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[Dhakad boy]

Chapter 20
Maut ka Naach aur Bina Sar ka General​

Weeping Ruins ke toote hue darwaze par jung shuru ho chuki thi.
Ek taraf 500 se zyada Skeleton Warriors aur hawa mein udti hui Banshees (chudail aatmaein).
Doosri taraf, ek ladka aur uska dragon.
Aryan ne apni gardan ghumayi. Shadow Fang uske haath mein kampan (vibrate) kar rahi thi, jaise wo shikaar ke liye tadap rahi ho.
"Kaalu," Aryan ne shanti se kaha. "Feast begins."
ROAAARR!
Kaalu, jo ab tak Aryan ke kandhe par baitha tha, hawa mein kooda.
Uska shareer phoolne laga. Kaali roshni (Black Light) uske aas-paas ghoomne lagi. Dekhte hi dekhte wo ek Baagh (Tiger) jitna bada ho gaya. Uske scales ab patthar jaise sakht thay aur uske muh se Void Energy tapak rahi thi.
"KILL!"
Undead Army ek lehar (wave) ki tarah unpar toot padi.
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki aur agle hi pal khol di. Uski aankhein ab puri tarah Purple thin.
"Void Shadow Steps."
Aryan gayab ho gaya.
SLASH! SLASH! SLASH!
Bheed ke beech mein sirf kaali lakeerein dikh rahi thin. Aryan itni tezi se move kar raha tha ki Skeletons ko pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki dushman kahan hai.
Jahan-jahan Aryan guzarta, wahan haddiyan hawa mein ud jati.
Uski Shadow Fang ki 'Armor Breaker' ability apna kamaal dikha rahi thi. Skeletons ne lohe ke purane kavach (armor) pehne hue thay, lekin Aryan ki talwaar unhein kagaz ki tarah kaat rahi thi.
SCREECH!
Hawa mein se 5 Banshees ne Aryan par hamla kiya. Wo physical attack nahi karti thin, wo Sonic Scream (awaaz ka hamla) karti thin jo dimaag ko sunn kar deta tha.
Aryan ko halka chakkar aaya. "Mental attack? Bura idea."
Isse pehle ki Banshees dobara chillati, Kaalu hawa mein uda.
Kaalu ne apna bada sa muh khola aur ek ajeeb si saans (breath) chodi. Yeh aag nahi thi... yeh Vacuum tha.
"Void Suction!"
Kaalu ne un paancho aatmaon ko ek saath andar kheench liya aur... Gatak gaya.
Kaalu zameen par land hua aur khushi se apni poonch hilayi. Aatmaein khana uska favorite dessert tha.
The Boss Fight
Skeletons ki sankhya kam ho rahi thi. Yeh dekh kar, wo bada Headless General (Bina sar ka Senapati) gusse mein aage aaya.
Uske haath mein ek 10-foot lambi Battle Axe (kulhadi) thi. Uska ghoda (jo khud ek skeleton tha) aag ugal raha tha.
[Boss Alert: Headless General engaging!]
[Power: Earth Realm Level 2.]
[Ability: Heavy Crush.]
General ne apne ghode ko Aryan ki taraf daudaya. Zameen hilne lagi.
Jab wo Aryan ke kareeb pahuncha, usne apni bhari kulhadi hawa mein uthayi aur neeche maari.
Aryan jaanta tha ki agar wo kulhadi se takraya, toh Shadow Fang shayad toot jaye ya wo khud zameen mein dhans jaye. Earth Realm ki raw power kaafi zyada hoti hai.
"Dodge!"
Aryan piche ki taraf fisla (slid back).
BOOOM!
Kulhadi zameen par lagi. Wahan ek 5-meter gehra gaddha ban gaya. Pathar ke tukde bullet ki tarah ude. Ek tukda Aryan ke gaal ko cheerta hua nikal gaya.
"Oops, close call," Aryan ne khoon pocha.
General ne bina ruke dusra hamla kiya. Wo Aryan ko sambhalne ka mauka nahi dena chahta tha.
Aryan: "Theek hai, agar tu takat dikha raha hai, toh main speed dikhaunga."
Aryan ne Shadow Fang ko dono haathon se pakda.
"Asura Sword Art: Shadow Dance."
Aryan General ke ghode ke charo taraf ghoomne laga. Wo kabhi left, kabhi right, kabhi hawa mein.
General apni kulhadi ghumata raha, lekin wo har baar Aryan ki parchhayi (shadow) ko maarta.
"Ab!"
Aryan ne mauka dekha. Jab General ne kulhadi uthayi thi, uska Chest Armor khula tha.
Aryan hawa mein kooda.
"Armor Breaker Strike!"
CLANG! ... CRACK!
Shadow Fang General ke seene (chest) par lagi. Pehle chingari nikli, aur fir wo mota lohe ka armor toot gaya. Talwaar andar ghus gayi.
Lekin... koi khoon nahi nikla.
General ne ek ajeeb si awaaz nikali (bina muh ke) aur apna haath Aryan ki gardan pakadne ke liye badhaya.
"Chhod mujhe!" Aryan ne talwaar kheenchne ki koshish ki, lekin wo General ki haddiyon mein fans gayi thi.
General ka haath Aryan ke gale tak pahunch gaya.
Aryan ka dum ghutne laga. Earth Realm ki pakad lohe jaisi thi.
[Warning: Host HP Critical.]
"Kaalu!" Aryan chillaya.
Kaalu, jo Skeletons ke saath khel raha tha, ne Aryan ko musibat mein dekha.
Wo tezi se bhaaga aur General ke Ghode ki taang par kaat liya.
CRUNCH!
Ghode ki haddi toot gayi. Ghoda ladkhadaya aur gir pada.
Balance bigadte hi General ki pakad dheeli ho gayi.
Aryan ne mauka nahi ganwaya.
Usne apni talwaar chhod di aur hawa mein hi General ke kandhe par chadh gaya.
"Tera sar toh hai nahi," Aryan ne apni Asura Energy ko apne haath mein jama kiya. "Toh main teri Soul Fire ko bujhaunga!"
Aryan ne apna haath General ki gardan ke us khokhle hisse (hollow part) mein daal diya jahan se hari aag (Green Fire) nikal rahi thi. Yehi uski jaan thi.
"Asura Devour!"
Aryan ne wo hari aag khichna shuru kiya.
General tadapne laga. Wo Aryan ko hatane ke liye haath-pair maar raha tha, lekin Aryan kisi jonk (leech) ki tarah chipka hua tha.
"Marr ja saale!"
Aryan ne ek jhatke mein wo saari Green Fire bahar kheench li.
General ka shareer ekdam se jam gaya.
Agla pal, wo dher saari haddiyon (bones) mein bikhar kar zameen par gir gaya.
[Boss Defeated!]
[Reward: 2000 System Points.]
[Item Dropped: Rusty Iron Key.]
Aryan haddiyon ke dher par gira, buri tarah haanf raha tha.
"Baap re... yeh toh sach mein tough tha."
Jaise hi General mara, baaki bache hue Skeleton Warriors bhi apne aap toot kar gir gaye. Undead Army ki power source khatam ho gayi thi.
Aryan ne khade hokar apne kapde jhaade aur Shadow Fang wapis uthayi.
Wahan zameen par, General ke bache hue armor ke beech, ek purani Jung lagi chabi (Rusty Key) padi thi.
Aryan ne chabi uthayi.
"Yeh chabi kis cheez ki hai?"
Tabhi, Aryan ki nazar ruins ke beechon-beech bane ek Toote hue Mandir (Temple) par padi.
Mandir ke darwaze par ek bada sa tala (lock) laga tha, jispar wahi nishaan bana tha jo chabi par tha.
"Lagta hai asli raaz wahan andar hai," Aryan ne kaha.
Wo mandir ki taraf badha.
Lekin darwaze ke paas, ek Kankaal (Skeleton) baitha tha jo doosron se alag tha. Is skeleton ne General wala armor nahi, balki Surya Sect ki purani robes pehni hui thin.
Aur uske haath mein ek Chamde ki Diary (Leather Diary) thi.
Aryan us skeleton ke paas jhuka.
"Yeh toh koi Sect ka disciple lagta hai... Bohot saal pehle ka."
Aryan ne diary uthayi. Panno (pages) par khoon ke dhabbe thay, lekin likhawat abhi bhi padhi ja sakti thi.
[Diary Entry: Day 1]
"Hum yahan Dark Energy ka pata lagane aaye thay. Lekin hum galat thay. Yeh Dark Energy nahi hai... yeh ek Seal hai. Koi neeche kuch qaid (imprison) karke rakhna chahta hai."
[Diary Entry: Day 3]
"Sab mar gaye. Sirf main bacha hoon. Maine dekha wo kya hai. Wo koi bhoot nahi hai... wo ek Ladki hai. Ek ladki jo coffin (taboot) mein so rahi hai. Uske maathe par Asura ka nishaan hai... Bilkul waisa jaisa Legends mein sunaya jata hai."
[Last Entry]
"Maine darwaza lock kar diya hai taaki wo bahar na aa sake. Agar koi ise padh raha hai... TOH DARWAZA MAT KHOLNA! Bhaag jao!"
Aryan ne diary band ki.
Uske dimaag mein ghanti baji.
"Ladki? Asura nishaan? Coffin?"
Aryan ne Mandir ke darwaze ko dekha.
System ne ek naya notification diya:
[Hidden Quest Detected: The Sleeping Princess.]
[A Royal Asura is sealed inside. She might know about your parents.]
[Choice:]
[A: Open the door (Risk: Extreme).]
[B: Run away (Reward: Safety, but mystery remains unsolved).]
Aryan ne chabi ko taale (lock) mein daala.
"Sorry Diary wale uncle. Main sunta sabki hoon, karta apni hoon."
CLICK.
Taala khula.
Bhaari darwaza Krr-krr karke andar ki taraf khula.
Andar se ek thandi, lekin khushbudar hawa (scented breeze) aayi.
Aryan aur Kaalu andhere mein daakhil hue.

