prince of death ban paoge
5 year tak tum koi bhi magic nhai kar
paoge aur na hi jinhe tum yaha se le

ja rhe ho wo waha tumhe 5 year tak rahker
dyan lagana hoga aur 5 year bad
tumhe is univarse ka ik bahut hi powerfull
astra Tha chain of white and black power

milega aur ha 5 year bad tumhe divya sharir
God wala aur tumhari sari skati mil gayega
tab jaker tum is univarse ke 4 God Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death ban paoge

earth 1 par tum ik sadharan insan jese ho jaoge
bas Tumhare pas tumhari physical power hongi
kya tum ab tyar ho waha jane ke liye

me............ji maa ji pita ji me tyar hu jane ke liye
earth 1 me hmesa apke nirdesho ka palan
krunga
uske baad mene maa pita ji ko per chu kar
pranam kia

Maa aur pita ji .........Vijayi bhawa putra

uske baad me apne app ko Tha mountain
of Andes me pragat kia
aur Tha jin king , Tha king of white sprit
aur dragon king ko apne mastisk dwara sanket
bhej Tha mountain of Andes me bula lia

wo tino a gaye

White sprit king............ malik ham chalne ke liye tyar hi
jin king.....me bhi
dragon king........chle malik
me..................Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
ye hi dragon king tum tino mere sath jaoge
earth 1 par 5 year ke liye waha tumhari power
kam nhai karegi thik hi


White sprit king..............( Gusse se ) me app ko pehle
se hi bata de raha hu malik ager app ko is
do take ke dragon king ko le jana hi to me nhai aunga
Jin king........me bhi malik While sprit king
KE sath hu Dregon king bahut hi makkar hi

dragon king jo itni der se inki bate sun raha tha wo bahut gussa ho gaya
mere sath marg hone par uski power Tha white
sprit king aur Tha jin king se jada ho gayi
thi
Dragon king...............( dahadte hue ) tum dono ko apni jan pyari nhai aaj tum mere war se nhai bach
skoge
USki awaj itni jada power full thi ki pura
ka pura Andes mountains kapne laga
wo dono bhi thoda dare

Tha white sprit king.......... tum ne kya socha hi ki me
tumhari is awaj se dar jaunga glat socha hi tumne
me koi chiti nhi Tha white sprit king hu
IS univarse ke sabse top creature me se ek

jin king........ha Tha white sprit king sahi kah rahe hi
me bhi nhai darta tumse koi me jine e Badshah
hu jisse bade se bada top warrior bhi darta hi

dragon king ( gusse se )..........bahut akad hi tum dono
me chalo dekh leta hu himmat hi to a jao
medan me

Tha white sprit king ( dhad mar ke )........ha chalo tumhe
dikha hi deta hu tum kya sochte ho
tumhare aag ke golo se me drunga ese golo
se me app na khana pakata hu samjhe

Tha jin king........aur nhai to kya

Uske baad wo tino jaker medan me khade ho gaye
me to ankhe phad kar unhe dekh raha tha

unki bate sun mughe bahut gussa a gaya
me light ke speed se jaker un tino ke bich me khada
ho gaya

me ( gusse se )............tum logo ne kya majal samajh
rakha hi bahut jada charbi chad gayi hi
aur ha Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
me tumhara wo do take ka malik nhai
me hu Tha God of life and the prince of death
esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap uthe gi

me ( gusse se )...........chup chap jitna kaha jae
utna karo nhai to halak me hath dal jaban
kich lenge ham tum tino ke chup chap khade raho
jitna kaha jae utna karo jaban mat ladaya karo

Tino......( Dar ke mare sahme hue )........j ji ma m malik

Uske bad mene un tino aur apna roop change kar liya
Normal human jese aur maa aur pita ji ko man
Hi man sanket de dia ki wo hame earth 1 par phuch de


Uske bad ham sab Teleport hoker earth 1 par agaye

mene jab apni ankhe kholi to me earth 1 par
ik jungle ke kinare road par tha jaha is samay koi nhai
tha mene magic karne ki kosis ki lakin
ho nhai pa raha tha





