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Great story , Thik thak hi , story close kardo , Nice story


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Bhai bas itna kahunga ke ap ek saath sab stories continue na kare..
Ek time par ek story par focus kare to bohot better hoga..
Pehle ap The Great warrior ko complete kare
Baki apki marzi cuz u r the writer
 
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Raj Singh Thakur

Active Member
907
5,973
123
Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi


 

SameerK

Active Member
826
4,539
138
Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi
Behtarin update bhai
 

Luffy

Well-Known Member
7,017
29,096
218
Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi
Awesome update
 

Nevil singh

Well-Known Member
21,150
53,000
173
Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi
Hasheen update dost
 

Devil hunter123

Active Member
901
4,041
123
Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi


Nice update
 
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