Fantasy The Asura System

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Chapter 25
Ek Vaada, Ek Chumban aur Asura ka Tandav​

Tournament ke Semi-finals khatam ho chuke thay. Jaise umeed thi, Manas ne apne opponent ko buri tarah zakhmi karke stage se bahar feka tha. Ab sirf do log bache thay—Aryan aur Manas.
Final match se pehle 15 minute ka break diya gaya. Aryan stadium ke piche bane 'Waiting Room' mein baitha apni talwaar ko dhaar de raha tha. Uska dimaag bilkul shant tha, lekin shareer mein bijli daud rahi thi.
Tabhi darwaza khula.
Kavya andar aayi. Uske chehre par wo hamesha wali 'Ice Queen' wali thandak nahi thi; uski aankhein nam (moist) thin. Usne bina kuch bole Aryan ko piche se gale laga liya.
"Aryan... please, haar mat maanna," Kavya ne uski peeth par apna sar rakhte hue whisper kiya. "Manas ne mere baap (Elder) se kaha hai ki agar wo jeeta, toh wo mujhse zabardasti sagai (engagement) kar lega. Main... main uske saath nahi jaana chahti."
Aryan ne Kavya ke haathon ko thama aur use apne saamne khada kiya. "Kavya, maine tumhe pehle hi kaha tha—tum meri 'Future Wife' ho. Kisi ki himmat nahi jo tumhe mujhse chheen sake."
Kavya ne Aryan ki aankhon mein dekha aur achanak aage badhkar uske Honthon (Lips) par ek halka sa lekin gehra chumban (kiss) kiya.
"Yeh 'Good Luck' ke liye hai," Kavya ne sharma kar kaha.
Tabhi doosri taraf se Vanya (Asura Princess) nikal kar aayi. Usne apne hath kamar par rakhe. "Oye Ice Queen! Itni jaldi faayda utha rahi ho?"
Vanya ne Aryan ka doosra haath pakda aur uspar ek Purple Ring jaisa nishaan (mark) bana diya. "Aryan, maine tumhare bloodline mein apni thodi aur shakti daal di hai. Jab tak main zinda hoon, tumhe koi zehar (poison) asar nahi karega. Jeet kar aao... kyunki aaj raat main apna inaam (reward) vasool karungi."
Aryan ne dono ko dekha aur hansa. "Lagta hai jeetne ke alawa mere paas koi option hi nahi hai."
The Grand Finale: Aryan vs Manas
Stadium mein shor itna tha ki aasmaan kaanp jaye. Sect Master aur saare Elders apni seats par baith chuke thay.
Aryan aur Manas stage par aamne-saamne khade thay.
"Aryan," Manas ne apni sunehri talwaar nikaali. "Maine suna hai Kavya ne tujhe 'Luck' diya hai? Fikar mat kar, aaj raat jab tu behosh hoga, main wahi 'Luck' usse dubara lunga... thode alag tareeke se."
Aryan ki aankhein turant Dark Purple ho gayin. Uske shareer se nikalne wali aura ne stage ke pattharon ko todna shuru kar diya.
"Manas... tune abhi apni maut ke parwane par sign kar diye hain."
"FIGHT!"
Manas ne ek second bhi wait nahi kiya. Wo Earth Realm ka expert tha, isliye wo hawa mein halka sa 'float' kar sakta tha. Wo ek bullet ki tarah Aryan ki taraf lapka.
"Heavenly Sun: 9 Suns Strike!"
Manas ki talwaar se 9 aag ke bade-bade gole nikle. Har gola ek chote bomb jaisa tha.
Aryan ne Shadow Fang ko ghumaya.
"Void Shadow Step: Infinite Mirage!"
Aryan ki 5 parchhayiyaan (images) stage par ban gayin. Manas ke aag ke gole un parchhayiyon se takra kar phat gaye, lekin asli Aryan gayab tha.
"Kahan hai tu?!" Manas ne gusse mein chillaya.
"Tere piche."
Aryan hawa se prakat hua aur Manas ki gardan par Shadow Fang se waar kiya.
CLANG!
Manas ke shareer se ek sunehri shield nikli—Earth Qi Armor.
"Hahaha! Bhool gaya? Main Earth Realm par hoon! Tera koi bhi attack meri skin ko touch nahi kar sakta!"
Manas ne ghum kar Aryan ke pet (stomach) par ek punch maara.
