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Update.................Three.( 3 )...........................Location..............(planet earth India Delhi)............

Apni jan ke chehre par muskan dekh me

me kuch der ke liye usi me kho gya kitni
pyari lagti thi meri jan sote hue kitni pyari
hi me kabhi iska sath nhai chodunga chaye jo
ho jaye me apni jan Rani ko hmesa kush
Rakhunga kabhi ise dukhi nhai
hone dunga ye mene apne
app se vachan lia

mene socha kuch der aur some deta hu
bechri ko kitni pyari aur masoum hi
uske bad me apne room se nikla
mujhe wo Aadmi mil gya

Character introduction of family-------------


Aadmi.............Din dyal
Aurat............Rani wife of din dyal
Raju...........son of din dyal and Rani

Din dyal................Are Raj beta kese ho chalo naha dho kr ready ho jao Dhabe pr bhi chalna hi
hme
me...........ji chacha ji hm abhi naha kr tyar ho jaye hi
bs kuch der rukiye
uske baad me fresh hokr nha kr tyar ho gya
mene socha ab chlu apni jan ko jaga du
me apne room me chal dia jab me phucha to dekha meri
jan jag gayi hi
me........... gudiya app jab jagi thodi der aur so
leti
Priya...........Pyare bhayu ajj app chacha ji ke sath
Kam karne jane wale hi a ache se rhiyega
apna dyan rakhiyega
aur time se khana kha lijiyega
me.......... hahahahahah bas karo bhai tum to abhi se
Bibi wali harkate karni lagi ho
Priya.............Abhi nhai hu app ki bibi to kya
hu bad me to houngi
me apni jan ki baat sun kar hasne laga
kitni pyari baat karti thi meri
jan
me......... Acha baba ye sab chodo m chala jaunga
to chachi ko tang mat karna ok


Priya( has kar)............Thik hi pyare bhayu
me uske baad Angan me chal dia chacha beth kr
Waha khana kha rhe the
Chachi............Raj chalo app bhi khana kha lo
me..........ji chachi
uske baad me bhi chacha ke sath beth kr khana kaya

fir chacha ne apni bike nikali
me............Chachi meri gudiya ka dyan rakhna
Chachi.........Thik hi Raj
fir me aur chacha bike pr beth kr dhabe pr chal
die kuch der bad ham waha pahuche

Dhaba dikhne me acha tha waha 4 log kam
karte the 1...kalu, 2..... Ramu, 3.......kamla, 4.......Rani
kalu aur Ramu dhabe pr ane wale logo ka
odar likhta aur kalu unko khana deta
kamla aur Rani khana tyar karti

Jab ham dhabe pr pahuche to charo
Ne jese hi chacha ko dekha
Charo........Pranam malik
Chacha..........ye hi Raj ajj se tum logo ke sath
Kam Karega thik hi
Charo.........Ji malik

fir me bhi unhi logo ke sath kam karne laga
Jese mej safh karna kurshi saf karna
logo ko pani dena pira din yahi kam karta
rha me duphar hone pr hm charo
me khana khaya
Rat tk me bhut thak gya ajj tak mene ye
sare kam kabhi kia hi nhai tha to meri adat

nhai thi karne ki lakin mene socha mujhe
ye kam karna hoga apni jan ke
liye karna hoga
Rat ko me chacha ke sath unki bike
pr beth kr ghar a gya

mujhe dekh kr Priya mere pas ayi aur
mujh se lipat gayi
uske bad me aur chacha aur Priya ne sath -
sath khana kaya

Ab mera yahi kam ho gya tha me Subha
news paper batta tha aur Rat ko apni
gudiya se pyar bhari bate karta tha
chachi meri jan ka ache se khayal

rakhti thi mujhe vhi ab adat pr gayi
thi ese hi dekhte dekhte ek year
bit gye ab meri jan 7 year ki ho gyi thi aur me 11 year ka

