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Iron Man

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Chapter 30
Naraz Haseenayein aur Abyss ka Raasta


Moonlight Palace ki khamoshi ko piche chhod kar Aryan jab apne Inn (musafir-khana) pahuncha, toh bahar ka nazaara dekh kar hi uske pasine chhoot gaye. Inn ke bahar ki hawa achanak itni thandi ho gayi thi ki raste par chalne wale log thithur rahe thay, aur saath hi ek kaali, dam-ghontne wali aura pure ilaake mein phaili hui thi.
"Ice aur Asura energy... dono ek saath?" Aryan ne thook gataka aur darrte-darrte darwaza khola.
Andar ka nazaara kisi yudh-kshetra (battlefield) se kam nahi tha. Kavya ek kursi par baithi thi, uske haath mein barf ki talwaar thi jise wo gusse mein ghumati ja rahi thi. Vanya khidki ke paas khadi thi, uski purple aankhein andhere mein chamak rahi thin aur uske piche kaali parchhayiyaan (shadows) naach rahi thin. Zara table par baithi wine pi rahi thi, lekin uski muskaan mein aaj shaitani thi.
"Aa gaye hamare 'Shahi Mehmaan'?" Zara ne glass uthate hue kaha. "Suna hai Palace mein dinner bohot 'garam' tha?"
Kavya uthi aur Aryan ke bilkul paas aakar ruki. Usne hawa ko soongha (sniffed). Uska chehra turant gusse se neela pad gaya. "Rose aur Jasmine ka ittar... aur yeh baingani (purple) silk ka nishaan tumhare kandhe par kaise aaya? Princess ne tumhe khana khilaya ya kuch aur?"
Vanya ek jhatke mein Aryan ke samne prakat hui, uski ungliyan Aryan ki chhati par thin. "Aryan, maine tumhare dil par ek 'Heart-Link' lagaya tha. Maine mehsoos kiya... tumhara dil us waqt bohot zor se dhadak raha tha jab tum us Princess ke paas thay. Kya mujhe apna dil nikal kar dikhana padega ki tum sirf mere ho?"
Aryan ne apne dono haath utha liye. "Suno! Pehle meri baat toh suno! Wahan hamla hua tha. Minister Lu ne assassins bheje thay. Maine Princess ki jaan bachayi, bas isliye wo thodi... emotional ho gayi thi."
"Emotional?!" Kavya ne apni talwaar table par maari, jisse poori table barf ban gayi. "Gale lagna kab se 'emotional support' ban gaya? Aryan, tum ek Earth Realm expert ho sakte ho, par mujhse nahi bach paoge!"
Aryan ne mahaual ko thanda karne ke liye turant wo file nikali jo Princess Ling ne di thi. "Yeh dekho! Mujhe mere parents ka pata chal gaya hai. Isliye main wahan gaya tha!"
Teeno ladkiyan achanak shant ho gayin aur file ki taraf lapkin. Aryan ne unhe bataya ki uske pita koi gaddar nahi thay, balki unhone Empire ke andar chupe 'Demonic Sect' ka parda-fash karne ki koshish ki thi.
"The Forgotten Abyss (Bhooli hui Khaai)..." Vanya ne us naam ko padhte hi darr mehsoos kiya. "Aryan, wo jagah Central Empire ki sabse purani jail hai. Wahan un logo ko bheja jata hai jinhe Empire duniya ki nazron se mita dena chahta hai. Wahan se aaj tak koi zinda wapis nahi aaya."
Kavya ne file band ki, uska gussa ab chinta mein badal chuka tha. "Agar tumhare parents wahan hain, toh humein wahan jana hoga. Lekin wahan jane ke liye humein 'Abyssal Key' chahiye hogi, jo sirf Imperial Academy ke 'Forbidden Library' mein rakhi hai."
Aryan ne sar hilaya. "Isliye mujhe Academy ke tournament mein har haal mein Top 1 par aana hoga. Princess Ling meri madad karne ko taiyaar hai."
"Phir se Princess?" Vanya ne Aryan ki kamar par ek zor daar chutki (pinch) kaati. "Theek hai, kaam ke liye use use karo, par uske paas mat jana. Samjhe?"
Aryan ne dard mein chekhne ki koshish ki par daba gaya. "Theek hai, baba! Promise!"
