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ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Update number...............34........Tha great warrior


ham sab city ki trafh chal die mene socha
ab mughe kuch kam karna padega nhai to khayenge
kya
abhi ham ja hi rahe the ki Dregon king ne mugh se
kaha
Dregon king......malik malik wo dekho ik bahut sundar kanya me kya kahta hu ese app ham logo ki
malik bana dijie aur ager app ko na banana ho
to ham hi usse bibah kar lete hi

Dregon king ki baat sun kar white sprit king jaldi se
bola
White sprit king.....kyo apni sakal dekhi hi kabhi wo
tumhari bhabhi hi ijjat se baat karo me to ja raha
hu malik app ne mugje yaha laker bahut acha
kia ab me apne liye 100 - 200 Raniya to bana
hi lunga
jin king..........tum log ladte hue ache nhai lagte
wo banegi jin lok ki malika

unki baat sun kar me bahut gussa ho gaya socha
ajj rat kyo na police station me bita lu in chutiya
logo ko bhi mar padegi tabhi ye sudh hoge

me........ha ha kyo nhai
mera itna hi bolana tha ki tino tezi se us police wali
ladki ki trafh badhe
jab tino uske samne jaker khade ho gaye

police wali ladki.....kon ho tum log aur yu samne kyu khade ho gaye ho
Dregon king........ji mughe sharam a rahi hi me app se
shadi karna chahta hu
white sprit king.......kyo be chutiya mene kaha na
ye Tumhari bhabhi ji hi
ik bar samjh me nhai ati hi tujhe


jin king......tum dono kyo lad rahe ho ye sundari
meri malika hi
wo jo police wali ladki thi wo inki bakwas sun rahi wo
bahut gussa ho gayi
Dregon king.......malik app in dono ko samjha de
nhai to acha nhai hoga

me..( man me ).......sale kudh to marenge mughe
bhi le dubenge
us police wali ne tino ko 5 thappad lagaye
tino ka sar ghum gaya
Dregon king.......ya hamara apman ho raha hi
me to tumse shadi karna chahta tha lekin tum
Ne hame tapped mar kar acha nhai kia

White sprit king..........sundari app ne hamara apman
kia
ji king......aur nhai to kya

police wali........tum tino ko itni himmat mere samne
aker esi bate kar rahe ho mere nam se bade se bada
criminal darta hi me hu A C P kirti Thakur

Dregon king........ hahahaha hahaha Tumhare nam se
YE tuch log darte honge ham nhai darte hi
kirti......Hawaldar dalo inko gadi me le chal
kal khub maro lockup me sari hekdi nikal
jayegi

jin king.......kya ab hamare itne bure din a gaye hi ki
hame in jese logo ke hatho mar khana padega
malik inhe bataye ki me kon ho
me.. ( man me )......sale ne phasa dia
me......jinhe tino thoda mental hi app inki bato ka bura mat
Mane

white sprit king........sahi kaha malik app ne ye jin
king aur
Dregon king chutiya lekin me bahut
Chatur hu
kirti.. ( gusse se )......in sab ko turant gadi me dalo
ajj inhe me batati hu
Dregon king........ chutiya kise bola re do take ke
sher
jin king.....beta me tumhe ser se billi bana dunga
ager jada bologe to


uske bad ham charo ko gadi me bithaya gaya aur
kuch der bad ham sab police station pahuche

jin king......kya yaha hamari shadi hogi wese ye
sundar to nhai hi fir bhi ham kam chala lenge
white king........chup lagata hi me aur sundari
yaha suhagrat mnayege
dregon king.......sundari app mugje le chale
ye dono to pagal hi

kirti ........Ram singh ke kar chalo to in tino ko aur khub maro me batati hu abhi ki suhagrat kese manate hi

Tino........( Sharma kar ) ......wese to hame pata hi ki
suhagrat kese manate hi lekin jab app bata rahi hi
to chaliye dekh bhi lete hi

Ram singh ne ham sabko pakad kar lock up me
bande kia
me ( man me )......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gaya tha
ik bar yaha se me nikal jau to in tino ke
btaunga

