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Thriller THE BODYGUARD (Completed)

Who would you like to see as arjun's love interest??

  • Sonam

    Votes: 63 67.0%
  • Vaishali

    Votes: 9 9.6%
  • Divya

    Votes: 15 16.0%
  • Anika

    Votes: 34 36.2%

  • Total voters
    94

Swaraj

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Bilkul sir agent ki story samjh lijiye ek lesson ho mere liye bahut kuch sikha h usse aur apna dream bhi arjun wala h to aisi hi story pasand h mujhe jisme insan ke
intelligence ka role sabse jyada ho
Thanks bro
Arjun ke palle aisi ladki aayegi jisko protect karna hoga use.
Lekin aise jungli ladki ko kaise protect karega wahi dekhna hai
Saath rahiye arjun ka adventure shuru hua hai bas
 
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kamdev99008 ji is story ka review bhi de dijiye
स्वराज भाई ...........अभी इस कहानी को पढ्ना शुरू नहीं किया है.................
अभी जिन कहानियों को पढ़ रहा हूँ.............उनमें कुछ छंटनी करके आपकी इस कहानी को भी शुरू करूंगा

ज्यादा कहानियों को पढ़ने के चक्कर में अपना अपडेट भी 8-10 दिन में दे पता हूँ...आजकल
 

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FLASHBACK

"hello madam" Arjun daudte hue aaya inayat je paas

"boliye" inayat ne dheere se kaha apna dupatta thik karte hue

"aapne kaise Keh diya ki mai NDA ke layak nahi hoon??" Arjun ne kamar me haath rakhte hue poocha

Inayat has padi

"kyunki is institution ka koi aise mazak nahi udata, aap ko mauka mila hai kyunki aap ladke hai. Mai chakar bhi nahi a sakti isme. Kyunki NDA sirf ladkon ke liye hai ladki ke liye nahi" inayat boli

"kya matlab??" Arjun bola

"mai yahan apne ek rishtedar ke saath aayi thi jiska beta select ho gaya hai. Lekin indian army, mai join hokar dikahungi" inayat ki awaz sakht ho uthi
Meethi si zubaan itni sakhti ke saath bol uthi ki Arjun bhi hil gaya

"khair, ho sake to is institute ka Maan rakhiye aur ek Behtareen insan bankar dikayiye" bol inayat chali gayi

Aur is tarah arjun aur inayat ki Pehli mulakat hui

NDA me arjun taur tarike seekha raha army ka aur apni padhai bhi poori karta raha

"congrats abhi" Vikram khane ke Waqt apne bade bete se bol uthe
Abhimanyu ka promotion hua tha

"Thanks papa lekin ab transfer Delhi ho rahi hai so, mai ab Saath nahi reh paunga" abhimanyu bola

"is ghar me to koi rehta hi nahi Saath, na ye rehte hai, na meri bahu rehti hai, na ajju rehta hai bas ab shreya se hi thodi bohut baat hoti hai" Mrs puri shikayat karte hue boli

Shreya kahin khoyi hui thi apne yaadon me
Isliye use mrs puri ki awaz sunai nahi di. Lekin arjun jaanta tha kuch to gadbad hai jijaji aur didi ke beech. Didi se do saal Chote jijaji itne bure nahi hai jitna shreya didi dikhati rehti hai lekin is maamle me wo kuch na hi bole to acha hai

"waise arjun NDA to ho gaya ab aage kya karna hai??" nidhi bol uthi
Nidhi puri, abhimanyu ki mrs jo Indian air force me pilot bhi hai

"bhabhi socha.... C commando training karna hai" Arjun sar jhukakar bola

"commando training ke baare me Jaante ho arjun??" Mr puri bol uthe

Arjun chup raha. Sab chupchap khane lage

"36 ghante bina soye bina kuch dhang ka khaye piye trail dena hota hai usme sab ki fat jaati hai. Aadhe to opt out kar lete hai. Bache hue ko select kiya Jaata Hai. Fir 9-12 mahine ki training jisme aadmi ek commando banta hai
Kar paoge wo sab??" bol uthe Mr puri