Raat dhal rahi thi. Aryan ne teeno ko samjha-bujha kar sone ke liye bheja. Jab wo akela bacha, usne Kaalu ko bahar nikala. Kaalu ab kafi samajhdar ho gaya tha, usne Aryan ki taraf dekh kar ek 'Smirk' di, jaise wo apne maalik ki halat par hans raha ho.
"Tu bhi maza le le," Aryan ne Shadow Fang ko dekha. "System, 'The Forgotten Abyss' ke baare mein kuch data hai?"
Ting!
[Scanning Records...]
[The Forgotten Abyss: A multi-layered dimension beneath the Capital. It is filled with 'Void Miasma' (Zehreela dhuan). Only those with Asura Bloodline can breathe there for more than 10 minutes.]
[Warning: The Guardians of the Abyss are Sky Realm beasts.]
Aryan ki mutthi bhinch gayi. Sky Realm! Abhi wo Earth Realm Stage 1 par tha. Uske paas sirf ek mahina tha khud ko taiyaar karne ke liye.
"System, mujhe koi aisi technique chahiye jo meri 'Void' energy ko weapon ban sake," Aryan ne kaha.
Ting!
[Hidden Quest Available: The Trial of the Ancient Asura.]
[Requirement: Deep Meditation for 48 hours without any interruption.]
[Reward: Skill - 'Asura's Domain: Gravity Control'.]
"Gravity Control? Yeh toh kamaal hoga!"
Aryan ne Mansion ke basement mein jane ka faisla kiya. Usne bahar ek note chhod diya: "Main 2 din ke liye dhyan (meditation) mein hoon. Koi andar na aaye varna mera sharir phat sakta hai."
Basement mein, Aryan ne saari lights bujha di aur Heart-Link energy ko activate kiya. Uska sharir hawa mein uthne laga. Dheere-dheere, uske charo taraf ek kaala ghera (black circle) ban gaya.
Andhere mein, Aryan ko hazaron saal purani cheekhein sunayi dene lagin. Usne apne purvajon ko yudh ke maidano mein dekha. Usne dekha kaise ek Asura ne sirf apne ek haath ke ishare se poore pahad ko zameen mein dhasa diya tha.
"Weight... Mass... Pressure..." Aryan badbadaya.
Uske shareer se nikalne wali gravity achanak badhne lagi. Zameen ke patthar toot kar reth (sand) ban gaye.
Do din beet gaye.
Jab Aryan ne apni aankhein kholi, unke andar ek bhayanak gehrai thi. Usne apna haath halka sa neeche kiya.
BOOM!
Poore basement ki floor 2 feet neeche dhas gayi.
"Stage 3 Earth Realm," Aryan ne mutthi band ki. "Ab koi Minister Lu ya koi Guardian mujhe nahi rok sakta."
Darwaza achanak khula aur Vanya daudti hui andar aayi. Uska chehra paseene se bheega tha aur wo ghabrayi hui thi.
"Aryan! Jaldi chalo! Academy mein hungama ho gaya hai! Minister Lu ne tumhare upar 'Demonic Sect' ka agent hone ka ilzaam lagaya hai aur unhone Kavya aur Zara ko hiraasat (custody) mein le liya hai!"
Aryan ki aankhon mein achanak ek bhayanak laal roshni chamki.
"Minister Lu... Maine use zinda chhod kar galti ki thi. Aaj Swarn-Nagari uski cheekhon se goonjegi."
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang uthayi aur hawa ko cheerte hue bahar nikla. The Asura was no longer hiding.
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RAAZ

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Boss isi liye bola thaa aapko ki ek sath 4 ya 5 story na start kare ab sab aanke atak gayi coz kitna bhi free insaan hoga daily 4-5 stories per update nahi likh payega. So better abhi for time being ek aadh story ko roko aur ek ya do story per daily update do baqi bachi wali per weekly ya twice a week update do warna sari stories ataki rahegi.
 

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Chapter 31
Krodh ki Jwala aur Gravity ka Tandav



Swarn-Nagari ki sadkon par aaj sannata nahi, balki ek ajeeb si dehshat thi. Log apne gharon ki khidkiyon se bahar dekh rahe thay jahan ek kaala saaya bijli ki raftaar se Imperial Academy ki taraf badh raha tha. Aryan ke piche Vanya thi, jiske silver baal hawa mein lehra rahe thay aur uski aankhon se nikalne wali baingani (purple) aura raste ke pedon ko murjha rahi thi.
"Aryan, sambhal kar!" Vanya ne chillaya. "Academy ke charon taraf 'Heavenly Net Array' laga diya gaya hai. Agar tumne bina soche hamla kiya, toh tumhari apni energy tum par hi palat jayegi."
Aryan ne koi jawab nahi diya. Uska chehra patthar jaisa sakht tha aur uski mutthiyaan itni zor se bhinchi thin ki nakhun skin mein dhans rahe thay. Uske dimaag mein sirf Kavya ki wo namm aankhein aur Zara ki wo hamesha hasne wali surat ghoom rahi thi.
Jab wo Academy ke main gate par pahunche, toh wahan 500 se zyada 'Iron Blood Guards' ka pehra tha. Sabke haath mein bhari spears thin aur unhone 'Spirit Suppressing' shields pakdi thin. Gate ke upar Minister Lu khada tha, uske chehre par ek jeetne wali muskaan thi. Uske bagal mein Kavya aur Zara zanjeeron mein jakdi hui thin. Dono ke chehre pale thay aur unke shareer par neel (bruises) ke nishan thay, jo bata rahe thay ki unpar tashadud (torture) kiya gaya hai.
"Ruk jao, gaddar!" Minister Lu ki awaaz poore maidan mein goonji. "Aryan, tumne Demonic Sect ke saath milkar Princess Ling ki jaan lene ki koshish ki. Aaj tumhe aur tumhari in saathiyon ko isi jagah maut ki saza di jayegi!"
Kavya ne Aryan ko dekha aur apna sar hilaya, jaise keh rahi ho, "Bhaag jao Aryan, yeh ek jaal hai!"
Aryan gate se 100 meter door ruk gaya. Usne apni Shadow Fang nikaali aur use zameen mein gaad diya.
"Minister Lu," Aryan ki awaaz itni dheemi thi ki sirf vahan maujood log hi sun sakte thay, lekin usme jo thandak thi wo kisi qabristaan jaisi thi. "Maine tumhe pehle hi kaha tha ki dobara mere raste mein mat aana. Aaj, main sirf tumhe nahi maarunga... main tumhare is poore ghamand ko mitti mein mila dunga."
"Hahaha! Stage 1 ka bacha bade bade khwaab dekh raha hai!" Lu ne ishara kiya. "Archer unit, FIRE!"
Hazaron 'Flame Arrows' ek saath aasmaan mein uthe aur Aryan ki taraf girne lage. Aisa lag raha tha jaise aag ki baarish ho rahi ho.
Aryan ne apna haath hawa mein uthaya aur palm ko zameen ki taraf kar diya.
"Asura's Domain: CRUSH!"
Achanak, poore 200 meter ke daire (radius) mein gravity 50 guna (50x) badh gayi. Wo hazaron teer jo hawa mein thay, wo achanak rukh gaye aur agle hi pal bijli ki tezi se zameen par gir kar chuna-chuna ho gaye. Guards jo gate par khade thay, unhe aisa laga jaise unke kandhon par ek pahad rakh diya gaya ho. Unki shields toot gayin aur unke ghutne zameen mein dhans gaye.
"Y-Yeh... yeh kaisi power hai?!" Minister Lu ka ghamand ek pal mein darr mein badal gaya. "Tum Stage 3 par pahunch gaye? Do din mein?!"
Aryan ne apni talwaar uthayi aur ek kadam aage badhaya. Har kadam ke saath zameen mein 1-foot gehra gaddha ban raha tha.
"Kaalu, bheed ko sambhalo," Aryan ne hukm diya.
Kaalu aasmaan se niche utra, uska sharir ab ek bade ghar jitna vishal tha. Usne apni Void Breath release ki, jisne guards ke weapons ko pighlana shuru kar diya. Maidan mein afra-tafri mach gayi.
Aryan gate ke upar jump karke seedha Minister Lu ke saamne pahuncha. Do bade bodyguard (Earth Realm Stage 5) Aryan ko rokne ke liye aage badhe.
"Hato!" Aryan ne sirf apni aura release ki. Gravity ka jhatka itna zor ka tha ki dono bodyguards ki haddiyan chatak-chatak karke toot gayin aur wo gate se niche gir gaye.
Aryan ne Kavya aur Zara ki zanjeeron ko chua.
"Asura Flame: Melt!"
Kaali aag ne un shahi zanjeeron ko makkhan ki tarah pighla diya. Kavya Aryan ki god mein gir gayi, uski aankhon mein aansu thay. "Aryan... tumne humein bacha liya."
