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Eyse hi ik din school time abhi mere pass ata hai
Me(tension me) – keya pta chala bhai
Abhi – bhai maine sab pata laga liya hai aur mujey ye pata chala hai
AB AAGEEE
Me – ab bata bi de bhai
Abhi – nelam ka kisi ladke sath realtion nahi hai
Uski baat sun kar mujey itni khushi huyi ki main bata nahi sakta, maine fir abhi ko gale laga liya fir abhi mujey bola
Abhi – ab jaldi se nelam ko propose karde kahi ye no ho jo baat pehle jhooth thi ab sach ho jaye
Me – bhai main usey kal hi propose kar dun ga
Fir eyse hi pura din nikal gayea aur aj itne dino baad main chain ki neend soya.
Next day aj ragni bimar thi jis vaja se vo school nahi jane vali thi jo mere liye aur bi aachi baat thi kyoki ragni ke hotey nelam ko propose karna mere liye muskil hone vala tha kyoki main kisi ko nahi batana chahta tha, school me half time main himmat jhuta ke nelam ke pass gayea
Me – nelam keya tum mere sath chal sakti ho mujey tumse ik jarori baat karni hai
Jeyse hi main bola nelam ke cehre par muskan aa gayi jeyse usey pata ho ki main usey kyon sath le jana chahta hun, fir ham dono class me aa gaye kyoki half time class me koyi nahi hota tha, jab ham class me ponche to maine bolna suru kiya
Me – nelam jabse maine tumhe dekha hai mujey har jagha tum hi najar ati hai, jab main ghar main hota hun tab mera kisi kam me man nahi lagta, mere sapna me bi tumne ghar bana liya hai main to sota bi isi liye hun ki sapne me tumse milu ga, tumey dekh kar main sab kuch bul jata hun, jab tum ankho ke samne nahi hoti tab bi tumhara chera hi meri ankho ke samne ghumta rehta hai, nelam i love u
Nelam – sukar hai tumne aj bol diya nahi to mujey laga tha mujey hi pehal karni padey gi, budhu main bi tumey tubse pasand karti hun jab mainey tumey usdin restaurant ke bahar dekha tha, aur jab mujey pata chala ki hamdono ik class me hai to mujey pehle to yakin hi nahi huya tha aur jab mujey pata chala hamdono ke papa dost hai to usdin to raat ko main so hi nahi payi thi, adi i love u tooo
Jab mujey pata chala ki nelam bi mujey pyaar karti hai to maine usko gale laga liya, jab mujey pata chala ki maine keya kiya to main us dur huya aur sorry bola, par nelam ne agge bad kar mujey gale se laga liya, meri to khushi ka koyi tikana hi nahi raha jab usne mujey galey se lagayea, fir mujey alag honey ke baad nelam boli
Nelam – tumne itni der kyon kahi, pata hai maine kitna intazar kiya hai is pal ka
Me – nelam me darta tha kahi tum mana na kardo, agar tum mana kar deyti to main kya karta
Nelam – tum na ik number ke budhu ho, jeyse bi ho pyare ho
Me – i love u nelam
Nelam – i love u too adi
Fir ham dono kuch der batey karte rahe, jab half time over huya to ham dono apni sheet par ja kar beth gaye main apni sheeg par betha muskura raha tha tabi abhi mere pass aa kar bola
Abhi – to fir keya huya vasey teri khushi dekh kar lag raha gai baat ban gayi
Me(khush) – han bhai usne han kardi, vo bi mujey pehle din se pasand karti hai
Abhi – chalo aacha hai fir to
Aj meri jindagi ka best din tha, jeyse maine pasand kiya vo meri jindagi me aa chuki thi.
Eyse hi din nikal me lage aur 1 saal kab gujar gayea pata hi nahi chala, ham dono ka pyaar ek dusare ke liye badta ja raha tha, ghar par to ham dono ka hi dil nahi lagta tha, phone ham dono ke pass nahi tha jis se ham ek dusare se baat kar sake bs schhol me hi ik dusare ko mil leyte thay, fir dhere ham bahar milne lagey kabi kabi abhi mere sath hota tha jab nelam apni kisi friend ke sath ati thi, kabi kabi ham ekale hotey thay, sath me ghuma, movie dekhna kabi kabi kisi restaurant me ja kar ik dusare ko khilana, park me ghanto bethe ik dusare ko dekhte dekhte batey karte rehna, time bohat hi aache se gujar raha tha.