Mere pas news paper aur dhabe se kam
karne se bhut rupaye jama ho gaye
tha mene socha kyu na me apni jan ka nam
kisi ache school me likha du

ajj jb me Subha utha to apni jan ko
dekha to kho sa gaya usme kitni pyari dikhti thi meri jan
mene usko jagaya
me........jan meri gudiya me soch rha hu ki
apka admission school me kra du
app bta rahi thi na ki app ko padhna acha lagta hi

meri baat sun kr Priya kush ho gayi
Priya.........ha mere pyare bhau mughe padhna bhut acha
lagta hi app mera nam sach me school me sach me likheyege
me........Ha meri jan kl tumhe me school le chalunga
Priya.........ok pyare bhau

us din me chacha ke sath dhabe pr se ja raha tha
to mujhe raste me ik school dikha
uska nam tha N . M public school
mene socha ki me apni Priya ka admision isi me krunga
mere pas abhi 95000 rupaye the

kl Subha mene meri jan ko pyar se uthaya
Me........me chalo jan ab hme school jane ke liye
tyar hona hi
fir me aur meri jan tyar ho gye jane ke liye

Location ..............N . M public school
admission office me me apni jan ke sath ache
se tyar hokr a gya
wha bhut sare bache the
mene admission forum lia aur U . K . G
ka use ek uncle se fil kra kr
rakh lia jab hmari bari ayi to me apni jan ke sath admission room
me chala gaya

Sir........... Hallo beta kya nam hi apka aur
apke parents kha hi
me............ Hallo sir my name Raj Singh Thakur and she is my
sister Priya Singh Thakur sir mujhe meri behan ka admission
karana hi
Mere mami papa nhai hi
Sir..........what app ke mom dad nhai hi sorry beta app
fir apni bhen ki fees kese dohe beta
me.........sir mujhe bas apni behan ka admission
karana hi me ik dhabe aur news paper
deta hu app chinta mata kare me

apni bhen ke liye aur kam krunga
use sche se padhaunga
Sir........what app itni si umar me itna kam karte hi
Bhagwan kre har behan ko App jesa bhai mile
uske baad sir ne Priya ka admission kr lia
mene rupaye submit kiye

me.........sir ise kab se school ana hi
sir..........beta kl se ajj app inhe copy aur book la dena
me........ok sir Thanks
Sir.........your welcome beta

usKe bad me aur Priya market gaye waha se mene Priya
ke liye drese aur copy aur book lia
fir ham ghar a gaye Priya bhut kush thi kyoki

use school jana tha ab se mene bhi soch lia mujhe ab
aur kam karna hoga tabhi me apni jan ko ashe se padha paunga

Location...............Raja Thakur house

Sakti kumar aur aur uska 4 year ka beta
ache se ab mahal me rahne lage
kabya bhi bhut kush thi kyoki wo
maa banne wali thi

Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal raha tha ab
wo log bhut kush the

kabaya ki hi marji chalti thi hr jagah ab
Raja Thakur bs uska katputli ban kr rah
gya tha

Location............Din dyal dhaba

EK bhut mhengi var ruki aur usme se ak aurat nikli
aur Ramu bhag kr uske pas gaya
Ramu............. boliye medam kya lau
Medam............Kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ko bulaya ke le awo
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Naik

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Update number............ Four...........( 4 )..................

Location.................Din dyal dhaba

Duphar ka time tha ki ek bhut
mhengi car aker dhabe par rukti hi
aur uske Piche lagbhag 50 gadi hoti hi
sari ki sari
top Asians the jo ki gun liye
rahte hi sb log jitne bhi dhabe par
the sab ke sab khade ho jate hi Raj us
time ntha nhai wo gaya tha
kisi ko khana dene

Din dyal , Ramu aur kalu bahr
ate hi wo bhi itni security
ko dekh dar gaye the
Din dyal.........Ji mam boliye hm app ki kya madad
kr sakte hi
Aurat............kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur kaha hi unhe bulao
us Aurat ki baat sun to Din dyal Raj ke nam ke
age Thakur aur Kuwar sun to muh khula
ka khula hi rh jata hi

