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ashish_1982_in

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Update..........7

priya...............Bhaiya app a gaye ajj itni jaldi kese a gaye
Din dyal chacha ne chachi ko sab btaya

me........gudiya chalo hme nana ji ke pas jana hi
Godiya......... bhayu hmare nana ji hi kaya

me.......ha meri pyari behan hmare nana
ji hi aur ab hme yaha nhai rahna me tumhara admission
sabse ache school me krunga

Chachi..........Beta Raj hmesa kush rahna me tumhare
liye bhut kush hu
me.........chachi app esa mat kahe mere pas jab
kuch bhi nhai tha to apne meri madat ki
JIndagi me ager app ko kabhi meri jarurt hogi to jarur btayega

uske bad kuch der sabse milne ke bad me aur gudiya gadi me beth gaye

Gudiya..........Bhai hme kitni der lagegi pahuchne me
me........mujhe pata nhai hi gudiya ruke me
puch kr app ko batata hu
Gudiya...........ok bhai
mene us aurat se phucha ki abhi kitni der lagegi tab usne
mujhe bataya ki abhi 15 hours lagege


raste me ik mandir aya mene car waha rukwayi
aur bhagwan ke darshan kre aur ajj me bhut kush tha
kyoki ajj mujhe appni bhen ke liye peso ki

chinta nahi thi ab me apni behan ko a he school me padha sakta hu

location.............evil lok

Evil Prince Shiva evil lok pahuch
tab bhut gusse me tha
kyoki ajj pehli bar esa ho raha tha ki
uska sikar
bach gaya ho ajj tak jise bhi usne chah wo mr jarur
gaya

Shiva is Lucifier ko mujh se ek bar
mata ne bacha lia lakin kitni baar
bachega ye kabhi na kabhi to mere hath me
ayega hi usi din is Lucifier ka akhiri din hoga

mujhe jald hi Rudra ko dudhna hoga nhai
to kahi usene Tha great king ka pata laga lia
to mera khof is univarse me bhut kam
ho jayega

lakin pata nhai wo kaha hi me bhi uski energy ko
feel nhai kr pa raha hu
karu to kya karu ager me
Tha sword of fountain of warrior ko pa lu

tabhi me Tha great king ko hara paunga
lakin us sword ko hasil karna bhut muskil hi
kuch samajh me nhai a rha hi kya karu

Location................Dark empire

dark empire ke lord Tha lord ko samajh
me nhai a raha tha ki Lucifier Evil Prince Shiva se kese bach gaya usese to ajj tak koi

nahi bacha ajj tak hmare pas hell empire
ka sath tha but hmne Lucifier ko jo apne
Rajya se nikal dia ab hmara sabse bada dushman
hell lok hi aur ab hell lok ko harana

bhut muskil hi

hell empire ab pure Universe me top1000
empire me ik hi hamare liye wo khatra
ban sakta hi
hme evil Prince se dosti ka hath badhana
Chahiye tabhi Lucifier hamko

kuch karne ke bare me sochchga bhi nhai
pr kese Shiva to kisi se dosti karta nahi wo
to sabko apna gulam banata hi ab kya
kare ham

Location.............. earth India Delhi

Kabya aur Raja bhut kush the karn thi
Anjali Thakur ka ajj kabya ji beti ho gayi thi
Raja Thakur ne kuch property anath aashram
ko dan me di

Sakti Kabya ko samjha raha tha ki
hame Raj aur Priya ko mar dene chahiye
kyoki ager wo apna hissa mangne lage tab kya
hoga

kabya bhi sakti ki baat man gayi aur Raj aur Priya ko
dudhne ke liye apne kuch admi laga die
but wo abhi tak Raj aur Priya ko dundh
nhai pa rahe the

location..................hell empire

Lucifier............( Man me )

is dark lord ne mujhe apne Rajya se fekha tha
hAm iska badla le ke rahe ge dekhte hi ab
is dark lord ko kon bacha ta hi

hAm jald hi dark lord pr hamla krenge
dekhte hi use kon bachata hi
lakin abhi mujhe meri saktiyo ko aur
badhana hoga nhai to ham dark empire

Se kabhi nhai jit payege

Lucifier apne kamre me jaker Shetan ki aradhna
karne laga

hell lok me ab sab kuch sahi ho gaya tha
mata ki wajah se ab hell lok pr
Shiva hamla krega nhai aur kisi me itni
himmat nhai hi ki heel lok se Dushman

bana le




Location................Tha mahal of Rajgrah

is mahal ko dekhne bhut dur dur se log
ate hi ye india ke Rajasthan me hi
dekhne me bhut acha hi yaha ke Raja
hi veer Pratap Singh Thakur

aur inki patni ki death bhut pehle ho gayi thi
ajj kal Veer ki bhi tabiyat kharab rahne lagi thi

kuch hours ke baad Raj aur Priya mahak pahuche
itne bade mahal ko dekh kr wo log dang rh gaye
aur kush bhi the ki ab se wo log yaha rahege

Priya............ bhai kya ab ham log yaha rahege
me........ha meri jan ab ham yaha
rhege ye ab se app ka ghar hi

meri baat sunkr Priya bhut kush ho gayi
nice update bhai
 

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Update number...............8.............Tha Prince of Universe

Location...............Rajgadh

Priya ki kushi dekh kar me bhi bada kush
tha akhir uske bhi kuch sapne the mene
ajj tak jo meri gudiya meri jan ne kaha
use wo lake dia

mugjhe ajj is baat ki kushi nhai thi ki me
Rajgadh ka Raja banunga kushi is baat
ki thi ki ajj apna kahne ke liye mere pas
mere nana ji hi

ham log Rajgadh ke mahal ke main gate par
pahuche hmari car dekh turant nhaye khol
dia gaya me aur Priya bas dekhte hi rah gaye

mahal bahar se jitna sundar dikhta tha ander
se usse kayi jada sundar dikhta tha charo taraf
gun liye security wale khade the jab me car se utra
to wo aurat mere pas ayi

Aurat............kuwar Raj ji chaliye pehle app ko apke Nana
ji ke pas leke chalti hu
me...........ha chalo jadi hme unse milna hi
gudiya........pyare bhayu chalo na mugjhe
bhi Nana ji se milna hi
me gudiya ki baat sun kar use apni baho
Me lia aur uska math pyar se chuma

Me........ok jan chal rahe
Fir wo aurat mughe unke pas lekar gayi
Sab traf gunman the sab us aurat ko
Dekh kar salam kar rahe the
Kuch der chalane ke baad ham aker ek behad hi

Alishan room me chale gaye waha ek 60 year
ke byakti the dekhane me unke chare par bahut
tez tha mughe unhe phachante jara si bhi der
na lagi ke yahi mere Nana ji Raja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur hi

Aurat............Malik hame Kuwar sa mil gaye
Nana ji ne itna suna ki wo bhag ke aker
mughe apne sine se sata lia bahut
Asha lag rah tha ajj me sabdo me bya nhai

kar sakta
jan unhone mughe kuch der bad alag
kia to
me...........nana ji kuch der aur apne bahut der
laga di bahut tadfa hu me kisi apne ke liye
ajj app mugjhe mil gaye

