Fantasy The Asura System

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Aryan


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Kavya


Vanya

 

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Chapter 24: Teen Shaktiyan aur Shareer ki Hadd



Manas ke jaane ke baad garden mein jo sannata tha, wo kisi toofan se pehle ki shanti jaisi thi. Aryan apne zakhmi kandhe ko dekh raha tha jahan Manas ki aag ne uski skin ko kala kar diya tha.
"System," Aryan ne dheere se kaha, "Healing scan karo."
Ting!
[Scan Complete. Superficial burns detected. Recovery time: 2 hours. Suggestion: Use 'Spirit Frost' energy to neutralize the heat.]
Aryan ne Kavya ki taraf dekha. Kavya wahan khadi thi, uski aankhon mein abhi bhi gussa aur chinta mixed thi.
"Kavya, mujhe tumhari madad chahiye," Aryan ne kaha.
Kavya bina kuch bole aage aayi. Usne apna thanda haath Aryan ke kandhe par rakha. Uske haath se neeli roshni (Ice Qi) nikli aur Aryan ke zakhm se dhuan nikalne laga. Dard turant gayab ho gaya aur wahan nayi skin aane lagi.
Vanya yeh sab dekh rahi thi, usne apne hath cross kiye aur thoda muh banaya. "Theek hai, healing ho gayi. Ab asli kaam shuru karein? Agar humne 'Trinity Resonance' shuru nahi kiya, toh yeh gadha Manas ke pehle hi vaar mein dher ho jayega."
The Trinity Training: Ice, Darkness, and System
Mansion ke sabse niche wale basement mein ek Secret Training Chamber tha. Yahan ki deewarein 'Spirit Suppressing Stones' se bani thin taaki bahar kisi ko pata na chale ki andar kitni energy release ho rahi hai.
Aryan beech mein baitha tha. Uske right side Vanya thi aur left side Kavya.
"Suno," Aryan ne serious hokar kaha. "Humein teenon ki energy ko ek saath ghumana hai. Kavya, tumhari Ice Qi mere dimaag ko shant rakhegi aur body ko overheat hone se bachayegi. Vanya, tumhari Asura Qi meri strength aur meridians ko expand karegi. Aur main... main dono ko control karunga."
Training shuru hui.
Kavya ne Aryan ka baaya (left) haath pakda aur Vanya ne daaya (right).
Step 1: The Clash of Elements
Jaise hi dono ne apni energy release ki, Aryan ka sharir kaanpne laga. Ek taraf se baraf jaisi thandak ghusi aur doosri taraf se ubalte hue tel (boiling oil) jaisi garam Asura energy. Aryan ka chehra pal-pal mein neela aur laal pad raha tha.
"Aryan, focus!" Kavya chillayi. "Apne Dantian ko kholo!"
Step 2: The Breakthrough
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki. Usne dimaag mein System Interface khola.
Ting!
[Warning: Extreme Energy Influx!]
[Do you want to spend 8,000 System Points to activate 'Body Tempering Mode'?]
"YES! Do it now!"
BAM!
Aryan ke shareer se ek sunehri (golden) aur kaali roshni nikli. Uske shareer ki haddiyan chatak-chatak karke tootne aur dubara judne lagin. Yeh dard itna bhayanak tha ki Aryan ke muh se khoon nikalne laga, lekin usne haath nahi chhode.
Vanya ne dekha ki Aryan ki limit khatam ho rahi hai. Usne apna sar Aryan ke kandhe par rakha aur apne andar ki asli Royal Bloodline release kar di. "Aryan, mujhse shakti lo! Har mat maano!"
Kavya ne bhi apni saari Ice energy jhonk di. "Main tumhari aatma ko jalne nahi dungi!"
Step 3: The Evolution
Teenon ki energy ek Whirlpool (Bhanwar) ban gayi. Aryan ke shareer ka kaala keechad (black impurities) uske pores se bahar nikalne laga. Uski skin ab kisi pathar (jade) ki tarah chamak rahi thi. Uski saansein ab kisi aam insaan jaisi nahi, balki ek sote hue dragon jaisi bhaari thin.