Hallo friends app log is Update ko padhe aur btaye ki app sab ko ye wala update kesa laga ager app sab ne kewal 12 comments bhi kar dia to next update bas kuch hours me mil jayega aur ager app sab ko ye story achi nhai lag rahi hi to bhi btaye me close kar dunga ok

Nice update

 

[Zaigham Bhatti]

Hallo friends me is I d se update number 32 se post krunga ager app sab ko mere purane wale Update padhna ho to app sab meri purani I d Raj Singh Thakur per jaker padh sakte hi


Update number..................32

Ajj pehli bar pita ji ne mujhe apne sine se lagaya tha mughe bahut acha lag rah tha me sabdo me
nhi kah sakta ye universe jinke darshan ke liye
pata nhai kitne Yugo tapasya karta hi

wo mere pita ji hi mughe ajj garva hi raha tha
KI me unki santan hu jinis pire Universe ke
Bhagwan hi
thodi der baad me pita ji se alag hua

me..........pita ji me earth 1 par ja raha hu maa
ki agya hi mughe ashirwad dijiye ki me
apne kam me safal hu
pita ji.............Tum jarur saphal hoge Raj but tumhe
earth 1 dyan lagana hoga tabhi jaker tum God of life and
Prince of death ban paoge
5 year tak tum koi bhi magic nhai kar
paoge aur na hi jinhe tum yaha se le

ja rhe ho wo waha tumhe 5 year tak rahker
dyan lagana hoga aur 5 year bad
tumhe is univarse ka ik bahut hi powerfull
astra Tha chain of white and black power

milega aur ha 5 year bad tumhe divya sharir
God wala aur tumhari sari skati mil gayega
tab jaker tum is univarse ke 4 God Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death ban paoge

earth 1 par tum ik sadharan insan jese ho jaoge
bas Tumhare pas tumhari physical power hongi
kya tum ab tyar ho waha jane ke liye

me............ji maa ji pita ji me tyar hu jane ke liye
earth 1 me hmesa apke nirdesho ka palan
krunga
uske baad mene maa pita ji ko per chu kar
pranam kia

Maa aur pita ji .........Vijayi bhawa putra

uske baad me apne app ko Tha mountain
of Andes me pragat kia
aur Tha jin king , Tha king of white sprit
aur dragon king ko apne mastisk dwara sanket
bhej Tha mountain of Andes me bula lia

wo tino a gaye

White sprit king............ malik ham chalne ke liye tyar hi
jin king.....me bhi
dragon king........chle malik
me..................Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
ye hi dragon king tum tino mere sath jaoge
earth 1 par 5 year ke liye waha tumhari power
kam nhai karegi thik hi


White sprit king..............( Gusse se ) me app ko pehle
se hi bata de raha hu malik ager app ko is
do take ke dragon king ko le jana hi to me nhai aunga
Jin king........me bhi malik While sprit king
KE sath hu Dregon king bahut hi makkar hi

dragon king jo itni der se inki bate sun raha tha wo bahut gussa ho gaya
mere sath marg hone par uski power Tha white
sprit king aur Tha jin king se jada ho gayi
thi
Dragon king...............( dahadte hue ) tum dono ko apni jan pyari nhai aaj tum mere war se nhai bach
skoge
USki awaj itni jada power full thi ki pura
ka pura Andes mountains kapne laga
wo dono bhi thoda dare

Tha white sprit king.......... tum ne kya socha hi ki me
tumhari is awaj se dar jaunga glat socha hi tumne
me koi chiti nhi Tha white sprit king hu
IS univarse ke sabse top creature me se ek

jin king........ha Tha white sprit king sahi kah rahe hi
me bhi nhai darta tumse koi me jine e Badshah
hu jisse bade se bada top warrior bhi darta hi

dragon king ( gusse se )..........bahut akad hi tum dono
me chalo dekh leta hu himmat hi to a jao
medan me

Tha white sprit king ( dhad mar ke )........ha chalo tumhe
dikha hi deta hu tum kya sochte ho
tumhare aag ke golo se me drunga ese golo
se me app na khana pakata hu samjhe