Nana..........kuwar ji app bilkul mere Pita ji jese
dikhte hi ajj me bahut kush hu ajj mera waris mil
gaya mugjhe ab ager me mar bhi jau to koi
gam nhai hi mughe app royie mat


app Kuwar hi Rajgadh ke

fur unhone dobara mughe apni baho me kash lia
Priya ji bahut der se ye dekh rahi thi
Priya..........nana ji ham bhi hi yaha
Priya ki baat sun kar nana ji ne uski traf dekha


aur bhag kar use bhi apni godi me utha lia
nana........meri bachi app bilkul apni maa
ki trah dekhti hi ajj me bahut kush hu
us Raja ki me chodunga nhai ab dikhata


hu ki usne jo mere pote potiyo Ke sath kia hi
use iski yesi saja dunga ki maut ki bikh
Magega lakin mout milegi nhai
Me..........Nana ji mene suna ki apki tabiyat kharab
hi

Nana ji ............ab app a gaye hi to tabiyat bhi
sahi ho jayegi
me.............me ye bahane banne se kam nhai chlalega
App ko apna dyan rakhna hoga
Meri baat sun sabhi hasne lage


Nana ji .................kuwar ji abhi app thak gaye honge
jaker thoda aram kariye ab kal bat
krenge ajj me bahut kush hu mughe abhi bahut
tyari karni hi

Priya........ji nana ji kal app ham ko mahal bhi ghuma dijiyega
nana ji ( has kar ). ..........ha bilkul Rajkumari ji
app ka hi mehal hi jab chahe jo kare

uske baad wo aurat hmare sath a gayi
Aurat...........ye sab app ka hi hi jha Rahana
waha rahiye
me........app mugjhe aur meri jan ke liye

koi acha sa room dikha dijiye ham dono
rah lenge
Aurat.....ji jarur
uske baad usne hame ek bahut hi alishan

kamre me le gayi jo bilkul Raja jesa kamra tha
ab Raja jesa kya kahna Raja ka hi tha
me aur Priya dono ne bari bari frash hue


me......gudiya aab app ko kesa lag raha hi
app kush to hi
Priya ( kusi se ). .......ha ajj me bahut kush hu
meri jan ab ham hmesa sath rahenge
me.....ha

ese hi ham log bate karte karte so gaye pata hi nhai
chala

location..............Raja Vila ( Delhi )


kabya aur uska kamina bhai sakti
ab bahut kush the aram ki jindagi kat rahi
thi Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal
raha tha

Anjali jab se peda hui thi Raja bahut kush
tha





Dosto Update posted read and enjoy me bahut mehnat se kisi trah app sab ko updete send kar dia hi mere bagal me ek log ki death ho gayi hi fir bhi mene wada pura kia app sab bas sath bnaye rakhe
nice update bhai
 

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Character introduction ............

Hero............ Raj Thakur ............. ( Hero of story duniya me sb se pyar karte hi aur jindagi inki Bhen hi Priya us ke ik bar khne se ye apni jan vhi de sakte hi )

Sister of hero ............. Priya Singh Thakur............. ( Bhut achi hi padhne me bhut achi hi I . C . S . E board ki class 10 me national topper hai Indian certificate secondary education ne inke study ka half kharcha Uthata hi aur baki half kon uthata hi ye story me pata chalega )

Mother of hero .............. Shalini Singh Thakur ............ ( Inki death ho gayi hi inke Pita ka nam tha Raj bir Singh Rathod jo ki bhut bade biasness man the )

Father of hero ................. Raja Thakur ..................... ( India ke top 10 biasness man me ek hi ye inki company ka name hi A . K group of industries Pvt. Ltd Ye apne bete se nafrat karte hi )

Step Mother of Hero ............. Kabya Thakur ............... ( Ye pehle Raja Thakur ki personal assistant Thi company mein
bad me Raja se shadi kr li dikhne me bhut achi hi)

Step Sister of Hero............. Anjali Singh Thakur ............. ( Ye Kabya Thakur aur Raja Thakur ki beti hi Raj se nafrat karti hi
Padhne me inteligent aur khubsurat hi )

Brother of step mother ................. Sakti kumar ............. ( Duniya me ager harami logo ka compatition ho jay to ye bhai sahab 1 st number pr jarur ayege inka ik beta hi inka kam hi aram se rhna khana pina aur moj udana mhengi - mhengi chijo ka bhut shok hi)

Son of Sakti kumar ................ kartik Kumar ........... ( Ye duniya ke second sabse bade harami insan hi kyoki 1st wala to inka baap hi na hahaha inke bare me story me janege )

Raju ............... Friends of hero

kirti ................ Girl friend of Raju .......... (hero inhe apni behan manta hi )
Update number..........One ( 1 )

Mere baap ka nam hi Raja Thakur khne ke liye
India ke sbse bade biasness king me inka nam ata hi
Ye aur meri maa ik hi school me padhte the
ye bhi amir ghar se the aur meri maa vhi
pehle dono ache dost the lekin bad me pyar ho

gya aur dono ne shadi kr li kuch salo ke bad me
peda hua dono bhut kush ho gye aur fir hui

jan Priya mere baap ka biasness vhi acha chl
rha tha fir ek din meri maa ka car ki
break fail ho jane se death ho gyi mere
baap ne iska karn meri choti behen ko man
lia aur use bhut bura brtaw karte

the fir ek din unhone apni personal assistant
jiska nam Kabya tha usse shadi kr li
aur ghar le aye uske sath uska bhai vhi
ghar a gya jo ki bhut harami insan

tha kabya ne meri aur meri bhen ki jindagi narak
bana kr rakh di jb me apne baap se uski
sikayat karta to wo khte aur maro
is manush ladki ko Isi ke karn

meri Shalini mugjhe chod kr chali gyi
ese hi kuch mahine bet gye fir aya wo din jb Subha
meri nend khuli to mene dekha ki mera baap
meri behan ko kahi le ja rha hi aur meri bahan
ro rhi hi

mujhe ye dekh bhut gussa aye
me.......... Dad app Priya ki kha le ja rhe hi
Dad ( gusse se ) .......... Is manush ko sada sada ke liye
apni jindagi se utha kr fekh rha hu tum chup
chap apne kamre me jao
nhai to mujh se bura koi nhai hoga

me ......... Nhai dad me app ko nhai jane dunga
maa mujh se hrdm khti rhti thi ki
apni behan ka hmesa khayal rakhna

Sakti kumar ............ Dekha jija ji me kahta tha ki
is sapole ko na Palo ajj rang dikha dia apna
app se juban Lada raha hi avi se jb thoda bada ho jayega
pata nhai kya krega ye

kabya ............ Ha ji Bhiya sahi kh rhe hi jaban to dekho abi se itni lambi ho gyi hi me to khti hu
ise vhi is manush ke sath anath aashram chod
Awo

Me ........ Nhai meri behan anath aashram nhai jayegi
wo anath nhai hi uska bhai avhi jinda hi me vhi dekhta
hu kon use anath aashram le jata hi mere rhte hue
Meri baat sun kr mere baap ko bhut gussa aya

Dad ( gusse se ) jao tum bhi chle jao apni is manush
behan ko lekar dubara kabhi apni sakal na dikhana
mujhe

me ......... ( Rote hue ) ager app ka yahi phesla
hi to thik hi

uske baad mene apni behan meri jan Priya ko
liya aur ghar se nikal gya
mere ghar se jane se sabse jada kush Sakti
kumar tha aur kabya
sare noukar vhi dukhi the laki

wo kuch kr nhai sakte the

me ghar se nikal kr bahr chal dia mujhe kuch samajh me nhai a rha tha kha jau aur kaha na jau
us samay meri umar lagbhag 10 year ki thi aur Priya ki
Lagbhag 6 sal

jb me hua tha to mere baap ka bisness bhut age nikal
gya aur jb se meri behan hui thi tab se unka
Bisness me bhut nukshan hone lage the is
liye mera baap meri behan ko
bilkul pyar nhai karta tha

meri behan ko bukhar tha maa jb
doctor ko bulane gayi to unki mout ho gayi
tbse mera baap aur jada nafrat karne laga tha