Apka bhai fir hajir hai
Adi aur nelam ki love story to suru ho chuki hai, vasey ik baat to hai jo ladka kabi apne bhai ke bina ghar se bahar nahi jata tha ab vo ekela bhar nikalne laga tha, kisi ne sach hi kaha hai pyaar bohat kuch kara deyta hai, dusari tarf bi dekh le keya ho raha hai
Little introduction
Raghu(boss) – vasey to ye ik MLA hai par eysa koyi galat kam nahi hai jo ye nahi karta, drugs murder, weapons smuggling, human trafficking aur bi bohat kuch. Iski family me ik beta aur beti hai
Rocky aur kiritika
Naresh(pichle update vala unknown) – raghu ka khass raghu ke sare kam yahi dekhta hai, jabse raghu ne sab kam suru kiya hai tabse ye usi ke sath hai
Harish – naresh ka bhai jo naresh ka sath raghu ma kam sambal ta hai
James(usa ka scientist) – khud par kiye gaye experiment ki vaja se thoda sanki hai, abi raghu ke liye kam kar raha hai
Agent 5 and Agent 6 - Jo aadmi liquid destory karne gaye thay
Agent 9 and Agent 10 – jo aadmi heat produce karne vale ko dund rahe hai
Charo ik secret agency(NOS) ke liye kam karte hai par charo ka kam alag alag hai
Mohan – NOS agency ke head, inki ik beti hai
Sonam
Back to story
Ik ghar me raghu naresh se baat kar raha tha
R(raghu) – to kam kaha tak pochna
N(Naresh) – bs toda time aur lagey ga james ne sab complete kar liya hai aur vo bohat fast hai apne kam me, usne experiment karne bi suru kar diya hai
R – kitna time lagey ga fir bi pehle hi main bohat time waste kar chuka hun
N – rukiye main james ko conference me leyta hun ap us se hi puch lijeya
Call connect hone ke baad
R – james aur kitna time lagey ga
J – bs teyar hai par bi main ik do experiment karne ke baad hi handover karu ga, kyoki agar galati se bi koyi galati ho gayi to ham sab bi khatre me pad sakte hai, jaha itna time wait kiya hai thoda aur sahi
R – tum thik keh rahe ho, jitna time leyna hai le lo par mujey result 100% chahiyea
J – bilkul janwaro par to experiment successful raha hao ab mujey do teen ladke aur ladkiyea chahiyea experiment ke liye
R – naresh james ko jo chahiyea vo sham tak poncha deyna
N – g boss
Fir call disconnect ho jata hai
Dusari tarf ik ghar me agent 5&6 bethe huye thay
A5 – vo(raghu) itna shant keyse hai, 2 saal ho gaye koyi halchal nahi, kuch na kuch gadbad to jaror hai, jaha tak hamey malum hai vo shant bethne valo me se nhi hai
A6 – maine baki agents ko bi kam par lagyea huya hai par uney bi abtak kuch pata nahi chala
A5 – mla honey ki vaja se ham uske upar koyi action be nahi le sakte, na hi uske khilaf hamare pass koyi saboot hai, politicians aur police me bi uske sath kuch log miley huye hai
A6 – ab ham keya kar sakte hai hamare pass bi itni power nahi hai ki ham kuch kar sakey
A5 – ik kam karo kisi tarh harish ko uthayo vo hi hame kuch bata sakta hai
A6 – kam to muskil hai par dekhta hun main keya kar sakta hun
Vahi dusari tarf agent 9&10
A9 – us heat source ka kuch pata chala
A10 – nahi 2saal ho gaye par dubara kabi vo heat source radar par nahi ayea
A9 – eysa munkin to nahi hai kyoki agar kisi ke ander un control heat hai to vo usey bahar aney se nahi rok sakta
A10 – iske 2 karaan ho sakte hai, pehla ya to vo sakhas heat ki vja se mar chuka hai, dusara ya usne us heat ko control kar liya hai
A9 – ye bi to ho sakta hai ki heat uske control me na ho aur na hi uski body se bahar nikal rahi ho
A10 – ye bohat rare chance hai par eysa ho sakta hai, ik kam karo lab se vo special equipment mangvayo uski madad se ham us sakhas ko dund sakte hai
A9 – uski madad se ham usey dund to leynge par isme risk bi hai kyoki agar heat un control huyi to equipment ke on hotey ho vo bekabu ho jaye gi aur fir usey control karna us sakhas ke liye possible nahi hoga ham usey control kar sakte hai par itne badey sehar me us tak ponche me bohat se logo ki jaan chali jaye gi
A10 – ham equipment ka radius kam kar deynge tan jo ham time rehte us heat ko control kar sakey
A9 – eysa karna sahi rehe ga main aj hi jata hun
Back to Adi
Main aj bohat khush tha kyoki 8th me top karne ki vaja se aj mujey phone milne vala tha jsiki vaja se ab main jab chahu nelam se baat kar sakta tha, subha papa ne mujey new iphone la kar diya, mobile leyne le baad main teyar honey laga kyoki ham dono ne aj bahar milne vale thay to khushi teyar ho kar park me poncha jaha nelam pehle se hi mera intazar kar rahi thi, uske pass bethne ke baad main usey apne phone dikahte huye bola
Me – dekho nelam mujey aj papa ne new phone la kar diya hai ab ham jab chahe ik dusare se baat kar sakte hai
Nelam – Adi par mere pass to phone nahi hai to ham baat keyse kar paye gaye aur abi papa mujey le kar bi nahi deyne vale
Me – par tumne to kaha tha tumahre pass phone hai
Nelam – vo to didi ka hai main to kabi song sun ne ke liye unse le leyti hun
Me – to tum mujey apni didi ka number de do ham uspar baat kar liye kare gaye
Nelam – eysa nahi ho sakta kyoki phone to harvakt didi ke pass rehta hai aur main to kbi kbi unse leyti hun
Me – tum sad na ho iska bi koyi na koyi hal nikal leynge
Fir ham dono movie dekhne ke liye chal padey eyse hi sham tak ham sath rahe, sham ko ghar jatey huye maine shop se do sim li aur abhi ke pass poncha jo ik park me mera wait kar raha tha fir main uske sath ghar aa gayea
Main fir hajir hun
Main apko kuch batana chahta hun jo ap sab ne sayad socha hoga sayad nahi socha hoga pr mera farj hai batana.