BAM!
Aryan piche ghista hua gaya, lekin usne hawa mein hi flip maara aur zameen par land hua.
[System Alert!]
[Enemy is using 'Golden Sun Armor'. Physical attacks are 80% less effective.]
[Solution: Use 'Armor Breaker' with 100% Asura Qi.]
"Samajh gaya," Aryan ne dimaag mein kaha.
Aryan ne apni talwaar ko myaan (sheath) mein rakha. Usne apne dono haathon ko joada aur Vanya se mili hui Ancient Asura Energy ko release kiya. Uske piche ek bhayanak Asura Shadow (30 feet tall) dikhayi dene lagi.
Bheed darr ke maare chillane lagi. "Yeh kya hai?! Yeh koi insaan nahi hai!"
Manas ne darr ko chupane ke liye apni talwaar se ek zehar bhari sui (needle) Aryan ki taraf feki. "Marr ja kachre!"
Sui Aryan ke gale mein lagi, lekin Vanya ke 'Protection Mark' ki wajah se wo turant pighal gayi.
"Zehar? Kitna gira hua hai tu," Aryan ne kaha.
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang ko ek jhatke mein bahar nikaala. Is baar talwaar se koi roshni nahi, balki Andhera (Darkness) nikal raha tha.
"Asura Secret Art: SKY-BREAKING SLASH!"
Aryan ki talwaar Manas ki 'Golden Armor' se takrayi.
CRAAAACK!
Jo armor Earth Realm ka ghamand tha, wo kaanch ki tarah chuna-chuna ho gaya. Aryan ne bina ruke Manas ke dono haathon ki nassein (tendons) kaat di.
"AAAAAAHHHHHHH!" Manas stage par gir gaya. Uska ghamand, uski taqat, sab mitti mein mil gaya tha.
Aryan ne apni talwaar Manas ke gale par rakhi. "Kavya meri hai. Aur Spirit Spring bhi mera hai. Ab bol, kise kachra keh raha tha?"
Manas ne darr ke maare peshaab (urinated) kar diya. "M-Maaf kar do... main surrender karta hoon!"
Referee ne haath uthaya: "WINNER: ARYAN!"
The Spirit Spring: Breakthrough
Jeet ke baad, Sect Master ne khud Aryan ko Spirit Spring ki gufa tak le gaye.
"Yeh lo Aryan. Tumne woh kar dikhaya jo koi nahi kar paya. 3 ghante hain tumhare paas. Iska poora fayda uthao."
Aryan gufa ke andar gaya. Wahan ka nazaara jannat jaisa tha. Ek neela chamakta hua jharna tha jiske paas se itni energy nikal rahi rahi thi ki Aryan ke pores apne aap khulne lage.
Aryan ne apne kapde utaare aur us thande, pavitra paani mein baith gaya.
Ting!
[Absorbing Spirit Spring Essence...]
[Experience Gained: +5000... +10,000... +20,000!]
Aryan ka shareer kaanpne laga. Uske Dantian mein jo 'Spirit Awakening' ka seed tha, wo phat kar ek Vriksh (Tree) banne laga.
[CONGRATULATIONS!]
[Host has reached: EARTH REALM - STAGE 1!]
[New Ability Unlocked: 'Flight' (Udne ki shakti).]
[Asura Bloodline Awakening: 15%.]
Aryan ne aankhein kholi. Uska chehra ab aur bhi sharp aur handsome ho gaya tha. Usne hawa mein apna haath uthaya aur wo zameen se 5 feet upar uthne laga.
"Main ud sakta hoon..." Aryan hasa. "Manas, ab dekhna... tera baap (Elder) bhi mujhe nahi rok payega."
Jab Aryan gufa se bahar nikla, toh Kavya, Vanya aur Zara teeno wahan uska intezaar kar rahi thin. Unhone dekha ki Aryan ka aura badal chuka hai. Wo ab ek Larka nahi, ek Warrior lag raha tha.
"Earth Realm?" Zara ne seeti bajayi. "Ab toh meri dukan ki saari talwarein iske liye khilone hain."
Vanya aage aayi aur Aryan ki garden par haath rakha. "Ab jab tum Earth Realm par ho... hum Central Empire jaane ke liye taiyaar hain. Tumhare parents wahan tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain."
Aryan ne teeno haseenon k
o dekha aur aasmaan ki taraf dekha.
"Central Empire... Aryan aa raha hai!"