ME apni choti jan Priya ko apni baho me
lakar chala ja rha tha
mujhe ye nhai pata tha ki mujhe jana kaha hi
bs me ye nhai chahta tha ki meri behan ko

koi anath khe

jate jate mujhe laga ki meri jan bhukhi ho
gayi hogi to mene dekha ki bagal me hi ik dukan
hi me us dukan pr gaya

me ......... Chacha thoda dudh milega kya meri behan
bhut bukhi hi

Dukandar ........ Pese hi kya tere pas
me .......... Nhai chacha
Dukandar ( gusse se ) ........... Chal ht yaha se pata nhai kaha kaha se a jate hi
bhikhari kahi ke
uski baat sun kr mujhe laga ki jau aur uska
sina chir dil nikal lu

Priya ............ Pyare bhayu mujhe bhukh lagi hi
meri ki baat sun kr jese laga kisi ne
kalega jala dia hi
ajj meri behan ko bukh lagi hi aur ye duniya wale

mera baap bs dekh rhe hi me vhi in sb ko
Brbad kr dunga

me ........ Bs meri gudiya Rani jan thodi der aur fir me tujhe khana dunga

ankho se pani gir rha tha ager ajj koi khta ki
mujhe dudh ke badle tumhara khun chahiye
to me use dugna de deta ta

me soch rha tha b kya karu kaha se lau
dudh apni jan ke liye
mene apne hath pr dekha to meri ugli me hire
ki ik ring thi meri jeb me pata nhai kese lakin

2000 ke kuch rupaye the
mujhe laga syad kamla maa ne diye honge
wo vhi bechari ajj mere liye wo bhgwan se kam nhai
thi

kamla maa meri dai maa thi jo ki mera
Dyan rakhti thi bechari mujhse bhut pyar karti
thi mene socha ki in rupayo se mujhe
bacha kr rakhne honge

me jake ik dukan se dudh lekr aya
aur use apni behan ko pilaya
jb usne kaha ki pyare bhayu meri
bhukh mit gayi hi to
me bhut kush hua
Update number..............Two ...... ( 2 )


Me ( man me ) ............... Dekh rahi ho
maa ajj tera
ye beta akela pad gya hi sab ne cod dia
sath mera
lakin tum chinta mat karna
me apni jan apni Rani gudiya ka sath
kabhi bhi nhai chodunga ise padha
likha kar bhut bada insan banuga me maa ye wada hi tere bete ka tujh se maa

me bhut der se chal raha tha aur ab bhut thak gya
tha mene dekha ki bagal me ek park tha
to me wahi beth gaya thoda aram karne ke
liye
Priya ............ Mere pyare bhayu ab hm log kaha
jayege papa ne hme ghar se nikal dia app
ko nhai ana chahiye tha mere sath app ko
ghar pr rahna chahiye tha
app kyo aye mere sath jaye chale jayie yaha se

me ............ Meri jan ho tum meri pyari gudia tumhara
bhai rumhe puri jindgi apne sath rakh lega
tum chinta mat karo me tumhe kuch
nhai hone dunga
Priya ............. App ko mere sath rahne ke liye jab me
badi ho jaugi tab mujh se shadi karni hogi tabhi
to me app ke sath rh pungi wada karo
mujh se app ki app mujh se hi shadi karo ge
gudiya ki baat ko sun mujhe bhut hasi a
gayi

Priya ............ Me yaha sirus mettar pr baat kr rahi
hu app se aur ek app hi bs hase ja rhe hi jayie
me app se baat nhai karti
gudiya mujh se bar - bar jis karne lagi thi
mene socha abhi coti hi is liye esi bate kr rahi hi
me ........ Acha baba kar lunga me shadi apse ab
kush
meri baat sun kr uske chehre par muskan a gayi

Priya ( kush hote hue ) ............ Ha ab me bhut kush hu
ese hi hasi majak karte hue kuch hour bit gaye
me ......... Gudiya ab chalo ab hme yaha se chalna
chahiye meri gudiya Rani jan
Priya .......... Chaliye fir mene kb apse mana kia hi


location ................. Raja Thakur house

Raj aur Priya ke jane ke bad Kabya aur Sakti
kumar bhut kush hue

Raja .......... Chalo ek musibat hi kam hui
Sakti kumar ........... Ha Jija ji ajj apne koi sahi
phesla lia hi dono sapolo ko is ghar se nikal
kr ab ja kr is ghar ko shanti milegi

kabya ........... Ha ji bhiaya sahi kh rhe hi

me aur Priya roed se ja rhe the use me apni baho
me lia tha aur bate kr raha tha
ki mere pair ke jute me mujhe kuch chubhne laga
me ........ Jan kuch der yahi rahna me apna juta nikal
kr dekh lu is me kuch hi
Priya .......... Ok pyare bhayu

me juk kr apne shoes ko nikal kr dekhne
Laga ki achanak ek bike pr ek Aurat
aur Aadmi beth kr a rhe the unke hath
me ek chota sa bacha tha

achanak us admi ki bike ek brekar pr jakr jor se uchli
aur us aurat ke hath se wo bacha
uchal kr niche girne laga
mene dekha to jor bhag kr use apni godi me le
liya jamin se girne se pehle

Aurat bhut dar gai
Aadmi ne turant apni bike roki aur
Utar kr bhag kr mere pas aya
Aurat ........... ( Rote huye ) ......... Bhut - bhut
Sukragujar hu me tumhari beta me ye karz
jindagi bhar nhai bhul paungi
ajj tumne hmare ek lote bete ko marne se bachaya hi

Aadmi ........... Ha beta
itne me gudiya meri jan meri rani bhi a gyai
mere pas
Priya .......... Pyare bhayu app ko kahi chot to nhai lagi
me ............ Me nhai meri gudiya

me ........ Isme sukriya ki koi baat nhai hi
ye to mera farz hi
Aurat .......... Beta Tum dono akele ho tumhare sath koi
nhai hi tumhare maa baap
me ....... Nhai hmara is duniya me koi nhai
hi
Aadmi ........... Beta Tum kaha rahte ho
me ........ Yahi kahi koi park me so jaunga
Aadmi ........... Nhai beta ajj se tum hmare sath rhoge
mera ek dhaba hi kya tum usme kam karoge
me ......... ( Kushi se ) ji kyo nhai mujhe bs app ni
gudiya ke liye kuch bhi kr lunga

Aurat .......... Ha beta app hmare sath chalo
Ajj se app ki gudiya ka dyan me rakhungi
unki baat sun kr me bhut kush ho gya


fir me aur gudiya unke sath chle aye
unhone hme apne ghar me rahne ke liye
ik kamra
de dia aur us Aadmi
ne kaha ki kl mujhe wo dhabe
pr le jayega ajj me aram karu
Me aur gudiya bhut kush the ki ajj
mujhe rahne ke
Liye ek ghar mil gaya