Arjun na khana chod uth gaya aur apne haath dho liye

" aap aisa kyun karte hai papa?? Dekhiye kaise uthkar chala gaya"is baar shreya boli

"to ab tu lecture degi mujhe jo apna sasural chod yahan aayi hui hai, na anirban se koi baat na koi message. Kya hua wo tak nahi bolti" bol Mr puri uthkar chale gaye

Shreya bhi gusse se uth gayi

Aur isi ke saath Mrs puri, abhimanyu aur nidhi bhi uth gaye kisi ne khana nahi khaya
Tha aaj
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Subah ke saade teen baje arjun aur Baaki 22 trainees line me khade the

"pehle 10 kilometers ki daud come on" trainer ke bolte hi sab trainee daudne lage
Zyada mehnat to nahi thi lekin bina neend ke thak se gaye the

Ab fir se chalna tha lekin is baar kuch alag tha

Pehle 20 kilo ke Jerry cans uthaya usne 2 kilometer tak

Fir 40 kilo ke tyres uthkar chalne laga 2 kilometer

Fir aakhir me 80 kilo ke ped ke logs lekar chalne laga wo

Dhoop nikal chuki thi aur pyasa aur bhookha thak kar choor ho gaya tha wo. Lekin baar baar use Mr puri yaad a raha tha

Fir death by drowning
Yani ek bade se pani ki jagah me baa utna hi oxygen dena jitna zaroori ho
5 log bahar nikal gaye
Bache the 18 log

"ab wahi Paani piyo jisse nahaye the, agar pyaas lagi ho to" trainer ke sakh awaz me sabhi usi Paani ko peene lage

"MUSHKIL WAQT" trainer chillaya

"commando sakht" sabhi dheele hokar bole

"I COULDN'T HEAR YOU" trainer chillaya

"MUSHKIL WAQT" trainer fir chillaya

"COMMANDO SAKHT" sabhi bache hue trainees bole

Fir se 10 kilometer ki daud aur ab bas Jaan bachi nahi thi. Neend aur thakan tod kar rakh rahi thi trainees ko

Exam ka Waqt tha to pareshan karne ke liye music aur dhol aur baja bajakar disturb kiya Jaane laga sabko

Usme se 7 nikal gaye
Bache the 11 aur 11 aage badhne lage

Combat ka time tha aur un logo ko warfare ki training ke liye liya gaya
Na khana na Paani na neend, sabka mind disturb hone laga aur yahi Waqt tha test karne ka inko
Inka mental strength inka physical fitness aur decision making ability

War me dushmano ko maarna aur unke thikano ko udana fir rwng kar kantile raasto se hokar apne dost ki Jaan bachana
Kyunki koi saathi chootna nahi chahiye

3 logo ne fir Saath chod diya aur ab sirf 7 bache the.

"ab hum reng kar apne spot par jayenge jahan shuru kiya tha hamne" trainer bola aur fir rengte hue kareeb 5 kilometer ke baad trainer ne seeti bajai

"kismat se zyada kis par yakeen karoge" colonel ne sase poocha

"apne aap par sir" sab bol uthe

"I congratulate all of you for clearing commando obstacle trail" colonel muskurate hue bola

"COMMANDOOOOOOOO" sab bol uthe aur apne awaz se poora jungle hila diya unhone

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PARA SF REGIMENT
Arjun Kareeb 2 din tak soya us trail ke baad
7 me se 2 ki ghatak me aur 3 ki special forces me transfer mila tha jabki arjun sur ek trainee ko yahan mila tha

"shatrujeet" ek awaz ne chaunka diya arjun ko

"major aneesh menon" muskurate hue bola wo shaks

"s sir lieutenant arjun puri" Arjun ne salute kiya

"report to major shabbir, lekin dhyan rahe. He is one of the most unfriendly person in this regiment" bol haste hue major aneesh chala gaya

Kitna bura hoga yaar, kam se kam uske baap jitna to nahi hoga??