Din dyal ( haklate hue ).........kya bola app ne mam kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur Kya Raj jo mere dhabe pr
kam karta hi app uske bare me phuch
rahi hi kya wo kon hi jo app
uske bare me phuch
rahi wo to mujhe sadak par mila tha
wo kh rha tha ki ik anath hi

Din dyal ki baat ko sun Aurat ko a gya
gussa
Aurat.............ye kuwar jinke bare me itna bol raha
hi aur tum sab sun rahe ho pehle isko
do tamacha maro fir age ki
beet hogi

Aurat ke kahne pr unme se do log bahar aye aur
2 Tamacha mara din dyal ko
uske ankho ke age andhera cha gya

Abhi wo sab tisra tamacha marne hi wala
tha ki waha Raj pahuch gaya
Jb usne dekha itni sari car ko khadi

jb ander pahucha aur un Asians ko apne chacha
ko marte hue dekha to gusse se pagal
ho gaya aur bhag kr ik Asians ko
pura jor laga kar ik lat mar

RAj ke lat padhte hi wo Asian 20 meter dur ja gira
sab log ik dam dang ki koi 11 - 12 year ke ladke
Ne ek expert world top Asian ko itna dur


fek dia

Me.........kon ho tum log aur chacha ko kyu mar rahe
ho
Din dyal.........( Rote hue ).........Are Raj beta acha hua ki
Tum a gaye inse bacha lo mujhe din dyal ne jo
hua tha wo sab Raj ko bata dia
sari baat sun kr to me sann rh gya kyoki
ajj tak mene kisi ko nhai bataya tha ki me Thakur hun

but mujhe ik baat samajh me nhai a rahi thi
ki ye kuwar aur Pratap ka kya chakkar hi

Aurat..........kuwar ji acha hua ki app a gaye
hamne kaha kaha nhai dudha app ko

Me.........kon hi app sab
Aurat.........me app ki maa Shalini Singh Pratap
Thakur ki Personal assistant hu app ke
Nana ji aur maa ne app ke nam bhut sari property
ki hi me uski Care Taker hu
me.........ji me kuch samjha nhai

Aurat............Ji apke Nana ji Rajgarh ke Raja
hi Raja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur app ki
Maa ka nam hi Shalini Pratap Singh Thakur unhone
aur Raja Thakur ne ghar se bhag kr shadi


ki thi iski wajah se app ke Nana ji bhut
Gussa ho gaye unhone app ki
maa se sare rishte Nate tod liye
jab unhe pata chal ki

Raja Thakur ne app ko aur app ki
behan ko apne ghar se nikal
dia tabse wo app ko dundh rahe hi
unhone apni sari property aur world
wide lavel ki company aur Raj gaddi ka

Naya Raja chun lia hi aur app ke nam
Apni company jo unhone app ke
Name pr rakhi hi R . S group of industries Pvt Ltd

Hm sab app ko dhund rahe the kl hme pata
Chala ki app yaha hi to ham turant a
Gaye Abhi unki tabiyat kharab hi isliye hamne
Unhe nhai bataya ki app mil gaye hi

Nhai to wo a jate app ko ab esi jindagi
bitane ki koi jarurat nhai hi
app apni behan nko le lijiye aur chaliye
apke Nana ji app ko dekh bhut kush

ho jayenge

us Aurat ki baat sun kr me bhut kush ho
gaya kyoki mere vhi nana ji hi
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Update number............Five..........( 5 )................

Mout ka shahzada aur Jindagi ka Bhagwan hu me
mujhe mout ka khof dikhate ho

Update number..........five.......(5)

Location........... house of Raj Thakur

kabya ke pet me bhut dard ho raha tha
kyoki wo maa banne wali thi
Raja Thakur aur sakti ne use car
Me bitha kr hospital ki trafh
chal die

sakti............bs meri behan bs a hi gya hi
hospital thodi himmat aur jutao
Raja..........Ha kabya bs kuch der aur
fir ham hospital pahuch jayenge mene sare intazam

pehle se hi kar lia hi tum chinta mat karo
Sakti.......... Driver thoda tez chalo kya
tum car nhai tampu chal
rhe ho

kuch der bad Raja aur Sakti Kabya
ko lekar hospital pahuch gaye

After some hours...................