Me gudiya app so jao
Priya ............... nhai mere pyar bhau me nhai soungi
app din bhr mujhe apni godi me lekr thak
Gaye honge chaliye app let jayie me app ke per hath sb
ki ache se malish kr deti hu

meri jan ki baat sun kr mujhe hasi a gayi
ki kitna pyar karti thi meri jan mujhe
se
me............meri jan me tumhe sari jindagi app
ni baho me lekr rakh sakta hu
isi trah bate karte rhe hm log
aur kuch der baad ham dono so gaye

location............... Death lok

Goddess of life...............dekh rhe hi app
apne Putra ko
kya hal ho gya hu
unka wo sare Universe ke Prince
hokar God of life Prince of death hokr
ik dhabe
Pr kam karne ja rhe hi
aur app bs muskara kr Anand le rhe hi
Goddess of life..........Me unka esa hal nhai dekh
sakti app kuch karte kyo nhai app
ke bhi putra hi wo

God of death..............Me bs hmare putra ke adbhut
prem ka anand le rha hu

God of death................abhi unhe is Universe ka sanchaln
karna hi wo itne kamjor bhi nhai hi
app maa hi app ko bs app na putra dikh rha hi bs

pr ik bar app unhe Tha Goddess of life ki
jagah rakh kr dekhe to app ko samajh a jaye ga
wo koi Aam manushya nhai balki is Universe
ke Prince hone ke sath - sath Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death son of Tha God of death
and Tha Goddess of life hi

Putra hi wo mere unhe dukh me dekh mujhe
bhi dard hota hi lekin ik pita ki drist me
na ki Tha God of death ki dristi se

Tha Godess of life ............ App sahi kh rhe hi
lekin is maa ke dil ko hm kese samjhaye
Jo Ki app ne putra se beintaha
mahobbat karta hi

Location............Earth India Delhi

Morning me meri ankh khuli
Mene dekha ki meri jan ke chehre pr bhut
Pyari muskan dekh kr me kho sa gya
Superb bhai sandar jabarjast update to Raj ke pita ne apni dusri wife or sale ke bhadkane pr Raj ko uski bahan ke sath Ghar se nikal diya How mean are they... To Raj ne ek dampatti ke bachhe ko bchaya jinhone baad me Raj or Uski bahan ko apne sath le gye Raj ko kaam bhi diya joki Raj ke liye Acchi suruvat hai...
 

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Update.................Three.( 3 )...........................Location..............(planet earth India Delhi)............

Apni jan ke chehre par muskan dekh me

me kuch der ke liye usi me kho gya kitni
pyari lagti thi meri jan sote hue kitni pyari
hi me kabhi iska sath nhai chodunga chaye jo
ho jaye me apni jan Rani ko hmesa kush
Rakhunga kabhi ise dukhi nhai
hone dunga ye mene apne
app se vachan lia

mene socha kuch der aur some deta hu
bechri ko kitni pyari aur masoum hi
uske bad me apne room se nikla
mujhe wo Aadmi mil gya

Character introduction of family-------------


Aadmi.............Din dyal
Aurat............Rani wife of din dyal
Raju...........son of din dyal and Rani

Din dyal................Are Raj beta kese ho chalo naha dho kr ready ho jao Dhabe pr bhi chalna hi
hme
me...........ji chacha ji hm abhi naha kr tyar ho jaye hi
bs kuch der rukiye
uske baad me fresh hokr nha kr tyar ho gya
mene socha ab chlu apni jan ko jaga du
me apne room me chal dia jab me phucha to dekha meri
jan jag gayi hi
me........... gudiya app jab jagi thodi der aur so
leti
Priya...........Pyare bhayu ajj app chacha ji ke sath
Kam karne jane wale hi a ache se rhiyega
apna dyan rakhiyega
aur time se khana kha lijiyega
me.......... hahahahahah bas karo bhai tum to abhi se
Bibi wali harkate karni lagi ho
Priya.............Abhi nhai hu app ki bibi to kya
hu bad me to houngi
me apni jan ki baat sun kar hasne laga
kitni pyari baat karti thi meri
jan
me......... Acha baba ye sab chodo m chala jaunga
to chachi ko tang mat karna ok


Priya( has kar)............Thik hi pyare bhayu
me uske baad Angan me chal dia chacha beth kr
Waha khana kha rhe the
Chachi............Raj chalo app bhi khana kha lo
me..........ji chachi
uske baad me bhi chacha ke sath beth kr khana kaya

fir chacha ne apni bike nikali
me............Chachi meri gudiya ka dyan rakhna
Chachi.........Thik hi Raj
fir me aur chacha bike pr beth kr dhabe pr chal
die kuch der bad ham waha pahuche

Dhaba dikhne me acha tha waha 4 log kam
karte the 1...kalu, 2..... Ramu, 3.......kamla, 4.......Rani
kalu aur Ramu dhabe pr ane wale logo ka
odar likhta aur kalu unko khana deta
kamla aur Rani khana tyar karti

Jab ham dhabe pr pahuche to charo
Ne jese hi chacha ko dekha
Charo........Pranam malik
Chacha..........ye hi Raj ajj se tum logo ke sath
Kam Karega thik hi
Charo.........Ji malik

fir me bhi unhi logo ke sath kam karne laga
Jese mej safh karna kurshi saf karna
logo ko pani dena pira din yahi kam karta
rha me duphar hone pr hm charo
me khana khaya
Rat tk me bhut thak gya ajj tak mene ye
sare kam kabhi kia hi nhai tha to meri adat

nhai thi karne ki lakin mene socha mujhe
ye kam karna hoga apni jan ke
liye karna hoga
Rat ko me chacha ke sath unki bike
pr beth kr ghar a gya

mujhe dekh kr Priya mere pas ayi aur
mujh se lipat gayi
uske bad me aur chacha aur Priya ne sath -
sath khana kaya

Ab mera yahi kam ho gya tha me Subha
news paper batta tha aur Rat ko apni
gudiya se pyar bhari bate karta tha
chachi meri jan ka ache se khayal

rakhti thi mujhe vhi ab adat pr gayi
thi ese hi dekhte dekhte ek year
bit gye ab meri jan 7 year ki ho gyi thi aur me 11 year ka

Mere pas news paper aur dhabe se kam
karne se bhut rupaye jama ho gaye
tha mene socha kyu na me apni jan ka nam
kisi ache school me likha du

ajj jb me Subha utha to apni jan ko
dekha to kho sa gaya usme kitni pyari dikhti thi meri jan
mene usko jagaya
me........jan meri gudiya me soch rha hu ki
apka admission school me kra du
app bta rahi thi na ki app ko padhna acha lagta hi

meri baat sun kr Priya kush ho gayi
Priya.........ha mere pyare bhau mughe padhna bhut acha
lagta hi app mera nam sach me school me sach me likheyege
me........Ha meri jan kl tumhe me school le chalunga
Priya.........ok pyare bhau

us din me chacha ke sath dhabe pr se ja raha tha
to mujhe raste me ik school dikha
uska nam tha N . M public school
mene socha ki me apni Priya ka admision isi me krunga
mere pas abhi 95000 rupaye the

kl Subha mene meri jan ko pyar se uthaya
Me........me chalo jan ab hme school jane ke liye
tyar hona hi
fir me aur meri jan tyar ho gye jane ke liye

Location ..............N . M public school
admission office me me apni jan ke sath ache
se tyar hokr a gya
wha bhut sare bache the
mene admission forum lia aur U . K . G
ka use ek uncle se fil kra kr
rakh lia jab hmari bari ayi to me apni jan ke sath admission room
me chala gaya