Bhut hi jabardast update bhai
Dhekte hai Aryan ka samna andar kisse kisse hota hai

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[krish1152]

nice update

 

[Haiwaan]

Chapter 20
Maut ka Naach aur Bina Sar ka General​

Weeping Ruins ke toote hue darwaze par jung shuru ho chuki thi.
Ek taraf 500 se zyada Skeleton Warriors aur hawa mein udti hui Banshees (chudail aatmaein).
Doosri taraf, ek ladka aur uska dragon.
Aryan ne apni gardan ghumayi. Shadow Fang uske haath mein kampan (vibrate) kar rahi thi, jaise wo shikaar ke liye tadap rahi ho.
"Kaalu," Aryan ne shanti se kaha. "Feast begins."
ROAAARR!
Kaalu, jo ab tak Aryan ke kandhe par baitha tha, hawa mein kooda.
Uska shareer phoolne laga. Kaali roshni (Black Light) uske aas-paas ghoomne lagi. Dekhte hi dekhte wo ek Baagh (Tiger) jitna bada ho gaya. Uske scales ab patthar jaise sakht thay aur uske muh se Void Energy tapak rahi thi.
"KILL!"
Undead Army ek lehar (wave) ki tarah unpar toot padi.
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki aur agle hi pal khol di. Uski aankhein ab puri tarah Purple thin.
"Void Shadow Steps."
Aryan gayab ho gaya.
SLASH! SLASH! SLASH!
Bheed ke beech mein sirf kaali lakeerein dikh rahi thin. Aryan itni tezi se move kar raha tha ki Skeletons ko pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki dushman kahan hai.
Jahan-jahan Aryan guzarta, wahan haddiyan hawa mein ud jati.
Uski Shadow Fang ki 'Armor Breaker' ability apna kamaal dikha rahi thi. Skeletons ne lohe ke purane kavach (armor) pehne hue thay, lekin Aryan ki talwaar unhein kagaz ki tarah kaat rahi thi.
SCREECH!
Hawa mein se 5 Banshees ne Aryan par hamla kiya. Wo physical attack nahi karti thin, wo Sonic Scream (awaaz ka hamla) karti thin jo dimaag ko sunn kar deta tha.
Aryan ko halka chakkar aaya. "Mental attack? Bura idea."
Isse pehle ki Banshees dobara chillati, Kaalu hawa mein uda.
Kaalu ne apna bada sa muh khola aur ek ajeeb si saans (breath) chodi. Yeh aag nahi thi... yeh Vacuum tha.
"Void Suction!"
Kaalu ne un paancho aatmaon ko ek saath andar kheench liya aur... Gatak gaya.
Kaalu zameen par land hua aur khushi se apni poonch hilayi. Aatmaein khana uska favorite dessert tha.
The Boss Fight
Skeletons ki sankhya kam ho rahi thi. Yeh dekh kar, wo bada Headless General (Bina sar ka Senapati) gusse mein aage aaya.
Uske haath mein ek 10-foot lambi Battle Axe (kulhadi) thi. Uska ghoda (jo khud ek skeleton tha) aag ugal raha tha.
[Boss Alert: Headless General engaging!]
[Power: Earth Realm Level 2.]
[Ability: Heavy Crush.]
General ne apne ghode ko Aryan ki taraf daudaya. Zameen hilne lagi.
Jab wo Aryan ke kareeb pahuncha, usne apni bhari kulhadi hawa mein uthayi aur neeche maari.
Aryan jaanta tha ki agar wo kulhadi se takraya, toh Shadow Fang shayad toot jaye ya wo khud zameen mein dhans jaye. Earth Realm ki raw power kaafi zyada hoti hai.
"Dodge!"
Aryan piche ki taraf fisla (slid back).
BOOOM!
Kulhadi zameen par lagi. Wahan ek 5-meter gehra gaddha ban gaya. Pathar ke tukde bullet ki tarah ude. Ek tukda Aryan ke gaal ko cheerta hua nikal gaya.
"Oops, close call," Aryan ne khoon pocha.
General ne bina ruke dusra hamla kiya. Wo Aryan ko sambhalne ka mauka nahi dena chahta tha.
Aryan: "Theek hai, agar tu takat dikha raha hai, toh main speed dikhaunga."
Aryan ne Shadow Fang ko dono haathon se pakda.
"Asura Sword Art: Shadow Dance."
Aryan General ke ghode ke charo taraf ghoomne laga. Wo kabhi left, kabhi right, kabhi hawa mein.
General apni kulhadi ghumata raha, lekin wo har baar Aryan ki parchhayi (shadow) ko maarta.
"Ab!"
Aryan ne mauka dekha. Jab General ne kulhadi uthayi thi, uska Chest Armor khula tha.
Aryan hawa mein kooda.
"Armor Breaker Strike!"
CLANG! ... CRACK!
Shadow Fang General ke seene (chest) par lagi. Pehle chingari nikli, aur fir wo mota lohe ka armor toot gaya. Talwaar andar ghus gayi.
Lekin... koi khoon nahi nikla.