Ram sing ne ham charo ki bandh dia
dregon king.........Sewak ye bandhan kyo laga
rahe ho tum hame
Ram singh......abhi kuch der me pata chalega
white king.....are chutiya yaha suhagrat manane ki
koi alag trika hoga
jin king....aur nhai to kya

kuch der bad kirti ayi
dregon king.......pehle ham se hi surwat karo devi
white king......nhai devi mugh se
jin King...........nhai devi mugh se

kirti........sab se mnaugi bas thoda sabar rakho
Tino......( Kushi se )....... Awasya devi
uske bad kirti ne waha pada ik danda uthata

aur marna chalu kar dia fir kya tha tino ko chikne do
dregon king..( chilate hue )......are koi bachao
ye kon si suhagrat nhi ham tumhe chodege
nhai maa bachao malik
kirti........abhi to bas surwat hi
white sprit king....( Rote hue ).....hame chod do

ab kabhi suhagrat nhai manayege sochege
bhi nhai ik bar chod do malik bacha lo
ro ro kar chilne laga white sprit king

jin king.........( Rote hue ).....ye dokha dia hi tumne
hame suhagrat manane ki jagha mar rahi
hi wo bhi itni buri trah se

malik bacha lo
kirti lagatar 1 hour mara tino ko aur tino ki
admari halat ho gayi
kirti......aur manao suhagrat ab kuch der bad fir
suhagrat manege
tino..( chilate hue)......nhai ab nahi manani hi
chod do hame


fir kirti chali gayi
dregon king.......malik ab app hi hame bacha sakte
hi
white king.....ha malik kripya hame bacha le
Mar mar ke bangi bana dia
jin king......bacha lo malik
me......nhai suhagrat manao
aur ab suhagrat nhai manana hi

Tuno ...rote hue.......nhai mere malik ab sapne
me bhi suhagrat nhai mayege


me......nhai ab mana hi lo

Superb update
 

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Update number...............34........Tha great warrior


ham sab city ki trafh chal die mene socha
ab mughe kuch kam karna padega nhai to khayenge
kya
abhi ham ja hi rahe the ki Dregon king ne mugh se
kaha
Dregon king......malik malik wo dekho ik bahut sundar kanya me kya kahta hu ese app ham logo ki
malik bana dijie aur ager app ko na banana ho
to ham hi usse bibah kar lete hi

Dregon king ki baat sun kar white sprit king jaldi se
bola
White sprit king.....kyo apni sakal dekhi hi kabhi wo
tumhari bhabhi hi ijjat se baat karo me to ja raha
hu malik app ne mugje yaha laker bahut acha
kia ab me apne liye 100 - 200 Raniya to bana
hi lunga
jin king..........tum log ladte hue ache nhai lagte
wo banegi jin lok ki malika

unki baat sun kar me bahut gussa ho gaya socha
ajj rat kyo na police station me bita lu in chutiya
logo ko bhi mar padegi tabhi ye sudh hoge

me........ha ha kyo nhai
mera itna hi bolana tha ki tino tezi se us police wali
ladki ki trafh badhe
jab tino uske samne jaker khade ho gaye

police wali ladki.....kon ho tum log aur yu samne kyu khade ho gaye ho
Dregon king........ji mughe sharam a rahi hi me app se
shadi karna chahta hu
white sprit king.......kyo be chutiya mene kaha na
ye Tumhari bhabhi ji hi
ik bar samjh me nhai ati hi tujhe


jin king......tum dono kyo lad rahe ho ye sundari
meri malika hi
wo jo police wali ladki thi wo inki bakwas sun rahi wo
bahut gussa ho gayi
Dregon king.......malik app in dono ko samjha de
nhai to acha nhai hoga

me..( man me ).......sale kudh to marenge mughe
bhi le dubenge
us police wali ne tino ko 5 thappad lagaye
tino ka sar ghum gaya
Dregon king.......ya hamara apman ho raha hi
me to tumse shadi karna chahta tha lekin tum
Ne hame tapped mar kar acha nhai kia

White sprit king..........sundari app ne hamara apman
kia
ji king......aur nhai to kya

police wali........tum tino ko itni himmat mere samne
aker esi bate kar rahe ho mere nam se bade se bada
criminal darta hi me hu A C P kirti Thakur