Sir........... Hallo beta kya nam hi apka aur
apke parents kha hi
me............ Hallo sir my name Raj Singh Thakur and she is my
sister Priya Singh Thakur sir mujhe meri behan ka admission
karana hi
Mere mami papa nhai hi
Sir..........what app ke mom dad nhai hi sorry beta app
fir apni bhen ki fees kese dohe beta
me.........sir mujhe bas apni behan ka admission
karana hi me ik dhabe aur news paper
deta hu app chinta mata kare me

apni bhen ke liye aur kam krunga
use sche se padhaunga
Sir........what app itni si umar me itna kam karte hi
Bhagwan kre har behan ko App jesa bhai mile
uske baad sir ne Priya ka admission kr lia
mene rupaye submit kiye

me.........sir ise kab se school ana hi
sir..........beta kl se ajj app inhe copy aur book la dena
me........ok sir Thanks
Sir.........your welcome beta

usKe bad me aur Priya market gaye waha se mene Priya
ke liye drese aur copy aur book lia
fir ham ghar a gaye Priya bhut kush thi kyoki

use school jana tha ab se mene bhi soch lia mujhe ab
aur kam karna hoga tabhi me apni jan ko ashe se padha paunga

Location...............Raja Thakur house

Sakti kumar aur aur uska 4 year ka beta
ache se ab mahal me rahne lage
kabya bhi bhut kush thi kyoki wo
maa banne wali thi

Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal raha tha ab
wo log bhut kush the

kabaya ki hi marji chalti thi hr jagah ab
Raja Thakur bs uska katputli ban kr rah
gya tha

Location............Din dyal dhaba

EK bhut mhengi var ruki aur usme se ak aurat nikli
aur Ramu bhag kr uske pas gaya
Ramu............. boliye medam kya lau
Medam............Kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ko bulaya ke le awo
Update number............ Four...........( 4 )..................

Location.................Din dyal dhaba

Duphar ka time tha ki ek bhut
mhengi car aker dhabe par rukti hi
aur uske Piche lagbhag 50 gadi hoti hi
sari ki sari
top Asians the jo ki gun liye
rahte hi sb log jitne bhi dhabe par
the sab ke sab khade ho jate hi Raj us
time ntha nhai wo gaya tha
kisi ko khana dene

Din dyal , Ramu aur kalu bahr
ate hi wo bhi itni security
ko dekh dar gaye the
Din dyal.........Ji mam boliye hm app ki kya madad
kr sakte hi
Aurat............kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur kaha hi unhe bulao
us Aurat ki baat sun to Din dyal Raj ke nam ke
age Thakur aur Kuwar sun to muh khula
ka khula hi rh jata hi

Din dyal ( haklate hue ).........kya bola app ne mam kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur Kya Raj jo mere dhabe pr
kam karta hi app uske bare me phuch
rahi hi kya wo kon hi jo app
uske bare me phuch
rahi wo to mujhe sadak par mila tha
wo kh rha tha ki ik anath hi

Din dyal ki baat ko sun Aurat ko a gya
gussa
Aurat.............ye kuwar jinke bare me itna bol raha
hi aur tum sab sun rahe ho pehle isko
do tamacha maro fir age ki
beet hogi

Aurat ke kahne pr unme se do log bahar aye aur
2 Tamacha mara din dyal ko
uske ankho ke age andhera cha gya

Abhi wo sab tisra tamacha marne hi wala
tha ki waha Raj pahuch gaya
Jb usne dekha itni sari car ko khadi

jb ander pahucha aur un Asians ko apne chacha
ko marte hue dekha to gusse se pagal
ho gaya aur bhag kr ik Asians ko
pura jor laga kar ik lat mar

RAj ke lat padhte hi wo Asian 20 meter dur ja gira
sab log ik dam dang ki koi 11 - 12 year ke ladke
Ne ek expert world top Asian ko itna dur


fek dia

Me.........kon ho tum log aur chacha ko kyu mar rahe
ho
Din dyal.........( Rote hue ).........Are Raj beta acha hua ki
Tum a gaye inse bacha lo mujhe din dyal ne jo
hua tha wo sab Raj ko bata dia
sari baat sun kr to me sann rh gya kyoki
ajj tak mene kisi ko nhai bataya tha ki me Thakur hun

but mujhe ik baat samajh me nhai a rahi thi
ki ye kuwar aur Pratap ka kya chakkar hi

Aurat..........kuwar ji acha hua ki app a gaye
hamne kaha kaha nhai dudha app ko

Me.........kon hi app sab
Aurat.........me app ki maa Shalini Singh Pratap
Thakur ki Personal assistant hu app ke
Nana ji aur maa ne app ke nam bhut sari property
ki hi me uski Care Taker hu
me.........ji me kuch samjha nhai

Aurat............Ji apke Nana ji Rajgarh ke Raja
hi Raja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur app ki
Maa ka nam hi Shalini Pratap Singh Thakur unhone
aur Raja Thakur ne ghar se bhag kr shadi


ki thi iski wajah se app ke Nana ji bhut
Gussa ho gaye unhone app ki
maa se sare rishte Nate tod liye
jab unhe pata chal ki

Raja Thakur ne app ko aur app ki
behan ko apne ghar se nikal
dia tabse wo app ko dundh rahe hi
unhone apni sari property aur world
wide lavel ki company aur Raj gaddi ka

Naya Raja chun lia hi aur app ke nam
Apni company jo unhone app ke
Name pr rakhi hi R . S group of industries Pvt Ltd

Hm sab app ko dhund rahe the kl hme pata
Chala ki app yaha hi to ham turant a
Gaye Abhi unki tabiyat kharab hi isliye hamne
Unhe nhai bataya ki app mil gaye hi

Nhai to wo a jate app ko ab esi jindagi
bitane ki koi jarurat nhai hi
app apni behan nko le lijiye aur chaliye
apke Nana ji app ko dekh bhut kush

ho jayenge

us Aurat ki baat sun kr me bhut kush ho
gaya kyoki mere vhi nana ji hi
Rajao ki seceretry hai Isi liye aam logo ko jyada kuchh samajhti nhi hai btao Jisne Raj ko sahara diya usi ko 2 thappad lagva diya to Raj ke Nana ne dhundh liya Raj ko Chalo Dekhte hai kya hoga aage... Superb update bhai sandar
 
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Update number............Five..........( 5 )................