General ne ek ajeeb si awaaz nikali (bina muh ke) aur apna haath Aryan ki gardan pakadne ke liye badhaya.
"Chhod mujhe!" Aryan ne talwaar kheenchne ki koshish ki, lekin wo General ki haddiyon mein fans gayi thi.
General ka haath Aryan ke gale tak pahunch gaya.
Aryan ka dum ghutne laga. Earth Realm ki pakad lohe jaisi thi.
[Warning: Host HP Critical.]
"Kaalu!" Aryan chillaya.
Kaalu, jo Skeletons ke saath khel raha tha, ne Aryan ko musibat mein dekha.
Wo tezi se bhaaga aur General ke Ghode ki taang par kaat liya.
CRUNCH!
Ghode ki haddi toot gayi. Ghoda ladkhadaya aur gir pada.
Balance bigadte hi General ki pakad dheeli ho gayi.
Aryan ne mauka nahi ganwaya.
Usne apni talwaar chhod di aur hawa mein hi General ke kandhe par chadh gaya.
"Tera sar toh hai nahi," Aryan ne apni Asura Energy ko apne haath mein jama kiya. "Toh main teri Soul Fire ko bujhaunga!"
Aryan ne apna haath General ki gardan ke us khokhle hisse (hollow part) mein daal diya jahan se hari aag (Green Fire) nikal rahi thi. Yehi uski jaan thi.
"Asura Devour!"
Aryan ne wo hari aag khichna shuru kiya.
General tadapne laga. Wo Aryan ko hatane ke liye haath-pair maar raha tha, lekin Aryan kisi jonk (leech) ki tarah chipka hua tha.
"Marr ja saale!"
Aryan ne ek jhatke mein wo saari Green Fire bahar kheench li.
General ka shareer ekdam se jam gaya.
Agla pal, wo dher saari haddiyon (bones) mein bikhar kar zameen par gir gaya.
[Boss Defeated!]
[Reward: 2000 System Points.]
[Item Dropped: Rusty Iron Key.]
Aryan haddiyon ke dher par gira, buri tarah haanf raha tha.
"Baap re... yeh toh sach mein tough tha."
Jaise hi General mara, baaki bache hue Skeleton Warriors bhi apne aap toot kar gir gaye. Undead Army ki power source khatam ho gayi thi.
Aryan ne khade hokar apne kapde jhaade aur Shadow Fang wapis uthayi.
Wahan zameen par, General ke bache hue armor ke beech, ek purani Jung lagi chabi (Rusty Key) padi thi.
Aryan ne chabi uthayi.
"Yeh chabi kis cheez ki hai?"
Tabhi, Aryan ki nazar ruins ke beechon-beech bane ek Toote hue Mandir (Temple) par padi.
Mandir ke darwaze par ek bada sa tala (lock) laga tha, jispar wahi nishaan bana tha jo chabi par tha.
"Lagta hai asli raaz wahan andar hai," Aryan ne kaha.
Wo mandir ki taraf badha.
Lekin darwaze ke paas, ek Kankaal (Skeleton) baitha tha jo doosron se alag tha. Is skeleton ne General wala armor nahi, balki Surya Sect ki purani robes pehni hui thin.
Aur uske haath mein ek Chamde ki Diary (Leather Diary) thi.
Aryan us skeleton ke paas jhuka.
"Yeh toh koi Sect ka disciple lagta hai... Bohot saal pehle ka."
Aryan ne diary uthayi. Panno (pages) par khoon ke dhabbe thay, lekin likhawat abhi bhi padhi ja sakti thi.
[Diary Entry: Day 1]
"Hum yahan Dark Energy ka pata lagane aaye thay. Lekin hum galat thay. Yeh Dark Energy nahi hai... yeh ek Seal hai. Koi neeche kuch qaid (imprison) karke rakhna chahta hai."
[Diary Entry: Day 3]
"Sab mar gaye. Sirf main bacha hoon. Maine dekha wo kya hai. Wo koi bhoot nahi hai... wo ek Ladki hai. Ek ladki jo coffin (taboot) mein so rahi hai. Uske maathe par Asura ka nishaan hai... Bilkul waisa jaisa Legends mein sunaya jata hai."
[Last Entry]
"Maine darwaza lock kar diya hai taaki wo bahar na aa sake. Agar koi ise padh raha hai... TOH DARWAZA MAT KHOLNA! Bhaag jao!"
Aryan ne diary band ki.
Uske dimaag mein ghanti baji.
"Ladki? Asura nishaan? Coffin?"
Aryan ne Mandir ke darwaze ko dekha.
System ne ek naya notification diya:
[Hidden Quest Detected: The Sleeping Princess.]
[A Royal Asura is sealed inside. She might know about your parents.]
[Choice:]
[A: Open the door (Risk: Extreme).]
[B: Run away (Reward: Safety, but mystery remains unsolved).]
Aryan ne chabi ko taale (lock) mein daala.
"Sorry Diary wale uncle. Main sunta sabki hoon, karta apni hoon."
CLICK.
Taala khula.
Bhaari darwaza Krr-krr karke andar ki taraf khula.
Andar se ek thandi, lekin khushbudar hawa (scented breeze) aayi.
Aryan aur Kaalu andhere mein daakhil hue.

Fantastic update bro

 

[jattsingh1]

Bhot vadiya update next update ka interjaar rhega

 

[spritemathews]

Shandaar update bro

 

[karanpreet singh]

Chapter 20
Maut ka Naach aur Bina Sar ka General​

Weeping Ruins ke toote hue darwaze par jung shuru ho chuki thi.
Ek taraf 500 se zyada Skeleton Warriors aur hawa mein udti hui Banshees (chudail aatmaein).
Doosri taraf, ek ladka aur uska dragon.
Aryan ne apni gardan ghumayi. Shadow Fang uske haath mein kampan (vibrate) kar rahi thi, jaise wo shikaar ke liye tadap rahi ho.
"Kaalu," Aryan ne shanti se kaha. "Feast begins."
ROAAARR!
Kaalu, jo ab tak Aryan ke kandhe par baitha tha, hawa mein kooda.
Uska shareer phoolne laga. Kaali roshni (Black Light) uske aas-paas ghoomne lagi. Dekhte hi dekhte wo ek Baagh (Tiger) jitna bada ho gaya. Uske scales ab patthar jaise sakht thay aur uske muh se Void Energy tapak rahi thi.
"KILL!"
Undead Army ek lehar (wave) ki tarah unpar toot padi.
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki aur agle hi pal khol di. Uski aankhein ab puri tarah Purple thin.
"Void Shadow Steps."
Aryan gayab ho gaya.
SLASH! SLASH! SLASH!
Bheed ke beech mein sirf kaali lakeerein dikh rahi thin. Aryan itni tezi se move kar raha tha ki Skeletons ko pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki dushman kahan hai.
Jahan-jahan Aryan guzarta, wahan haddiyan hawa mein ud jati.
Uski Shadow Fang ki 'Armor Breaker' ability apna kamaal dikha rahi thi. Skeletons ne lohe ke purane kavach (armor) pehne hue thay, lekin Aryan ki talwaar unhein kagaz ki tarah kaat rahi thi.
SCREECH!
Hawa mein se 5 Banshees ne Aryan par hamla kiya. Wo physical attack nahi karti thin, wo Sonic Scream (awaaz ka hamla) karti thin jo dimaag ko sunn kar deta tha.
Aryan ko halka chakkar aaya. "Mental attack? Bura idea."
Isse pehle ki Banshees dobara chillati, Kaalu hawa mein uda.
Kaalu ne apna bada sa muh khola aur ek ajeeb si saans (breath) chodi. Yeh aag nahi thi... yeh Vacuum tha.
"Void Suction!"
Kaalu ne un paancho aatmaon ko ek saath andar kheench liya aur... Gatak gaya.
Kaalu zameen par land hua aur khushi se apni poonch hilayi. Aatmaein khana uska favorite dessert tha.
The Boss Fight
Skeletons ki sankhya kam ho rahi thi. Yeh dekh kar, wo bada Headless General (Bina sar ka Senapati) gusse mein aage aaya.
Uske haath mein ek 10-foot lambi Battle Axe (kulhadi) thi. Uska ghoda (jo khud ek skeleton tha) aag ugal raha tha.
[Boss Alert: Headless General engaging!]
[Power: Earth Realm Level 2.]
[Ability: Heavy Crush.]
General ne apne ghode ko Aryan ki taraf daudaya. Zameen hilne lagi.
Jab wo Aryan ke kareeb pahuncha, usne apni bhari kulhadi hawa mein uthayi aur neeche maari.
Aryan jaanta tha ki agar wo kulhadi se takraya, toh Shadow Fang shayad toot jaye ya wo khud zameen mein dhans jaye. Earth Realm ki raw power kaafi zyada hoti hai.
"Dodge!"
Aryan piche ki taraf fisla (slid back).
BOOOM!
Kulhadi zameen par lagi. Wahan ek 5-meter gehra gaddha ban gaya. Pathar ke tukde bullet ki tarah ude. Ek tukda Aryan ke gaal ko cheerta hua nikal gaya.
"Oops, close call," Aryan ne khoon pocha.
General ne bina ruke dusra hamla kiya. Wo Aryan ko sambhalne ka mauka nahi dena chahta tha.
Aryan: "Theek hai, agar tu takat dikha raha hai, toh main speed dikhaunga."
Aryan ne Shadow Fang ko dono haathon se pakda.
"Asura Sword Art: Shadow Dance."
Aryan General ke ghode ke charo taraf ghoomne laga. Wo kabhi left, kabhi right, kabhi hawa mein.
General apni kulhadi ghumata raha, lekin wo har baar Aryan ki parchhayi (shadow) ko maarta.
"Ab!"
Aryan ne mauka dekha. Jab General ne kulhadi uthayi thi, uska Chest Armor khula tha.
Aryan hawa mein kooda.
"Armor Breaker Strike!"
CLANG! ... CRACK!
Shadow Fang General ke seene (chest) par lagi. Pehle chingari nikli, aur fir wo mota lohe ka armor toot gaya. Talwaar andar ghus gayi.
Lekin... koi khoon nahi nikla.
General ne ek ajeeb si awaaz nikali (bina muh ke) aur apna haath Aryan ki gardan pakadne ke liye badhaya.
"Chhod mujhe!" Aryan ne talwaar kheenchne ki koshish ki, lekin wo General ki haddiyon mein fans gayi thi.
General ka haath Aryan ke gale tak pahunch gaya.
Aryan ka dum ghutne laga. Earth Realm ki pakad lohe jaisi thi.
[Warning: Host HP Critical.]
"Kaalu!" Aryan chillaya.
Kaalu, jo Skeletons ke saath khel raha tha, ne Aryan ko musibat mein dekha.