Dregon king........ hahahaha hahaha Tumhare nam se
YE tuch log darte honge ham nhai darte hi
kirti......Hawaldar dalo inko gadi me le chal
kal khub maro lockup me sari hekdi nikal
jayegi

jin king.......kya ab hamare itne bure din a gaye hi ki
hame in jese logo ke hatho mar khana padega
malik inhe bataye ki me kon ho
me.. ( man me )......sale ne phasa dia
me......jinhe tino thoda mental hi app inki bato ka bura mat
Mane

white sprit king........sahi kaha malik app ne ye jin
king aur
Dregon king chutiya lekin me bahut
Chatur hu
kirti.. ( gusse se )......in sab ko turant gadi me dalo
ajj inhe me batati hu
Dregon king........ chutiya kise bola re do take ke
sher
jin king.....beta me tumhe ser se billi bana dunga
ager jada bologe to


uske bad ham charo ko gadi me bithaya gaya aur
kuch der bad ham sab police station pahuche

jin king......kya yaha hamari shadi hogi wese ye
sundar to nhai hi fir bhi ham kam chala lenge
white king........chup lagata hi me aur sundari
yaha suhagrat mnayege
dregon king.......sundari app mugje le chale
ye dono to pagal hi

kirti ........Ram singh ke kar chalo to in tino ko aur khub maro me batati hu abhi ki suhagrat kese manate hi

Tino........( Sharma kar ) ......wese to hame pata hi ki
suhagrat kese manate hi lekin jab app bata rahi hi
to chaliye dekh bhi lete hi

Ram singh ne ham sabko pakad kar lock up me
bande kia
me ( man me )......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gaya tha
ik bar yaha se me nikal jau to in tino ke
btaunga

Ram sing ne ham charo ki bandh dia
dregon king.........Sewak ye bandhan kyo laga
rahe ho tum hame
Ram singh......abhi kuch der me pata chalega
white king.....are chutiya yaha suhagrat manane ki
koi alag trika hoga
jin king....aur nhai to kya

kuch der bad kirti ayi
dregon king.......pehle ham se hi surwat karo devi
white king......nhai devi mugh se
jin King...........nhai devi mugh se

kirti........sab se mnaugi bas thoda sabar rakho
Tino......( Kushi se )....... Awasya devi
uske bad kirti ne waha pada ik danda uthata

aur marna chalu kar dia fir kya tha tino ko chikne do
dregon king..( chilate hue )......are koi bachao
ye kon si suhagrat nhi ham tumhe chodege
nhai maa bachao malik
kirti........abhi to bas surwat hi
white sprit king....( Rote hue ).....hame chod do

ab kabhi suhagrat nhai manayege sochege
bhi nhai ik bar chod do malik bacha lo
ro ro kar chilne laga white sprit king

jin king.........( Rote hue ).....ye dokha dia hi tumne
hame suhagrat manane ki jagha mar rahi
hi wo bhi itni buri trah se

malik bacha lo
kirti lagatar 1 hour mara tino ko aur tino ki
admari halat ho gayi
kirti......aur manao suhagrat ab kuch der bad fir
suhagrat manege
tino..( chilate hue)......nhai ab nahi manani hi
chod do hame


fir kirti chali gayi
dregon king.......malik ab app hi hame bacha sakte
hi
white king.....ha malik kripya hame bacha le
Mar mar ke bangi bana dia
jin king......bacha lo malik
me......nhai suhagrat manao
aur ab suhagrat nhai manana hi

Tuno ...rote hue.......nhai mere malik ab sapne
me bhi suhagrat nhai mayege


me......nhai ab mana hi lo
Welcome back bro kya hall kiya hai teno ka hahaha bachry🤣🤣🤣
 

Devil hunter123

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Update number...............34........Tha great warrior


ham sab city ki trafh chal die mene socha
ab mughe kuch kam karna padega nhai to khayenge
kya
abhi ham ja hi rahe the ki Dregon king ne mugh se
kaha
Dregon king......malik malik wo dekho ik bahut sundar kanya me kya kahta hu ese app ham logo ki
malik bana dijie aur ager app ko na banana ho
to ham hi usse bibah kar lete hi