Arjun ka ye bhram bohut jald door hone wala tha
Fabulous update bhai
 
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स्वराज भाई ...........अभी इस कहानी को पढ्ना शुरू नहीं किया है.................
अभी जिन कहानियों को पढ़ रहा हूँ.............उनमें कुछ छंटनी करके आपकी इस कहानी को भी शुरू करूंगा

ज्यादा कहानियों को पढ़ने के चक्कर में अपना अपडेट भी 8-10 दिन में दे पता हूँ...आजकल
Samajh sakta hoon bro
Take your time
 

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"firing toli salami shastra" chillaya gaya

Aur insas rifles uth gaye haathon me, bigul baj gaya aur wo dhun koi shaurya dhun nahi thi
Thi gam aur udasi ki dhun, apne saathi ko khone ki dhun

GHAI GHAI GHAI GHAI

bandookon ne salami di, lekin shayad kam pad gayi, shaheedon ke samman ke liye ye sachmuch kam thi

"salami toli, shok shastra"
Bandook jhuk gayi aur wapas neeche chali gayi sabhi army men ke jo wahan funeral drill me the

Baarish tez ho rahi thi, Eid ka din tha aaj aur aaj hi ke din kabristan me mitti nasib ho rahi thi ek khush kismat ko
Shayad khuda ka pyara banda tha

Arjun wahi khada tha, sab kuch uske Saamne ho raha tha, sab kuch uske Saamne hua tha jab uske Saamne shaheed hua tha major shabbir khan

"khali kar"

Fir se Bandook ki awaazein aur poore ke poore insas rifles ke magazines ko khali kiya gaya

"baju rakh"

Bandook wapas apne jagah ho gaye

Noor bhabhi roye ja rahi thi aur mushkil se khadi thi. Salute kar rahi thi apne shahid shauhar ko

Arjun ne dekha noor bhabhi ki aur, shayad abhi aur rona hai unko. Pyaar jo karti thi apne pati se
Imran chota hai abhi. Shayad use pata bhi nahi ki uske papa ne kaise 6 terrorist ko apne Bandook se udaya hai

Doosre din arjun ne major shabbir ki uniform li aur noor ko dene ke liye taiyyar hua. Lekin noor arjun ko dekhkar apne aap ko rone se na rok saki

Uniform liye khada arjun jaise hi noor ke Saamne aaya wo fafak fafak kar ro padi

"mujhe mera pati wapas la do bhaiyya" noor rote hue boli aur rote hue baith gayi aur arjun ke pair pakad liye usne

"tumhe un sabhi lamhon ka wasta, us rakhi ka wasta jo maine tumhari kalai par baandh thi, please bhaiyya mere pati ko wapas la do, mai jee nahi paungi unke bina" noor ko do army walo ne uthaya aur le gaye jabki arjun but bankar khada tha, ro bhi nahi sakta tha wo
Kiske liye rota wo??? Apne senior aur bade bhai shabbir khan ke shahadat par rota ya rota inayat ke shahid hone par

Uska sab kuch cheen gaya ek jhatke me us din

"sir" army ke ek Lance naik ne arjun se wo uniform le liye
Lekin fir bhi arjun wahi khada raha
Jaise pathhar ka ban gaya ho.
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Subah ki chai ki chuski lete hue do log baithe the aaj 10 para sf ke heavily guard jungle ke area me

"Vikram dekh mai ek major general ke haisiyat se nahi ya samdhi hone ke wajah se nahi balki ek dost hone ki wajah se bol raha hoon, apne bete ko samajh warna der na ho jaye" praveen kumar ne vikram puri ke kandhe par haath rakhte hye bola

Colonel puri chupchap apne chai ki pyali par chammach se sugar ko milane laga

"mai wahi soch Raha hoon sir, short tempered hai aur apta nahi kyun lekin Indian army shayad uske liye hai hi nahi" Vikram puri soch me doob gaye

"operation was successful Vikram no doubt about it lekin. Casualties bhi hui hai
Hamara ek honhar major shaheed hua hai, aur Saath me wo ladki inayat wo bhi kamal ki thi.im amazed itni choti umra me uski maturity dekhne layak thi" praveen bola

