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andyking302

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Update number............Five..........( 5 )................

Mout ka shahzada aur Jindagi ka Bhagwan hu me
mujhe mout ka khof dikhate ho

Update number..........five.......(5)

Location........... house of Raj Thakur

kabya ke pet me bhut dard ho raha tha
kyoki wo maa banne wali thi
Raja Thakur aur sakti ne use car
Me bitha kr hospital ki trafh
chal die

sakti............bs meri behan bs a hi gya hi
hospital thodi himmat aur jutao
Raja..........Ha kabya bs kuch der aur
fir ham hospital pahuch jayenge mene sare intazam

pehle se hi kar lia hi tum chinta mat karo
Sakti.......... Driver thoda tez chalo kya
tum car nhai tampu chal
rhe ho

kuch der bad Raja aur Sakti Kabya
ko lekar hospital pahuch gaye

After some hours...................

ek nurse bhagte hue Raja aur Sakti ke pas a gayi

Nurse............ Congratulations Thakur Sahab app
ke ghar lakshmi ne janam lia hi
us Nurse ki baat ko sun Raja Thakur bhut
kush ho gya but sabse jada kush to

hmare sakti sahab ho gaye
Sakti..........ye lo mera A . T . M card jao pure hospital
me mithayi bato aur sab ko 1 lac rupaye de do
jitne bhi stop hi hospital me

Nurse....( Kushi se ).......ji sir lagta hi app apni
behan se behad pyar karte hi
( Ab bhai jitna dena ho de kon sa apne baap
ka ja raha hi Account to se pesa to
hmare Raja Babu ka katega hahahaha)
Sakti...........Apni jan se bhi jada pyar karta
hu apni behan se
( Khne se kya jata hi )

uske bad sb log kushi ghar ko lout aye

Location..............hell empire

King........ Lucifier

Lucifier ji aya ajj itne kush the ki
bata nhai sakte
kyoki ajj unka Rajya yani ki hell
empire Universe ke top 1000

empire me a gya hi

Lucifier apne sighsan pr bethe hase jarhe the
Lucifier............ hahahaha hahaha ajj ajj hmne
hmne apna badla bhi king empire
se le lia
aur Universe ke top 1000 empire
me ab hamar nam a gya hi
Tha great hell king Lucifier
haha hahahahah

Pure Rajya ke devilo ko
kh do ki ajj kushi manane
ka din hi Utsaw ki tyari karo

Tbhi ik devil Senik bhagta hua ata hi
Senik............( Dar ke mare kapte hue )
Maharaj Maharaj app abhi ke abhi
hell empire chod kr bhag jayiye wo agi hi
Tha Prince of Evil Shiva


jese hi hmare Lucifier ye nam sunte hi
to kapte hue bhagne lagte
hi

Lucifier kisi trah girte padte
derk empire pahuch te hi
Sab Lucifier nko is trah kapte hue dekh behad
dar jate hi Lucifier jor se chillata hua khata
hi Tha dark lord bachao mujhe

Dark lord jab Lucifier ko is trah kapte dekhte hi
to wo jaldi se uske pas ate hi
Dark lord.........kya hua mere parm Mitra ko
btao mujhe ab tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nhai
hi ab tum Dark empire me ho

Yaha Lord chorus bhi ane se darta
Hi btao mujhe

Lucifier............( Dar ke mare kapte hue ).........Mere piche
wo Tha Prince of Universe Shiva
PAd gaye hi wo mujhe chodega
Nhai

jese hi dark lord Shiva ka nam sunte hi
dar ke mare kapne lagte hi
Lucifier ko uthate hue
Dark lord......( Darte hue ).........ajj se dosti khatam
mujhe abhi kuch din aur jina hi
mujhe marna nhai hi
jao jaldi yaha se
ager kahi wo a gya to Dark empire
history me rh jayega

dark lord kisi trah kapte pero ke
sath Lucifier ko utha kr
apne empire ke bahr fekte hi
Ajj pehli bar Lucifier ko
dar lag raha tha kyoki jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal history me rh jata hi

Ab Lucifier ko kuch samajh me nhai
a raha tha kha jaye kya kare
use Shiva se bs 3 insan bacha sakte hi

1. ) Tha great God

2. ) Tha God of death

3. ) Tha goddess of death

IN ke Samne Shiva kuch nhai kr sakta

Lucifier kisi trah khada hua aur Goddess of death ke pas ja e laga Tha Death lok

JAha Tha God of death aur Tha goddess of death ke isare ke bina ik patta bhi nhai hil
Sakta
Lucifier apni puri sakti laga di
Waha jane ke liye

Ek nam................Tha evil Prince Shiva
ka nam sun ye Universe kapta hi

Ek baat yad rakhna Shiva main Villains me nhai hi
wo to unke per ka juta brabar hi

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andyking302

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Update number.............Six..........( 6 )...............