Dregon king ki baat sun kar white sprit king jaldi se
bola
White sprit king.....kyo apni sakal dekhi hi kabhi wo
tumhari bhabhi hi ijjat se baat karo me to ja raha
hu malik app ne mugje yaha laker bahut acha
kia ab me apne liye 100 - 200 Raniya to bana
hi lunga
jin king..........tum log ladte hue ache nhai lagte
wo banegi jin lok ki malika

unki baat sun kar me bahut gussa ho gaya socha
ajj rat kyo na police station me bita lu in chutiya
logo ko bhi mar padegi tabhi ye sudh hoge

me........ha ha kyo nhai
mera itna hi bolana tha ki tino tezi se us police wali
ladki ki trafh badhe
jab tino uske samne jaker khade ho gaye

police wali ladki.....kon ho tum log aur yu samne kyu khade ho gaye ho
Dregon king........ji mughe sharam a rahi hi me app se
shadi karna chahta hu
white sprit king.......kyo be chutiya mene kaha na
ye Tumhari bhabhi ji hi
ik bar samjh me nhai ati hi tujhe


jin king......tum dono kyo lad rahe ho ye sundari
meri malika hi
wo jo police wali ladki thi wo inki bakwas sun rahi wo
bahut gussa ho gayi
Dregon king.......malik app in dono ko samjha de
nhai to acha nhai hoga

me..( man me ).......sale kudh to marenge mughe
bhi le dubenge
us police wali ne tino ko 5 thappad lagaye
tino ka sar ghum gaya
Dregon king.......ya hamara apman ho raha hi
me to tumse shadi karna chahta tha lekin tum
Ne hame tapped mar kar acha nhai kia

White sprit king..........sundari app ne hamara apman
kia
ji king......aur nhai to kya

police wali........tum tino ko itni himmat mere samne
aker esi bate kar rahe ho mere nam se bade se bada
criminal darta hi me hu A C P kirti Thakur

Dregon king........ hahahaha hahaha Tumhare nam se
YE tuch log darte honge ham nhai darte hi
kirti......Hawaldar dalo inko gadi me le chal
kal khub maro lockup me sari hekdi nikal
jayegi

jin king.......kya ab hamare itne bure din a gaye hi ki
hame in jese logo ke hatho mar khana padega
malik inhe bataye ki me kon ho
me.. ( man me )......sale ne phasa dia
me......jinhe tino thoda mental hi app inki bato ka bura mat
Mane

white sprit king........sahi kaha malik app ne ye jin
king aur
Dregon king chutiya lekin me bahut
Chatur hu
kirti.. ( gusse se )......in sab ko turant gadi me dalo
ajj inhe me batati hu
Dregon king........ chutiya kise bola re do take ke
sher
jin king.....beta me tumhe ser se billi bana dunga
ager jada bologe to


uske bad ham charo ko gadi me bithaya gaya aur
kuch der bad ham sab police station pahuche

jin king......kya yaha hamari shadi hogi wese ye
sundar to nhai hi fir bhi ham kam chala lenge
white king........chup lagata hi me aur sundari
yaha suhagrat mnayege
dregon king.......sundari app mugje le chale
ye dono to pagal hi

kirti ........Ram singh ke kar chalo to in tino ko aur khub maro me batati hu abhi ki suhagrat kese manate hi

Tino........( Sharma kar ) ......wese to hame pata hi ki
suhagrat kese manate hi lekin jab app bata rahi hi
to chaliye dekh bhi lete hi

Ram singh ne ham sabko pakad kar lock up me
bande kia
me ( man me )......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gaya tha
ik bar yaha se me nikal jau to in tino ke
btaunga

Ram sing ne ham charo ki bandh dia
dregon king.........Sewak ye bandhan kyo laga
rahe ho tum hame
Ram singh......abhi kuch der me pata chalega
white king.....are chutiya yaha suhagrat manane ki
koi alag trika hoga
jin king....aur nhai to kya

kuch der bad kirti ayi
dregon king.......pehle ham se hi surwat karo devi
white king......nhai devi mugh se
jin King...........nhai devi mugh se

kirti........sab se mnaugi bas thoda sabar rakho
Tino......( Kushi se )....... Awasya devi
uske bad kirti ne waha pada ik danda uthata

aur marna chalu kar dia fir kya tha tino ko chikne do
dregon king..( chilate hue )......are koi bachao
ye kon si suhagrat nhi ham tumhe chodege
nhai maa bachao malik
kirti........abhi to bas surwat hi
white sprit king....( Rote hue ).....hame chod do

ab kabhi suhagrat nhai manayege sochege
bhi nhai ik bar chod do malik bacha lo
ro ro kar chilne laga white sprit king