Mout ka shahzada aur Jindagi ka Bhagwan hu me
mujhe mout ka khof dikhate ho

Update number..........five.......(5)

Location........... house of Raj Thakur

kabya ke pet me bhut dard ho raha tha
kyoki wo maa banne wali thi
Raja Thakur aur sakti ne use car
Me bitha kr hospital ki trafh
chal die

sakti............bs meri behan bs a hi gya hi
hospital thodi himmat aur jutao
Raja..........Ha kabya bs kuch der aur
fir ham hospital pahuch jayenge mene sare intazam

pehle se hi kar lia hi tum chinta mat karo
Sakti.......... Driver thoda tez chalo kya
tum car nhai tampu chal
rhe ho

kuch der bad Raja aur Sakti Kabya
ko lekar hospital pahuch gaye

After some hours...................

ek nurse bhagte hue Raja aur Sakti ke pas a gayi

Nurse............ Congratulations Thakur Sahab app
ke ghar lakshmi ne janam lia hi
us Nurse ki baat ko sun Raja Thakur bhut
kush ho gya but sabse jada kush to

hmare sakti sahab ho gaye
Sakti..........ye lo mera A . T . M card jao pure hospital
me mithayi bato aur sab ko 1 lac rupaye de do
jitne bhi stop hi hospital me

Nurse....( Kushi se ).......ji sir lagta hi app apni
behan se behad pyar karte hi
( Ab bhai jitna dena ho de kon sa apne baap
ka ja raha hi Account to se pesa to
hmare Raja Babu ka katega hahahaha)
Sakti...........Apni jan se bhi jada pyar karta
hu apni behan se
( Khne se kya jata hi )

uske bad sb log kushi ghar ko lout aye

Location..............hell empire

King........ Lucifier

Lucifier ji aya ajj itne kush the ki
bata nhai sakte
kyoki ajj unka Rajya yani ki hell
empire Universe ke top 1000

empire me a gya hi

Lucifier apne sighsan pr bethe hase jarhe the
Lucifier............ hahahaha hahaha ajj ajj hmne
hmne apna badla bhi king empire
se le lia
aur Universe ke top 1000 empire
me ab hamar nam a gya hi
Tha great hell king Lucifier
haha hahahahah

Pure Rajya ke devilo ko
kh do ki ajj kushi manane
ka din hi Utsaw ki tyari karo

Tbhi ik devil Senik bhagta hua ata hi
Senik............( Dar ke mare kapte hue )
Maharaj Maharaj app abhi ke abhi
hell empire chod kr bhag jayiye wo agi hi
Tha Prince of Evil Shiva


jese hi hmare Lucifier ye nam sunte hi
to kapte hue bhagne lagte
hi

Lucifier kisi trah girte padte
derk empire pahuch te hi
Sab Lucifier nko is trah kapte hue dekh behad
dar jate hi Lucifier jor se chillata hua khata
hi Tha dark lord bachao mujhe

Dark lord jab Lucifier ko is trah kapte dekhte hi
to wo jaldi se uske pas ate hi
Dark lord.........kya hua mere parm Mitra ko
btao mujhe ab tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nhai
hi ab tum Dark empire me ho

Yaha Lord chorus bhi ane se darta
Hi btao mujhe

Lucifier............( Dar ke mare kapte hue ).........Mere piche
wo Tha Prince of Universe Shiva
PAd gaye hi wo mujhe chodega
Nhai

jese hi dark lord Shiva ka nam sunte hi
dar ke mare kapne lagte hi
Lucifier ko uthate hue
Dark lord......( Darte hue ).........ajj se dosti khatam
mujhe abhi kuch din aur jina hi
mujhe marna nhai hi
jao jaldi yaha se
ager kahi wo a gya to Dark empire
history me rh jayega

dark lord kisi trah kapte pero ke
sath Lucifier ko utha kr
apne empire ke bahr fekte hi
Ajj pehli bar Lucifier ko
dar lag raha tha kyoki jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal history me rh jata hi

Ab Lucifier ko kuch samajh me nhai
a raha tha kha jaye kya kare
use Shiva se bs 3 insan bacha sakte hi

1. ) Tha great God

2. ) Tha God of death

3. ) Tha goddess of death

IN ke Samne Shiva kuch nhai kr sakta

Lucifier kisi trah khada hua aur Goddess of death ke pas ja e laga Tha Death lok

JAha Tha God of death aur Tha goddess of death ke isare ke bina ik patta bhi nhai hil
Sakta
Lucifier apni puri sakti laga di
Waha jane ke liye

Ek nam................Tha evil Prince Shiva
ka nam sun ye Universe kapta hi

Ek baat yad rakhna Shiva main Villains me nhai hi
wo to unke per ka juta brabar hi

( Friends ager app sab ne 15 Comments bhi de dia
to next update 3 hour me de dunga )
Update number.............Six..........( 6 )...............

Location............. Devil empire

Evil Prince Shiva ne pura devil lok me
kuhram macha dia charo aur bas chillane
ki awaj ajj jashan ke Mike pr
matam me badal gaya

Shiva ne devil lok ke senapati ko pakad lia
aur uske sar pr hath rakha to use Lucifier
ke bare me sab pata kr lia
usne apni ankhe band ki aur Lucifier ko

dekhe laga use pata chal gya ki wo kaha ja
raha hi Shiva Lucifier ke piche bhaga
Lucifier bechare kisi trah girte padte
Death lok ki sima pr pahuch gaye

lakin usse age wo ja nhai sakta tha to wo
wahi se ro ro kr Chila Chila kr apni
jan bachane ke liye rone laga

Lucifier............malik mujhe bacha lo maa Goddess of death me app ka bhut bada bhakt hu
kripya meri raksha kare maye
prabhu app mujhe bacha li jiye


Uski kruna bhari awaj sun mata
Tha goddess of death uske pas pragat hui
unhe dekh Lucifier ke sans me sans ayi
wo turant maa ke poro me
gir gaya

Lucifier..........maa app mujhe evil
Prince Shiva se bacha lo me app ka bhut bada
bhakt hu app meri raksha kare me jindagi bhar app
ki sewa krunga mata

Lucifier ki kruna bhari awaj ko sun
mata Tha goddess of death ka
dil pasijh gaya

Mata.......... Lucifier tum chinta mat karo ham tumhe
kuch nhai hone denge
ane do use uski itni himmat nhai hi ki
wo hmare samne aye

Lucifier maa ki bato ko sun kr bhut jada
kush ho gya ab janke uski sans me
sans ayi

Lucifier...........maa app ne mujhe bacha lia
me app ka gulam ho gya hu maa
idhar jab Shiva waha pahucha
to Lucifier ko dekh war karne hi
wala tha ki uski nazar maa pr

padi wo maa ke samne aker khada ho gya
aur gutno ke bal beth gaya
Shiva..........maa Goddess of death ko
unke is bhakt ka pranam swikar
ho maa

Lucifier Shiva ko dekh ab nhai
dar rha tha kyoki maa ke samne
wo kuch bhi nhai tha

maa......... Shiva tum Lucifier ke piche
Shiva...........maa is ne hmare Rajya me
apne kuch devilo ko bejha hi
unhone ek ladki ke sath badtameezi ki
hm ise jivit nhai chodenge

Shiva ki baat sun Lucifier ne turant
Lucifier ( hath jor ).........unhe hamne nhai
Bejha tha evil Prince wo hamare devil
nhai the
app ka nam sun ye Universe kapta hi
ham kya hi app ke age

wo hell empire ke Raj drohi the
unhe pata nhai hoga ki jise wo tang kr rhe hi
wo app ke Rajya me hi me app ke per
padta hu mujhen ek bar maff kr dijiye

me kabhi app aur app ke Rajya ka nam
Sapne me bhi nhi sochunga

maa......... Shiva me kh rahi hu app ise maff
kr de

Shiva.......jo agya maa
uske baad Shiva ne Lucifier ko ik
bar gusse se dekha

aur fir gusse me app ne rajya lout gaya
Shiva man me sochne laga ki
kab tak Lucifier maa ke piche chup

kr usse bachta hi kabhi na kabhi
tum mere hath awoge Lucifier

wo din tumhara akhiri din hoga

Lucifier ne Shiva ke jane ke baad to
chain ki sans li aur maa ko parnam kr
devil empire lout gaya
Lucifer or Shiva ko dekh kr (padh kr) aisa lga 2 Chhote bacche (natkhat) Apne dosto ke sath milkr khel rhe the or ek ke dosto ne dusre ke ek ladki dost ko tang kr diya or fir aapas me ldai ho gyi pr ek jyada saktishali tha to dusra Pahle ek bhai ke pass gya bhai ne dusre bhai ka sun kr ki vo pichhe hai to dhakke dekr bhaga diya fir MA ke pass gya to ma ne Maff karne ka Bol diya saktishali bhai apna gussa kabu karke chla gya...
Point is padh kr anand aaya... Sandar bhai
 
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Update number......................( 6 ).....................