"Haan sir, us ladki ki maturity arjun ke. Mukable dugni thi, arjun se har field me excel karti thi, agar aaj hamare Saath hoti to shayad arjun aur wo shaadi bhi kar lete lekin..." bolte bolte ruk gaye vikram
Dard chehre par dukh raha hai. Praveen ne aur bolna thik nahi samjha

" thik hai mai chalta hoon Vikram"praveen uthkar khada hua

Tabhi call aya vikram puri ke phone par

"jai hind bolo" Vikram me phone uthakar jawab diya

Lekin uske baad jo suna vikram ne use sunte hi chair se uthakar khada ho gaya

"WHAT???" Vikram chillaya

"kya hua??" praveen ne poocha

"Arjun ek ak 47 aur magazine ke saath gayab hai" Vikram ne praveen ko bola to uske haath se chai ki cup gir gayi sunkar
Excellent start...............
 
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Army base se 100 Km door
1AM
"arey Arshad,bhai khana kha le. Kya mast biryani bani hai" ek aadmi apna gun lekar doosre aadmi ke Paas aaya jiske Paas bhi ek gun thi

"machhar bohut hei dekh le, ye keechad aur ye ped jitne bade bade ghaas..... Uff.... Commander ne kya kaha yahan se Jaane ke baare me??" doosra aadmi bola

"pata nahi lekin un army walo ko machhar ki tarah maarne ke baad mujhe bada maza a raha hai, kya jaal banaya tha aur wo jaal me fans gaye the" pehla aadmi bola

"thik hai thik hai chal mai Jaata hoon, tu zara dhyan de yahan. Itne army walo ke shahadat par chup nahi rahegi army" doosra aadmi bola aur chala gaya

Tabhi ek ghaas gira aur doosre aadmi ne apni Bandook waha taan di

"hata yaar be matlab ka dara diya" bol wo peeche Mudd gaya

"jo bhi bolo aaj biryani Wakai mast THBBBBBBBBBBBB BBBBBBBBBB"

Kisi ke mazboot keechad se sane haathon ne us aadmi ka Muh band kiya tha aur uske samajhne se pehle hi

KHACHHHHHHH

gale ko slice karta chala gaya uske keechad se sana hue chaku

Arjun ne apni chaku ko saaf kiya aur apne aankhon ko bhi
Ek Ped ke aad me chup gaya arjun
Apne ak 47 me ek silencer fit kiya ar magazine set karne ke baad single shot fire me set karne ke baad ped ki aad se apne bag se binocular nikal kar Saamne banaye tent ko dekhne laga
Apne watch ko ek ghante ka set kiya usne
Night vision se dekhne ke baad binocular wapas bag me rakh diya aur bag ko ped me taang kar rengna shuru kar diya

Kuch door Jaane par do guards ki aur nishana banaya aur

CHUM CHUM

THAP THAP

laashen gir gayi aur arjun uthkar daudkar tent ke Paas gaya
Apne ak 47 ko load kiya aur tent ki a rahi awaz ko sunne laga
Tent ne bane chote se ched se thoda bohut dikh raha tha

Hasne ki awaazein a rahi thi
"bhai hamne hamare mujahid ko marne walo se badla le liya hai goud sahab, aapka paisa aapke bank account me pohunch jayega" kaale kapdo me hatta katta aadmi bola

"lekin mera yahan aana kya sahi hai bilal bhai, agar kisi ne dekh liya to??" shayad koi political neta hoga
Dekhte hi pehchaan gaya arjun. Ye to opposition party ka devesh goud hai. Ye yahan kya kar raha hai

"hamne ek major aur ek lieutenant aur teen Lance Naik ko udaya hai, ek jashn to banta hai" bol us hatte katte aadmi ne taali bajai aur ek bohut hi chote short aur t shirt ko apne seene me baandhkar ek ladki matakte hue aayi tent ke ander