jin king.........( Rote hue ).....ye dokha dia hi tumne
hame suhagrat manane ki jagha mar rahi
hi wo bhi itni buri trah se

malik bacha lo
kirti lagatar 1 hour mara tino ko aur tino ki
admari halat ho gayi
kirti......aur manao suhagrat ab kuch der bad fir
suhagrat manege
tino..( chilate hue)......nhai ab nahi manani hi
chod do hame


fir kirti chali gayi
dregon king.......malik ab app hi hame bacha sakte
hi
white king.....ha malik kripya hame bacha le
Mar mar ke bangi bana dia
jin king......bacha lo malik
me......nhai suhagrat manao
aur ab suhagrat nhai manana hi

Tuno ...rote hue.......nhai mere malik ab sapne
me bhi suhagrat nhai mayege


me......nhai ab mana hi lo

Fantastic update
 

Emperor Virat

HARD BOY
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Update number...............34........Tha great warrior


ham sab city ki trafh chal die mene socha
ab mughe kuch kam karna padega nhai to khayenge
kya
abhi ham ja hi rahe the ki Dregon king ne mugh se
kaha
Dregon king......malik malik wo dekho ik bahut sundar kanya me kya kahta hu ese app ham logo ki
malik bana dijie aur ager app ko na banana ho
to ham hi usse bibah kar lete hi

Dregon king ki baat sun kar white sprit king jaldi se
bola
White sprit king.....kyo apni sakal dekhi hi kabhi wo
tumhari bhabhi hi ijjat se baat karo me to ja raha
hu malik app ne mugje yaha laker bahut acha
kia ab me apne liye 100 - 200 Raniya to bana
hi lunga
jin king..........tum log ladte hue ache nhai lagte
wo banegi jin lok ki malika

unki baat sun kar me bahut gussa ho gaya socha
ajj rat kyo na police station me bita lu in chutiya
logo ko bhi mar padegi tabhi ye sudh hoge

me........ha ha kyo nhai
mera itna hi bolana tha ki tino tezi se us police wali
ladki ki trafh badhe
jab tino uske samne jaker khade ho gaye

police wali ladki.....kon ho tum log aur yu samne kyu khade ho gaye ho
Dregon king........ji mughe sharam a rahi hi me app se
shadi karna chahta hu
white sprit king.......kyo be chutiya mene kaha na
ye Tumhari bhabhi ji hi
ik bar samjh me nhai ati hi tujhe


jin king......tum dono kyo lad rahe ho ye sundari
meri malika hi
wo jo police wali ladki thi wo inki bakwas sun rahi wo
bahut gussa ho gayi
Dregon king.......malik app in dono ko samjha de
nhai to acha nhai hoga

me..( man me ).......sale kudh to marenge mughe
bhi le dubenge
us police wali ne tino ko 5 thappad lagaye
tino ka sar ghum gaya
Dregon king.......ya hamara apman ho raha hi
me to tumse shadi karna chahta tha lekin tum
Ne hame tapped mar kar acha nhai kia

White sprit king..........sundari app ne hamara apman
kia
ji king......aur nhai to kya

police wali........tum tino ko itni himmat mere samne
aker esi bate kar rahe ho mere nam se bade se bada
criminal darta hi me hu A C P kirti Thakur

Dregon king........ hahahaha hahaha Tumhare nam se
YE tuch log darte honge ham nhai darte hi
kirti......Hawaldar dalo inko gadi me le chal
kal khub maro lockup me sari hekdi nikal
jayegi

jin king.......kya ab hamare itne bure din a gaye hi ki
hame in jese logo ke hatho mar khana padega
malik inhe bataye ki me kon ho
me.. ( man me )......sale ne phasa dia
me......jinhe tino thoda mental hi app inki bato ka bura mat
Mane

white sprit king........sahi kaha malik app ne ye jin
king aur
Dregon king chutiya lekin me bahut
Chatur hu
kirti.. ( gusse se )......in sab ko turant gadi me dalo
ajj inhe me batati hu
Dregon king........ chutiya kise bola re do take ke
sher
jin king.....beta me tumhe ser se billi bana dunga
ager jada bologe to


uske bad ham charo ko gadi me bithaya gaya aur
kuch der bad ham sab police station pahuche

jin king......kya yaha hamari shadi hogi wese ye
sundar to nhai hi fir bhi ham kam chala lenge
white king........chup lagata hi me aur sundari
yaha suhagrat mnayege
dregon king.......sundari app mugje le chale
ye dono to pagal hi

kirti ........Ram singh ke kar chalo to in tino ko aur khub maro me batati hu abhi ki suhagrat kese manate hi