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[spritemathews]

Nice

 

[mahan atma]

Waiting bro

 

[Rex1]

Thanks

 

[CFL7897]

Is duniya mein taqat ka matlab sirf muscle nahi hai, balki "Prana" (Qi/Energy) ko control karna hai. Jo jitna zyada Prana control kar sakta hai, wo utna bada Devta (God) ban sakta hai.
Yahan Power Levels ko 5 Bade Realms (Darjon) mein baanta gaya hai.
1. Body Refining Realm (Sharir Shudhikaran)
Ye sabse basic level hai. Yahan cultivators apni body ko lohe (iron) jaisa strong banate hain.
* Taqat: Ek mukke se bada patthar todna, ghode se tez bhaagna.
* Umar (Lifespan): 100 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Normal disciples, guards, aur shuruaat ka Aryan/Vicky.
2. Spirit Awakening Realm (Aatma Jagran)
Yahan cultivator apni 'Qi' ko shareer se bahar nikal sakta hai.
* Taqat: Magic attacks karna (Aag, Barf, Bijli fekna). Talwaar mein energy daalna (Sword Qi).
* Umar: 200 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Abhi ka Aryan, Kavya (Ice Queen), Vikram (haarne se pehle).
3. Earth Realm (Prithvi Yoddha)
Ye wo log hain jo kisi shehar (city) ke Malik ya Sect ke Elders hote hain.
* Taqat: Hawa mein kuch der chalna (Air Walk). Ek hamle se chota pahad tod dena. Inki skin par normal talwaar asar nahi karti.
* Umar: 500 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Elder Shang, Elder Sharma, Sect Leaders.
* Note: Aryan ka agla target yahi level hai taaki wo apne parents ko dhoond sake.
4. Sky Realm (Aakash Samrat)
Ye log legends hote hain. Pure desh (Empire) mein gine-chune log hi yahan pahunchte hain.
* Taqat: Bina kisi sahare ke Udna (True Flight). Akele pure shehar ko raakh kar dena. Inhe maarna namumkin ke barabar hai.
* Umar: 1000 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Imperial Generals, Aryan ke Parents ke dushman (Dark Sect Leaders).
5. Asura / God Realm (Devta / Rakshas)
Ye power ki peak hai. Yahan pahunchne wala insaan nahi rehta, wo Bhagwan ban jata hai.
* Taqat: Duniya ke niyam (Laws of Nature) badal dena. Space aur Time control karna. Amar (Immortal) ho jana.
* Kaun hai yahan: Ancient Legends, aur Future Aryan.
Special Factors (Jo Level se alag hain):
* Bloodline (Khoon):
* Aryan ke paas "Asura Bloodline" hai. Iska matlab hai ki agar Aryan Level 2 par hai, tab bhi wo Level 3 walon ko hara sakta hai. Ye 'Cheat' hai.
* Spirit Beasts (Janwar):
* Jaise Kaalu (Void Dragon). Level 1 ka Dragon bhi Level 5 ke insaan ko kaccha chaba sakta hai.
* The System:
* Baaki log saalon mehnat karte hain, Aryan Points use kark
e instantly strong ban sakta hai.

Hmm to total 5 relam hai...
Jo body refining se suru hokar god ya asur leval tak jata hai.
To har ek relam me kitane level hai??

