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Chapter - 1
The Trash
"Aaaa…., Aaaa a..,.. Aaaa...…."
"Hahaha…….
Tum bekar insaan, Tum yaha kya kar raho ho ye jagah tum jaise useless insaan ke liye nhi hai jo kabhi cultivation (1) bhi nhi kar sakta vo army kya join karega chal bhag yaha ye se. You trash."
"Hahaha… sahi kaha tumhe to koi apna nokar bhi na rakhe aur tum chale ho army join karne
Jao apne ussi bekar baap ki tarah lakdiya kato aur agli baar yaha par dikhna mat nhi to tumhare liye accha nhi hoga"
Koi 4 ladke ___ sal ke ek ___ saal ke ladko ko maar rahe the ye ladka dikhne me apni unar ke baccho se kamjor tha aur rang me kuch sawla tha vo ladka maar khata raha lekin kuch bola nhi kuch der baad ve us ladke ko vahi chod kar chale jate hai
Unke jane ke baad vo ladka khada hota hai aur langdata hua waha se chala jata hai us ladke ko bahut chot aayi thi kahi jagah se neela pad gaya tha aur kuch jagah se to khoon bhi nikal raha tha
Kuch der chalne ke baad vo ladka ek ghar ke samne rukta hai aur gate kholkar ander chala jata hai andar jaakar vo ladka pani garam karta hai aur ek bathtub me dalta hai aur ek kamre me jaakar us kamre se kuch herbs ( jadi-butiya ) lata hai aur unhe bhi bathtub me daal deta hai
Kuch der baad us bathtub me se halka-2 white colour ka fog uthna suru ho jata hai jiske baad vo ladka us bathtub me let jata hai aur sochne lagta hai
'hey bhagwan! Kyu tune mujhe aisa banaya ki na to cultivation sikh sakta hu na hi mai apne dad jaisa ban sakta hu. Aisi jindagi hi jeene ka kya faida jisme na to mai apna sapna pura kar sakta hu naa hi mai apne dad ki aankho me apne liye garv dekh saku. Mai janta hu mere dad mujhse bahut pyar krte hai lekin aisi jindagi ka hi kya faiyda jo kisi ki madad karne ke bhi kaam nhi aa sakti isse aacha to tum mujhe yaha par bhejte hi nhi……'
Aise hi vo ladka na jane kitne der tak aise hi sochta rahta hai usse time ka bhi dhyaan nhi rahta aur naa hi ye pata chalta ki ghar ja darwaja kholkar koi andar aaya hai
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Green Bamboo village,
Ye hai is jagah ka naam jahan par vo ladka rahta hai. Is village ka naam Green Bamboo village isliye hai kyoki is gaon ke piche hi ek Bamboo ka chota sa forest hai isliye is gaon ka naam Green Bamboo village pad gaya.
Ye ek chota sa gaon hai jisme koi 25-30 pariwar rahte hai aur koi 200-300 karib log rahte hai jisme bacche , budhe sabhi umar ke log aate hai.
Gaon se kuch dur ek ghar alag hi bana hua hai jo ki gaon ke piche ki aur hai yaani Bamboo forest ke paas. Ye ghar kisi aur ka nhi balki ussi ladke ka hai.
Is waqt us ghar ke bahar ek aadmi aakar rukta hai ye aadmi koi 40-45 saal ka hoga. Vo aadmi is waqt apne sar kati hue lakdiya lekar us ghar me ghusta hai vaise to vo aadmi ek dum majboot kad kathi wala aadmi hai lekin chalte samay vo ek pao ( leg ) se lagdakar chalta hai
Vo aadmi dekhta hai ki ghar ka gate to khula hau hai jisse dekhkar vo samaj jata hai ki uska beta ghar aagaya hoga aur uske face par ek smile aajati aur vo lakdiya bahar hi rakhar andar jata hai
Ye ghar ek dum simple tarike se bana hua hai iss ghar me do kamre, ek rasoi, ek bathroom hai. Ek kamra uss ladke ka aur dusra kamra uske pita ka hai dono kamro me sirf ek-2 almirah hai jo kapde etc. rakhne ke kaam aati hai
Vo aadmi andar apne bete ke kamre me jaakar dekhta hai lekin usse waha par koi dikhai nhi deta jiske baad vo kamre se nikal kar apne bete ko awaj deta hai
" VEER "
The Trash
"Aaaa…., Aaaa a..,.. Aaaa...…."
"Hahaha…….