Tino........( Sharma kar ) ......wese to hame pata hi ki
suhagrat kese manate hi lekin jab app bata rahi hi
to chaliye dekh bhi lete hi

Ram singh ne ham sabko pakad kar lock up me
bande kia
me ( man me )......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gaya tha
ik bar yaha se me nikal jau to in tino ke
btaunga

Ram sing ne ham charo ki bandh dia
dregon king.........Sewak ye bandhan kyo laga
rahe ho tum hame
Ram singh......abhi kuch der me pata chalega
white king.....are chutiya yaha suhagrat manane ki
koi alag trika hoga
jin king....aur nhai to kya

kuch der bad kirti ayi
dregon king.......pehle ham se hi surwat karo devi
white king......nhai devi mugh se
jin King...........nhai devi mugh se

kirti........sab se mnaugi bas thoda sabar rakho
Tino......( Kushi se )....... Awasya devi
uske bad kirti ne waha pada ik danda uthata

aur marna chalu kar dia fir kya tha tino ko chikne do
dregon king..( chilate hue )......are koi bachao
ye kon si suhagrat nhi ham tumhe chodege
nhai maa bachao malik
kirti........abhi to bas surwat hi
white sprit king....( Rote hue ).....hame chod do

ab kabhi suhagrat nhai manayege sochege
bhi nhai ik bar chod do malik bacha lo
ro ro kar chilne laga white sprit king

jin king.........( Rote hue ).....ye dokha dia hi tumne
hame suhagrat manane ki jagha mar rahi
hi wo bhi itni buri trah se

malik bacha lo
kirti lagatar 1 hour mara tino ko aur tino ki
admari halat ho gayi
kirti......aur manao suhagrat ab kuch der bad fir
suhagrat manege
tino..( chilate hue)......nhai ab nahi manani hi
chod do hame


fir kirti chali gayi
dregon king.......malik ab app hi hame bacha sakte
hi
white king.....ha malik kripya hame bacha le
Mar mar ke bangi bana dia
jin king......bacha lo malik
me......nhai suhagrat manao
aur ab suhagrat nhai manana hi

Tuno ...rote hue.......nhai mere malik ab sapne
me bhi suhagrat nhai mayege


me......nhai ab mana hi lo
Nice update bhai...
 

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Update number...............34........Tha great warrior


ham sab city ki trafh chal die mene socha
ab mughe kuch kam karna padega nhai to khayenge
kya
abhi ham ja hi rahe the ki Dregon king ne mugh se
kaha
Dregon king......malik malik wo dekho ik bahut sundar kanya me kya kahta hu ese app ham logo ki
malik bana dijie aur ager app ko na banana ho
to ham hi usse bibah kar lete hi

Dregon king ki baat sun kar white sprit king jaldi se
bola
White sprit king.....kyo apni sakal dekhi hi kabhi wo
tumhari bhabhi hi ijjat se baat karo me to ja raha
hu malik app ne mugje yaha laker bahut acha
kia ab me apne liye 100 - 200 Raniya to bana
hi lunga
jin king..........tum log ladte hue ache nhai lagte
wo banegi jin lok ki malika

unki baat sun kar me bahut gussa ho gaya socha
ajj rat kyo na police station me bita lu in chutiya
logo ko bhi mar padegi tabhi ye sudh hoge

me........ha ha kyo nhai
mera itna hi bolana tha ki tino tezi se us police wali
ladki ki trafh badhe
jab tino uske samne jaker khade ho gaye

police wali ladki.....kon ho tum log aur yu samne kyu khade ho gaye ho
Dregon king........ji mughe sharam a rahi hi me app se
shadi karna chahta hu
white sprit king.......kyo be chutiya mene kaha na
ye Tumhari bhabhi ji hi
ik bar samjh me nhai ati hi tujhe


jin king......tum dono kyo lad rahe ho ye sundari
meri malika hi
wo jo police wali ladki thi wo inki bakwas sun rahi wo
bahut gussa ho gayi
Dregon king.......malik app in dono ko samjha de
nhai to acha nhai hoga

me..( man me ).......sale kudh to marenge mughe
bhi le dubenge
us police wali ne tino ko 5 thappad lagaye
tino ka sar ghum gaya
Dregon king.......ya hamara apman ho raha hi
me to tumse shadi karna chahta tha lekin tum
Ne hame tapped mar kar acha nhai kia