Location...........hell empire

jab Lucifier bach kr hell empire aya tab waha ki
halat bhut kharab thi jise dekh
wo bhut gussa ho gya


Pr wo kuch kr nhai sakta tha isi liye
socha ajj to use maa na bacha lia lakin jab fir kabhi
shiva ne us pr dubara hamla kia
to wah kaha jayega yahi sochne laga
mujhe kuch to karna padega nhai

To ye Shiva mujhe ik din upper pahucha kr
hi manega lakin me karu to kya karu
Lucifier esi hi socho me gum ho jata hi


Hell empire me fir se sab set kia gaya
Shiva ne adha se jada uzar kr rakh
dia tha

Evil Prince Shiva..................pura universe is ke nam se kapta hi Universe chalti firti mout kahte hi
ise Evil Prince Shiva death valley
ka Bhagwan hi ye Lucifier aur
dark lord aur Lord chorus

kese warrior bhi isse darte hi
kahte hi jiske piche Shiva pad jaye uska
nam kewal History me milta hi koi iske
age nhai jata

Pehle ik esa warrior tha jo Shiva se nhi
darta tha ager wo Shiva se age nhai tha
to kisi chez me piche bhi nhai tha
wo nam tha Devi prince Tha great king

but wo pata nhai kaha chla gaya hi
kuch year se
iske jane ke baad Devil empire ko uske
ans Rudra Tha distroyr samhalne laga
Rudra vhi bhut jada takatwar hi universe me
uske nam se bhi kof khate hi warrior

but wo bure kam nhai karta hi kuch year me
wo kahi chala gya hi Tha God of death ki
tapasya krke Tha great king ke bare me pata
karne apne Pita Tha great king se bhut pyar
Karta hi Rudra

jab tak wo Tapasya karne nhai gaya tha tab tk
evil Prince Shiva me itni himmat nhai thi ki
wo Rudra ke khilaf jaye
pr jab se Rudra Tapasya karne gaya hi

evil Prince Shiva ne univarse me
apni dehesat felana start kr dia hi
koi uske khilaf jata hi to wo khatam ho jata hi
ya khe to khatam kr dia jata hi

Location earth India Delhi......................


Raja Vila................

yaha ajj bhut kushi aur chahal pahal hi
hi ho bhi kyo na ajj Kabya ki ladki
Ka nam karn hone wala hi aur night me
ek bhut badi party hone wali hi


jisme country ke top biasness man political
lidar aur bhut bade nami girami log
invite hi

Sab log bethe the aur pandit ji ki Goud me wo
bacchi thi
kabya............koi acha nam rakhiye hmari
ladli ka Pandit ji
Raja......ha pandit ji

( dushro ki jindagi brbad krke khushiya manai
Ja rhi hi yaha but kon inhe bataye ki inki
kushi bs kuch din ki mehman hi )

pandit ji............Apke ghar Lakshmi ne janam
Lia hi iska nam ho ga Anjali Thakur

bacchi ka nam sun sabhi kush ho gye

kabya.........bhut acha nam hi pandit ji
Raja.......ha pandit ji kabya sahi
kh rahi hi
Sakti............Akhir ho bhi kyo na banji
to meri hi hi

Location................Din dyal dhaba

us aurat ki baat sunkr me bhut jada kush
ho gaya kyoki ab me akela nhai tha
mere nana ji mere sath the
Me.........ok me jaldi se jaldi nana ji se milna
chahta hu pehle app sab ghar

chaliye me apni jan ko le lu fir chalte hi
Rajgarh
meri baat ko sun kr wo aurat bhut kush
hui aur Din dyal aur dhabe me kam
karne wale log dukhi ho gaye ki
ab me unke sath nhai rahunga

uske baad me gadi me beth gaya aur wo
aurat piche ki ik gadi me din dyal
Chacha bhi beth gaye aur ham sab
chal die ghar ki aur

ajj me bhut jada kush tha akhir hu bhi
kyo na me appne Jan ko bhut achi
Jindagi de sakta hu aur apne nana
ji se bhi mil lunga


yahi sab choste hue me car me betha
tezi se ghar ki aur ja raha tha
jise hi meri car ghar pahuchi
Chachi itni sari car ko dekh dang rh gayi

jab Me car se utra to meri jan
tezi se bhagte hue ayi aur meri baho me sama
gayi
Update..........7

priya...............Bhaiya app a gaye ajj itni jaldi kese a gaye
Din dyal chacha ne chachi ko sab btaya

me........gudiya chalo hme nana ji ke pas jana hi
Godiya......... bhayu hmare nana ji hi kaya

me.......ha meri pyari behan hmare nana
ji hi aur ab hme yaha nhai rahna me tumhara admission
sabse ache school me krunga

Chachi..........Beta Raj hmesa kush rahna me tumhare
liye bhut kush hu
me.........chachi app esa mat kahe mere pas jab
kuch bhi nhai tha to apne meri madat ki
JIndagi me ager app ko kabhi meri jarurt hogi to jarur btayega

uske bad kuch der sabse milne ke bad me aur gudiya gadi me beth gaye

Gudiya..........Bhai hme kitni der lagegi pahuchne me
me........mujhe pata nhai hi gudiya ruke me
puch kr app ko batata hu
Gudiya...........ok bhai
mene us aurat se phucha ki abhi kitni der lagegi tab usne
mujhe bataya ki abhi 15 hours lagege


raste me ik mandir aya mene car waha rukwayi
aur bhagwan ke darshan kre aur ajj me bhut kush tha
kyoki ajj mujhe appni bhen ke liye peso ki

chinta nahi thi ab me apni behan ko a he school me padha sakta hu

location.............evil lok

Evil Prince Shiva evil lok pahuch
tab bhut gusse me tha
kyoki ajj pehli bar esa ho raha tha ki
uska sikar
bach gaya ho ajj tak jise bhi usne chah wo mr jarur
gaya

Shiva is Lucifier ko mujh se ek bar
mata ne bacha lia lakin kitni baar
bachega ye kabhi na kabhi to mere hath me
ayega hi usi din is Lucifier ka akhiri din hoga

mujhe jald hi Rudra ko dudhna hoga nhai
to kahi usene Tha great king ka pata laga lia
to mera khof is univarse me bhut kam
ho jayega

lakin pata nhai wo kaha hi me bhi uski energy ko
feel nhai kr pa raha hu
karu to kya karu ager me
Tha sword of fountain of warrior ko pa lu

tabhi me Tha great king ko hara paunga
lakin us sword ko hasil karna bhut muskil hi
kuch samajh me nhai a rha hi kya karu

Location................Dark empire

dark empire ke lord Tha lord ko samajh
me nhai a raha tha ki Lucifier Evil Prince Shiva se kese bach gaya usese to ajj tak koi

nahi bacha ajj tak hmare pas hell empire
ka sath tha but hmne Lucifier ko jo apne
Rajya se nikal dia ab hmara sabse bada dushman
hell lok hi aur ab hell lok ko harana

bhut muskil hi

hell empire ab pure Universe me top1000
empire me ik hi hamare liye wo khatra
ban sakta hi
hme evil Prince se dosti ka hath badhana
Chahiye tabhi Lucifier hamko

kuch karne ke bare me sochchga bhi nhai
pr kese Shiva to kisi se dosti karta nahi wo
to sabko apna gulam banata hi ab kya
kare ham