Ting!
[Level Up!]
[Stage 2 -> Stage 3...]
[Stage 3 -> Stage 4...]
[Stage 4 -> Stage 5 (Peak)!]
Poore 10 ghante baad, Aryan ne apni aankhein kholi. Uski aankhon mein ek purple ring ban gayi thi jo thodi-thodi chamak rahi thi.
Usne mutthi band ki aur hawa mein ek chota sa mukka maara.
WHOOSH!
Hawa ke dabav (pressure) se saamne wali deewar mein darar aa gayi.
"Stage 5 Peak," Aryan ne muskurate hue kaha. "Aur meri physical strength ab Earth Realm Stage 2 ke barabar hai."
Vanya aur Kavya dono thak kar zameen par gir gayin thin. Dono paseene se bheegi hui thin. Aryan ne dono ko uthaya aur apne seene se laga liya. "Shukriya... tum dono ke bina yeh namumkin tha."
Kavya ne sharma kar sar jhuka liya, lekin Vanya ne Aryan ki gardan par ek halka sa bite (kaat) liya. "Yaad rakhna, yeh udhaar hai. Spirit Spring ke baad... mujhe tumhara poora waqt chahiye."
The Day of the Spirit Spring
Ek mahina beet gaya. Aryan ne baaki waqt apni nayi shaktiyon ko control karne mein bitaya.
Aaj poora Surya Sect saja hua tha. Spirit Spring ek aisi jagah thi jo saal mein sirf ek baar khulti thi. Yeh ek gufa ke andar ka neela jharna tha, jiska paani peene se cultivation ki rukaavatein (bottlenecks) khatam ho jati thin.
Sect Master Suryavansh stage par khade thay. "Aaj ke Tournament mein sirf 8 log hissa lenge. Jo aakhri 3 bachenge, wahi Spirit Spring mein jayenge!"
Bheed mein shor mach gaya jab Manas stage par aaya. Usne Aryan ki taraf dekh kar apni ungli gardan par pheri (kill gesture).
Aryan ne use ignore kiya. Uska pehla match Zora se tha, jo Manas ka sabse khas chamcha (underling) tha aur Stage 9 Spirit Awakening par tha.
"Aryan!" Zora ne stage par koodte hue kaha. "Tu kismat se yahan tak pahunch gaya, lekin aaj tera ye 'Asura' wala naatak main khatam karunga. Stage 5 lekar Stage 9 se ladega? Tu pagal hai!"
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang nikaali. Talwaar ab pehle se zyada kaali aur vishali (deadly) lag rahi thi.
"Zora," Aryan ne thande swar mein kaha. "Level sirf unke liye maayne rakhte hain jinke paas dimaag nahi hota. Mere liye... tu bas ek punching bag hai."
Referee ne haath uthaya. "FIGHT!"
Zora ne turant apni 'Twin Daggers' nikaale aur ek bijli (lightning) ki speed se Aryan ki taraf lapka. "Marr ja!"
Aryan hila tak nahi. Jab daggers uske seene se sirf 1 inch door thay, Aryan ne apni talwaar ghumayi.
"Asura Style: Void Parry!"
CLANG!
Zora ko aisa laga jaise usne kisi pahad par takkar maari ho. Uske dono daggers ke tukde-tukde ho gaye. Aryan ne agle hi pal uski chhati par ek kick maari.
BOOM!
Zora stage se udta hua gaya aur seedha un bheed ke beech gira jo Manas ka support kar rahi thi. Wo ek hi vaar mein behosh ho gaya.
Poora stadium khamosh ho gaya. Ek Stage 5 ne Stage 9 ko 10 second mein hara diya?
Aryan ne apni talwaar saaf ki aur Manas ki taraf dekha.
"Next," Aryan ne shanti se kaha.
Manas ke chehre par se muskaan gayab ho gayi. Usne apni mutthi itni zor se bhinchi ki usme se khoon nikalne laga. "Theek hai... tu meri baari ka intezaar kar. Main tujhe itni dardnaak maut dunga ki tera System bhi tujhe bacha nahi payega."
Aryan ne mann mein socha, "System, Manas ki power level analyze karo."
Ting!
[Target: Manas]
[Rank: Earth Realm Stage 1 (Peak)]
[Note: He is hiding a secret weapon. Probability of him using poison: 70%.]
"Poison, huh?" Aryan muskuraya. "Lagta hai Kaalu ko aaj ek naya flavor chakne ko milega."