Location............. Devil empire

Evil Prince Shiva ne pura devil lok me
kuhram macha dia charo aur bas chillane
ki awaj ajj jashan ke Mike pr
matam me badal gaya

Shiva ne devil lok ke senapati ko pakad lia
aur uske sar pr hath rakha to use Lucifier
ke bare me sab pata kr lia
usne apni ankhe band ki aur Lucifier ko

dekhe laga use pata chal gya ki wo kaha ja
raha hi Shiva Lucifier ke piche bhaga
Lucifier bechare kisi trah girte padte
Death lok ki sima pr pahuch gaye

lakin usse age wo ja nhai sakta tha to wo
wahi se ro ro kr Chila Chila kr apni
jan bachane ke liye rone laga

Lucifier............malik mujhe bacha lo maa Goddess of death me app ka bhut bada bhakt hu
kripya meri raksha kare maye
prabhu app mujhe bacha li jiye


Uski kruna bhari awaj sun mata
Tha goddess of death uske pas pragat hui
unhe dekh Lucifier ke sans me sans ayi
wo turant maa ke poro me
gir gaya

Lucifier..........maa app mujhe evil
Prince Shiva se bacha lo me app ka bhut bada
bhakt hu app meri raksha kare me jindagi bhar app
ki sewa krunga mata

Lucifier ki kruna bhari awaj ko sun
mata Tha goddess of death ka
dil pasijh gaya

Mata.......... Lucifier tum chinta mat karo ham tumhe
kuch nhai hone denge
ane do use uski itni himmat nhai hi ki
wo hmare samne aye

Lucifier maa ki bato ko sun kr bhut jada
kush ho gya ab janke uski sans me
sans ayi

Lucifier...........maa app ne mujhe bacha lia
me app ka gulam ho gya hu maa
idhar jab Shiva waha pahucha
to Lucifier ko dekh war karne hi
wala tha ki uski nazar maa pr

padi wo maa ke samne aker khada ho gya
aur gutno ke bal beth gaya
Shiva..........maa Goddess of death ko
unke is bhakt ka pranam swikar
ho maa

Lucifier Shiva ko dekh ab nhai
dar rha tha kyoki maa ke samne
wo kuch bhi nhai tha

maa......... Shiva tum Lucifier ke piche
Shiva...........maa is ne hmare Rajya me
apne kuch devilo ko bejha hi
unhone ek ladki ke sath badtameezi ki
hm ise jivit nhai chodenge

Shiva ki baat sun Lucifier ne turant
Lucifier ( hath jor ).........unhe hamne nhai
Bejha tha evil Prince wo hamare devil
nhai the
app ka nam sun ye Universe kapta hi
ham kya hi app ke age

wo hell empire ke Raj drohi the
unhe pata nhai hoga ki jise wo tang kr rhe hi
wo app ke Rajya me hi me app ke per
padta hu mujhen ek bar maff kr dijiye

me kabhi app aur app ke Rajya ka nam
Sapne me bhi nhi sochunga

maa......... Shiva me kh rahi hu app ise maff
kr de

Shiva.......jo agya maa
uske baad Shiva ne Lucifier ko ik
bar gusse se dekha

aur fir gusse me app ne rajya lout gaya
Shiva man me sochne laga ki
kab tak Lucifier maa ke piche chup

kr usse bachta hi kabhi na kabhi
tum mere hath awoge Lucifier

wo din tumhara akhiri din hoga

Lucifier ne Shiva ke jane ke baad to
chain ki sans li aur maa ko parnam kr
devil empire lout gaya


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andyking302

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Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi


जबरदस्त
 

andyking302

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Update..........7

priya...............Bhaiya app a gaye ajj itni jaldi kese a gaye
Din dyal chacha ne chachi ko sab btaya

me........gudiya chalo hme nana ji ke pas jana hi
Godiya......... bhayu hmare nana ji hi kaya

me.......ha meri pyari behan hmare nana
ji hi aur ab hme yaha nhai rahna me tumhara admission
sabse ache school me krunga