Wo tezi se bhaaga aur General ke Ghode ki taang par kaat liya.
CRUNCH!
Ghode ki haddi toot gayi. Ghoda ladkhadaya aur gir pada.
Balance bigadte hi General ki pakad dheeli ho gayi.
Aryan ne mauka nahi ganwaya.
Usne apni talwaar chhod di aur hawa mein hi General ke kandhe par chadh gaya.
"Tera sar toh hai nahi," Aryan ne apni Asura Energy ko apne haath mein jama kiya. "Toh main teri Soul Fire ko bujhaunga!"
Aryan ne apna haath General ki gardan ke us khokhle hisse (hollow part) mein daal diya jahan se hari aag (Green Fire) nikal rahi thi. Yehi uski jaan thi.
"Asura Devour!"
Aryan ne wo hari aag khichna shuru kiya.
General tadapne laga. Wo Aryan ko hatane ke liye haath-pair maar raha tha, lekin Aryan kisi jonk (leech) ki tarah chipka hua tha.
"Marr ja saale!"
Aryan ne ek jhatke mein wo saari Green Fire bahar kheench li.
General ka shareer ekdam se jam gaya.
Agla pal, wo dher saari haddiyon (bones) mein bikhar kar zameen par gir gaya.
[Boss Defeated!]
[Reward: 2000 System Points.]
[Item Dropped: Rusty Iron Key.]
Aryan haddiyon ke dher par gira, buri tarah haanf raha tha.
"Baap re... yeh toh sach mein tough tha."
Jaise hi General mara, baaki bache hue Skeleton Warriors bhi apne aap toot kar gir gaye. Undead Army ki power source khatam ho gayi thi.
Aryan ne khade hokar apne kapde jhaade aur Shadow Fang wapis uthayi.
Wahan zameen par, General ke bache hue armor ke beech, ek purani Jung lagi chabi (Rusty Key) padi thi.
Aryan ne chabi uthayi.
"Yeh chabi kis cheez ki hai?"
Tabhi, Aryan ki nazar ruins ke beechon-beech bane ek Toote hue Mandir (Temple) par padi.
Mandir ke darwaze par ek bada sa tala (lock) laga tha, jispar wahi nishaan bana tha jo chabi par tha.
"Lagta hai asli raaz wahan andar hai," Aryan ne kaha.
Wo mandir ki taraf badha.
Lekin darwaze ke paas, ek Kankaal (Skeleton) baitha tha jo doosron se alag tha. Is skeleton ne General wala armor nahi, balki Surya Sect ki purani robes pehni hui thin.
Aur uske haath mein ek Chamde ki Diary (Leather Diary) thi.
Aryan us skeleton ke paas jhuka.
"Yeh toh koi Sect ka disciple lagta hai... Bohot saal pehle ka."
Aryan ne diary uthayi. Panno (pages) par khoon ke dhabbe thay, lekin likhawat abhi bhi padhi ja sakti thi.
[Diary Entry: Day 1]
"Hum yahan Dark Energy ka pata lagane aaye thay. Lekin hum galat thay. Yeh Dark Energy nahi hai... yeh ek Seal hai. Koi neeche kuch qaid (imprison) karke rakhna chahta hai."
[Diary Entry: Day 3]
"Sab mar gaye. Sirf main bacha hoon. Maine dekha wo kya hai. Wo koi bhoot nahi hai... wo ek Ladki hai. Ek ladki jo coffin (taboot) mein so rahi hai. Uske maathe par Asura ka nishaan hai... Bilkul waisa jaisa Legends mein sunaya jata hai."
[Last Entry]
"Maine darwaza lock kar diya hai taaki wo bahar na aa sake. Agar koi ise padh raha hai... TOH DARWAZA MAT KHOLNA! Bhaag jao!"
Aryan ne diary band ki.
Uske dimaag mein ghanti baji.
"Ladki? Asura nishaan? Coffin?"
Aryan ne Mandir ke darwaze ko dekha.
System ne ek naya notification diya:
[Hidden Quest Detected: The Sleeping Princess.]
[A Royal Asura is sealed inside. She might know about your parents.]
[Choice:]
[A: Open the door (Risk: Extreme).]
[B: Run away (Reward: Safety, but mystery remains unsolved).]
Aryan ne chabi ko taale (lock) mein daala.
"Sorry Diary wale uncle. Main sunta sabki hoon, karta apni hoon."
CLICK.
Taala khula.
Bhaari darwaza Krr-krr karke andar ki taraf khula.
Andar se ek thandi, lekin khushbudar hawa (scented breeze) aayi.
Aryan aur Kaalu andhere mein daakhil hue.

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Excellent update

 

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**Chapter 19: Jagti hui Talwaar aur Maut ka Paigaam**

Subah ki pehli kiran Aryan ke kamre mein padi. Aryan abhi bhi zameen par leta hua tha, jahan wo pichli raat behosh hua tha.
Uske haath mein wo talwaar thi—Shadow Fang.
Lekin ab yeh pehle jaisi nahi thi.
Pehle yeh ek simple kaali talwaar thi. Ab, iski blade par Lal Nassein (Red Veins) ubhar aayi thin, jo dhadak rahi thin—bilkul kisi zinda dil ki tarah. Blade ka rang ab 'Gehra Andhera' (Abyssal Black) tha, jo roshni ko reflect nahi karta tha, balki use kha jata tha.
Aryan ki aankhein khuli. Use halka sa sar-dard tha, lekin uske shareer mein ek ajeeb si connection feel ho rahi thi.
"System," Aryan ne dheere se kaha. "Status report."

Ting!
[Weapon Evolution Complete.]
[Name: Shadow Fang (Awakened State - Stage 1)]
[Grade: Earth Rank (High)]
[New Ability: 'Armor Breaker'.]
(Description: Yeh talwaar ab physical armor ko ignore kar sakti hai. Iski dhaar 'Qi' ko kaat sakti hai.)
[Passive Effect: 'Bloodthirst'.]
(Jitna zyada khoon yeh piyegi, utni zyada sharp hoti jayegi.)

Aryan ne talwaar ko hawa mein ghumaya.
SWOOSH!
Hawa mein ek kaali lakeer ban gayi jo kuch seconds tak wahan tiki rahi.
"Armor Breaker..." Aryan muskuraya. "Agar Kunal abhi mere saamne hota, toh mujhe Kaalu ki zaroorat nahi padti. Main use uske armor ke saath hi kaat deta."
Aryan ne talwaar ko myaan mein rakha. Ab use Earth Realm walon se darrne ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Tabhi, kamre ki khidki par ek safed rang ka Paper Crane (kagaz ka pakshi) aakar baitha.
Wo crane magic se bana tha. Jaise hi Aryan ne use chua, usme se ek bhari awaaz aayi:
"Core Disciple Aryan. Sect Master tumse milna chahte hain. Turant 'Main Hall' mein report karo."

Aryan chounk gaya.
"Sect Master? Unhone mujhe kabhi nahi bulaya. Zaroor koi badi baat hai."

**Surya Sect - The Grand Main Hall**

Yeh jagah Sect ka dil thi. Yahan bade-bade pillars thay jin par dragons aur phoenix ki carvings thi.
Hall ke aakhri chor par ek sone ka singhasan (throne) tha. Us par ek adhed umar (middle-aged) ka aadmi baitha tha.
Unke baal safed aur kaale mix thay, aur unki aankhon mein suraj jaisi tez roshni thi.
Yeh thay Sect Master Suryavansh. (Earth Realm Peak - Level 9).
Unke bagal mein Elder Sharma aur Elder Shang bhi khade thay.

Aryan hall mein daakhil hua aur ghutanon ke bal jhuk kar salam kiya.
"Disciple Aryan ka pranaam, Sect Master."

Sect Master ne Aryan ko gaur se dekha. Unki nazrein aisi thin jaise wo Aryan ki aatma ke aar-paar dekh rahe hon.
"Utho, Aryan."
Aryan khada hua.

"Maine tumhare baare mein bohot suna hai," Sect Master ki awaaz goonji. "Tumne Outer Sect Tournament jeeta, Vikram ko haraya, aur suna hai shehar mein bhi kaafi hungama kiya."
Elder Shang ne naak sikudi, par kuch bole nahi.
"Lekin main aaj tumhe taareef ke liye nahi bulaya," Sect Master serious ho gaye. "Mere paas tumhare liye ek Mission hai. Ek aisa mission jo shayad tumhari jaan le le."

Aryan ne Elder Sharma ki taraf dekha. Elder Sharma ke chehre par chinta thi.
"Bataiye Master," Aryan ne bina dare kaha.

Sect Master ne hawa mein ek naksha (map) banaya.
"Sect se 100 kilometer door, purab (east) mein ek jagah hai—'The Weeping Ruins' (Rone wale Khandahar)."
"Hazaron saal pehle wahan ek khushhaal shehar tha, lekin ek raat wahan kuch aisa hua ki sab log gayab ho gaye. Ab wahan sirf bhoot aur aatmaein (spirits) rehti hain."
Sect Master ne aage kaha, "Pichle kuch hafton se, wahan se ek ajeeb 'Dark Energy' nikal rahi hai. Humne wahan jaanch ke liye 3 Core Disciples bheje thay... Koi wapis nahi aaya."

Aryan samajh gaya. "Aap chahte hain main wahan jaaun aur pata lagaun ki kya ho raha hai?"
"Haan," Sect Master ne kaha. "Kyunki tumhare paas Asura Energy hai (jo unhe 'Special Dark Qi' lagti thi). Sirf tum hi us Dark Energy ko bardasht kar sakte ho. Agar tum wahan se zinda wapis aaye aur wo raaz suljha diya, toh main tumhe 'Sect Library' ki 3rd Floor ka access dunga."

Aryan ki aankhein chamak uthin. 3rd Floor! Wahan Sect ki sabse powerful techniques hain. Earth Realm pahunchne ka raasta wahan mil sakta hai.
"Main taiyaar hoon," Aryan ne turant haan kar di.

Elder Shang ne dheere se kaha, "Zyada khush mat ho ladke. Wahan jaane wale wapis nahi aate. Wo jagah shraapit (cursed) hai."
Aryan ne Elder Shang ko ek smile di. "Main khud ek curse hoon Elder. Bhoot mujhse darrte hain."

**Scene: Departure (Rawana hona)**

Aryan mission ke liye nikalne wala tha. Usne zaruri saamaan pack kiya—potions, khana (Kaalu ke liye dher saara meat), aur kuch tools.
Gate par Kavya uska intezaar kar rahi thi.
"Tum akele ja rahe ho?" Kavya ne chinta se pucha. "Maine suna hai Weeping Ruins bohot khatarnak jagah hai."

"Fikar mat karo, Ice Queen," Aryan ne apne ghode (horse) ki lagaam pakdi. "Mere paas mera bodyguard hai."
Usne apni jacket ki taraf ishara kiya jahan Kaalu soya hua tha.

Kavya ne Aryan ka haath pakda. "Wapis aana. Zinda. Mujhe abhi bhi tumhe Tournament mein harana hai."
Aryan hasa. "Sure. Jab wapis aaunga, toh hum date par chalenge."
Kavya ka chehra laal ho gaya. "Bhaago yahan se!"

Aryan ghode par baitha aur hawa ki tezi se nikal gaya.

**The Weeping Ruins (Do Din Baad)**

Do din ke safar ke baad, Aryan us jagah pahuncha.
Mahaul ekdum badal gaya tha.
Aasmaan yahan hamesha grey rehta tha. Sooraj ki roshni yahan pahunchti hi nahi thi. Hawa mein sadi hui (rotten) smell thi.
Saamne ek toota-foota shehar dikh raha tha. Deewarein kaali pad chuki thin. Ped sookh chuke thay aur unki shakhein (branches) kisi claw ki tarah lag rahi thin.

