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[Diwas]

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Shai Kaha Bhai Aapne

 

[jitutripathi00]

Update number.....33.......Tha great warrior










JAb ham log Teleport hoker earth 1 par pahuche to ham kahi jungle me the bagal me road thi koi aadmi nhai tha waha



White sprit king.......malik ye ham kaha a gaye hi

hamara magic bhi yaha kam nhai kar raha hi

jin king.......ha malik

me.......is samay ham earth 1 nam ke planet par hi

yaha 5 year tak hame rahna hi aur ab koi sawal nhai

dragon king..........ji malik



me........chalo mere sath tum tino kahi rahne ki byawastha karta hu me

fir tino mere sath chalne lage kuch der chalne ke bad bahut sari car aur bike par bethe aadmi dikhe



mene Andes mountains par hi earth 1 ki language

tino ke mind me dal di thi

White sprite king...... malik ye wahan kitne ache hi



ham yaha se jate samay inhe apne sath le chalenge

jin king.........tum sahi kah rahe ho tumhare pas

dimag hi lakin mugh se thoda kam hi

Mughe inki bate sun hasi a rahi



tavhi ek ladki ne hme awaj dekar bulaya

ladki...........ye bikhari yaha a thoda meri car

ko Dhakka de 2000 dungi tum charo ko



me......mughe bulaya tumne

Dregon king...........( Gusse se) bhikhari kise kaha

tumne badtameez ladki tumhe jine ka shok nhai

ha kya

white sprit king......tumhari ye majal mugjhe bhikari

kaha me king Tha White sprite king pura universe mughe janta hi

jin king...............aur me kya koi bikhari dikhta hu tumhe me hu Tha jin king



is sab ki baat sun wo ladki hasne lagi

ladki........kisi pagal khane se aye ho tum charo jo esi

bate kar rahe ho 5 year ke bache jisi ye cartoon ki

duniya nhai hi

bol to ese rahe ho jise kahi ke Raja hi bhikari kahi ke



Dragon king ( gusse se )...........malik app is badtameez ladki ko bta de nhai to ajj me ise

bahut buri mout dunga ajj tak kisi ne bhi hmara apman nhai kia hi

Ladki.............badtameez kahi ke jante ho me kon hu
R . K group of industries ki woner apni car se gun
nikal kar

ladki..........ager jada awaj nikal rahi ho to btao
YAhi goli mar dungi

white sprit king..........tum kya hame koi dudh pita bacha samajh rakaha hin jo dhamki de rahi ho

me ne dekha ki ab baat bigad rahi hi is samay mere pas
power to hi
mene jaker tino ko tin - tin thapad mare

me.........ji maf karna ye tino pagal hi ja raha tha inko
mental hospital me barti krane app
inki bato ka bura maniye
me.......chalo tino mere sath nhai to yahi chod kar
chala jaunga

mere piche - piche wo tino bhi chane lage
kuch dur jane ke baad me ek jagah ruka jaha koi
nhai tha

pehle tino ko 5 thappad mere
me.......tum tino ka pas dimag nhai hi dubara ager kisi
se bhi ladayi jaghde kie to bahut marunga
tumhari wajah se ajj mughe do take ki ladki
ke samne sir jhukana pada
me.....is samay tumhare pas power nhai hi aur
ager kisi ne pakad lia to bahut mrega


white sprit king aur jin king........lakin Malik
apne dekha nhai wo namakul do take ki
ladki hamse kese bate kar rahi thi
Dregon king.........aur to aur malik us e hame bhikari
bhi kaha ham apna apman sah nhai paye

unka itna hi kahna tha ki mene gusse me aker un sab
ko aue mara
me ( gusse me ).......ager dubara ijjat ki bqqt ki
to death chain me kaid krunga tum tino ko
jitna bola jaye bas utna hi karo
TIno ne jese hi death chain ka nam

suna kapne lage
Tino ( dar se kapte hue )..........nhai malik kripya hame app
death chain me mat kaid kriye ab ham kisi
se nhai krenge

fir uske baad ham log kuch der chalne ke baad
ek dukan pr a gaye ab jab se me earth 1 par aya
tha tab se mughe bhi pyas aur bukh lag rahi

thi ab mere pas rupaye to the bhai to socha ki kyona
thoda pani hi pi liya jaye
me............ Dregon king jao aur pani ki Byawastha karo
hame pyas
lag rahi hi

dragon king.....ji malik
iske baad wo gaya
dukan dar ke pas
Dregon king......ye dukan wale ja jaker acha aur
saf pani lekar a
dukan dar......bol to esa raha hi ki jese kahi


ke raja ho jao jaker le lo balti me hi
Dregon king.........tum mughe kah rahe ho
dukandar......nhai tumhare baap ko kah raha hu
Dregon king ne man me socha ud le beta tu bhi
abhi apna hi din bekar hi ik bar meri power wapas
a jaye fir btata hu tum sab ko


Dregon king ne ik jag me pani liya aur laker
mughe dia
mene pani piya fir socha ki koi kam karna padega nhai to rahenge kaha aur khayege kya

fir ham sab waha se city ki traf chal die

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[Kinghigh]

app ne ye bola ki writer story start karte hi lekin puri nhai karte regular updates nhai dete mera mobile reset ho gya tha is liye mughe new I d banani padi bhai
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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai 33 ke agai ke update kanha milenge

 

[Sidh]