ek nurse bhagte hue Raja aur Sakti ke pas a gayi

Nurse............ Congratulations Thakur Sahab app
ke ghar lakshmi ne janam lia hi
us Nurse ki baat ko sun Raja Thakur bhut
kush ho gya but sabse jada kush to

hmare sakti sahab ho gaye
Sakti..........ye lo mera A . T . M card jao pure hospital
me mithayi bato aur sab ko 1 lac rupaye de do
jitne bhi stop hi hospital me

Nurse....( Kushi se ).......ji sir lagta hi app apni
behan se behad pyar karte hi
( Ab bhai jitna dena ho de kon sa apne baap
ka ja raha hi Account to se pesa to
hmare Raja Babu ka katega hahahaha)
Sakti...........Apni jan se bhi jada pyar karta
hu apni behan se
( Khne se kya jata hi )

uske bad sb log kushi ghar ko lout aye

Location..............hell empire

King........ Lucifier

Lucifier ji aya ajj itne kush the ki
bata nhai sakte
kyoki ajj unka Rajya yani ki hell
empire Universe ke top 1000

empire me a gya hi

Lucifier apne sighsan pr bethe hase jarhe the
Lucifier............ hahahaha hahaha ajj ajj hmne
hmne apna badla bhi king empire
se le lia
aur Universe ke top 1000 empire
me ab hamar nam a gya hi
Tha great hell king Lucifier
haha hahahahah

Pure Rajya ke devilo ko
kh do ki ajj kushi manane
ka din hi Utsaw ki tyari karo

Tbhi ik devil Senik bhagta hua ata hi
Senik............( Dar ke mare kapte hue )
Maharaj Maharaj app abhi ke abhi
hell empire chod kr bhag jayiye wo agi hi
Tha Prince of Evil Shiva


jese hi hmare Lucifier ye nam sunte hi
to kapte hue bhagne lagte
hi

Lucifier kisi trah girte padte
derk empire pahuch te hi
Sab Lucifier nko is trah kapte hue dekh behad
dar jate hi Lucifier jor se chillata hua khata
hi Tha dark lord bachao mujhe

Dark lord jab Lucifier ko is trah kapte dekhte hi
to wo jaldi se uske pas ate hi
Dark lord.........kya hua mere parm Mitra ko
btao mujhe ab tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nhai
hi ab tum Dark empire me ho

Yaha Lord chorus bhi ane se darta
Hi btao mujhe

Lucifier............( Dar ke mare kapte hue ).........Mere piche
wo Tha Prince of Universe Shiva
PAd gaye hi wo mujhe chodega
Nhai

jese hi dark lord Shiva ka nam sunte hi
dar ke mare kapne lagte hi
Lucifier ko uthate hue
Dark lord......( Darte hue ).........ajj se dosti khatam
mujhe abhi kuch din aur jina hi
mujhe marna nhai hi
jao jaldi yaha se
ager kahi wo a gya to Dark empire
history me rh jayega

dark lord kisi trah kapte pero ke
sath Lucifier ko utha kr
apne empire ke bahr fekte hi
Ajj pehli bar Lucifier ko
dar lag raha tha kyoki jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal history me rh jata hi

Ab Lucifier ko kuch samajh me nhai
a raha tha kha jaye kya kare
use Shiva se bs 3 insan bacha sakte hi

1. ) Tha great God

2. ) Tha God of death

3. ) Tha goddess of death

IN ke Samne Shiva kuch nhai kr sakta

Lucifier kisi trah khada hua aur Goddess of death ke pas ja e laga Tha Death lok

JAha Tha God of death aur Tha goddess of death ke isare ke bina ik patta bhi nhai hil
Sakta
Lucifier apni puri sakti laga di
Waha jane ke liye

Ek nam................Tha evil Prince Shiva
ka nam sun ye Universe kapta hi

Ek baat yad rakhna Shiva main Villains me nhai hi
wo to unke per ka juta brabar hi

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Naik

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Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi
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