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Fantasy Tha Prince of Universe
- Thread starterKuwar Thakur Raj Rajput
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bhai the great warrior bahut aage tak likh chuke ho dono se jayda. Toh jayda focus karo ki jayda usi ke updates de or baki ke apne hisab se.
Baad baki aapki marzi.
Baad baki aapki marzi.
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Bro mujhy to 3no pasand hain lakin kya ap asa nai kar sakty k phaly ik story complete karin phr dosri phr tesri is trn hum ik py zyda focus karin gy agr baat buri lagi ho to sorry
Update number............10...............Tha Prince of Universe
ab tak app sab ne dekha ki me aur meri jan Priya ek dushare ko Good night bol kar so gaye
Ab age ----------------->
location....................Raja Vila
Ajj kal kabya aur uske kamine bhai Sakti kumar ki
moj hi Raja ka bisness bhi jab se
Anjali ka janam hua hi tab se bahut
bahut fhayda ho raha hi biasness me
sba log kush the
kabya aur Sakti dono bethe bate kar rahe the
kabya.........kya hua bhaiya app bolte to bahut
hi ki esa kar dunga wesa kar dunga lekin karte
kuch nhai hi mughe lagta hi app bas bato ke sher
hi
Sakti.........(gusse se ).....nhai bahna me bato ka hi sher nhai hu mene apne sare aadmiyo ko un manhoso
ko dudhne ke liye laga rakha hi lakin pata
nhai wo kha hi mughe to lagata bukh aur
pyas ke karn wo mar gaye honge
Kabya..........sayad app sahi kah rahe hi ager wo
mar gaye ho to aur bhi acha hi kam se kam
picha chute
Sakti..........bahna me kya kah raha tha ki dekho
Anjali aur kartik ik sath khelte hue kitne ache
lagte hi me to kahta hu ki app in dono ko shadi
kata de
kabya.......me bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki ham inki
shadi kar de lekin Raja ager na mane to
Sakti......are didi jija ki chinta kyo karti ho
wo to app ke husan
ke gulam hi app ko unko tyar karne me kitni der lagegi meri pyari didi
Kabya ( has kar )...........wese app baat to sahi kah rahe ho
Kher iske bare me ham baad me sochenge
Kabya.......wese bhai ab ham logi ki jindagi ki moj
hi
Sakti....( Has kar )......ha meri behna
location..............Tha mountain of devil vely
Lucifier Shiva ki chinta ki wajah se yaha aya
tha kyo ki yaha rahte the bure logo ke guru
ke guru Mahaguru Death rock
Lucifier ( man me ).....…ab dekhta hu tumko
Shiva bahut ghamand hi na tumhe apni takto
par ek bar me ager pane
kam me safal ho gaya
to dekhna me tumhara hal kutte se bhi bura krunga
tum apne jan
ki
bikh mangoge lakin tumhe milegi nhai tumne
mera apman kia hi na is pure Universe ke samne
ab dekhna me kya karta hi ek bar
ager guru ji kripya mugh par
ho gayi to me tumhe btaunga
Lucifier ke death bely ke ander jate hi uske
samne Mahaguru death rock pragat hue
unke chare par maha yogi ka tez tha
Lucifier........ajj mera jiwan dhanya hi gaya
Asur guru
Asur guru.......ye sab chodo Lucifier apne ane ka
karn btao tum mugjh se milne ke liye to
nhai awoge
Lucifier...........maha Guru ji us Evil Prince Shiva
ne mera jina haram kar
rakha hi us Shiva ne
mera pure Universe ke samne apman kia
hi ab app hi mera sath de sakte hi muhje
Us
Evil Prince se jada takat war banna hi use apna
Gulam banana hi
guru ji.........tum ne kya Shiva ko koi makhi samajh
rakha hi kya us se jada sakti prapt karne ke liye tumhe
bahut hi kathin karya karne hoge
Lucifier....( Khushi se )......ji guru ji me wesa hi krunga
Jesa app kahe ge
guru ji.......tumhe Shiva par vijay pane ke liye
Tha sword of devil ko hasil karna hoga
guru ji ki baat sun kar Lucifier kush ho gaya
location................Rajgarh mahal
morning me jab meri nend khuli to dekha ki
meri jan Priya so rahi hi sote hue bahut
achi aur pyari lagti thi wo
me utha fresh hua morning me 4.00 ho rahe the
mene morning walk wala kapda pehna aur Priya ko
Uthane laga
( Hallo friends Update posted keep saporting and enjoy my story and give aur important comments )
ab tak app sab ne dekha ki me aur meri jan Priya ek dushare ko Good night bol kar so gaye
Ab age ----------------->
location....................Raja Vila
Ajj kal kabya aur uske kamine bhai Sakti kumar ki
moj hi Raja ka bisness bhi jab se
Anjali ka janam hua hi tab se bahut
bahut fhayda ho raha hi biasness me
sba log kush the
kabya aur Sakti dono bethe bate kar rahe the
kabya.........kya hua bhaiya app bolte to bahut
hi ki esa kar dunga wesa kar dunga lekin karte
kuch nhai hi mughe lagta hi app bas bato ke sher
hi
Sakti.........(gusse se ).....nhai bahna me bato ka hi sher nhai hu mene apne sare aadmiyo ko un manhoso
ko dudhne ke liye laga rakha hi lakin pata
nhai wo kha hi mughe to lagata bukh aur
pyas ke karn wo mar gaye honge
Kabya..........sayad app sahi kah rahe hi ager wo
mar gaye ho to aur bhi acha hi kam se kam
picha chute
Sakti..........bahna me kya kah raha tha ki dekho
Anjali aur kartik ik sath khelte hue kitne ache
lagte hi me to kahta hu ki app in dono ko shadi
kata de
kabya.......me bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki ham inki
shadi kar de lekin Raja ager na mane to
Sakti......are didi jija ki chinta kyo karti ho
wo to app ke husan
ke gulam hi app ko unko tyar karne me kitni der lagegi meri pyari didi
Kabya ( has kar )...........wese app baat to sahi kah rahe ho
Kher iske bare me ham baad me sochenge
Kabya.......wese bhai ab ham logi ki jindagi ki moj
hi
Sakti....( Has kar )......ha meri behna
location..............Tha mountain of devil vely
Lucifier Shiva ki chinta ki wajah se yaha aya
tha kyo ki yaha rahte the bure logo ke guru
ke guru Mahaguru Death rock
Lucifier ( man me ).....…ab dekhta hu tumko
Shiva bahut ghamand hi na tumhe apni takto
par ek bar me ager pane
kam me safal ho gaya
to dekhna me tumhara hal kutte se bhi bura krunga
tum apne jan
ki
bikh mangoge lakin tumhe milegi nhai tumne
mera apman kia hi na is pure Universe ke samne
ab dekhna me kya karta hi ek bar
ager guru ji kripya mugh par
ho gayi to me tumhe btaunga
Lucifier ke death bely ke ander jate hi uske
samne Mahaguru death rock pragat hue
unke chare par maha yogi ka tez tha
Lucifier........ajj mera jiwan dhanya hi gaya
Asur guru
Asur guru.......ye sab chodo Lucifier apne ane ka
karn btao tum mugjh se milne ke liye to
nhai awoge
Lucifier...........maha Guru ji us Evil Prince Shiva
ne mera jina haram kar
rakha hi us Shiva ne
mera pure Universe ke samne apman kia
hi ab app hi mera sath de sakte hi muhje
Us
Evil Prince se jada takat war banna hi use apna
Gulam banana hi
guru ji.........tum ne kya Shiva ko koi makhi samajh
rakha hi kya us se jada sakti prapt karne ke liye tumhe
bahut hi kathin karya karne hoge
Lucifier....( Khushi se )......ji guru ji me wesa hi krunga
Jesa app kahe ge
guru ji.......tumhe Shiva par vijay pane ke liye
Tha sword of devil ko hasil karna hoga
guru ji ki baat sun kar Lucifier kush ho gaya
location................Rajgarh mahal
morning me jab meri nend khuli to dekha ki
meri jan Priya so rahi hi sote hue bahut
achi aur pyari lagti thi wo
me utha fresh hua morning me 4.00 ho rahe the
mene morning walk wala kapda pehna aur Priya ko
Uthane laga
( Hallo friends Update posted keep saporting and enjoy my story and give aur important comments )
ABHISHEK TRIPATHI
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