Adi aj se pehle nelam se milne ghar me yah keh kar jata tha ki vo apne dosto ke sath group study karne jata hai, aj vo abhi ke sath movie ke dekhne ja raha hai abhi ko bi in sab ke bare pata hai is liye vo bi Adi ka sath deyta hai, abhi aj apne dosto ke sath bahar gayea huya tha, ghar se bahar dono ik sath jatey thay par alag jagha aur badme sath hi ghar atey thay, jis vaja se Adi ke bhai bheno ko kabi uspar shak nahi huya
Back to adi
Eyse hi chuti ke din nikal gaye main dubara nelam se milne nahi gayea kyoki mere pass koyi bahana nahi tha.
Aj ham school janey valey thay aur main aj khush tha kyoki maine kuch soch rakha tha jo mujey pata tha kam jaror kare ga, school me half time jab ragni aur abhi bahar gaye huye thay to main nelam ke pass gayea
Me – nelam ye lo
Nelam – Adi main ye nahi le sakti ye to tumahra phone hai
Me – nelam ye mera nahi hai ye maine tumhare leya liya hai
Nelam – sach me Adi
Me – han ab ham jab chahe ik dusare se baat kar paye gaye
Nelam – thank u sooo much Adi i love u
Me – i love u too nelam
Fir eyse hi school time khtam huya sham ko jab main abhi bahar se vapis aye to ghar ke pass pohnc ne par main bola
Me – abhi mera phoen kahi gir gayea
Abhi – keya keh raha hai bhai tun phone le kar bi ayea tha
Me – han bhai meri pocket me hi tha par ab nahi
Abhi – chal dund kar atey hai
Me – chal
Fir ham dono kuch der phone dundte rahe Par uney phone nahi mila
(Sandy – abhi bichare ko kon batayea jo chizi giri hi nahi usey dundey ga keyse, ye sab to adi ka plan tha)
Abhi – bhai tun apni chizo ka to dheyan rak liya kar abi kuch din pehle to tujey uncle ne new le kar diya tha
Me – bahi ab isme mera keya kasor hai
(Sandy – kasor tumhara nahi nelam ka hai)
Sham ko jab raghav bhaiya ghar aye to maine uney kamr me aney ke liye kaha, jab ham dono kamre me ponche to bhaiyea bole
Raghav – keya baat hai adi to sad kyon hai
Me(sad) – bhaiya vo mera phone kho gayea hai
Raghav – matlab
Me(sad) – bhaiya main aur abhi jab bahar gaye thay to atey shamey mujey pata hi nahi chala kab mere phone kahi gir gayea hamne bohat dundne ki kosis ki par mujey kahi nahi mila
Raghav – keya karta hai yun adi apni chizo ka dheyan rakha kar
Me(sad) – chup
Raghav – chal sad na ho ye le
Me – bhaiya par ye to apko phone hai
Raghav – le ley main vasey bi new leyne vala hun pehle maine socha tha isi bech dunga par ab tere pass phone nahi hai aur agar dad ko pata chala to vo gussa honge aur vasey bi ham dono ko phone same hi thay to kisi ko pata bi nahi chale ga
Me – thank u bhaiya ap kitne aache ho
Raghav – ab isey sambal kar rakhna agar ye kho gayea to main bi kuch nahi karu ga
Me – g bhaiya main pura dheyan rakhu ga
(Sandy – akhir kar Adi ka plan successful ho hi gayea, koyi keh sakta hai itni bholi si shakal vala ladka itna bada kand kar sakta hai)
TO BE CONTINUE..
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