Tha jin king........aur nhai to kya

Uske baad wo tino jaker medan me khade ho gaye
me to ankhe phad kar unhe dekh raha tha

unki bate sun mughe bahut gussa a gaya
me light ke speed se jaker un tino ke bich me khada
ho gaya

me ( gusse se )............tum logo ne kya majal samajh
rakha hi bahut jada charbi chad gayi hi
aur ha Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
me tumhara wo do take ka malik nhai
me hu Tha God of life and the prince of death
esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap uthe gi

me ( gusse se )...........chup chap jitna kaha jae
utna karo nhai to halak me hath dal jaban
kich lenge ham tum tino ke chup chap khade raho
jitna kaha jae utna karo jaban mat ladaya karo

Tino......( Dar ke mare sahme hue )........j ji ma m malik

Uske bad mene un tino aur apna roop change kar liya
Normal human jese aur maa aur pita ji ko man
Hi man sanket de dia ki wo hame earth 1 par phuch de


Uske bad ham sab Teleport hoker earth 1 par agaye

mene jab apni ankhe kholi to me earth 1 par
ik jungle ke kinare road par tha jaha is samay koi nhai
tha mene magic karne ki kosis ki lakin
ho nhai pa raha tha





Hallo friends app log is Update ko padhe aur btaye ki app sab ko ye wala update kesa laga ager app sab ne kewal 12 comments bhi kar dia to next update bas kuch hours me mil jayega aur ager app sab ko ye story achi nhai lag rahi hi to bhi btaye me close kar dunga ok

Waiting for next update

 

[Luffy]

Awesome update

Hallo friends me is I d se update number 32 se post krunga ager app sab ko mere purane wale Update padhna ho to app sab meri purani I d Raj Singh Thakur per jaker padh sakte hi


Update number..................32

Ajj pehli bar pita ji ne mujhe apne sine se lagaya tha mughe bahut acha lag rah tha me sabdo me
nhi kah sakta ye universe jinke darshan ke liye
pata nhai kitne Yugo tapasya karta hi

wo mere pita ji hi mughe ajj garva hi raha tha
KI me unki santan hu jinis pire Universe ke
Bhagwan hi
thodi der baad me pita ji se alag hua

me..........pita ji me earth 1 par ja raha hu maa
ki agya hi mughe ashirwad dijiye ki me
apne kam me safal hu
pita ji.............Tum jarur saphal hoge Raj but tumhe
earth 1 dyan lagana hoga tabhi jaker tum God of life and
Prince of death ban paoge
5 year tak tum koi bhi magic nhai kar
paoge aur na hi jinhe tum yaha se le

ja rhe ho wo waha tumhe 5 year tak rahker
dyan lagana hoga aur 5 year bad
tumhe is univarse ka ik bahut hi powerfull
astra Tha chain of white and black power

milega aur ha 5 year bad tumhe divya sharir
God wala aur tumhari sari skati mil gayega
tab jaker tum is univarse ke 4 God Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death ban paoge

earth 1 par tum ik sadharan insan jese ho jaoge
bas Tumhare pas tumhari physical power hongi
kya tum ab tyar ho waha jane ke liye

me............ji maa ji pita ji me tyar hu jane ke liye
earth 1 me hmesa apke nirdesho ka palan
krunga
uske baad mene maa pita ji ko per chu kar
pranam kia

Maa aur pita ji .........Vijayi bhawa putra

uske baad me apne app ko Tha mountain
of Andes me pragat kia
aur Tha jin king , Tha king of white sprit
aur dragon king ko apne mastisk dwara sanket
bhej Tha mountain of Andes me bula lia

wo tino a gaye

White sprit king............ malik ham chalne ke liye tyar hi
jin king.....me bhi
dragon king........chle malik
me..................Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
ye hi dragon king tum tino mere sath jaoge
earth 1 par 5 year ke liye waha tumhari power
kam nhai karegi thik hi


White sprit king..............( Gusse se ) me app ko pehle
se hi bata de raha hu malik ager app ko is
do take ke dragon king ko le jana hi to me nhai aunga
Jin king........me bhi malik While sprit king
KE sath hu Dregon king bahut hi makkar hi

dragon king jo itni der se inki bate sun raha tha wo bahut gussa ho gaya
mere sath marg hone par uski power Tha white
sprit king aur Tha jin king se jada ho gayi
thi
Dragon king...............( dahadte hue ) tum dono ko apni jan pyari nhai aaj tum mere war se nhai bach
skoge
USki awaj itni jada power full thi ki pura
ka pura Andes mountains kapne laga
wo dono bhi thoda dare

Tha white sprit king.......... tum ne kya socha hi ki me
tumhari is awaj se dar jaunga glat socha hi tumne
me koi chiti nhi Tha white sprit king hu
IS univarse ke sabse top creature me se ek

jin king........ha Tha white sprit king sahi kah rahe hi
me bhi nhai darta tumse koi me jine e Badshah
hu jisse bade se bada top warrior bhi darta hi

dragon king ( gusse se )..........bahut akad hi tum dono
me chalo dekh leta hu himmat hi to a jao
medan me

Tha white sprit king ( dhad mar ke )........ha chalo tumhe
dikha hi deta hu tum kya sochte ho
tumhare aag ke golo se me drunga ese golo
se me app na khana pakata hu samjhe

Tha jin king........aur nhai to kya

Uske baad wo tino jaker medan me khade ho gaye
me to ankhe phad kar unhe dekh raha tha

unki bate sun mughe bahut gussa a gaya
me light ke speed se jaker un tino ke bich me khada
ho gaya

me ( gusse se )............tum logo ne kya majal samajh
rakha hi bahut jada charbi chad gayi hi
aur ha Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
me tumhara wo do take ka malik nhai
me hu Tha God of life and the prince of death
esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap uthe gi

me ( gusse se )...........chup chap jitna kaha jae
utna karo nhai to halak me hath dal jaban
kich lenge ham tum tino ke chup chap khade raho
jitna kaha jae utna karo jaban mat ladaya karo

Tino......( Dar ke mare sahme hue )........j ji ma m malik

Uske bad mene un tino aur apna roop change kar liya
Normal human jese aur maa aur pita ji ko man
Hi man sanket de dia ki wo hame earth 1 par phuch de


Uske bad ham sab Teleport hoker earth 1 par agaye

mene jab apni ankhe kholi to me earth 1 par
ik jungle ke kinare road par tha jaha is samay koi nhai
tha mene magic karne ki kosis ki lakin
ho nhai pa raha tha





Hallo friends app log is Update ko padhe aur btaye ki app sab ko ye wala update kesa laga ager app sab ne kewal 12 comments bhi kar dia to next update bas kuch hours me mil jayega aur ager app sab ko ye story achi nhai lag rahi hi to bhi btaye me close kar dunga ok

 

[Vickey.a]

Bhaut he badiya update bhai aise he likhte raho hm sb aapke sath h

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Hallo friends me is I d se update number 32 se post krunga ager app sab ko mere purane wale Update padhna ho to app sab meri purani I d Raj Singh Thakur per jaker padh sakte hi


Update number..................32

Ajj pehli bar pita ji ne mujhe apne sine se lagaya tha mughe bahut acha lag rah tha me sabdo me
nhi kah sakta ye universe jinke darshan ke liye
pata nhai kitne Yugo tapasya karta hi

wo mere pita ji hi mughe ajj garva hi raha tha
KI me unki santan hu jinis pire Universe ke
Bhagwan hi
thodi der baad me pita ji se alag hua

me..........pita ji me earth 1 par ja raha hu maa
ki agya hi mughe ashirwad dijiye ki me
apne kam me safal hu
pita ji.............Tum jarur saphal hoge Raj but tumhe
earth 1 dyan lagana hoga tabhi jaker tum God of life and
Prince of death ban paoge
5 year tak tum koi bhi magic nhai kar
paoge aur na hi jinhe tum yaha se le

ja rhe ho wo waha tumhe 5 year tak rahker
dyan lagana hoga aur 5 year bad
tumhe is univarse ka ik bahut hi powerfull
astra Tha chain of white and black power

milega aur ha 5 year bad tumhe divya sharir
God wala aur tumhari sari skati mil gayega
tab jaker tum is univarse ke 4 God Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death ban paoge

earth 1 par tum ik sadharan insan jese ho jaoge
bas Tumhare pas tumhari physical power hongi
kya tum ab tyar ho waha jane ke liye

me............ji maa ji pita ji me tyar hu jane ke liye
earth 1 me hmesa apke nirdesho ka palan
krunga
uske baad mene maa pita ji ko per chu kar
pranam kia