 

[Rex1]

Chapter 5: Garam Pills aur Zara ka 'Special' Offer​

Raat gehra chuki thi. Aryan apne toote hue hut mein palathi maar kar (cross-legged) baitha tha. Uske haath mein Elder Sharma ki di hui bottle thi.
"High-Grade Bone Forging Pill," Aryan ne ek laal rang ki goli nikali. Wo chamak rahi thi. "Suna hai isse haddiyan lohe (iron) jaisi mazboot ho jati hain. Chalo dekhte hain."
Aryan ne goli muh mein daali aur nigal gaya.
Ek second... Do second... Kuch nahi hua.
"Kya Elder ne mujhe nakli maal diya?" Aryan ne socha.
Tabhi... BOOM!
Uske pet mein jaise jwalamukhi (volcano) phat gaya ho! Aryan ki aankhein phail gayin.
"AAHHH! Garam! Bohot garam hai!"
Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne uski haddiyon mein pighla hua sona daal diya ho. Uska shareer laal padne laga. Paseena nadi ki tarah behne laga.
Ting!
[System Alert: High Energy Detected!]
[Host ki body kamzor hai. Energy overload ho raha hai.]
[Pain Level: 100%. Bardasht karo ya mar jao.]
"Mar jao?! Abe help kar!" Aryan dard se zameen par lot-pot ho raha tha. Uski haddiyon se krr-krr ki awaazein aa rahi thin. Wo toot rahi thin aur dubara jud rahi thin—stronger than before.
Poori raat Aryan dard mein tadapta raha. Uske shareer se kaala-kaala keechad (black impurities) nikalne laga. Yeh wo gandagi thi jo saalon se uske andar jama thi.
Agli Subah
Jab Aryan ki aankh khuli, toh suraj sar par tha.
"Ugh... main zinda hoon?" Aryan utha aur apne haath-pair check kiye.
Jaise hi usne mutthi band ki, hawa mein ek pop sound aayi. Uski muscles pehle se zyada defined aur strong lag rahi thin. Uski skin chamak rahi thi (halanki upar kaala keechad laga tha).
"System, status!"
Ting!
[Congratulation Host!]
[Consecutive Level Up!]
* Previous Rank: Body Refining Stage 3
* Current Rank: Body Refining Stage 6!
* Strength: Bull Power.
* Charisma: +10 (Skin glowing like a K-Pop star).
"Stage 6?!" Aryan khushi se uchhal pada. "Ek raat mein 3 levels?! Yeh toh cheating hai... par mujhe pasand hai!"
Aryan jaldi se nadi par gaya, nahaya, aur wapis aaya. Ab wo pehle wala 'Trash' nahi lag raha tha. Uski height thodi badh gayi thi, shoulders broad ho gaye thay, aur chehre par ek sharp look aa gaya tha.
Lekin ek problem thi.
"Mere paas abhi bhi koi dhang ka weapon nahi hai," Aryan ne socha. "Wo lakdi ki dandi se main Tournament nahi jeet sakta. Mujhe ek asli Talwaar chahiye."
Uske dimaag mein ek hi jagah aayi—Treasure Pavilion. Aur ek hi chehra aaya—Zara.
Treasure Pavilion
Aaj dukan mein zyada bheed nahi thi. Zara counter par baithi hisaab-kitaab (accounts) kar rahi thi. Aaj usne purple rang ki dress pehni thi jo aur bhi zyada tight thi. Uske baal ek messy bun mein bandhe thay, jo use ek 'Working Wife' wala look de rahe thay.
"Excuse me, beautiful lady," Aryan ne counter par kohni (elbow) rakhte hue kaha.
Zara ne bina sar uthaye kaha, "Aaj koi discount nahi milega, aur udhaar toh bilkul na—"
Jaise hi usne sar utha kar Aryan ko dekha, wo chup ho gayi.
Uski aankhein Aryan ke chehre se lekar uski chhati (chest) tak gayin, jo uske fate hue kurte mein se dikh rahi thi.
"Aryan?" Zara ki awaaz mein hairani thi. "Tum... tum alag lag rahe ho. Sirf 2 din mein itna change?"
Aryan ne baalon mein haath phera (Hero style). "Bas thoda workout kiya. Kaisi lag rahi hai meri nayi body?"