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[Shankar Kumar]

Chapter 23: Asura Heart-Link aur Naya Dushman




Aryan mansion ke piche wale garden mein baitha tha, jahan thandi hawa chal rahi thi. Kaalu (Dragon) paas hi ek chattan par dhoop senk raha tha.
"System, mera status check karo," Aryan ne dimaag mein command diya.
Ting!
[Host Profile]
* Name: Aryan
* Rank: Spirit Awakening - Stage 1 (Initial)
* Experience: 1,200/5,000 (To reach Stage 2)
* Current State: Mental Fatigue (Zaroorat se zyada harem drama).
"Sirf Stage 1?" Aryan ne thandi saans li. "Manas jaise log jo Inner Sect mein hain, wo Earth Realm par honge. Mujhe apni speed badhani hogi."
Tabhi piche se ek meethi aur thodi ghamandi awaaz aayi.
"Sirf meditation karne se kuch nahi hoga, mere 'Pati Dev'."
Vanya chalti hui aayi. Usne aaj ek purani Asura-style ki dress pehni thi jo kaale aur sunehre (gold) rang ki thi. Uski purple aankhein suraj ki roshni mein chamak rahi thin.
"Vanya, tum yahan?"
"Main tumhe ek aisi technique sikhane aayi hoon jo mere clan mein sirf 'Royal Couples' ko sikhayi jati hai," Vanya ne Aryan ke bilkul paas baithte hue kaha. "Ise kehte hain—'Asura Heart-Link Resonance'."
Asura Heart-Link: Double Cultivation ka Raaz
Vanya ne samjhaya ki yeh koi aam training nahi hai. Isme do logo ko apni aatma (soul) aur 'Qi' ko ek-doosre ke saath sync karna hota hai.
"Aryan, mere haath pakdo aur apni aankhein band karo," Vanya ne hukm diya.
Aryan ne uske naram aur thande haath pakde. Jaise hi unki ungliyan judi, ek bijli ka jhatka Aryan ke pure shareer mein dauda.
"Ab apni 'Asura Qi' ko mere shareer mein bhejo, aur main apni energy tumhare andar bhejungi. Humein ek 'Circle' (chakra) banana hai."
Aryan ne waisa hi kiya.
* Phase 1: Aryan ki garam, raw energy Vanya ki meridians mein ghusi.
* Phase 2: Vanya ki thandi, ancient energy Aryan ke Dantian (energy center) mein wapis aayi.
Dono ka shareer hawa mein thoda upar uthne laga. Aryan ko aisa laga jaise uske dimaag ke saare band darwaze khul rahe hain. Vanya ki memories ka ek chota sa hissa use dikha—bade-bade yudh, udte hue mahal, aur uske parents ka ek dhundhla sa saya.
Ting!
[Alert: Heart-Link Resonance successful!]
[Experience Gained: +1000]
[Spirit Awakening Stage 1 -> Stage 2 (Early)!]
Sirf ek ghante ki practice mein Aryan Stage 2 par pahunch gaya!
"Uff..." Aryan ne aankhein kholi. Uska chehra laal tha aur wo haanf raha tha. Vanya bhi thodi thaki hui lag rahi thi, uski aankhon mein ek alag hi chamak thi.
"Yeh toh kamaal hai," Aryan ne kaha.
"Yeh toh bas shuruat hai," Vanya ne uske gaal par haath phera. "Lekin yaad rakhna, yeh jitna sukoon deta hai, utna hi khatarnak bhi hai agar focus hata toh."
The Rival: Manas ki Entry
Aryan aur Vanya abhi baatein kar hi rahe thay ki garden ka darwaza kisi ne zor se thokar maarke khola.
Wahan ek lamba ladka khada tha. Usne safed silk ki robe pehni thi aur uske haath mein ek chamakti hui sunehri talwaar thi. Uska aura itna bhari tha ki garden ke phool murjhane lage.
Yeh tha Manas. Inner Sect ka Rank 2 disciple aur Earth Realm - Stage 1 ka expert.
"Toh... yehi wo kooda (trash) hai jisne Kavya ko behlaya-phuslaya hai?" Manas ki awaaz mein zehar tha.