Sunahre baal wali ladki muskurate hue aayi aur neta ji ke god me baith gayi

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"wah.." goud ki aankhen chamak uthi aur wo us ladki ke kamar me haath de baitha

"ouch halke se dabaiye na neta ji" ladki ne goud ke thode bohut baal jo bache the unhe choote hue bola



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"enjoy kijiye neta ji mai abhi aaya" bol bilal us tent se chala gaya

Arjun bhi waha se nikal kar chala gaya aur rengte hue bachte hue har tent ne rdx lagakar sab ka connection ek connector se lagakar apne ghadi ki aur dekha

Abhi bhi 15 minute bacha tha. Arjun ne apni ungli trigger se haakar side me kar li aur wait karne laga

Kuch awazein sunai di yani sabko pata chal gaya hai ki koi ghus gaya hai ander

Arjun ne connector ko daba diya

DHADAMMMM DHAMMMMMMM. BAMMMMMMMM BHADAMMMMMM

parkhachhe udd gaye sabhi tents ke aur jale hue terrorists bahar bhagne lage

Arjun neta ji ke tent me laat maarkar ghusa

Goud aur wo ladki raas leela me busy the
Arjun ko dekhte hi neta ji kaampne lage

"t tum koun ho, dekho mai opposition ka ek naami leader hoon mujhe kuch hua to bach nahi paoge, apne colonel ko phone lagao ya koi afsar ho to use bulao" Goud nanga hi bol utha

CHUM CHUM

do goliyan Goud ke pair me lagi

"AHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, MAAR DIYA RE" Goud cheekh utha

"meri dushmani tumse nahi hai, chupchap nikal lo, yahan sabki kabr banegi" Arjun ne ladki se kaha to ladki apna hont kaatne lagi

"kai mard dekhe lekin aisa nahi, apna kaam khatam karke a jana tere liye wait karungi" ladki boli to arjun ne Paas pade hue kapde us ladki ki aur fenk diye aur Goud ki aur dekhkar bola

"tu tab tak nahi marega jab tak sabko upar ba pohuncha doon" bol arjun waha se nikal gaya aur Goud Dard se rone laga

Ladki muskurai aur apna phone nikal kar kisi ko phone karne lagi

"dekho jo ghusa hai use uda do bhaagne na paaye" bilal chilla utha

CHUM CHUM CHUM CHUM

Arjun sabko thokte ja raha tha aur apna silencer nikal kar fenkne ke baad repeat shot se hata diya tha apne ak 47 ko

RATATATATATATATATATATATA

terrorist gajar muli ki tarah kat rahe the

KHAT KHAT

magazine khatam ho chuki thi, teen magazine khali kar diye the usne aur ab to barrel bhi garm ho chuki thi uske AK 47 ki
Ak 47 ko fenk kar usne apna pistol liya aur.

DHAMM DHAMM DHAMM DHAMM

"are koi to maro use, akela khatam kiye ja raha hai sabko" bilal bola achanak bilal ko arjun dikh gaya aur wo chori chupe arjun ki aur gaya aur ek chalan lagai usne

DHADDD

Arjun ko lekar gir gaya bilal aur

DHAD DHAD DHAD

mukko ki barsaat karne laga arjun par aur isi dauran arjun ka poora muh khoon se laal ho gaya
.arjun shant pada raha
Aur Bilal uth gaya

"uth uth kamine, aaj teri arthi bhi waise uthaunga jaise un commandos ka uthaya tha, uth" bilal ke bolte hi arjun uth gaya aur bilal ke samajhne se pehle apne kamar me bandha chaku nikal liya usne aur baithe hi daaye haath se chaku ko modkar bilal ke dono pair ke peeche ka basa nas Kaat hia

KHACHH KHACHH

Fir ghoom kar arjun ne uske reed ki haddi ko apne kohni se tod doya

CRACK KKK

Chillane ki haalat me bhi nahi tha bilal. Jaise sunn ho gaya tha wo

Tabhi boot ki awazon se poora area bhar gaya
Para sf ke ek daste ne poore area ko gher liya aur sabki Bandook arjun ki aur tan gayi

Arjun sab kuch dekh raha tha lekin usne bilal ko choda nahi
Jabki arjun ke giraft me pada bilal ki Jaan me Jaan a gayi
Ab wo bach jayega

"Arjun don't do this, you are not a civilian damn it you are one of the best commandos major shabbir ne taiyyar kiya" major aneesh menon bola

"don't do this?? Sir major shabbir shahid hua, mera pyaar shahid hui wo kuch nahi tha sir?? Baki ke jo saathi the wo??" Arjun ne bilal ko apne giraft se abhi bhi azad nahi kiya tha

"to fir itna baaton me kyun Waqt barbaad kar rahe ho, khatam kyun nahi kar dete ise" major menon bola

sabki Bandook ein jhuk gayi aur isi ke saath

KHACHHHHHHH

"ye major shabbir ke liye" Arjun bola apne muh se khoon saaf karte hue

Bilal ka sharir zameen me gir gaya

"mujhe... Mujhe bacha lijiye ye ye Pagal ho gaya hai" rengte hue Goud aakar bola

"Arjun ise kya hua??" menon ne poocha to arjun ne sab bol diya

"ye shubh kaam khud hi karo"menon bola
Aur apna ak 47 thama diya arjun ko
Load kiya arjun ne

RATATATATATATATATA

chalni chalni ho gaya Goud ka sharir

" ye mere inayat ke liye"bol arjun ke haath se ak 47 gir gayi aur wo baith gaya

"PARA SF COMMANDOS LETS HEAR OUR WARCRY" menon dahad utha

"SHATRUJEET" sab commandos ek Saath bol uthe

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Court MARTIAL
"sir" salute karte hue aneesh menon vikram puri ke office me ghusa

"bolo aneesh" Vikram bina aneesh ko dekhe apna papers ready karte hue bole

"sir.... Arjun ek honhar ladka hai" aneesh bola

"pata hai, aur kuch" Vikram bola

"sir, akele ek poore terrorist camp ko akele barbaad karna koi mamooli kaam nahi hai, sabse best trainee tha commando school ka aur nda me inayat ke baad koi aur tha to wo arjun hi tha, please sir aisa koi kadam na uthayen ki us bachhe ka future barbaad ho jaaye"aneesh bola

"jo nyay sangat hoga wahi kiya jayega aneesh, indian army kisi ki private property nahi ki jiska man kare wo Bandook lekar logo ko maarta fire. Higher command ko respect karna aur usko follow karna nda me hi sikhaya jata hai, tumhe pata hona chahiye IMA se tum bhi Padhkar aaye ho"vikram bole to aneesh chup hokar sar jhukaye khada raha

"khair tum jao mai ise ready karta hoon. Aaj arjun ko 12 :00 baje ready hone ke liye bola dena

" sir"aneesh ne fir salute mara aur office se nikal gaya
Aur hall me ja pohuncha jahan arjun baitha hua tha

"12:00 baje hai tumhari sunwai" bol kandhe par haath rakhkar aneesh chala gaya

Court martial. Kyunki army, Air force aur navy me yahi hota hai. Police nahi balki army khud faisla Leti hai aur aaj faisla hone wala tha arjun ka

Arjun wait karne laga apne sunwai ka aur samay ke ateet me chala gaya aankh moondkar
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FLASHBACK

Arjun apna bag lekar academy me hazir hua aur apne papers dekar apne hostel ki aur Jaane laga

"wow yaar nda is cool"arjun ne apne Smart phone se apna selfy lena shuru kar diya

" langoor ke haath me angoor"bol ek ladki waha se nikal gayi

"what the.... Hey kise langoor Keh rahi hai tu?? Do you know who I am??" Arjun gusse se bola

"I don't care who you are, but you don't deserve nda" ladki ne mudkar kaha to arjun ne dekha ki ek bohut khoobsurat ladki uske Saamne khadi thi

"inayat khan, Naam yaad rakhna" bol wo ladki waha se chali gayi aur arjun dekhta raha
Nice writing............
 
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