Zara halke se muskurayi, uth kar counter ke aage aayi aur Aryan ke bilkul paas khadi ho gayi. Itna paas ki Aryan ko uski perfume ki khushboo madhosh karne lagi.
"Not bad," Zara ne apni ungli Aryan ki chest par pheri. Uski touch se Aryan ke shareer mein current daud gaya. "Lekin sirf muscles dikhane se kaam nahi chalta, chote. Jeb mein maal (money) bhi hona chahiye."
Aryan ne apna gala saaf kiya. "Woh... actually mujhe ek talwaar (sword) chahiye. Ekdam high quality waali."
"Spirit Stones hain?" Zara ne pucha.
"Nahi," Aryan ne besharmi se kaha.
Zara has padi. "Toh kya free mein chahiye? Main business chalati hoon, dharamshala nahi."
Tabhi System ne entry maari.
Ting!
[Mission Alert: The Art of Negotiation]
[Zara is interested in your sudden growth. Use this to your advantage.]
[Task: Flirt with her until she gives you a discount (or a free sword).]
[Warning: Do not let her dominate you. Be an Alpha!]
Aryan ne ek gehri saans li. Usne Zara ki aankhon mein dekha aur ek kadam aage badhaya, jisse Zara piche diwar se ja lagi.
Zara thodi chaunk gayi. "Oh? Himmat badh gayi hai?"
Aryan ne apna haath diwar par rakha (Kabedon style), Zara ke chehre ke bilkul paas.
"Zara ji," Aryan ne uski aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha. "Main abhi gareeb hoon, lekin 3 mahine baad main Outer Sect Tournament ka champion banunga. Us waqt, Champion ki sword kis dukan se aayi thi, yeh baat pure shehar mein failegi. Socho, 'Treasure Pavilion' ki kitni marketing hogi."
Zara ki aankhein chamki. Wo ek businesswoman thi, wo profit samajhti thi. Lekin wo Aryan ke naye attitude ko bhi enjoy kar rahi thi.
"Badi baatein," Zara ne dheere se kaha, uska chehra Aryan ke itna kareeb tha ki unki saansein takra rahi thi. "Lekin agar tum haar gaye toh? Mera nuksaan hoga."
"Agar main haara..." Aryan ne thoda jhuk kar uske kaan mein whisper kiya, "Toh main zindagi bhar tumhare liye free mein kaam karunga. Jo tum bologe, woh karunga. Massage, safai... ya kuch aur."
Zara ka chehra halka sa laal ho gaya. Usne Aryan ko dhakka nahi diya.
"Hmm... 'Kuch aur' sunne mein interesting lagta hai," Zara ne apni jeebh se honth geele kiye. "Theek hai. Deal."
Zara piche mudi aur shelf se ek lambi, kaali talwaar nikali.
"Yeh 'Shadow Fang' sword hai," Zara ne talwaar Aryan ko di. "Yeh heavy hai, lekin agar tum isse sambhal paye, toh ye lohe ko makkhan ki tarah kaat sakti hai."
Aryan ne talwaar haath mein li. Bhari thi, lekin uski Stage 6 ki taqat ke liye perfect thi.
"Thanks, Zara. Main tumhe nirash nahi karunga," Aryan ne kaha aur jaane laga.
"Ruko," Zara ne use roka.
"Kya hua?"
Zara paas aayi aur Aryan ke gaal (cheek) par ek soft kiss kiya.
Muah!
Aryan jam gaya. System hang ho gaya.
"Yeh 'Good Luck' ke liye tha," Zara ne aankh maarte hue kaha. "Aur haan... agli baar jab aaoge, toh main apna 'payment' (massage) lungi. Yaad rakhna."
Aryan dukan se bahar nikla, uska haath apne gaal par tha.
"System... kya ye sach mein hua?"
Ting!
[Affirmative. Host ne ladki patana shuru kar diya hai.]
[Charisma increased +5.]
[Kavya's Jealousy Radar is pinging somewhere...]
Aryan hansa. "Life set hai boss!"
Lekin use nahi pata tha ki Shadow Fang sword sirf ek weapon nahi thi... uske andar kuch aur bhi chupa tha. Au
r jungle mein koi uska intezaar kar raha tha jo Vicky se bhi zyada khatarnak tha.

 

[mahan atma]

Majedar

 

[mahan atma]

Agle update ka intezar

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro