Romance The boy's life

[Riky007]

Congratulations Yasasvi1 for new thread .


आशा है कहानी आपकी तरह ही मजेदार होगी।

 

[parkas]

Update 1

Subha subha ki dhop khli khli si thi... jo sidhe na aake us railway station pe tirchi pad rahi thi...
Aas pass me hariyali charo or faili thi...mosam me ghuli halki si thand kal raat hi hui barish ki gawahi de rahi thi ...
Us sation per ek malgadi khadi thi or subha ki phali tarin aane wali thi...
Samay tha lagbhag sabke ghar se nikalne ka satition per kafi yatri khade the or wait kar rahe the apni tarin ke aane ka...
Kafi shor sharaba or subha ki thand ne mahol kafi aacha bana rakha tha warna aaj ke time me log ek dusre ko dekhna pasand na kare ...
Asa time me logo ka yu apno ke sath beth kar train ka wait karna apne aap me ek annad ka anubhaw ha jo aaj ke time pe mil pana thoda muskil h...
Asa mahol me aachanak logo ka dharyan ek or jata ha ek or ke logo ko sunta ha...
"yara bare yara bare bol na kude phaliyan we es gallo shadiyya . ghar aale karan di ta life goriye yara di yaari te deepnd kardi"...(Na Na Na - Karan aujla )
log be like - kon ha ye chmu......bsdika rajasthan me Punjab sun raha h .
per agle hi pal jese unhone uski tarf dekha...cho...yahi atak jati h baat...
Kuki ladka black jens pink shrt black mask me ladka plus jutte normal hi the per

ye getup usko ek mast look de raha tha asa nahi h ladka khubsurt tha bhot per ye time or situation ke according handsome to lag raha tha
Na keval ladkiyon ko ladke bhi ghoor rahe the kuki unhone phala isko kabhi dekha nahi tha ...
But wo yaha se roj jata tha....per khate hana station wahi hota ha yatri badal jate h..
Per wo kisi ki bhi trf na dhyan dete
Or wo bas apni dhun me chala ja raha tha na kisi ki trf dekh raha tha na soch raha tha kuki uske man me chal raha tha log kya soch rahe honge kitna chutiya ha ye ladka... "aacha ha mene mask phana ha warna sakal dekh ke shyad koi mih pe bol jata"....asa bolke wo apne balo me hath ghumaata ha jo kafi resmi the
Or ek aache look ko justify karte the ...or wesa bhi ye baal itne bade or itne aache asa hi nahi the in ballo ko rakhne ke liya kiitna stugle karna padta ha aap ye sirf wo ladka hi janata tha ek sarkari adhikari ka beta hoke bade baal rakhana ...amir hokr garibo ko dil se khana dene wala jesi baat h..jo ki bhot muskil se hota h

Dhire dhire usne dono side maalgadi ke dabbo ke bich hath rakha or zoom karke kuda maalgadi ke bich se per itne me aawaz aai....khatak...khat ...khat khat...jo ki maal gaadi ke chalte time hoti ha ladka ghabara gaya ...per sukar h ye uske kudne ke baad hua...fir usne line paar kari or ptri paar karke wo aata ha

Ek bade se gate ke saamne us se just phala wo ek jagha apne hath jodke aaya tha.....






Wo kha aaya tha ku aaya tha or kya tha uska maksad usne kiske aage hath jode ye jannenge next update me

Aap apna keemati voot...soory comment ...sorry apna review...soory apni ray jarur de ki kesi lagi ...
Or baki jesa me phala bata chuki hu sabkuch unexpected hone wala ha ..

Nice and beautiful starting of the story....

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Congratulations for your 1st story Yasasvi1 madam.
Starting dekh kar lagta hai Nayak kisi chote Sahar ya gaon me kisi khas maqsad se aaya hai. Aur aisa bhi lagta hai ki aapki ye story romance ke saath saath thriller bhi hogi.

1st update badhiya likha aapne. Keep writing.
Update was outstanding & Amazing.

 

[Yasasvi1]

First of all for your new story..
Aur jaan ke achha laga ki hum laundo ki life pe bhi koi story likh raha hai..
Secondly story kabhi bhi start karna to ye soch ke kabhi mat karna ye story mai readers ke liye likh rahi hu.. humesha ye sochna story mai apne khud ke liye likh rahi hu..kyonki at the end ye soch ke likhogi ki ye story readers ke liye likh rahi ho to kuch specific time period ke baad interest apne aap khatam ho jaata h..
To jab bhi likho ye soch ke likho ye story meri h aur mai apne khud ke liye likh rahi hu..
Baaki aagle update ki pratiksha rahegi..

Apke sare suggestion dhyan me rakhungi and ha thodi hi der me update aayaga and thanks for the compliment and suggestion

 

[Yasasvi1]

for new story
Finally laundo ke liye aaya kuch

Ha ye to h..

Jabi bhi aaye mere ko tag maar dena bas

Wait bas edit karna ha likh chuki hu bas update hoga kuch der me

 

[Yasasvi1]

Congratulations Yasasvi1 for new thread .


आशा है कहानी आपकी तरह ही मजेदार होगी।

meri trh ka pta nahi baki apni tarf se kosis karungi kuki is khani ka koi perpalaned seen nahi jo h aaj ka taza h

 

[Yasasvi1]

Nice and beautiful starting of the story....

Thanks a lot sir update in few minutes

 

[Yasasvi1]

Congratulations for your 1st story Yasasvi1 madam.
Starting dekh kar lagta hai Nayak kisi chote Sahar ya gaon me kisi khas maqsad se aaya hai.

Shayd ha or aapke is swal ka jawab shyad is update me mil jaye

Aur aisa bhi lagta hai ki aapki ye story romance ke saath saath thriller bhi hogi.

1st update badhiya likha aapne. Keep writing.
Update was outstanding & Amazing.

 

[Yasasvi1]

Update 2

Dhire dhire usne dono side maalgadi ke dabbo ke bich hath rakha or zoom karke kuda maalgadi ke bich se per itne me aawaz aai....khatak...khat ...khat khat...jo ki maal gaadi ke chalte time hoti ha ladka ghabara gaya ...per sukar h ye uske kudne ke baad hua...fir usne line paar kari or ptri paar karke.....

Station se nikalte hi kuch door chalte hi raste me h uska gha.... soory sorry ek bada sa darwaza.. or wo us darwaze per likhe name ko dekhta h or bolta ha

Hush...pahuch gaya..chal bhai yash ..chalna to padega ..kitna bhagaga ladkiyon se ab to ladkiyon #(suspance)# padega...bhot sharma liya itne saal ab sharmake koi fayada nahi ab dat ker samna karna padega ...

{Ab khani kabhi yash ke review se hogi kabhi lekhak ke to ..wo aap aapni soch or samjh se hi samjhe ..kuki bataya tha na sab kuch unexpected or saath hi reality ke karib...}

Yash apne man us bade gate me enter hote hua sochta h

Yash ^man me
Jindgi bhi kitni ajib hoti hana sala jis chij se me darta tha....soory use dar nahi shayd sharm bolte ha . Shyad hi hoga koi asa londa jo asi pariyon se bhari mahfil me tera jitna faltu argument sochega . Yash babu be confident be confident...are yaar.. waps jau.... he bhgwaan ye sabhi meko ku dekh rahi h....iski maa ka itni moti kaya ki .ager iski kaya (body) itni moti h to sakal..chodo kon dekhaga or wesa bhi konsa kisi ki dikh rahi h.. (dekha is bkl ko mask laga h per gand fir bhi fat rahi h iski)

Ye mahasay kanaya mahavidhyalya


arthrath(means) girls college me aaye ha ku ye aage pata chalaga or ye baate ye jaanb us kanaya mahavidhyalya ke bade wale gate se enter hote hua soch rahe the. Inke aas pass bhot sari papa ki pariyan thi sabhi trh ki..

Sunder...
Ati sunder....
Oh bhancho....

Like sare type ki girls thi per kya fayada unki khubsurti ka unke clg me aaya ek lota ladka kisi ki trf dekh hi nahi raha tha bas gardan niche kiya chala ja raha tha bas chala ja raha tha na kisi ki trf dekh raha tha na hi kisi se bol raha tha or ku aaya tha ye pta nahi..