Aur sabse ajeeb baat... Awaazein.
Hawa mein rone ki awaazein aa rahi thin.
"Bachao... Humein bachao..."

Aryan ne ghode ko wahin chhod diya (kyunki ghoda aage jaane se darr raha tha).
"Kaalu, uth ja. Naashta (Breakfast) dhoondne ka time ho gaya."

Kaalu bahar nikla. Is baar wo masti nahi kar raha tha. Uske kaan khade thay aur wo low growl kar raha tha.
Ghostly energy Dragons ko pasand nahi hoti.

Aryan ne Shadow Fang nikaali. Talwaar ki laal nassein chamakne lagin. Talwaar khush thi. Use yahan khoon ki khushboo aa rahi thi.

Jaise hi Aryan ne pehla kadam ruins ke andar rakha...
CRACK.
Zameen phati aur usme se ek Haddiyon ka Haath (Skeleton Hand) nikla aur Aryan ka pair pakad liya.

Aryan ne bina neeche dekhe talwaar ghumayi.
SLASH!
Haath kat gaya.

Lekin yeh bas shuruaat thi.
Zameen hilne lagi. Hazaron kabrein (graves) khulne lagi.
Skeleton Warriors... Ghostly Spirits... aur hawa mein udte hue Banshees.
Ek poori Undead Army Aryan ka swagat karne ke liye khadi ho gayi.

Sabse aage ek Headless Horseman (Bina sar ka ghudsawaar) tha, jiske haath mein ek badi si kulhadi (axe) thi. Uske shareer se Earth Realm ki power nikal rahi thi.

[System Warning]
[Entered Dungeon: The Cursed City.]
[Objective: Survive and Find the Source of Dark Energy.]
[Enemies Detected: 500+ Undead.]
[Boss Detected: The Headless General (Earth Realm Level 2).]

Aryan ne apni gardan chatkayi.
"500 vs 1? Hmm... fair fight lag rahi hai."

Usne Kaalu ko dekha.
"Kaalu, aaj buffet laga hai. Jitna kha sakta hai kha le."

Kaalu
ne ek badi dahaad maari aur apne asli roop (bade size) mein aana shuru kiya.
Aryan ki aankhein purple ho gayin.

"Let's dance."

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Chapter 20
Maut ka Naach aur Bina Sar ka General​

Weeping Ruins ke toote hue darwaze par jung shuru ho chuki thi.
Ek taraf 500 se zyada Skeleton Warriors aur hawa mein udti hui Banshees (chudail aatmaein).
Doosri taraf, ek ladka aur uska dragon.
Aryan ne apni gardan ghumayi. Shadow Fang uske haath mein kampan (vibrate) kar rahi thi, jaise wo shikaar ke liye tadap rahi ho.
"Kaalu," Aryan ne shanti se kaha. "Feast begins."
ROAAARR!
Kaalu, jo ab tak Aryan ke kandhe par baitha tha, hawa mein kooda.
Uska shareer phoolne laga. Kaali roshni (Black Light) uske aas-paas ghoomne lagi. Dekhte hi dekhte wo ek Baagh (Tiger) jitna bada ho gaya. Uske scales ab patthar jaise sakht thay aur uske muh se Void Energy tapak rahi thi.
"KILL!"
Undead Army ek lehar (wave) ki tarah unpar toot padi.
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki aur agle hi pal khol di. Uski aankhein ab puri tarah Purple thin.
"Void Shadow Steps."
Aryan gayab ho gaya.
SLASH! SLASH! SLASH!
Bheed ke beech mein sirf kaali lakeerein dikh rahi thin. Aryan itni tezi se move kar raha tha ki Skeletons ko pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki dushman kahan hai.
Jahan-jahan Aryan guzarta, wahan haddiyan hawa mein ud jati.
Uski Shadow Fang ki 'Armor Breaker' ability apna kamaal dikha rahi thi. Skeletons ne lohe ke purane kavach (armor) pehne hue thay, lekin Aryan ki talwaar unhein kagaz ki tarah kaat rahi thi.
SCREECH!
Hawa mein se 5 Banshees ne Aryan par hamla kiya. Wo physical attack nahi karti thin, wo Sonic Scream (awaaz ka hamla) karti thin jo dimaag ko sunn kar deta tha.
Aryan ko halka chakkar aaya. "Mental attack? Bura idea."
Isse pehle ki Banshees dobara chillati, Kaalu hawa mein uda.
Kaalu ne apna bada sa muh khola aur ek ajeeb si saans (breath) chodi. Yeh aag nahi thi... yeh Vacuum tha.
"Void Suction!"
Kaalu ne un paancho aatmaon ko ek saath andar kheench liya aur... Gatak gaya.
Kaalu zameen par land hua aur khushi se apni poonch hilayi. Aatmaein khana uska favorite dessert tha.
The Boss Fight
Skeletons ki sankhya kam ho rahi thi. Yeh dekh kar, wo bada Headless General (Bina sar ka Senapati) gusse mein aage aaya.
Uske haath mein ek 10-foot lambi Battle Axe (kulhadi) thi. Uska ghoda (jo khud ek skeleton tha) aag ugal raha tha.
[Boss Alert: Headless General engaging!]
[Power: Earth Realm Level 2.]
[Ability: Heavy Crush.]
General ne apne ghode ko Aryan ki taraf daudaya. Zameen hilne lagi.
Jab wo Aryan ke kareeb pahuncha, usne apni bhari kulhadi hawa mein uthayi aur neeche maari.
Aryan jaanta tha ki agar wo kulhadi se takraya, toh Shadow Fang shayad toot jaye ya wo khud zameen mein dhans jaye. Earth Realm ki raw power kaafi zyada hoti hai.
"Dodge!"
Aryan piche ki taraf fisla (slid back).
BOOOM!
Kulhadi zameen par lagi. Wahan ek 5-meter gehra gaddha ban gaya. Pathar ke tukde bullet ki tarah ude. Ek tukda Aryan ke gaal ko cheerta hua nikal gaya.
"Oops, close call," Aryan ne khoon pocha.
General ne bina ruke dusra hamla kiya. Wo Aryan ko sambhalne ka mauka nahi dena chahta tha.
Aryan: "Theek hai, agar tu takat dikha raha hai, toh main speed dikhaunga."
Aryan ne Shadow Fang ko dono haathon se pakda.
"Asura Sword Art: Shadow Dance."
Aryan General ke ghode ke charo taraf ghoomne laga. Wo kabhi left, kabhi right, kabhi hawa mein.
General apni kulhadi ghumata raha, lekin wo har baar Aryan ki parchhayi (shadow) ko maarta.
"Ab!"
Aryan ne mauka dekha. Jab General ne kulhadi uthayi thi, uska Chest Armor khula tha.
Aryan hawa mein kooda.
"Armor Breaker Strike!"
CLANG! ... CRACK!
Shadow Fang General ke seene (chest) par lagi. Pehle chingari nikli, aur fir wo mota lohe ka armor toot gaya. Talwaar andar ghus gayi.
Lekin... koi khoon nahi nikla.
General ne ek ajeeb si awaaz nikali (bina muh ke) aur apna haath Aryan ki gardan pakadne ke liye badhaya.
"Chhod mujhe!" Aryan ne talwaar kheenchne ki koshish ki, lekin wo General ki haddiyon mein fans gayi thi.
General ka haath Aryan ke gale tak pahunch gaya.
Aryan ka dum ghutne laga. Earth Realm ki pakad lohe jaisi thi.
[Warning: Host HP Critical.]
"Kaalu!" Aryan chillaya.
Kaalu, jo Skeletons ke saath khel raha tha, ne Aryan ko musibat mein dekha.
Wo tezi se bhaaga aur General ke Ghode ki taang par kaat liya.
CRUNCH!
Ghode ki haddi toot gayi. Ghoda ladkhadaya aur gir pada.
Balance bigadte hi General ki pakad dheeli ho gayi.
Aryan ne mauka nahi ganwaya.
Usne apni talwaar chhod di aur hawa mein hi General ke kandhe par chadh gaya.
"Tera sar toh hai nahi," Aryan ne apni Asura Energy ko apne haath mein jama kiya. "Toh main teri Soul Fire ko bujhaunga!"
Aryan ne apna haath General ki gardan ke us khokhle hisse (hollow part) mein daal diya jahan se hari aag (Green Fire) nikal rahi thi. Yehi uski jaan thi.
"Asura Devour!"
Aryan ne wo hari aag khichna shuru kiya.
General tadapne laga. Wo Aryan ko hatane ke liye haath-pair maar raha tha, lekin Aryan kisi jonk (leech) ki tarah chipka hua tha.
"Marr ja saale!"
Aryan ne ek jhatke mein wo saari Green Fire bahar kheench li.
General ka shareer ekdam se jam gaya.
Agla pal, wo dher saari haddiyon (bones) mein bikhar kar zameen par gir gaya.
[Boss Defeated!]
[Reward: 2000 System Points.]
[Item Dropped: Rusty Iron Key.]
Aryan haddiyon ke dher par gira, buri tarah haanf raha tha.
"Baap re... yeh toh sach mein tough tha."
Jaise hi General mara, baaki bache hue Skeleton Warriors bhi apne aap toot kar gir gaye. Undead Army ki power source khatam ho gayi thi.
Aryan ne khade hokar apne kapde jhaade aur Shadow Fang wapis uthayi.
Wahan zameen par, General ke bache hue armor ke beech, ek purani Jung lagi chabi (Rusty Key) padi thi.
Aryan ne chabi uthayi.
"Yeh chabi kis cheez ki hai?"
Tabhi, Aryan ki nazar ruins ke beechon-beech bane ek Toote hue Mandir (Temple) par padi.
Mandir ke darwaze par ek bada sa tala (lock) laga tha, jispar wahi nishaan bana tha jo chabi par tha.
"Lagta hai asli raaz wahan andar hai," Aryan ne kaha.
Wo mandir ki taraf badha.
Lekin darwaze ke paas, ek Kankaal (Skeleton) baitha tha jo doosron se alag tha. Is skeleton ne General wala armor nahi, balki Surya Sect ki purani robes pehni hui thin.
Aur uske haath mein ek Chamde ki Diary (Leather Diary) thi.
Aryan us skeleton ke paas jhuka.
"Yeh toh koi Sect ka disciple lagta hai... Bohot saal pehle ka."
Aryan ne diary uthayi. Panno (pages) par khoon ke dhabbe thay, lekin likhawat abhi bhi padhi ja sakti thi.
[Diary Entry: Day 1]
"Hum yahan Dark Energy ka pata lagane aaye thay. Lekin hum galat thay. Yeh Dark Energy nahi hai... yeh ek Seal hai. Koi neeche kuch qaid (imprison) karke rakhna chahta hai."
[Diary Entry: Day 3]
"Sab mar gaye. Sirf main bacha hoon. Maine dekha wo kya hai. Wo koi bhoot nahi hai... wo ek Ladki hai. Ek ladki jo coffin (taboot) mein so rahi hai. Uske maathe par Asura ka nishaan hai... Bilkul waisa jaisa Legends mein sunaya jata hai."
[Last Entry]
"Maine darwaza lock kar diya hai taaki wo bahar na aa sake. Agar koi ise padh raha hai... TOH DARWAZA MAT KHOLNA! Bhaag jao!"
Aryan ne diary band ki.
Uske dimaag mein ghanti baji.
"Ladki? Asura nishaan? Coffin?"
Aryan ne Mandir ke darwaze ko dekha.
System ne ek naya notification diya:
[Hidden Quest Detected: The Sleeping Princess.]
[A Royal Asura is sealed inside. She might know about your parents.]
[Choice:]
[A: Open the door (Risk: Extreme).]
[B: Run away (Reward: Safety, but mystery remains unsolved).]
Aryan ne chabi ko taale (lock) mein daala.
"Sorry Diary wale uncle. Main sunta sabki hoon, karta apni hoon."
CLICK.
Taala khula.
Bhaari darwaza Krr-krr karke andar ki taraf khula.
Andar se ek thandi, lekin khushbudar hawa (scented breeze) aayi.
Aryan aur Kaalu andhere mein daakhil hue.

Story flow acha ha
Nice update