White sprit king..........sundari app ne hamara apman
kia
ji king......aur nhai to kya

police wali........tum tino ko itni himmat mere samne
aker esi bate kar rahe ho mere nam se bade se bada
criminal darta hi me hu A C P kirti Thakur

Dregon king........ hahahaha hahaha Tumhare nam se
YE tuch log darte honge ham nhai darte hi
kirti......Hawaldar dalo inko gadi me le chal
kal khub maro lockup me sari hekdi nikal
jayegi

jin king.......kya ab hamare itne bure din a gaye hi ki
hame in jese logo ke hatho mar khana padega
malik inhe bataye ki me kon ho
me.. ( man me )......sale ne phasa dia
me......jinhe tino thoda mental hi app inki bato ka bura mat
Mane

white sprit king........sahi kaha malik app ne ye jin
king aur
Dregon king chutiya lekin me bahut
Chatur hu
kirti.. ( gusse se )......in sab ko turant gadi me dalo
ajj inhe me batati hu
Dregon king........ chutiya kise bola re do take ke
sher
jin king.....beta me tumhe ser se billi bana dunga
ager jada bologe to


uske bad ham charo ko gadi me bithaya gaya aur
kuch der bad ham sab police station pahuche

jin king......kya yaha hamari shadi hogi wese ye
sundar to nhai hi fir bhi ham kam chala lenge
white king........chup lagata hi me aur sundari
yaha suhagrat mnayege
dregon king.......sundari app mugje le chale
ye dono to pagal hi

kirti ........Ram singh lekar jao in tino ko aur khub maro me batati hu abhi ki suhagrat kese manate hi

Tino........( Sharma kar ) ......wese to hame pata hi ki
suhagrat kese manate hi lekin jab app bata rahi hi
to chaliye dekh bhi lete hi

Ram singh ne ham sabko pakad kar lock up me
band kia
me ( man me )......ab yahi dekhna baki rah gaya tha
ik bar yaha se me nikal jau to in tino ke
btaunga

Ram sing ne ham charo ki bandh dia
dregon king.........Sewak ye bandhan kyo laga
rahe ho tum hame
Ram singh......abhi kuch der me pata chalega
white king.....are chutiya yaha suhagrat manane ki
koi alag trika hoga
jin king....aur nhai to kya

kuch der bad kirti ayi
dregon king.......pehle ham se hi surwat karo devi
white king......nhai devi mugh se
jin King...........nhai devi mugh se

kirti........sab se mnaugi bas thoda sabar rakho
Tino......( Kushi se )....... Awasya devi
uske bad kirti ne waha pada ik danda uthata

aur marna chalu kar dia fir kya tha tino ko chikne do
dregon king..( chilate hue )......are koi bachao
ye kon si suhagrat nhi ham tumhe chodege
nhai maa bachao malik
kirti........abhi to bas surwat hi
white sprit king....( Rote hue ).....hame chod do

ab kabhi suhagrat nhai manayege sochege
bhi nhai ik bar chod do malik bacha lo
ro ro kar chilne laga white sprit king

jin king.........( Rote hue ).....ye dokha dia hi tumne
hame suhagrat manane ki jagha mar rahi
hi wo bhi itni buri trah se

malik bacha lo
kirti lagatar 1 hour mara tino ko aur tino ki
admari halat ho gayi
kirti......aur manao suhagrat ab kuch der bad fir
suhagrat manege
tino..( chilate hue)......nhai ab nahi manani hi
chod do hame


fir kirti chali gayi
dregon king.......malik ab app hi hame bacha sakte
hi
white king.....ha malik kripya hame bacha le
Mar mar ke bangi bana dia
jin king......bacha lo malik
me......nhai suhagrat manao
aur ab suhagrat nhai manana hi

Tino ...rote hue.......nhai mere malik ab sapne
me bhi suhagrat nhai mayege


me......nhai ab mana hi lo
Jabarjast shandaar update
 
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