Location.............. earth India Delhi

Kabya aur Raja bhut kush the karn thi
Anjali Thakur ka ajj kabya ji beti ho gayi thi
Raja Thakur ne kuch property anath aashram
ko dan me di

Sakti Kabya ko samjha raha tha ki
hame Raj aur Priya ko mar dene chahiye
kyoki ager wo apna hissa mangne lage tab kya
hoga

kabya bhi sakti ki baat man gayi aur Raj aur Priya ko
dudhne ke liye apne kuch admi laga die
but wo abhi tak Raj aur Priya ko dundh
nhai pa rahe the

location..................hell empire

Lucifier............( Man me )

is dark lord ne mujhe apne Rajya se fekha tha
hAm iska badla le ke rahe ge dekhte hi ab
is dark lord ko kon bacha ta hi

hAm jald hi dark lord pr hamla krenge
dekhte hi use kon bachata hi
lakin abhi mujhe meri saktiyo ko aur
badhana hoga nhai to ham dark empire

Se kabhi nhai jit payege

Lucifier apne kamre me jaker Shetan ki aradhna
karne laga

hell lok me ab sab kuch sahi ho gaya tha
mata ki wajah se ab hell lok pr
Shiva hamla krega nhai aur kisi me itni
himmat nhai hi ki heel lok se Dushman

bana le




Location................Tha mahal of Rajgrah

is mahal ko dekhne bhut dur dur se log
ate hi ye india ke Rajasthan me hi
dekhne me bhut acha hi yaha ke Raja
hi veer Pratap Singh Thakur

aur inki patni ki death bhut pehle ho gayi thi
ajj kal Veer ki bhi tabiyat kharab rahne lagi thi

kuch hours ke baad Raj aur Priya mahak pahuche
itne bade mahal ko dekh kr wo log dang rh gaye
aur kush bhi the ki ab se wo log yaha rahege

Priya............ bhai kya ab ham log yaha rahege
me........ha meri jan ab ham yaha
rhege ye ab se app ka ghar hi

meri baat sunkr Priya bhut kush ho gayi
Update number...............8.............Tha Prince of Universe

Location...............Rajgadh

Priya ki kushi dekh kar me bhi bada kush
tha akhir uske bhi kuch sapne the mene
ajj tak jo meri gudiya meri jan ne kaha
use wo lake dia

mugjhe ajj is baat ki kushi nhai thi ki me
Rajgadh ka Raja banunga kushi is baat
ki thi ki ajj apna kahne ke liye mere pas
mere nana ji hi

ham log Rajgadh ke mahal ke main gate par
pahuche hmari car dekh turant nhaye khol
dia gaya me aur Priya bas dekhte hi rah gaye

mahal bahar se jitna sundar dikhta tha ander
se usse kayi jada sundar dikhta tha charo taraf
gun liye security wale khade the jab me car se utra
to wo aurat mere pas ayi

Aurat............kuwar Raj ji chaliye pehle app ko apke Nana
ji ke pas leke chalti hu
me...........ha chalo jadi hme unse milna hi
gudiya........pyare bhayu chalo na mugjhe
bhi Nana ji se milna hi
me gudiya ki baat sun kar use apni baho
Me lia aur uska math pyar se chuma

Me........ok jan chal rahe
Fir wo aurat mughe unke pas lekar gayi
Sab traf gunman the sab us aurat ko
Dekh kar salam kar rahe the
Kuch der chalane ke baad ham aker ek behad hi

Alishan room me chale gaye waha ek 60 year
ke byakti the dekhane me unke chare par bahut
tez tha mughe unhe phachante jara si bhi der
na lagi ke yahi mere Nana ji Raja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur hi

Aurat............Malik hame Kuwar sa mil gaye
Nana ji ne itna suna ki wo bhag ke aker
mughe apne sine se sata lia bahut
Asha lag rah tha ajj me sabdo me bya nhai

kar sakta
jan unhone mughe kuch der bad alag
kia to
me...........nana ji kuch der aur apne bahut der
laga di bahut tadfa hu me kisi apne ke liye
ajj app mugjhe mil gaye

Nana..........kuwar ji app bilkul mere Pita ji jese
dikhte hi ajj me bahut kush hu ajj mera waris mil
gaya mugjhe ab ager me mar bhi jau to koi
gam nhai hi mughe app royie mat


app Kuwar hi Rajgadh ke

fur unhone dobara mughe apni baho me kash lia
Priya ji bahut der se ye dekh rahi thi
Priya..........nana ji ham bhi hi yaha
Priya ki baat sun kar nana ji ne uski traf dekha


aur bhag kar use bhi apni godi me utha lia
nana........meri bachi app bilkul apni maa
ki trah dekhti hi ajj me bahut kush hu
us Raja ki me chodunga nhai ab dikhata


hu ki usne jo mere pote potiyo Ke sath kia hi
use iski yesi saja dunga ki maut ki bikh
Magega lakin mout milegi nhai
Me..........Nana ji mene suna ki apki tabiyat kharab
hi

Nana ji ............ab app a gaye hi to tabiyat bhi
sahi ho jayegi
me.............me ye bahane banne se kam nhai chlalega
App ko apna dyan rakhna hoga
Meri baat sun sabhi hasne lage


Nana ji .................kuwar ji abhi app thak gaye honge
jaker thoda aram kariye ab kal bat
krenge ajj me bahut kush hu mughe abhi bahut
tyari karni hi

Priya........ji nana ji kal app ham ko mahal bhi ghuma dijiyega
nana ji ( has kar ). ..........ha bilkul Rajkumari ji
app ka hi mehal hi jab chahe jo kare

uske baad wo aurat hmare sath a gayi
Aurat...........ye sab app ka hi hi jha Rahana
waha rahiye
me........app mugjhe aur meri jan ke liye

koi acha sa room dikha dijiye ham dono
rah lenge
Aurat.....ji jarur
uske baad usne hame ek bahut hi alishan

kamre me le gayi jo bilkul Raja jesa kamra tha
ab Raja jesa kya kahna Raja ka hi tha
me aur Priya dono ne bari bari frash hue


me......gudiya aab app ko kesa lag raha hi
app kush to hi
Priya ( kusi se ). .......ha ajj me bahut kush hu
meri jan ab ham hmesa sath rahenge
me.....ha

ese hi ham log bate karte karte so gaye pata hi nhai
chala

location..............Raja Vila ( Delhi )


kabya aur uska kamina bhai sakti
ab bahut kush the aram ki jindagi kat rahi
thi Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal
raha tha

Anjali jab se peda hui thi Raja bahut kush
tha





Dosto Update posted read and enjoy me bahut mehnat se kisi trah app sab ko updete send kar dia hi mere bagal me ek log ki death ho gayi hi fir bhi mene wada pura kia app sab bas sath bnaye rakhe
Jabardast update bhai sandar to Raj ko kuchh din me raja bna diya jayega sahi hai Nana ji Ab RAJA thakur ko sabak sikhane vale hai RAJA thakur bhi khush hai abhi Shiva bhi mauke ki talash me hai vhi Lucifer saitan ki puja karne gya hai...
 
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