Tum bekar insaan, Tum yaha kya kar raho ho ye jagah tum jaise useless insaan ke liye nhi hai jo kabhi cultivation (1) bhi nhi kar sakta vo army kya join karega chal bhag yaha ye se. You trash."
"Hahaha… sahi kaha tumhe to koi apna nokar bhi na rakhe aur tum chale ho army join karne
Jao apne ussi bekar baap ki tarah lakdiya kato aur agli baar yaha par dikhna mat nhi to tumhare liye accha nhi hoga"
Koi 4 ladke ___ sal ke ek ___ saal ke ladko ko maar rahe the ye ladka dikhne me apni unar ke baccho se kamjor tha aur rang me kuch sawla tha vo ladka maar khata raha lekin kuch bola nhi kuch der baad ve us ladke ko vahi chod kar chale jate hai
Unke jane ke baad vo ladka khada hota hai aur langdata hua waha se chala jata hai us ladke ko bahut chot aayi thi kahi jagah se neela pad gaya tha aur kuch jagah se to khoon bhi nikal raha tha
Kuch der chalne ke baad vo ladka ek ghar ke samne rukta hai aur gate kholkar ander chala jata hai andar jaakar vo ladka pani garam karta hai aur ek bathtub me dalta hai aur ek kamre me jaakar us kamre se kuch herbs ( jadi-butiya ) lata hai aur unhe bhi bathtub me daal deta hai
Kuch der baad us bathtub me se halka-2 white colour ka fog uthna suru ho jata hai jiske baad vo ladka us bathtub me let jata hai aur sochne lagta hai
'hey bhagwan! Kyu tune mujhe aisa banaya ki na to cultivation sikh sakta hu na hi mai apne dad jaisa ban sakta hu. Aisi jindagi hi jeene ka kya faida jisme na to mai apna sapna pura kar sakta hu naa hi mai apne dad ki aankho me apne liye garv dekh saku. Mai janta hu mere dad mujhse bahut pyar krte hai lekin aisi jindagi ka hi kya faiyda jo kisi ki madad karne ke bhi kaam nhi aa sakti isse aacha to tum mujhe yaha par bhejte hi nhi……'
Aise hi vo ladka na jane kitne der tak aise hi sochta rahta hai usse time ka bhi dhyaan nhi rahta aur naa hi ye pata chalta ki ghar ja darwaja kholkar koi andar aaya hai
__________________
Green Bamboo village,
Ye hai is jagah ka naam jahan par vo ladka rahta hai. Is village ka naam Green Bamboo village isliye hai kyoki is gaon ke piche hi ek Bamboo ka chota sa forest hai isliye is gaon ka naam Green Bamboo village pad gaya.
Ye ek chota sa gaon hai jisme koi 25-30 pariwar rahte hai aur koi 200-300 karib log rahte hai jisme bacche , budhe sabhi umar ke log aate hai.
Gaon se kuch dur ek ghar alag hi bana hua hai jo ki gaon ke piche ki aur hai yaani Bamboo forest ke paas. Ye ghar kisi aur ka nhi balki ussi ladke ka hai.
Is waqt us ghar ke bahar ek aadmi aakar rukta hai ye aadmi koi 40-45 saal ka hoga. Vo aadmi is waqt apne sar kati hue lakdiya lekar us ghar me ghusta hai vaise to vo aadmi ek dum majboot kad kathi wala aadmi hai lekin chalte samay vo ek pao ( leg ) se lagdakar chalta hai
Vo aadmi dekhta hai ki ghar ka gate to khula hau hai jisse dekhkar vo samaj jata hai ki uska beta ghar aagaya hoga aur uske face par ek smile aajati aur vo lakdiya bahar hi rakhar andar jata hai
Ye ghar ek dum simple tarike se bana hua hai iss ghar me do kamre, ek rasoi, ek bathroom hai. Ek kamra uss ladke ka aur dusra kamra uske pita ka hai dono kamro me sirf ek-2 almirah hai jo kapde etc. rakhne ke kaam aati hai
Vo aadmi andar apne bete ke kamre me jaakar dekhta hai lekin usse waha par koi dikhai nhi deta jiske baad vo kamre se nikal kar apne bete ko awaj deta hai
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Abbasi
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Very nice start ....................
Keep it up bro .............
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Thanks bro aise hi support karte raho aur agar koi galti ho to batana jarur
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Thanks bhai
Bas aap aise hi support karte raho aur agar koi galti hui ho to batana jarur
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