Chachi..........Beta Raj hmesa kush rahna me tumhare
liye bhut kush hu
me.........chachi app esa mat kahe mere pas jab
kuch bhi nhai tha to apne meri madat ki
JIndagi me ager app ko kabhi meri jarurt hogi to jarur btayega

uske bad kuch der sabse milne ke bad me aur gudiya gadi me beth gaye

Gudiya..........Bhai hme kitni der lagegi pahuchne me
me........mujhe pata nhai hi gudiya ruke me
puch kr app ko batata hu
Gudiya...........ok bhai
mene us aurat se phucha ki abhi kitni der lagegi tab usne
mujhe bataya ki abhi 15 hours lagege


raste me ik mandir aya mene car waha rukwayi
aur bhagwan ke darshan kre aur ajj me bhut kush tha
kyoki ajj mujhe appni bhen ke liye peso ki

chinta nahi thi ab me apni behan ko a he school me padha sakta hu

location.............evil lok

Evil Prince Shiva evil lok pahuch
tab bhut gusse me tha
kyoki ajj pehli bar esa ho raha tha ki
uska sikar
bach gaya ho ajj tak jise bhi usne chah wo mr jarur
gaya

Shiva is Lucifier ko mujh se ek bar
mata ne bacha lia lakin kitni baar
bachega ye kabhi na kabhi to mere hath me
ayega hi usi din is Lucifier ka akhiri din hoga

mujhe jald hi Rudra ko dudhna hoga nhai
to kahi usene Tha great king ka pata laga lia
to mera khof is univarse me bhut kam
ho jayega

lakin pata nhai wo kaha hi me bhi uski energy ko
feel nhai kr pa raha hu
karu to kya karu ager me
Tha sword of fountain of warrior ko pa lu

tabhi me Tha great king ko hara paunga
lakin us sword ko hasil karna bhut muskil hi
kuch samajh me nhai a rha hi kya karu

Location................Dark empire

dark empire ke lord Tha lord ko samajh
me nhai a raha tha ki Lucifier Evil Prince Shiva se kese bach gaya usese to ajj tak koi

nahi bacha ajj tak hmare pas hell empire
ka sath tha but hmne Lucifier ko jo apne
Rajya se nikal dia ab hmara sabse bada dushman
hell lok hi aur ab hell lok ko harana

bhut muskil hi

hell empire ab pure Universe me top1000
empire me ik hi hamare liye wo khatra
ban sakta hi
hme evil Prince se dosti ka hath badhana
Chahiye tabhi Lucifier hamko

kuch karne ke bare me sochchga bhi nhai
pr kese Shiva to kisi se dosti karta nahi wo
to sabko apna gulam banata hi ab kya
kare ham

Location.............. earth India Delhi

Kabya aur Raja bhut kush the karn thi
Anjali Thakur ka ajj kabya ji beti ho gayi thi
Raja Thakur ne kuch property anath aashram
ko dan me di

Sakti Kabya ko samjha raha tha ki
hame Raj aur Priya ko mar dene chahiye
kyoki ager wo apna hissa mangne lage tab kya
hoga

kabya bhi sakti ki baat man gayi aur Raj aur Priya ko
dudhne ke liye apne kuch admi laga die
but wo abhi tak Raj aur Priya ko dundh
nhai pa rahe the

location..................hell empire

Lucifier............( Man me )

is dark lord ne mujhe apne Rajya se fekha tha
hAm iska badla le ke rahe ge dekhte hi ab
is dark lord ko kon bacha ta hi

hAm jald hi dark lord pr hamla krenge
dekhte hi use kon bachata hi
lakin abhi mujhe meri saktiyo ko aur
badhana hoga nhai to ham dark empire

Se kabhi nhai jit payege

Lucifier apne kamre me jaker Shetan ki aradhna
karne laga

hell lok me ab sab kuch sahi ho gaya tha
mata ki wajah se ab hell lok pr
Shiva hamla krega nhai aur kisi me itni
himmat nhai hi ki heel lok se Dushman

bana le



Location................Tha mahal of Rajgrah

is mahal ko dekhne bhut dur dur se log
ate hi ye india ke Rajasthan me hi
dekhne me bhut acha hi yaha ke Raja
hi veer Pratap Singh Thakur

aur inki patni ki death bhut pehle ho gayi thi
ajj kal Veer ki bhi tabiyat kharab rahne lagi thi

kuch hours ke baad Raj aur Priya mahak pahuche
itne bade mahal ko dekh kr wo log dang rh gaye
aur kush bhi the ki ab se wo log yaha rahege

Priya............ bhai kya ab ham log yaha rahege
me........ha meri jan ab ham yaha
rhege ye ab se app ka ghar hi

meri baat sunkr Priya bhut kush ho gayi











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Waiting for update bhai
 
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