Bhai 34 updated ka koe chance hai ya nahi ye to bata do
Kab tak milega next update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai 34 updated ka koe chance hai ya nahi ye to bata do
Kab tak milega next update

??????bhai 33 update pahle achuke h 7 page ke comments read karo toh pata chal jayega ki kiske chance h kiske ni

 

[Bilal jan]

Hallo friends me is I d se update number 32 se post krunga ager app sab ko mere purane wale Update padhna ho to app sab meri purani I d Raj Singh Thakur per jaker padh sakte hi


Update number..................32

Ajj pehli bar pita ji ne mujhe apne sine se lagaya tha mughe bahut acha lag rah tha me sabdo me
nhi kah sakta ye universe jinke darshan ke liye
pata nhai kitne Yugo tapasya karta hi

wo mere pita ji hi mughe ajj garva hi raha tha
KI me unki santan hu jinis pire Universe ke
Bhagwan hi
thodi der baad me pita ji se alag hua

me..........pita ji me earth 1 par ja raha hu maa
ki agya hi mughe ashirwad dijiye ki me
apne kam me safal hu
pita ji.............Tum jarur saphal hoge Raj but tumhe
earth 1 dyan lagana hoga tabhi jaker tum God of life and
Prince of death ban paoge
5 year tak tum koi bhi magic nhai kar
paoge aur na hi jinhe tum yaha se le

ja rhe ho wo waha tumhe 5 year tak rahker
dyan lagana hoga aur 5 year bad
tumhe is univarse ka ik bahut hi powerfull
astra Tha chain of white and black power

milega aur ha 5 year bad tumhe divya sharir
God wala aur tumhari sari skati mil gayega
tab jaker tum is univarse ke 4 God Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death ban paoge

earth 1 par tum ik sadharan insan jese ho jaoge
bas Tumhare pas tumhari physical power hongi
kya tum ab tyar ho waha jane ke liye

me............ji maa ji pita ji me tyar hu jane ke liye
earth 1 me hmesa apke nirdesho ka palan
krunga
uske baad mene maa pita ji ko per chu kar
pranam kia

Maa aur pita ji .........Vijayi bhawa putra

uske baad me apne app ko Tha mountain
of Andes me pragat kia
aur Tha jin king , Tha king of white sprit
aur dragon king ko apne mastisk dwara sanket
bhej Tha mountain of Andes me bula lia

wo tino a gaye

White sprit king............ malik ham chalne ke liye tyar hi
jin king.....me bhi
dragon king........chle malik
me..................Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
ye hi dragon king tum tino mere sath jaoge
earth 1 par 5 year ke liye waha tumhari power
kam nhai karegi thik hi


White sprit king..............( Gusse se ) me app ko pehle
se hi bata de raha hu malik ager app ko is
do take ke dragon king ko le jana hi to me nhai aunga
Jin king........me bhi malik While sprit king
KE sath hu Dregon king bahut hi makkar hi

dragon king jo itni der se inki bate sun raha tha wo bahut gussa ho gaya
mere sath marg hone par uski power Tha white
sprit king aur Tha jin king se jada ho gayi
thi
Dragon king...............( dahadte hue ) tum dono ko apni jan pyari nhai aaj tum mere war se nhai bach
skoge
USki awaj itni jada power full thi ki pura
ka pura Andes mountains kapne laga
wo dono bhi thoda dare

Tha white sprit king.......... tum ne kya socha hi ki me
tumhari is awaj se dar jaunga glat socha hi tumne
me koi chiti nhi Tha white sprit king hu
IS univarse ke sabse top creature me se ek

jin king........ha Tha white sprit king sahi kah rahe hi
me bhi nhai darta tumse koi me jine e Badshah
hu jisse bade se bada top warrior bhi darta hi

dragon king ( gusse se )..........bahut akad hi tum dono
me chalo dekh leta hu himmat hi to a jao
medan me

Tha white sprit king ( dhad mar ke )........ha chalo tumhe
dikha hi deta hu tum kya sochte ho
tumhare aag ke golo se me drunga ese golo
se me app na khana pakata hu samjhe

Tha jin king........aur nhai to kya

Uske baad wo tino jaker medan me khade ho gaye
me to ankhe phad kar unhe dekh raha tha

unki bate sun mughe bahut gussa a gaya
me light ke speed se jaker un tino ke bich me khada
ho gaya

me ( gusse se )............tum logo ne kya majal samajh
rakha hi bahut jada charbi chad gayi hi
aur ha Tha white sprit king aur Tha jin king
me tumhara wo do take ka malik nhai
me hu Tha God of life and the prince of death
esi mout dunga ki mout bhi kap uthe gi

me ( gusse se )...........chup chap jitna kaha jae
utna karo nhai to halak me hath dal jaban
kich lenge ham tum tino ke chup chap khade raho
jitna kaha jae utna karo jaban mat ladaya karo

Tino......( Dar ke mare sahme hue )........j ji ma m malik

Uske bad mene un tino aur apna roop change kar liya
Normal human jese aur maa aur pita ji ko man
Hi man sanket de dia ki wo hame earth 1 par phuch de


Uske bad ham sab Teleport hoker earth 1 par agaye

mene jab apni ankhe kholi to me earth 1 par
ik jungle ke kinare road par tha jaha is samay koi nhai
tha mene magic karne ki kosis ki lakin
ho nhai pa raha tha





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