Maa aur pita ji .........Vijayi bhawa putra

uske baad me apne app ko Tha mountain
of Andes me pragat kia
aur Tha jin king , Tha king of white sprit
aur dragon king ko apne mastisk dwara sanket
bhej Tha mountain of Andes me bula lia

wo tino a gaye

White sprit king............ malik ham chalne ke liye tyar hi
jin king.....me bhi
dragon king........chle malik
me..................Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
ye hi dragon king tum tino mere sath jaoge
earth 1 par 5 year ke liye waha tumhari power
kam nhai karegi thik hi


White sprit king..............( Gusse se ) me app ko pehle
se hi bata de raha hu malik ager app ko is
do take ke dragon king ko le jana hi to me nhai aunga
Jin king........me bhi malik While sprit king
KE sath hu Dregon king bahut hi makkar hi

dragon king jo itni der se inki bate sun raha tha wo bahut gussa ho gaya
mere sath marg hone par uski power Tha white
sprit king aur Tha jin king se jada ho gayi
thi
Dragon king...............( dahadte hue ) tum dono ko apni jan pyari nhai aaj tum mere war se nhai bach
skoge
USki awaj itni jada power full thi ki pura
ka pura Andes mountains kapne laga
wo dono bhi thoda dare

Tha white sprit king.......... tum ne kya socha hi ki me
tumhari is awaj se dar jaunga glat socha hi tumne
me koi chiti nhi Tha white sprit king hu
IS univarse ke sabse top creature me se ek

jin king........ha Tha white sprit king sahi kah rahe hi
me bhi nhai darta tumse koi me jine e Badshah
hu jisse bade se bada top warrior bhi darta hi

dragon king ( gusse se )..........bahut akad hi tum dono
me chalo dekh leta hu himmat hi to a jao
medan me

Tha white sprit king ( dhad mar ke )........ha chalo tumhe
dikha hi deta hu tum kya sochte ho
tumhare aag ke golo se me drunga ese golo
se me app na khana pakata hu samjhe

Tha jin king........aur nhai to kya

Uske baad wo tino jaker medan me khade ho gaye
me to ankhe phad kar unhe dekh raha tha

unki bate sun mughe bahut gussa a gaya
me light ke speed se jaker un tino ke bich me khada
ho gaya

me ( gusse se )............tum logo ne kya majal samajh
rakha hi bahut jada charbi chad gayi hi
aur ha Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
me tumhara wo do take ka malik nhai
me hu Tha God of life and the prince of death
esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap uthe gi

me ( gusse se )...........chup chap jitna kaha jae
utna karo nhai to halak me hath dal jaban
kich lenge ham tum tino ke chup chap khade raho
jitna kaha jae utna karo jaban mat ladaya karo

Tino......( Dar ke mare sahme hue )........j ji ma m malik

Uske bad mene un tino aur apna roop change kar liya
Normal human jese aur maa aur pita ji ko man
Hi man sanket de dia ki wo hame earth 1 par phuch de


Uske bad ham sab Teleport hoker earth 1 par agaye

mene jab apni ankhe kholi to me earth 1 par
ik jungle ke kinare road par tha jaha is samay koi nhai
tha mene magic karne ki kosis ki lakin
ho nhai pa raha tha





Hallo friends app log is Update ko padhe aur btaye ki app sab ko ye wala update kesa laga ager app sab ne kewal 12 comments bhi kar dia to next update bas kuch hours me mil jayega aur ager app sab ko ye story achi nhai lag rahi hi to bhi btaye me close kar dunga ok

fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai