Romance Tharki landlord

[harryhott]

Thanks yenjoy and p_gal .

Honestly the original story was a one shot but then I recently returned and wrote a second part and then it turned into a third part.

But now I don't know how to proceed because the story is in first person and I don't know how to describe the happenings of Neha without switching narration.

That's why I left in open . Also I'm very occupied due to the current pandemic.

Nobody can write the way you for your own story... Will love to read in your words

 

[ambirod]

Yes... nobody can write it like you do. Your style is best for this story... please continue whenever you can... its wonderful to read.

 

[Madiha agarwal]

Yes... nobody can write it like you do. Your style is best for this story... please continue whenever you can... its wonderful to read.

Not exactly,the story "Innocent wife degradation" is actually good after oscar pistorious took over.

 

[ambirod]

Not exactly,the story "Innocent wife degradation" is actually good after oscar pistorious took over.

I am reading that story as well. It's being written very well by Oscar.
This story however, has a different taste. It certainly gives a feel that a witty, smart and an adventurous girl, who still wants to maintain her limits is narrating it. The narration has that tension which holds us there wondering what Madiha will do next... how Neha will go further crazy and drag Madiha into the mess... The cherry on the top is the sarcasm that Madiha embodies. It's an absolute tickler. Sarcasm is a gift... and one cannot acquire it form someone else. So, please continue the story... as and how you can. We will wait...

 

[yenjvoy]

I am reading that story as well. It's being written very well by Oscar.
This story however, has a different taste. It certainly gives a feel that a witty, smart and an adventurous girl, who still wants to maintain her limits is narrating it. The narration has that tension which holds us there wondering what Madiha will do next... how Neha will go further crazy and drag Madiha into the mess... The cherry on the top is the sarcasm that Madiha embodies. It's an absolute tickler. Sarcasm is a gift... and one cannot acquire it form someone else. So, please continue the story... as and how you can. We will wait...

You nailed it. The most enjoyable part of the story is the unapologetic female perspective and the humorous inner voice of the narrator. Quite unique and refresh ing on this or any indian forum.

 

[Madiha agarwal]

I am reading that story as well. It's being written very well by Oscar.
This story however, has a different taste. It certainly gives a feel that a witty, smart and an adventurous girl, who still wants to maintain her limits is narrating it. The narration has that tension which holds us there wondering what Madiha will do next... how Neha will go further crazy and drag Madiha into the mess... The cherry on the top is the sarcasm that Madiha embodies. It's an absolute tickler. Sarcasm is a gift... and one cannot acquire it form someone else. So, please continue the story... as and how you can. We will wait...

Thanks for your wonderful feedback.

 

[Madiha agarwal]

I am reading that story as well. It's being written very well by Oscar.
This story however, has a different taste. It certainly gives a feel that a witty, smart and an adventurous girl, who still wants to maintain her limits is narrating it. The narration has that tension which holds us there wondering what Madiha will do next... how Neha will go further crazy and drag Madiha into the mess... The cherry on the top is the sarcasm that Madiha embodies. It's an absolute tickler. Sarcasm is a gift... and one cannot acquire it form someone else. So, please continue the story... as and how you can. We will wait...

Thanks for your wonderful feedback. Such feedback helps me with the encouragement to write.
However unlike my 2 sisters or nri bride, I've a writer's block here where I don't know how to proceed. I can't make it too degrading as the humor will be lost nor can I move it away from first person.

Someone can help me in this I'm all ears.

 

[piyanuan]

He told us that the place was already nearly booked by someone else but on hearing a female voice, he told us to meet him at a set location and check out the house never-the-less.

pervert

 

[piyanuan]

"No Boyfriends here

ye rule har jagag

 

[piyanuan]

His eyes conveyed the fact that he will first get her and then it will be my turn soon

intelligent girl