Aryan khada hua, Shadow Fang uske haath mein apne aap aa gayi. "Tu kaun hai bey? Aur darwaza kholne ka tameez nahi hai kya?"
Manas ne gusse mein apni talwaar taan di. "Main Manas hoon. Kavya ka mangetar (fiancé) banne wala tha main, jab tak tune uske dimaag mein kachra nahi bhara. Maine suna hai tu Level 2 par hai aur Vikram ko haraya? Vikram mere saamne ek bacha hai."
Aryan ne dekha ki Manas ki power sach mein zyada thi. Earth Realm ka matlab hai ki wo gravity ko halka sa control kar sakta tha.
"Kavya ne toh kabhi tera naam bhi nahi liya," Aryan ne aag mein ghee dala. "Shayad tu uske liye kisi side-character se zyada kuch nahi hai."
"TU MARREGA!"
Manas ne apni talwaar hawa mein ghumayi.
"Heavenly Sun Slash!"
Ek bada sa aag ka gola Aryan ki taraf badha. Aryan ne Void Shadow Step use karke side mein hone ki koshish ki, lekin Manas ki speed bohot zyada thi. Aag ke gole ne Aryan ke kandhe ko halka sa jhulas (burn) diya.
"Ugh!" Aryan piche hata.
"Aryan, hato!" Vanya aage badhne wali thi, lekin Aryan ne use rok diya.
"Nahi Vanya. Yeh mera Sect hai, aur yeh mera muqabla hai. Agar main aaj isse darr gaya, toh main Spirit Spring mein kabhi survive nahi kar paunga."
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang ko zor se pakda. Usne Heart-Link se mili hui Vanya ki bachi-kuchi energy ko apni talwaar mein focus kiya. Shadow Fang ki blade kaali se Purple chamakne lagi.
"Asura Sword Art: Dark Moon Devour!"
Dono ki talwarein takrayi.
BOOOOOM!
Dhamaka itna zor ka tha ki poore mansion ki khidkiyan toot gayin. Aryan 20 feet piche ghista chala gaya, lekin Manas bhi apni jagah se 5 kadam piche hata.
Manas hairan tha. "Ek Spirit Awakening wale ne mujhe... Earth Realm ko piche dhakela? Kaise?!"
Tabhi wahan Kavya aa gayi. Usne apne haath se ek barf ki diwar khadi kar di dono ke beech.
"Bas karo Manas!" Kavya chillayi. "Aryan mera dost hai. Tum yahan tamasha nahi kar sakte."
Manas ne Kavya ko dekha, fir Aryan ko ghurra. "Theek hai. Aaj Sect ke rules tujhe bacha rahe hain, Aryan. Lekin Spirit Spring ke tournament mein... wahan koi rule nahi hota. Main tujhe wahan zinda gaad dunga."
Manas wahan se chala gaya, lekin uski aura ne Aryan ko bata diya tha ki asli ladai ab shuru hone wali hai.
Status Check & Preparation
Kavya Aryan ke paas aayi, chinta mein. "Tum theek ho? Manas bohot pagal hai, wo Inner Sect ke Elder ka beta hai."
Aryan ne apna zakhmi kandha pakda aur muskuraaya. "Main theek hoon. Lekin mujhe samajh aa gaya... Spirit Awakening Stage 2 kaafi nahi hai. Mujhe kam se kam Stage 7 ya 8 par hona hoga agar mujhe Manas ko dhool chatani hai."
Vanya paas aayi aur Aryan ka haath pakad liya. "Humein humari 'training' aur tez karni hogi, Aryan. Aaj raat... hum 3 ghante resonance karenge."
Kavya ne Vanya ka haath jhatak diya. "3 ghante? Main bhi yahan hoon! Main bhi Aryan ko training mein madad kar sakti hoon. Mere paas Ice Core hai."
Aryan ne dono ko dekha. Ek taraf Asura Princess, doosri taraf Ice Queen.
"Chalo... dono milkar mujhe train karo. Lekin please, ladna mat."



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