Aryan ne unhe Vanya ke paas bheja, jo gate ke niche unka intezaar kar rahi thi. "Vanya, inhein safe jagah le jao. Aaj yahan narak (hell) banne wala hai."
Ab gate par sirf Aryan aur Minister Lu bache thay.
Minister Lu ne apne waistcoat se ek laal rang ki pill nikaali aur use nigal gaya. "Aryan! Agar main marunga, toh tujhe bhi saath lekar jaunga! Yeh 'Berserk Blood Pill' hai! Meri power ab Sky Realm ko touch karegi!"
Lu ka sharir phoolne laga, uski skin phatne lagi aur usme se aag nikalne lagi. Uski aura Earth Realm se badhkar Half-Step Sky Realm tak pahunch gayi.
"Marr ja!" Lu ne ek bhayanak aag ka gola (Fireball) Aryan ki taraf feka.
Aryan ne Shadow Fang ko dono haathon se pakda. Usne apni Gravity power aur Asura Qi ko talwaar ki tip par focus kiya.
"Asura Art: ZERO GRAVITY SLASH!"
Talwaar se ek kaali lakeer nikli jo itni patli thi ki dikh bhi nahi rahi thi, lekin usme mass itna tha ki usne hawa ke saare molecules ko apne andar kheench liya. Wo aag ka gola us kaali lakeer se takrate hi gayab ho gaya, jaise kisi black hole mein gir gaya ho.
Lakeer Minister Lu ke shareer se guzri.
Lu khada raha. Usne hasne ki koshish ki, "Haha... miss kar diya?"
Lekin agle hi pal, uski hasi ruk gayi. Uske shareer ke beech mein se ek baingani roshni nikalne lagi. Uska shareer pehle do hisson mein bata, aur fir gravity ke dabav ki wajah se wo ek choti si mitti ki dheri mein badal gaya. Minister Lu ka naam-o-nishaan mit chuka tha.
Aryan haanfte hue zameen par baitha. Uski energy poori tarah khatam ho chuki thi.
Tabhi, Academy ke andar se ek aur bhari aura mehsoos hui. Ek budha aadmi, jiske baal zameen tak lambe thay aur jisne safed robes pehni thin, dheere-dheere hawa mein udta hua bahar aaya.
The Principal of Imperial Academy - Sage Mo (Sky Realm Stage 2).
Sage Mo ne Aryan ko dekha, fir mare hue guards aur Minister Lu ki mitti ko. "Naujawan... tumne Swarn-Nagari ke ek minister ko mara hai. Chahe wajah jo bhi ho, iska anjaam bhayanak hoga."
Aryan ne himmat juta kar apni talwaar ka sahara liya aur khada hua. "Sage Mo, agar nyay (justice) andha hai, toh mujhe gunehgaar banna manzoor hai. Lekin meri ladkiyon ko jo chhuega, uska yahi anjaam hoga."
Sage Mo ki aankhon mein ek pal ke liye taareef chamki. "Tumhare andar Asura ka khoon hai... lekin dimaag ek Raja ka. Main tumhe abhi nahi maarunga. Lekin Emperor ne tumhe bulaya hai. Kal subah, tumhe 'Imperial Court' mein pesh hona hoga."
Aryan ne sar hilaya. Use pata tha ki asli ladai ab Palace ke andar hogi.
Jab wo wapis apne mansion pahuncha, toh Kavya, Vanya aur Zara teeno ne use gher liya. Kavya ne uske zakhmon ko saaf kiya, Zara ne use energy potions pilaye, aur Vanya uske paas baithi rahi taaki wo dubara 'Berserk' na ho jaye.
Raat ko, jab sab so gaye, Aryan ne balcony se 'The Forgotten Abyss' ki taraf dekha. Usne mehsoos kiya ki uski talwaar, Shadow Fang, us disha (direction) mein kanp rahi thi.
"Kal... kal sab faisla ho jayega," Aryan ne badbadaya. "Maa, Dad... main aa raha hoon."
Lekin use nahi pata tha ki Palace ke ek andhere kamre mein, Princess Ling kisi se baat kar rahi thi.
"Plan kaafi acha raha. Minister Lu mara gaya, aur Aryan ab poori tarah mere jaal mein hai. Ab bas usse 'Asura Key' nikalwani hai."
The betrayal was closer than he thought.
 
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