Yash ^ man me

Wesa niche se dikhne me to bc sabka figure topum top h per bc sakal kese dekhu ....yash ek baar gardan utha le kar le ...kar le
Ek pal ke liya wo gardan uthata ha or waps niche kar leta ha...
Nahi nahi...bc mere se nahi hoga..kash jindgi me phala ye sharm karni chod deta to kitna achha hota ...are ye kon ha bc ha to bhot hot niche se to per aage ku khadi h...

Samne 5-6 ladkiyo ka grup khada tha


unko laga kon ladka chala aa raha ha shyad diwar kudke aaya hoga ya jarur koi kand karne aaya hoga.(wo hoti hana be matlb ki panchayati ya lafada ya rada ya panga ya bachodi karne wali girls ye wahi thi)

Oy mr pinki ponkey kon ho aap ..unme se ek ladki boli per konsi ye to yash ko pta nahi kuki uper dekhe kon..

Us ladki ne firse pucha or boli dekh shyane ye na girls collage ha or dikhna se tu ladki lagta nahi h ab ager ander se kuch or h to pta nahi..to chup chap yaha se stak le warna ye ladkiyan dikh rahi hana ...or us se badi baat kabhi jail gaya h??jana ha to bata de bas garude ko bulana baki h..

Yash ^ man me


Iski maa ko cho@u kon ha ye pagal kanaya .stak gyi h kya iski yrr abhi to mene 2 ladko ko gate pe dekha or ye bolti ha ladke nahi aate lagata ha kuch jayada hi jubaan chalti ha inki ...koi na ab aaya hu to sudhar to sabko hi dunga per. Had ha yar ek to wesa hi gand fati padi h uper se inko alg baketi karni h.chalo inhi se puch leta hu..
Yash bola Where is the principal office..(ek bhari or halki yahi sound bhari per awaz dhimi)

Ladkiya sab usko uper se niche tak dekhti h..kuki bhot se ladke inhone dekhe the per sidha principal's office nahi pucha phala kisi ne...unhone hatho se ishara kiya or boli samne se right le lena mil jayaga....

Yash ne na unki tarf dekha bas unki baat suni or bina koi pratikirya diya chal diya us or

Yash ^ man me

Kuch bhi kaho ladkiyan thi to sarif per bc or kitna right jau ek sec yaha to koi toom nahi h chalo left jata hu..

Yash left jane ke liya mudta hi h ki uske kano me ek bhari awaz aati ha welcome mr yash the one and only apko dekh ke khushi hui swagat ha aapka hamare maha vidhyalya me ...





So guys kya lagta ha apko yash waha ku aaya tha ?kya maksad tha uska kanaya mahavidhayla me aane ka??and kon tha ya thi jisne usko roka ?


like kare na kare apne reviews jarur de...

 

[Yasasvi1]

First of all for your new story..
Aur jaan ke achha laga ki hum laundo ki life pe bhi koi story likh raha hai..
Secondly story kabhi bhi start karna to ye soch ke kabhi mat karna ye story mai readers ke liye likh rahi hu.. humesha ye sochna story mai apne khud ke liye likh rahi hu..kyonki at the end ye soch ke likhogi ki ye story readers ke liye likh rahi ho to kuch specific time period ke baad interest apne aap khatam ho jaata h..
To jab bhi likho ye soch ke likho ye story meri h aur mai apne khud ke liye likh rahi hu..
Baaki aagle update ki pratiksha rahegi..

for new story
Finally laundo ke liye aaya kuch

Jabi bhi aaye mere ko tag maar dena bas

Congratulations Yasasvi1 for new thread .


आशा है कहानी आपकी तरह ही मजेदार होगी।

Nice and beautiful starting of the story....

Congratulations for your 1st story Yasasvi1 madam.
Starting dekh kar lagta hai Nayak kisi chote Sahar ya gaon me kisi khas maqsad se aaya hai. Aur aisa bhi lagta hai ki aapki ye story romance ke saath saath thriller bhi hogi.

1st update badhiya likha aapne. Keep writing.
Update was outstanding & Amazing.

Update posted guys....ready it and please review this..